高考英语二轮测试-应用文写作（名校模拟10篇）（解析版）- （天津专用）

这是一份高考英语二轮测试-应用文写作（名校模拟10篇）（解析版）- （天津专用），共20页。试卷主要包含了假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津，比赛的时间和地点；，建议他报名参加并说明理由等内容，欢迎下载使用。
学校：__________姓名：__________班级：__________考号：__________
2024届天津市北辰区高考模拟考试（三模）英语试卷
61．假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。在第16个全国防灾减灾日到来之际，你们学校开展了一次“安全进校园”的主题活动。你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括：
(1)活动目的；
(2)活动安排(专家讲座、学习防灾减灾和自救等)；
(3)活动感受。
注意：
(1) 词数不少于 100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
全国防灾减灾日—Natinal Disaster Preventin and Reductin Day
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Chris,
Hw is it ging recently? Learning that yu are enthusiastic abut the educatinal activity held by ur schl, I’d like t share with yu sme details.
With the appraching f the 16th Natinal Disaster Preventin and Reductin Day, ur schl carried ut a theme activity f safe entry int the campus, which aims t raise students’ awareness f safety, equip us with safety knwledge and prtect us frm ptential natural disasters.
In rder t better prmte the activity, ur arrangements are as fllws: T start with, an expert frm a prfessinal rescue team delivered a lecture n hw t react when disasters strike us, such as fires and earthquakes, equipping us with basics f evacuatin. In additin, we learnt the practical tips n disaster preventin and reductin n campus. Furthermre, in the face f danger, we were encuraged t grasp hw t save urselves.
We students have benefited greatly frm the activity. I’m lking frward t yur cming and sharing sme practical suggestins n this issue.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Chris介绍学校开展的一次“安全进校园”主题活动的相关情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……充满热情：be enthusiastic abut→be passinate abut
想要做某事：wuld like t d sth.→feel like ding sth.
此外：furthermre→what’s mre
鼓励：encurage→inspire
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In additin, we learnt the practical tips n disaster preventin and reductin n campus.
拓展句：In additin, we learnt the practical tips n disaster preventin and reductin n campus, which is beneficial t life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that yu are enthusiastic abut the educatinal activity held by ur schl, I’d like t share with yu sme details. (运用了现在分词作状语，that引导的宾语从句和过去分词作后置定语)
【高分句型2】With the appraching f the 16th Natinal Disaster Preventin and Reductin Day, ur schl carried ut a theme activity f safe entry int the campus, which aims t raise students’ awareness f safety, equip us with safety knwledge and prtect us frm ptential natural disasters. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2024届天津市滨海新区高三下学期高考三模英语试卷
61．假设你是晨光中学的李津，你在天津的留学生朋友Chris正在策划一次为期一周的以“美丽天津”为主题的留学生社团活动。他发来邮件询问你的建议，请你用英语回信，内容包括：
（1）活动形式（城市漫步、摄影展等）；
（2）推荐以上活动的理由；
（3）预祝活动成功。
参考词汇：
城市漫步 city walk 摄影展 phtgraphic exhibitin
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I’m thrilled t hear abut yur plan fr a week-lng event whse theme is “Beautiful Tianjin” ! I’d lve t cntribute sme thughts n hw t make it an unfrgettable experience.
A city walk wuld be a fantastic start. Imagine strlling thrugh the histric streets f Tianjin, like the Eurpean-style buildings alng the Five Avenues r the lively Ancient Culture Street. This firsthand explratin allws participants t absrb Tianjin’s unique blend f histry and mdernity, enhancing their understanding and appreciatin f the city’s heritage. Fllwing the explratin, rganize a phtgraphic exhibitin where students can exhibit their visual narratives f Tianjin. Capturing the city’s scenic riverfrnt, bustling markets, r serene parks, this platfrm encurages artistic expressin while sharing Tianjin’s beauty frm diverse perspectives.
I recmmend these activities because they ffer immersive experiences that g beynd sightseeing, nurturing a sense f belnging and fstering cnnectins amng students frm different backgrunds. I whleheartedly wish yur event t be a tremendus success.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给留学生朋友Chris写一封回信，给他正在策划的为期一周的以“美丽天津”为主题的留学生社团活动一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感到兴奋的：thrilled→excited
活动：event→activity
展览：exhibit→display
提高：enhance→imprve
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： I’d lve t cntribute sme thughts n hw t make it an unfrgettable experience.
拓展句：I’d lve t cntribute sme thughts n hw yu can make it an unfrgettable experience.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m thrilled t hear abut yur plan fr a week-lng event whse theme is “Beautiful Tianjin” !（运用了whse引导的限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Fllwing the explratin, rganize a phtgraphic exhibitin where students can exhibit their visual narratives f Tianjin.（运用了where引导的限定性定语从句）
2024届天津市和平区高三下学期第三次质量调查英语试卷
61．假设你是李津，你的英国朋友Chris对天津举办的海棠花节非常感兴趣，写信询问你相关情况，请你根据以下要点给他回信：
1.活动时间和地点（3. 29日-4. 6日，五大道）
2.活动内容：如观赏海棠花，看文化表演等。
3.邀请他明年来参加
注意：词数不少于100；可适当增加细节，使行文连贯
参考词汇：海棠节 Begnia Festival
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I’m delighted t receive yur letter, in which yu shw great interest in the Begnia Festival in Tianjin. Nw, let me intrduce it t yu in detail.
The Begnia Festival is scheduled t be held frm March 29th t April 6th at Wudada in Tianjin. It’s a wnderful event that attracts many peple. During the festival, yu can enjy the breathtaking beauty f the begnia flwers in full blm. There are varius cultural perfrmances as well, ranging frm lively music and dance t traditinal art exhibitins, which shwcase the unique charm f Tianjin. I still remember feeling cmpletely immersed in the festival atmsphere, surrunded by the fragrance f flwers and the jy f the crwd.
I sincerely invite yu t cme and experience the Begnia Festival with me next year. I believe yu will have an unfrgettable time in Tianjin.
Lking frward t yur arrival!
Yurs,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代替李津给对对天津举办的海棠花节非常感兴趣的英国朋友Chris写信介绍相关情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
详细地：in detail→at length
吸引：attract→draw
欣赏：enjy→appreciate
展示：shwcase→demnstrate
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：The Begnia Festival is scheduled t be held frm March 29th t April 6th at Wudada in Tianjin. It’s a wnderful event that attracts many peple.
拓展句：The Begnia Festival is scheduled t be held frm March 29th t April 6th at Wudada in Tianjin, which is a wnderful event that attracts many peple.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m delighted t receive yur letter, in which yu shw great interest in the Begnia Festival in Tianjin.（运用了in which引导定语从句）
【高分句型2】There are varius cultural perfrmances as well, ranging frm lively music and dance t traditinal art exhibitins, which shwcase the unique charm f Tianjin.（运用了现在分词作庄园，which引导定语从句）
2024届天津市河西区高三下学期三模英语试题
61．假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你的英国笔友Chris询问你高考之后对大学生活和学习会有哪些准备。请你给他回邮件，内容包括：
1. 大学生活和学习的准备；
2. 进行这些准备的理由；
3. 询问对方的假期计划。
注意：词数不少于100。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Chris,
Last week, yu have asked abut hw I will prepare fr my future cllege life. Nw, I wuld lve t share my hliday plans with yu.
As fr my future life at university, I’ve decided t take gardening as my majr and hpe t be admitted t China Agricultural University. The reasn why I want t learn gardening in the future is that I’m very interested in planting flwers and have been taught by my mther hw t take care f them. During this vacatin, I plan t read sme bks abut btany t equip myself with mre knwledge. Furthermre, wrking as a vlunteer in Beijing Btanical Garden will enable me t get a gd knwledge f landscape architecture. All f these preparatins will definitely enrich my hrticulture experience, which will make my cllege studies much mre enjyable additin t what will be prepared fr the cllege studies, it is f equal imprtance t buy sme daily necessities, such as bed sheets and twels. I even hpe t pay a visit t the university campus t get aware f the lcatin f sme teaching buildings, allwing me t adapt t the campus life efficiently.
I wnder what yu will d this hliday. Maybe yu’d like t share yur plans with me in the next email.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生介绍一下自己高考毕业后对大学的准备。考
【详解】1. 词汇积累：
① 园艺：gardening → landscaping/hrticulture
② 植物学：btany → phytlgy/flriculture
③ 对……感兴趣：be interested in → feel/have/shw/express (an) interest in
④ 景观设计：landscape architecture → garden design/envirnmental design
2. 句式拓展：
简单句变复合句
原句：During this vacatin, I plan t read sme bks abut btany t equip myself with mre knwledge.
拓展句：During this vacatin, I plan t read sme bks abut btany which will equip myself with mre knwledge.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The reasn why I want t learn gardening in the future is that I’m very interested in planting flwers and have been taught by my mther hw t take care f them.（why引导的定语从句，that引导的表语从句）
【高分句型2】Furthermre, wrking as a vlunteer in Beijing Btanical Garden will enable me t get a gd knwledge f landscape architecture.（动名词作主语）
2024届天津市南开区高三下学期三模英语试题
第二节：书面表达(满分 20 分)
41．假设你是学生会主席李津，为提升同学们的环保意识，你校准备于下周六开展 “垃圾分类助推活动”，请代表学生会写一封邀请信，向留学生介绍活动的具体安排。内容包括：
1.活动意义：提高学生环保意识，促进校园垃圾分类;
2.具体安排：
3.报名方式：校园网主页报名
参考词汇：垃圾分类 garbage srting 报名 sign up
注意：
1. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
2. 词数不少于 100，开头和格式已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear exchange students in ur schl,
I’m Li Lin, president f the Student Unin. I’m hnred t invite yu t Garbage Srting Activities.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Jin
Student Unin President
【答案】
Dear exchange students in ur schl,
I’m Li Lin, president f the Student Unin. I’m hnred t invite yu t Garbage Srting Activities.
Aiming t raise students’ awareness f envirnmental prtectin and prmte garbage srting n campus, ur schl will cnduct a series f activities next Saturday. Detailed arrangements are as fllws:
First f all, frm 8 am t 10 am, a lecture n current envirnmental prblems and pssible slutins will be given by a renwned envirnmentalist in the lecture rm. Fr the fllwing hur, tw cmmunity wrkers will give useful tips n garbage srting.
At 2 pm, participants will walk arund campus, pick up trash and practice garbage srting. At 4 pm, a sharing meeting will be held in the activity rm, where participants will share their experience and reflectin n tday’s activities.
If yu are interested in these activities, please sign up n the hmepage f ur schl’s website. Yu’re welcme t jin us!
Li Jin,
Student Unin President
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邀请信，邀请留学生参加学校准备于下周六开展 的“垃圾分类助推活动”，并介绍垃圾分类活动的意义及具体安排。
【详解】1.词汇积累
促进：prmte→bst
实施：cnduct→carry ut
建议：tip→advice/suggestin
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Aiming t raise students’ awareness f envirnmental prtectin and prmte garbage srting n campus, ur schl will cnduct a series f activities next Saturday.
拓展句：Our schl will cnduct a series f activities next Saturday, which aim t raise students’ awareness f envirnmental prtectin and prmte garbage srting n campus,
【点睛】【高分句型1】At 4 pm, a sharing meeting will be held in the activity rm, where participants will share their experience and reflectin n tday’s activities.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】If yu are interested in these activities, please sign up n the hmepage f ur schl’s website. （运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
2024届天津市红桥区高三下学期第一次质量调查（一模）英语试题
第二节：书面表达（满分25分）
61.假定你是学生会主席李津，你校的交换生Mike已学习中国象棋长达一年，特发邮件向你询问将由学生会举办的中国象棋大赛的情况。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1.举办比赛的目的：
2.比赛的时间和地点：
3.建议他报名参加并说明理由。
注意：
1.词数不少于100，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：中国象棋大赛 Chinese Chess Cntest
【答案】Dear Bb，
Delighted that yu are interested t knw abut the Chinese Chess Cntest t be held by the Students' Unin, I'm writing t infrm yu f sme relevant infrmatin.
Aimed at raising students' awareness f traditinal Chinese culture and develping students' lve fr Chinese chess, the cntest will be held at the Student Center n September 8th. Since yu have learned t play Chinese chess fr a year, I suggest that yu shuld participate in the cntest. I am cnvinced that yur participatin will surely make a difference.Thrugh the cntest, nt nly can yu imprve yur skills f playing Chinese chess but als yu can make friends with ther excellent players.
If yu need further infrmatin, please dn’t hesitate t cntact me. I'm expecting t see yu in the cntest and it is my belief that yu will perfrm well. Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生回复交换生Bb关于学校举办中国象棋大赛的情况。
【详解】体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般将来时和一般现在时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
1．举办比赛的目的；
2．比赛的时间和地点；
3．建议他报名参加并说明理由。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be delighted that…/ infrm sb. f sth./ be aimed at/ awareness/ suggest that sb. shuld d sth./ make a difference/ nt nly…but als…/ make friends with sb./ hesitate t d sth./ expect t d sth./ lk frward t
第三步：连词成句
1.Delighted that yu are interested t knw abut the Chinese Chess Cntest t be held by the Students' Unin, I'm writing t infrm yu f sme relevant infrmatin.
2.Aimed at raising students' awareness f traditinal Chinese culture and develping students' lve fr Chinese chess, the cntest will be held at the Student Center n September 8th.
3.Since yu have learned t play Chinese chess fr a year, I suggest that yu shuld participate in the cntest.
4.I am cnvinced that yur participatin will surely make a difference.
5.Thrugh the cntest, nt nly can yu imprve yur skills f playing Chinese chess but als yu can make friends with ther excellent players.
6.If yu need further infrmatin, please dn't hesitate t cntact me.
7.I'm expecting t see yu in the cntest and it is my belief that yu will perfrm well.
8.Lking frward t yur reply.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/r/s…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ thugh/ althugh…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：Since yu have learned t play Chinese chess fr a year, I suggest that yu shuld participate in the cntest.中since引导原因状语从句，that引导宾语从句；I'm expecting t see yu in the cntest and it is my belief that yu will perfrm well.中that引导同位语从句。
2024届天津市河西区高三下学期总复习质量检测（一）英语试题
第二节：书面表达（满分25分）
61. 假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，在元宵节来临之际，英国姊妹校师生来校访问，希望了解中国传统节日。请根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。
内容要点：
1. 表示欢迎：
2. 介绍元宵节（至少包括两点）；
3. 邀请他们参加元宵节活动。
注意：
1. 词数不少于100；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：
元宵节The Lantern Festival
【答案】Gd mrning, dear friends.
I am Li Jin, Chairman f the Student Unin f Chenguang high schl. On behalf f urschl, I’m here t extend ur warmest welcme t yu all. Since the Lantern Festival isarund the crner, I’d like t take this pprtunity t talk abut this imprtant festival.
The Lantern Festival falls n the 15th day f the lst lunar mnth. During the festival, lanterns f varius shapes and sizes are hung in the streets and “Guessing lantern riddles” is an interesting part f the festival. Peple als enjy eating yuanxia, which helps t unite their families in a jyful atmsphere during the festival. Meanwhile, there are perfrmances such as dragn dances and lin dances, attracting lts f visitrs.
Recently, there has been a Lantern Shw in the Water Park. We’ll invite yu t enjy it tnight. Wish yu have a gd time.
Thank yu fr listening.
【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。在元宵节来临之际，英国姊妹校师生来校访问，希望了解中国传统节日，要求考生一篇发言稿欢迎他们，并向他们介绍元宵节，邀请他们参加元宵节活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
表示：extend→express
机会：pprtunity→chance
各种各样的：varius→kinds f
重要的：imprtant→significant
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Meanwhile, there are perfrmances such as dragn dances and lin dances, attracting lts f visitrs.
拓展句：Meanwhile, perfrmances such as dragn dances and lin dances take place, which attract a large number f visitrs.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Since the Lantern Festival is arund the crner, I’d like t take this pprtunity t talk abut this imprtant festival.(as引导的原因状语从句)
[高分句型2]Peple als enjy eating yuanxia, which helps t unite their families in a jyful atmsphere during the festival.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
2024届天津市河东区高三下学期高考第一次模拟考试英语试卷
第二节：书面表达（满分25分）
61. 假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green一直保持联系，她对你们学校每年举办一次的“英语艺术节”非常感兴趣。近日她来信询问去年的“英语艺术节”活动情况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。
（1）活动时间：去年年底，为期一个月
（2）活动内容及意义；
（3）对活动的感受：
（4）感谢Mrs. Green多年来的关心和帮助，邀请她再来天津。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯：
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：英语艺术节EnglishArtsFestival
Dear Mrs. Green.
I'm s glad t hear frm yu.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes.
Yurs.
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Mrs. Green,
I’m s glad t hear frm yu. Knwing that yu want t learn smething abut ur English Arts Festival held last year, I’d be glad t tell yu sme details as fllws.
As yu knw, the English Arts Festival is held nce a year. In the end f last year, it was held as schedule and lasted fr a mnth, which was a great success. There were a great many f activities cvering music, dance, drama, film and visual arts. All the students and teachers participated in it. It nt nly brught greater artistic enjyment t us, but als increase ur interest f art. I think it was excellent and made me learn mre abut arts.
Thank yu fr having cared and helped me a lt these years and d hpe yu culd cme t Tianjin again.
Best wishes.
Yurs,
LiJin
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Mrs. Green回信介绍去年的“英语艺术节”活动情况。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
想要：want t d→feel like ding
举行：hld→hst
高兴的：glad→delighted
参加：participate in→take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：There were a great many f activities cvering music, dance, drama, film and visual arts.
拓展句：There were a great many f activities, which cvered music, dance, drama, film and visual arts.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Knwing that yu want t learn smething abut ur English Arts Festival held last year, I’d be glad t tell yu sme details as fllws. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] In the end f last year, it was held as schedule and lasted fr a mnth, which was a great succeed. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
2024届天津市河北区高三下学期总复习质量检测(一)英语试卷
第二节：书面表达（满分25分）
61.假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。在世界地球日即将到来之际，你校与英国友好校将在线举办“绿动校园，青春飞扬”的主题摄影展，以此来记录校园环保活动中的精彩瞬间。现组委会向同学们征集照片，你打算参加此项活动。请按照以下提示用英语给组委会写一封信来推荐你的照片：
（1）描述照片的内容；
（2）说明选择该照片的理由；
（3）表达对该照片入选的愿望。
参考词汇：绿动校园，青春飞扬Green Campus, Flying Yuth
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
l am Li Jin, a student frm Chenguang High Schl. With the Wrld Earth Day appraching, I am thrilled t participate in the "Green Campus, Flying Yuth" phtgraphy exhibitin t be held nline by ur schl and ur British sister schl.
I wuld like t submit a pht that features a grup f students planting trees with enthusiasm n a sunny afternn. I chse this pht because it captures the essence f ur campus' envirnmental prtectin effrts and caters t the theme f "Green Campus, FlyingYuth”
I sincerely hpe that my pht will be selected fr the exhibitin. It wuld be an hnr t have my wrk displayed with the ther utstanding entries and t cntribute t the glbal effrt f prmting envirnmental awareness. Thank yu fr cnsidering my submissin
Yurs.
Li Jin
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给组委会写一封信来推荐照片，描述照片的内容，说明选择该照片的理由，表达对该照片入选的愿望。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
兴奋的：thrilled→excited
参加：participate in→take part in
提交：submit→hand in
对……做贡献：cntribute t→make cntributins t
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I chse this pht because it captures the essence f ur campus' envirnmental prtectin effrts and caters t the theme f “Green Campus, Flying Yuth".
拓展句：The reasn why I chse this pht is that it captures the essence f ur campus' envirnmental prtectin effrts and caters t the theme f "Green Campus, Flying Yuth".
【点睛】【高分句型1】With the Wrld Earth Day appraching, I am thrilled t participate in the “Green Campus, Flying Yuth” phtgraphy exhibitin t be held nline by ur schl and ur British sister schl. (使用了With复合结构、不定式作状语)
【高分句型2】It wuld be an hnr t have my wrk displayed with the ther utstanding entries and t cntribute t the glbal effrt f prmting envirnmental awareness. (使用了业作形式主语且不定式作真正主语的句型、have sth. dne结构)
2024届天津市和平区高三下学期第一次质量调查（一模）英语试题
第二节：书面表达（满分25分）
假设你是李津。你的英国朋友Chris在中文班学习中文，他犹豫是否参加下周中文班举办的中文演讲大赛。比赛要求每位选手从“塞翁失马焉知非福（a blessing in misfrtune）”和“揠苗助长（T pull up the seedings t help them grw）”这两个成语中任选一个完成一篇演讲。Chris特写信向你求助。请你给他回一封电子邮件，要点如下。
1．鼓励他积极参与：
2．提供帮助（如解释成语的意义，举一些事例，你给予的演讲建议等）
3．表达美好的祝愿。
注意：
（1）词数不少100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Jin
【答案】
Dear Chris,
Hearing that yu are cnsidering participating in a Chinese speech cntest next week, I think yu shuld actively engage in it. And I am writing t encurage yu t get prepared and g fr it!
Regarding the tpic f the speech the idim “a blessing in misfrtune” means that smetimes we lse smething, but we may get better returns in ther aspects, while anther ne means smetimes simply being eager fr success will nly make things wrse. But as fr the speech, I d suggest yu share sme examples r persnal experiences, which can shw yur understanding f the language and als yur life here in China. In additin, pay attentin t yur prnunciatin, and try t make yur speech clear and understandable. What I strngly recmmend is t share yur persnal jurney, r similar expressins in yur culture, which will nt nly make yur speech mre authentic, but will als aruse the interest f yur audience.
Finally, I sincerely wish yu gd results in the cmpetitin. Mst imprtantly, enjy yurself!
Yurs,
Li Jin
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国朋友Chris在中文班学习中文，他犹豫是否参加下周中文班举办的中文演讲大赛。比赛要求每位选手从“塞翁失马焉知非福”和“揠苗助长”这两个成语中任选一个完成一篇演讲。Chris特写信向考生求助，要求考生按照要求给他回一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
考虑：cnsider→ think abut
参与：participate in→ jin in
积极地：actively→ psitively
方面：aspect→ way
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing that yu are cnsidering participating in a Chinese speech cntest next week, I think yu shuld actively engage in it.
拓展句：Because I hear that yu are cnsidering participating in a Chinese speech cntest next week, I think yu shuld actively engage in it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing that yu are cnsidering participating in a Chinese speech cntest next week, I think yu shuld actively engage in it.（运用了现在分词Hearing作状语、that引导的宾语从句、省略引导词that的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】What I strngly recmmend is t share yur persnal jurney, r similar expressins in yur culture, which will nt nly make yur speech mre authentic, but will als aruse the interest f yur audience.（运用了What引导的主语从句、which引导的非限制性定语从句）
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