专题03_备考2025新高考英语读后续写名校试题及写作素材 读后续写Writing 8课件PPT
展开(2021·湖北省鄂州市高一下月考) 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My great-grandfather, my grandfather and my father are farmers. My father had a fixed idea that I wuld becme a farmer t. Althugh I respect him and am indeed skilled at ding sme farm wrk, I dn’t agree that I shuld autmatically fllw in my father’s ftsteps. When I was a teenager, my father happened t take me t an airprt which belnged t ne f his friends. It was the first time I had seen an aerplane in real life. Knwing that I had never been n bard, my father’s friend Tm ffered me an pprtunity t fly with him in his small aerplane. I quickly accepted his ffer! When we tk ff, I felt nervus but thrilled. Being up in the cluds and lking at the view belw was unlike anything I had ever felt. I was just enjying it. I assumed being a pilt wuld be the mst awesme thing in the whle wrld. Then I had a thught—I wanted t becme a pilt, but I dubted whether my father wuld supprt me. After all, it was a ttally different path frm what he had planned fr me. Therefre, I put the thught ut f my mind, because I knew he wuld still insist n hlding his previus idea.
Anyway, besides helping my father n the farm, I wuld frequently visit Tm’s airprt. Gradually, I gt familiar with every buttn and switch n the aircraft and I learned a lt abut planes, such as hw t fill the plane with fuel, hw t check the engines and s n. But what I had learned just left me wanting mre, s I decided t g t cllege t becme a prfessinal pilt. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1: This time I wuld nt hide my desire any mre.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2: At the graduatin ceremny, with my father present, I, as “Best Pilt”, had t deliver a speech.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了因为家里祖祖辈辈都是农民,作者的父亲认为子承父业是很自然的事情,但作者却不这么认为。一次偶然的机会,作者去了父亲的朋友的飞机场,第一次坐飞机的体验让作者有了想成为飞行员的想法。作者后来常去这个飞机场,并了解了很多关于飞机的知识,可作者还想学习更多,于是,作者决定成为专业飞行员。
Althugh I respect him and am indeed skilled at ding sme farm wrk, I dn’t agree that I shuld autmatically fllw in my father’s ftsteps. 虽然我敬重他,而且我确实擅长做一些农活,但我不认同我必然要继承父亲的事业。 本句是主从复合句。althugh引导让步状语从句,that引导宾语从句,作agree的宾语。
续写第一段的开头语:“这次我不再掩饰我的愿望了。”接下来可以写“我”向父亲说出自己想成为飞行员的梦想。然后可以写父亲对此的反应。另外,根据下一段的已给信息可知,第一段续写还应该包含的情节是“我”成功地进入了飞行学校或“我”得以学习飞行专业,经过几年的学习,“我”最终毕业。 续写第二段的开头语:“父亲出席了我的毕业典礼,我要作为‘最佳飞行学员’发表演讲。”本段应该围绕“我”演讲的内容来写。比如可以这样构思:在演讲中,“我”分享了自己是如何通过努力实现梦想的,并感谢父亲给予“我”的支持。本段开头语中提到“with my father present”,这说明作者的父亲也在场,所以最后还可以描写父亲的反应。
Paragraph 1: This time I wuld nt hide my desire any mre. Determined t fllw my heart, I explained t my father hw I felt. I tld him that I wanted t g t cllege t learn t fly instead f being a farmer. After saying this, I waited ①nervusly fr his reactin. ②T my surprise, he apprved f my request, saying that he was mved by my perseverance. With his supprt, I wrked hard and was admitted int my ideal cllege. Finally, after fur years f training, I ③graduated with distinctin.
①“nervusly”体现出了作者当时惴惴不安的心情。②材料中提到“I dubted whether my father wuld supprt me”以及“I knew he wuld still insist n hlding his previus idea”,所以父亲同意作者的请求出乎作者的意料。③在“入学”与“毕业典礼”之间加上“毕业”作为过渡,“毕业”与“毕业典礼”可以自然衔接。另外,“with distinctin”说明作者成绩优异,为下一段中的“Best Pilt”做铺垫。
Paragraph 2: At the graduatin ceremny, with my father present, I, as “Best Pilt”, had t deliver a speech. In my speech, I shared with the audience my stry abut hw a teenager realized his dream. I tld everyne that the secret f my success was ④passin and hard wrk. I als wed my success t my father, withut whse supprt, I culdn’t have pursued my dream. At the end f my speech, I sptted my father’s ⑤watery eyes, and said, “Dad, I made it!” His face lit up with pride.(153 wrds)
④作者总结“passin”与“hard wrk”是让自己获得成功的两大因素。此外,自己的成功还离不开父亲的支持(supprt)。⑤“watery eyes”表明父亲很感动;最后一句话,通过对父亲的面部表情的描写凸显了父亲为作者感到自豪。
1. be determined t d sth. 决心做某事 2. be admitted int 被……录取 3. the secret f ……的秘诀 4. light up with (pride, surprise…) 露出(骄傲、惊讶……)的表情
be cvered with wrinkles 布满了皱纹a tear-stained face 布满泪痕的脸a freckled face 有雀斑的脸a finely-cut face 眉清目秀的脸a charming face 迷人的脸庞an angular face 棱角分明的脸a clean-shaved face 刮得干干净净的脸a pretty/beautiful face 漂亮的面孔a sweet face 可爱的脸
a rund/mn-shaped face 圆脸a square face 方脸;国字脸an val face 鹅蛋脸;椭圆形的脸a large, square face 大方脸a thin face 瘦削的脸a lng face 长脸;失望、严肃或痛苦的面部表情a fleshy face 胖脸a wrinkled/lined face 布满皱纹的脸
a pretty cmplexin 面色秀丽a pale cmplexin 面色苍白lk pale 面色苍白flrid adj. (面色)红润的;红扑扑的be flrid/flushed (with…) (……得)满脸通红bright red 通红disfigure vt. 使变丑;毁容prfile n. 侧面轮廓wrinkle n. 皱纹
an ugly face 丑陋的面孔a bearded face 长着胡子的脸a handsme face/handsme features 英俊的面孔a stern face 严厉的面孔a sunburned face 晒得黝黑而好看的脸;晒伤了的脸a face with regular features 五官端正的脸庞cmplexin n. 面色
bruise n. 瘀伤mle n. 痣scar n. 伤疤 vt. 在……上留下伤痕
dimple n. 酒窝freckle n. 雀斑cut n. 伤口
be badly scarred 留下明显的伤疤spt n. 小疙瘩a beauty spt/mark 美人痣;美人斑
She had a dimple which appeared when she smiled. 她一笑就露出酒窝。His lined face was that f an ld man. 他布满皱纹的脸就像老人一样。Her face was disfigured by a lng red scar. 她脸上的一条红色的长疤使她破相了。His face was flushed with anger, like he was abut t thrw a tantrum. 他气得满脸通红,好像马上就发脾气了。There were cuts and bruises n her face. 她的脸上有伤口和瘀伤。
sunken/hllw adj. 凹陷的bldsht adj. (眼睛)布满血丝的,充血的red adj. 充血的;布满血丝的;红肿的watery adj. 含水的shrt-sighted adj. 近视的sightless adj. 看不见的;盲的blind adj. 失明的;盲的;瞎的sharp eyes 敏锐的眼睛glassy eyes 目光呆滞的眼睛
dark eyes 乌黑的眼睛gray/grey eyes 灰色的眼睛(pale) blue eyes (淡)蓝色的眼睛brwn eyes 褐色的眼睛glden eyes 金色的眼睛bright eyes 明亮的眼睛small/big/large eyes 小/大眼睛sparkling eyes 亮晶晶的眼睛deep-set eyes 深陷的眼睛
full f tears 充满泪水的the whites f ne’s eyes 某人的眼白/白眼珠eyeball n. 眼球eyelid n. 眼皮left/right eyelid 左/右眼皮duble/duble-edged/duble-fld eyelids 双眼皮single/single-edged/single-fld eyelids 单眼皮
glassy-eyed adj. 目光呆滞的sleepy-eyed adj. 睡眼朦胧的crss-eyed adj. 斜眼的;斗鸡眼的ne-eyed adj. 独眼的hllw-eyed adj. 双眼凹陷的black-ringed adj. 有黑眼圈的dark circles 黑眼圈swllen adj. 肿胀的;肿起来的
Her eyes were red and watery. 她的眼睛发红,泪汪汪的。The whites f her eyes were bldsht. 她的白眼球布满了红血丝。In the streets, sleepy-eyed peple were mving quickly, heading twards their jbs. 街道上,睡眼惺忪的人们正匆匆忙忙地赶着去上班。Singing happily, she gazed at her surrundings with large, inncent eyes. 她快乐地唱着歌,一双天真无邪的大眼睛凝视着周围的环境。Her eyes shne like diamnds. 她眼睛里闪着钻石般的光芒。
thick eyelashes 浓密的睫毛straight eyelashes 笔直的睫毛curving eyelashes 弯睫毛false eyelashes 假睫毛
lash/eyelash n. 睫毛lng/shrt lashes/eyelashes 长/短睫毛thin eyelashes 稀疏的睫毛
She’s always wearing (a set f) false eyelashes. 她总是戴着(一副)假睫毛。She had large brwn eyes, with incredibly lng lashes. 她有一双褐色的大眼睛,睫毛特别长。
bushy/heavy/thick adj. 浓密的bushy eyebrws and big eyes 浓眉大眼brwn/dark eyebrws 褐色的/乌黑的眉毛uneven adj. 不对称的
strng, dark brws/eyebrws 又浓又黑的眉毛shaggy eyebrws 杂乱的眉毛arched eyebrws 拱形眉penciled eyebrws 描画过的眉毛
He had thick brwn hair and shaggy brws. 他长着浓密的褐色头发和浓粗杂乱的眉毛。One dark brw rse in surprise. 一道乌黑的眉毛惊奇地挑起。
hked adj. 弯曲的;钩形的aquiline adj. 钩状的red-nsed adj. 红鼻子的large-nsed adj. 大鼻子的snub-nsed adj. 鼻子短平且上翘的prminent adj. 突出的a prminent/high nse 高鼻子a Rman nse 罗马鼻;鹰钩鼻an aquiline nse=a hked/hawk nse 鹰钩鼻
big/large adj. 大的small/little adj. 小的lng/shrt adj. 长/短的high adj. 高耸的flat adj. 扁的straight adj. 笔挺的;直挺的brad/wide adj. 宽的narrw adj. 窄的sharp adj. 尖的crked adj. 扭曲的
a snub nse 狮子鼻;短平而上翘的鼻子an upturned nse 翘鼻子a Greek nse 希腊鼻;通天鼻;直鼻a buttn nse 塌鼻子a fleshy nse 肉鼻子a runny nse 流鼻涕的鼻子a blcked nse 堵塞的鼻子the tip f ne’s nse 鼻尖
She has a shrt nse with an upturned tip. 她有一个短鼻子,鼻尖向上翘。Her nse was thin and sharp and had a dark mle n ne side. 她的鼻子又细又尖,鼻侧有一颗黑痣。He had a thin aquiline nse and deep-set brwn eyes. 他长着细长的鹰钩鼻和一双深陷的褐色眼睛。
sweating adj. 出汗的a(n) brad/pen/wide frehead 宽额头a high frehead 高额头a narrw frehead 窄额头a large frehead 大脑门
a dmed frehead 隆起的额头a sharp frehead 尖额头a small frehead 小脑门the lines/wrinkles n ne’s frehead 抬头纹;额头上的皱纹
Unlike her mther, Jane has a dmed frehead. 简的额头突起,和她妈妈不一样。He desn’t like his brad frehead, making him lk like an alien. 他不喜欢自己的宽额头,这让他看上去像个外星人。
thin/lean cheeks 瘦瘦的脸颊rsy cheeks 红润的双颊red/flushed cheeks 发红的双颊chubby/plump cheeks 胖乎乎/丰满的脸颊pale/white cheeks 苍白的双颊pink cheeks 粉红的双颊
hllw/sunken cheeks 凹陷的双颊pwder vt. 往……搽粉pwdered cheeks 搽了粉的脸颊wrinkled cheeks 有皱纹的脸颊prminent/high cheekbnes 突出的/高高的颧骨rsy-cheeked adj. 脸颊红润的
She had rsy cheeks. 她脸颊红润。The large tears fell slwly ver her white cheeks. 大颗大颗的泪珠慢慢流淌过她苍白的脸颊。His tw yung children sit n ne chair in the crner f the rm, frightened t lk at their father with sunken cheeks and withered limbs. 他的两个年幼的孩子坐在房间角落的一把椅子上,惊恐地看着他们脸颊凹陷、四肢干瘪的父亲。He had an angular face with prminent cheekbnes. 他长着一张颧骨突出、瘦削的脸。
a big/wide muth 大嘴a small muth 小嘴the upper lip 上嘴唇the bttm/lwer lip 下嘴唇
mist adj. 湿润的dry and cracked 干裂的cracked lips 干裂的嘴唇thin lips 薄嘴唇
thick/fleshy lips 厚嘴唇thin-lipped/thick-lipped adj. 薄/厚嘴唇的full lips 丰满的嘴唇sensuus lips 性感的嘴唇
Her lwer lip trembled. 她的下嘴唇颤抖着。His eyelids did nt pen, but his half-pen muth still breathed. 他的眼皮没有睁开,但半张开的嘴还有呼吸。She passed her tngue ver her cracked lips and tried t speak. 她用舌头舔了一下干裂的嘴唇,试图开口说话。
tthless adj. 没有牙的even adj. 整齐的uneven adj. 不整齐的regular adj. 齐整的irregular adj. 不整齐的
perfectly straight 非常整齐的lse adj. 松动的twisted adj. 扭曲的;变形的pinted adj. 尖的have bad teeth 牙齿不好
prtruding teeth 龅牙a line/rw f white teeth 一排洁白的牙齿a set f amazingly white teeth 一口雪白的牙齿
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