2024届高三英语基础写作课件：图表作文-调查图表+评价+建议

这是一份2024届高三英语基础写作课件：图表作文-调查图表+评价+建议，共32页。PPT课件主要包含了Para1 ，Para2 ，Para 3，Para3，同体裁不同话题等内容，欢迎下载使用。
Dear Jack, Hpe the letter finds yu well. I can’t wait t share the uplifting news with yu that the mdel aircraft I made under yur guidance wn first prize in the schl technlgy exhibitin. Mre than delighted, I wuld like t extend/ cnvey t yu my heartfelt gratitude. Recalling the prcess f making the mdel aircraft tgether, I was mst impressed by yur guidance and assistance. It was yur gracius and timely help that enabled me t get thrugh the difficulties during mdel designing, material selectin, trial flight and mdel imprvement. Never will I frget yur generus help that cntributes t my achivement. Had it nt been yu, I wuld nt have fulfilled my dream. Wrds fail t express my sincerest appreciatin t yu. I eagerly anticipate that we can jin hands t make greater prgress in the future cmpetitin. Best wishes!Yurs,Li Hua
Dear Jack, Extremely delighted t be infrmed that my mdel aircraft wn first prize in the schl technlgy exhibitin, hardly can I wait t share the news with yu and extend my sincere gratitude t yu. The past weeks witnessed ur diligent dedicatin t building the mdel aircraft tgether. Frm the very beginning, yu guided me thrugh the design and cnstructin phases. Then, tgether, we spent cuntless hurs refining every aspect f the aircraft. Whether it was adjusting the wing size r enhancing the system, yur expertise and guidance were invaluable in making it a great success. What impressed me mst was yur encuragement whenever I felt frustrated by the failure in the trial flight. I truly culdn’t have dne it withut yu. Thank yu nce again. I sincerely hpe that we can cntinue t cllabrate n similar prjects in the future and achieve even greater achievements tgether.
Club Activity Recmmendatin 标题 It’s a pleasure t share my recmmendatin—the reading club activities which I have been participating in fr tw years 我推荐的社团. As a prud and active member in the reading club, nt nly can I appreciate literary wrks during the weekly gathering, but I can als share insightful 富有洞察力的;有深刻见解的 ideas and make like-minded friends 内容+受益. Besides, I als benefit tremendusly: frm the rewarding life lessns I learn t the upgraded reading skills nw I have 受益. Whenever I am ging thrugh a tugh time, it is the mental supprt gained frm the club activities that leads me ut f the dark 受益. That’s why it cmes first n my list f recmmendatin 总结句. When it cmes t the suggestin f the club activities in yur schl, I strngly recmmend giving students mre free chices in selecting and exchanging their wn favrite bks 建议. By ding s, yung readers can greatly extend their knwledge f life and benefit frm each ther 建议原因.
2024届广州市高三上学期调研测试 应用文调查图表+评价+建议
学校英语俱乐部正在开展以Ways t Relieve Stress为题的讨论。请根据图表中的调查结果写一篇发言稿, 内容包括：1. 简述调查结果；2. 评价并提出建议。
Ways t Relieve Stress Recently a survey was carried ut abut ways t relieve stress. _________________________________________
1. 审题： 体裁：发言稿 主题：Ways t Relieve Stress2. 信息归纳：1) 高三学生减压方式：listen t music 65%watch vides 80%d sprts 30%talk t thers 40%2) 我的评价3) 我的建议
3. Structure Para. 1 引言及简述调查结果： 更为概括的表述方式，不要求一一列出调查结果中的具体数 据，但要能够正确反映图表中呈现的结果。 Para. 2 评价调查结果 可从减压方法多样性、合理性、有效性以及对减压方式的喜好倾向 等方面切入。 Para. 3 建议 可从学生个人、社团（如英语俱乐部）或学校三个维度思考
Ways t Relieve Stress Para. 1 引言及简述调查结果Para. 2 评价调查结果Para. 3 建议
listen t music 65%watch vides 80%d sprts 30% talk t thers 40%
引言的相关句子表达(1) 上周，我们对sb.进行了关于sth.的调查① Last week, we carried ut / made / did/ cnducted/ undertk a survey n sth. amng (sb.)② A survey was carried ut amng sb. n the theme f... ③ Lask week witnessed a survey cnducted by ur schl n the theme f... (2) 调查结果显示 results shw/ reveal that students...
(3) 数据的相关词块表达… 的数量: the number f + n.占…比例: accunt fr / take up + 百分比大多数的: the majrity f + n.大约: abut / apprximately / arund几分之几: 基数词+序数词(s) eg. ne third tw thirds
仅次于: A is secnd t B占比最高的是: On the tp f the list is …占比最低的是: At the bttm is ……百分比是: the percentage f .. is …
(4) 该柱形图/ 横条形图 / 饼形图/ 曲线图描述/ 说明/ 显示…… The clumn chart/ bar chart / pie chart/ graph describes/ tells/ shws/ reveals ... Accrding t the survey... Accrding t the figures given by/ presented in the graph...(5) 如图表所示，……一直在上升/下降 As is shwn in the chart, been n the rise/ increase/ decrease/ decline.(6) 从曲线图可以得出结论，已经大大下降/ 上升。 It can be cncluded frm the graph that there has been a great/ sharp decline/ increase in...
呈现数据的常用表达(1) 图中清楚地显示……排在第一位/最高的，而……结果最低。 It is bvius frm the graph/ chart that ... rank first/ the highest, while ... turn ut t be the lwest.(2) A排在第一，占……%，紧接着B，占……%，跟着是C，占……%；最后是D，E，F，分别占……%，……%，和……%。A, which accunts fr ... %, ranks first; next in line is B with ... %, fllwed by C, making up ... %; finally D, E, F at ... %...%...% respectively.
Lask week witnessed a survey cnducted amng Senir 3 students in ur schl n their ways t relieve stress. Accrding t the survey, 80% f the respndents/ participants said they have a preference fr watching vides t relax themselves, fllwed clsely by listening t music. Cmparatively, nly a small number f students chse exercise r talking t thers t reduce burden.
n 用更为概括的表述方式，不要求一一列出调查结果中的具体数据，但要能够正确反映图表中呈现的结果。
Lask week ur schl cnducted a survey amng Senir 3 students in ur schl n their ways t relieve stress. The survey reveals that mst f the students relieve stress by watching vides and listening t music, while a small number/ prtin f students d sprts and chat with thers t relieve stress.
Ways t Relieve Stress Para. 1 引言及简述调查结果Para. 2 评价调查结果方法多样性、合理性、有效性以及对减压方式的喜好倾向Para. 3 建议
调查结果表明，学生采用多种方法来缓解压力，以提高学习效率，实现全面的减压效果。The survey reveals that students have adpted a variety f ways t relieve stress in rder t imprve/ enhance the effectiveness/ efficiency and achieve a cmprehensive stress-reducing effect.
虽然调查结果显示音乐和视频是主流的减压方式，但这两种方式容易导致学生形成手机依赖。相比之下，运动和社交的减压途径可能获益更大。Althugh the survey shws that music and vide are the mainstream ways t reduce stress, these tw ways can easily lead t students’ dependence n mbile phnes. In cntrast/ On the cntrary, stress relief thrugh exercise and scial activities may benefit us students mre.
1. While vides and music are entertaining, spending t much time n them can make us rely t much n ur phnes and ignre mre imprtant things.
2. The survey demnstrates that mst f us relieve ur stress by using electrnic devices instead f ding exercise, which nt nly is harmful t ur health and grwth, but may lead t/ cntribute t ur addictin t phnes.
We senir three students are encuraged nt nly t use static, persnal ways t reduce stress such as music and vides, but als t try mre dynamic ways such as utdr sprts and chatting with friends t fully enjy the benefits f physical exercise and scial interactin.
鼓励高三学生不仅仅通过音乐和视频等静态的、个人的减压方式，还可以多尝试户外运动，与朋友聊天等动态的方式，充分享受身体锻炼和社交带来的好处。
It is suggested that schls shuld rganize and advcate a variety f stress-reducing activities s as t prmte the friendship between students as well as t enhance their mutual supprt and emtinal cnnectin. Anyway, students are encuraged/ expected t face/ encunter pressure mre actively and happily.
建议学校多组织并且倡导多样化的减压活动，以促进学生间的友谊以及彼此的相互支持与情感联系，鼓励学生们更积极、愉快地面对压力。
There are actually better ptins available. Fr example, ding exercise r talking with friends nt nly relieves stress but als brings us clser t each ther. S, if we are feeling a lt f stress, it’s a gd idea t try different ways t relax. But mst imprtantly, we shuld fcus n things that help bth ur bdy and mind/ facilitate ur health bth physically and mentally.

It’s high time that we reduce using electrnic devices and d exercises utdrs mre ften. Nt nly can ding exercises strengthen ur bdy, but it als imprves ur md, enabling us t relieve stress and better fcus n study. What’s mre, we are suppsed t walk int the breathtaking nature s that we can gain a better md as well as a healthier life.
Ways t Relieve Stress Recently a survey was carried ut abut ways t relieve stress. Surprisingly, apprximately 4/5 f the respndents regard watching vides as their preferred way t ease stress, clsely fllwed by listening t music. In cntrast, nly a small percent f individuals chse sprts r chatting with thers as means f reducing their psychlgical burden. While vides and music ffer amusement and fascinatin, excessive indulgence can intensify ur dependence n smartphnes, thus distracting ur attentin frm ur studies and daily lives. In fact, alternative appraches, such as sprts and scial interactin, can ffer greater benefits. Nt nly des participating in sprts prmte physical well-being, but cmmunicating with ur friends and parents can als prvide cmfrt and enhance their cnnectin. Therefre, I suggest that senir three students adpt a cmbinatin f stress-relief methds, priritizing thse that enhance bth ur physical and mental health. Thank yu fr listening!
评分标准：评分时，主要从内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性、上下文的连贯性等方面考查，具体为：1) 覆盖所有的内容要点，内容完整，条例清晰有逻辑；2) 使用词汇、句型准确、恰当、多样；3) 上下文的衔接连贯，语言流畅；4) 书写美，整篇文章书写工整，大小适宜，词间距大小合适
　　 [2022·全国乙卷] 学校英文报正在开展以 Learning English Beynd the Classrm为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括: 1. 学习活动状况描述; 2. 简单评论; 3. 你的建议。
学生英语学习活动调查结果(人数百分比)
同体裁不同话题（图表类）
Learning English Beynd the Classrm Nwadays, with the grwing ppularity f smartphnes and cmputers, a significant number f students are chsing t learn English beynd the classrm in varius ways. It can easily be seen frm the chart that the percentage f students wh prefer listening t English sngs and watching English mvies is 65% and 50% respectively. By cmparisn, thse chsing t read English bks and visit English learning websites nly accunt fr 18% and 12%. The results suggest that mst students wuld rather study English in a mre entertaining way. Frm my perspective, we shuld take reading English bks int cnsideratin, thus laying a slid fundatin fr English.
（福建4月质检）近日，你校英语报拟介绍学生参与社团的情况。请你结合图表信息，以“Our Schl Clubs”为题写一篇英语短文投稿，内容包括：1.参与社团的情况；2.你的看法。
With the aim f enriching students’ campus life, ur schl prvides students with a wide range f clubs, s that we can psitively jin them in ur spare time.Here is the general situatin cncerning the students’ participatin in clubs. First f all, nearly half f the students prefer the Chinese Calligraphy and Painting Club because f their passin fr Chinese art. Meanwhile, ne furth f the students wuld rather be members f the Pingpng Club t build up their bdies and 17% f the students chse ther clubs accrding t their wn interests. Lastly, the percentage f the students jining the Erhu Club nly accunts fr 10%. In my humble pinin, it is these varius clubs that are f great benefit t us students. Nt nly d the clubs prvide a platfrm fr us t shw ur talents, but als ffer us gd pprtunities t imprve ur all-rund abilities.
　　你校要举行一次英语演讲比赛,话题是“畅想未来,享受人生”。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。你可以从科技发展给人们未来的生活、学习和工作带来的影响,以及如何准备迎接挑战,适应新生活等方面展开描述和讨论。
同体裁不同话题（发言稿）
Hell, everyne! It’s my privilege/ hnur t talk abut the future life, study and wrk here. Thanks t the great advancement f science and technlgy, we are bund t live a happier and mre wnderful life in the future. Nt nly will we be prvided with sufficient fd and clthing, but we can als enjy a wide range f leisure activities. Furthermre, we will have less stress either frm ur study r frm wrk since we can wrk mre efficiently. Hwever, challenges lie ahead t, s we shuld wrk harder tday, making preparatins t make mre cntributins t the develpment f the future sciety and the wrld. Only in this way can we adapt t the future life and enjy urselves. That’s all. Thanks fr yur attentin!
假定你是李华,即将参加学校组织的主题为“My Future Career”的英语演讲比赛,请你根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿。内容包括: 1. 你的职业规划; 2. 选择理由; 3. 你为此做的准备。