素材3 亲情篇:私家读后续写分话题语料库整理
展开素材来源:1. 2021 广一模 2.2021年南通市二模 3. 2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考 4.
2021年沈阳市一模 5. 2020-2021年汕头市高三第一学期质量监测 6.2021浙江省“七彩阳光”新高考研究联盟期中联考
一、亲情有关的情绪描写:
1、亲情有关的开心描写:
1. “我想给你一个惊喜!”他指向一个包装精美的盒子,眼里闪烁着光芒。(with结构)(2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考)
“I wanted t surprise yu!” he pinted at a neatly wrapped bx with his eyes gleaming.
2.看到他的家人围坐着,和谐地待在一起,卡特感觉到一种幸福感。(ding非谓语)(2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考)
Seeing his families sitting tgether and staying tgether harmniusly, Cater felt a surge f happiness.
欢快的歌唱飘荡在房间里,两姐妹沉浸在音乐的美中。(独立主格)(2020.11温州一模)
Cheerful singing flating in the rm, the tw sisters immersed themselves in the beauty f the music.
一股幸福与温暖流遍全身,妈妈轻轻地亲了两个姐妹。(2020.11温州一模)
A surge f happiness and warmth running thrugh her, mm kissed the tw sisters gently .
他抬起头,跑去拿来红色的小车,递给Carter,脸上展现着灿烂的笑容。(2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考)
He rse his head, bunced t fetch the red car, and handed t Cater with a big smile spread acrss her face.
2、亲情有关的紧张描写:
1. Hwever, in the face f her sn’s nervus eyes(面对他儿子充满紧张的双眼) and the suspicius lks f the ther family members, Ben’s mther remained calm.(2021年广一模)
2. 很快就到演出时间了。我偷偷向外,看着观众,黑暗的剧院里挤满了人。我的心跳得更快了。(2021年南通市二模)
Sn, it was the curtain time. I peeked ut at the audience and nticed that the darkened theater was full. My heart beat faster.
3、亲情有关的母亲平静的描写:灯光+脸上的表情
1. In the study, calmly bathed in the light, his mther's face shwed n sign f anger(没有一点生气的迹象). (2021年广一模)
4、亲情有关的惊讶描写:
1.Astnished as he was at her reward instead f harsh scld,, (尽管Ben对她的奖励而不是严厉的责骂感到震惊,倒装句), Ben reluctantly received it, nt daring t fix his eyes n his mther’s.(2021 广一模)
5、亲情有关的生气描写:
1. 我妈妈瞪着我,这是在我有一个重组家庭之前她从未做过的事。 “你可以捡起来的。”她说。“那才对。”(本可以,虚拟语气)(2021年南通市二模)
My mther glanced at me. Smething she never did befre I had a stepfamily. “Yu culd have picked it up. ” she said. “That wuld have been the kind thing t d.”
他生气地握紧拳头,但是弟弟却激动地挥着手。(2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考)
He flded his fist angrily, but his yunger brther waved his hands excitedly.
3.Jacksn试着说什么,但Carter太生气了,他一个字也听不进去。(对比,夸张)(2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考)
Jacksn kept saying smething, but s angry was Carter that he culdn’t even hear a wrd .
4. 红色小汽车映入他的眼帘,他突然被生气和愤怒的情绪淹没。(被动)(2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考)
With the bright red car cming int his sight, he was suddenly verwhelmed with a feeling f anger and rage.
他从来没想过他弟弟会把他的模型车涂成红色。(倒装)(2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考)
Never befre in his life culd he imagined that his brther wuld paint his mdel car.
Cater咬紧牙,紧紧握住他的拳头,用难以控制的着火般的眼睛怒视着Jacksn(ding非谓语)(2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考)
Cater clenched his teeth and fld his fist tightly, glaring at Jacksn with burning eyes ut f cntrl.
6、亲情有关的后悔描写:
1. 我意识到我裙子上的蝴蝶结打得很不好。我本应该请妈妈帮忙的。(2021年南通市二模)
I realized hw prly I tied the string n my skirt which was ver leggings. I shuld have asked mm fr help.
亲情有关的内疚描写:
一想到我对他所做的一切,遗憾和内疚就像没休止的潮水一样向我袭来。(2021年南通市二模)
Thinking abut what I had dne t him, regret and guilt verwhelmed me like endless tides.
每当我想到亨利湿了的书,我的脸都会变红了。(2021年南通市二模)
Whenever I thught f Henry’s wet bk, my face turned red.
8、亲情有关的感激描写:
1. 如果没有亨利的帮助,我就不会顺利地完成我的演出了。(2021年南通市二模)But fr Henry’s help, I wuldn’t have finished my perfrmance smthly.
2. I lked at her, tears f lve and gratitude welling(well) up in my eyes.(独立主格结构)(2021年沈阳市一模)
3. Afterwards, it was my turn t give a small lecture,in which I expressed my sincere gratitude t my mm and friends, bwing(bw) t them several times. (定语从句,非谓语)(2021年沈阳市一模)
9、亲情有关的烦恼描写:
Watching Shirley’s smile fading away, Peter frwned(frwn).(2020-2021年汕头市高三第一学期质量监测)
10、亲情有关的伤心描写:
当她望过她三岁妹妹的桌子时,Amanda感觉她的心情像天空一样灰暗。(比喻)(2020.11温州一模)
Amanda felt as gray as the sky utside when she lked acrss the table at her three-year-ld sister.
11、亲情有关的害怕描写:
Li一看到Amanda靠近,她的眼睛就会睁大,从椅子中跳下来,然后跑到她的房间。(2020.11温州一模)
As sn as Li saw Amanda reaching ver, her eyes widened. She jumped dwn frm her seat and raced t her rm.
12、亲情有关的兴奋描写:
1. 一年前,当Amanda的父母说他们收养了来自中国的女儿,Amanda兴奋地跳起舞来。(2020.11温州一模)
Over a year ag, Amanda’s parents said that they were adpting a daughter frm China, and Amanda had danced with excitement.
2.Sheer excitement radiating frm her lightened cheeks(她那明亮的脸颊散发出无比的兴奋),Amanda searched her suvenirs frm China thrughly fr a dll which culd sing Chinese sngs. (2020.11温州一模)
亲情类有关的动作描写:
1、亲情类有关的表示犯错的动作描写
T cver his terrible actin(为了掩盖他糟糕的行为,不定式作状语), the terrified by glued the pieces tgether hastily and put the vase back t its place.(2021 广一模)
Fearing punishment(害怕惩罚,现在分词作状语), the suddenly inspired by said that a neighbur’s cat jumped in frm the windw and he culdn’t drive it away n matter hw hard he tried.(2021 广一模)
Glancing at the chclates with hesitatin,(犹豫地看着着巧克力,非谓语), the by timidly raised his head befre his mther. (2021 广一模)
4. 时间似乎静止了,我屏住呼吸,等待着我应得的残酷惩罚。 (用系动词+ing作伴随状语 ;定语从句。(2021 广一模)
Time seemed t stp as I held my breath, waiting fr the harsh punishments that I deserved.
2、亲情类有关的表示道歉的动作描写
1.“对不起,”他说到,轻轻的摸摸Jacksn的头。(2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考)
“I’m s srry.”he said, gently petting Jacksn’s head.
2.他放下手,小心翼翼的看了Carter 一眼,然后低下了头。(动作链)(2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考)
He put dwn his hand, glanced cautiusly at Carter and lwered his head.
3.T her surprise, she smiled at me and expressed her aplgy fr ignring my lneliness (为她忽略我的孤独道歉)as well as my difficulty with English cmmunicatin.(2021年沈阳市一模)
Appraching his little brther(走近他的弟弟), he gently petted Jacksn’s head, saying, ”I’m s srry fr lsing my temper, because I preferred blue at first, but nw I think red is als a gd chice. ” (2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考)
3、亲情类有关的表示原谅的动作描写
1. 他妈妈把手指放在他嘴唇让他停止说话,在他额头上吻了一下,然后走出了书房。(动作链)(2021 广一模)
His mther silenced him by gently putting her finger n his lips,gave a sft kiss n his frehead and walked ut f the study.
4、亲情类有关的表示帮助的动作描写
1.就在这时,Henry注意到我的尴尬,前来帮助我。他帮我擦去眼泪,弯下腰来,为我系了一个漂亮的蝴蝶结。“搞定。”(动作链)(2021年南通市二模)
At that time, Henry, wh nticed my embarrassment, came t my aid. He wiped away my tears, bent dwn and tied a beautiful knt. “It’s dne.”
2.Henry轻轻拍拍我的肩膀/耸耸肩(V-ing),笑着对我说:“没什么。我们是一家人,不是吗?”(2021年南通市二模)
Patting me gently n my shulder / Shrugging his shulder, he smiled/ grinned, "Nt a prblem. We are family, aren't we?"
3.演出一结束,我就冲到亨利身边,紧紧地拥抱着他,向他表示感谢。(2021年南通市二模)
The instant the perfrmance was ver, I rushed t Henry, huggedhim tightly and said thanks t him.
4.He tipted(踮起脚尖) t reach fr the dll, and like a respnsible elder brther, gave the precius dll t Shirley.(2020-2021年汕头市高三第一学期质量监测)
What’s mre, my mm even invited my friends hme t learn English, play games and taste delicius fd cked(ck) by herself, making(make) us feel invlved in the new life.(非谓语) (2021年沈阳市一模)
5、亲情类有关的表示尴尬的动作描写
1. “But, Mum, I…”, attempting t make smething clear, Ben awkwardly uttered nthing but sme wrds(尴尬地挤出几个字). (2021 广一模)
2. 我想去系好带子,但是无论我怎么努力我都没办法弄好。我站在舞台上不知所措, 泪水夺眶而出.(2021年南通市二模)
I wanted t fasten the knt, but hwever hard I tried, I just culdn’t make it. Standing n the stage, I was at a lss what t d next(茫然不知所措), with tears rlling dwn.
6、亲情类有关的表示回忆的动作描写
1. 在这时,毫无预料地,Carter突然想起Billy躺在地上哭的回忆,一直在他脑海回旋,提醒着他一些事情。(无灵主语句;ding非谓语;and连接两个同时进行的动作)(2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考)
At that mment, unexpectedly, the memry f the sight f Billy crying n the grund ccurred t Carter, hvering in his mind and reminding him smething .
2.看着Jacksn,Carter忍不住想象他的弟弟花整天小心涂好那辆车的情景。(2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考)
Lking at Jacksn, Carter culdn’t help imagining his little brther spending the whle day carefully painting the car.(2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考)
3. “I just wish I knew hw t help her,” Amanda said t herself, thinking f Li’s frightened eyes(想到Li害怕的双眼). (2020.11温州一模)
7、亲情类有关的动作描写
1. 我在房间里慢慢地准备和家人一起去社区剧院(V-ing伴随)。我还没有心情登上舞台。(2021年南通市二模)
I was in my rm slwly getting ready t head t the cmmunity theater with the rest f my family. I wasn't in the md fr being nstage.
2. 我发现我妈妈在浴室外面,拿着一本湿漉漉的书(V-ing伴随)。(2021年南通市二模)
I fund my mm utside the bathrm, hlding a wet bk.
3. 当亨利走在我们前面,往车走去时,妈妈把我拉到一边。(时间状语从句)(2021年南通市二模)
As Henry walked ahead f urs t the car
, my mm tk me aside.
4.“Surprise!” his brther Jacksn said, thrwing his arms (挥舞着手臂) int the air.(2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考)
5. Dexter was yelling(喊叫) and waving his hands at(向...挥舞着手) his little brther. (2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考)
Dexter yelled(喊叫), gave his yunger brther a hard shve(给...狠狠一幢) and kncked him t the grund(撞倒在地).(2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考)
“Make a wish,” my mm said in a sweet whisper(温声细语的说). (2021年沈阳市一模)
亲情类话题的结尾句
亲情类话题结尾的主题升华句
1. Frm then n, the three chclates rang the alarm in his heart every time he intended t lie, reminding him t be hnest提醒他要诚实(非谓语).(2021 广一模)
2. I ndded firmly, knwing a flwer f kindness and friendship began t blssm(善良和友谊之花开放) in bth f ur hearts.(2021年南通市二模)
3.This experience transfrmed my attitude twards Henry and ur relatinship has als been harmnius(我们的关系变得和谐) since then.(2021年南通市二模)
4. 正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会用心珍惜它的。(2021年南通市二模)
It was Henry’s kindness that made me feel the warmth frm ur family. I will treasure it with all my heart.
2、亲情类话题结尾的感悟式结尾:
1.All Ben's pride and selfishness went away and it dawned n him that “Hnesty is the best plicy.”(他突然想到“诚实是最好的做法”)(2021 广一模)
2.It was then that I came t the realizatin that families are nt bnded by bld relatinships but by lve(家人不是由于血缘而是因为爱联结在一起).(2021年南通市二模)
3.Frm then n, I came t knw a truth --- the string knt n the skirt culd g untied but the family knt culdn’t and never(家庭的联结永远不会散开).(2021年南通市二模)
4.The brightness in his brther’s eyes (他弟弟眼里的光亮)was mre valuable than the clr f the car. (2021.4 湖丽衢三地联考)
5.It was Amanda's persistence and lve fr her sister that brught abut such a harmnius and sweet family scene(和谐甜美的场面).(2020.11温州一模)
3、亲情类话题结尾的常见对话结尾
1. His mum said, “My sn, hnesty values mre than any antique(诚实比任何古董都有价值).” (2021 广一模)
2.Watching the lvely kids until they were ut f sight, he cntinued, "When he grws up, he will remember he purchased a dll fr his sister with the shells frm a shpkeeper. He will cherish lve and warmth in life(珍惜生命的爱和温暖)--cherish every little shining sea shell in his heart.(2020-2021年汕头市高三第一学期质量监测)
3. “Darling, it desn’t matter”, Daddy said in such a warm vice that I stpped crying and lifted my head. “It's lve that cunts(爱更重要).” (2021浙江省“七彩阳光”新高考研究联盟期中联考)
4、亲情类话题结尾的自然结尾
1. I put my right arm arund his neck, and we laughter tgether. We are real family(真正的家庭) nw.(2021年南通市二模)
2. At the same time, all f them laughed with excitement, the laughter eching in the rm(在房间里回荡). (2020.11温州一模)
5、亲情类话题结尾的环境衬托式结尾
1. Outside the windw, the birds perching n the tp f the branches chirruped happily(开心地唧唧叫), as if celebrating his wise chice.(2021 广一模)
2. A glden shaft f sunlight(一大片金黄的阳光) , filtering in thrugh the windw and, tgether with lve between family members, warmed up tw yung suls.(2020.11温州一模)
6、亲情类话题结尾的展望未来式结尾:
Many years have passed, but the valuable lessn Ben's mum taught him abut hnesty will remain in his memry(留在他的记忆里).(2021 广一模)
Maybe it wn’t be s bad t have a new persn in my crner f the wrld(我世界的角落) after all.(2021年南通市二模)
虽然我们不是血亲,但我们之间的关系甚至比那更紧密。(2021年南通市二模)
Althugh we are nt bld relatives,the tie between us is even strnger than that.
7、亲情类话题结尾的回首反思式结尾:
Lking back(回想起来), Ben cngratulated himself n making the right decisin, which was taught by his mther with several chclates. (2021 广一模)
8、亲情类话题结尾的原文呼应式结尾:
1. Radiant laughter burst ut frm the rm cnstantly, and the whle family was envelped in verwhelming happiness(包围在强烈的幸福中). (2020.11温州一模)
2. Frm then n, Amanda and Li embarked n(开始) a life as Amanda imagined——ging t park tgether, reading bks tgether. (2020.11温州一模)
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