北师大版Unit 5 MemoriesCommunication Workshop获奖教学ppt课件

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My mst unfrgettable experience
English Mnthly MagazineA Perfect English Writing Wanted“My Mst Unfrgettable Experience
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Self-check□I wrte abut nly ne event.□I fllwed lgical rder.□I used all Key Wrds, Key Expressins and vcabulary crrectly.□I duble-checked spelling, grammar and punctuatin. 
Peer-review check□Is the paper interesting? If nt, hw culd it be interesting, fr example, givemre details?□Des it make sense? If nt, what culd the writer d t make it better, fr example, better fllw a mre lgical rder?□Des it answer yur questins abut the student’s mst unfrgettable event? If nt, what else wuld yu like t knw?□Did the student use Key Wrds, Key Expressins and vcabulary crrectly? If nt, circle any mistakes.□Is the spelling, grammar and punctuatin crrect? Circle where the student had prblems.□D yu have any ther suggestins?
My Mst Unfrgettable ExperienceI had the mst unfrgettable experience when I was 12 years ld. One day in the afternn, I was riding bike with father near my hme. I was excited. After a while, I saw a big stne. But I culdn’t take away frm the stne. S I fell ff frm my bike. My right arm was brken. And my father tk me t the hspital as quickly as he culd.In the hspital, the dctr tld me that I needed t stay at hme fr a mnth. Then my dad tk me t hme. My grandparents was very wrried abut me. They asked whether I was hurt. But I culdn’t answer them. Frm then n my dad lked after me every day. I felt I was the mst happy peple all ver the wrld. He helped me with my study, and helped me washed clthes. He ften made lts f delicius fd fr me.I learned hw much my father lves me and cares abut me. and I knw my father was prud f me. I thught he is the best father in the wrld. I tld him I wuld a university student t make him happy in the future.
I had the mst unfrgettable experience when I was 12 years ld. One day in the afternn, I was riding bike with my father near my hme. I was excited. After a while, I saw a big stne. But I culdn’t take away frm the stne. S I fell ff frm my bike. My right arm was brken. And my father tk me t the hspital as quickly as he culd.
stp until it was t late
In the hspital, the dctr tld me that I needed t stay at hme fr a mnth. Then my dad tk me t hme. My grandparents was were very wrried abut me. They asked whether I was hurt. But I culdn’t answer them. Frm then n my dad lked after me every day. I felt thught I was the happiest girl mst happy peple all ver the wrld. He helped me with my study, and helped me washed clthes. He ften made lts f delicius fd fr me.
I learned hw much my father lves me and cares abut me. a And I knw my father was prud f me because I am a tp student in my class. I thught he is was the best father in the wrld. I tld him I wuld be a university student t make him happy in the future.
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