高三一轮复习讲义--高中英语专题之书信写作
展开教学内容 | 书面表达讲解 |
教 学 目 标 | 书面表达技巧+例题讲解 |
书面表达技巧 牢记一个中心，两个基本点 牢记一个中心：书面表达即口头表达的书面化，是试题规定的笔头交际任务—考生根据提示，有效运用所学语言知识，清晰、连贯地传递信息，表达意思。 两个基本点，即要点都说到了没有？内容都说对了没有？ 四个步骤 Step 1 : 仔细审题定要点； Step 2 : 正确表达选句型； 1) 简单句的六种基本结构 2) 陈述句（Declarative Sentence），疑问句（Interrogative Sentence）， 祁使句（Imperative Sentence），感叹句（Exclamatory Sentence） Step 3 : 拓展关联加细节Give more relevant information ； Step 4 ：规范誊写增亮点——短语；复句；非谓语动词形式
书面表达讲解 四步搞定英语书面表达示例（一） 2017年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语（新课标I）书面表达 假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括： （1）时间和地点； （2）内容：学习唐诗； （3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Step 1 : 仔细审题定要点： 1) 告知计划 2) 时间 3) 地点 4) 学习唐诗 5) 课前准备6) 了解唐朝的历史 Step 2 : 正确表达选句型 1) 告知计划 I tell you the plan . 2) 时间 8 am – 10 am 3) 地点 in the open air / in the People’s Park 4) 学习唐诗 we learn Tang poems. 5) 课前准备 You get prepared before class / in advance. 6) 了解唐朝的历史 You learn / know about the history of the Tang Dynasty. Step 3: 拓展关联加细节 学习唐诗→ 兴趣 ；地点→原因；了解唐朝的历史→好处 Step 4：规范誊写增亮点 示例（一）答案A： Dear Leslie, I am delighted to know you are interested in Tang poems. Now I am writing to tell you the plan for the next class. Actually I am very fond of poems.① I think it great fun to learn the poems written in the Tang Dynasty with you. ②We are to meet on Sunday morning in the people’s park, where the air is fresh and the scenery is beautiful. We will learn from 8 am to 10 am .Besides ,I advise you to go to the bookstore to borrow a history book and learn the history of The Tang Dynasty in advance，which can help you better understand the poems to be learned . If you have any questions, please let me know. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【一句多译】 ①表达方式一： I consider it quite interesting to learn the poems written in the Tang Dynasty with you . 表达方式二： I am sure it is worthwhile to learn the poems written in the Tang Dynasty with you . ②表达方式一： We are to meet on Sunday morning in the People’s Park ,where the air is fresh and the scenery is fantastic. 表达方式二：We are to meet on Sunday morning in the People’s Park because it is a good place to study in .
示例（一）答案B： Dear Leslie, I am writing to inform you of the following class. What surprised me is that you are keen on Chinese poetry. Tomorrow morning, I decide to teach you Tang poems. As you know, whether young or old in China, we all like poems, such as Quiet Night Thoughts In my opinion , we had better learn poems in the People’s Park , which is a good place to study in . Let us meet at 8 am and we are to learn until 10 am. By the way, it is necessary for you to borrow one or two books from the school’ library and know something about the history of the Tang Dynasty so that we can communicate better. If you need any help, don’t hesitate to call me . Yours Li Hua 示例（一）答案 C Hi Leslie, I'm writing to tell you about the Chinese class next week. Let's meet at two Tuesday afternoon at the coffee shop near my school again. I plan to help you study some poems of the Tang dynasty which is an important part of Chinese civilization. Many of the Tang poems have greatly influenced Chinese literature. And we learned them at a young age. I’ll help you read and understand the selected poems before we have a discussion of them. To make it easier, I suggest you study and get some knowledge of the Tang dynasty in advance. See you then! Best, Li Hua
四步搞定英语书面表达示例（二） 假如你是李华，你的朋友Smith发来邮件说他即将从澳大利亚悉尼探亲归来，询问是否需要从悉尼帮你买些东西，请你给他回复一封电子邮件。要点如下： 1. 向Smith的父母表示问候； 2. 表示谢意； 3. 希望购买的物品。 注意：1. 词数100左右 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不得透露考生本人所在学校及真实个人信息。 Dear Smith, Yours, Li Hua Step 1 : 仔细审题定要点： 1) 归来 2) 探亲3) 问候 4) 谢意 5) 购买的物品 Step 2 : 正确表达选句型 1) 你即将归来 You will come back / return / You are coming back 2) 你探亲 You see / visit / get together with / reunite with your parents 3) 问候 Give /send my best wishes /regards / love to your parents. Remember me to your parents 4) 谢意 Thank you for … It is very kind of you … I don’t know how to express my appreciation / gratitude. I am grateful /thankful to you for … I appreciate your help more than I can say . I’d appreciate it if … 5) 购买的物品 a guidebook / a travel booklet /brochure ;an English dictionary ; souvenirs Step 3: 拓展关联加细节Give more relevant information 探亲→愉快 → 分享 物品→受益 Step 4 ：规范誊写增亮点 示例（二）答案A Dear Smith, Glad to know that you are coming back to China after a get-together with your parents in Sydney. Here I’d like to send my best regards to your parents. I’m sure you must have had a good time with your family. I hope you can share your wonderful experience with us later. It’s considerate of you to do some overseas purchasing for me. I don’t know how to express my appreciation if you could buy me a travel booklet for Sydney. I believe I will have a better knowledge of your city after being exposed to the booklet. I have also prepared a special gift for you. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours, Li Hua 示例（二）答案B Dear Smith, Pleased to know that you are returning to China after reuniting with your parents in Sydney. Please remember me to your parents. I’m sure you must have had fun with your family. I hope you can share your wonderful experience with us later. It’s thoughtful of you to do some overseas purchasing for me. I’d appreciate it if you could buy me an English dictionary，which will contribute to improvement of my English study . I have also prepared a special gift for you. Looking forward to seeing you as soon as possible Yours, Li Hua
书信常用句型 1、投诉信 投诉信的开头常用句式和套话 I am writing to inform you that I am dissatisfied with your … 投诉信的结尾常用句式和套话 I understand you will give immediate attention to this matter. I would like to have this matter settled by the end of … 2、询问信 询问信的开头常用句式和套话 I would be most grateful if you could send me information regarding/concerning … I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding … 询问信的结尾常用句式和套话 Your prompt attention to this letter would be highly appreciated. I am looking forward to hearing from you. 3、请求信 请求信的开头常用句式和套话 I am writing to seek for your assistance in … 请求信的结尾常用句式和套话 I would like to thank you for your generous help in this matter. 4、道歉信 道歉信的开头常用句式和套话 I am writing to apologize for … I am writing to say sorry for … 道歉信的结尾常用句式和套话 I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies. 5、感谢信 感谢信的开头常用句式和套话 I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for … 感谢信的结尾常用句式和套话 I must thank you again for your generous help. 6、建议信 建议信的开头常用句式和套话 I am writing to express my views concerning … You have asked me for my advice with regard to … and I will try to make some conducive suggestions. 表达建议常用句式和套话 I feel that it would be beneficial if … I would like to suggest that … I would recommend that … If I were you，I would … You may consider doing … It would seem to me that you could … As you may agree that … 建议信的结尾常用句式和套话 I would be ready to discuss this matter to further details. 7、求职信 求职信的开头常用句式和套话 I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a waitress … 求职信的结尾常用句式和套话 Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to meeting you. If you need to know more about me，please contact me at … 8、推荐信 推荐信的开头常用句式和套话 I would like to present … for your consideration in your search for a qualified manager. With reference to your requirements，I shall，without reservation，recommend … as an ideal candidate. 推荐信的结尾常用句式和套话 Therefore，I don''t hesitate to recommend … as the right person for your consideration. Any favorable consideration to this letter would be considered a personal favor. 9、寻找失物信 寻找失物信的开头常用句式和套话 I am writing this letter to see if it is possible for me to have my camera back. 寻找失物信的结尾常用句式和套话 I would really appreciate it if you could … 10、邀请信 邀请信的开头常用句式和套话 I am writing to invite you to … I wonder if you could come … 邀请信的结尾常用句式和套话 My family and I would feel honored if you could come. We would be looking forward to your participation in the party. I really hope you can make it.
书信注意的问题 一：信头（Heading） 指发信人的单位名称、地址、发信日期。考试时候不要求写出。 格式：从信纸的上部中央往右写，第一行写单位名称，第三行写门牌号码、街名，第三行写市名、省名、国名，第四行写发信日期。学生写信时第一行写班级名称，第二行写学校名称，第三行写市、省名，第五行写国家名称，第六行写发信日期。国内信件国名可以不写。 二：信内地址(Inside Address) 指收信人的姓名、单位和地址。考试时候不要求写出。 格式：信头下隔一二行，从左边开始写，第一行写姓名、头衔，第二行写单位名称，第三行写门牌号及路名，第四行写市名、省名及邮政号码，第五行写国名。 商业往来信件及公函必须写信头和地址。亲友、熟人之间的信可不写信内地址，信头处写发信日期就行了。 三：称呼(Salutation) 格式：信内地址下隔一二行写称呼，其左要与信内地址第一行对齐。对不相识的男子，单数常用 “Sir”, “Dear Sir”, 或 “My Dear Sir”；复数常用 “Dear Sirs” 或“Gentlemen”。 对女子，单数常用 “Madam”，“Dear Madam”或“My Dear Madam”；复数常用“Mesdames”或 “My Dear Mesdames”；对比较熟识的男子，普通称 “Dear Mr. ……”; 女性通常称“Dear Mrs. (或Miss)……”。熟人和亲人常直呼其名，不用姓氏（以 “Dear”为例）：1)“Dear David”；2)“My dear David”；3)“My David” 4)“My dearest David”；5)“My Dearest”；6)“Darling David”；7)“My Darling”；8）“My very own darling”等。有头衔的可把头衔写放在名字前，如“Prof Wang”， “Dr Lin”等。 四：正文（Body of Letter） 格式：称呼下面隔两行开始写正文。每段第一个字母要缩进3至5个字母的空格。正文是信的主要部分，内容要简单明了，一般不用同汉语信一样的“你好（how are you?）”之类的词。 五：结束语（Complimentary Close） 结束语是写信人对收信人的谦称，写在正文下面二三行处，从中间写起，第一个词不达意的开头字母要大写，末尾用逗号。给不相识的人可用： “Yours truly”或“Truly yours” “Yours faithfully”或“Faithfully yours” “Yours Sincerely”或“Sincerely yours” 给上级或长者可用： “Yours respectfully” 或 “Respectfully yours” “Yours obediently”或 “Obediently yours” “Yours”, “Yours ever”, “Ever yours”, “Yours as ever”或 “Yours sincerely” 给亲属或挚友的信可用： “Yours affectionately”, “Lovingly Yours”, “Your loving son(child, sister…)”, 或”Yours devoted friend”等。结束语末尾要用逗号。 六：签名（Signature） 即写信人署名。一般情况下，把本人姓名签在结束语之下。考试时候统一写为“Li Ming”。 短文指导 Yesterday you failed to turn up for the appointment with your teacher, Professor Wang. Write him a letter to 1) express your apology; 2) make a request for another appointment; 3) and also suggest a time for the requested appointment. You should write about 200 words on ANSWER SHEET. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points) | |
