高三英语二轮复习 专题六　读后续写 课件

这是一份高三英语二轮复习 专题六　读后续写 课件，共101页。PPT课件主要包含了考情分析，第一讲　评分标准解读，评分标准，读后续写写作四步法，真题典例，构思过程，策略一　高分句型，策略二　修辞，策略三　主题升华，策略四　专属语料库等内容，欢迎下载使用。
【命题概述】1. 读后续写所选材料以记叙文为主,语篇涵盖了“人与自我”、“人与社会”、“人与自然”,内容具有一定的故事性、趣味性和延展性。2.文章连贯性较强,语言难度适中,便于学生感知和品读。3.给出续写段落首句,对续写故事的发展有提示、衔接、引导和一定程度的限制作用,防止想象漫无边际。4.续写部分多是故事的发展、高潮或结局,情节不唯一,学生可根据自己对文本的理解并结合生活常识合理地作出推测,并适当增加细节,使续写部分具有完整性和可读性。
一、评分原则1.本题总分为25分,按七个档次进行评分。2.评分时,应主要从内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑,具体为:(1)续写内容的质量、完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度;(2)所使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性;(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。3.评分时,应先根据作答的整体情况确定其所属的档次,然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。
4.评分时还应注意:(1)词数少于120的,酌情扣分;(2)书写较差以致影响交际的,酌情扣分;(3)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面,评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑,英、美拼写及词汇语法均可接受。
三、失分原因1.不符合基本要求:词数少于120;两段的词数比例失调;随意分段;词汇语法错误;抄袭原文等。2.内容不合逻辑:缺乏合理想象;续写部分与给定材料之间的逻辑、续写两段内容之间的逻辑以及续写部分与所给开头语之间的逻辑不相符。3.语言不够丰富恰当:所使用的语法结构与词汇的丰富性、准确性不够;刻意使用生僻词汇和复杂句式,不考虑与原文语言风格的一致性。4.脑洞开太大:想象不合理;续写部分立意不高,价值观有争议。
第二讲　宏观指导　读后续写写作流程
(2025·新高考全国Ⅰ卷,读后续写)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My wife and I wanted t share ur new hme with family and friends by hsting a small gathering in the early summer.She had prepared lts f snacks,while my jb was t have the backyard in rder.
There was plenty f space fr the kids t run and play.There was just ne thing I hadn’t cunted n: My brther chse t bring his dg Tby,a 50-pund ball f fire.Thugh friendly,he culd easily knck ver my niece’s small bys and my six-mnth-ld granddaughter.S,when my brther shwed up,I asked him t watch Tby and keep him utside. My plan was wrking ut just fine.Tby was using up his energy by running back and frth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty f rm.Unexpectedly,after supper,the weather changed.It started t rain and everyne went indrs.
It was an awkward mment.I didn’t want Tby t be running arund in the huse,and my brther wasn’t happy with driving hme with a wet dg.Eventually,my brther decided t leave rather than frce the issue. A few days passed,and I hadn’t heard anything frm my brther.I texted him and expressed wishes fr him t cme ut again.His reply came as a surprise—a shck,actually: “Nt a chance.” Clearly,he was unhappy ver the way we had parted.After all,I had left him little chice.Well,he’ll get ver it,I reasned.
Tw mnths passed.My wife suggested I get in tuch with my brther,but I resisted,thinking he shuld call first.Hwever,my cnscience (良心) kept bthering me.I tried t put myself in my brther’s shes.He was facing health issues and his wife f thirty-five years had passed away a few mnths earlier.Tby was his cnstant cmpanin,the ne wh kept him ging.注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
Paragraph 1: I realised it was me wh was at fault.
Paragraph 2:　　 With the biscuits my wife had made,I arrived at my brther’s dr.
One pssible versin: I realised it was me wh was at fault.①Had I allwed my brther t bring Tby inside during the party,we culd have kept the dg n a lead,and clean-up wuld have been easy if he had made a mess.“Yu need t make this right,” my wife said.I swallwed my pride.Knwing my brther’s daily rutine,I thught I wuld find him hme arund lunchtime.It had been ver tw mnths since the gathering,②with still n wrd frm him.Naturally,I was tempted t let it slide,but in the end I knew it was up t me.
With the biscuits my wife had made,I arrived at my brther’s dr.As I std there,I felt a bit nervus.When he pened the dr,he stared at me fr a mment.Tby came up t me,③tail wagging.That felt like a gd sign.It mtined ④that I culd step inside.I immediately aplgised fr my behaviur at the party.A faint smile crssed his lips as he tk the biscuits frm me.We had lunch tgether happily.Several mnths later,at anther family gathering,my brther brught Tby again.Thankfully,the dg caused n issues and my brther had a great time.In that instant,I came t understand ⑤that kinship isn’t abut right r wrng,but abut embracing each ther with lve and tlerance.
注释:①运用了if引导的虚拟条件句的省略倒装形式;②运用了with复合结构;③运用了独立主格结构;④运用了that引导的宾语从句;⑤运用了that引导的宾语从句,其中含有“”结构。
第三讲　微观打磨　读后续写增分策略
(一)无灵主语1.(2025·浙江1月卷)A cmplex wave f guilt washed ver Kevin,wndering if his judgment had been t hasty.一种复杂的内疚感涌上凯文的心头,他怀疑自己的判断是否过于草率了。2.(2025·浙江1月卷)This unique experience taught Kevin hw t prperly deal with mral dilemmas.这段独特的经历教会了凯文如何正确地应对道德困境。
3.(2025·山东潍坊一模)Its eyes lcked nt mine—wide and desperate,and its nse twitched in panic,as if begging fr help.它睁大绝望的双眼紧盯着我,它的鼻子惊恐地抽搐着,仿佛在乞求帮助。4.(2024·新高考全国Ⅰ卷)A feeling f gratitude washed ver me as I heard his wrds.当我听到他的话时,一种感激之情涌上我的心头。
(二)虚拟语气1.(2025·山东青岛一模)Hayden knew this was a nce-in-a-lifetime pprtunity.If he let Jhnny dwn,Jhnny wuld be heartbrken.海登知道这是一个千载难逢的机会。如果他让约翰尼失望,约翰尼会心碎的。2.The sky is full f fireflies,as if tiny stars were shining brightly.天空中满是萤火虫,仿佛小星星在明亮地闪耀着。
3.I was rted t the spt with fright,wishing that I had refused my mther’s advice yesterday.我吓得呆立在原地,真希望自己昨天拒绝了妈妈的建议。4.If nly I had been the 3rd runner wh had gt t the finish line.要是我是第三位到达终点线的选手该多好啊!
(三)独立主格结构 1.(2025·山东省实验中学高考模拟)He had watched her climb the tree every year,her face peaceful,as if she were ne with the ancient tree and the land beneath it.他每年都看着她爬上那棵树,她的神情平静,仿佛她与那棵古树和树下的土地融为一体了。2.(2025·山东济宁一模)Jacb and Rex exchanged glances,their faces lighting up with jy and relief as the seagull sared freely and gracefully in the chilly wind.雅各布和雷克斯交换了一下眼神,当海鸥在寒风中自由而优雅地翱翔时,他们的脸上洋溢着喜悦和宽慰的神情。
3.(2025·山东日照一模)The team members gathered arund me,their faces filled with wrry.队员们围在我身边,他们的脸上满是担忧。4.(2025·福建高考模拟)Tm sat quietly,his head dwn,still saddened by the lss f the game.汤姆静静地坐着,低着头,仍然为输了比赛而伤心。
(四)with 复合结构1.(2025·浙江1月卷)With his heart in his muth,Kevin grabbed Mrs Hill’s hme phne and called the plice.凯文的心提到了嗓子眼,他抓起希尔太太家的座机,拨打了报警电话。2.(2025·浙江1月卷)With the ld watch in his hand,Kevin was cnfused by the man’s anxius vice,helplessly lking at Mr Green.凯文手里拿着那块旧表,被那人焦虑的声音搞糊涂了,无助地看着格林先生。
3.(2025·河北石家庄高考模拟)Speechless and happy,she held her sn tightly in her arms,with tears welling up in her eyes.她高兴得说不出话来,把儿子紧紧地搂在怀里,眼睛里噙满了泪水。4.(2025·江苏苏锡常镇一模)With a heart full f anticipatin,I fllwed her t the garden.怀着满心期待,我跟着她来到了花园。
(五)巧用倒装句式1.(2025·山东潍坊一模)In that split secnd,I realized: had I nt stpped fr the rabbit,my car wuld have been n thse hidden tracks.在那一瞬间,我意识到:如果我没有为了那只兔子停车,我的车就会开到那些隐藏的轨道上了。2.(2025·河北石家庄高考模拟)Exhausted and tired as he felt,he still insisted n carrying ut the plan.尽管他感到疲惫不堪,但他仍然坚持执行那个计划。
3.(2025·广东深圳高考模拟)But never nce did he shut at me,nr did he let me fall.但他从来没有对我大喊大叫,也没有让我摔倒。(六)巧用强调句式1.(2025·八省联考)It was thrugh this brave adventure that I gt acquainted with these enthusiastic animal rescuers,wh were tugh utside but tender inside.正是通过这次勇敢的冒险,我才了解了这些热情的动物救援人员,他们外表严厉但是内心温柔。
2.(2025·河北石家庄高考模拟)It was the brch in the shp windw that reminded him that what he did was wrthwhile.正是商店橱窗里的那枚胸针提醒了他,他所做的一切都是值得的。3.(2025·福建泉州高考模拟)Tania had als dne well,but finally it was my attentin t details and the harmny f flavurs that wn the day.塔妮娅也做得不错,但最终还是我对细节的关注以及对风味的协调搭配赢得了胜利。
4.(2024·浙江1月卷)It was nt until then that I really understd “dn’t judge a bk by its cver”.直到那时,我才真正理解了“不要以貌取人”。(七)巧用形容词作状语1.(2025·八省联考)Surprised and frightened,I nticed that the bikers were all in an rderly manner.我既惊讶又害怕,发现那些骑自行车的人全都秩序井然。
2.(2025·河北石家庄高考模拟)Cld and hungry,Reuben wandered n the street,searching fr the nail bags carefully.鲁宾又冷又饿,在街上徘徊,小心翼翼地寻找那些钉子袋。3.(2025·山东德州一模)Discuraged,I tld him everything that had happened.我很气馁,把发生的一切告诉了他。
(八)巧用非谓语动词1.(2025·八省联考)Seeing their hard wrk and dedicatin,I was deeply tuched but felt a bit ashamed f my earlier fear.看到他们的辛勤工作和奉献精神,我深受感动,但也为我之前的恐惧感到有点惭愧。2.(2025·八省联考)Tuched by their passin and kindness,I apprached them and expressed my admiratin and respect.被他们的热情和善良所感动,我走近他们,表达了我的钦佩和尊重。
3.(2025 ·江苏南通一模)Overcming ne challenge after anther,I gradually built up cnfidence,which shaped my psitive attitude t life.我克服了一个又一个挑战,逐渐树立起了信心,而这塑造了我对生活的积极态度。4.(2025·浙江宁波高考模拟)Taking a deep breath,I explained my idea t rganize a mvable library prgram,bringing bks and stries t thse wh had n access.我深吸了一口气,解释了我的想法,即组织一个可移动的图书馆项目,把书和故事带给那些无法接触到它们的人。
(九)巧用动作链“三连动”1.(2025·八省联考)During the break,ne f them even smiled at me,apprached me and handed me a bklet abut their rescue wrk.中间休息时,其中一人甚至对我微笑,走近我并递给我一本关于他们救援工作的小册子。2.(2025·山东聊城一模)She jumped t her feet,rushed ver and threw herself int her mm’s arms,with tears streaming dwn her cheeks.她突然站起身来,飞奔过去,扑进她妈妈的怀里,泪水顺着她的脸颊流淌下来。
3.(2024·新高考全国Ⅰ卷)Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus,turned arund,and lked at me with a big smile n his face.“We made it,” he said.冈特把出租车停在那辆公共汽车后面,转过身来,满脸笑容地看着我。“我们成功了,”他说。
(十)巧用n/upn ding句式1.(2025·江苏淮安高考模拟)The wman rushed frward upn seeing the dg,and Shadw—whse real name was Lucky—immediately bunded twards her with excited barks.女人一看到这只狗就冲上前,“影子”——它的真名是“幸运”——立刻兴奋地叫着,向她蹦蹦跳跳地跑了过来。
2.(2025·河北沧州高考模拟)On hearing this,he said,“Yu are already the champin f this race in terms f sprtsmanship,even if yu wuldn’t be the first t crss the finish line.”一听到这话,他说:“就体育精神而言,你已经是这场比赛的冠军了,即使你不是第一个冲过终点线的人。”
(十一)巧用“It ccurred t/dawned n/hit/struck sb that...”句式1.(2025·安徽“江南十校”一模)It ccurred t me that the simple act f exercising culd transfrm all my uneasiness int lessns fr grwth and self-imprvement.我突然想到,锻炼这一简单的行为能将我所有的不安转化成促进自身成长和自我提升的经验教训。2.(2025· 浙江1月卷)It dawned n Kevin that life was nt just abut excitement; it als invlved curage,respnsibility and understanding.凯文开始明白,生活不仅仅是激动人心的,它还包含勇气、责任和理解。
(十二)巧用“动作+语言”描写1.(2025·山东济宁一模) “Cme n,girl! G and get yur freedm!” Jacb urged,ignring Rex’s irny,eyes sparkling with hpe.“加油,姑娘!去争取你的自由吧!”雅各布催促着,不理会雷克斯的讽刺,眼睛里闪烁着希望的光芒。
2.(2025·山东聊城一模)“I’m terribly srry,Mm.I shuldn’t have said thse mean wrds.”Lucy sbbed.“妈妈,我非常抱歉。我不应该说那些刻薄的话。”露西抽泣着说道。3.(2025·山东德州一模)My husband Gerge held my hands and said,“Yu have dne such a remarkable jb with this bk.It’s a stry that deserves t be tld.Dn’t let the fear f rejectin stp yu.”我的丈夫乔治握住我的手说:“你把这本书完成得如此出色。这是一个值得被讲述的故事。别让被拒绝的恐惧阻碍了你。”
(一)比喻1.(2025·安徽一模)This card made us feel very warm,like it was the best prf f ur kindness n the jurney.这张卡片让我们感到很温暖,就好像它是我们在旅途中善良之举的最佳证明。2.(2025·河北沧州高考模拟)Her legs were trembling,and her arms felt like they were n fire.她的双腿在颤抖,双臂感觉像着了火一样。
3.(2025·福建高考模拟) I ndded,“Exactly! It’s like ur basketball game.The prcess f striving,the teamwrk and the effrt yu put in are what truly matter,nt just the final scre.” 我点点头,说道:“没错!它就像我们的篮球比赛。奋斗的过程、团队合作以及你付出的努力才是真正重要的,而不仅仅是最终的分数。”
(二)拟人1.(2025·山东省实验中学高考模拟)In a small village at the edge f an ancient frest,where the trees whispered secrets lder than time itself,std the heartwd tree,whse vast branches stretched tward the sky.在古老森林边缘的一个小村庄里,树木低声诉说着比时间本身更古老的秘密,在那里矗立着一棵心材树,它那巨大的树枝伸向了天空。
2.The raindrps tipted t dance a waltz n the glass windw.When they slid dwn,they didn’t frget t draw a wbbly smiling face n the glass with their transparent fingertips,as if playing hide-and-seek with the peple inside the rm.雨滴踮着脚尖在玻璃窗上跳起了圆舞曲。当它们滑落时,还不忘用透明的指尖在玻璃上画出一张歪歪扭扭的笑脸,就像是在跟屋里的人玩捉迷藏。3.The breeze gently kissed her cheeks.微风轻柔地亲吻着她的脸颊。
(三)夸张1.(2025·山东济宁一模)The wrld seemed t fall silent,and s did Rex.整个世界似乎陷入了寂静,雷克斯也一样。2.(2025·山东聊城一模)Lucy was s terrified that her heart seemed t freeze,and every nerve in her bdy shuddered with panic as the figure clsed in.露西如此害怕,以至于她的心都仿佛冻结了,随着那个身影逼近,她身体里的每一根神经都因惊恐而颤抖起来。
3.(2024·新高考全国Ⅰ卷)After a heated discussin that lasted fr what seemed like a century,Gunter put his phne dwn and started the car.在持续了似乎一个世纪的激烈讨论后,冈特放下手机,启动了汽车。
(一)助人与善举主题1.(2025·安徽一模)This unfrgettable experience taught me a valuable lessn that a small act f kindness can make a big difference.这段难忘的经历教给了我宝贵的一课:一个小小的善举也有重大的影响。2.Only then did I realize that it was lve and kindness that made ur wrld s warm and beautiful.直到那时我才意识到,正是爱和善良让我们的世界如此温暖和美丽。
3.Never underestimate the pwer f actin.Share yur lve frm yur heart and fill yur life with acts f kindness.永远不要低估行动的力量。分享你发自内心的爱,让你的生活充满善意之举。
(二)逆境、改变、希望主题1.(2025·山东泰安一模)It was a reminder that lve and kindness can even vercme the greatest bstacles,and that in the face f adversity,unity and supprt are essential.这提醒人们,爱和善良甚至能够克服最大的障碍。逆境面前,团结和支持是至关重要的。2.There’s always a way ut as lng as we never give up ur hpe.只要我们永不放弃希望,就总会有出路。
3.After all that happened,it eventually dawned n me that I had mre tughness and curage than I ever imagined.The self-awareness and lng-lasting memries will give me enrmus pwer as I carry n my life jurney.在这一切发生后,我终于明白,我比自己想象的更有韧性和勇气。当我继续我的人生旅程时,这种自我意识和持久的记忆将给予我巨大的力量。
(三)积极态度主题1.(2025·江苏苏锡常镇一模)Frm then n,I faced my study challenges with mre cnfidence,knwing that with perseverance,my effrts wuld surely lead t beautiful “blms” in my future.从那时起,我有了更多的信心来面对学习上的挑战,我知道只要坚持不懈,我的努力一定会在我的未来开出美丽的“花朵”。
2.It struck me that I shuld have a psitive attitude when facing difficulties.Frm that day n,I became braver and mre ptimistic.我猛地意识到,当面对困难时,我应该有一个积极的态度。从那天起,我变得更加勇敢和乐观。3.I realized that smetimes,the mst unexpected events can lead t the mst beautiful utcmes,and that life is full f surprises and pprtunities fr grwth.我意识到,有时候,最意想不到的事情可以带来最美好的结果,生活充满了惊喜和成长的机会。
(四)梦想主题1.(2025·山东青岛一模)The rad t dream is paved with perseverance and determinatin, nly thse wh never give up can tuch the stars.通往梦想的道路是用毅力和决心铺就的,只有那些永不放弃的人才能触摸到星辰。2.The wrld always makes way fr the dreamer.这个世界总是会给梦想家让路。
3.Pursuing ne’s dreams requires curage,fr it is in the face f adversity that ne’s true character is revealed.追求梦想需要勇气,因为正是在面对逆境时,一个人的真正品格才会显露出来。
(五)兴趣爱好主题1.A variety f interests and hbbies will braden ur hrizns,enrich ur life and make us relaxed.各种各样的兴趣和爱好会开阔我们的眼界,充实我们的生活,并使我们感到放松。2.A prper hbby des nt ccupy students t much time.As the ld saying ges,“All wrk and n play makes Jack a dull by.”一个合适的爱好并不会占用学生太多的时间。正如那句古老的谚语所说:“只学习,不玩耍,聪明的孩子也变傻。”
(六)个人成长主题1.(2025·江苏南通一模)Grwth is a cntinuus jurney f self-discvery,where we learn t embrace ur strengths and vercme ur weaknesses.成长是一段不断自我发现的旅程,在这段旅程中,我们学会拥抱自己的优点并克服自身的缺点。2.Smetimes the best rewards aren’t the nes yu can hld in yur hands,but the nes that warm yur heart and strengthen yur spirit.有时候,最好的回报不是那些你能握在手里的东西,而是那些温暖你的心灵、振奋你的精神的东西。
3.The mst valuable lessns in life are ften learned thrugh failure,fr it teaches us the pwer f perseverance.生活中最宝贵的经验经常是通过失败获得的,因为它教会我们坚持的力量。
(七)亲情友情主题1.(2025·安徽师大附中高考模拟)This accident was a reminder that even in the midst f chas and pain,family and lve can als bring light and strength.这次事故提醒我们,即使在混乱和痛苦中,家人和爱也能带来光明和力量。2.(2025·河北邢台高考模拟)The stry f the light was mre than a memry.It symblized ur family’s everlasting bnd,which was grwing strnger like the tree that had weathered cuntless seasns.光的故事不仅仅是一种记忆。它象征着我们家庭永恒的纽带,就像那棵经历了无数个季节的树一样,越来越坚固。
3.(2025·河北石家庄高考模拟)Trust is the fundatinal principle that hlds friendship.We need t be pen and trust ur friends.信任是维系友谊的基本原则。我们需要坦诚并信任我们的朋友。(八)遇险脱难主题1.(2025·山西一模)This heric act nt nly saved tw precius lives but als demnstrated the pwer f curage and selflessness in the face f danger.这一英勇的行为不仅挽救了两条宝贵的生命,而且在危险面前展示了勇气和无私的力量。
2.What a narrw escape! It turned ut that there is always a way ut f any difficult situatins as lng as we stay calm.真是九死一生啊!事实证明,只要我们保持冷静,任何困境总会有出路的。3.This adventure taught them the imprtance f cherishing the present mment and nt taking life fr granted,as it can change in an instant.这次冒险教会了他们珍惜当下的重要性,不要把生活视为理所当然,因为生活可能会在瞬间发生改变。
(九)谚语主题1.N pains,n gains.不劳无获。2.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。3.Nthing is impssible t a willing heart.有志者,事竟成。4.A gd beginning is half dne.良好的开端是成功的一半。5.Sunshine always cmes after the strm.阳光总在风雨后。
6.Rme was nt built in a day.罗马不是一天建成的。 7.Failure is the mther f success.失败是成功之母。8.Opprtunity favrs the prepared mind.机会总是青睐有准备的人。9.Rses given,fragrance in hand.赠人玫瑰,手有余香。10.Many hands make light wrk.众人拾柴火焰高。
(一)心理描写1.开心激动①ne’s eyes glittering/sparkling/shining with excitement某人的眼里闪烁着激动的光芒②brighten ne’s heart 使某人心情愉快③jump/spring t ne’s feet with great delight开心地跳了起来 ④cntain ne’s excitement抑制某人的激动⑤be wild with jy欣喜若狂
2.伤心忧郁①flat in an cean f sadness 漂浮在悲伤的海洋里②with a heavy/srrwful heart 怀着沉重/悲伤的心情③be drwned in srrw被悲伤淹没④with tears blurring ne’s eyes泪水模糊了某人的双眼 ⑤weep/sb with ne’s face hidden in ne’s hands掩面啜泣
3.生气愤怒①fly int a rage 暴跳如雷②lse ne’s temper发脾气③be seized by anger充满愤怒④ne’s vice trembles with anger 某人的声音因愤怒而颤抖 ⑤strm ut f the rm 怒气冲冲地走出房间
4.害怕惊讶①knees feel weak 双腿发软②with ne’s heart punding/beating wildly 某人的心怦怦直跳③be frzen with fear 吓得动弹不得④be shcked beynd wrds 惊讶得说不出话来⑤be numb with shck 惊呆了
5.内疚遗憾①be cnsumed with guilt 深感内疚②be buried in guilt沉浸于内疚之中③have guilt written n ne’s face满脸内疚④t ne’s great regret令某人深感遗憾的是⑤with great regret 非常遗憾地
6.焦虑紧张①have/with butterflies in ne’s stmach 心里发慌 ②hide ne’s nervusness/anxiety 掩饰紧张/焦虑 ③with ne’s heart in ne’s muth 提心吊胆地 ④fidget with anxiety 因焦虑而坐立不安⑤be n pins and needles如坐针毡
7.失望沮丧①be frustrated with...对……感到沮丧②be disappinted at/by... 对……感到失望③fall int despair/abandn neself t despair 陷入绝望 ④have a dwncast lk n ne’s face 某人脸上露出一副垂头丧气的表情⑤thrw sb int lw spirits 使某人情绪低落
8.尴尬羞愧①glw with embarrassment 尴尬得满脸通红②lwer ne’s head with shame 羞愧地低下头③be struck dead with shame 羞愧得要死④hide ne’s inner embarrassment 隐藏内心的尴尬⑤ne’s cheeks burn with embarrassment 某人的脸颊因尴尬而发烫
(二)动作描写1.上肢动作
(三)场景描写1.美好景色①the setting/rising sun 落日/冉冉升起的太阳②the delicate flwers 娇嫩的花③the fragrant rses 芳香的玫瑰④(2025·山东济宁一模)In the distance,the seagull sared freely between the sea and sky,as if dancing.在远处,海鸥在大海和蓝天之间自由地翱翔,仿佛在跳舞。
⑤Birds sang jyfully n the branches,as if guiding us with their sngs.鸟儿在枝头欢快地歌唱,仿佛在用歌声为我们指引方向。⑥The cluds in the sky were painted by the setting sun int a splendid sunset glw,breathtakingly beautiful.天空中的云朵被夕阳染成了绚丽的晚霞,美得令人惊叹。
2.恶劣天气①thunder and lightning 电闪雷鸣②be vercast with dark cluds 乌云密布③Immediately,an abslute darkness ruled the frest.顷刻间,黑暗统治了森林。④The icy wind needled his face.凛冽的风如针般扎着他的脸。
⑤The wind was picking up,which made the branches dancing wildly.风越刮越大,使得树枝在疯狂地舞动着。⑥The sky was suddenly engulfed by dark cluds,and raindrps like marbles pelted dwn mercilessly.天空突然被乌云笼罩,弹珠般的雨点无情地砸了下来。
(四)人物描写1.外貌体型①a graceful/skinny/slim figure 一个优美/消瘦/苗条的身材②an average/a well-built figure 一个中等/魁梧的身材③She had lng,silky hair that flwed dwn her back like a waterfall.她有一头长长的、柔滑的头发,像瀑布一样顺着她的背流淌下来。
④His eyes were as blue as the sky,clear and bright,making peple feel warm.他的眼睛像天空一样蓝,清澈明亮,让人感到温暖。⑤The girl had a small nse,which added t her delicate and pretty appearance.这个女孩有一个小巧的鼻子,这使她的外表更加精致漂亮。⑥The ld man had a wrinkled face,with deep lines arund his eyes and muth,shwing the traces f time.这位老人满脸皱纹,他的眼睛和嘴巴周围有深深的纹路,展现出岁月的痕迹。
2.性格特征①ptimistic and psitive /pessimistic and negative乐观积极/悲观消极②be armed/equipped with a keen insight int...对……具有敏锐的洞察力③a self-pssessed/gd-natured/dwn-t-earth/an utspken persn一个沉着冷静的/和蔼可亲的/脚踏实地的/直言不讳的人④kind-hearted and cmpassinate善良且富有同情心的
⑤She is always ptimistic and spreads happiness wherever she ges. 她总是很乐观,无论走到哪里都能传递快乐。⑥She is a brave girl wh dares t face challenges.她是个勇敢的女孩,敢于面对挑战。
3.神态表情①beam with pleasure 喜不自胜②ne’s face pales with fright 某人吓得脸色苍白③wear a puzzled lk 流露出迷惑不解的神情④ne’s face grws serius某人的表情变得严肃
⑤She sat there silently,her shulders slumped,as if the weight f the whle wrld was n her.她静静地坐在那里,肩膀耷拉着,仿佛全世界的重量都压在了她身上。⑥He kept pacing back and frth,his hands cnstantly clenching and unclenching,shwing his extreme nervusness.他不停地来回踱步,双手不断地握紧又松开,表现出极度的紧张。