人教版英语八年级下册单元写作提升专练Unit 10 I’ve had this bike for three years. -话题作文写作提升专练（教师版）

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近三年考情分析
（1）本单元的话题是" Living envirnment(生活环境)"，要求学生学会描述自己周边环境的变化，并适当表达自己的感受。在写这类文章时，要注意正确运用时态，内容合理，行文流畅、完整。
（2）本单元的话题是谈论身边所拥有的东西物品或者自己喜欢的物品等。属于说明文的范畴，考查学生描述一个物品的特点，并对物品发表自己的简单看法及感受。重点考查学生以下能力：
学习说明文的写作特点；
使用现在完成时态表述持续；
学会发表个人看法及观点。
写作目标
能用现在完成时介绍某人拥有的物品，并分享其背后的特殊意义。
1. 能用现在完成时“have dne”的结构来介绍某人拥有的物品；
2. 能在现在完成时中准确区分和使用since和fr
“三步法”介绍的文章：
◆第一步：整体介绍你最喜欢的东西是什么；
◆第二步：学出你喜欢的原因；
◆ 第三步：总结。
真题感知
1．（2023·辽宁盘锦·统考中考真题）根据要求完成作文，并写在答题卡的相应位置。
假如你是李华，你的朋友Peter来中国旅游，回国前他想给家人买一件代表中国文化的礼物。他通过邮件询问你的意见，请你用英文回复。
提示：
(1)建议买什么；
(2)介绍这个礼物；
(3)给出推荐理由。
要求：
(1)内容包含以上信息，80词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
(2)语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Peter,
Glad t hear frm yu. It’s easy t chse a gift which stands fr Chinese culture.
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I hpe my advice is helpful. Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
Glad t hear frm yu. It’s easy t chse a gift which stands fr Chinese culture. I’d lve t give yu my suggestin abut Chinese gifts.
Frm my pint f view, paper-cut is a gd chice t be special Chinese gifts fr yur family. Paper-cuts are usually used t decrate the huse. They are put n windws, drs and walls t celebrate the Spring Festival. Paper-cuts are a traditinal Chinese culture, frm which yu can have a better understanding f China. Peple like them very much because they are seen as symbls fr gd luck and a happy new year.
I hpe my advice is helpful. Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示信息介绍一件代表中国文化的礼物，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍推荐的礼物是什么；
第二步，介绍这个礼物；
第三步，说明推荐理由。
[亮点词汇]
①frm my pint f view依我看来
②be used t d被用来做某事
③be seen as被看成
[高分句型]
①Paper-cuts are a traditinal Chinese culture, frm which yu can have a better understanding f China.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②Peple like them very much because they are seen as symbls fr gd luck and a happy new year.（because引导的原因状语从句）
2．（2023·湖北十堰·统考中考真题）三年的初中生活，你一定有许多收获，也会有一些不足。展望未来，你肯定有许多美好的期待。假如你被邀请在班会上发言，请你根据以下表格信息，写一篇发言稿。
要求：
1.发言稿需涵盖表格中所有内容，可适当发挥；
2.行文连贯，条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不可出现真实人名和校名等相关信息：
4.词数80-100，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear students,
Hw time flies! Lking back at these past three years, I have imprved a lt. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Gd luck!
【答案】例文：
Dear students,
Hw time flies! Lking back at these past three years, I have imprved a lt.
I used t be very shy, nt daring t express myself in public. But with the encuragement frm my teachers, I nt nly becme mre utging but als get n well with all the peple arund me. Besides, I ften learn frm my classmates s I have made great prgress in my study. Hwever, I als wasted much valuable time in playing cmputer games. What’s wrse, I culdn’t really understand my parents, always talking back t them ludly. But nw, everything has changed. I make a decisin t study harder t make my parents prud f me. I believe that my dream will cme true and I will have a bright future.
Gd luck!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态综合使用“一般过去时”，“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述过去的三年有很大的变化；
第二步，回顾过去，包括性格、学习的变化并反思自己的不足；
第三步，展望未来，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in public在公共场合
②get n well with与……相处融洽
③make great prgress取得很大进步
④make a decisin做决定
[高分句型]
①But with the encuragement frm my teachers, I nt nly becme mre utging but als get n well with all the peple arund me.（nt als,,,结构）
②I believe that my dream will cme true and I will have a bright future.（that引导的宾语从句）
词汇积累：
have拥有
ever曾经
already已经
favrite最喜欢的
the first time首次
be full f 充满
sell/buy卖/买
mre than多
keep ld things保留旧物品
bring back sweet memries带回甜蜜的回忆
give away捐赠
不再
since自从
maybe也许
give up放弃
imprtant重要的
从中学会
grw up成长
把给
recently最近
如此那么
decide t d决定去做某事
play 和一起玩
part with分离
t be hnest老实说
uncmmn不同寻常的
a symbl f 的象征
especially尤其
mst f 大部分
a gd way t...做的好方式
thusands f成千上万
full f feelings充满感觉
in ne’s pinin以某人看来
句型积累：
My favrite thing is...
I’ve had it since I was five.我5岁的时候就拥有它。
It’s special t me 它对于我意义非凡是因为
I went t there by train.我是坐火车去的。
I have had it fr mre than 10 years.我已经拥有它10年了。
I want t keep ld things because they bring back sweet memries.我想保存这些旧东西是因为它们带给我甜蜜的回忆。
Yu can als give ld things away t peple in need.你也可以把旧的东西分发给有需要的人。
I dn’t need it anymre.不再需要它了。
It may be a little bit ld,but it is still interesting.也许它有点旧了，但是仍然很有趣。
As fr me ,I dn’t want t give up my ftball shirts.对于我来说，我不想放弃我的足球衫。
I really like it and I think I will keep it frever.我确实很喜欢它并且我会永远保存它。
We can 我从中获得
（一）
根据表格所给内容要点,以"The changes in my hmetwn"为题写一篇英语短文。要点如下：
要求：1.字迹工整，要点全面；2. 90 词左右。
The changes in my hmetwn



3.写作思维导图
参考词汇
in the past 过去；g t wrk 去上班；n ft 步行；by bike 骑自行车；
feel happy 感到高兴nt as gd as 不如……好
参考句子
1. My hmetwn has changed a lt in recent years.
最近几年，我的家乡发生了很大变化。
2. It used t be a/an... place. 它过去是个……地方。
3. Nw things have changed a lt. 现在事情发生了很大变化。
4. I hpe my hmetwn... 我希望我的家乡……
4.高分例文
The changes in my hmetwn
My hmetwn has changed a lt in recent years.①In the past, the air here was very fresh and the envirnment was gd. The huses were small and ld.Peple went t wrk n ft r by bike. It used t be a very quiet place.
②Nw things are quite different. The huses are big and bright. Many peple have their wn cars. The changes have brught yung peple a mdern life. They all feel happy. ③But there are fewer trees, and the envirnment is nt as gd as befre.
④I hpe my hmetwn will be mre and mre beautiful s that we can live a happier life.
例文分析：
文章开门见山，引出话题，接着分段描述家乡的今昔变化，并对未来进行了展望，思路清晰，条理分明，行文合理、紧凑。
①句使用短语 In the past,引出对家乡过去情况的描述；
②句总领第二段，引出对家乡现在情况的描述；
③句运用比较级和 nt as... as 结构,将家乡的现在与过去进行了比较；
④句中I hpe 后的宾语从句引出对家乡未来的展望。
5.佳句集锦
1. East r west, hme is best. 金窝银窝,不如自己的草窝。
2. Hme is where the heart is. 心之所系即为家。
3. A gd neighbr is better than a brther in the next village.远亲不如近邻。
4. Hme is a warm place, where we can always find lve, understanding, care and help.家是个温暖的地方,我们总是可以在其中找到爱、理解、关怀与帮助。
（二）
童年是人生中最美好的一段时光。尽管我们已告别童年，但童年中总有那么一件你最爱的并能给你带来甜美回忆的物品值得我们珍藏。假设你叫李华，是一名八年级学生，你的学校校刊正在举行“美好童年”的征文比赛。请以“My favrite _____in childhd”为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈童年你最喜欢的东西，你拥有它有多长时间了，是怎样得到它的，以及你喜欢它的原因。
要求：1. 内容包括以上所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文章结构完整，语句通顺，条理清楚；
3. 80词左右。
My favrite ________ in childhd
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考范文：
My favrite gift in childhd
Since I was brn, I have received a gd number f gifts. But the best ne is a watch, which my dad gave me when I entered senir middle schl. At that mment, my family are living a hard life. Althugh it was nt expensive, in rder t buy me the gift, my dad made every effrt t earn mney. Each time I see the watch, I think abut my great dad. He always tries his best t supprt ur family and he is the greatest man in my heart.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文，以“My favrite _____in childhd”为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈童年你最喜欢的东西，拥有的时间，怎样得到的以及喜欢的原因。
2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称来叙述内容；时态综合采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主，介绍童年最喜欢的礼物时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
（一）
1．童年时获得的东西中总有一件是你最爱的，并能给你带来美好的回忆，比如一个礼物，一个玩具……。请介绍你童年中最喜爱的一样东西，晒晒你“童年”的美好回忆。
提示：
(1) Hw lng have yu had it?
(2) Wh gave it t yu?
(3) Why d yu like it s much? Why is it special?
(4) Can yu say anything mre abut it?
要求：
（1）短文内容需包含提示问题中的要点，可适当发挥。
（2）语言准确得当，条理清晰。词数为70左右。首句已给出，不计入词数。
I’m glad t intrduce my favrite thing in my childhd t yu.
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【答案】例文
I’m glad t intrduce my favrite thing in my childhd t yu. It is my teddy bear. I have had it since I was five years ld. My grandmther gave it t me n my birthday.
I like the teddy bear s much because it’s dressed in my favrite clr. It’s special t me because my grandmther made it fr me. I think I will keep it frever t remind me f my grandmther.
The teddy bear has given me many gd memries. I remember when I was yung and I was scared at night because I didn’t like the dark. I held my teddy bear t feel safe.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，介绍自己童年中最喜欢的一样东西，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时，一般过去时和现在完成时。作文要分别介绍这样物品有多久了，谁给你的，为什么这么喜欢它，它为什么特别等内容。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
2．假如你是李华，你的英国好友Linda想了解你过去与现在性格方面的改变。请根据要点内容的提示，给她写封邮件。
要点如下：
1. 过去害羞、喜欢乡村音乐，很少交友；
2. 现在开朗，喜欢古典音乐，有很多朋友：
3. 过去喜欢集邮，现在喜欢看书。
写作要求：1. 短文内容必须包括以上所有要求的内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名：
3. 词数：80—100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Linda.
I’m very glad t tell yu smething abut me.
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That’s all abut my characters and hbbies. With my best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】范文：
Dear Linda,
I’m very glad t tell yu smething abut me.
I used t be t shy t speak t thers in public. As a result, I always made few friends. I fear t face thers by myself. At that time, I usually like cuntry music which made me feel quiet and peaceful. I als used t like cllecting stamps. And this always helped me get rich knwledge. Hwever, I am utging s that I make many friends. What’s mre, I like classic music that causes me t fall in lve with bks. S I lve reading very much nw. In the bks, I can learn a lt and knw better abut ur wrld.
That’s all abut my characters and hbbies. With my best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己过去和现在性格的变化；
第二步，介绍自己爱好上的变化。
[亮点词汇]
①used t be过去是
②as a result因此
③what’s mre而且
[高分句型]
①At that time, I usually like cuntry music which made me feel quiet and peaceful.（定语从句）
②Hwever, I am utging s that I make many friends.（目的状语从句）
3．回首抗击新冠疫情的这三年，每个人都在自己的岗位发光发热。每个人的心中都有一位“英雄”。请你结合自身经历，根据下表谈谈疫情防控期间你的所见所闻，所思所感。
写作要求：
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数80—120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The unfrgettable three years
Hw time flies! The COVID-19 attacked peple three years ag.
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【答案】例文：
The unfrgettable three years
Hw time flies! The COVID-19 attacked peple three years ag. During the COVID-19, we culdn’t g t schl, we had t stay at hme and take nline classes. We culdn’t g ut t play either. If we must g ut, we have t wear masks. The busy streets became empty. Because peple culdn’t g ut, I became a cmmunity vlunteer t help them deliver fd and vegetables. Althugh I wrked hard every day, I felt fulfilled and happy.
At the same time, many heres als appeared. The heres in my heart are the dctrs and the nurses. They disregarded the ht weather every day and they wre thick prtective clthing t help us with testing. We all liked them. Thanks t their effrts, we were able t spend three years healthy and safe.
Three years is a lng time. These three years have shwn me hw pwerful my cuntry is. Hw great medical staff are! I will als wrk hard like them in the future t help thse in need.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍疫情期间自己做了什么以及周围环境的变化；
第二步，介绍自己心中的英雄以及原因；
第三步，最后介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① stay at hme待在家
② help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
③ in the future在未来
[高分句型]
① Althugh I wrked hard every day, I felt fulfilled and happy.（althugh引导的让步状语从句）
② Hw great medical staff are!（hw引导的感叹句）
4．时光荏苒，六月的脚步越来越近，同学们即将离开这个与你朝夕相处三年的校园。教室里有你早起晨读的身影，操场上有你努力锻炼的身影，图书室有你沉浸阅读的身影。这个你们生活、拼搏、挥洒过泪水和汗水的校园里一定有一个你最喜欢的地方，请简要描述你喜欢它的原因或者在这里发生的让你喜欢上这个地方的故事。
参考要点：
1. 简要描写校园。
2. 介绍校园中你最喜欢的地方并简要描写。
3. 喜欢它的原因或者在这里发生过的让你喜欢上这个地方的故事。
要求：
1. 作文80-120词。
2. 文中不能出现自己或他人的真实姓名，以及所在学校的名称。
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【答案】例文
Three years has passed, I will leave my junir schl fr a new senir high schl. The life in my schl is rich and interesting. Let me tell yu smething abut my schl.
I study in a beautiful schl. There are many trees and flwers in campus. It’s green all the year rund. There are three buildings in my schl. Besides, there are tw playgrunds in my schl, a basketball curt and a ftball field. I like ur classrm best. Our classrm is large and bright. The teachers are very helpful and kind, and the students are lvely and friendly. They help me with my life and study. They ften encurage me when I have truble in my study. Last year my teachers and classmates had a birthday party fr me. We had fun tgether, and I was mved by them. I lve them and I like studying in my schl.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中对校园的描述、校园中自己最喜欢的地方以及喜欢它的原因或者在这里发生过的让自己喜欢上这个地方的故事的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍即将离开这个朝夕相处三年的校园；
第二步，介绍校园中你最喜欢的地方；
第三步，介绍喜欢它的原因或者在这里发生过的让自己喜欢上这个地方的故事。
[亮点词汇]
① rich and interesting丰富有趣
② all the year rund一年到头，终年
③ lvely and friendly可爱友好
④ had fun玩得很开心
[高分句型]
① There are many trees and flwers in campus.（There be句型）
② They ften encurage me when I have truble in my study.（when引导时间状语从句）
③ We had fun tgether, and I was mved by them.（被动语态）
5．自从学校开设劳动课后，同学们有了很多变化。请你根据下面的结构图和要求，以“Changes after having labr classes”为题，给你校英文校报写一篇短文投稿，谈谈同学们的变化。
参考词汇：help wash dishes, water the flwers, ck meals, ...
要求：
1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于70词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。
Changes after having labr classes
As we knw, many changes have taken place since we began t take labr classes.
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【答案】例文
Changes after having labr classes
As we knw, many changes have taken place since we began t take labr classes.
First, we d many meaningful things arund ur schl every day. Fr example, students take turns t help wash dishes in the schl dining hall, which makes us understand ur duty. Then, sme students ften plant trees and water the flwers t make ur schl mre beautiful. And it’s easy fr us nw because we have learned hw t plant trees in labr classes.
At hme, we always d sme difficult husewrk by urselves. The bys begin t d his wn laundry, and the girls like t ck fr the family. Thanks t the labr class, we have learned a lt f life skills.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：主要记录劳动课后同学们的变化，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍同学们在校的变化；
第二步，介绍同学们在家的变化。
[亮点词汇]
①take turns t d sth.轮流做某事
②by nself靠自己
③thanks t由于
[高分句型]
①Fr example, students take turns t help wash dishes in the schl dining hall, which makes us understand ur duty.（which引导的定语从句）
②And it’s easy fr us nw because we have learned hw t plant trees in labr classes.（because引导的的原因状语从句）
6．假定你是李华，本周学校将举办一场以“My Hmetwn”为主题的英语角活动，请你按要求准备发言稿。
要求：
（1）说说家乡的变化；
（2）介绍家乡的旅游景点；
（3）推荐家乡的特色小吃。
注意：
（1）词数90左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。
Hell, everyne! My name is Li Hua. Nw please allw me t say smething abut my hmetwn.
【答案】例文：
Hell, everyne! My name is Li Hua. Nw please allw me t say smething abut my hmetwn.
It is in the suth f China with an area f abut 210,000 square kilmeters. Great changes have taken place here in recent years. Many new factries, huses, rads and bridges have been built, which shws that my hmetwn is develping rapidly. It has a lng histry and there are many places f interest, such as Yuelu Academic Yard, Dngting Lake and the memrial hall f Chairman Ma. My hmetwn is als famus fr its special fd—the spicy crayfish, which is really delicius. What’s mre, the weather here is rather cmfrtable. It’s nt t ht r t cld.
I really hpe yu can visit my hmetwn and have a gd time here.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏信息，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，想向大家介绍自己的家乡；
第二步，具体阐述内容，从家乡变化、旅游景点、美食和气候等方面介绍自己的家乡；
第三步，书写结语，希望大家可以到自己的家乡游玩。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②such as例如
③what’s mre另外
[高分句型]
①Many new factries, huses, rads and bridges have been built, which shws that my hmetwn is develping rapidly.（现在完成时的被动语态）
②My hmetwn is als famus fr its special fd—the spicy crayfish, which is really delicius.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
7．假如你是李华，你校的英语广播站计划做一期“毕业生感言”的专题节目，想邀请你参加。请你以“The Prgress I’ve Made”为题，根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈初中这三年多时光中，你在生活和学习方面取得的进步，以及对未来的展望。
要求:
1. 100词左右；
2. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
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【答案】参考范文：
The Prgress I’ve Made
Lking back at the past three years, I have made great prgress.
First f all, I have made many friends. We share ur feelings with each ther and help each ther in life as well as study. I am nt shy any lnger and becme active and cnfident. With the help f my parents, I have learned t d sme husewrk, such as cleaning my rm, cking and s n. I can take care f myself well nw. Thanks t my kind and patient teachers, I have develped gd learning habits, and dne better in study as well.
I will make greater effrts t achieve greater success in the future!
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”、“现在完成时”和“一般将来时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中我所取得的进步的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，借用“简单介绍我所取得的进步”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容：在生活中取得的进步和在学习上取得的进步；
第三步，书写结语，表达：我会付出更大的努力，在未来取得更大的成功！
[亮点词汇]
①lk back 回首
②make friends交朋友
③as well as也
[高分句型]
①I am nt shy any lnger and becme active and cnfident.（“ lnger”句型）
②With the help f my parents, I have learned t d sme husewrk, such as cleaning my rm, cking and s n.（with作伴随状语）
8．最近，你校开展了“巧手制书签，书香满校园”主题活动，请你以“A DIY bkmark fr my favurite bk”为题，结合图示信息，写一篇英语短文，向学校英文报投稿，介绍制作书签的目的和过程，并分享制作心得。
Basic infrmatin: name, type, writer, ...
要求：
（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
（3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
A DIY bkmark fr my favurite bk
Last week I tk part in ur schl’s Reading & Bkmark-making activity. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
A DIY bkmark fr my favurite bk
Last week I tk part in ur schl’s Reading & Bkmark-making activity. Its purpse was t help us enjy reading ur favurite bk. My favrite bk is the classic nvel Jurney t the West, ne f the Fur Great Classical Nvels. I like Mnkey King best because he helps the weak and never gives up.
In rder t make a bkmark, I prepared a card, scissrs, glue and s n. First, I cut the card int lng strips. And then I drew a picture f a mnkey n the left and wrte a famus saying “Nthing is impssible if yu put yur heart int it.” n the right t encurage me nt t give up when facing difficulties. At last, I glued it t a thin piece f wd.
Althugh I met sme difficulties in this prcess, I never gave up and I am prud f myself.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求以“A DIY bkmark fr my favurite bk”为题，结合图示信息进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍上周参加了学校的阅读和书签制作活动；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍如何做书签；
第三步，介绍自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①give up放弃
②in rder t为了
③be prud f为……感到自豪
[高分句型]
①I like Mnkey King best because he helps the weak and never gives up.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②Althugh I met sme difficulties in this prcess, I never gave up and I am prud f myself.（Althugh引导的让步状语从句）
（2023·山东枣庄·统考中考真题）
为了响应国家全民阅读的号召，你校将举办读书节。假如你是李华，请你以“My favurite bk”为主题，写一篇英语发言稿，在读书分享会中介绍自己最喜欢的一本书，
内容包括：
1.书名、书的类型和主要内容；
2.你喜欢这本书的理由。
注意：1.词数80—100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’m Li Hua. I’m very glad t share my favurite bk with yu.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all. Thank yu fr yur attentin.
【答案】例文
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’m Li Hua. I’m very glad t share my favurite bk with yu.
My favrite bk is Jurney t the West. It is ne f the Fur Great Classical Nvels in China. It was written by Wu Cheng’en, a great writer in ancient China. The stry tells us abut fur main characters. They are Tang Mnk, the Mnkey King , Piggie and Mnk Sha. They get ver many difficulties n the way t the West. Finally, they make it. The Mnkey King is my favrite character. He is s smart and brave that he can prtect his master and brthers well. He never gives up when he faces difficulties and challenges.
The bk is s interesting that I lse myself in it. It tells me that as lng as I never give up, I can achieve everything.
That’s all. Thank yu fr yur attentin.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为演讲稿；
②时态：主要时态是“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文主要是介绍自己最喜欢的一本书，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题。
第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的书的书名、书的类型以及主要内容；
第三步，介绍自己为什么喜欢这本书。
[亮点词汇]
①get ver difficulties克服困难
②n the way t在去往某地的路上
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①He is s smart and brave that he can prtect his master and brthers well.(引导的结果状语从句)
②He never gives up when he faces difficulties and challenges.(when引导的时间状语从句)
（2023·云南·统考中考真题）
Enjy Sprts, Enjy Life
提示：享受运动，享受生活。你喜欢运动吗？你享受过运动带来的乐趣吗？请以“Enjy Sprts, Enjy Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你通过运动享受生活的经历，或谈谈运动给我们带来的好处。
要求：1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于60个；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计：
4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
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【答案】例文
Enjy Sprts, Enjy Life
Cycling is ne f my favrite sprts.
It always makes me relaxed and full f energy. It was sunny last Saturday mrning. After finishing my schlwrk, I felt a little bit tired. S I went cycling alng the rad in a frest nt far frm my hme. What great beauty f nature it was when I gt clse t it! Clrful flwers were smiling at me. Birds were flying here and there in the trees and they never stpped singing. Sft wind tuched my face when I rde a little faster. I gt relaxed and refreshed at nce.
What an enjyment f cycling it is! I enjy my life by ding sprts.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的运动；
第二步，具体阐述自己运动的经历；
第三步，最后总结全文，通过运动可以享受生活。
[亮点词汇]
①make sb adj使某人处于……状态
②get clse t接近
③far frm远离
[高分句型]
①Sft wind tuched my face when I rde a little faster.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②What an enjyment f cycling it is! （感叹句）
（2022·青海·统考中考真题）
当今，中国正迅速发展，在各方面都取得了令人瞩目的成就。请你以“China in Ten Years”为题，畅想并描述十年后的祖国。
要求：（1）内容积极向上，完整连贯；
（2）逻辑清晰，表达准确，书写规范；
（3）文中不得出现姓名、校名和地名；
（4）词数：80—100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
China in Ten Years
Nwadays, ur cuntry is develping fast. It has made great achievements in
many fields. What will China be like in ten years? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
China in Ten Years
Nwadays, ur cuntry is develping fast. It has made great achievements in many fields. What will China be like in ten years? Can yu imagine the future f China?
I think China will be the largest, the richest and the mst develped cuntry in the wrld. In the future, we can live n any planet in the slar system. And we dn’t have t wrry abut garbage pllutin, because we can disslve it as sn as pssible, which will benefit ur life. What’s mre, peple even dn’t need t build a huse by themselves, and rbts can d it instead f human beings. Even s, educatin will be mre cnvenient, n matter where yu are, yu can learn what yu need frm the Internet.
That’s the future China. What’s yur pinin?
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文主题，畅想中国未来十年是什么样子；
第二步，从生活，工作，交通等方面畅想未来。
[亮点词汇]
①made great achievements 取得众多成就
②wrry abut 担心
③instead f 代替
[高分句型]
①And we dn’t have t wrry abut garbage pllutin, because we can disslve it as sn as pssible, which will benefit ur life.（because原因状语从句；which引导非限制性定语从句）
②n matter where yu are, yu can learn what yu need frm the Internet.（n matter引导让步状语从句）
（2022·黑龙江牡丹江·统考中考真题）
随着义务教育“双减”政策的实施，学校的作业少了，课外辅导班叫停了。作为政策的亲历者，你的课余生活发生了哪些变化？你如何看待这一政策？现你校英文报刊就“双减”这一话题开设专栏，展开讨论。请根据思维导图以“Changes after the ‘Duble Reductin’ Plicy”为题写一篇短文，向该栏目投稿。
提示词：the“duble reductin”plicy“双减”政策
要求：
1.内容全面，语言流畅，层次清晰，可适当发挥；
2.词数不少于90词，至少含有两个复合句，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Changes after the “Duble Reductin” Plicy
Since the “duble reductin” plicy was carried ut, my life has changed greatly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Changes after the “Duble Reductin” Plicy
Since the “duble reductin” plicy was carried ut, my life has changed greatly. I used t have much hmewrk. But nw I have less hmewrk than befre. I had t d hmewrk that was bring in the past. Nw I have sme creative hmewrk.
As fr weekend activities, I had t take after-schl classes. I used t be busy and tired. I had t much pressure. But nw I have mre time t take up my hbbies. On weekends I ften play basketball with my friends t imprve my skills. I als plan t learn t play the guitar. I read mre bks t develp my reading abilities. I have mre time t d what I like.
All in all, I think the “duble reductin” plicy is gd fr my bdy and mind. It makes my life clrful.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求以“Changes after the ‘Duble Reductin’ Plicy”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文以第一人称行文；在介绍“双减政策”前的课余生活时用一般过去时，介绍现在的课余生活时用一般现在时；文章可分为三段式：第一段承接开头点题；第二段具体讲述课余生活的变化；最后一段讲述作者对“双减政策”的看法。在写作时要保持主谓一致性，除了要含有两个复合句之外，还要正确运用好两个时态。
（2022·黑龙江·统考中考真题）
转眼间，你已经是一名九年级学生了。你还记得刚升入初中时的自己是什么样子吗？这两年在你身上发生了哪些变化？请以“My changes”为题写一篇英语作文，请你根据下面的要求完成这篇作文。
要求:
1. 写你三个方面的变化，用上used t结构；
2. 紧扣作文题目、语言表达准确、语意通顺连贯；
3. 词数90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
My changes
I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lt. First,
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【答案】例文
My changes
I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lt. First, I used t be thin, but nw I am a little fatter. I used t have curly hair, but nw I have shrt straight hair, because I am busy with my study. Secnd, I have made much prgress in English, I used t be weak in it. But with my English teacher’s help, nw I ften get gd scres n my English exams. What’s mre, I’m mre utging than I used t be. I used t be afraid f speaking in frnt f peple. But nw I can give a speech in public. I’ve als made many friends.
These are my changes. What abut yurs?
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“我的改变”写一篇短文，要求从三个方面描写自己的变化。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时和一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。本文分为两段式：第一段从身形，英语学习以及性格方面介绍自己的变化；最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
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提示内容
提示词
回顾过去
1.性格上的改变
2.学习上的成就
3.反思不足
1. utging, get n with
2. learn frm, make prgress
3. waste time, nt understand
展望未来
未来的期望
cme true
过去
1.空气清新，环境很好；
2.房屋又小又旧，人们走路或是骑车去上班；
3.是一个宁静的地方。
现在
1.住房宽敞明亮，很多人都有了自己的汽车；
2.这些变化给年轻人带来了现代化的生活，他们都感到很高兴；
3.树比以前少了，环境不如以前好了。
将来
请你展望家乡的未来(1—2句)。
审题
体裁
说明文
话题
家乡的变化
时态
一般过去时，一般现在时，现在完成时
人称
以第三人称为主
段落
布局
the air was fresh, the envirnment
描述家乡 was gd, the huses were small and
的过去 ld, peple went t wrk n ft r by bike, a quiet place
the huses are big and bright, many
描述家乡 peple have their wn cars, bring
的现在 yung peple a mdern life, fewer
trees, the envirnment is nt as gd as befre
展望家乡
→I hpe my hmetwn will be...
的未来
The unfrgettable three years
What yu did
stayed at hme, wre masks, vlunteered t d... , had nline class...
What yu saw
envirnment arund yu...
Yur her and why
dctrs/nurses/teachers/plice...
Yur feeling
...
Changes after having labr classes
At schl
At hme