2024届高三英语基础写作课件：学生考试作弊

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14分作文：张曈、雅煊13分作文：韵怡、宇森、佳馨、斐、惠雯
【2024八省八校联考】应用文写作：第一节（满分15分）假定你是李华，在外教课期末考试中发现有人作弊，你认为这会影响考试公平。请你给外教Jhn写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 情况描述；2. 你的看法；3. 你的请求。注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
思路梳理：要点分析
往前寻：原因/ 背景
往上看：请求/ 建议产生的预期效果
1.个人懒惰2.没有自信3.学习压力4.……
1.影响考试的公平性2.加剧学生作弊的现象
1.作弊学生成绩作废2.作弊学生给予一定的惩罚3.提高同学们诚信考试的意识
1.帮助同学们正视考试的公平性与严肃性2.创作更好的学习环境
作弊情况描述：交换、传递答案用电子设备作弊
Para. 1：Hpe my email finds yu well ! 1. I’m Li Hua, ne f yur students, and I am writing t reprt an incident f cheating that I witnessed during the final exam.向某人讲述某事reprt sth. t sb./ recunt sth. t sb./ relay sth. t sb. 2. As ne f yur students, I cnsider it my duty t pint ut the dishnest behavirs during ur final exam.hnest/ hnesty/ dishnest/ dishnesty
infrm yu f a disappinting thing that I sptted...
Para. 2: 情况描述+个人观点 逻辑清晰，层层递进情况1：电子设备作弊Regrettably, I nticed a student seated next t me engage in dishnest behavir during the exam. He secretly tk ut an electrnic device hidden in his sleeve and searched fr the answer. 情况2：互传纸条作弊What I witnessed was that tw students seated in frnt f me, in an attempt t attain higher grades, exchanged answers by writing them dwn n a piece f paper and cast it t each ther secretly.
情况3：携带小抄作弊What made me irritated was that a student sitting in frnt f me brught a cheet sheet (小抄) and secretly cpied the answer n his test paper.
个人观点：影响考试的公平性In my pinin, cheating in the exam has the ptential t impact the verall fairness f the exam.exert/ exercise an adverse/ damaging/ devastating/ severe/ negative impact n the verall fairness/ justice f the exam. 作弊学生有优势，对刻苦努力勤奋学习的学生不公平Students wh cheated n/ in the examinatin have an unfair advantage ver ther students, which is nt fair n/ t ther students, wh have invested a lt f time and energy in their study.
学生作弊违反了学校关于考试的相关规定Students wh cheated in the exam, vilated the exam-related regulatins, which may undermine the fairness f the exam and lead t damaging cnsequences. 加剧学生作弊的现象，导致不好的学习氛围Students wh cheated in the exam may set a bad example t ther students, misleading them int fllwing their example/ lead, which may pisn/ ruin/ spil the academic atmsphere.
Para. 2: 提出请求/ 建议 礼貌原则 具体建议+好处作弊学生考试作废T guarantee the fairness f the test and the favrable academic atmsphere, it is a bettter chice t cancle the test scres f the cheaters and reemphasize the imprtance f the test.给予作弊考生一定的惩罚Apprpriate/ Fitting punishment is expected t be impsed n the cheaters s as t assist them t realize the seriusness f their mistake as well as cultivate their awareness f maintaining hnesty in the exam.
提高同学们诚信考试的意识It is a brilliant idea t give a lectue n the theme f “Hnesty in Exams” t heighten/ raise/ increase students’ awareness f it and enable them t appreciate the damaging/ devastating cnsequences f dishnest behaviurs in exams.
Para.3 语气委婉，再次表达希望老师考虑自己诉求的期盼。1. Thank yu fr yur attentin t this matter. Lking frward t yur favrable reply. 2. It is my sincere hpe that yu will take this matter int serius accunt. In anticipatin f yur earliest reply. 3. I d genuinely hpe that...
Dear Jhn, Hw is everything ging? It’s definitely true that the English final exam has abslutely cmpleted, but there were a bit f questins with regard t the test.As fr the final exam, what called my special attentin was that a few students neglected elementary principle and cheated by gesturing their hands and glancing at thers’ answer. I think that hnesty and justice are f the utmst imprtance when everyne encunters frmal examinatin. T guarantee the fairness f the test and the favrable academic atmsphere, it is a bettter chice t cancle the test scres f the cheaters and reemphasize the imprtance f the test.I wuld extremely appreciate it if yu culd take my wrds int cnsideratin.Yurs,Li Hua extremely
问题描述准确，自己观点表述精准，紧跟个人建议
再次陈述诉求，用词委婉
Dear Jhn, I’m writing t express my cncern abut the English the final exam, during which I fund smene cheating.It was at the end f the exam that I saw smene cnveying answers t anther persn and delivering a small paper t him. N wrds are strng enugh t express hw astnished and irritated I was. Frm my pint f view, it’s hard t verstate the significance f fairness in exam. If we just turn a blind eye t such immral behavir, nt nly will it influence the exam cnsequence, but als harm ther students’ interests. Therefre, I want t request yu t cancel their grades.I hpe that yu culd take my humble pinin int cnsideratin. Lking frward t yur earliest reply.Yurs,Li Hua
从问题陈述、个人看法，到请求均表述准确，清晰
Dear Jhn,I’m writing t yu in the hpe that yu will be s kind as t deal with the terrible phenmenn abut cheating, which I sptted in the final examinatin. Glancing at it briefly, I sptted smene cheating by thrwing a slip f paper and murmured t thers sftly in the curse f examinatin. What calls fr special attentin is that the behavir shws the signs f unfairness and may bring abut enrmus terrible phenmenn. In my humble pinin, we ught t becme aware f the significance f fairness and prhibit thers frm cheating.I’d extremely appreciate it if yu culd take my pinins int cnsideratin and prhibit thers frm cheating in time.Yurs,LiHua.
小结：综合性文体写作建议：现在应用文的考查不再局限于单一文体的设题，在试题的分析中，学生应做到：1. 要点分析完整2. 问题表述准确3. 原因/ 结果陈述切中要点（切忌泛泛而谈，不着边际）4. 写作逻辑清晰