英语人教版（2024）Section B评课课件ppt

这是一份英语人教版（2024）Section B评课课件ppt，共20页。PPT课件主要包含了写作迁移训练，结构设计，内容要点 ，语言技巧，写作模板等内容，欢迎下载使用。
Learning gals
Read the sentence and try t translate it int Chinese.
人不是为失败而生的。一个人可以被毁灭，但不能被打败。
But man is nt made fr defeat. A man can be destryed but nt defeated.
Read a student's bk reprt and label the different parts with the infrmatin belw.
A. basic infrmatin abut the bk(e.g. bk title and writer)B. lessns frm the bkC. the student's recmmendatinD. hw ppular the bk isE. the stry f the bk
Hw t write a bk reprt? What shuld be cntained?
bk titlewriterbasic infrmatin
main characterwhat happened in this wtry
what have yu learntwhy yu recmmended it
Write a bk reprt abut a nvel yu have read recently.T plan yur reprt, make ntes using the table belw.
Use yur ntes frm 3b t write yur bk reprt.
Bk title Authr/writer Main character Stry Yur pinin
My bk reprt
书籍是人类进步的阶梯，一本好书能给予我们无尽的启迪与力量。请你选择一本印象最深刻的书，撰写一篇读书报告。写作要点：1. What is the bk abut? (Title, authr, and main idea.)2. What happens in the stry? (Main character and key events.)3. Why d yu like it? (What d yu learn? Wuld yu recmmend it?)要求：1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3. 词数不少于100。【写作提示】1.主题：读书报告2.人称：第一人称、第三人称3.时态：一般将来时、一般现在时4.要点：书名、作者、内容简介；对你的影响；喜欢/推荐它的原因5.写作思路：第一段简要介绍这本书的主题、作者等相关信息，第二段简要描述故事情节，第三段谈谈自己的感受和收获及喜欢/推荐它的原因。
采用“书籍介绍一内容聚焦一感悟升华”的三段式结构先明确书籍基本信息，再深入核心内容，最后提炼阅读带来的成长，紧扣“好书如良友”的单元主旨。
交代书籍的核心要素(如《秘密花园》/弗朗西斯·霍奇森·伯内特/成长小说),用一般现在时说明书籍属性，用现在完成时体现阅读经历(如 “I have read The Secret Garden twice”) 。
简要概括故事主线(如玛丽与秘密花园的故事),聚焦印象深刻的情节或人物(如科林的蜕变),结合感官细节或情感体验增强感染力；适当引用书中经典语句(如 “Nature is the best healer”), 提升内容深度。
结合单元核心观点，总结书籍带来的启示(如“乐观改变生活””友谊 的力量”“自然的治愈力”),说明阅读对自己的影响(如“学会面对困难”“变得 更自信”),呼应“阅读塑造人格”的主题。
时态运用： 严格区分一般现在时(描述书籍属性、永恒真理)与现在完成时(描述阅读经历、对现在的影响),如: “This bk teaches us hpe,and I have learned t stay psitive because f it"。
词汇搭配： 合理使用单元核心词汇(如"fantasy 、mystery 、summary、recmmend 、literary”) 及 短 语 ( 如 "hear f、get lst in 、learn frm 、make a difference”)。
衔接过渡： 用 “at first 、hwever、mst imprtantly 、as a result” 等词串联内容，用“because 、S 、and”体现逻辑关系。
Amng all the bks I have read, (书籍名称) by (作者)is my favurite.It is a (书籍类型，如"classic grwth nvel""fantasy stry")that I first read last year.I have already read it twice because it always gives me new feelings every time l pen it.
The stry is abut ( 核心内容概括，如“Mary,a selfish girl wh finds a hidden garden and helps her weak cusin Clin recver").My favurite part is when (印象深刻的情节，如“Clin stands up and walks in the garden fr the first time”).The authr writes s vividly that I feel like I'm right there with the characters.What tuches me mst is ( 情感/道理聚焦，如 “hw friendship and nature change the characters' lives”).I have even memrized a qute frm it:“ ( 书中名言)”,which always encurages me when I'm in truble.
This bk is mre than just a stry t me.It has taught me ( 核心收获，如 “the pwer f ptimism and lve”).Thanks t it,I have becme ( 个人改变，如 “mre willing t help thers and cherish nature”). I ften recmmend it t my friends because gd bks shuld be shared.As the saying ges,"A gd bk is a gd friend”—and this bk will always be my lyal friend.
My Favurite Bk and Its Gifts
Amng all the bks I have read, The Secret Garden by Frances Hdgsn Burnett is my favurite. It is a classic grwth nvel that I first read when I was 10. I have already read it three times because its warmth never fades. The stry is abut Mary, a spiled and lnely girl wh mves t her uncle's manr after her parents' death. There she discvers a lcked secret garden and wrks with her friend Dickn t bring it back t life. Later, they help her weak cusin Clin, wh believes he can't walk, t regain strength. My favurite part is when Clin stands up in the garden — his smile f jy always mves me. The bk has shwn me hw nature and friendship can heal sadness and weakness.
This bk has changed my attitude twards life. I used t give up easily when facing difficulties, but nw I knw "grwth starts with curage", just like the characters in the bk. I have als begun t care fr the plants arund me and feel the magic f nature. I strngly recmmend it t everyne — yu will find hpe and strength in this little garden.
My bk reprt Nt lng ag, I finished reading Anne f Green Gables, which was written by the Canadian authr Lucy Maud Mntgmery. This bk mainly fcuses n the grwth f Anne Shirley, a lively and imaginative rphan.​ Anne was sent t Green Gables by accident — Matthew and Marilla, the wners f the farm. They had planned t adpt a by t help with farm wrk at first. At the beginning, Marilla felt upset abut Anne’s cnstant daydreaming and silly mistakes, such as dyeing her hair green by chance. Hwever, Anne’s kindness and enthusiasm gradually wn them ver. She made a clse friend named Diana, wrked hard at her lessns, and even gave up her chance t g t cllege t take care f Marilla after Matthew passed away. Finally, she grew int a respnsible yung wman.​ I really lve this bk because Anne teaches me t find happiness in small things and face difficulties with a psitive attitude. I strngly recmmend it t all my classmates—it can help us be grateful fr the lve arund us.
【基础作业】选择自己喜欢的一本书，撰写读书报告。【进阶作业】与同伴交换，帮助他/她让读书报告更完整。【拓展作业】开展班级图书漂流活动，分享自己最爱的书。