2024届高考英语读后续写公式总结（语言描写+结尾升华）讲义

这是一份2024届高考英语读后续写公式总结（语言描写+结尾升华）讲义，共5页。学案主要包含了正确使用标点符号，避免重复使用 say，如何让对话更生动等内容，欢迎下载使用。

一、正确使用标点符号
(1)说话人+说话内容
“说”后用逗号， 引号内第一个字母大写，句尾标点符号放在引号内。
He said,“Yu are my best friend!”
(2) 说话内容+说话人
陈述句引号内用逗号， 引号外第一个字母小写：疑问句或感叹句引号内用问号或感叹号， 引号外第一个字母小写。且“某人说”可以写作“sb.said”也可以写作“said sb.”。
① "Yes," he said.
②"Yu may bth g," said Andy.
③"Dn't mve," she said t Mike in a sft vice.
(3)说话内容+说话人+说话内容
“某人说”可以写作“sb.said”也可以写作“said sb.”:
“某人说”前面引号内用逗号，引号外第一个字母小写。
“某人说”后面如果用句号，则后面引号内第一个字母大写；
“某人说”后面如果用逗号，则后面引号内第一个字母小写。
①“That's cl,”he said.“Can I have a try?”
②“Yu'd better let me g,”teased her twin brther, William.“There are dangers all ver this place.”
③“Yu can g any place yu want,”Amy said,“but I think yu'll find what yu need.”
二、避免重复使用 say
在进行语言描写时很多同学全部都只用“said”这一个单词，这样使得句子重复呆板，因此要学会灵活多变的各种“说”。
explain 解释
state 陈述
prtest 抗议
sb哭诉
insist 坚持
cmfrt安慰
repeat 重复
agree同意
rder命令
scream 尖叫
prmise承诺
whisper 耳语
yell/shut 大叫
declare 声称
add 补充
assure 保证
cmplain 抱怨
aplgise 道歉
annunce 宣告
argue 争论
interrupt 打断
beg 请求
demand 要求
mck 嘲讽
claim 声称
cry/exclaim 喊叫
suggest/advise 建议
stammer/stutter/stumble 结巴
ask /inquire 询问
reply/answer/respnd回答
1.“Christine !照顾好你弟弟!”母亲高声喊道。
“Christine! Take care f yur yung brther!”Mther shuted at the tp f her vice.
2.“Hannah，你知道她在哪儿吗?她怎么样?请告诉我。”他恳求道。
"Hannah, d yu knw where she is? Hw is she? Please tell me."He begged.
3.“报纸上有一个圣诞愿望竞赛。”Amy的妈妈宣布，“给圣诞老人写封信可能会得奖。”
“There's a Christmas wish cn test n the newspaper,”Amy's mm annunced.“Write a letter t Santa, and yu might win a prize.”
三、如何让对话更生动
第一类
“……,”sb said in a …vice/tne.某人以…的声音、 语气说到
in a pleasant tne/vice 以一种愉悦的声音/语气
in a firm tne/vice以一种坚定的声音/语气
in a rude tne/vice以一种粗鲁的声音/语气
in a sad tne/vice 以一种悲伤的声音/语气
也可以用 in a vice/tne f+名词的搭配
in a tne/vice f surprise 用一种惊讶的语气
in a tne/vice f curisity 用一种好奇的语气
in a tne/vice f impatience 用一种不耐烦的语气
in a tne/vice f cmmand用一种命令的语气
1.“你一定是安妮吧?”他用友好的语气说。
“Yu must be Annie,”he said in a friendly tne.
2.“我很乐意。”艾米莉用愉快的语气说。
“I wuld lve t.”said Emily in a pleasant tne.
3.“我不想和你一起去。”艾米丽用不耐烦的语气说。
“I dn't want t g with yu.”said Emily in a tne f impatience.
4.“不，我没有告诉他这个秘密。”他用低沉的语调说.
“N, I didn’t tell him the secret.”he said in a lw tne.
第二类
“xxx,”sb said in/with+心情类名词.某人以…的心情说道……
1.“Yu are safe,”Tm cried with excitement.
“你安全啦！”Tm 激动地说道。
2.“I hate yu!”she screamed in anger.
“我讨厌你！”她生气地大喊道。
3.“What a lvely rabbit,”I said in astnishment.
“好可爱的兔子啊！”我诧异地说到。
4.“Nice t meet yu,”he said with enthusiasm.
“很高兴认识你。 ”他热情地说。
第三类
“xxx,”sb said +adv..+ding.(添加非谓语动词表达后续动作)
1.“我去给我们拿点咖啡。”她温柔地说道，朝厨房走去。
“I'll get us sme cffee,” she said gently, heading fr the kitchen.
2.“我再也不相信你了。”他生气地大喊道，砰的一声关上门。
“I dn't believe yu anymre.”He yelled angrily, slamming the dr.
3.“我被狼袭击了，我以为再也见不到你了。”麦克激动地说，紧紧抱住他们。
“I was attacked by a wlf and I thught I wuld never see yu again.”Mike said excitedly.hugging them tightly.
第四类
sb did sth.did sth and said“xxx.” (添加动作链)
1.他拦下出租车， 提着行李箱跳上车， 对司机说： "请去警察局。"
He stpped the taxi, jumped in with the suitcase and tld the driver.“G t the plice statin,please.”
2.她冲上前去，跪在地上，喃喃地说：“对不起，我的宝贝。”
She dashed frward.knelt dwn and murmured," I'm srry, my baby.”
3.我匆忙穿上衣服，拿起包说：“请等一下我！”
I put n my clthes hurriedly, grabbed my bag and said."Please wait fr me!"
Translatin
1.“没人能理解我！”安迪哽咽着， 双手掩面。
“Nbdy culd understand me!”Andy sbbed, burying his face in his hands.
2.农夫抱起狗，跪下来，轻声说：“现在是你的了。”
The farmer picked up the dg, knelt dwn and said in a sft vice,“It's yurs nw.”
3.她眼里噙着泪水说： “对不起。 ”
With tears in her eves, she said,“Srry.”
4.“嗨， 兰迪。 我对意大利面条的事感到抱歉。”凯瑟琳低声道歉， 脸涨红了。
“Hi, Landy.I'm srry abut the spaghetti thing.”Catherine murmured an aplgy, her face reddening.
5.“看！”罗斯指着窗户，激动地喊道。
“Lk!”Rse pinted ut the windw and cried in great excitement.
6.“想试一下吗?”我抚摸着玛丽娜的手说。
“Want t try ne n?”I said, tuching Marina's hand.
7.我打开窗户对着对面喊道。 “我知道我们以前见过面， 但我不记得在哪里了。 ”。
I pened my windw and shuted acrss,“I knw we've met befre, but I can't remember where.”
8.“想试一下吗?”我抚摸着玛丽娜的手说。
“Want t try ne n?”I said, tuching Marina's hand.
第二部分 结尾升华
一、分类
1、氛围结尾:
flated in the air/filled +地点/…was bathed in“飘在空中/充满/沉浸在”
(1) The glden sun light streaming in, laughter lingered arund the yard and happiness flated in the air.
(2) With the cl breeze, the whle family was bathed in happiness and lve.
2、拥抱哭泣对话法
A hugged B tightly with tears flwing dwn ne's cheeks, whispering...
母亲给了我们每个人一个大大的拥抱，眼泪顺着脸颊流下来，在我们耳边低语：“谢谢你们的好意。是你的爱温暖了我们。
The mther hugged us tightly with tears flwing dwn her cheeks, whispering in ur ears,“Thank yu fr yur kindness.It's yur lve that has warmed us up.”
3.强调句:
It is+名词+that+谓语(cunt/matter/bring...)“正是…”
正是爱和关怀使世界运转。
It is lve and care that make the wrld g arund.
4.Frm then n, “从那时起, ……”
从那时起，我总是尽可能地帮助别人。
Frm then n, I always give thers a helping hand if pssible.
从那时起，友谊在我们两人的心中绽放。
Frm then n friendship blmed in bth f ur hearts.
5.Only then did sb.realize that…“直到那时某人才意识到…”
直到那时我才意识到，我们不应该把爱视为理所当然。
Only then did I realized that we shuld never take lve fr granted.
6.It ccurred t sb.that…“某人突然想到…”
他突然想到，有了家人的爱，过生日就不再是烦恼了。
It ccurred t him that with family's lve, it was n lnger disturbing t have birthday.
7.Many years have passed, but I will never frget ...“许多年过去了，但我永远不会忘记…”
许多年过去了，但我永远不会忘记那份特别的礼物。
Many years have passed, but I will never frget the special gift.
8.Many years have passed, but the experience is still deeply engraved in ne's mind.
许多年过去了，但这段经历仍深深地铭刻在一个人的脑海里。
9.Never had sb.dne sth.“某人从来没有…”
她从来没有这么骄傲过！
Never had she been s prud!
二、精彩结尾赏析
亲情类
1.The Mther hugged the twins tightly, whispering,“This is the best surprise in the wrld!”
2.Only then did I realized that hw much my mm lved me.
3.It ccurred t me that family lve is the greatest gift in life.
4.It was at that mment that I had a full understanding f the significance f family.
5.It was at this very mment that the frzen ice between tw generatins ——melted dwn int a warm stream flwing int their hearts.
6.The early sunlight streaming in, laughter lingered arund the rm and happiness flated in the air/the whle family was bathed in happiness and lve.
7.After s many years, the taste f the cake, the laughter f friends and the embrace f my parents still lingered in my mind.
= the taste f the cake, the laughter f friends and the embrace f my parents were still deeply engraved in my mind.
8.This birthday is bund t be kept in my memry frever,lightening my future path.
助人类
1.有时候，我们小小的行动可以给别人带来很大的不同。
Smetimes ur small actin can make a great difference t thers.
2.许多年过去了，但我永远不会忘记玛格丽特的圣诞礼物和她的善举。
Many years have passed, but I will never frget Margret's Christmas gifts and her act f kindness.
2.母亲给了我们每个人一个大大的拥抱，在我们的眼中低语：“谢谢你们的好意。是你的爱温暖了我们。”
The mther gave each f us a big hug, whispering in ur eyes,“Thank yu fr yur kindness.It's yur lve that has warmed us up.”
3.我突然想到，一个简单的举动可以让世界变得更美好。
It ccurred t me that a simple act culd make the wrld s much better.
5.虽然外面的风还在呼啸，但一股暖流涌上心头。
Althugh the wind still screamed utside, a warm current rse in my heart.
个人成长类(逆境、积极向上)
1.在你身上发生了什么并不重要，重要的是你如何应对。
It's nt what happens t yu, but hw yu react t it that matters.
2.直面困难，努力。你终将制造奇迹。
Be brave, rise t setbacks, and make effrts.Yu will end up creating miracles.
3.恐惧缔造不了未来，但希望可以。
Fear never builds the future, but hpe des.
4.每个人都像一朵花，有的有香味，有的没有。只要你开花，就会有蜜蜂和蝴蝶。
Everyne is like a flwer, sme having fragrance, but sme nt.As lng as yu blm, there will be bees and butterflies.
5.要把最坏的情况变成最好的情况，一个人应该采取行动。
T change the wrst situatin int best, ne shuld take actins.
6.正如谚语所说，永远不会失败。我要么赢，要么学习。
Just as a saying ges,“Never lse.I either win r learn.”
7.成功之路并不平坦。它充满了挑战和困难。
The jurney t success is nt smth.It is full f challenges and difficulties.
个人成长类(梦想)
1.这是真的：如果梦想足够大， 事实并不重要。
It's true: If the dream is big enugh, the facts dn't cunt.
2.任何一个有梦想，有勇气和毅力的人都会成功。
Anyne with a dream, curage and persistence will be successful.
3.成为你可能成为的人永远都不晚。
Only then did I realized that it's never t late t be all yu can pssibly be.
4.人类历史上最伟大的发现是一个人可以通过改变他的态度来改变他的未来。
The greatest discvery f all time is that a persn can change his future by merely changing his attitude.
5.你无法控制他人的行为，但你可以选择如何应对。
Yu cannt cntrl the behavir f thers, but yu can always chse hw yu respnd t it.
脱险类
1.多么死里逃生啊！
What a narrw escape!
2.每当我回想起那次惊心动魄的经历，我仍然会感到一种强烈的恐惧感。
I wuld still feel a strng sense f fear whenever I lked back n the thrilling experience.
3.事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，任何困境都是有出路的。
It turned ut that there is always a way ut f any difficult situatins as lng as we stay calm.
4.我从来没有陷入过这样危险的境地。这段经历深深地刻在了我的脑海里，提醒我要尊重自然。
Never had I fallen int such a dangerus situatin.The experience was deeply engraved in my mind and reminded me t respect the nature.