读后续写01：学生答题能力提升指引课件-【考点通-新高考题型考点系列课件】高中英语人教版（2019）

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这是一份读后续写01：学生答题能力提升指引课件-【考点通-新高考题型考点系列课件】高中英语人教版（2019），共33页。PPT课件主要包含了一六要素法明大意，二主谓结构抓情节，三透过细节断特征，实战演练，段落一动作+情感，段落二动作+情感，THANK YOU等内容，欢迎下载使用。

1. when2. where3. wh4. what5. why6. hw
1. 时间2. 地点3. 人物4. 事情5. 起因6. 经过
Last week I went t the theatre. I had a very gd seat. The play was very interesting. I did nt enjy it. A yung man and a yung wman were sitting behind me. They were talking ludly. I gt very angry. I culd nt hear the actrs. I turned rund. I lked at the man and the wman angrily. They did nt pay any attentin. In the end, I culd nt bear it. I turned rund again. 'I can't hear a wrd!' I said angrily. 'It's nne f yur business,' the yung man said rudely. 'This is a private cnversatin!'
I was angry.
The yung man was rude.
2022年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试模拟测试(一)英语2022广东省一模英语读后续写
On a Sunday afternn, Kiana French was having fun fishing with her father and yunger sister, nt knwing the next minute, they wuld struggle nt t sink in the freezing water. Their 12-ft bat was taking in water little by little, and the wind was picking up. Her father, Gary French, hurried t perate the engine, while Kiana,16, was in the middle with Cierrah, her sister, frightened but still able t keep calm. Kiana asked Cierrah t take ff ne f her cwby bts, with which she gt sme f the water ut. Hard as she tried, that little effrt wuld nt help stp the bat sinking. Mments later, the unthinkable happened. The bat was full f water and then it flipped ver. Kiana and her sister were dumped in the water. Their father, wh had had a surgery six mnths ag, managed nt t be thrwn int the water but seemed t have great pain in the chest due t the sudden change.
Kiana quickly put n her life jacket and saw Cierrah’s and her father’s life jackets flating away. She reacted quickly t get them back and held her sister nt the bat. They were s far ut in the middle f the lake that they culd nt see the shre clearly. What’s wrse? It was getting harder t stay abve the waves. Their father swam ver and hugged his tw girls. Cierrah crying silently. Kiana heard her belved sister murmur, “I can’t feel my feet.” Kiana knew the nly thing t d was t get t shre herself and find help. She lked up at her father, exchanging a cncerned glance, turned rund and swam as hard as she culd twards the shre. Fighting against the strng currents and cld wind, she screamed fr help at the tp f her lungs every three minutes r s. A strng wind blew, and she lked back nly t see her sister’s and father’s heads bbbing(浮动)in the water. She burst int tears, thinking her sister and dad were dead, because she was taking t lng.
Father was sad.
Cierrah was scared.
Kiana was calm and brave.
With desperate tears she suddenly sptted a bat with a figure walking n it______________________________________________________________________________________Once rescued, they were rushed t shre, where a cncerned grup waited fr their arrival._______________________________________________________________________________
They were safe finally.
1.上下一致2.解决问题3.正能量。
With desperate tears she suddenly sptted a bat with a figure walking n it_________________________________________Once rescued, they were rushed t shre, where a cncerned grup waited fr their arrival.__________________________________________
结局：They were safe finally.
Try t write the rest part Of the stry
cry fr help; excitement
get her int the bat; sail t the spt
lift Cierrah, climb int; with the help f the guy
cver them with blanket
be sent t the hspital; relief
dn’t have time t be afraid
With desperate tears, she suddenly sptted a bat with a figure walking n it. She waved and cried fr help with all her strength. After seeing the man waved the hands, she was invlved in a feeling f excitement. “They are in the water! Help!” shuted Kiana as she gt int the bat. And then they sailed t the spt as sn as they culd. Frtunately, t her relief and cmfrt, Kiana fund that her father and sister were still there. With the help f the man, her father lifted Cierrah and pushed her int the bat.
Once rescued, they were rushed t shre, where a cncerned grup waited fr their arrival. They gave clthes and blankets t the three pr peple, and then the ambulance arrived. Kiana, her sister and her father were cheeked n the spt and finally sent t the nearest hspital. Seeing this scene, she felt a great sense f warmth and jy welling up in her heart. Later, when asked what gave her the strength t cntinue. “I just wanted t save my family, and I culdn’t spare a secnd t wrry r fear.” she said.
Nw let’s take a lk at the whle passage nce again.
With desperate tears, she suddenly sptted a bat with a figure walking n it. She waved and cried fr help with all her strength. After seeing the man waved the hands, she was invlved in a feeling f exitement. “They are in the water! Help!” shuted Kiana as she gt int the bat. And then they sailed t the spt as sn as they culd. Frtunately, t her relief and cmfrt, Kiana fund that her father and sister are still there. With the help f the man, her father lifted Cierrah and pushed her int the bat. Once rescued, they were rushed t shre, where a cncerned grup waited fr their arrival. They gave clthes and blankets t the three pr peple, and then the ambulance arrived. Kiana, her sister and her father were cheeked n the spt and finally sent t the nearest hspital. Seeing this scene, she felt a great sense f warmth and jy welling up in her heart. Later, when asked what gave her the strength t cntinue. “I just wanted t save my family, and I culdn’t spare a secnd t wrry r fear.” she said.
1.万能情感句2.句式提升3.真题演练
T ne's +情绪名词，主句
What+情绪动词+sb +was +that从句
sb. felt a great sense f + 情绪名词+ welling up in sb’s heart
这个句式，非常简单。属于入门级的情感描述句。主句是用来描述情绪产生的原因。首先我们来看例句：T my surprise,Tm wn the first prize in the English Speech Cntest.令我惊讶的是Tm 居然获得了英语演讲比赛的第一名。
Structure 1：T ne's +情绪名词，主句
【升级1】加强情绪的语气比如我想要表达的是：非常令我吃惊的是，汤姆在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。Much / Greatly t my surprise, Tm wn the first prize in the English Speech Cntest.或者T my great surprise, Tm wn the first prize in the English Speech Cntest.
【升级2】t the +情绪名词+ f sb（名词或者代词）比如我想要表达的是：令他的父母感到吃惊的是，他在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。T the surprise f his parents, he wn the first prize in the English Speech Cntest.这里把T my surprise改成了T the surprise f his parents ，本质上，是两种所有格的变换。
【升级3】情绪名词叠加使用。比如我要表达：令他惊讶和高兴的是，他在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖T his surprise and jy, he wn the first prize in the English Speech Cntest.
【升级4】：“t ne’s +情绪名词”位置可变换这个短语的位置可以句首，句中，句末。请看下面例句：I，t my surprise, fund that Tm wn the first prize in the English Speech Cntest.这里实际就是把“t ne’s+情绪名词”用作插入语，所以位置灵活多变。
Structure 2： What+情绪动词+sb +was +that从句What 主语从句描述情绪，that表语从句描述情绪产生的原因，在续写里通常可以表达故事发展情节。如：让我惊讶的是Tm 居然获得了英语演讲比赛的第一名。What surprised me was that Tm wn the first prize in the English Speech Cntest.
Sent 3： sb. felt a great sense f + 情绪名词+ welling up in sb’s heart and surging thrugh sb. 这句话表示：“某人感到一股强烈的在内心升腾”结构更复杂，表现力自然也更丰富。well up表示“涌出”这个句子的亮点是后半句welling up in sb’s heart把情绪的描写形象化，具体化了。
举例1：Jane感到一股强烈的恐惧，在她心中升腾，奔涌。Jane felt a great sense f hrrr welling up in her heart.举例2：Jane感到一股强烈的嫉妒，在她心中升腾，奔涌。Jane felt a great sense f jealusy welling up in her heart.（jealus嫉妒的，jealusy是“嫉妒”的名词形式。）
升级一：句首加ding sth，表示这种情绪产生的原因。举例：看到丈夫在跟一个漂亮的女孩聊天，Jane感到一股强烈的嫉妒涌上心头。Seeing her husband chatting with a beautiful girl , Jane felt a great sense f jealusy welling up in her heart.
升级二：句尾加ding sth，表示这种情绪产生后的结果。举例：简感到一种强烈的嫉妒感在她心中涌出来，把书扔向女孩。Jane felt a great sense f jealusy welling up in her heart ,thrwing the bk at the girl.
【负态度】anger 生气annyance 烦恼 disappintment 失望 hrrr 恐怖 shame 羞耻 srrw 悲伤
【中性态度】puzzlement 迷惑 regret 后悔 relief 欣慰 shck 震惊sympathy 同情
【正态度】amazement 惊奇 delight 高兴 jy 高兴 surprise 惊喜warmth 温暖satisfactin 满足excitement 兴奋
【高兴类】delight, please, excite, cheer, amuse, satisfy【生气类】anny, upset【惊讶类】surprise, astnish, shck, amaze【害怕类】frighten, scare, terrify【失望类】depress, disappint, discurage, bre【忧虑类】wrry, cncern【其他类】puzzle, cnfuse, interest, relax, tuch, mve, embarrass, impress