2025年中考英语作文复习：个人的情况和周边的人 话题作文写作指导与范文 学案

这是一份2025年中考英语作文复习：个人的情况和周边的人 话题作文写作指导与范文 学案，共12页。学案主要包含了思路点拨，亮点词汇，高分句型，结构布局等内容，欢迎下载使用。
例1：根据21世纪学生发展能力报告，问题解决能力已经成为学生面对未来的重要能力之一。问题激发学习和实践，问题解决推动创新和创造。学校英语俱乐部正在开展以Face Yur Prblems为题的征文活动，请你根据提示，写一篇英语短文投稿。
注意事项：
(1)短文内容需根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
(2)词数在80个左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(3)短文中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称；
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【思路点拨】本文是一篇命题作文，话题为面对你的问题，人称主要为第一人称，时态主要为一般过去时。写作时注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【例文】
Face Yur Prblems
Prblem-slving is an imprtant ability. Over the past tw years, I've imprved such skills. I'd like t share ne f my experiences with yu.
Last year, I ften stayed up late and fund it hard t stay awake the next day. ①I had this prblem because I culdn't achieve a balance between my hmewrk and hbbies. ②I had many hbbies while there was much hmewrk t d every day. T slve the prblem, I cmmunicated with my teachers. Because f their advice, I began t chse hbbies accrding t my time. Fr example, I played basketball at weekends instead f n weekdays.
Since then, I've felt mre happiness f my schl life. ③I think it's imprtant t manage time well, especially fr yunger students.
【亮点词汇】①share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物
②stay up late熬夜
③cmmunicate with与沟通
④accrding t根据
⑤instead f而不是
【高分句型】
①I had this prblem because I culdn't achieve a balance between my hmewrk and hbbies.（because引导原因状语从句）
②I had many hbbies while there was much hmewrk t d every day.（while引导比较状语从句）
③I think it's imprtant t manage time well, especially fr yunger students.（省略that的宾语从句；it's+形容词+t d sth.句型，其中it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正主语）
【结构布局】
引言：点明主题
中心：介绍自己的经历和解决的办法
结尾：表达观点
例2：假定你是Jack，你在校报英语专栏上看到了“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请认真阅读启事，并根据信中的内容和写作要点用英语写一封应征邮件，可以有适当的发挥。
写作要点：
(1)陈述应征目的；
(2)说明应征条件（性格、能力）；
(3)为活动提出建议1—2点。
注意：(1)词数80左右。回复信的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
(2)回复中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Ms Chen,
Iˈm Jack, a student frm Class 1, Grade 9. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Jack【思路点拨】本文主要是根据学校“英语文化节”的一则志愿者招募启事，写一封应征邮件。要求介绍一下自己的个人情况，注意合理使用连接词，使语句通顺，语意连贯，本文主要使用第一人称，一般现在时。注意文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。
【例文】
Dear Ms. Chen,
Iˈm Jack, a student frm Class 1, Grade 9. I want t be a vlunteer in English Festival. ①I think it's a perfect pprtunity fr me t develp my abilities.
Fr the past tw years, I have taken an active part in ur yearly English Festival and played an imprtant rle in it. As a hard-wrking student, I'm gd at English and can express my thughts and pinins clearly with freigners. ②In additin, I am an utging girl wh has rich experience in rganizing schl activities. I wuld appreciate it if yu give me a chance.
Lking frward t yur reply.
Best wishes,
Jack
【亮点词汇】
①take an active part in 积极参加
②play an imprtant rle in 在……起重要作用
【高分句型】
①I think it's a perfect pprtunity fr me t develp my abilities.（省略that的宾语从句）
②In additin, I am an utging girl wh has rich experience in rganizing schl activities.（wh引导的定语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：开篇作文介绍，点题“我想成为英语节的志愿者。”；
中心：介绍个人情况；
结尾：期待回复。
例3：在你的学校生活、家庭生活、社会活动及兴趣爱好等方面，一定有让你引以为豪的事情。请以“One Thing I'm Prud f”为题，根据以下要求讲述一件令你感到自豪的事情。
要求：(1)词数在80词以上；
(2)至少包括What is the thing yu're prud f? Why are yu prud f it?等要点。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路点拨】本文是一篇命题作文，话题为讲述一件令自己感到自豪的事情。时态主要以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，人称主要以第一人称为主。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当增加衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【例文】
One Thing I'm Prud f
①I still remember hw I became gd at English. This makes me prud.
Every English class used t be like a bad dream fr me. I didn't understand my teacher mst f the time. One day, the teacher talked with me and gave me sme useful advice. I began t review new wrds frm time t time, even n the way t schl. I read alud t practice prnunciatin. I read famus English nvels, watched English vides, and kept a diary in English. Whenever I met new wrds, I lked them up in a dictinary. I kept using English every day. Practice makes perfect. Abut tw mnths later, after my cntinuus effrts and study, I gt an "A" in the final English exam.
②I am really prud f this experience, because it helps me realize that everyne can achieve their gals thrugh hard wrk. ​​​​​​​
【亮点词汇】
①used t d sth.过去常常做某事
②frm time t time不时地，偶尔
③lk up查找，查阅
【高分句型】
①I still remember hw I became gd at English.（hw引导的宾语从句）
②I am really prud f this experience, because it helps me realize that everyne can achieve their gals thrugh hard wrk.（because引导的原因状语从句；that引导的宾语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：引出主题
中心：阐述具体事件
结尾：说明原因
例4：来自美国的Amy想要结交更多的中国朋友，并想更好地了解中国的文化，因此她写了一封交友信，作了自我介绍，并希望大家积极回复。请你用英语给她回信。
注意：(1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
(2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
(3)词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Amy,
I'm lucky t see yur email n the Internet. I'm very glad t make friends with yu. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hpe yu will have a gd time in China.
Yurs,
Sandy
【思路点拨】本文是一篇应用文，话题为向美国的Amy介绍自己及中国的文化。人称主要为第一人称，时态主要为一般现在时。
【例文】
Dear Amy,
I'm lucky t see yur email n the Internet. I'm very glad t make friends with yu.
I'm Sandy. I'm cnfident and I think I can d everything well if I d my best. My favurite clur is blue because blue can me feel calm and peaceful. It's gd fr my mind and bdy.
In my spare time, I like playing ftball because it can make me healthy. ①I admire Yuan Lngping very much because he spent all his life n the research and develpment f better rice plants.
②If yu cme t visit China this summer, I think yu can visit the Palace Museum. Yu can see a lt f traditinal wrks f art there.
I hpe yu will have a gd time in China.
Yurs,
Sandy
【亮点词汇】
①be gd fr对……有好处
②in ne's spare time在某人的业余时间
③spend sme time n sth.在……花费一些时间
【高分句型】
①I admire Yuan Lngping very much because he spent all his life n the research and develpment f better rice plants.（because引导原因状语从句）
②If yu cme t visit China this summer, I think yu can visit the Palace Museum.（if引导条件状语从句，think后面是省略that的宾语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：由来信引出交友
中心：介绍自己的基本情况爱好，业余活动等
结尾：表达愿望
练习:
English Garden正举办英语征文比赛，本期征文主题为“I have changed a lt!”，具体要求如下：
◆ What did yu use t be like?
◆ What is the mst imprtant change?
◆ And hw did it happen? Tell a stry abut it.
请你根据上述要求写一篇英语征文参加比赛。
注意：
(1)内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺。
(2)词数80左右（邮件的开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
(3)文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
I have changed a lt!
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练习示例与解析
【思路点拨】根据要求写一篇英语征文参加比赛。文章应使用第一人称写作
【例文】 I have changed a lt!
Time ges by. Three years has passed. Of curse I have changed a lt. Let me shw yu my changes.
I used t be really shrt and thin. I used t be shy and quiet. I was always silent in class. But nw I have changed a lt. ①But ne f my mst imprtant changes is that I becme mre utging. What made me change a lt? I remember when I was in Grade Eight, there was an English speech in ur schl. I wanted t take part in it, but I was afraid f it. Our English teacher, Mr. Wang encuraged me t take part it. ②He guided me a lt, and I practiced a lt every day. Finally,I wn the first prize in the speech cntest. I felt very prud and happy. Since then, I have becme mre utging.
【亮点词汇】
①used t 过去常常；
②take part in 参加；
【高分句型】
①But ne f my mst imprtant changes is that I becme mre utging.（that引导的表语从句）
②He guided me a lt, and I practiced a lt every day.（and连接的并列句）
【结构布局】
引言：开篇引题“让我给你看看我的改变”；
中心：详细介绍自己的改变；
结尾：介绍“从那以后，我变得更外向了。”Vlunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival, which will be held n January 15—17, 2024, is nw lking fr 10 student vlunteers t prvide service fr Talent Shw. If yu are interested, please send an applicatin email t Ms Chen at flwer@126.cm.
Dear friend,
I'm Amy frm the USA. I want t make mre Chinese friends. Can yu tell me smething abut yu? What's yur persnality? What's yur favurite clr? Why? I like listening t rck music and watching science fictin films in my spare time. What abut yu? Wh d yu admire mst, yur parents, stars, r famus scientists? Why? I'm ging t visit China next summer, and I'm interested in Chinese traditinal art. Can yu give me sme suggestins?
Lk frward t hearing frm yu.
Best wishes,
Amy