专题01 邀请信 求助信 投诉信（课件）-2025年高考英语二轮复习（新高考通用）

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邀请信分为两种：一种是个人信函，如邀请某人参加观看展览、电影、出席典礼等。另一种属于事务信函，如邀请参加会议、学术活动等。写作时语气应真挚热情，在信件的结尾都应表示出希望对方参加或出席的愿望。
1. ( 2022·新课标卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Carline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：1. 节目介绍；2. 访谈的时间和话题。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Carline,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
【满分范文】Dear Carline, This is my first time that I have invited yu t attend ur prgram —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing prgram where yu can share yur ideas with students. Nw, when having truble in learning English well, plenty f students urge t knw hw t deal with it. As ur distinguished freign language teacher, yur aid can help us a lt. If yu are available n this Sunday, I tgether with the whle Talk and Talk staff am waiting fr yur cming. I’d appreciate it if yu take my invitatin int cnsideratin. Yurs,Li Hua
【解题导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是校广播站“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Carline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。【思路详解】1.词汇积累建立：establish→set up了不起的：amazing→fabulus帮助：aid→assistance许多：plenty f→a lt f2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：As ur distinguished freign language teacher, yur aid can help us a lt.拓展句：Yu are ur distinguished freign language teacher, whse aid can help us a lt.【点睛】[高分句型1]This is an amazing prgram where yu can share yur ideas with students.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Nw, when having truble in learning English well, plenty f students urge t knw hw t deal with it.(运用了状语从句的省略)
2. (2022·北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因；2．交流时间和其他相关事项。注意：1．词数100左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。_______________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】Dear Jim, Hw’s everything? I’m writing t invite yu t give us an nline talk n English writing. Our classmates seem t be weak in rganisatin. Wuld yu please give us sme suggestins n hw t cnnect sentences lgically, hw t develp a paragraph, and hw t structure an essay? The talk will last abut an hur, and yu can decide n a date at yur cnvenience. Please let me knw which platfrm yu’ll use. It wuld be great if we culd have a 10-minute questin and answer sessin at the end f yur talk. Lking frward t yur reply.Yurs,Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一份电子邮件，邀请英国好友Jim为班级做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流【详解】1.词汇积累最近好吗：Hw’s everything → Hw’s it ging提供、给予：give → ffer / prvide不擅长：be weak in → be bad at / be pr in建议：suggestin → advice2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I’m writing t invite yu t give us an nline talk n English writing.拓展句：I’m writing t ask if it is cnvenient fr yu t ffer us an nline talk n English writing.【点睛】【高分句型1】Wuld yu please give us sme suggestins n hw t cnnect sentences lgically, hw t develp a paragraph, and hw t structure an essay?(运用了疑问词+不定式作宾语)【高分句型2】It wuld be great if we culd have a 10-minute questin and answer sessin at the end f yur talk.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
3. (2022·浙江6月卷)假定你是李华，你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验，内容包括：1.位置与开放时间； 2.室内设施和功能。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】Dear Michael, Gd news! Recently, a newly-furnished sectin, cnsisting f eight Grup Learning Rms, has been pen t us students in ur schl library. Lcated n the third flr beside the nline reading rms, it can be accessible frm 8 am till 9 pm thrughut the weekdays. Thse rms are equipped with mdern electrnic facilities, all f which are linked t the Internet. It’s really cnvenient fr us t d sme grup prjects. Why nt ask ur grup members t g and experience it? Early reply and we can reserve ne rm fr ur prject.Yurs,Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是李华，你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验。【详解】1. 词汇积累由……组成：cnsist f→ be made up f位于：be lcated n→ be situated n与……相连接： be linked t →be cnnected t预定：reserve→bk2. 句式拓展合并简单句原句：Recently, a newly-furnished sectin, cnsisting f eight Grup Learning Rms, has been pen t us students in ur schl library.拓展句：Recently, a newly-furnished sectin, which cnsists f eight Grup Learning Rms, has been pen t us students in ur schl library.【点睛】[高分句型1] Thse rms are equipped with mdern electrnic facilities, all f which are linked t the Internet.（f which引导的非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2] Lcated n the third flr beside the nline reading rms, it can be accessible frm 8 am till 9 pm thrughut the weekdays.（过去分词作状语）
4. (2022·天津卷)假设你是晨光中学英语口语社的成员李津。为招募新成员，口语社请你用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频。请按照以下提示，撰写视频的文字稿：1.向同学们发出入社邀请；2.介绍口语社的主要活动(如英语演讲比赛、观看英语电影等活动)；3.分享本人入社以来的收获。注意：1.词数不少于100；2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】 Hell, everyne! I’m Li Jin, a member f the Spken English Club f ur schl. I’m here t invite yu t jin us. This will be a gd chance fr all English lvers. The club ffers varius interesting activities. We can participate in English speech cntests, watch classic English mvies, sing English sngs and attend inspiring lectures. All f them help t stimulate ur interest in learning English and make ur schl life much mre enjyable. The club activities have benefited me a lt. I have nt nly imprved my spken English, but als made a lt f friends. Nw, it’s yur turn t jin us. We are lking frward t having yu in the club!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为英语口语社的纳新视频写一段文字稿，向同学们发出邀请，并介绍口语社的主要活动，分享入社以来的收获。【详解】1.词汇积累机会：chance →pprtunity参加：participate in →take part in →jin in愉快的：enjyable →jyful激发：stimulate →mtivate →activate2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：The club activities have benefited me a lt.拓展句：The club activities which I have jined in have benefited me a lt.【点睛】【高分句型1】We are lking frward t having yu in the club!（运用了动名词作宾语）【高分句型2】I have nt nly imprved my spken English, but als made a lt f friends. （运用了nt nly…but als…连接并列结构）
5. (2019·全国III卷)假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：1. 时间；2. 活动安排；3. 欢迎他表演节目。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】Dear Allen, Hw is everything ging? Our schl will hld a music festival next Sunday mrning in the schl hall. And I’m writing t invite yu t jin us. The pening ceremny will start at 9:00 am, and the schlmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be varius fantastic perfrmances played by talented students. Yu are definitely welcme t shw up n stage, which will add clr and fun t ur festival. Lking frward t yur early reply. Li Hua
【分析】今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。【详解】首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的，之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息，最后欢迎他表演节目。第二，根据提纲，确定关键词语，如：Hw is everything ging? a music festival，in the schl hall，The pening ceremny等。第三，注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。【点睛】本文内容完整，详略得当。并使用了高级句式。如：Yu are definitely welcme t shw up n stage, which will add clr and fun t ur festival.定语从句。提升了文章档次。
高考英语邀请信满分技巧一、用三段式结构首段先自我介绍（用于陌生人）或问候对方（用于熟悉人），再开门见山表达邀请这一写作意图。次段清楚地表达邀请的目的和原因，让对方明白为何被邀请以及参加活动的具体安排。句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。尾段照应主题，如果收到邀请，应尽快回复，表明是否出席。如果无法参加，应提前告知并说明原因，表现出诚意。二、表达热情真诚 邀请信的语言应该热情、友好，体现出对对方的尊重和期待，使用恰当的称呼和结束语，避免使用生硬的表达。三、提升表达效果使用恰当的词汇和句式 ：注意词汇的准确性和句式的多样性，使文章表达更加丰富和流畅。文章结构应有逻辑性，句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
一、邀请信首段金句：①问候语/②自我介绍+③写信意图1. Hi, Jack, hw is everything ging? 嗨，杰克，一切都好吗？2. I'm Li Hua, chairman f the Student Unin f Xinhua Middle schl. 我是新华中学学生会主席李华。3. I'm Li Hua, a Senir Three student, wh is in charge f the paper-cutting club in ur schl. 我是李华，一名高三学生，是我们学校剪纸俱乐部的负责人。4. Knwing with delight that yu are interested in Chinese traditinal culture, I'm writing t invite yu t participate in a paper-cutting art exhibitin. 得知你对中国传统文化感兴趣，我写信邀请你参加一个剪纸艺术展。5. There's a live cncert this Saturday evening at Xinhua Cncert Hall, s I'm sincerely writing t invite yu t g with me n behalf f ur whle family. 本周六晚上新华音乐厅有一场现场音乐会，所以我代表全家真诚地写信邀请你一起去。
二、邀请信中段金句：①活动内容+②邀请原因+③注意事项1.The details cncerning the English Speech Cmpetitin are as fllws. 关于英语演讲比赛的详细信息如下。2. The fllwing is the detailed infrmatin with regard t this activity. 以下是关于这项活动的详细信息。3. I wnder if it is cnvenient fr yu t deliver a lecture in the lecture hall at 3:00 pm. 我想知道你下午3点在演讲厅演讲是否方便。4. The lecture is due t start at 9:00 am n the playgrund and last fr tw hurs, frm 3 pm t 5 pm. 讲座将于上午9:00在操场开始，持续两个小时，从下午3点到5点。5. If yu are interested in table tennis, please sign up fr ur schl team by July 20th.如果你对乒乓球感兴趣，请在7 月 20 日前报名参加我们的校队。
三、邀请信尾段金句：①照应主题表示感谢+②期待回复1. We’d be very grateful if yu culd let me knw whether t participate by September 25. 如果您能在9月25日前告诉我是否参加，我们将不胜感激。2. I’d appreciate it if yu culd cnfirm yur participatin at yur early cnvenience. 如果你能尽早确认参加，我将不胜感激。3. I sincerely hpe that yu will accept ur invitatin if it is cnvenient fr yu. 如果方便的话，我衷心希望您能接受我们的邀请。4. Our whle family and I wuld feel much hnred if yu culd cme.如果你能来，我们全家都将感到不胜荣幸。5. Yur early reply wuld be highly appreciated. Thank yu in advance! 你的尽早回复不胜感激。提前谢谢您！
1.（24-25高三上·甘肃酒泉·期中）假定你是李华，你班下周末将组织一次以“来北京看中国”(See China in Beijing)为主题的自然文化研学活动，为期一天。请你用英文写一封信邀请你校国际部交换生Jim来参加活动。内容包括：1.写信目的；2.活动时间、地点、活动安排；3.期盼得到回复。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：natural cultural study tur(n.)：自然文化研学活动Dear Jim,______________________________________________________________________________________
考向1 邀请参加自然文化研学活动
【满分范文】Dear Jim, I hpe this message finds yu well. I’m writing t invite yu t ur ne-day natural & cultural study tur with the theme f “See China in Beijing” next weekend. We’ll start at 8:00 am next Saturday and gather at ur schl playgrund. First, we’ll pay a visit t the Frbidden City t admire the magnificent ancient architecture and rich cultural heritage. Then, we plan t have a delicius lunch in a lcal restaurant. In the afternn, we will be led t Beihai Park, where we can enjy the beautiful natural scenery. I really hpe yu can cme. Lking frward t yur reply.Yurs,Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生用英文写一封信邀请你校国际部交换生Jim来参加“来北京看中国”(See China in Beijing)为主题的自然camp;文化研学活动。其内容包括：写信目的、活动时间、地点、活动安排以及期盼得到回复。【详解】1.词汇积累开始：start→begin首先：first→t begin with 欣赏：admire →appreciate 美味的：delicius→tasty 2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I’m writing t invite yu t ur ne-day natural & cultural study tur with the theme f “See China in Beijing” next weekend. 拓展句：I’m writing t invite yu t ur ne-day natural & cultural study tur next weekend, whse theme is abut “See China in Beijing” .【点睛】【高分句型1】In the afternn, we will be led t Beihai Park, where we can enjy the beautiful natural scenery.（运用了where引导的定语从句）【高分句型2】 I really hpe yu can cme.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）
2.（24-25高三上·吉林长春·期中）假定你是李华，你校下周五将举办一场主题为“The imprtance f bdy language”的讲座。请你给交换生Alex写一封邮件，邀请他参加，内容包括：1.讲座的时间和地点；2.讲座的内容；3.发出邀请。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Alex,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
考向2 邀请参加肢体语言重要性讲座
【满分范文】Dear Alex, I’m writing t tell yu that there will be a lecture n “The imprtance f bdy language” in ur schl next Friday. It will be held in the schl hall at 2 p.m. The lecture will be given by a famus prfessr. It will mainly fcus n hw bdy language affects cmmunicatin and daily life. We will learn hw t interpret different bdy language and use it effectively in varius situatins, such as in interviews, business meetings and scial gatherings. I sincerely invite yu t attend it. I believe yu will find it very interesting and beneficial. It will surely braden yur knwledge and help yu better understand peple’s true intentins.Yurs, Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的邀请信。要求考生给交换生Alex写一封邮件，邀请他参加学校举办的一场主题为“The imprtance f bdy language”的讲座。【详解】1.词汇积累著名的：famus→ well-knwn专注于：fcus n→ cncentrate n影响：affect→ influence各种各样的：varius→ a variety f2.句式转换原句：The lecture will be given by a famus prfessr. It will mainly fcus n hw bdy language affects cmmunicatin and daily life.拓展句：The lecture will be given by a famus prfessr, which will mainly fcus n hw bdy language affects cmmunicatin and daily life.【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing t tell yu that there will be a lecture n “The imprtance f bdy language” in ur schl next Friday.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】It will mainly fcus n hw bdy language affects cmmunicatin and daily life.（运用了hw引导的宾语从句）
3.（24-25高三上·河南·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你校机器人俱乐部即将举办机器人设计比赛。请你给笔友Peter写封邮件，邀请他参加竞赛。内容包括：1. 写信目的；2. 活动时间、地点、内容、意义等。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Peter, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
考向3 邀请参加机器人设计比赛
【满分范文】Dear Peter, I hpe this email finds yu well. I’m pleased t invite yu t participate in the upcming Rbt Designing Cmpetitin hsted by ur schl’s rbt club. It will take place in the schl hall at 2 p.m. n January 25 and last abut 2 hurs. The cmpetitin aims t spark student creativity and innvatin, prviding a platfrm t shwcase yur rbtic skills. Participatin wuld be a great pprtunity fr yu t engage with like-minded peers and expand yur hrizns. I believe this cmpetitin will be an enriching experience fr yu. Hpe yu can jin us! .  Yurs, Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生所在校机器人俱乐部即将举办机器人设计比赛。请你给笔友Peter写封邮件，邀请他参加竞赛。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：pleased→delighted参加：participate in→take part in举办：hst→hld机会：pprtunity→chance2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I’m pleased t invite yu t participate in the upcming Rbt Designing Cmpetitin hsted by ur schl’s rbt club.拓展句：I’m pleased t invite yu t participate in the upcming Rbt Designing Cmpetitin that will be hsted by ur schl’s rbt club.【点睛】[高分句型1] The cmpetitin aims t spark student creativity and innvatin, prviding a platfrm t shwcase yur rbtic skills. (运用了现在分词作状语)[高分句型2] I’m pleased t invite yu t participate in the upcming Rbt Designing Cmpetitin hsted by ur schl’s rbt club. (运用了过去分词作定语)
4.（24-25高三上·重庆沙坪坝·阶段练习）假定你是李华，下个月国庆节市博物馆将举办一场文化历史展，请给你校的英国留学生 Alex 写一封邮件邀请他一起观展，内容包括：1. 活动内容、时间；2. 活动意义；3. 邀请一同观展。注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Alex,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
考向4 邀请参加文化历史展
【满分范文】Dear Alex, I hpe this letter finds yu well. As the Natinal Day hliday appraches, I wuld like t extend a warm invitatin t yu t jin me in visiting an exhibitin. The exhibitin, titled “Timeless Treasures: A Jurney Thrugh Chinese Histry and Culture,” will shwcase a remarkable cllectin f artifacts, paintings, and calligraphy frm varius histrical perids f China. Scheduled frm Octber 1st t Octber 7th at the Natinal Museum f Histry, it will prvide a fantastic experience fr bth f us, nt nly t appreciate the beauty and depth f Chinese culture but als t immerse neself in ur cuntry’s rich heritage. I am planning t visit n the mrning f Octber 3rd, and I wuld be thrilled if yu culd accmpany me. Please let me knw if yu are available n that day. I am lking frward t yur psitive respnse.Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于邀请信。要求考生以李华的身份给英国留学生Alex写一封邮件，邀请他一起参观市博物馆即将举办的文化历史展，并说明活动的内容、时间以及活动意义。【详解】1.词汇积累临近：apprach → draw near展示：shwcase → display/exhibit句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：The exhibitin, titled “Timeless Treasures: A Jurney Thrugh Chinese Histry and Culture,” will shwcase a remarkable cllectin f artifacts, paintings, and calligraphy frm varius histrical perids f China.拓展句：The exhibitin, which is titled “Timeless Treasures: A Jurney Thrugh Chinese Histry and Culture,” will shwcase a remarkable cllectin f artifacts, paintings, and calligraphy frm varius histrical perids f China.【点睛】[高分句型1] As the Natinal Day hliday appraches, I wuld like t extend a warm invitatin t yu t jin me in visiting a splendid cultural and histrical exhibitin. (运用了从属连词as引导的时间状语从句)[高分句型2] Scheduled frm Octber 1st t Octber 7th at the Natinal Museum f Histry, it will prvide a fantastic experience fr bth f us, nt nly t appreciate the beauty and depth f Chinese culture but als t immerse neself in ur cuntry’s rich heritage. (运用了过去分词作状语和复合连词nt als...连接的并列结构)[高分句型3] Please let me knw if yu are available n that day. (运用了从属连词if引导的条件状语从句)
5.（24-25高三上·河南·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你校正在筹备“China in My Eyes”征文大赛，请你邀请英国交换生William参加此活动，要点如下：1. 投稿时间；2. 内容要求；3. 诚邀参加。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear William,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
考向5 邀请参加我心目中的中国征文大赛
【满分范文】Dear William, Hw are yu ding lately? I’m writing t infrm yu f a writing cntest titled “China in My Eyes” and invite yu t participate in it. Since yu’re keen n Chinese culture and ecnmic develpment, I’m sure it will be a piece f cake fr yu t write abut this tpic. Yu are required t write abut yur experiences and perspectives f China regarding its ecnmy, turism r culture. The deadline fr the submissin is by Octber 28th. Yu can email yur entry t IlveChina@126.cm. I’m eagerly expecting yur participatin.Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国交换生Wiliam写信，邀请他参加“China in My Eyes”征文大赛。【详解】1. 词汇积累 最近：lately → recently通知：infrm yu f → tell yu参加：participate in → take in喜爱：be keen n → be fnd f 2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Yu are required t write abut yur experiences and perspectives f China regarding its ecnmy, turism r culture.拓展句：It is required that yu shuld write abut yur experiences and perspectives f China regarding its ecnmy, turism r culture.【点睛】【高分句型1】Since yu’re keen n Chinese culture and ecnmic develpment, I’m sure it will be a piece f cake fr yu t write abut this tpic. (使用了since引导的原因状语从句)【高分句型2】I’m writing t infrm yu f a writing cntest titled “China in My Eyes” and invite yu t participate in it. (使用了过去分词充当后置定语)
求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时请求别人帮助所写的信件。高考的求助信包括请求帮忙修改作品、解决学习问题等。写信人希望收信人能提供帮助或者解决方案，所以语言要简明扼要，符合说话人的身份；语气要真诚委婉，不能强人所难。
1.（2020年全国III卷）假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：1. 剧情简介；2. 指导内容；3. 商定时间地点。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当的增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Miss Evans,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yurs , Li Hua
【满分作文】Dear Miss Evans, I am Li Hua frm yur English class. I’m writing t ask fr yur guidance n adapting a shrt play fr the English Festival next mnth. We’re interested in ne stry frm ur English textbk, The Millin Pund Bank Nte by Mark Twain. It is abut the adventure f a pr yung man wh was given a millin pund bank nte by tw rich gentlemen. Culd yu please give us sme advice n hw t make dialgues based n the stry? Wuld it be pssible fr us t meet in ur classrm at 5 p. m. this Friday? Thank yu fr yur kindness! We are lking frward t yur reply.Yurs,Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导自己和和同学根据英语课文改编的一个短剧。【详解】1.词汇积累对……感兴趣：be interested in→take an interest in给某人某物：give sb sth→ffer sb sth建议：advice→suggestin可能的：pssible→prbable2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： I’m writing t ask fr yur guidance n adapting a shrt play fr the English Festival next mnth.拓展句： I’m writing t ask fr yur guidance n adapting a shrt play which is prepared fr the English Festival next mnth.【点睛】[高分句型1]It is abut the adventure f a pr yung man wh was given a millin pund bank nte by tw rich gentlemen. （运用了wh引导定语从句）[高分句型2]Culd yu please give us sme advice n hw t make dialgues based n the stry?（运用了“特殊疑问词+动词不定式”结构作宾语）
2.（2016年全国I卷）假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教 Ms. Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附两份材料的语言和格式(frmat)。内容包括：1.写信目的；2.求助内容；3.表示感谢。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Ms. Jenkins,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sincerely yurs,Li Hua
【满分范文】Dear Ms Jenkins,     I’m writing t seek yur help. I’m applying fr a part-time jb in an verseas-funded crpratin. I think it’ll be bth an pprtunity and a new challenge t me. By ding the part-time jb I can get sme precius experience s that I can better adapt t my future career.     I’ve already written the applicatin and resume. But I’m afraid that there may be sme mistakes abut the wrds and frmat. S culd yu please crrect any mistakes in the material I attach t the letter?      I’d appreciate it if yu culd d me the favr.Sincerely yurs,Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教 Ms. Jenkins写封信，请她帮你修改所附两份材料的语言和格式。【详解】1.词汇积累寻求帮助：seek ne’s help→ask fr help宝贵的：precius→valuable纠正：crrect→rectify适应：adapt t→fit in with2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I’m applying fr a part-time jb in an verseas-funded crpratin.拓展句：I’m applying fr a part-time jb in a crpratin which is verseas-funded.【点睛】[高分句型1] By ding the part-time jb I can get sme precius experience s that I can better adapt t my future career. (运用了s that引导的目的状语从句)[高分句型2] S culd yu please crrect any mistakes in the material I attach t the letter? (运用了that/which引导的限制性定语从句，省略了that/which)
3.（2013年全国II卷）假定你是李华，自制了一些中国结。给开网店的美国朋友Tm写封信，请他代卖，要包括：1.外观（尺寸，颜色，材料）；2.象征意义；3.价格注意：1.100词左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，3.开头为你写好Dear Tm,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】Dear Tm, Hw are yu ding? I wnder if yu culd sell sme Chinese knts fr me. I made them myself with red silk threads, clth and ther materials. They lk really beautiful in the shape f a diamnd, abut 5 inches lng and 4 inches wide. In China, these knts stand fr friendship, lve and gd luck. Peple can either give them as gifts t friends r hang them in their huses. They are nly 12.99 US each. If anyne wants t knw mre abut the knts, let them write t me. Als,d let me knw if yu need further infrmatin. Thank yu！Yurs,Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Tm写封信，请他代卖，要包括：1.外观（尺寸，颜色，材料）；2.象征意义；3.价格。【详解】1. 词汇积累漂亮的：beautiful→pretty运气：luck→frtune礼物：gift→present了解：knw→learn2. 句式拓展合并简单句原句：They lk really beautiful in the shape f a diamnd, abut 5 inches lng and 4 inches wide. In China, these knts stand fr friendship, lve and gd luck.拓展句：In China, these knts, which lk really beautiful in the shape f a diamnd, abut 5 inches lng and 4 inches wide, stand fr friendship, lve and gd luck.【点睛】[高分句型1]I wnder if yu culd sell sme Chinese knts fr me.(运用了if引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]If anyne wants t knw mre abut the knts, let them write t me.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
4.（2011年全国卷）假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：1.本人简介；   2.求助内容；3.约定时间；4.你的联系方式 (Email: lihua@1236 cm; Phne: 12345678)。注意：1.词数80左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir/Madam: ________________________________________Yurs,Li Hua
【满分范文】Dear Sir/Madam: I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer curses in yur university. I’m writing t ask fr help. I came here last mnth and fund my curses interesting. But I have sme difficulties with nte-taking and I’d like t knw hw t use the library. I was tld the Learning Center prvides help fr students and I’m anxius t get help frm yu. I have n class n Tuesday mrnings and Friday afternns. Culd yu tell me which day is OK with yu? It wuld be great if yu email r phne me. Here are my email address and phne number, lihua@ 1236, and 12345678. I’m lking frward t yur reply. Yurs,Li Hua
【导语】这是一封申请信。要求考生以李华的身份，就你正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助，但根据学校规定，你需书面预约一事，写一封申请信对你的预约进行申请。【详解】1.词汇积累寻求帮助：ask fr help→ seek assistance有趣的：interesting → fascinating知道：knw→ be acquainted with使用：use→ emply2.句式拓展同义句替换原句：I came here last mnth and fund my curses interesting.拓展句：Last mnth, upn my arrival here, I discvered that my curses were indeed captivating and engaging.【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer curses in yur university.（使用了现在分词短语作定语）【高分句型2】It wuld be great if yu email r phne me.（使用了连接词if连接的条件状语从句）
高考英语求助信满分技巧 一、用三段式结构 段先自我介绍（用于陌生人）或问候对方（用于熟悉人），再开门见山表达求助这一写作意图。 次段清楚地表达求助的内容（分条陈述）和原因，让对方明白为何被求助以及活动的具体要求。句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。 尾段照应主题，如果收到，应尽快回复，表明是否愿意。如果无法参加，应提前告知并说明原因，表现出诚意。 二、表达真诚友好 助信的语言应该真诚、友好，体现出对对方的信任和期待，使用恰当的称呼和结束语，避免使用生硬的表达。 三、提升表达效果 使用恰当的词汇和句式 ：注意词汇的准确性和句式的多样性，使文章表达更加丰富和流畅。文章结构应有逻辑性，句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
第一段：介绍自己，表明写作意图，提出请求。1. I'm Li Hua, a Chinese student taking a summer curse in yur university. 我叫李华，是一名在贵校修暑期课程的中国学生。2. I’m srry t truble yu but I d have sme prblems and I badly need yur guidance. 很抱歉打扰你，但我确实有一些问题，我非常需要你的指导。3. I wuld feel bliged if yu culd d me the favr f finding my camera left in yur htel. 如果您能帮我找到我留在酒店的相机，我将不胜感激。4. I was wndering if yu culd spare sme time fr remving the fllwing dubts frm me. 我想知道你是否能抽出一些时间来消除我的以下疑虑。5. I’m writing t yu in the hpe that yu culd d me a special favr and plish the applicatin letter up fr me. 我写信给你，希望你能帮我一个特别的忙，帮我把申请信润色一下。
第二段：详述提出请求的原因及内容。1. On arriving hme, it struck me that I had left my English dictinary at yur huse. 到家时，我突然想到我把英语词典忘在你家了。2. But I have sme truble with nte-taking and I have n idea hw t use the library. 但我记笔记有点困难，我不知道如何使用图书馆。3.The dictinary means a lt t me as it is a precius gift frm my American teacher n my 18th birthday. 这本词典对我来说意义重大，因为它是我18岁生日时美国老师送给我的珍贵礼物。 4. Will yu be kind enugh t ffer me sme advice n hw t learn English wrds by heart mre efficiently? 你能给我一些关于如何更有效地背英语单词的建议吗？5. It wn’t be better if yu can lk thrugh my resume fr sme pssible mistakes and plish them up fr me. 如果你能浏览我的简历，找出一些可能的错误，并为我润色一下，那就更好。
第三段：表示感谢、期盼对方早日回复。1. I wuld appreciate it if yu culd ffer me a hand. 如果你能帮我一把，我将不胜感激。2. If yu need further infrmatin, please feel free t infrm me. 如果您需要更多信息，请随时通知我。3. Thanks fr yur kind cnsideratin and I lk frward t yur earliest reply. 感谢您的善意考虑，我期待着您的尽早回复。4. I wuld be highly grateful if yu culd find back my suitcase and mail it t me. 如果您能找到我的简历并邮寄给我，我将不胜感激。5. Yur early respnse and warm-hearted assistance wuld be highly appreciated. 非常感谢您的及时回应和热心协助。
1.（2024·重庆·二模）假设你是李华，去纽约旅游，从机场乘一辆黄色的出租车去假日饭店(Hliday Inn)，到达酒店后发现遗失了一件行李箱。在失物招领处，工作人员要求你用英文写一份书面材料。 内容包括：1.行李遗失的过程；2.行李箱的概况；3.联系电话: 1-703-3543269。注意：1. 字数80左右。2.文章中不能出现个人真实信息。Dear Sir/Madam,__________________________________________________________________________________________Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
考向1 求助航空公司寻找遗失行李
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua, a turist frm China. This mrning, I arrived at New Yrk airprt and tk a yellw taxi t Hliday Inn. Unfrtunately, n reaching the htel, I discvered ne f my suitcases lst in the taxi. What was wrse, I tk n ntice f the plate number. The suitcase is a black plastic ne, abut 60cm by 40cm by 16cm. There is a vide camera, tw pairs f pants and sme bks fr children in it. The camera has recrded all my experience in this cuntry, which means a lt t me. When yu have gt ANY infrmatin f my suitcase, please cntact me at 1-703-3543269.Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
【导语】这是一封求助信。要求考生以李华的身份，就你去纽约旅游，从机场乘一辆黄色的出租车去假日饭店(Hliday Inn)，到达酒店后发现遗失了一件行李箱，在失物招领处，工作人员要求你用英文写一份书面材料一事，写一封求助信。【详解】1.词汇积累到达：arrive at → attain the destinatin f注意：take ntice f → be mindful f大约：abut→ apprximately得到：get→ btain2.句式拓展同义句改写原句：This mrning, I arrived at New Yrk airprt and tk a yellw taxi t Hliday Inn.拓展句：This mrning, upn my arrival at New Yrk airprt, I embarked n a jurney in a yellw taxi, which cnveyed me t Hliday Inn.【点睛】【高分句型1】Unfrtunately, n reaching the htel, I discvered ne f my suitcases lst in the taxi.（使用了介词短语作状语）【高分句型2】The camera has recrded all my experience in this cuntry, which means a lt t me.（使用了关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句，先行词为前面一整句话表示的内容）
2.（2024高三下·全国·专题练习）假定你是高三学生李华，最近你遇到了一些学习压力问题和睡眠问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师 Bb写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下：1.存在的问题；2.希望得到帮助；3.表示感谢。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
考向2 求助外籍心理教师解决压力和睡眠问题
【答案】Dear Bb, I am Li Hua, a Senir 1 student. I’m writing with the intentin f asking fr sme help, fr I can’t devte myself t study fr a lng time, which cnfuses me a lt. I’ve met sme prblems which truble me a lt. T begin with, I have t spend s much time n my tns f hmewrk that I hardly have time t d exercise. Additinally, the high expectatin frm the teachers and my parents makes me feel stressed because I dn’t want t let them dwn. What trubles me mst is that it’s difficult fr me t fall asleep every night. Faced with the prblems abve, I’m anxius t get yur help. Culd yu please ffer me sme suggestins n hw t slve these prblems? I’d appreciate it if yu culd ffer me sme cnstructive prpsals. Yurs Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外籍心理老师 Bb写一封求助信，就最近遇到的一些学习压力问题和睡眠问题导致无法集中精力学习向他求助。【详解】1.词汇积累目的：intentin→aim除此之外：additinally→besides困难的：difficult→tugh建议：suggestin→tip2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Culd yu please ffer me sme suggestins n hw t slve these prblems? 拓展句：Culd yu please ffer me sme suggestins n hw I shuld slve these prblems? 【点睛】【高分 句型1】I’m writing with the intentin f asking fr sme help, fr I can’t devte myself t study fr a lng time, which cnfuses me a lt. （运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）【高分句型2】What trubles me mst is that it’s difficult fr me t fall asleep every night. （运用了what引导的主语从句，that引导的表语从句）
3.（24-25高三上·重庆·阶段练习）假如你是李华，是新加坡国立大学（NUS）的一名国际交换生，因最近家庭经济状况出现变故，现无法承担全部的学费（tuitin）和生活费用，因此你决定给辅导员Paul Black写一封求助信。内容包括：1.个人情况；2.求助内容。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。Dear Mr. Black,______________________________________________________________Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
考向3 求助大学解决学费和生活费
【答案】Dear Mr. Black, I trust this message finds yu well. As an internatinal exchange student frm NUS, I am writing t humbly request the schl’s supprt due t a sudden shift in my family’s financial situatin, which has left me unable t fully cver my tuitin and living expenses. My parents have made immense sacrifices t prvide me with this educatinal pprtunity, and I have spared n effrt in lightening their burden. Hwever, despite ur cllective perseverance, the munting csts nw exceed what we can manage, putting my cntinued educatin at risk. I am reaching ut t seek the schl’s assistance t help bridge the financial gap. I remain whleheartedly dedicated t my studies, and with the schl’s invaluable supprt, I am cnfident that I can cntinue t excel and achieve my gals. Yur cnsideratin is deeply appreciated. Lking frward t yur favrable respnse.Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。因为家庭经济状况出现变故，现无法承担全部的学费和生活费用，要求考生给辅导员Paul Black写一封求助信。【详解】1.词汇积累由于：due t→because f给某人提供……：prvide sb. with sth.→ffer sth. t sb.然而：hwever→nevertheless2.句式拓展并列句变复合句原句：My parents have made immense sacrifices t prvide me with this educatinal pprtunity, and I have spared n effrt in lightening their burden.拓展句：My parents have made immense sacrifices t prvide me with this educatinal pprtunity, fr which I have spared n effrt in lightening their burden.【点睛】【高分句型1】As an internatinal exchange student frm NUS, I am writing t humbly request the schl’s supprt due t a sudden shift in my family’s financial situatin, which has left me unable t fully cver my tuitin and living expenses.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）【高分句型2】Hwever, despite ur cllective perseverance, the munting csts nw exceed what we can manage, putting my cntinued educatin at risk.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）
4.（24-25高三上·云南大理·阶段练习）假设你是李华，是你校英文报“中国传统文化”栏目的负责人。你写了一篇介绍中国功夫的英文宣传稿。请给你的外教老师Mr. Rger写一封电子邮件，请他帮助修改、润色你的稿件。内容包括：1. 写信事由；2. 求助内容；3. 表达感谢。注意：1. 词数80 左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Mr. Rger,__________________________________Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
考向4 求助外籍教师润色修改稿件
【答案】Dear Mr. Rger, I am Li Hua, the persn in charge f the schl English newspaper’s “Traditinal Chinese Culture” clumn. I am writing in the hpe that yu will be kind enugh t d me a favur. When it cmes t Chinese kung fu, there is n denying that it carries abundant traditinal Chinese culture and enjys a great reputatin arund the wrld. I have written an article “A Glimpse int Chinese kung fu”, where I dig deep int the beauty and wisdm f this traditinal sprt. I eagerly ask fr yur assistance in reviewing my draft, plishing my language and ffering insights t better present Chinese kung fu. Yur feedback will nt nly cntribute t the excellence f my writing but als deepen the readers’ understanding f this fascinating traditin. I’d appreciate it if yu culd give me a hand. I’m lking frward t yur early reply.Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教老师Mr. Rger写一封电子邮件请他帮忙修改介绍中国功夫的英文宣传稿。【详解】1.词汇积累负责：in charge f→ be respnsible fr大量的：abundant→ plentiful名声：reputatin→ fame提供：ffer→ prvide2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I am Li Hua, the persn in charge f the schl English newspaper’s “Traditinal Chinese Culture” clumn.拓展句：I am Li Hua, the persn wh is in charge f the schl English newspaper’s “Traditinal Chinese Culture” clumn.【点睛】【高分句型1】I have written an article “A Glimpse int Chinese kung fu”, where I dig deep int the beauty and wisdm f this traditinal sprt.（where引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Yur feedback will nt nly cntribute t the excellence f my writing but als deepen the readers’ understanding f this fascinating traditin.（运用了固定短语nt nly … but als …）
5.（23-24高三下·内蒙古赤峰·期中）假定你是李华,你准备参加学校举办的英文歌曲大赛。请给你班交换生Anna写一封邮件,请她给予指导。内容包括:1. 说明比赛要求；2.请她推荐歌曲；3.请求陪同练习。注意:1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节,以使行行文连贯。Dear Anna , ________________________________________________________________________________________Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
考向5 求助交换生指导英文歌曲大赛
【答案】Dear Anna, I’m writing t ask fr yur help. Our schl will hld an English Singing Cntest next weekend. I have signed up fr it. It is required that the theme shuld be abut nature. Each cntestant is given up t five minutes t sing the sng. S, wuld yu please give me sme recmmendatins n which sng t chse？ Besides, what I need are the skills f singing, including prnunciatin and intnatin, which will perfect my perfrmance. I’d appreciate it if yu culd practice it with me. Lking frward t yur reply.Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Anna写信对学校举办的英文歌曲大赛给予指导。【详解】1.词汇积累要求：required→demanded选手：cntestant→cmpetitrs建议：recmmendatins→suggestins此外：Besides→Additinally2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：S, wuld yu please give me sme recmmendatins n whichsng t chse？扩展句：S, wuld yu please give me sme recmmendatins which are abut which sng I shuld chse.【点睛】【高分句型1】It is required that the theme shuld be abut nature. Each cntestant is given up t five minutes t sing the sng. (运用了It作形式主语)【高分句型2】Besides, what I need are the skills f singing, including prnunciatin and intnatin, which will perfect my perfrmance. (运用了what引导的主语从句及which引导的非限制性定语从句)
投诉信是向有关部门反映所购买的某种商品或某项服务/环境不能达到要求，以期望对方退换或向对方索赔。投诉信一般包括以下要点：写信目的、反映问题、提出解决方案、期待解决。其措辞要客气，但语气要坚定，这样才能达到投诉效果。
1.（2008湖北卷）假设你是卜曼宜，你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。要点：1. 问题：手机不响铃，不能发短信；该产品已售完，无法更换；型号新，无配件，无法维修。 2. 要求：公司应尽快予以更换。　　注意：1. 词数为100左右；　　2. 参考词汇：配件-- spare part;　　3. 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入你所写词数）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】Dear Sir，     I am writing t yu fr the mbile phne f Dephne-S250 I bught n 20th April at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send shrt messages. Then I tk it t the seller, but was tld that the mdel had been sld ut and I had t wait at least three mnths fr a new ne. I had n chice but t g t the repairman. T my disappintment, he said since it was a new mdel in China, it was impssible t fix it withut the right spare parts. I was s desperate n hearing that fr I can nt wait that lng. Therefre, I have t require that yu send me a new ne f the same mdel within a mnth.     Thank yu fr yur cnsideratin.Sincerely yurs,Bu Manyi
【导语】这是一篇应用文写作。要求学生向手机公司写一封电子邮件，要求更换有质量问题的手机。【详解】1. 词汇积累因为：since→ fr/because因此：therefre→ hence/accrdingly/cnsequently不能：can nt→ unable选择：chice→ ptin/selectin2. 句式拓展同义句转换原句：Ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send shrt messages. 复合句：Ten days after that, it nt nly can't ring, but als can't send shrt messages.【点睛】【高分句型1】Then I tk it t the seller, but was tld that the mdel had been sld ut and I had t wait at least three mnths fr a new ne. （that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Therefre, I have t require that yu send me a new ne f the same mdel within a mnth.（that引导的宾语从句）
高考英语投诉信满分技巧一、用三段式结构首段先自我介绍，再开门见山表达投诉某一产品、糟糕服务等写作意图。次段清楚地表达投诉产品、服务等发生的时间、地点以及所存在的诸多问题。句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。尾段照应主题，希望重视投诉尽快给予回复。同时，给对方提出完善整改建议或要求退款等。二、表达热情真诚 投诉信的语言应该礼貌、客气，体现出对对方的尊重和期待，同时有礼有节，不夸大不虚假，实事求是陈述事情的经过、存在的问题或受到的不公正待遇等。三、提升表达效果使用恰当的词汇和句式 ：注意词汇的准确性和句式的多样性，使文章表达更加丰富和流畅。文章结构应有逻辑性，句子之间应有恰当的过渡词或逻辑信号词，使文章读起来连贯、有条理。
一、投诉信首段金句：首段开门见山表明投诉意图1. My name is Li Hua, a regular custmer f yur website. 我叫李华，是贵公司网站的常客。2. I’m a Chinese passenger wh tk yur Flight NYZ369 frm Beijing t Lndn n August 8. 我是一名中国乘客，于8月8日乘坐贵公司NYZ369航班从北京飞往伦敦。3. Here I am writing t cmplain abut the shes I bught last week. 我写信来投诉我上周买的鞋子。4. This letter is a cmplaint cncerning the actins f ne f yur salespersns. 这封信是投诉你们一位销售人员的行为。5. I feel bad t truble yu but I am afraid that I have t make a cmplaint abut the cellphne. 很抱歉打扰你，但恐怕我得投诉一下手机。
二、投诉信次段金句：分条陈述投诉内容和事实1. In the first place, the cellphne pwers ff at least twice a week. 首先，手机每周至少关机两次。2. When I pened the parcel, I was disappinted t discver the frnt cver was damaged. 当我打开包裹时，我失望地发现封面损坏了。3. Surprisingly, it was nt until tw weeks later that the bk was delivered t me. 令人惊讶的是，直到两周后，这本书才投递给我。4. He said since it was an ld mdel, it was impssible t fix it withut the right spare parts. 他说由于这是一款旧车型，没有合适的备件是不可能修好的。5. The last straw was that several pages f the newly published bk were missing. 最让我受不了的是这本新出版的书缺少了几页。
三、投诉信尾段金句：表明自己的诉求或要求（退款、赔偿、道歉等）1. Unless yu give back my mney within three days, I intend t take further actin. 除非你在三天内把钱还给我，否则我打算采取进一步行动。2. S I demand that yu shuld aplgize t me, fr yur mistake, preferably cmpensating fr my lss.所以我要求你为你的错误向我道歉，最好是赔偿我的损失。3. This incident indicates there is still rm fr imprvement cncerning yur custmer service. 这一事件表明，您的客户服务仍有改进的空间。4. I believe yu will take my case seriusly and I am lking frward t yur psitive reply. 我相信你会认真对待我的案件，我期待着你的积极答复。5. Thank yu fr yur cnsideratin and yur early reply wuld be highly appreciated. 感谢您的考虑，如能早日回复，我们将不胜感激。
1.（24-25高三上·河南南阳·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你发现上周网购的电子词典笔(electrnic dictinary pen)有问题，请给客户服务中心写一封电子邮件进行投诉，要点如下：1.进行投诉；2.说明问题；3.说明解决方案注意：1.词数 80 左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir/Madam,I am Li Hua, a devted custmer f yur nline stre. ____________________________________________________________________Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
考向1 投诉网购电子词典笔
【满分范文】Dear Sir/Madam,I am Li Hua, a devted custmer f yur nline stre. I am writing t cmplain abut the defective electrnic dictinary pen I purchased frm yur stre last week.After ne week f its purchase, I find it desn’t wrk as expected. The battery desn’t last lng after being recharged, perhaps merely half a day. Wrse than that, the wrds n the screen are nt distinct enugh, which I think is damaging t my eyesight. The last straw is that when I cntacted the nline stre yesterday, I didn’t get a satisfactry answer.I wuld appreciate it if yu culd either refund my purchase r replace it with a new ne. Otherwise, I will take legal actin. Lk frward t yur attentin and early reply.Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你发现上周网购的电子词典笔(electrnic dictinary pen)有问题，请给客户服务中心写一封电子邮件进行投诉。【详解】1.词汇积累投诉：cmplain→make a cmplaint购买：purchase→buy令人满意的：satisfactry→cntent代替：replace→take place f2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：I am writing t cmplain abut the defective electrnic dictinary pen I purchased frm yur stre last week.拓展句：The reasn why I am writing t yu is that I’d like t cmplain abut the defective electrnic dictinary pen I purchased frm yur stre last week.【点睛】[高分句型1] Wrse than that, the wrds n the screen are nt distinct enugh, which I think is damaging t my eyesight. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] I wuld appreciate it if yu culd either refund my purchase r replace it with a new ne. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
2.（24-25高三下·四川德阳·阶段练习）假定你是李华，乘飞机从北京到伦敦旅行，到达目的地取行李时发现行李箱破损，部分物品丢失。你与相关人员交涉无果，于是给该航空公司写一封投诉信。内容主要包括：1.说明个人相关信息(航线/航班：MMYZ577/时间：August 28)：2.反映情况；3.希望尽快解决。注意：  1. 词数约为 80 字左右;  2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear sir r madam,  ____________________________________Yurs,Li Hua
考向2 投诉航空公司行李问题
【满分范文】Dear Sir/Madam, I’m a Chinese passenger wh tk yur Flight MMYZ577 frm Beijing t Lndn n August 28. I’m writing t make a cmplaint abut the bad service ffered by yur airprt staff. I was disappinted t find my suitcase brken and sme f my belngings missing when I claimed my suitcase at Lndn airprt. When I reprted it t the staff n duty, they ttally ignred my demand f cmpensatin fr damage. I just can’t imagine hw a cmpany with a gd reputatin can d such a thing! I d hpe yu’ll take it seriusly and get it settled as sn as pssible.Yurs, Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给航空公司写一封投诉信，投诉其行李箱破损，部分物品丢失的问题。【详解】1.词汇积累忽视：ignre→verlk投诉：make a cmplaint abut→cmplain abut提供：ffer→prvide失望的：disappinted→despndent2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I’m writing t make a cmplaint abut the bad service ffered by yur airprt staff.拓展句：The reasn why I’m writing t yu is that I want t make a cmplaint abut the bad service ffered by yur airprt staff.【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m a Chinese passenger wh tk yur Flight MMYZ577 frm Beijing t Lndn n August 28. (运用了wh引导定语从句)[高分句型2] When I reprted it t the staff n duty, they ttally ignred my demand f cmpensatin fr damage. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
3.（24-25高三上·河北石家庄·阶段练习）假定你是李华，在美国某博物馆参观时，购买了一本介绍该馆所收藏文物的书籍，阅读后发现书中对一些中国文物(artifacts)的英文介绍有误。请你就此向博物馆写一封信，内容包括： 1. 投诉问题； 2. 提出建议。注意： 1.词数 80 左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir r Madam, ________________________________________________________________________Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
考向3 投诉博物馆收藏书籍英文介绍错误
【满分范文】Dear Sir r Madam, I’m Li Hua, a visitr frm China. I purchased a bk intrducing the artifacts cllected in yur museum. Hwever, t my disappintment, I discvered several errrs in the English descriptins f sme Chinese artifacts after reading it. I sincerely suggest that yur museum shuld have these errrs crrected prmptly. It’s crucial as accurate infrmatin helps visitrs better understand and appreciate these precius cultural relics. I d hpe my feedback will be taken seriusly. Thank yu!Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的投诉信。要求考生给美国某博物馆写信，就该馆所收藏文物的书籍关于一些中国文物(artifacts)的英文介绍有误一事进行投诉并提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累购买：purchase→ buy真诚地：sincerely→ genuinely建议：suggest→ advise重要的：crucial→ imprtant/significant2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I purchased a bk intrducing the artifacts cllected in yur museum.拓展句：I purchased a bk, which intrduces the artifacts cllected in yur museum.【点睛】【高分句型1】I sincerely suggest that yur museum shuld have these errrs crrected prmptly.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和虚拟语气）【高分句型2】It’s crucial as accurate infrmatin helps visitrs better understand and appreciate these precius cultural relics.（运用了as引导的状语从句）
4.（2025·广东江门·模拟预测）假设你是李华，两周前你网购了一套丛书，昨天才到货，还存在其他问题，请就此向网店客服写邮件投诉。要点如下： 1. 陈述写信目的； 2. 投诉内容； 3. 提出你的要求。注意: 1. 词数80词左右；2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear sir r madam, ________________________________________________________________________Yurs sincerely, Li Hua
考向4 投诉网购图书问题
【满分范文】Dear sir r madam,      I am ne f yur custmers. I am writing t cmplain abut an rder.       I rdered a set f Bkwrm Series n yur website tw weeks ag, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday. And much t my disappintment, the bks were s prly packed up that the cver f ne bk was trn. T make matters wrse, it is nt a cmplete set, as I fund ne bk missing.       I believe I have every right t ask yu t deal with this prblem. I hpe that yu either refund my mney r deliver a new set f bks t me. Besides, I’d like t be infrmed f the prcess f yur dealing with my cmplaint.       Yurs sincerely,   Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，就网购的一套丛书的问题表示投诉，要点如下：1. 陈述写信目的；2. 投诉内容；3. 提出你的要求。【详解】1.词汇积累缺损的：missing→defective另外：besides→mrever更糟糕的是：t make matters wrse→wrse still处理：deal with→cpe with2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：And much t my disappintment, the bks were s prly packed up that the cver f ne bk was trn.拓展句：And I was disappinted that the bks were s prly packed up that the cver f ne bk was trn.【点睛】[高分句型1] And much t my disappintment, the bks were s prly packed up that the cver f ne bk was trn. (运用了引导的结果状语从句)[高分句型2] I hpe that yu either refund my mney r deliver a new set f bks t me. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
5.（24-25高三上·安徽合肥·期中）假定你是李华，在某海外购物网站上订购了一款智能手表作为新年礼物送给母亲，但是收货之后出现了一些问题，请你给该网站客服写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 投诉内容；2. 你的诉求。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Sir r Madam I’m writing t express my dissatisfactin with the smartwatch I recently purchased frm yur nline stre.____________________________________Yurs sincerely,Li Hua
考向5 投诉网购图书问题
【满分范文】Dear Sir r Madam I’m writing t express my dissatisfactin with the smartwatch I recently purchased frm yur nline stre. I rdered it as a Mther’s Day gift in advance; hwever, the prduct arrived lng after Mther’s day has passed, causing great incnvenience as I culdn’t present the gift t my mther n that very day. S I’m extremely disappinted with the slw delivery. Furthermre, the prduct I received is different frm what was advertised. It lacks the prmised  features and functins, which makes it a pr chice as a gift. Therefre, I wuld like a full refund and I hpe that future rders can be delivered prmptly t avid similar incnvenience. I hpe yu’ll take my cmplaints seriusly. I lk frward t hearing frm yu sn.Yurs sincerely, Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一份投诉信，就在网上购买的智能手表进行投诉。【详解】1.词汇积累礼物：gift→present提前： in advance→ahead f time此外：furthermre→mrever因此：therefre→thus2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I rdered it as a Mther’s Day gift in advance.拓展句：I rdered it as a Mther’s Day gift in advance, which will give my mther a surprise.【点睛】【高分句型1】Furthermre, the prduct I received is different frm what was advertised. （运用了what引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】It lacks the prmised features and functins, which makes it a pr chice as a gift. （运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）
1. Lking frward t yur reply. 期待您的回复。2. Eagerly lking frward t yur prmpt respnse. 热切期待您的及时回复。3. Lking frward t further discussin with yu as sn as pssible. 期待尽快与您进一步讨论。4. I’m sincerely lking frward t yur presence at the Speech Cntest. 我真诚地期待着你出席演讲比赛。 5. Yur prmpt respnse t my letter wuld be highly appreciated. 如果您能及时回复我的信，我们将不胜感激。
6. I’d appreciate it if yu culd respnd t me as sn as pssible. 如果你能尽快回复我，我将不胜感激。7. Yur prmpt attentin t this letter wuld be highly appreciated. 如果您能及时关注这封信，我们将不胜感激。8. I’d be highly bliged if yu culd give me a psitive feedback sner. 如果你能早点给我一个积极的反馈，我将不胜感激。9. Shuld yu take my invitatin int accunt, I wuld be highly grateful. 如果您能考虑我的邀请，我将不胜感激。10. It wuld be highly appreciated if yu culd respnd t me at yur earliest cnvenience. 如果您能在方便的时候尽早回复我，我们将不胜感激。