Unit 1 Career talks 4.写作帮 （同步课件）外研版八年级英语下册

如何写与职业相关的文章 本单元以“职业”为话题，主要围绕全面认识职业、理解职业的意义、职业的发展趋势等方面展开。与其相关的写作通常涉及以下几个方面： 1.介绍一种自己想从事的职业； 2.对未来职业做出预测和设想； 3.写一则招聘启事。 写作时，人称多用第一、三人称，时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主，部分句子使用被动语态表达效果会更好。结构多为“总—分—总”：开头导入，中间具体阐述，结尾总结升华。你校的英语俱乐部为成员提供寒假兼职（a part-time job）体验。成员可以选择做图书管理员（librarian）、手艺人（craftsperson）、书法家（calligrapher）、裁缝（tailor）、厨师（cook）等传统职业，也可以选择做电脑程序员（computer programmer）、人工智能工程师（AI engineer）、环境科学家（environmental scientist） 等现代新兴职业。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈你的选择。#1写作提示：#1.11.What part-time job do you choose?2.What is the key responsibilities of the job?3.What’s the benefits and challenges of the job?要求：1.词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Hello, I would like a part-time job as_____________________________________________审主题：寒假兼职审体裁：应用文审人称：第一人称、第三人称审时态：一般现在时、一般将来时审要点：职业名称、职业职责、职业的益处与挑战佳作展示 Hello, I would like a part-time job as a computer programmer. ①During the winter vacation, I will not only help write and test computer programs, but also take part in the design of some new software. ②I’ll also be responsible for fixing software bugs. ③This job will be filled with both benefits and challenges. It can help me improve my logical thinking and problem-solving abilities. ④However, programming can be challenging, as creativity and great patience are required. ⑤I might need to spend hours dealing with a single issue.教材原句 The past 30 years were filled with both challenges and joys.（教材P4）教材原句 …a positive personality is required.（教材P7） It’s a wonderful opportunity to learn more about technology and gain practical skills. ⑥I believe this experience will be rewarding. That’s all for my part-time job choice. Thank you!名师点评 本篇发言稿格式正确，结构清晰，内容完整，涵盖所有要点并进行了适当的补充。①句运用not only...but also...结构介绍了该兼职的主要职责。②句中用be responsible for短语补充了自己的职责。③句中用be filled with短语和both...and...结构说明该兼职兼具益处和挑战。④句中含有as引导的原因状语从句和一般现在时的被动语态，说明该兼职可能面临的挑战。⑤句中运用spend time doing sth.结构补充说明了挑战。⑥运用“I believe+宾语从句”表明这一兼职体验的价值。