素材9 动物篇：私家读后续写分话题语料库整理

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Every Dg Has Its Day
Rsce was a big, ugly bulldg. He wasn’t very smart, but he had a gd heart. Rsce’s wner left him chained up utside each day when he went t wrk. Rsce liked being utside. He was always nice t everyne. He didn’t even bther the rat that lived in a nearby hle.
A grup f bys ften passed Rsce n their way t and frm schl. One day, ne f the bys had a candy bar in his hand as he walked by. Rsce jumped up when he smelled that candy bar. He tried t run ver t the by, but his chain stpped him shrt. The bys all laughed when they saw Rsce pulling n his chain. The by with the candy bar held it in frnt f Rsce’s nse. He kept it just ut f reach t tease him. All the bys laughed as Rsce tried t reach the candy bar but culdn’t.
Frm then n, thse bys never passed Rsce withut ding smething mean t him. Pr Rsce was having a hard time and felt scared. The rat that lived in the alley had been watching. She understd that peple were smetimes mean t animals fr n gd reasn. She didn’t think it was nice. She decided t help Rsce.
When Rsce went t sleep fr his afternn nap, she quietly sneaked ver t him. She began chewing n Rsce’s leather cllar arund his neck which the chain was cnnected t. She had chewed thrugh mre than half f it when she heard ut vices dwn the alley.
The rat raced back int her hle and saw that the bys were cming. Rsce was awake nw. When the bys saw him, they laughed and started thrwing sticks at him. Rsce was hit and he barked angrily at the bys with all his strength. This time when he gt t the end f his chain, his cllar brke ff. He was free.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为75左右；
2.至少使用3个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分为一段，开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线明确标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 2:
The bys ran ff as fast as they culd, but ne f them slipped and fell.
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【答案】The bys ran ff as fast as they culd, but ne f them slipped and fell. Befre he culd get up again, Rsce was there. Thinking f all the mean things he and ther bys had dne, the by was s frightened f Rsce’s revenge that he started crying and begged fr mercy. When Rsce saw hw scared the by was, he came up and gently licked his hand. That by was grateful fr Rsce and he prmised nt t bther again. Every dg has its day, and that day was definitely Rsce’s. It was a pretty gd day fr the rat, t.
【解析】
分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，Rsce是一只心地善良的斗牛犬，主人上班时把Rsce拴在外面，但是经常被一群孩子戏弄，旁边的老鼠看不下去了，就趁Rsce睡觉时把和狗链连接的皮革颈圈咬断一大半，这时男孩们又来戏弄Rsce，Rsce挣断了颈圈。
【详解】续写部分分为一段，开头是：男孩们快速跑开，但是其中一个滑了一跤摔倒了……，所以应该写接下来发生的事情，即Rsce自由了，追上了这个摔倒的男孩，男孩由于平时戏弄Rsce，此刻觉得很害怕，Rsce看到男孩的样子只是走上前舔了舔他的手，男孩对Rsce非常感激，承诺以后再也不欺负Rsce了。
续写时要求至少使用3个短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为75左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：run ff，as fast as they culd，beg fr等高级词汇；Thinking f all the mean things he and ther bys had dne, the by was s frightened f Rsce’s revenge that he started crying and begged fr mercy. 中Befre引导时间状语从句，Thinking f all the mean things he and ther bys had dne, the by was s frightened f Rsce’s revenge that he started crying and begged fr mercy. 中引导的结果状语从句等高级句式。
版块二---读后续写精彩词句集锦
副词
轻柔地拉Pulled gently;；不断地cnstantly；犹豫地hesitantly；直视她的眼睛lk directly int her eyes；紧密地匹配clsely match；稍有不同地be slightly different frm；不耐烦地掠过impatiently skimmed；立即回答answered instantly；开玩笑地责骂jkingly sclded；绝对安全abslutely safe；骄傲地咧嘴笑Grinned prudly；体贴地放置cnsiderately placed；焦急地等待waited anxiusly;；清楚地记得clearly remembered；呼吸沉重breathed heavily;；紧握squeeze tightly；热情地帮助warmly helped；几乎晕倒nearly fainted；
形容词
浅浅的河流Shallw river；柔和的声音in a sft vice；陌生的诊所unfamiliar clinic；我珍藏的戒指my treasured rings；惊人的amazing；退休的经理a retired manager；凯利感到一阵温暖的光辉Kelly felt a warm glw. 彻底搜查了made a thrugh search f;一条一动不动的蛇a mtinless snake；频繁地拜访餐馆frequent restaurant visits；这对一个父亲来说是一个绝望、伤心和尴尬的处境。It was a desperate, heartbreaking and embarrassing situatin fr a father.
板块三--能力提升（现学现用）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It's getting ht. It's time t put n lighter clthes and pen up the windws. I can't wait t d s. Yesterday, an unfreseen visit t the kitchen happened during the brief time we were ut. Tw daring sparrws (麻雀) had risked landing n ur territry t enjy the freshness in ur sink and sme ther breadcrumbs (面包屑) n ur kitchen cunter.
Actually, sparrws are everywhere. The tiny, gray -and brwn birds are fund n every cntinent except Antarctica, flying r jumping arund cities, picking up leftver fd n side-walks, and smetimes chasing with native bird species. These small creatures have adapted t living alngside humans- similar t pet dgs.
When yu cme acrss such sudden callers, yu are likely t sense it as an unwanted visitr int yur cmfrt zne, r yu might receive it as a lvely angel f life. I chse the secnd ptin, with n hesitatin while my husband preferred driving them away. After all, I've never cme t stp t feel the relatinship with sparrws.
I recalled when I was a little girl living in the city, I lived in an apartment with a flat rf viewed frm ur kitchen windw. Every day my mm and I wuld g ut t feed the sparrws. She taught me hw t call them with a clicking sund she made with her tngue. I have lved sparrws ever since. S every day in my spare time, I can't stp bserving and celebrating their dance frm ur windw. I stuffed them with the leftvers n ur tableclth after every meal. And I have prvided them with every kind f bases and stands f ur huse.
Undubtedly, they feel at ease in ur backyard. And that has led them t gather up curage and slide int ur kitchen, bedrm r even reading rm. Perhaps because they have the feeling that we dn' t cnsider them truble makers, but friendly neighbrs. But I am slightly wrried abut their drppings (粪便).
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One day, they left sme drppings in my husband's reading rm.
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Abut tw weeks later, I heard my husband calling “Oh, my Gd!”
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【答案】One day, they left sme drppings in my husband 's reading rm. They happened t dirty his imprtant wrk reprts n the desk. He was s angry that he asked me t clse the windws. I immediately did a thrugh cleaning and prmised that the drs and windws f the reading rm will be clsed tightly, and the sparrws can't break in again. My husband kept silent, and at last he calmed dwn. I knw he is a caring persn, wh always lves animals.
Abut tw weeks later, I heard my husband calling “Oh, my Gd !” Thinking smething similar happened again, I ran ver t have a lk. He was lking ut f the windw and said excitedly, “Lk! What a surprise! There are three eggs in the sparrw's nest! They 're ging t have babies f their wn!” He was happy, like a child and uncnsciusly pened the clsed windw. After that, there are always breadcrumbs n the windw platfrm f the reading rm.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，在作者生活之处有许多麻雀，作者欢迎它们的到来，在后院为它们准备了食物和落脚处，作者将它们当成了友好的邻居，只是有点担心它们的粪便。
【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：有一天，它们在我丈夫的书房里留下了一些粪便，所以应该写粪便落在书桌上给丈夫带来的尴尬和懊恼，要详细描述丈夫的动作和心理，与作者的反应及应对措施等。第二段开头是：大约两周后，我听到我丈夫说:“哦，天哪!”本段应该写丈夫的感叹、作者的好奇，并描述事情的原委，以及丈夫对于麻雀态度的转变等等。要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右，按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：d a thrugh cleaning，break in，run ver，have a lk等高级词汇；结果状语从句，如He was s angry that he asked me t clse the windws；宾语从句，如I immediately did a thrugh cleaning and prmised that the drs and windws f the reading rm will be clsed tightly, and the sparrws can't break in again；定语从句，如I knw he is a caring persn, wh always lves animals等高级句式。