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\l _Tc20437 2021年6月新高考1卷 （母亲节的惊喜） PAGEREF _Tc20437 \h 3
\l _Tc3347 2021年1月八省联考 （好心家庭帮我修车） PAGEREF _Tc3347 \h 5
\l _Tc1467 2021年1月浙江卷 （圣诞节的尴尬） PAGEREF _Tc1467 \h 7
\l _Tc26186 2020年7月山东卷 （爆米花救助穷人） PAGEREF _Tc26186 \h 9
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2021年6月浙江卷（第一份工资）
My dad, Gerge, nly had an eighth grade educatin. A quiet man, he didn't understand my wrld f schl activities. Frm age 14, he wrked. And his dad, Albert, tk the mney my dad earned and used it t pay family expenses.
I didn't really understand his wrld either: He was a livestck trucker, and l thught that I wuld surpass（超过） anything he had accmplished by the time l walked acrss the stage at high schl graduatin.
Summers in the mid, 70s were spent at hme shting baskets, hitting a baseball, r thrwing a ftball, preparing fr my future as a quarterback n a ftball team. In pr weather, I read abut sprts r practiced my trmbne（长号）.
The summer befre my eighth grade I was ne f a grup f bys that a neighbring farmer hired t wrk in his field. He explained ur basic task, the tractr fired up and we were ff, riding dwn the field lking fr weeds t spray with chemicals. After a shrt way, the farmer stpped and painted at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened ver and ver, but we sn learned t identify different grasses like cckleburs, lamb's-quarters, fxtails, and the king f weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring wrk, but I lked frward t the pay, even thugh I wasn't sure hw much it wuld amunt t.
At hme, my dad said, "A jb's a big step t grwing up. I'm glad yu will be cntributing t the husehld." My dad's wrds made me realize that my earning might nt be mine t d with as wished.
My labrs lasted abut tw weeks, and the farmer said there might be mre wrk, but I wasn't interested. I decided it was nt fair that l had t cntribute my mney.
注意：
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2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
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4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: The pay day arrived at last.
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Paragraph 2: I understd immediately what my parents were wrried abut.
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题型解读
这是一篇记叙文的读后续写，要求考生在所给短文的基础上续写，并且结合划线词，构成一篇合理的完整故事。读后续写对学生学习语言知识的综合运用能力有着较高的要求。同时也考查学生们的发散思维能力和创造性思维能力。续写故事时，要求考生读懂文章，然后明白故事的发展进程、前因后果、人物特征和情感等。在此基础上，考生必须沿着文章的思路，根据提供的线索，恰当进行发挥，并且要使用给出的至少5个词语等。故事的结尾也必须符合原文的主题意义。
写作分析
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者高中毕业后，参加农场工作，辛辛苦苦挣到的钱，不情愿贡献给家庭，后来在看到父亲的辛劳之后，理解了父母担心的是自己太过自私而不知奉献，终于想通，并自豪地将自己劳动所得交给父亲的故事。
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The pay day arrived at last. I was glad that I finally gt the payment after wrking hard fr tw weeks. While walking back hme with an excited mind. I cnceived many plans abut hw t dispse f it. I needed a new ftball because the ld ne we played had already wrn ut. I intended t purchase my favrite chclates. Upn appraching the huse, I nticed my dad and mm standing beside the ld truck, lking sadly. It seemed as if smething unpleasant happened. “Hw much d we still need t pay fr a new truck?". asked my mther. Three hundred dllars, but we just had tw hundred left.”
发薪日终于到了。我很高兴，在我努力工作了两周后，我终于得到了报酬。一边兴奋地走回家。我构思了许多关于如何处理它的计划。我需要一个新的足球，因为我们踢的旧足球已经用坏了。我打算买我最喜欢的巧克力。走近房子，我注意到我爸爸和妈妈站在旧卡车旁边，悲伤地看着。似乎发生了一些不愉快的事情。“我们想买一辆新卡车还得付多少钱？”。我妈妈问。300美元，但我们只剩下200美元了。”
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I understd immediately what my parents were wrried abut. Really, the truck my dad drve ften brke dwn n the way, which made my dad in truble. My parents had intended t buy a new truck but culdn't affrd it. Suddenly, I realized what I shuld d. Stepping frward, I said, “Dad, here is what I received fr my wrk. I think it wuld help yu a little.” A little surprised at what I said, my mm hugged me tightly. That night, befre I went t bed, l thught I wuld tell the farmer the next day that I wuld cntinue my wrk, after all l grew up.
我立刻明白了我的父母在担心什么。真的，我爸爸开的卡车在路上经常坏了，这给我爸爸惹上了麻烦。我父母本来打算买一辆新卡车，但买不起。突然，我意识到我应该做什么。我走上前去，说：“爸爸，这是我工作的回报。我想这会对你有帮助。我说的话有点惊讶，妈妈紧紧地拥抱着我。那天晚上，在我睡觉之前，我想第二天我会告诉农夫，在我长大了之后，我将继续我的工作。
2021年6月新高考全国1卷（母亲节的惊喜）
第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thught f the surprise they were planning fr Mther's Day. Hw pleased and prud Mther wuld be when they brught her breakfast in bed. They planned t make French tast and chicken prridge. They had watched their mther in the kitchen. There was nthing t it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what t d.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went dwn the stairs quietly t the kitchen. They decided t bil the prridge first. They put sme rice int a pt f water and left it t bil while they made the French tast. Jeff brke tw eggs int a plate and added in sme milk. Jema fund the bread and put tw slices int the egg mixture. Next, Jef turned n the secnd stve burner t heat up the frying pan. Everything was ging smthly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was t ht and the bread turned black within secnds. Jenna threw the burnt piece int the sink and put in the ther slice f bread. This time, she turned dwn the fire s it cked nicely.
Then Jeff nticed steam shting ut f the pt and the lid starting t shake. The next minute, the prridge biled ver and put ut the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned ff the gas quickly. But the stve was a mess nw. Jenna tld Jef t clean it up s they culd cntinue t ck the rest f the prridge. But Jeff's hand tuched the ht burner and he gave a cry f pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cld water. Then she caught the smell f burning. Oh dear！The piece f bread in the pan had turned black as well.
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As the twins lked arund them in disappintment, their father appeared.
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The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up.
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As the twins lked arund them in disappintment, their father appeared. One lk and he knew what they were up t. Seeing their discuraged faces, he tld them t clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast fr Mther. The twins cheered up and did as tld. Within an hur, the kitchen was cleaned, and Father had successfully made sme French tast and chicken prridge as the children wished. Then he sneaked back t bed. The twins prepared the breakfast tray, added a card they had made, and then headed fr their parents' bedrm.
当这对双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。他看了一眼，他就知道他们在做什么。看到他们沮丧的脸，他让他们打扫厨房，同时帮他们为母亲做早餐。这对双胞胎高兴起来，照做了。不到一个小时，厨房就打扫干净了，父亲按照孩子们的意愿，成功地做了一些法式吐司和鸡肉粥。然后他偷偷溜回床上。双胞胎准备了早餐托盘，加了一张他们做的卡片，然后前往他们父母的卧室。
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up. "Happy Mther's Day, darling Mummy!" thrilled vice yelling frm their thrat, the twins hugged their mm tightly. Mved and excited, mther held the twins with her warm arms as well. Her eyes widened at the sight f the breakfast tray. She shk father wh was pretending t snre. He whistled in astnishment when seeing the breakfast. Mther bit int a sandwich and said she had never tasted a better ne. Jeff immediately wanted t have a bite. Jenna caught her father's eye and they winked at each ther secretly.
这对双胞胎把早餐带到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲。“母亲节快乐，亲爱的妈妈！”激动的声音从他们的喉咙里叫喊着，双胞胎紧紧地拥抱着他们的妈妈。母亲感动而激动，也用她温暖的胳膊抱着这对双胞胎。一看到早餐托盘，她就睁大了眼睛。她摇着假装打鼾的父亲。当他看到早餐时，他惊讶地吹着口哨。妈妈咬了咬三明治，说她从来没有尝过比这更好的三明治过。杰夫立刻想咬他一口。詹娜抓住了她父亲的目光，他们偷偷地互相眨了眨眼。
2021年1月八省联考（好心家庭帮我修车）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
During this past year, I’ve had three instances f car truble. Each time these things happened, I was sick f the way mst peple hadn’t bthered t help. One f thse times, I was n the side f the rad fr clse t three hurs with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windws, big signs that said NEED A JACK (千斤顶), and ffered mney. Nthing. Right as I was abut t give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled ver, and the father bunded ut.
He sized up the situatin and called fr his daughter, wh spke English. He cnveyed thrugh her that he had a jack but that it was t small fr the Jeep, s we wuld need smething t supprt it. Then he gt a saw (锯子) frm the truck and cut a sectin ut f a big lg n the side f the rad. We rlled it ver and put his jack n tp, and we were in business.
I started taking the wheel ff, and then, if yu can believe it, I brke his tire irn. N wrries: He handed it t his wife, and she was gne in a flash dwn the rad t buy a new tire irn. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the jb, and I was a very happy man.
The tw f us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pt f water fr us t wash ur hands. I tried t put a $20 bill in the man’s hand, but he wuldn’t take it, s instead I went up t the truck and gave it t his wife as quietly as I culd. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexic, she said. They were in Oregn s Mmmy and Daddy culd wrk n a fruit farm fr the next few weeks. Then they wuld g hme.
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续写词数应为150左右；
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When I was abut t say gdbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.
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After they left, I gt int my Jeep and pened the paper bag.
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When I was abut t say gdbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch. I shk my head and said n, wndering why she asked such a questin — was she ging t treat me t lunch r smething? “Wait a minute,” said the girl, and then she went back t the truck. After a few minutes she came back with a paper bag. “Here are sme Mexican snacks and yu can have sme when yu are hungry,” the girl smiled. I was s surprised and tuched that wrds almst failed me. I just said a “WOW!” instead f a “Thank yu!” when I tk the bag.
After they left, I gt int my Jeep and pened the paper bag. When I saw what was in the bag, I was vercme with a mixture f respect and gratefulness. In additin t the snacks, there was the $20 bill. What a kind and respectable family! They are a perfect example f what kindness really means. And I’m sure I will pay it frward. （145）
当我正要说别时，女孩问我是否吃过午饭。我摇摇头，说不，不知道她为什么会问这样一个问题——她会给我吃午饭什么吗？“等一下，”女孩说，然后她回到卡车上。几分钟后，她带着一个纸袋回来了。“这里有一些墨西哥小吃，你饿的时候可以吃一些，”女孩笑着说。我很惊讶，也很感动，那句话几乎让我失望了。我只是说了一声“哇！”而不是一声“谢谢你！”当我拿起包的时候。
他们离开后，我上了吉普车，打开了纸袋。当我看到包里有什么东西时，我被一种尊重和感激所征服了。除了这些零食，还有$20的账单。一个多么善良、值得尊敬的家庭啊！它们是善良真正意义的完美例子。我相信我会提前付钱的。
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When I was abut t say gdbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch. Of curse nt, fr I had been trapped there fr quite a few hurs. She then had a wrd with her parents and went back t their truck. A few minutes later she came back with a paper bag. “That’s Mmmy’s hand-made tac,” explained the girl. “It’s s yummy that yu must lve it.” I was starving t death after all that exhausting wrk s I tk the Mexic-riginated fd, grateful and deeply mved. Then we waved gdbye t each ther.
After they left, I gt int my Jeep and pened the paper bag. Inside the bag was a chicken tac. The next few minutes saw my wlfing dwn the delicius fd. Tears welled up as I was chewing. It was awesme t knw that while many peple tend t ignre thse in need, there are sme kind-hearted nes wh g ut f their way t lend a hand. The gd deed the freign family did will never escape me. I am ging t pass it dwn t create a much friendlier wrld. （163）
当我正要说别时，女孩问我是否吃过午饭。当然不是，因为我已经被困在那里好几个小时了。然后她和父母说了句话，回到了他们的卡车上。几分钟后，她带着一个纸袋回来了。“那是妈妈手工做的墨西哥玉米卷，”女孩解释说。“这太美味了，你一定喜欢它。“在干了那么累的工作之后，我饿死了，所以我吃了墨西哥风味的食物，感激和感动。然后我们互相挥手道别。
他们离开后，我上了吉普车，打开了纸袋。袋子里有一个鸡肉玉米饼。接下来的几分钟，我狼吞虎咽地吃了美味的食物。当我在咀嚼时，眼泪涌了起来。虽然很多人倾向于忽视那些有需要的人，但有些善良的人会特意伸出援手，这真是太棒了。这个外国家庭所做的好事永远无法逃避我。我要把它传下来，创造一个更友好的世界。
2021年1月浙江卷（圣诞节的尴尬）
第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Pumpkin (南瓜）carving at Hallween is a family traditin. We visit a lcal farm every Octber. In the pumpkin field, I cmpete with my three brthers and sister t seek ut the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have t carry ur pumpkins back hme, and as the eldest child I have an advantage — I carried an 85-punder back last year.
This year, it was hard t tell whether my prize r the ne chsen by my 14-year-ld brther, Jasn, was the winner. Unfrtunately we frgt t weigh them befre taking ut their insides, but I was determined t prve my pint. All f us were hard at wrk at the kitchen table, with my mm filming the annual event. I’m unsure nw why I thught frcing my head inside the pumpkin wuld settle the matter, but it seemed t make perfect sense at the time.
With the pumpkin resting n the table, hle uppermst, I bent ver and pressed my head against the pening. At first I gt jammed just abve my eyes and then, as I went n with my task, unwilling t quit, my nse briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed t put my whle head int it, like a crk (软木塞) frced int a bttle. I was able t straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting n my shulders.
My excitement was shrt-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m ging t set it dwn, nw,” I said, and with Jasn helping t supprt its weight, I bent back ver the table t give it smewhere t rest. It was nly when I tried t remve my head that I realized getting ut was ging t be less straightfrward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nse gt in the way. I gt int a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and mved my head arund trying t find the right angle, but it was n use. “I can’t get it ut!” I shuted, my vice sunding unnaturally lud in the enclsed space.
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2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
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I was stuck fr five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger. ______________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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That vide was psted the day befre Hallween. ________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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I was stuck fr five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger. Grwing mre panic, I began t cry. Frtunately, hearing me crying, dad came and helped me lay my head n the table, s my neck culd rest fr a while. Then he said t me “Listen, hney. I have t cut this pumpkin in half. ” I had n chice but t keep still with my eyes tightly clsed and listening t the knife mving n the pumpkin. Mments later, my head was finally released frm this hrrible pumpkin cage. Then mm tld me she had just filmed me managing t pull my head ut f the pumpkin.
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That vide was psted the day befre Hallween. Actually my mm had asked whether she culd pst it n the Internet, because after all I was s embarrassed and lked s silly in it. Anyway, I ndded and supprted her idea. It turned ut that peple liked and frwarded it crazily n the Internet, nly t make me an Internet celebrity. (续写152词)
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我被困了五六分钟，虽然感觉要长得多了。我越来越恐慌，我开始哭了起来。幸运的是，听到我哭了，爸爸过来帮我把头放在桌子上，这样我的脖子就可以休息一会儿了。然后他对我说：“听着，亲爱的。”我得把这个南瓜切成两半。“我别无选择，只能闭上眼睛，听着刀在南瓜上的移动。过了一会儿，我的头终于从这个可怕的南瓜笼子里被释放出来了。然后妈妈告诉我，她刚刚拍下了我设法把头从南瓜里拉出来的照片。
第2段
那个视频是在万圣节的前一天发布的。实际上，我妈妈问她是否可以把它贴在网上，因为毕竟我很尴尬，看起来很傻。不管怎样，我点了点头，支持她的想法。结果，人们疯狂地喜欢并转发它，却让我成为了网络名人。
2020年7月山东卷（爆米花救助穷人）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Meredith family lived in a small cmmunity. As the ecnmy was in decline, sme peple in the twn had lst their jbs. Many f their families were struggling t make ends meet. Peple were trying t help each ther meet the challenges.
Mrs. Meredith was a mst kind and thughtful wman. She spent a great deal f time visiting the pr. She knew they had prblems, and they needed all kinds f help. When she had time, she wuld bring fd and medicine t them.
One mrning she tld her children abut a family she had visited the day befre. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, wh tk care f him and culd nt g ut t wrk, and their little by. The little by — his name was Bernard — had interested her very much.
“I wish yu culd see him,” she said t her wn children, Jhn, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help t his mther. He wants very much t earn sme mney, but I dn’t see what he can d.”
After their mther left the rm, the children sat thinking abut Bernard. “I wish we culd help him t earn mney,” said Clara. “His family is suffering s much.”
“S d I,” said Harry. “We really shuld d smething t assist them.”
Fr sme mments, Jhn said nthing, but, suddenly, he sprang t his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a slutin that we can all help accmplish (完成) .”
The ther children als jumped up all attentin. When Jhn had an idea, it was sure t be a gd ne. “I tell yu what we can d,” said Jhn. “Yu knw that big bx f crn Uncle Jhn sent us? Well, we can make ppcrn (爆米花), and put it int paper bags, and Bernard can take it arund t the huses and sell it.”
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When Mrs. Meredith heard f Jhn’s idea, she thught it was a gd ne, t.
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When Mrs. Meredith heard f the idea, she thught it was a gd ne, t. Then Mrs. Meredith searched the internet and rdered a husehld ppcrn machine. After that, Mrs. Meredith, tgether with her three children, paid anther visit t the family and tld them abut the ppcrn plan. Needless t say, they were deeply mved, especially Bernard wh finally fund a way t make mney fr his family. A few days later, the machine was delivered t Mrs. Meredith’s drstep. And it wasn’t lng befre they gt the hang f using the machine t make ppcrn.
With everything ready, Bernard started ut n his new business. Althugh it was a hard time and things were tight fr everybdy, Bernard’s business wrked ut quite well. He carried the ppcrn n his small bike, ging frm dr t dr t sell it. Peple were surprised t see such a little, prly-dressed by selling ppcrn at their drs, but eventually almst all f them wuld buy a bag r tw. It is lve that makes the wrld g rund and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.
当梅雷迪思太太听到这个想法时，她认为这也是件好事。然后，梅雷迪思太太在网上搜索了一下，订购了一台家用爆米花机。在那之后，梅雷迪思太太和她的三个孩子又去拜访了他们家，并告诉了他们爆米花的计划。不用说，他们非常感动，尤其是伯纳德，他终于找到了为家人赚钱的方法。几天后，机器被送到了梅雷迪思太太的家门口。没过多久，他们就掌握了用机器做爆米花。
一切都准备好了，伯纳德开始了他的新生意。虽然这是一段艰难的时期，事情对每个人来说都很紧张，但伯纳德的生意还是很顺利。他骑着小自行车拿着爆米花，挨家挨户地卖。人们惊讶地看到这样一个衣着不良的小男孩在门口卖爆米花，但最终几乎所有人都买了一两个包。是爱使世界四处运转，伯纳德深深地感受到了他的小心灵深处。
2020年7月浙江卷（拍照北极熊遇险）
第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single gal: t phtgraph plar bears. We were staying at a research camp utside “ the plar bear capital f the wrld ” — the twn f Churchill in Manitba, Canada.
Taking pictures f plar bears is amazing but als dangerus. Plar bears — like all wild animals — shuld be phtgraphed frm a safe distance. When I’m face t face with a plar bear, I like it t be thrugh a camera with a telepht lens. But smetimes, that is easier said than dne. This was ne f thse times.
As Elli and I cked dinner, a yung male plar bear wh was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled ur garlic bread.
The hungry bear fllwed his nse t ur camp, which was surrunded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He std n his back legs and pushed at the wden fence psts.
Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actins we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pts hard, and fired blank shtgun shells int the air. Smetimes lud nises like these will scare bears ff. Nt this plar bear thugh — he just kept trying t tear dwn the fence with his massive paws (爪子).
I radied the camp manager fr help. He tld me a helicpter was n its way, but it wuld be 30 minutes befre it arrived. Making the best f this clse encunter (相遇), I tk sme pictures f the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wuldn’t last thrugh 30 mre minutes f the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but desn’t hurt them. S I apprached ur uninvited guest slwly and, thrugh the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry rar (吼叫), the bear ran t the lake t wash his eyes.
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A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp. ___________________
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A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp. Then we realized that the spray had nly angered him even mre, fr he seemed much fiercer this time and vilently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly, nt knwing what t d. At this critical mment, Elli grabbed several pieces f garlic bread and threw them ver the fence. It wrked! The bear stpped the attack and ran t the bread. But it wasn’t lng befre he ate up all the bread and came back again.
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At that very mment, the helicpter arrived. “Thank gdness we are saved!” Elli cried ut. Once the helicpter landed, we gt nt it in n time, excited and relieved. When we were safe n the helicpter up in the air, I was amazed t spt that the bear had finally trn dwn the fence and ran twards the fd we left behind. I quickly tk ut the camera and phtgraphed the rare scene — we were rbbed by a plar bear!
几分钟后，这只熊回到了我们的营地。然后我们意识到，浪花只是更激怒了他，因为这次他似乎更凶狠了，而且像疯了一样猛烈地推了推篱笆。我的心狂狂，不知道该怎么办。在这个关键时刻，埃利抓起几块蒜蓉面包，扔过了栅栏。它已经成功了！熊阻止了进攻，跑到面包边。但没过多久，他就吃完了所有的面包，又回来了。
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就在那一刻，直升机来了。“谢天谢地，我们得救了！”埃莉喊道。直升机一降落，我们很快就上了飞机，兴奋而松了一口气。当我们安全地坐在直升机上时，我惊讶地发现这只熊终于撕掉了栅栏，向我们留下的食物跑去。我迅速拿出相机，拍摄了这个罕见的场景，我们被一只北极熊抢劫了！
2020年1月浙江卷（小狗Pnny的新玩伴）
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“I’m ging t miss yu s much, Pppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent dwn t hug his ld friend gdbye. He std up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying nt t let his emtins (情绪) get the better f him.
His parents were nt quite able t keep theirs under cntrl. They had driven their sn several hurs ut f twn t the university where he wuld sn be living and studying. It was time t say gdbye fr nw at least. The family hugged and smiled thrugh misty eyes and then laughed.
The by lifted the last bag nt his shulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it.” he said. “I’ll see yu back hme in a mnth, kay?” His parents ndded, and they watched as he walked ut f sight int the crwds f hundreds f students and parents. The by’s mther turned t the dg, “Okay, Pppy, time t g back hme.”
The huse seemed quiet as a tmb withut the by living there. All that week, Pppy didn’t seem interested in her dinner, her favrite ty, r even in her daily walk. Her wners were sad t, but they knew their sn wuld be back t visit, Pppy didn’t.
They ffered the dg sme f her favrite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit n the sfa, but the ld girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self. Her wners started t get wrried, “What shuld we d t cheer Pppy up?” asked Dad. “We’ve tried everything.”
“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mm. “Withut anybdy left in the huse but us, this place culd use a bit f fun. Let’s get a little dg fr Pppy.”
It didn’t take lng befre they walked thrugh the frnt dr carrying a big bx. Pppy
welcmed them hme as usual, but when she saw the bx, she stpped. She put her nse n
it. Her tail began wagging (摆动) ever s slwly, then faster as she caught the smell.
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That vide was psted the day befre Hallween. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared. Pppy jumped with jy at the sight f the little dg. She lwered her head t watch it curiusly. Then she became s excited that she accidentally kncked ver the bx in an attempt t get clser. With the bx tipping ver, ut came the little ne, wh was nt shy and instantly gt familiar with Pppy. It didn’t take lng befre the tw played arund the huse, cheerfully running after each ther.
爸爸打开盒子，一只可爱的小狗出现了。波比一看到这只小狗就高兴地跳了起来。她低下头，好奇地看着它。然后她变得非常兴奋，她不小心撞倒了盒子，试图靠近。盒子翻了过来，小家伙走了出来，他并不害羞，立刻熟悉了波比。没过多久，两人就在房子里玩耍，高高兴兴地互相跑着。
A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm the university. He had been missing his parents and the dg since it was the first time that he had been away frm hme fr such a lng time. When the by caught sight f Pppy, he went rushing tward the dg and bent dwn t give her a big hug. Suddenly, the by nticed the little dg. “Oh my gd, wh is this?” His parents laughed at the lk f surprise n his face. “It’s Pppy’s new cmpanin.” said Mm. (155)
几周后，这个男孩从大学走回家了。自从他第一次离家这么长时间以来，他就一直在想念父母和狗。当男孩看到波比时，他冲向狗，弯下腰给她一个大大的拥抱。突然，那男孩注意到了那只小狗。“哦，天哪，这是谁？”他的父母嘲笑他脸上惊讶的表情。“这是波比的新伴侣。””妈妈说。
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Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared.It was hiding in ne crner f the bx, with a curius lk in its eyes. Wagging its tail, it tried t climb ut f the bx, but it fell dwn n its back, unable t stand up. Upn seeing this, his parents culd nt help laughing. Gently, Mm picked it up frm the bx and put it n the flr. "Pppy, isn′t it a sweet dg? It's fr yu!" Mm said in a sft vice."It's yur cmpanin." Cheerful and yet a little nervus, Pppy kept running and barking at the new family member. But Much t the relief f his parents, they were like peas and carrts sn afterwards, and it seemed as if Rpp had frgtten her ld friend.
爸爸打开盒子，一只可爱的小狗出现了。它藏在盒子的一个角落里，眼睛里有一种奇怪的神情。它摇着尾巴，试图爬出盒子，但背部倒了下来，站不起来。一看到这一点，他的父母就忍不住笑了起来。妈妈轻轻地把它从盒子里拿起来，放在地板上。“这不是一只可爱的狗吗？”这是给你准备的！”妈妈用一种温柔的声音说。“这是你的同伴。”波比很高兴，但又有点紧张，不停地跑着新家庭成员吠叫。但让他的父母松了一口气的是，不久之后它们就像豌豆和胡萝卜一样，罗普似乎已经忘记了她的老朋友。
A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm university. Pppy threw herself at him and licked his hands and face excitedly, her eyes sparkling with delight and her tail wagging furiusly. It tk the by fr a lng time t ntice that there was a cute puppy beside Pppy,grwling and sniffing at his feet.Immediately, he bent dwn,strked its head and asked,"What an adrable puppy! Whse is it?" His parents smiled and replied,"We gt it fr Puppy because.." Knwing what had happened t Pppy when he was at the university, the by was s mved that he tk the ld girl in his arms.Tears burred his visin as he murmured,"Pppy,I miss yu, t." And quietly, Pppy raised her head and watched the yung teenager like xWaby in his arms.
几周后，男孩从大学回家。 波比扑向他，兴奋地舔着他的手和脸，她的眼睛闪闪发光，她的尾巴剧烈地摆动。 男孩花了很长时间才注意到波比旁边有一只可爱的小狗，在他的脚边咆哮和嗅。 他立刻弯下腰，抚摸它的头，问：“多么可爱的小狗啊！ 是谁的？” 他的父母笑了笑，回答说：“我们给波比买的，因为”他知道波比在大学时发生了什么很感动，把那个老女孩抱在怀里。 他喃喃地说：“波比，我也想你。” 然后静静地，波比抬起头，看着那年轻的少年在他怀里。
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Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared. It lifted and lwered its head alternately with cautin, its eyes shining ut f curisity."Say hell t yur new friend, Pppy." Dad said in an encuraging vice. Pppy gave him a seemingly knwing lk, scratching the bx with its frnt paw. The little creature slwly std up, jumped ut with pains-taking effrts and yapped arund Pppy. They sniffed each ther like ld friends. The parents gasped in surprise even with kind f envy. They cannt imagine the tw dgs enjyed each ther's cmpany in a blink f an eye.
爸爸打开盒子，一只可爱的小狗出现了。它小心地抬起头，眼睛因为好奇而闪闪发光。“跟你的新朋友打招呼，波比。”爸爸用一种鼓舞人心的声音说。波比看了他一个看似知情的样子，用前爪摸着盒子。这个小家伙慢慢地站起来，痛苦地跳出来，绕着罂粟跑。他们像老朋友一样互相嗅嗅。父母们甚至有点嫉妒，也惊讶地喘不过气来。他们无法想象这两只狗只要眨一眨眼就能享受到彼此的陪伴。
A few weeks later the by arrived hme frm university. He cannt wait t tell his parents abut his new friends in the university. Strangely, he wasn't greeted with Pppy's eager barking but an unbelievable scene. The tw dgs were tumbling abut n the flr. The huse was pulsating with life.Parents came up, hugging his sn."One has t grw up in his new friends' cmpany. We shuld get used t it." Mm said half-jkingly, strking his thin but determined face. It can't be sure enugh.
几周后，男孩从大学回家。 他迫不及待地告诉父母他在大学里的新朋友。 奇怪的是，他没有受到波比急切的吠叫的欢迎，而是一个令人难以置信的场景。 两只狗在地板上翻滚。 房子里充满了生机。 父母走过来，抱着儿子。 一个人必须在他的新朋友的公司里长大。 我们应该习惯它。” 妈妈半开玩笑地说，抚摸着他瘦削但坚定的脸。 不能确定。
2018年6月浙江卷（山中遇险）
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It was summer, and my dad wanted t treat me t a vacatin like never befre. He decided t take me n a trip t the Wild West.
We tk a plane t Albuquerque, a big city in the state f New Mexic. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternn. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up frm the airprt and drve us up t his farm in Pecs.
His wife Tina cked us a delicius dinner and we gt t knw his sns Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestrm f the farm huse listening t the frgs and water rlling dwn the river nearby. Very early in the mrning. Uncle Paul wke us up t have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn n my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went t help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul t take the sheep ut t graze (吃草). I was impressed t see my dad and Uncle Paul riding hrses. They lked really cl.
In the afternn, I asked Uncle Paul if I culd take a hrse ride, and he said yes, as lng as my dad went with me. I wasn’t ging t take a hrse ride by myself anyway. S, my dad and I put n ur new cwby hats, gt n ur hrses, and headed slwly twards the muntains. “Dn’t be late fr supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep t the track s that yu dn’t get lst!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm huse were ut f sight. It was s peaceful and quiet and the clrs f the brwn rcks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternn sun mixed t create a magic scene. It lked like a beautiful wven (编织的) blanket spread ut upn the grund just fr us.
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Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse.
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We had n idea where we were and it gt dark.
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Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse. Dad and I fund it was s cute that we decided t chase it. After a while, we were cmpletely lst in the frest. There was nthing left in ur sight but the trees. “We may nt be able t make it back t the farm huse in time fr supper.” I thught t myself. After a series f fruitless attempts t find a way ut, we felt hungry and tired.
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We had n idea where we were and it was getting dark. We gt stuck in the frest. And an unexpected shwer added t the difficulty f us in finding a way hme, fr all the tracks we had made disappeared because f the rain. I was almst n the edge f breaking dwn when my father said, “Dn’t wrry, my sn. I remember there is a river near the farm huse. Find the river and we will be back hme.” Finally, we fund the river and gt back t the huse alng it. Needless t say, we ate a late dinner.
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突然，一只小兔子跳到了我的马面前。爸爸和我发现它太可爱了，我们决定追它。过了一段时间，我们完全迷失在了森林里。除了那些树，我们眼前什么也没有了。“我们可能不能及时回到农场去吃晚饭。我自己想。在一系列徒劳的尝试之后，我们感到饿又累。
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我们不知道自己在哪里，天越来越黑了。我们被困在了森林里。一场意想不到的阵雨使我们更难找到回家的路，因为我们留下的所有脚印都因为下雨而消失了。我快要崩溃了，我父亲说：“别担心，儿子。我记得在农舍附近有一条河。找到河，我们就回家。最后，我们找到了河，沿着它回到了房子。不用说，我们的晚餐吃得很晚。
2017年11月浙江卷（健忘的妈妈）
第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
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A vacatin with my mther
I had an interesting childhd: It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because f my mther — lving, sweet, yet absent-minded and frgetful. One strange family trip we tk when I was eleven tells a lt abut her.
My tw sets f grandparents lived in Clrad and Nrth Dakta, and my parents decided t spend a few weeks driving t thse states and seeing all the sights alng the way. As the first day f ur trip apprached, David, my eight-year-ld brther, and I unwillingly said gd-bye t all f ur friends. Wh knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the mment f ur departure arrived, and we laded suitcases, bks, games, camping equipment, and a tent int the car and bravely drve ff. We bravely drve ff again tw hurs later after we’d returned hme t get the purse and traveler’s checks Mm had frgtten.
David and I were always a little nervus when using gas statin bathrms if Mm was driving while Dad slept: “Yu stand utside the dr and play lkut (放哨) while I g, and I’ll stand utside the dr and play lkut while yu g.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Hney, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gsh… I thught they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t abut t take any chances.
On the furth r fifth night, we had truble finding a htel with a vacancy. After driving in vain fr sme time, Mm suddenly gt a great idea: Why didn’t we find a huse with a likely-lking backyard and ask if we culd set up tent there? David and I became nervus. T ur great relief, Dad turned dwn the idea. Mm never culd understand ur bjectins. If a strange family shwed up n her frnt drstep, Mm wuld have been delighted. She thinks everyne in the wrld is as nice as she is. We finally fund a vacancy in the next twn.
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The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us.
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We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way.
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The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us. But then we were half an hur away frm the htel, where the tent was left behind. Dad recmmended buying a new ne, while Mm insisted n ur ging back t fetch it, saying “Frgetful peple like me may lse things repeatedly, s it’s unwise t give up the tent.” Finally, we gt back the tent and hit the rad again. If Mm hadn’t been that absent-minded, it wuld have saved us the truble f ging back again and again.
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We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way. One day, twards evening, we fund a great camping site at the ft f a high muntain. David and I helped Dad put up the tent, and Mm was busy preparing supper. When the setting sun cast an range light ver the muntains, the tent was set up and the meal was ready. Sitting arund the camp fire, we talked and laughed. Every time we mentined the funny incidents f the jurney a pleasant smile wuld spread ver Mm’s face. (续写词数163)
第二天，我们想起了我们带来的那个全新的帐篷。但后来我们离旅馆还有半小时的路程了。爸爸建议买一个新的，妈妈坚持要我们回去拿，说“像我这样被遗忘的人可能会反复丢东西，所以放弃帐篷是不明智的。”最后，我们回到帐篷，又上路了。如果妈妈不是那么心不在焉，我们就会省一次又一次回去的麻烦。
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我们开车穿过了几个州，沿途看到了很多美丽的风景。一天，傍晚，我们在山脚下发现了一个很棒的露营地。大卫和我帮爸爸搭起了帐篷，妈妈正忙着准备晚饭。当夕阳向山上发出橙色的灯光时，帐篷就搭好了，饭菜也准备好了。我们坐在篝火旁，聊又笑。每次我们提到旅途中有趣的事情，妈妈的脸上都会露出愉快的微笑。
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The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us. T ur delight, Mm gave up the idea f camping in sme stranger’s backyard. Instead, we fund a wnderful camping site in the wild. It was a clearing in the wds by a small lake, where Dad culd catch sme fish fr dinner. We had n truble setting up ur tent, but we were disappinted t find that Mm frgt t pack up pillws. Needless t say, we all wke up with a sre neck the next mrning.
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We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way. It was a fantastic trip. We crssed big rivers and vast plains, climbed high muntains, and verlked deep valleys. During the trip, Mm’s being absent-minded nt nly gt us int much truble, but als gave us many funny mments. But luckily, she was nt s frgetful as t leave me and David behind in the gas statin bathrms. We all arrived at grandparents’ hme safe and sund. (续写词数147)
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第二天，我们想起了我们带来的那个全新的帐篷。让我们高兴的是，妈妈放弃了在一个陌生人的后院露营的想法。相反，我们在野外找到了一个很棒的露营地。那是一个小湖边树林里的一块空地，爸爸可以在那里钓点鱼吃晚饭。我们顺利地搭好了帐篷，但我们失望地发现妈妈忘了收拾枕头。不用说，第二天早上我们醒来都脖子痛。
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我们开车穿过了几个州，沿途看到了很多美丽的风景。这是一次美妙的旅行。我们穿过大河和广阔的平原，爬上高山，俯瞰着深深的山谷。在旅途中，妈妈心不在焉不仅给我们惹来了许多麻烦，而且也给了我们很多有趣的时刻。但幸运的是，她并没有健忘到把我和大卫留在加油站的浴室里。我们都平安到达祖父母家。
2017年6月浙江卷（狼口脱险）
第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a bright, warm July afternn, Mac Hllan, a primary schl teacher, was cycling frm his hme t Alaska with his friends. One f his friends had stpped t make a bicycle repair, but they had encuraged Mac t carry n, and they wuld catch up with him sn. As Mac pedaled (骑行) alng alne, he thught fndly f his wife and tw yung daughters at hme. He hped t shw them this beautiful place smeday.
Then Mac heard quick and lud breathing behind him. “Man, that’s a big dg!” he thught. But when he lked t the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dg at all, but a wlf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He fund ut his can f bear spray. With ne hand n the bars, he fired the spray at the wlf. A bright red clud envelped the animal, and t Mac’s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back f Mac’s bike, tearing pen his tent bag. He fired at the wlf a secnd time, and again, it fell back nly t quickly restart the chase (追赶).
Mac was pedaling hard nw. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful nt t slw dwn. He saw a steep uphill climb befre him. He knew that nce he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wlf’s teeth wuld be tearing int his flesh.
At this mment, Paul and Becky were driving their car n their way t Alaska. They didn’t think much f it when they saw tw cyclists repairing their bike n the side f the rad. A bit later, they sptted what they, t, assumed was a dg running alngside a man n a bike. As they gt clser, they realized that the dg was a wlf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in frnt f it as the wlf was catching up fast, just a dzen yards away nw.
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1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him. Mac jumped ff his bicycle and rushed t the dr f the car. But befre Mac culd pen the dr, the wlf had caught up and jumped t attack. Luckily, the magic spray saved Mac a third time. Seeing the wlf back ff, Paul quickly unlcked the dr, and the frightened man climbed int the car in n time, shutting the dr behind him heavily. Becky lked ut f the back windw and saw the wlf standing ver Mac’s bicycle as if it were a kill. Sn after, the animal ran ff.
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A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived. Mac gt ut f the car and hugged his friends. “It was really a nightmare and I thught I was ging t die,” said Mac in a shaky vice, tears gathering in his eyes. Fr him, life culd never be mre beautiful. After saying gdbye t Paul and Becky with gratitude, the three men cntinued their trip, agreeing never t separate again. (续写词数：158)
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汽车突然停在他前面。麦克跳下自行车，冲向车门口。但麦克还没来得及开门，狼就赶上了，跳起来攻击。幸运的是，魔法喷雾剂第三次救了麦克。看到狼回来了，保罗迅速打开了门，那个吓坏了的人立刻爬上了车，在他身后重重地关上了门。贝基从后窗外看，看到狼站在麦克的自行车前，好像是在杀人。不久之后，这只动物就跑掉了。
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几分钟后，另外两名骑自行车的人来了。麦克下了车，拥抱了他的朋友们。“这真的是一场噩梦，我还以为我要死了。”麦克用颤抖的声音说，眼睛里充满了泪水。对他来说，生活永远不会如此美好了。在感激地与保罗和贝基道别后，这三个人继续他们的旅行，同意不再分开。
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The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him. Mac crashed int the car with a lud bang. As a result, he fell ff the bicycle and had his left ankle twisted. Hardly had Mac std up when the wlf arrived and was abut t launch anther attack. Mac was ging t die when suddenly the wlf was hit right n the head by a piece f rck. The wlf fell back, hwling with pain. It was Paul wh did this. Becky helped Mac climb int the car, while Paul kept shuting and thrwing stnes at the wlf.
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A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived. They were shcked at what they saw and jined Paul. One f Mac’s friends picked ut sme raw meat and threw it t the wlf. Satisfied with what he gt, the wlf ran int the wds. Mac thanked Paul and Becky, “Hw grateful I am that yu stpped t save me and I we it t yu that I’m still alive.” As Mac gt injured, the three men had t give up the rest f their jurney and returned hme.(续写词数：175)
汽车突然停在他前面。麦克砰的一声撞上了汽车。结果，他从自行车上摔了下来，左脚踝扭伤了。麦克刚站起来，狼就来了，正要再发动一次进攻。麦克正要死，突然狼被一块石头击中头部。狼倒了下来，痛苦地嚎叫着。这是保罗做的。贝基帮助麦克爬上车里，保罗不停地大喊大叫，向狼扔石头。
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几分钟后，另外两名骑自行车的人来了。他们对所看到的感到震惊，加入了保罗。麦克的一个朋友挑了一些生肉，扔给了狼身上。狼对他得到的很满意，跑进了树林。麦克感谢保罗和贝基，“我很感激你停下来救我，我欠我还活着。”麦克受伤了，三个人不得不放弃剩下的旅程回家了。
2016年10月浙江卷（森林遇险）
第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tm, had driven three hurs t camp vernight by a lake in the frest. Unfrtunately, n the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started t quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was s angry that she said t Tm. “I'm ging t find a better spt fr us t camp" and walked away.
With n path t fllw,Jane just walked n fr quite a lng time. After she had climbed t a high place. she turned arund, hping t see the lake. T her surprise, she saw nthing but frest and, far beynd, a snwcapped muntain tp. She suddenly realized that she was lst.
“Tm! "she cried. "Help!"
N reply. If nly she had nt left her mbile phne in that bag with Tm. Jane kept mving, but the farther she walked, the mre cnfused she became. As night was beginning t fall, Jane was s tired that she had t stp fr the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much t be with Tm and her family. She wanted t hld him and tell him hw much she lved him.
Jane rse at the break f day, hungry and thirsty. She culd hear water trickling (滴落）smewhere at a distance. Quickly she fllwed the sund t a stream. T her great jy,she als saw sme berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling strnger nw. Jane began t walk alng the stream and hpe it wuld lead her t the lake.
As she picked her way carefully alng the stream, Jane heard a helicpter. Is that fr me? Unfrtunately, the trees made it impssible fr peple t see her frm abve. A few minutes later, anther helicpter flew verhead. Jane tk ff her yellw bluse, thinking that she shuld g t an pen area and flag them if they came back again.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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【范文】
But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an abslute darkness ruled the frest. Jane, exhausted and scared, lay dwn near a stne, missing her family at a distance. All the fantastic memry crwded in and she culdn't help crying, "Hadn't I quarreled with Tm, walked away and climbed t the high place, I wuldn't be trapped in this awful place, cnfrnted with the danger f dying." She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes.
It was daybreak when Jane wke up. Weak as she was, she struggled t her feet, cntinuing searching fr assistance. T her great jy, a helicpter was flying verhead again and again. Eager and excited, she flagged her yellw bluse and spared n effrt t yell s as t attract thers' attentin. Frtunately, she was eventually nticed and brught int the helicpter. There, she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expressin f relief. As tightly as pssible, she hugged him and was t thrilled t say anything. Besides, they agreed never t quarrel again, determining t live the life t the fullest.
【解析】
首先，在逻辑上，要做到了合理合情：起初，主人公身陷森林，内心充满了悔恨，在面对困难时焦虑、畏惧；之后，主人公努力求生，最终获救，并且领悟到了一定的人生道理。纵观整个故事，情节发展不仅符合两段给出的开头所限定的情景要求，而且还设置了一定的悬念，增强了故事的可读性。
文章第一句 "an abslute darkness ruled the frest" 中， "rule" 一词就使用了拟人的修辞手法，让森林阴森黑暗的一面展露无遗，同时描绘出主人公身处绝境的紧迫性。在 "Eager and excited, she flagged her yellw bluse…" 一句中，直接将情绪形容词放在句首，使用了非谓语动词的语法，表达精练。
此外， "There, she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expressin f relief." 一句中，使用了几个短句，却包含了两处非谓语动词语法，同时活用了 "wear" 一词，把两个人相见时的场景生动地描绘了出来。
【词汇拓展】
1） 表示并列关系的过渡词：and, as well as, r ，Nt nly … but als
2） 表示转折关系的过渡词：but, yet, hwever , althugh , thugh …
3） 表示时间关系的过渡词：first, secnd, third, and then, finally, after, befre, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …
浙江卷样题（银行抢劫）
【1】A funny thing happened t Arthur when he was n the way t wrk ne day. As he walked alng Park Avenue near the First Natinal Bank, he heard the sund f smene trying t start a car. He tried again and again but culdn’t get the car mving. Arthur turned and lked inside at the face f a yung man wh lked wrried. Arthur stpped and asked, “It lks like yu’ve gt a prblem,” Arthur said.
【2】“I’m afraid s. I’m in a big hurry and I can’t start my car.”
【3】“Is there smething I can d t help?” Arthur asked. The yung man lked at the tw suitcases in the back seat and then said, “ Thanks. If yu’re sure it wuldn’t be t much truble, yu culd help me get these suitcases int a taxi.”
“N truble at all. I’d be glad t help.”
【4】The yung man gt ut and tk ne f the suitcases frm the back seat. After placing it n the grund, he turned t get the ther ne. Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking, he heard the lng lud nise f an alarm.
【5】It was frm the bank. There had been a rbbery (抢劫)!
【6】Park Avenue had been quiet a mment befre. Nw the air was filled with the sund f the alarm and the shuts f peple running frm all directins. Cars stpped and the passengers jined the crwd in frnt f the bank. Peple asked each ther, “What happened?” But everyne had a different answer.
【7】Arthur, still carrying the suitcase, turned t lk at the bank and walked right int the yung wman in frnt f him.
【8】She lked at the suitcase and then at him. Arthur was surprised. “Why is she lking at me like that?” He thught. “The suitcase！She thinks I’m the bank thief!”
【9】Arthur lked arund at the crwd f peple. He became frightened, and withut anther thught, he started t run.
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As he was running, Arthur heard the yung man shuting behind, “Stp, stp!”
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The taxi stpped in frnt f the Plice Statin and Arthur...
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As he was running, Arthur heard the yung man shuting behind, “Stp, stp!” But Arthur ran even faster. Just then, a taxi came alng. Arthur stpped it and threw himself int the back seat and asked the driver t g t the Plice Statin.
亚瑟跑的时候，听到年轻人在后面喊：“停下来，停下来！”但亚瑟跑得更快了。就在这时，一辆出租车来了。亚瑟拦住车，倒到后座上，让司机去警察局。
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The taxi stpped in frnt f the Plice Statin and Arthur ran int it, shuting, “There’s a bank rbbery and I knw the bank thief.” Quickly after Arthur tld his stry, the plicemen started fr the bank withut delay. When they arrived at the spt, they were surprised t find that the peple wh gathered befre the bank were nw crwding arund the yung man, wh seemed quite wrried. Finally, Arthur realized that he had made a mistake. The lud nise f the alarm was incrrectly made by the bank’s system and nthing happened t the bank, but the yung man was wrried that smene had rbbed his suitcase.
出租车停在警察局前，亚瑟跑了进去，喊道：“有银行抢劫，我认识银行小偷。”亚瑟讲完他的故事后，警察很快就开始向银行走去。当他们到达现场时，他们惊讶地发现，聚集在银行前的人现在正挤在这个年轻人周围，他似乎很担心。最后，亚瑟意识到他犯了一个错误。银行的系统错误地发出了警报，银行什么也没发生，但年轻人担心有人抢劫了他的手提箱。
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\l _Tc3347 2021年1月八省联考 （好心家庭帮我修车） PAGEREF _Tc3347 \h 5
\l _Tc1467 2021年1月浙江卷 （圣诞节的尴尬） PAGEREF _Tc1467 \h 7
\l _Tc26186 2020年7月山东卷 （爆米花救助穷人） PAGEREF _Tc26186 \h 9
\l _Tc4600 2020年7月浙江卷 （拍照北极熊遇险） PAGEREF _Tc4600 \h 11
\l _Tc24586 2020年1月浙江卷 （小狗Pnny的新玩伴） PAGEREF _Tc24586 \h 12
\l _Tc5877 2018年6月浙江卷 （山中遇险） PAGEREF _Tc5877 \h 16
\l _Tc4482 2017年11月浙江卷 （健忘的妈妈） PAGEREF _Tc4482 \h 18
\l _Tc31714 2017年6月浙江卷 （狼口脱险） PAGEREF _Tc31714 \h 20
\l _Tc18137 2016年10月浙江卷 （森林遇险） PAGEREF _Tc18137 \h 23
\l _Tc16159 浙江卷样题 （银行抢劫） PAGEREF _Tc16159 \h 25
2021年6月浙江卷（第一份工资）
My dad, Gerge, nly had an eighth grade educatin. A quiet man, he didn't understand my wrld f schl activities. Frm age 14, he wrked. And his dad, Albert, tk the mney my dad earned and used it t pay family expenses.
I didn't really understand his wrld either: He was a livestck trucker, and l thught that I wuld surpass（超过） anything he had accmplished by the time l walked acrss the stage at high schl graduatin.
Summers in the mid, 70s were spent at hme shting baskets, hitting a baseball, r thrwing a ftball, preparing fr my future as a quarterback n a ftball team. In pr weather, I read abut sprts r practiced my trmbne（长号）.
The summer befre my eighth grade I was ne f a grup f bys that a neighbring farmer hired t wrk in his field. He explained ur basic task, the tractr fired up and we were ff, riding dwn the field lking fr weeds t spray with chemicals. After a shrt way, the farmer stpped and painted at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened ver and ver, but we sn learned t identify different grasses like cckleburs, lamb's-quarters, fxtails, and the king f weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring wrk, but I lked frward t the pay, even thugh I wasn't sure hw much it wuld amunt t.
At hme, my dad said, "A jb's a big step t grwing up. I'm glad yu will be cntributing t the husehld." My dad's wrds made me realize that my earning might nt be mine t d with as wished.
My labrs lasted abut tw weeks, and the farmer said there might be mre wrk, but I wasn't interested. I decided it was nt fair that l had t cntribute my mney.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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题型解读
这是一篇记叙文的读后续写，要求考生在所给短文的基础上续写，并且结合划线词，构成一篇合理的完整故事。读后续写对学生学习语言知识的综合运用能力有着较高的要求。同时也考查学生们的发散思维能力和创造性思维能力。续写故事时，要求考生读懂文章，然后明白故事的发展进程、前因后果、人物特征和情感等。在此基础上，考生必须沿着文章的思路，根据提供的线索，恰当进行发挥，并且要使用给出的至少5个词语等。故事的结尾也必须符合原文的主题意义。
写作分析
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者高中毕业后，参加农场工作，辛辛苦苦挣到的钱，不情愿贡献给家庭，后来在看到父亲的辛劳之后，理解了父母担心的是自己太过自私而不知奉献，终于想通，并自豪地将自己劳动所得交给父亲的故事。
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The pay day arrived at last. I was glad that I finally gt the payment after wrking hard fr tw weeks. While walking back hme with an excited mind. I cnceived many plans abut hw t dispse f it. I needed a new ftball because the ld ne we played had already wrn ut. I intended t purchase my favrite chclates. Upn appraching the huse, I nticed my dad and mm standing beside the ld truck, lking sadly. It seemed as if smething unpleasant happened. “Hw much d we still need t pay fr a new truck?". asked my mther. Three hundred dllars, but we just had tw hundred left.”
发薪日终于到了。我很高兴，在我努力工作了两周后，我终于得到了报酬。一边兴奋地走回家。我构思了许多关于如何处理它的计划。我需要一个新的足球，因为我们踢的旧足球已经用坏了。我打算买我最喜欢的巧克力。走近房子，我注意到我爸爸和妈妈站在旧卡车旁边，悲伤地看着。似乎发生了一些不愉快的事情。“我们想买一辆新卡车还得付多少钱？”。我妈妈问。300美元，但我们只剩下200美元了。”
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I understd immediately what my parents were wrried abut. Really, the truck my dad drve ften brke dwn n the way, which made my dad in truble. My parents had intended t buy a new truck but culdn't affrd it. Suddenly, I realized what I shuld d. Stepping frward, I said, “Dad, here is what I received fr my wrk. I think it wuld help yu a little.” A little surprised at what I said, my mm hugged me tightly. That night, befre I went t bed, l thught I wuld tell the farmer the next day that I wuld cntinue my wrk, after all l grew up.
我立刻明白了我的父母在担心什么。真的，我爸爸开的卡车在路上经常坏了，这给我爸爸惹上了麻烦。我父母本来打算买一辆新卡车，但买不起。突然，我意识到我应该做什么。我走上前去，说：“爸爸，这是我工作的回报。我想这会对你有帮助。我说的话有点惊讶，妈妈紧紧地拥抱着我。那天晚上，在我睡觉之前，我想第二天我会告诉农夫，在我长大了之后，我将继续我的工作。
2021年6月新高考全国1卷（母亲节的惊喜）
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A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thught f the surprise they were planning fr Mther's Day. Hw pleased and prud Mther wuld be when they brught her breakfast in bed. They planned t make French tast and chicken prridge. They had watched their mther in the kitchen. There was nthing t it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what t d.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went dwn the stairs quietly t the kitchen. They decided t bil the prridge first. They put sme rice int a pt f water and left it t bil while they made the French tast. Jeff brke tw eggs int a plate and added in sme milk. Jema fund the bread and put tw slices int the egg mixture. Next, Jef turned n the secnd stve burner t heat up the frying pan. Everything was ging smthly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was t ht and the bread turned black within secnds. Jenna threw the burnt piece int the sink and put in the ther slice f bread. This time, she turned dwn the fire s it cked nicely.
Then Jeff nticed steam shting ut f the pt and the lid starting t shake. The next minute, the prridge biled ver and put ut the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned ff the gas quickly. But the stve was a mess nw. Jenna tld Jef t clean it up s they culd cntinue t ck the rest f the prridge. But Jeff's hand tuched the ht burner and he gave a cry f pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cld water. Then she caught the smell f burning. Oh dear！The piece f bread in the pan had turned black as well.
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As the twins lked arund them in disappintment, their father appeared.
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The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up.
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As the twins lked arund them in disappintment, their father appeared. One lk and he knew what they were up t. Seeing their discuraged faces, he tld them t clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast fr Mther. The twins cheered up and did as tld. Within an hur, the kitchen was cleaned, and Father had successfully made sme French tast and chicken prridge as the children wished. Then he sneaked back t bed. The twins prepared the breakfast tray, added a card they had made, and then headed fr their parents' bedrm.
当这对双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。他看了一眼，他就知道他们在做什么。看到他们沮丧的脸，他让他们打扫厨房，同时帮他们为母亲做早餐。这对双胞胎高兴起来，照做了。不到一个小时，厨房就打扫干净了，父亲按照孩子们的意愿，成功地做了一些法式吐司和鸡肉粥。然后他偷偷溜回床上。双胞胎准备了早餐托盘，加了一张他们做的卡片，然后前往他们父母的卧室。
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and wke their mther up. "Happy Mther's Day, darling Mummy!" thrilled vice yelling frm their thrat, the twins hugged their mm tightly. Mved and excited, mther held the twins with her warm arms as well. Her eyes widened at the sight f the breakfast tray. She shk father wh was pretending t snre. He whistled in astnishment when seeing the breakfast. Mther bit int a sandwich and said she had never tasted a better ne. Jeff immediately wanted t have a bite. Jenna caught her father's eye and they winked at each ther secretly.
这对双胞胎把早餐带到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲。“母亲节快乐，亲爱的妈妈！”激动的声音从他们的喉咙里叫喊着，双胞胎紧紧地拥抱着他们的妈妈。母亲感动而激动，也用她温暖的胳膊抱着这对双胞胎。一看到早餐托盘，她就睁大了眼睛。她摇着假装打鼾的父亲。当他看到早餐时，他惊讶地吹着口哨。妈妈咬了咬三明治，说她从来没有尝过比这更好的三明治过。杰夫立刻想咬他一口。詹娜抓住了她父亲的目光，他们偷偷地互相眨了眨眼。
2021年1月八省联考（好心家庭帮我修车）
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During this past year, I’ve had three instances f car truble. Each time these things happened, I was sick f the way mst peple hadn’t bthered t help. One f thse times, I was n the side f the rad fr clse t three hurs with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windws, big signs that said NEED A JACK (千斤顶), and ffered mney. Nthing. Right as I was abut t give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled ver, and the father bunded ut.
He sized up the situatin and called fr his daughter, wh spke English. He cnveyed thrugh her that he had a jack but that it was t small fr the Jeep, s we wuld need smething t supprt it. Then he gt a saw (锯子) frm the truck and cut a sectin ut f a big lg n the side f the rad. We rlled it ver and put his jack n tp, and we were in business.
I started taking the wheel ff, and then, if yu can believe it, I brke his tire irn. N wrries: He handed it t his wife, and she was gne in a flash dwn the rad t buy a new tire irn. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the jb, and I was a very happy man.
The tw f us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pt f water fr us t wash ur hands. I tried t put a $20 bill in the man’s hand, but he wuldn’t take it, s instead I went up t the truck and gave it t his wife as quietly as I culd. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexic, she said. They were in Oregn s Mmmy and Daddy culd wrk n a fruit farm fr the next few weeks. Then they wuld g hme.
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When I was abut t say gdbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.
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After they left, I gt int my Jeep and pened the paper bag.
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When I was abut t say gdbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch. I shk my head and said n, wndering why she asked such a questin — was she ging t treat me t lunch r smething? “Wait a minute,” said the girl, and then she went back t the truck. After a few minutes she came back with a paper bag. “Here are sme Mexican snacks and yu can have sme when yu are hungry,” the girl smiled. I was s surprised and tuched that wrds almst failed me. I just said a “WOW!” instead f a “Thank yu!” when I tk the bag.
After they left, I gt int my Jeep and pened the paper bag. When I saw what was in the bag, I was vercme with a mixture f respect and gratefulness. In additin t the snacks, there was the $20 bill. What a kind and respectable family! They are a perfect example f what kindness really means. And I’m sure I will pay it frward. （145）
当我正要说别时，女孩问我是否吃过午饭。我摇摇头，说不，不知道她为什么会问这样一个问题——她会给我吃午饭什么吗？“等一下，”女孩说，然后她回到卡车上。几分钟后，她带着一个纸袋回来了。“这里有一些墨西哥小吃，你饿的时候可以吃一些，”女孩笑着说。我很惊讶，也很感动，那句话几乎让我失望了。我只是说了一声“哇！”而不是一声“谢谢你！”当我拿起包的时候。
他们离开后，我上了吉普车，打开了纸袋。当我看到包里有什么东西时，我被一种尊重和感激所征服了。除了这些零食，还有$20的账单。一个多么善良、值得尊敬的家庭啊！它们是善良真正意义的完美例子。我相信我会提前付钱的。
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When I was abut t say gdbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch. Of curse nt, fr I had been trapped there fr quite a few hurs. She then had a wrd with her parents and went back t their truck. A few minutes later she came back with a paper bag. “That’s Mmmy’s hand-made tac,” explained the girl. “It’s s yummy that yu must lve it.” I was starving t death after all that exhausting wrk s I tk the Mexic-riginated fd, grateful and deeply mved. Then we waved gdbye t each ther.
After they left, I gt int my Jeep and pened the paper bag. Inside the bag was a chicken tac. The next few minutes saw my wlfing dwn the delicius fd. Tears welled up as I was chewing. It was awesme t knw that while many peple tend t ignre thse in need, there are sme kind-hearted nes wh g ut f their way t lend a hand. The gd deed the freign family did will never escape me. I am ging t pass it dwn t create a much friendlier wrld. （163）
当我正要说别时，女孩问我是否吃过午饭。当然不是，因为我已经被困在那里好几个小时了。然后她和父母说了句话，回到了他们的卡车上。几分钟后，她带着一个纸袋回来了。“那是妈妈手工做的墨西哥玉米卷，”女孩解释说。“这太美味了，你一定喜欢它。“在干了那么累的工作之后，我饿死了，所以我吃了墨西哥风味的食物，感激和感动。然后我们互相挥手道别。
他们离开后，我上了吉普车，打开了纸袋。袋子里有一个鸡肉玉米饼。接下来的几分钟，我狼吞虎咽地吃了美味的食物。当我在咀嚼时，眼泪涌了起来。虽然很多人倾向于忽视那些有需要的人，但有些善良的人会特意伸出援手，这真是太棒了。这个外国家庭所做的好事永远无法逃避我。我要把它传下来，创造一个更友好的世界。
2021年1月浙江卷（圣诞节的尴尬）
第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
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Pumpkin (南瓜）carving at Hallween is a family traditin. We visit a lcal farm every Octber. In the pumpkin field, I cmpete with my three brthers and sister t seek ut the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have t carry ur pumpkins back hme, and as the eldest child I have an advantage — I carried an 85-punder back last year.
This year, it was hard t tell whether my prize r the ne chsen by my 14-year-ld brther, Jasn, was the winner. Unfrtunately we frgt t weigh them befre taking ut their insides, but I was determined t prve my pint. All f us were hard at wrk at the kitchen table, with my mm filming the annual event. I’m unsure nw why I thught frcing my head inside the pumpkin wuld settle the matter, but it seemed t make perfect sense at the time.
With the pumpkin resting n the table, hle uppermst, I bent ver and pressed my head against the pening. At first I gt jammed just abve my eyes and then, as I went n with my task, unwilling t quit, my nse briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed t put my whle head int it, like a crk (软木塞) frced int a bttle. I was able t straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting n my shulders.
My excitement was shrt-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m ging t set it dwn, nw,” I said, and with Jasn helping t supprt its weight, I bent back ver the table t give it smewhere t rest. It was nly when I tried t remve my head that I realized getting ut was ging t be less straightfrward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nse gt in the way. I gt int a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and mved my head arund trying t find the right angle, but it was n use. “I can’t get it ut!” I shuted, my vice sunding unnaturally lud in the enclsed space.
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That vide was psted the day befre Hallween. ________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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I was stuck fr five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger. Grwing mre panic, I began t cry. Frtunately, hearing me crying, dad came and helped me lay my head n the table, s my neck culd rest fr a while. Then he said t me “Listen, hney. I have t cut this pumpkin in half. ” I had n chice but t keep still with my eyes tightly clsed and listening t the knife mving n the pumpkin. Mments later, my head was finally released frm this hrrible pumpkin cage. Then mm tld me she had just filmed me managing t pull my head ut f the pumpkin.
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That vide was psted the day befre Hallween. Actually my mm had asked whether she culd pst it n the Internet, because after all I was s embarrassed and lked s silly in it. Anyway, I ndded and supprted her idea. It turned ut that peple liked and frwarded it crazily n the Internet, nly t make me an Internet celebrity. (续写152词)
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我被困了五六分钟，虽然感觉要长得多了。我越来越恐慌，我开始哭了起来。幸运的是，听到我哭了，爸爸过来帮我把头放在桌子上，这样我的脖子就可以休息一会儿了。然后他对我说：“听着，亲爱的。”我得把这个南瓜切成两半。“我别无选择，只能闭上眼睛，听着刀在南瓜上的移动。过了一会儿，我的头终于从这个可怕的南瓜笼子里被释放出来了。然后妈妈告诉我，她刚刚拍下了我设法把头从南瓜里拉出来的照片。
第2段
那个视频是在万圣节的前一天发布的。实际上，我妈妈问她是否可以把它贴在网上，因为毕竟我很尴尬，看起来很傻。不管怎样，我点了点头，支持她的想法。结果，人们疯狂地喜欢并转发它，却让我成为了网络名人。
2020年7月山东卷（爆米花救助穷人）
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The Meredith family lived in a small cmmunity. As the ecnmy was in decline, sme peple in the twn had lst their jbs. Many f their families were struggling t make ends meet. Peple were trying t help each ther meet the challenges.
Mrs. Meredith was a mst kind and thughtful wman. She spent a great deal f time visiting the pr. She knew they had prblems, and they needed all kinds f help. When she had time, she wuld bring fd and medicine t them.
One mrning she tld her children abut a family she had visited the day befre. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, wh tk care f him and culd nt g ut t wrk, and their little by. The little by — his name was Bernard — had interested her very much.
“I wish yu culd see him,” she said t her wn children, Jhn, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help t his mther. He wants very much t earn sme mney, but I dn’t see what he can d.”
After their mther left the rm, the children sat thinking abut Bernard. “I wish we culd help him t earn mney,” said Clara. “His family is suffering s much.”
“S d I,” said Harry. “We really shuld d smething t assist them.”
Fr sme mments, Jhn said nthing, but, suddenly, he sprang t his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a slutin that we can all help accmplish (完成) .”
The ther children als jumped up all attentin. When Jhn had an idea, it was sure t be a gd ne. “I tell yu what we can d,” said Jhn. “Yu knw that big bx f crn Uncle Jhn sent us? Well, we can make ppcrn (爆米花), and put it int paper bags, and Bernard can take it arund t the huses and sell it.”
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When Mrs. Meredith heard f Jhn’s idea, she thught it was a gd ne, t.
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With everything ready, Bernard started ut n his new business.
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When Mrs. Meredith heard f the idea, she thught it was a gd ne, t. Then Mrs. Meredith searched the internet and rdered a husehld ppcrn machine. After that, Mrs. Meredith, tgether with her three children, paid anther visit t the family and tld them abut the ppcrn plan. Needless t say, they were deeply mved, especially Bernard wh finally fund a way t make mney fr his family. A few days later, the machine was delivered t Mrs. Meredith’s drstep. And it wasn’t lng befre they gt the hang f using the machine t make ppcrn.
With everything ready, Bernard started ut n his new business. Althugh it was a hard time and things were tight fr everybdy, Bernard’s business wrked ut quite well. He carried the ppcrn n his small bike, ging frm dr t dr t sell it. Peple were surprised t see such a little, prly-dressed by selling ppcrn at their drs, but eventually almst all f them wuld buy a bag r tw. It is lve that makes the wrld g rund and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.
当梅雷迪思太太听到这个想法时，她认为这也是件好事。然后，梅雷迪思太太在网上搜索了一下，订购了一台家用爆米花机。在那之后，梅雷迪思太太和她的三个孩子又去拜访了他们家，并告诉了他们爆米花的计划。不用说，他们非常感动，尤其是伯纳德，他终于找到了为家人赚钱的方法。几天后，机器被送到了梅雷迪思太太的家门口。没过多久，他们就掌握了用机器做爆米花。
一切都准备好了，伯纳德开始了他的新生意。虽然这是一段艰难的时期，事情对每个人来说都很紧张，但伯纳德的生意还是很顺利。他骑着小自行车拿着爆米花，挨家挨户地卖。人们惊讶地看到这样一个衣着不良的小男孩在门口卖爆米花，但最终几乎所有人都买了一两个包。是爱使世界四处运转，伯纳德深深地感受到了他的小心灵深处。
2020年7月浙江卷（拍照北极熊遇险）
第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
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One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single gal: t phtgraph plar bears. We were staying at a research camp utside “ the plar bear capital f the wrld ” — the twn f Churchill in Manitba, Canada.
Taking pictures f plar bears is amazing but als dangerus. Plar bears — like all wild animals — shuld be phtgraphed frm a safe distance. When I’m face t face with a plar bear, I like it t be thrugh a camera with a telepht lens. But smetimes, that is easier said than dne. This was ne f thse times.
As Elli and I cked dinner, a yung male plar bear wh was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled ur garlic bread.
The hungry bear fllwed his nse t ur camp, which was surrunded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He std n his back legs and pushed at the wden fence psts.
Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actins we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pts hard, and fired blank shtgun shells int the air. Smetimes lud nises like these will scare bears ff. Nt this plar bear thugh — he just kept trying t tear dwn the fence with his massive paws (爪子).
I radied the camp manager fr help. He tld me a helicpter was n its way, but it wuld be 30 minutes befre it arrived. Making the best f this clse encunter (相遇), I tk sme pictures f the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wuldn’t last thrugh 30 mre minutes f the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but desn’t hurt them. S I apprached ur uninvited guest slwly and, thrugh the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry rar (吼叫), the bear ran t the lake t wash his eyes.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp. ___________________
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At that very mment, the helicpter arrived. _____________________________
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A few minutes later, the bear headed back t ur camp. Then we realized that the spray had nly angered him even mre, fr he seemed much fiercer this time and vilently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly, nt knwing what t d. At this critical mment, Elli grabbed several pieces f garlic bread and threw them ver the fence. It wrked! The bear stpped the attack and ran t the bread. But it wasn’t lng befre he ate up all the bread and came back again.
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At that very mment, the helicpter arrived. “Thank gdness we are saved!” Elli cried ut. Once the helicpter landed, we gt nt it in n time, excited and relieved. When we were safe n the helicpter up in the air, I was amazed t spt that the bear had finally trn dwn the fence and ran twards the fd we left behind. I quickly tk ut the camera and phtgraphed the rare scene — we were rbbed by a plar bear!
几分钟后，这只熊回到了我们的营地。然后我们意识到，浪花只是更激怒了他，因为这次他似乎更凶狠了，而且像疯了一样猛烈地推了推篱笆。我的心狂狂，不知道该怎么办。在这个关键时刻，埃利抓起几块蒜蓉面包，扔过了栅栏。它已经成功了！熊阻止了进攻，跑到面包边。但没过多久，他就吃完了所有的面包，又回来了。
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就在那一刻，直升机来了。“谢天谢地，我们得救了！”埃莉喊道。直升机一降落，我们很快就上了飞机，兴奋而松了一口气。当我们安全地坐在直升机上时，我惊讶地发现这只熊终于撕掉了栅栏，向我们留下的食物跑去。我迅速拿出相机，拍摄了这个罕见的场景，我们被一只北极熊抢劫了！
2020年1月浙江卷（小狗Pnny的新玩伴）
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“I’m ging t miss yu s much, Pppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent dwn t hug his ld friend gdbye. He std up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying nt t let his emtins (情绪) get the better f him.
His parents were nt quite able t keep theirs under cntrl. They had driven their sn several hurs ut f twn t the university where he wuld sn be living and studying. It was time t say gdbye fr nw at least. The family hugged and smiled thrugh misty eyes and then laughed.
The by lifted the last bag nt his shulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it.” he said. “I’ll see yu back hme in a mnth, kay?” His parents ndded, and they watched as he walked ut f sight int the crwds f hundreds f students and parents. The by’s mther turned t the dg, “Okay, Pppy, time t g back hme.”
The huse seemed quiet as a tmb withut the by living there. All that week, Pppy didn’t seem interested in her dinner, her favrite ty, r even in her daily walk. Her wners were sad t, but they knew their sn wuld be back t visit, Pppy didn’t.
They ffered the dg sme f her favrite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit n the sfa, but the ld girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self. Her wners started t get wrried, “What shuld we d t cheer Pppy up?” asked Dad. “We’ve tried everything.”
“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mm. “Withut anybdy left in the huse but us, this place culd use a bit f fun. Let’s get a little dg fr Pppy.”
It didn’t take lng befre they walked thrugh the frnt dr carrying a big bx. Pppy
welcmed them hme as usual, but when she saw the bx, she stpped. She put her nse n
it. Her tail began wagging (摆动) ever s slwly, then faster as she caught the smell.
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I was stuck fr five r six minutes thugh it felt much lnger. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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That vide was psted the day befre Hallween. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared. Pppy jumped with jy at the sight f the little dg. She lwered her head t watch it curiusly. Then she became s excited that she accidentally kncked ver the bx in an attempt t get clser. With the bx tipping ver, ut came the little ne, wh was nt shy and instantly gt familiar with Pppy. It didn’t take lng befre the tw played arund the huse, cheerfully running after each ther.
爸爸打开盒子，一只可爱的小狗出现了。波比一看到这只小狗就高兴地跳了起来。她低下头，好奇地看着它。然后她变得非常兴奋，她不小心撞倒了盒子，试图靠近。盒子翻了过来，小家伙走了出来，他并不害羞，立刻熟悉了波比。没过多久，两人就在房子里玩耍，高高兴兴地互相跑着。
A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm the university. He had been missing his parents and the dg since it was the first time that he had been away frm hme fr such a lng time. When the by caught sight f Pppy, he went rushing tward the dg and bent dwn t give her a big hug. Suddenly, the by nticed the little dg. “Oh my gd, wh is this?” His parents laughed at the lk f surprise n his face. “It’s Pppy’s new cmpanin.” said Mm. (155)
几周后，这个男孩从大学走回家了。自从他第一次离家这么长时间以来，他就一直在想念父母和狗。当男孩看到波比时，他冲向狗，弯下腰给她一个大大的拥抱。突然，那男孩注意到了那只小狗。“哦，天哪，这是谁？”他的父母嘲笑他脸上惊讶的表情。“这是波比的新伴侣。””妈妈说。
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Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared.It was hiding in ne crner f the bx, with a curius lk in its eyes. Wagging its tail, it tried t climb ut f the bx, but it fell dwn n its back, unable t stand up. Upn seeing this, his parents culd nt help laughing. Gently, Mm picked it up frm the bx and put it n the flr. "Pppy, isn′t it a sweet dg? It's fr yu!" Mm said in a sft vice."It's yur cmpanin." Cheerful and yet a little nervus, Pppy kept running and barking at the new family member. But Much t the relief f his parents, they were like peas and carrts sn afterwards, and it seemed as if Rpp had frgtten her ld friend.
爸爸打开盒子，一只可爱的小狗出现了。它藏在盒子的一个角落里，眼睛里有一种奇怪的神情。它摇着尾巴，试图爬出盒子，但背部倒了下来，站不起来。一看到这一点，他的父母就忍不住笑了起来。妈妈轻轻地把它从盒子里拿起来，放在地板上。“这不是一只可爱的狗吗？”这是给你准备的！”妈妈用一种温柔的声音说。“这是你的同伴。”波比很高兴，但又有点紧张，不停地跑着新家庭成员吠叫。但让他的父母松了一口气的是，不久之后它们就像豌豆和胡萝卜一样，罗普似乎已经忘记了她的老朋友。
A few weeks later, the by arrived hme frm university. Pppy threw herself at him and licked his hands and face excitedly, her eyes sparkling with delight and her tail wagging furiusly. It tk the by fr a lng time t ntice that there was a cute puppy beside Pppy,grwling and sniffing at his feet.Immediately, he bent dwn,strked its head and asked,"What an adrable puppy! Whse is it?" His parents smiled and replied,"We gt it fr Puppy because.." Knwing what had happened t Pppy when he was at the university, the by was s mved that he tk the ld girl in his arms.Tears burred his visin as he murmured,"Pppy,I miss yu, t." And quietly, Pppy raised her head and watched the yung teenager like xWaby in his arms.
几周后，男孩从大学回家。 波比扑向他，兴奋地舔着他的手和脸，她的眼睛闪闪发光，她的尾巴剧烈地摆动。 男孩花了很长时间才注意到波比旁边有一只可爱的小狗，在他的脚边咆哮和嗅。 他立刻弯下腰，抚摸它的头，问：“多么可爱的小狗啊！ 是谁的？” 他的父母笑了笑，回答说：“我们给波比买的，因为”他知道波比在大学时发生了什么很感动，把那个老女孩抱在怀里。 他喃喃地说：“波比，我也想你。” 然后静静地，波比抬起头，看着那年轻的少年在他怀里。
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Dad pened the bx and a sweet little dg appeared. It lifted and lwered its head alternately with cautin, its eyes shining ut f curisity."Say hell t yur new friend, Pppy." Dad said in an encuraging vice. Pppy gave him a seemingly knwing lk, scratching the bx with its frnt paw. The little creature slwly std up, jumped ut with pains-taking effrts and yapped arund Pppy. They sniffed each ther like ld friends. The parents gasped in surprise even with kind f envy. They cannt imagine the tw dgs enjyed each ther's cmpany in a blink f an eye.
爸爸打开盒子，一只可爱的小狗出现了。它小心地抬起头，眼睛因为好奇而闪闪发光。“跟你的新朋友打招呼，波比。”爸爸用一种鼓舞人心的声音说。波比看了他一个看似知情的样子，用前爪摸着盒子。这个小家伙慢慢地站起来，痛苦地跳出来，绕着罂粟跑。他们像老朋友一样互相嗅嗅。父母们甚至有点嫉妒，也惊讶地喘不过气来。他们无法想象这两只狗只要眨一眨眼就能享受到彼此的陪伴。
A few weeks later the by arrived hme frm university. He cannt wait t tell his parents abut his new friends in the university. Strangely, he wasn't greeted with Pppy's eager barking but an unbelievable scene. The tw dgs were tumbling abut n the flr. The huse was pulsating with life.Parents came up, hugging his sn."One has t grw up in his new friends' cmpany. We shuld get used t it." Mm said half-jkingly, strking his thin but determined face. It can't be sure enugh.
几周后，男孩从大学回家。 他迫不及待地告诉父母他在大学里的新朋友。 奇怪的是，他没有受到波比急切的吠叫的欢迎，而是一个令人难以置信的场景。 两只狗在地板上翻滚。 房子里充满了生机。 父母走过来，抱着儿子。 一个人必须在他的新朋友的公司里长大。 我们应该习惯它。” 妈妈半开玩笑地说，抚摸着他瘦削但坚定的脸。 不能确定。
2018年6月浙江卷（山中遇险）
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It was summer, and my dad wanted t treat me t a vacatin like never befre. He decided t take me n a trip t the Wild West.
We tk a plane t Albuquerque, a big city in the state f New Mexic. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternn. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up frm the airprt and drve us up t his farm in Pecs.
His wife Tina cked us a delicius dinner and we gt t knw his sns Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestrm f the farm huse listening t the frgs and water rlling dwn the river nearby. Very early in the mrning. Uncle Paul wke us up t have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn n my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went t help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul t take the sheep ut t graze (吃草). I was impressed t see my dad and Uncle Paul riding hrses. They lked really cl.
In the afternn, I asked Uncle Paul if I culd take a hrse ride, and he said yes, as lng as my dad went with me. I wasn’t ging t take a hrse ride by myself anyway. S, my dad and I put n ur new cwby hats, gt n ur hrses, and headed slwly twards the muntains. “Dn’t be late fr supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep t the track s that yu dn’t get lst!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm huse were ut f sight. It was s peaceful and quiet and the clrs f the brwn rcks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternn sun mixed t create a magic scene. It lked like a beautiful wven (编织的) blanket spread ut upn the grund just fr us.
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Suddenly a little rabbit jumped ut in frnt f my hrse. Dad and I fund it was s cute that we decided t chase it. After a while, we were cmpletely lst in the frest. There was nthing left in ur sight but the trees. “We may nt be able t make it back t the farm huse in time fr supper.” I thught t myself. After a series f fruitless attempts t find a way ut, we felt hungry and tired.
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We had n idea where we were and it was getting dark. We gt stuck in the frest. And an unexpected shwer added t the difficulty f us in finding a way hme, fr all the tracks we had made disappeared because f the rain. I was almst n the edge f breaking dwn when my father said, “Dn’t wrry, my sn. I remember there is a river near the farm huse. Find the river and we will be back hme.” Finally, we fund the river and gt back t the huse alng it. Needless t say, we ate a late dinner.
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突然，一只小兔子跳到了我的马面前。爸爸和我发现它太可爱了，我们决定追它。过了一段时间，我们完全迷失在了森林里。除了那些树，我们眼前什么也没有了。“我们可能不能及时回到农场去吃晚饭。我自己想。在一系列徒劳的尝试之后，我们感到饿又累。
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我们不知道自己在哪里，天越来越黑了。我们被困在了森林里。一场意想不到的阵雨使我们更难找到回家的路，因为我们留下的所有脚印都因为下雨而消失了。我快要崩溃了，我父亲说：“别担心，儿子。我记得在农舍附近有一条河。找到河，我们就回家。最后，我们找到了河，沿着它回到了房子。不用说，我们的晚餐吃得很晚。
2017年11月浙江卷（健忘的妈妈）
第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A vacatin with my mther
I had an interesting childhd: It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because f my mther — lving, sweet, yet absent-minded and frgetful. One strange family trip we tk when I was eleven tells a lt abut her.
My tw sets f grandparents lived in Clrad and Nrth Dakta, and my parents decided t spend a few weeks driving t thse states and seeing all the sights alng the way. As the first day f ur trip apprached, David, my eight-year-ld brther, and I unwillingly said gd-bye t all f ur friends. Wh knew if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the mment f ur departure arrived, and we laded suitcases, bks, games, camping equipment, and a tent int the car and bravely drve ff. We bravely drve ff again tw hurs later after we’d returned hme t get the purse and traveler’s checks Mm had frgtten.
David and I were always a little nervus when using gas statin bathrms if Mm was driving while Dad slept: “Yu stand utside the dr and play lkut (放哨) while I g, and I’ll stand utside the dr and play lkut while yu g.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Hney, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gsh… I thught they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t abut t take any chances.
On the furth r fifth night, we had truble finding a htel with a vacancy. After driving in vain fr sme time, Mm suddenly gt a great idea: Why didn’t we find a huse with a likely-lking backyard and ask if we culd set up tent there? David and I became nervus. T ur great relief, Dad turned dwn the idea. Mm never culd understand ur bjectins. If a strange family shwed up n her frnt drstep, Mm wuld have been delighted. She thinks everyne in the wrld is as nice as she is. We finally fund a vacancy in the next twn.
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The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us.
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We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way.
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The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us. But then we were half an hur away frm the htel, where the tent was left behind. Dad recmmended buying a new ne, while Mm insisted n ur ging back t fetch it, saying “Frgetful peple like me may lse things repeatedly, s it’s unwise t give up the tent.” Finally, we gt back the tent and hit the rad again. If Mm hadn’t been that absent-minded, it wuld have saved us the truble f ging back again and again.
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We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way. One day, twards evening, we fund a great camping site at the ft f a high muntain. David and I helped Dad put up the tent, and Mm was busy preparing supper. When the setting sun cast an range light ver the muntains, the tent was set up and the meal was ready. Sitting arund the camp fire, we talked and laughed. Every time we mentined the funny incidents f the jurney a pleasant smile wuld spread ver Mm’s face. (续写词数163)
第二天，我们想起了我们带来的那个全新的帐篷。但后来我们离旅馆还有半小时的路程了。爸爸建议买一个新的，妈妈坚持要我们回去拿，说“像我这样被遗忘的人可能会反复丢东西，所以放弃帐篷是不明智的。”最后，我们回到帐篷，又上路了。如果妈妈不是那么心不在焉，我们就会省一次又一次回去的麻烦。
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我们开车穿过了几个州，沿途看到了很多美丽的风景。一天，傍晚，我们在山脚下发现了一个很棒的露营地。大卫和我帮爸爸搭起了帐篷，妈妈正忙着准备晚饭。当夕阳向山上发出橙色的灯光时，帐篷就搭好了，饭菜也准备好了。我们坐在篝火旁，聊又笑。每次我们提到旅途中有趣的事情，妈妈的脸上都会露出愉快的微笑。
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The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brught with us. T ur delight, Mm gave up the idea f camping in sme stranger’s backyard. Instead, we fund a wnderful camping site in the wild. It was a clearing in the wds by a small lake, where Dad culd catch sme fish fr dinner. We had n truble setting up ur tent, but we were disappinted t find that Mm frgt t pack up pillws. Needless t say, we all wke up with a sre neck the next mrning.
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We drve thrugh several states and saw lts f great sights alng the way. It was a fantastic trip. We crssed big rivers and vast plains, climbed high muntains, and verlked deep valleys. During the trip, Mm’s being absent-minded nt nly gt us int much truble, but als gave us many funny mments. But luckily, she was nt s frgetful as t leave me and David behind in the gas statin bathrms. We all arrived at grandparents’ hme safe and sund. (续写词数147)
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第二天，我们想起了我们带来的那个全新的帐篷。让我们高兴的是，妈妈放弃了在一个陌生人的后院露营的想法。相反，我们在野外找到了一个很棒的露营地。那是一个小湖边树林里的一块空地，爸爸可以在那里钓点鱼吃晚饭。我们顺利地搭好了帐篷，但我们失望地发现妈妈忘了收拾枕头。不用说，第二天早上我们醒来都脖子痛。
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我们开车穿过了几个州，沿途看到了很多美丽的风景。这是一次美妙的旅行。我们穿过大河和广阔的平原，爬上高山，俯瞰着深深的山谷。在旅途中，妈妈心不在焉不仅给我们惹来了许多麻烦，而且也给了我们很多有趣的时刻。但幸运的是，她并没有健忘到把我和大卫留在加油站的浴室里。我们都平安到达祖父母家。
2017年6月浙江卷（狼口脱险）
第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
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On a bright, warm July afternn, Mac Hllan, a primary schl teacher, was cycling frm his hme t Alaska with his friends. One f his friends had stpped t make a bicycle repair, but they had encuraged Mac t carry n, and they wuld catch up with him sn. As Mac pedaled (骑行) alng alne, he thught fndly f his wife and tw yung daughters at hme. He hped t shw them this beautiful place smeday.
Then Mac heard quick and lud breathing behind him. “Man, that’s a big dg!” he thught. But when he lked t the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dg at all, but a wlf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He fund ut his can f bear spray. With ne hand n the bars, he fired the spray at the wlf. A bright red clud envelped the animal, and t Mac’s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back f Mac’s bike, tearing pen his tent bag. He fired at the wlf a secnd time, and again, it fell back nly t quickly restart the chase (追赶).
Mac was pedaling hard nw. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful nt t slw dwn. He saw a steep uphill climb befre him. He knew that nce he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wlf’s teeth wuld be tearing int his flesh.
At this mment, Paul and Becky were driving their car n their way t Alaska. They didn’t think much f it when they saw tw cyclists repairing their bike n the side f the rad. A bit later, they sptted what they, t, assumed was a dg running alngside a man n a bike. As they gt clser, they realized that the dg was a wlf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in frnt f it as the wlf was catching up fast, just a dzen yards away nw.
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The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him. Mac jumped ff his bicycle and rushed t the dr f the car. But befre Mac culd pen the dr, the wlf had caught up and jumped t attack. Luckily, the magic spray saved Mac a third time. Seeing the wlf back ff, Paul quickly unlcked the dr, and the frightened man climbed int the car in n time, shutting the dr behind him heavily. Becky lked ut f the back windw and saw the wlf standing ver Mac’s bicycle as if it were a kill. Sn after, the animal ran ff.
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A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived. Mac gt ut f the car and hugged his friends. “It was really a nightmare and I thught I was ging t die,” said Mac in a shaky vice, tears gathering in his eyes. Fr him, life culd never be mre beautiful. After saying gdbye t Paul and Becky with gratitude, the three men cntinued their trip, agreeing never t separate again. (续写词数：158)
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汽车突然停在他前面。麦克跳下自行车，冲向车门口。但麦克还没来得及开门，狼就赶上了，跳起来攻击。幸运的是，魔法喷雾剂第三次救了麦克。看到狼回来了，保罗迅速打开了门，那个吓坏了的人立刻爬上了车，在他身后重重地关上了门。贝基从后窗外看，看到狼站在麦克的自行车前，好像是在杀人。不久之后，这只动物就跑掉了。
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几分钟后，另外两名骑自行车的人来了。麦克下了车，拥抱了他的朋友们。“这真的是一场噩梦，我还以为我要死了。”麦克用颤抖的声音说，眼睛里充满了泪水。对他来说，生活永远不会如此美好了。在感激地与保罗和贝基道别后，这三个人继续他们的旅行，同意不再分开。
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The car abruptly stpped in frnt f him. Mac crashed int the car with a lud bang. As a result, he fell ff the bicycle and had his left ankle twisted. Hardly had Mac std up when the wlf arrived and was abut t launch anther attack. Mac was ging t die when suddenly the wlf was hit right n the head by a piece f rck. The wlf fell back, hwling with pain. It was Paul wh did this. Becky helped Mac climb int the car, while Paul kept shuting and thrwing stnes at the wlf.
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A few minutes later, the ther tw cyclists arrived. They were shcked at what they saw and jined Paul. One f Mac’s friends picked ut sme raw meat and threw it t the wlf. Satisfied with what he gt, the wlf ran int the wds. Mac thanked Paul and Becky, “Hw grateful I am that yu stpped t save me and I we it t yu that I’m still alive.” As Mac gt injured, the three men had t give up the rest f their jurney and returned hme.(续写词数：175)
汽车突然停在他前面。麦克砰的一声撞上了汽车。结果，他从自行车上摔了下来，左脚踝扭伤了。麦克刚站起来，狼就来了，正要再发动一次进攻。麦克正要死，突然狼被一块石头击中头部。狼倒了下来，痛苦地嚎叫着。这是保罗做的。贝基帮助麦克爬上车里，保罗不停地大喊大叫，向狼扔石头。
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几分钟后，另外两名骑自行车的人来了。他们对所看到的感到震惊，加入了保罗。麦克的一个朋友挑了一些生肉，扔给了狼身上。狼对他得到的很满意，跑进了树林。麦克感谢保罗和贝基，“我很感激你停下来救我，我欠我还活着。”麦克受伤了，三个人不得不放弃剩下的旅程回家了。
2016年10月浙江卷（森林遇险）
第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tm, had driven three hurs t camp vernight by a lake in the frest. Unfrtunately, n the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started t quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was s angry that she said t Tm. “I'm ging t find a better spt fr us t camp" and walked away.
With n path t fllw,Jane just walked n fr quite a lng time. After she had climbed t a high place. she turned arund, hping t see the lake. T her surprise, she saw nthing but frest and, far beynd, a snwcapped muntain tp. She suddenly realized that she was lst.
“Tm! "she cried. "Help!"
N reply. If nly she had nt left her mbile phne in that bag with Tm. Jane kept mving, but the farther she walked, the mre cnfused she became. As night was beginning t fall, Jane was s tired that she had t stp fr the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much t be with Tm and her family. She wanted t hld him and tell him hw much she lved him.
Jane rse at the break f day, hungry and thirsty. She culd hear water trickling (滴落）smewhere at a distance. Quickly she fllwed the sund t a stream. T her great jy,she als saw sme berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling strnger nw. Jane began t walk alng the stream and hpe it wuld lead her t the lake.
As she picked her way carefully alng the stream, Jane heard a helicpter. Is that fr me? Unfrtunately, the trees made it impssible fr peple t see her frm abve. A few minutes later, anther helicpter flew verhead. Jane tk ff her yellw bluse, thinking that she shuld g t an pen area and flag them if they came back again.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again.
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It was daybreak when Jane wke up.
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【范文】
But n mre helicpters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an abslute darkness ruled the frest. Jane, exhausted and scared, lay dwn near a stne, missing her family at a distance. All the fantastic memry crwded in and she culdn't help crying, "Hadn't I quarreled with Tm, walked away and climbed t the high place, I wuldn't be trapped in this awful place, cnfrnted with the danger f dying." She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes.
It was daybreak when Jane wke up. Weak as she was, she struggled t her feet, cntinuing searching fr assistance. T her great jy, a helicpter was flying verhead again and again. Eager and excited, she flagged her yellw bluse and spared n effrt t yell s as t attract thers' attentin. Frtunately, she was eventually nticed and brught int the helicpter. There, she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expressin f relief. As tightly as pssible, she hugged him and was t thrilled t say anything. Besides, they agreed never t quarrel again, determining t live the life t the fullest.
【解析】
首先，在逻辑上，要做到了合理合情：起初，主人公身陷森林，内心充满了悔恨，在面对困难时焦虑、畏惧；之后，主人公努力求生，最终获救，并且领悟到了一定的人生道理。纵观整个故事，情节发展不仅符合两段给出的开头所限定的情景要求，而且还设置了一定的悬念，增强了故事的可读性。
文章第一句 "an abslute darkness ruled the frest" 中， "rule" 一词就使用了拟人的修辞手法，让森林阴森黑暗的一面展露无遗，同时描绘出主人公身处绝境的紧迫性。在 "Eager and excited, she flagged her yellw bluse…" 一句中，直接将情绪形容词放在句首，使用了非谓语动词的语法，表达精练。
此外， "There, she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expressin f relief." 一句中，使用了几个短句，却包含了两处非谓语动词语法，同时活用了 "wear" 一词，把两个人相见时的场景生动地描绘了出来。
【词汇拓展】
1） 表示并列关系的过渡词：and, as well as, r ，Nt nly … but als
2） 表示转折关系的过渡词：but, yet, hwever , althugh , thugh …
3） 表示时间关系的过渡词：first, secnd, third, and then, finally, after, befre, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that …
浙江卷样题（银行抢劫）
【1】A funny thing happened t Arthur when he was n the way t wrk ne day. As he walked alng Park Avenue near the First Natinal Bank, he heard the sund f smene trying t start a car. He tried again and again but culdn’t get the car mving. Arthur turned and lked inside at the face f a yung man wh lked wrried. Arthur stpped and asked, “It lks like yu’ve gt a prblem,” Arthur said.
【2】“I’m afraid s. I’m in a big hurry and I can’t start my car.”
【3】“Is there smething I can d t help?” Arthur asked. The yung man lked at the tw suitcases in the back seat and then said, “ Thanks. If yu’re sure it wuldn’t be t much truble, yu culd help me get these suitcases int a taxi.”
“N truble at all. I’d be glad t help.”
【4】The yung man gt ut and tk ne f the suitcases frm the back seat. After placing it n the grund, he turned t get the ther ne. Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking, he heard the lng lud nise f an alarm.
【5】It was frm the bank. There had been a rbbery (抢劫)!
【6】Park Avenue had been quiet a mment befre. Nw the air was filled with the sund f the alarm and the shuts f peple running frm all directins. Cars stpped and the passengers jined the crwd in frnt f the bank. Peple asked each ther, “What happened?” But everyne had a different answer.
【7】Arthur, still carrying the suitcase, turned t lk at the bank and walked right int the yung wman in frnt f him.
【8】She lked at the suitcase and then at him. Arthur was surprised. “Why is she lking at me like that?” He thught. “The suitcase！She thinks I’m the bank thief!”
【9】Arthur lked arund at the crwd f peple. He became frightened, and withut anther thught, he started t run.
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As he was running, Arthur heard the yung man shuting behind, “Stp, stp!”
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The taxi stpped in frnt f the Plice Statin and Arthur...
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As he was running, Arthur heard the yung man shuting behind, “Stp, stp!” But Arthur ran even faster. Just then, a taxi came alng. Arthur stpped it and threw himself int the back seat and asked the driver t g t the Plice Statin.
亚瑟跑的时候，听到年轻人在后面喊：“停下来，停下来！”但亚瑟跑得更快了。就在这时，一辆出租车来了。亚瑟拦住车，倒到后座上，让司机去警察局。
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The taxi stpped in frnt f the Plice Statin and Arthur ran int it, shuting, “There’s a bank rbbery and I knw the bank thief.” Quickly after Arthur tld his stry, the plicemen started fr the bank withut delay. When they arrived at the spt, they were surprised t find that the peple wh gathered befre the bank were nw crwding arund the yung man, wh seemed quite wrried. Finally, Arthur realized that he had made a mistake. The lud nise f the alarm was incrrectly made by the bank’s system and nthing happened t the bank, but the yung man was wrried that smene had rbbed his suitcase.
出租车停在警察局前，亚瑟跑了进去，喊道：“有银行抢劫，我认识银行小偷。”亚瑟讲完他的故事后，警察很快就开始向银行走去。当他们到达现场时，他们惊讶地发现，聚集在银行前的人现在正挤在这个年轻人周围，他似乎很担心。最后，亚瑟意识到他犯了一个错误。银行的系统错误地发出了警报，银行什么也没发生，但年轻人担心有人抢劫了他的手提箱。
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