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写作方法指导
命题作文的基本要求：
1．习作要有扎实的英语基本功底，要牢固掌握英语基础知识，文章中的大小写、标点符号、词法、句法及语法等都要表达正确。
2．要按照命题要求正确采用相应的行文格式撰写习作，层次分明，结构严谨，句式排列整齐，段落过渡自然，富有条理性。
3．文章内容前后照应，词语运用准确到位，语言流畅，言简意赅，内容充实，叙事完整，深化主题。
4．要根据文章规定的单词数组织安排文章的结构，不要忽上忽下。
写作技巧：
第一步，审题。
无论写什么样的文章都不能离开文章的主题。主题是文章所要表达的中心，是文章的灵魂主宰。如果审不清主题，就有可能出现“下笔千言，离题万里”的情况。
第二步，选材。
审完题之后，就应该着手选材了。主题是文章的宗旨，材料必须为主题服务：主题必须统领材料，二者是密不可分、相辅相成的关系。既然要选材，就必须有充足的备选材料。只有平时多观察、多学习、多积累，才能保证材料充分、详实。在具备充足的材料的基础上，要学会去粗取精，去伪存真。还要分清材料的主次与详略，做到详略得当。
第三步，列提纲。
写文章之前列个提纲是个非常好的写作习惯。列提纲可以使杂乱无章的材料变得井然有序；列提纲可以使你紧扣主题不跑题；列提纲还可以节约你的时间，提高写作效率。
第四步，动笔。
写作时一定要切题，抓住要点。题目要求的内容一定要写进去，以保证内容的完整。对于与要求无关的内容切忌任意发挥，画蛇添足。写作时要注意语法正确、用词得当、语言地道。在写不同题材和体裁的文章时，所用的句式、时态及用词均不同。写作时要多从交流的角度考虑以上几个方面。
第五步，检查修改。
要提高英语写作水平，除了准确遣词造句、严谨布局外，文章的修改也是很重要的一步。文章写好后，要经过反复修改润色，才能措辞准确，句子流畅，因此修改文章是提高写作水平的有效方法。
写作模板
One day, .(事情发生的时间、地点等)
When I was , smething strange happened .(事情发生的过程) Finally, .(结果)
I’ll never frget (感受)
常用表达
亮点词汇
1、叙事顺序
first, t begin with, first f all, firstly首先
secndly, then, besides, what's mre, in additin, mrever然后
at last, last but nt least, abve all, all in all, t sum up, n the whle, finally最后
2、时间描写
after 之后after a shrt /lng time/perid在一段很短/很长的时间后
afterwards后来；然后as sn as ...一就
frm that time n从那时起immediately立刻;立即
lately最近;近来;不久前nwadays现在;如今
recently最近shrtly马上;立刻
since then从那时起when, while ...的时候
3、地点词汇
church教堂twer塔
bridge桥statin车站
drmitry宿舍supermarket超市
shp商店hspital医院
theater剧院playgrund操场
cinema电影院museum博物馆
4.动作描写
g ut fr a picnic去野餐have a party举行聚会
g camping去露营ride a hrse骑马
have a walk散步fly kites放风筝
take phts拍照hurry t..匆忙赶到...
see a dctr看医生set ff出发
watch the match看比赛climb the muntains爬山
5、结尾词汇
thanks t多亏as a result结果
luckily幸运地because/ because f因为
at last/ in the end最后
中考真题精讲
（2023·四川南充·统考中考真题）
你校英语报以“Where there is a will, there is a way（有志者事竟成）”为题向全校学生开展征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
（1）你对该谚语的理解；
（2）你生活中的一个事例；
（3）你的感悟。
要求：1.必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4.词数100左右（短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。
Where there is a will, there is a way
Have yu heard f the saying “Where there is a will, there is a way”? It means _________________________
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【答案】例文：
Where there is a will, there is a way
Have yu heard f the saying “Where there is a will, there is a way”? It means if yu are really determined t d smething, hwever difficult it might be, yu will eventually find a way t d it well. The imprtant pint is that yu must have the will t achieve success.
Take me fr example. Speaking English used t be difficult fr me. In Grade 7, I culdn’t speak English clearly and my classmates always laughed at me. With my English teacher’s help, I made plans t imprve it. I read English texts alud fr an hur every mrning. I als made a freign friend nline. I talked t her twice a week. She helped me crrect the way I spke English. Day by day my spken English imprved a lt. Last mnth I wn first prize in my schl’s English Speech Cntest.
This experience has taught me that nthing is t difficult as lng as yu make the decisin t d it, just the saying ges, “Where there is a will, there is a way”.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给的要点提示，结合自身经历，谈谈你对“有志者，事竟成”的理解和感悟，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，并表达自己对该谚语的理解；
第二步，以自身经历为例来阐述；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①take me fr example就拿我来说
②used t be过去常常是
③make plan t d制定计划做某事
④make the decisin t d sth下决定做某事
[高分句型]
①The imprtant pint is that yu must have the will t achieve success. (表语从句)
②This experience has taught me that nthing is t difficult as lng as yu make the decisin t d it, just the saying ges, “Where there is a will, there is a way”.(as lng as引导的条件状语从句)
（2023·江苏苏州·统考中考真题）
Happy Hme Club本期的主题是“Hw t make Suzhu mre beautiful”，你打算以“Starting frm me and nw”为题向中外朋友介绍你的想法，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括：
1. 触动你的一件事情；
2. 这件事给你的启示；
3. 你的倡议。
注意：
1. 词数：100左右。
2. 内容完整（照抄阅读语篇不得分）
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Starting frm me and nw
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【答案】例文
Starting frm me and nw
Last weekend, I went t the city park with my classmates. When we gt there, we were amazed that there were different kinds f rubbish n the grund. We felt very sad abut that. The city is ur hme, s we shuld try ur best t keep the city clean.
First f all, we shuld prtect ur envirnment. Dn’t thrw rubbish arund r spit anywhere. We’d better plant mre trees t make the air clean. Secnd, we are suppsed t be friendly and helpful t thers. Third, we ught t bey the traffic rules. Dn’t ride t fast r play n the street. Last but nt least, remember t save energy. Turn ff the lights and taps in time.
As lng as we try ur best and starting frm me and nw, I believe Suzhu will becme mre and mre beautiful.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求根据题干中的提示介绍如何让自己的家乡变得更美，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍触动你的一件事情以及这件事情给你的启示；
第二步，为了使苏州变得更美，介绍你的倡议；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望家乡会更美丽”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds f 各种各样的
②be suppsed t d sth. 应该做某事
③remember t d sth. 记得做某事
④in time 及时
[高分句型]
①When we gt there, we were amazed that there were different kinds f rubbish n the grund.（when引导时间状语从句）
②We’d better plant mre trees t make the air clean. （“sb. had better d sth.”表建议的句型）
③I believe Suzhu will becme mre and mre beautiful.（宾语从句）
（2023·辽宁丹东·统考中考真题）
1．保持善良，传播爱心。我们都曾帮助过别人或接受过别人的帮助。请结合自身经历，以“The Spread f Lve”为题，讲述一次你帮助别人或别人帮助你的经历，并谈谈你的感悟及今后的打算。
写作要求：
1. 语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯；
2. 书写工整规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；
4. 词数：70词左右。
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【答案】例文
The Spread f Lve
Everyne has different ideas abut life. In my pinin, life is beautiful and full f lve.
Several weeks ag, my classmate Bb was badly ill. He had t be in hspital fr a lng time. But his family was t pr t affrd it. S I decided t raise mney t help him. When I sent all the mney t Bb, he and his parents were deeply mved.
Helping thers makes me happy. Maybe smetimes we feel unlucky, but we shuld believe that life is beautiful and lve will be arund us frever. And I will als help mre peple in the future.
【详解】
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍生活充满爱；
第二步，具体阐述你帮助别人或别人帮助你的经历；
第三步，最后表达自己的感悟及今后的打算。
[亮点词汇]
①in my pinin在我看来
②太……而不能……
③decide t d决定做
[高分句型]
①When I sent all the mney t Bb, he and his parents were deeply mved.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Maybe smetimes we feel unlucky, but we shuld believe that life is beautiful and lve will be arund us frever.（that引导的宾语从句）
（2023·山东东营·统考中考真题）
旅游是我们看世界的重要方式，它可以让我们开阔视野，增长见识，丰富阅历，陶冶情操。如果你有机会出去旅游，你最想去的地方是哪里？为什么想去那个地方？你想在那个地方干些什么？请以“The place I want t visit”为题，写一篇100 词左右的短文。
要求：
1. 文中不得出现考生姓名、学校及其他相关信息。
2. 照抄试卷内容不得分。
The place I want t visit
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【答案】例文：
The place I want t visit
Beijing, the secnd largest city in ur cuntry, is the place I want t visit.
There are several reasns why I wuld like t visit Beijing. First, Beijing is the capital f China, and has a histry f mre than 3,000 years. It has been the capital fr many dynasties. Secnd, there are many histrical buildings, such as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace. There are als sme new stadiums, including the Bird Nest and the Water Cube, which were built fr the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.
I am really lking frward t ging there and visiting all the wnderful places. At the same time, I hpe Beijing will be mre and mre beautiful.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：题目要求以“The place I want t visit”为题写短文介绍自己想要参观的地方。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍想要去参观哪里；
第二步，谈谈想去这个地方的原因；
第三步，介绍想要在那里干些什么。
[亮点词汇]
①wuld like t d sth. 想要做某事
②such as 例如
③lk frward t ding sth. 期待做某事
④at the same time 与此同时
[高分句型]
①There are several reasns why I wuld like t visit Beijing.（why引导定语从句）
②Secnd, there are many histrical buildings, such as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace.（there be句型）
（2022·重庆B卷·中考真题）
有效控制愤怒能帮助我们恢复理智，找回方向，解决问题。你校English Cner 将进行“Cntrl Yur Anger and Slve Yur Prblem”的成长分享。请你写一篇发言稿，讲述你通过有效控制愤怒，成功解决某一问题的小故事，并分享你的感悟。
要求：
1. 80—120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考词汇：anger n.[U] 愤怒
1.有效控制愤怒，成功解决问题的小故事（起因、经过、结果）
2.你的感悟（保持冷静、学会反思、有效沟通……）
3. ……
Cntrl Yur Anger and Slve Yur Prblem
Have yu ever cntrlled yur anger and slved a prblem better?___________________________________
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Thanks fr listening.
【答案】例文
Cntrl Yur Anger and Slve Yur Prblem
Have yu ever cntrlled yur anger and slved a prblem better? Here is my experience.
Last term, I bught a magazine that I had always wanted. I liked it s much that I was careful every time I carried it. But ne day, my best friend Tm tk the magazine withut telling me. When I fund it, I was very angry. But I calmed dwn sn. I thught f hw Tm helped me when I was in truble and I didn’t want t break the relatinship between us. S I cntrlled my anger and decided t have a talk with him. I tld him that he shuld tell me if he wanted t read the magazine. After the talk, ur relatinship became strnger.
Frm this experience, when we are angry, we shuld calm urselves dwn and learn t reflect. The mst imprtant is t cmmunicate with thers n time s that we can slve the prblems better.
Thanks fr listening.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文以“Cntrl Yur Anger and Slve Yur Prblem”为题，结合自己的经历讲述通过有效控制愤怒，成功解决一件小事，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。第一段引入话题；第二段讲述自己有效控制愤怒，成功解决问题的小故事；第三段描述自己的感悟。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
（2022·江苏无锡·中考真题）
生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近，无锡教育电视台将举办题为“The Persn I Want t Thank”的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、 朋友……)，请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。
注意事项：
1. 演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数在100个左右，演讲稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
5. 演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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【答案】例文
The Persn I Want t Thank
In my junir schl life, many peple have helped me. I thank them very much. But the persn I want t thank mst is my English teacher Miss Lee.
Miss Lee is beautiful with lng hair. And she is kind. She helps me a lt. She ften helps me with my English. When I am in truble, she always encurages me t face my difficulties and gives me gd advice. I still remember that nce I failed in an imprtant English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and tld me sme gd ways t imprve my English. With her help, I made great prgress in English and became interested in it. I’m very thankful fr all that she has dne fr me. She has a great influence n me, and her help is very useful fr my future develpment.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。写作时要根据汉语提示的内容，写出最想感谢的人是谁；他/她的外表、性格；举例说明为何感谢他/她；以及对你的影响。
2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述内容；叙述想感谢的人的外表和性格时应用一般现在时，叙述具体的故事时应用一般过去时。同时写作时注意语句的连贯性，保证词汇和语法的正确使用。
（2022·湖南湘西·中考真题）
随着义务教育阶段“双减”政策的全面实施，合理安排课外生活对我们初中生尤为重要。某报刊青少年专栏以“我们丰富的课外生活”为主题开展征文活动。请根据以下表格内容提示，以 “Our Clrful Life after Schl”为题，写一篇英语短文介绍丰富多彩的课外生活，并推荐你最喜欢的一项活动且说明原因。
要求:
1. 结构完整，要点齐全，可适当发挥；
2. 表达通顺， 语言规范，书写清晰；
3. 文中不能出现任何真实的人名、校名等信息；
4. 词数80左右。文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Our Clrful Life after Schl
Life after schl is an imprtant part in ur daily life. Hw can we make it mre clrful? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Our Clrful Life after Schl
Life after schl is an imprtant part in ur daily life. Hw can we make it mre clrful? We can take part in different vlunteering activities. We can develp ur hbbies and interests, like singing, dancing and s n. We ften get clse t nature, such as climbing muntains, camping. We can als learn sme useful skills in ur daily life, such as cking. I like singing because it is als a gd way t relax myself. Besides, in the music club, I can make many friends. All in all, after-schl activities make my life mre clrful and meaningful.
【解析】
1. 题干解读：题目要求以“Our Clrful Life after Schl”为题介绍课外活动；要求包含表格中的内容提示。
2. 写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时为主；采用第一人称口吻；可采用1段落格式，阐述最喜欢的课外活动以及原因；注意无语法和拼写错误。
（2021·江苏南京市·中考真题）
某英文网站正在举办征文活动，请根据网站征文要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
注意:
1. 内容涵盖要点, 全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右（已给出的文章开头, 不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息, 如校名、人名等。
My Beautiful Schl Day
My schl life is full f beauty. __________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
My Beautiful Schl Day
My schl life is full f beauty. I will never frget the day which makes me feel meaningful.
My best friend Lucy and I always ride bikes tgether after schl. One day, I waited a lng time but didn’t see her. Then I searched fr her in the crner f ur schl. She was crying at that time. She tld me that she was nervus because she wuld have an English test. I decided t help her with English. That evening, I helped her review the key pints and ntes. Tw days later, she tld me that she passed it. I felt that helping thers wh are in need was very meaningful.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“我美丽的学校生活”写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时。分为两段式，第一段引出主题；第二段描述自己的经历，并发表自己的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
（2021·浙江宁波市·中考真题）
假如你是李华, 上个月你校举行了 “祖国在我心中”的主题活动（theme event）, 请你根据以下提供的信息并结合你参加这个主题活动的经历, 写一篇英语短文向你校英语报投稿。
注意：
（1）短文必须包括导图的所有要点, 并适当发挥;
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
（3）词数 80-100;标题已给出, 不计入总词数。
Mtherland in My Heart
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【答案】
Mtherland in My Heart
Last mnth, ur schl held an event with the theme f “Mtherland in My Heart” t express ur lve fr ur mtherland.
During the event, we had many activities, including singing red sngs and telling stries abut the Red Army. I tk part in the singing cmpetitin. Besides, I attended the speech cntest in which I tld a stry abut a her. Many students were mved by my stry.
I think this event is very meaningful. I’m prud f my cuntry. I hpe ur mtherland will becme much greater and everybdy can live a better life.
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目要求根据所给提示，以“Mtherland in My Heart”为题，结合自己参加“祖国在我心中”主题活动的经历写篇文章，向学校英语报投稿。
2.写作指导：人称应采用第一人称，介绍主题活动内容时用一般过去时，表达自己的感受时用一般现在时。注意要包含所给要点，保证条理清晰。
名校模拟题提升练
写作方法指导
（2022上·吉林长春·九年级校考期末）
“少年强，则国强”，青少年要勇敢肩负起时代赋予的重任，脚踏实地、志存高远。进入九年级，每个同学都在为进入梦想中的学校而努力着。那么，为了实现你的梦想，你打算怎么做？请你以“My Dream, My Future”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。写一写你的期待和梦想；为了实现梦想，你计划做哪些方面的努力？至少2点.；呼吁大家一起为梦想而加油！
要求：
1.可适当增加细节，使行文流畅；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
My Dream, My Future
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My Dream, My Future
I’m a Grade 9 student nw. The senir high schl entrance examinatin is cming. I’m busy getting ready fr it every day, such as reading alud in the mrning, finishing lts f exercises and s n.
It’s my dream t g t high schl. T achieve my dream, I have sme plans. First, I’ll listen t my teachers carefully in class. Every lessn is imprtant, I can’t miss any pint. Secnd, I need t finish my hmewrk n time.
It’s a gd way t check what I have learned and hw I have learned. Finally, it’s necessary t pay attentin t my physical and mental health, which are imprtant fr me t face the big challenge.
With every effrt, I hpe my dream will cme true sn. Let’s wrk hard t fight fr a bright future.
【详解】
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：本文以“My Dream, My Future”为题，结合题干中的提示介绍如何实现自己的梦想，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单说明自己的梦想；
第二步，具体阐说如何实现梦想；
第三步，最后呼吁大家一起为梦想而加油。
[亮点词汇]
① get ready fr作准备
② n time准时
③ pay attentin t注意
[高分句型]
① T achieve my dream, I have sme plans.（动词不定式表目的）
② It’s a gd way t check what I have learned and hw I have learned.（what引导宾语从句）
③Finally, it’s necessary t pay attentin t my physical and mental health, which are imprtant fr me t face the big challenge.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
（2023上·天津和平·九年级统考期中）
每个时代都有自己的偶像，青少年们在成长中也一定有榜样的力量在指引。例如：航天英雄杨利伟，奥运冠军苏炳添，抗疫英雄钟南山等等。其实，只要用心观察，平凡的生活中也有我们的偶像。他们陪伴我们成长，指引我们前行，给予我们力量。
请根据以下提示，以“My her”为题，讲述一位平凡生活中的偶像。
(1)偶像：妈妈 年龄：40多岁 职业： 医生 爱好：读书
(2) 生活中照顾我；遇到困难给我建议；
(3)经常花很多时间工作，目的是帮助更多的人；
(4)两年前，去贫困地区当志愿者，培训年轻医生并且帮助建立医院；
(5) 我认为……。
写作要求：
(1) 不得使用真实姓名和学校名。
(2)包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
(3)字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚。
(4)词数80词左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数。)
My her
My her is my mther and __________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
My her
My her is my mther and she is frty years ld. She is a dctr and enjys reading. My mther takes care f me in life and gives me sme advice whenever I meet difficulties. She ften spends a lt f time wrking t help mre peple. Tw years ag, she vlunteered in pr areas, trained yung dctrs, and helped fund hspitals. I believe that my mther is great. When I grw up, I als want t becme smene like my mther and make cntributins t the cuntry and peple.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头提示，介绍妈妈的年龄、职业和爱好；
第二步，介绍妈妈在生活中照顾我；遇到困难给我建议；
第三步，介绍妈妈经常花很多时间工作，目的是帮助更多的人；
第四步，介绍两年前，去贫困地区当志愿者，培训年轻医生并且帮助建立医院；
第五步，发表观点。
[亮点词汇]
①enjy ding sth.喜欢做某事
②take care f 关心
③grw up长大
④make cntributins t为……作出贡献
[高分句型]
①My mther takes care f me in life and gives me sme advice whenever I meet difficulties.（whenever引导的时间状语从句）
②She ften spends a lt f time wrking t help mre peple.（spend time／mney (in) ding sth. 花费时间(金钱)做某事）
③I believe that my mther is great.（that引导的宾语从句）
④When I grw up, I als want t becme smene like my mther and make cntributins t the cuntry and peple.（when引导的时间状语从句）
（2023·上海崇明·统考二模）
Write at least 60 wrds n the tpic “N Gains withut Pains”（以“一分耕耘一分收获”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）。
成功的背后都凝聚着辛勤的付出。请结合自己的亲身经历，分享你的一个“没有耕耘就不可能有收获”的故事。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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N Gains withut Pains
I think the saying “N pains, n gains.” means we can’t get anywhere in life if we dn’t wrk hard.
As we all knw, scientists make prgress nly after years f careful research. We students get gd scres after mnths f hard wrk. Fr example, I have imprved my physics by putting in lts f effrt. At schl, I listened t the teacher carefully and tk dwn lts f ntes in class. And when I had questins, I asked my physics teacher r my classmates fr help. After schl, I finished my physics hmewrk as sn as I gt hme. Als, I did lts f physics exercises. Day by day, I was making prgress in physics and nw I’m ne f the tp physics students in my class.
In shrt, n pains, n gains. We will achieve success as lng as we wrk hard.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单说明“没有耕耘就不可能有收获”的含义；
第二步，具体结合自身经历分享一下；
第三步，最后作小结。
[亮点词汇]
①as we all knw众所周知
②fr example比如
③in shrt总之
[高分句型]
①when I had questins, I asked my physics teacher r my classmates fr help. （when引导的时间状语从句）
②I finished my physics hmewrk as sn as I gt hme.（as sn as引导的时间状语从句）年份
地区
题目
命题形式
2023年
四川南充
Where there is a will, there is a way
命题作文
江苏苏州
Starting frm me and nw
命题作文
辽宁丹东
The Spread f Lve
命题作文
山东东营
The place I want t visit
命题作文
2022年
重庆B卷
Cntrl Yur Anger and Slve Yur Prblem
命题作文
江苏无锡
The Persn I Want t Thank
命题作文
湖南湘西
Our Clrful Life after Schl
命题作文
2021年
江苏南京
My Beautiful Schl Day
命题作文
浙江宁波
Mtherland in My Heart
命题作文
Our Clrful Life after Schl
take part in different vlunteering activities
develp hbbies and interests, like singing, dancing...
get clse t nature, such as climbing muntains, camping...
learn sme useful skills in ur daily life, such as...
This new glbal site is a place fr students t share their ideas. We are lking fr yur beautiful schl day t inspire（鼓舞）ur readers. Did yu help anyne at schl? Did yu enjy a beautiful sng in yur art lessn? Did yu have an amazing experience in the schl lab?
Yur schl life is full f beauty. Chse a beautiful schl day. Write a passage t tell us what yu did that day and why yu think it was beautiful.
Send yur writing t us right nw!