人教版高考英语一轮复习读后续写第5讲5步建构,考场作文速成写作专项课件

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典型例题(2021新高考全国Ⅰ卷)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISEThe twins were filled with excitement as they thught f the surprise they were planning fr Mther’s Day.Hw pleased and prud Mther wuld be when they brught her breakfast in bed.They planned t make French tast and chicken prridge.They had watched their mther in the kitchen.There was nthing t it.Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what t d.
The big day came at last.The alarm rang at 6 pair went dwn the stairs quietly t the kitchen.They decided t bil the prridge first.They put sme rice int a pt f water and left it t bil when they made the French tast.Jeff brke tw eggs int a plate and added in sme milk.Jenna fund the bread and put tw slices int the egg mixture.Next,Jeff turned n the secnd stve burner t heat up the frying pan.Everything was ging smthly until Jeff started frying the bread.The pan was t ht and the bread turned black within secnds.Jenna threw the burnt piece int the sink and put in the ther slice f bread.This time,she turned dwn the fire s it cked nicely.
Then Jeff nticed steam shting ut f the pt and the lid starting t shake.The next minute,the prridge biled ver and put ut the fire.Jenna panicked.Thankfully,Jeff stayed calm and turned ff the gas quickly.But the stve was a mess nw.Jenna tld Jeff t clean it up s they culd cntinue t ck the rest f the prridge.But Jeff’s hand tuched the ht burner and he gave a cry f pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cld water.Then she caught the smell f burning.Oh dear!The piece f bread in the pan had turned black as well.注意:续写词数应为150左右。
As the twins lked arund them in disappintment,their father appeared._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
When Mrs.Meredith heard f Jhn’s idea,she thught it was a gd ne, t.S she praised Jhn fr his prpsal,and ffered him sme advice.Very sn the children were busy ppping the crn,while their mther went ut t buy the paper bags.When she came back,she brught Bernard with her.All the children came surrunding Bernard and they gave a basket t Bernard.The basket was full f paper bags which were filled with ppcrn.With everything ready, Bernard started ut n his new business.And much sner than culd be expected,Bernard returned with an empty basket. Never befre had he earned s much mney in his life.When he fund that it was all t be his,he was s happy that he culd hardly speak,but his bright smiling face spke fr him.Peple began t watch fr the“little ppcrn by”, wh earned sme mney t take hme every week.All this was because f Jhn’s bright idea.
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第二步　理双情,思细节梳理文章情节和情感两条线索,确定续写情节和情感。
第三步　四句话,建框架借助四句话,建构续写框架,明确续写方向。
第四步　活表达,定语言原文使用了定语从句、感叹句、非谓语动词、名词性从句、状语从句、并列复合句等高级表达手段,在续写部分要灵活沿用这些手法为自己的写作增光添彩。第五步　巧衔接,保流畅在叙述事情的发展时可采用时间状语从句、非谓语动词、副词等形式进行连接,以使行文流畅自然。
【满分作文】As the twins lked arund them in disappintment,their father appeared. “Dn’t panic!” he handed each ne a wet twel,helping them clean the mess quickly.After that,Jeff stammered ut their plan,with his face flushing. Hwever,Father laughed,“Sunds great!Let’s d it tgether!”Hearing this, Jenna and Jeff almst jumped t their feet,jy in eyes.Under his careful guidance,it didn’t take lng befre the French tast and chicken prridge were ready.Everything settled,Father left the kitchen,prmising t keep their secret.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up. Meeting their smiling eyes,Mther felt cnfused until they presented the breakfast and said,“Happy Mther’s Day!” Mther gave them a tight hug, saying,“Unbelievable!Yu can ck!It’s the biggest surprise that I have received.” Her face lit up with happiness.“They have knwn hw t take care f thers,” Father said in respnse t her excitement,winking at Jenna and Jeff. They culdn’t help giggling.What a big surprise n Mther’s Day!
跟踪训练1(2020新高考全国Ⅰ卷)The Meredith family lived in a small cmmunity.As the ecnmy was in decline,sme peple in the twn had lst their jbs.Many f their families were struggling t make ends meet.Peple were trying t help each ther meet the was a mst kind and thughtful wman.She spent a great deal f time visiting the pr.She knew they had prblems,and they needed all kinds f help.When she had time,she wuld bring fd and medicine t them.
One mrning she tld her children abut a family she had visited the day befre.There was a man sick in bed,his wife,wh tk care f him and culd nt g ut t wrk,and their little by.The little by—his name was Bernard—had interested her very much.“I wish yu culd see him,”she said t her wn children,Jhn,Harry,and Clara.“He is such a help t his mther.He wants very much t earn sme mney,but I dn’t see what he can d.”After their mther left the rm,the children sat thinking abut Bernard.“I wish we culd help him t earn mney,”said Clara.“His family is suffering s much.”“S d I,”said Harry.“We really shuld d smething t assist them.”
Fr sme mments,Jhn said nthing,but,suddenly,he sprang t his feet and cried,“I have a great idea!I have a slutin that we can all help accmplish(完成).”The ther children als jumped up all attentin.When Jhn had an idea,it was sure t be a gd ne.“I tell yu what we can d,”said Jhn.“Yu knw that big bx f crn Uncle Jhn sent us?Well,we can make ppcrn(爆米花), and put it int paper bags,and Bernard can take it arund t the huses and sell it.”注意:续写词数应为150左右。
When Mrs. Meredith heard f Jhn’s idea,she thught it was a gd ne, t._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________With everything ready,Bernard started ut n his new business._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2(2023黑龙江齐齐哈尔二模)My teenage daughter,Jane,always cmplained abut having t be hme earlier than all her friends.She wuld tell me that she was already seventeen. She believed that she was already an adult,yet still had a curfew(宵禁).“But yu are still in high schl,” I said ne day when she was cmplaining again.“Yu will never trust me!” she yelled.Befre I culd cntinue,she rlled her eyes,entered her bedrm and shut the dr.“Hw culd I make Jane see that I nly want t keep her safe?” I sighed.
I decided t g fr a walk,hping the cld air wuld clear up my mind.I pened the frnt dr and nearly stepped n ur small black cat,which seemed like a meatball.“Hi,Meatball,” I said,taking it int my arms and tuching it gently.Meatball sneezed in my arms.Realizing it was t cld utside,I went inside.Meatball seemed happy enugh t stay in the warm huse.But after an hur r tw,it went t the dr and wanted t g utside again.“Why wn’t it just stay in with us all the time?” Nathan,my yungest daughter asked.I explained t her that it was happy t be here but it liked being able t cme and g as it pleased.
“That must be nice,” Jane,wh happened t cme ut fr a cup f tea,cut in,“Why the cat,nt I,culd cme and g?Why nt give Meatball a curfew,t?”I turned a deaf ear t her cmplaint.Later in the night,temperatures drpped unusually lw.Meatball std at the dr,mewing t g utside,again.I shk my head at it,being afraid that it might freeze t death.It lked at me and kept mewing.“I knw yu’re nt happy,but it’s fr yur wn gd,” I said,patting its head.“Mm’s nt being mean t yu,” Jane tld the cat.“She’s just trying t keep yu frm turning int a frzen meatball,” said Jane,lking at me meaningfully.
We all laughed at the jke.The next mrning,I culdn’t find Meatball.I asked the kids if anyne had seen her.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式作答。
“I let it ut last night,” Jane said calmly.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________As I drve t the animal hspital,Jane held Meatball inside her cat._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________