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\l "_Tc24518" 第一步：困难描写（消极情绪+困难处境） PAGEREF _Tc24518 \h 4
\l "_Tc4380" 第二步：助人过程呈现（（想到办法+动作链） PAGEREF _Tc4380 \h 5
\l "_Tc30710" 第三步：皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华） PAGEREF _Tc30710 \h 6
\l "_Tc28788" Part3：助人场景描写 PAGEREF _Tc28788 \h 7
\l "_Tc13037" 一、帮助他人之后 PAGEREF _Tc13037 \h 7
\l "_Tc30500" 二、发生水灾之后 PAGEREF _Tc30500 \h 8
\l "_Tc31432" 三、发生误解之后 PAGEREF _Tc31432 \h 9
\l "_Tc25975" 四、发生火灾之后 PAGEREF _Tc25975 \h 10
\l "_Tc20806" 五、感受善良之后 PAGEREF _Tc20806 \h 11
\l "_Tc9264" 六、感受幸福之后 PAGEREF _Tc9264 \h 11
\l "_Tc23200" 七、发生误解之后 PAGEREF _Tc23200 \h 12
\l "_Tc4925" 八、获得勇气 PAGEREF _Tc4925 \h 13
\l "_Tc22861" 九、获得自信 PAGEREF _Tc22861 \h 14
\l "_Tc27732" 十、接收礼物之后 PAGEREF _Tc27732 \h 15
\l "_Tc9420" 十一、老师的帮助 PAGEREF _Tc9420 \h 16
\l "_Tc815" 十二、陌生人的帮助 PAGEREF _Tc815 \h 17
\l "_Tc31571" Part4：灵活应用 PAGEREF _Tc31571 \h 18
\l "_Tc6377" 例1：老夫妇帮助我 PAGEREF _Tc6377 \h 18
\l "_Tc11857" 例2：帮助老妇人 PAGEREF _Tc11857 \h 20
\l "_Tc25359" Part5：高考真题再现 PAGEREF _Tc25359 \h 23
\l "_Tc26534" 真题1：好心的墨西哥家庭【2021年八省联考】 PAGEREF _Tc26534 \h 23
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Part1：经典例文（披萨店员工救人）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
When the emplyees at the Dmin’s pizza place in Salem, Oregn, hadn’t received any rder frm Kirk Alexander fr mre than 2 weeks, they knew smething wasn’t right. Kirk was a lyal custmer and the staff all knew him. S it was natural that they gt wrried when they had n news abut him. Their cncern saved his life.
Sarah Fuller, the general manager at the Dmin’s branch, said that Kirk, wh was 48 years ld, had been a lyal custmer since 2009. “He rders every day, r every ther day,” Sarah said.
Nrmally, his rder came up n the screen because he rdered nline. S we saw it came acrss the screen and we were thinking, “Oh, Kirk’s rder.” After a few days withut a single rder, Sarah and the staff started t wrry.
A few Dmin’s drivers had mentined that they hadn’t seen his rder cme acrss their screen in a while. Sarah checked the system and saw that n rder had cme in 11 days. S they decided t investigate.
Sarah decided t send Tracy Hamblen, a deliver driver, t Kirk’s place. When he gt there, he immediately knew smething was wrng. While the lights and TV were n, Kirk did nt cme t the dr. Additinally, his phne went directly t vicemail. S Tracy immediately called 911.
Para.1:
When the plice arrived at the place,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Para.2:
A few days later, Kirk was released frm the hspital.
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【答案】Para1: When the plice arrived at the place, they heard a cry fr help frm the inside f the huse. Inside, they fund Kirk, wh was in need f immediate medical help. Due t the quick actins f Tracy, Kirk is in stable cnditin at the Salem Hspital. The Dmin’s emplyees received a lt f praise nline fr their unbelievable thughtfulness. But they said that it was just part f their jb and they were just ding their jb.
当警察到达现场时，他们听到了来自房子内部的呼救声。在里面，他们发现了需要立即得到医疗帮助的柯克。由于特蕾西的快速行动，柯克在塞勒姆医院的情况很稳定。多米美乐的员工令人难以置信的体贴在网上得到了很多赞扬。但他们说，这只是他们工作的一部分，他们只是在做他们的工作。
Para2: A few days later, Kirk was released frm the hspital. He came t the Dmin’s persnally with sme hmemade ckies t say thank--yu t Sarah and the Dmin’s staff. The Dmin’s mentined that “Caring fr custmers shuld nt be taken at face value. We shuld remember that the custmers determine the success f ur cmpany and in turn we can als have an impact n their lives, small r big.” Kirk’s stry has made this pizza shp even mre ppular in the cmmunity, and it has received mre rders ever since.
几天后，柯克出院了。他亲自带着一些自制的饼干来到多米诺餐厅，对莎拉和多米诺餐厅的工作人员说声谢谢。多米美乐提到“照顾客户不应该是表面价值。”我们应该记住，客户决定了我们公司的成功，反过来我们也可以对他们的生活产生影响，无论大小。柯克的故事让这家披萨店在社区中更受欢迎，此后它收到了更多的订单。
【解析】
【分析】
文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个披萨店的员工，细心地发现近期没有收到来自老顾客Kirk的订单，于是派人前去查看，发现Kirk生病并及时报警就医，确保了Kirk的安全。员工的善举为披萨店赢得了更多的称赞和订单。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当警察赶到现场时，”可知，第一段可描写警察将Kirk送到医院的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“几天后，Kirk出院了。”可知，第二段可描写Kirk出院后去披萨店感谢员工们拯救了他的生命以及该披萨店因为善意举动而为自己赢得更多的订单和顾客。
续写线索：呼救——成功被救助——感谢——店员表达观点——披萨店更受欢迎
3.词汇激活
行为类
①大声求救：cry fr help /shut fr help /scream fr help
②受到赞扬：received a lt f praise / be praised greatly
③照顾，护理： caring fr/taking care f/
情绪类
①.感谢：say thank--yu / express appreciatin / shw appreciatin /shw his gratitude/be grateful
②.体贴：thughtfulness /being cnsiderate
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Inside, they fund Kirk, wh was in need f immediate medical help.(由关系代词wh引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词Kirk。)
[高分句型2]. We shuld remember that the custmers determine the success f ur cmpany and in turn we can als have an impact n their lives, small r big.(that引导宾语从句作remember的宾语。)
Part2：助人类故事构造三部曲
第一步：困难描写（消极情绪+困难处境）
（1）消极情绪
典型表达是：感到（这个可以有很多表达方式，并且可以结合在每一个环节中，可有非谓语动词形式和介词短语）
1. a flush f (表情绪的名词)=a wave feeling/sense f...一阵...
2.jy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terrr/srrw/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispintment/guilt/shame...)
3. (表情绪的名词) flded ver sb=swept ver sb
因...颤抖
tremble//shiver/shake (with fear, panic excitement, rage...)
（2）进一步细节描写
典型是：流泪；心里想……
流泪：
1. Tears blurred ne's eyes.
2. One's eyes gt misty.
3. One's eyes misted/dimmed with tears.泪眼模糊
4. clse t tears几乎要哭了
5. tears (rll dwn ne's eyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下
困难处境
As the ecnmy was in decline(经济衰退), sme peple in the twn had lst their jbs. Many f their families were struggling t make ends meet (使收支平衡). （2020.7高考山东卷）
There was a man sick in bed(卧病在床), his wife, wh tk care f him and culd nt g ut t wrk, and their little by. （2020.7高考山东卷）
But ne day, a hurricane hit the area (台风袭击当地) where he lived, cmpletely destrying his hme (完全摧毁他的家) . （2021广州2月联考）
第二步：助人过程呈现（想到办法+动作链）
（1）突然有了一个想法：一句话表示想法
典型：某人想到/明白...; 有了主意
1. It suddenly ccurred t sb that 从句=It hit sb that 从句=It struck me that 从句 =It dawned n sb that 从句
2. (idea, thught...) ccurred/came t sb.= int ne's mind= in ne's mind
3. One's mind began t race
（2）动作链
Then he gt a saw (锯子) frm the truck and cut a sectin ut f a big lg n the side f the rad. We rlled it ver and put his jack n tp, and we were in business.然后他从卡车上拿到了一把锯子（锯子），从路边的一根大木头上砍了一段。我们把它翻过来，把他的杰克顶放在上面，我们开始做生意。【八省联考】
第三步：皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华）
（1）皆大欢喜：过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折
过了一段时间
1. nt lng after that, afterwards, lng, didn't take lng befre 从句=It tk sme time befre从句不久, ...
2. fr an instant/mment一瞬间
（2）有了结果
1. T ne's surprise(delight)/Strangely enugh, it turned ut that 从句
2. But n secnd thughts, ...但是转而一想，...
3. But what happened next was pure magic. 接下来发生的非常奇妙
（3）感谢
Nw, I was definitely grateful t her fr extending a helping hand(伸出援手).（2021届湖南长沙市一中高三月考三）
Mlly and Shawn met n Tuesday, and she says she culdn’t thank him enugh (非常感谢他)and everyne invlved in fr what they did fr her. （2020届山东省泰安市高三第二轮复习质量检测（二模）英语试题）
（4）感动
1. Needless t say, they were deeply mved (他们被深深地感动了), especially Bernard wh finally fund a way t make mney fr his family. （2020.7高考山东卷）
2. He was tuched that I, a cmplete stranger, cared s much abut him (如此关心他) and said he was willing t wrk.（2021广州2月联考）
3. In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was tuched beynd wrds (感动得说不出话来). I felt s warm as if there were nine suns in my chest. （2021年1月八省联考）
4. I ndded in gratitude, eyes glistening with held-back tears(眼睛因为强忍的泪水而闪耀). （2021年1月八省联考）
5. Stunned and mved(惊讶又感动), I stared at the nte, feeling a pang f guilt abut my previus thught that all peple were indifferent.（2021年1月八省联考）
（5）升华
It is lve that makes the wrld g rund（是爱让世界运转）and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.（2020.7高考山东卷）
Everyne was happy and sweet, expsing their sets f white teeth（露出他们洁白的牙齿）.（2020.7高考山东卷）
I made up my mind t pass n “lve” t thers（传递爱给其他人）. Just as a saying ges : “ Rses given, fragrance in hand（赠人玫瑰，手有余香）. ”（2021年1月八省联考）
Frm that day n, every time I meet smene wh needs help, I always reach ut t them, hping t pass n the kindness （希望传递善意）that Mexican family ffered me.（2021年1月八省联考）
5. Smetimes, a small act f kindness may be pwerful enugh t make a huge difference（会有很大不同）.
Part3：助人场景描写
一、帮助他人之后
I just lked at my friend with disbelief as he tld the stry f the first day we met.Kyle had planned t kill himself ver the weekend. He talked f hw he had cleaned ut his lcker s his Mm wuldn’t have t d it later and was carrying his stuff hme. Meanwhile,I fund he lked hard at me and gave me a little smile."Thankfully, I was saved. My friend saved me frm ding the unspeakable,I heard the gasp g thrugh the crwd as this handsme, ppular by tld us all abut his weakest mment. When his eyes caught mine,I was able t see tears shimmered in his smiling eyes.
我只是难以置信地看着我的朋友，他讲述了我们第一天见面的故事。 凯尔计划周末消遣。 他谈到了他是如何清理他的储物柜的，这样他的妈妈就不用再做了，然后把他的东西带回家了。 同时，我发现他狠狠地看着我，给了我一个小小的微笑。 “谢天谢地，我得救了。 我的朋友不让我做那些无法形容的事，我听到人群中的喘息声，就像这个英俊、受欢迎的男孩告诉我们他最脆弱的时刻一样。 当他的眼睛抓住我的眼睛时，我能看到他微笑的眼睛里闪烁着泪水。
I smiled back in tears. Nt until that mment did I realize what big difference ne small gesture had made t him. I even saw his Mm and Dad lking at me and smiling that same grateful smile. It dawned n me that never shuld we underestimate the pwer f ur actins. With ne small gesture we can change a persn's life. Fr better r fr wrse.
我笑着。直到那一刻，我才意识到一个小小的手势对他产生了多么大的不同。我甚至看到他的爸爸妈妈看着我，也带着同样感激的微笑。我意识到，我们永远不应该低估我们行动的力量。只要用一个小小的手势，我们就可以改变一个人的生活。为好或坏。
二、发生水灾之后
The water kept rising, and there was n hpe f rescue. The hurs passed. Jasn and Andrew didn't dare t mve fr fear f slipping. They dzed ff and then jerked themselves awake. Every nce in a while,ne f them turned n his headlamp t check the water level. An hur later, the water level went dwn enugh that they culd try an escape. Stiff frm keeping in ne psitin fr 12 hurs, they slwly unflded their bdies. Jasn screamed in pain, but he was determined nt t let it stp him.
水不断上涨，没有了救援的希望。 几个小时过去了。 杰森和安德鲁不敢动，因为害怕滑倒。 他们打了个瞌睡，然后猛地清醒过来。 每隔一段时间，其中一个人就打开他的前照灯检查水位。 一个小时后，水位下降到足以让他们尝试逃跑。 他们僵硬地保持在一个位置12小时，慢慢地展开他们的身体。 杰森痛苦地尖叫着，但他决心不让它阻止他。
Slwly but steadily, the grup made their way frward. Still, each time Jasn mved a leg, he cried ut. Over the next 90 minutes, they made their way tward the entrance, at times in chest-high water. Nw, in a passage that was high enugh fr them t walkupright, Jasn saw smething flicker in the distance."Lights! I see lights!" Jasn shuted ut.Fr the first time since entering the cave, ver 20 hurs earlier, Jasn's emtins gt the best f him and tears trickled dwn his cheeks.
水不断上涨，没有了救援的希望。 几个小时过去了。 杰森和安德鲁不敢动，因为害怕滑倒。 他们打了个瞌睡，然后猛地清醒过来。 每隔一段时间，其中一个人就打开他的前照灯检查水位。 一个小时后，水位下降到足以让他们尝试逃跑。 他们僵硬地保持在一个位置12小时，慢慢地展开他们的身体。 杰森痛苦地尖叫着，但他决心不让它阻止他。
三、发生误解之后
As she reached in her baggage, she gasped with surprise. At that mment, in her sight came the packet f ckies, which had beenjust bught by her, unpened at all. Ashamed and feeling like a thief, she finally gt that the ckies were nt hers but belnged t the man sitting next t her, wh had calmly ffered t share his last ckie with her.A sudden rush f shy bld filling the face, she instinctively lk arund with the hpe f finding the very man t make an aplgy.
当她伸手拿行李时，她惊讶地喘了一口气。就在这时，她看到了她刚买的一包饼干，根本没有打开。她感到羞愧，感觉自己像个小偷，终于明白了这些饼干不是她的，而是属于坐在她旁边的男人，他平静地提出和她分享他的最后一块饼干。脸上突然涌满了害羞的鲜血，她本能地环顾四周，希望能找到那个男人来道歉。
Surprisingly, she fund the man sitting just behind her. He was just lking up and met her eyes,als with a smile n his face.The wman was at an abslute lss but gave the man a nervus laugh in return. Witha quite pen muth, she was unable t say any aplgy t him. Murmuring "Srry, was I myself wh was the real ckie thief." After a while, she fell asleep n her seat with the plane flying steadily. The next day, when she arrived at her new cmpany, the biggest surprise was waiting fr her.
令人惊讶的是，她发现那个男人就坐在她身后。 他只是抬头看了看她的眼睛，脸上也带着微笑。 女人完全不知所措，但却给了男人一声紧张的笑声作为回报。 她张开嘴，不能向他道歉。 “对不起，对不起。。 真正偷饼的是我自己。” 过了一会儿，她在座位上睡着了，飞机平稳地飞着。 第二天，当她来到她的新公司时，最大的惊喜就是在等她。
四、发生火灾之后
Tm nticed the flame was reaching up. Frzen with fear, he std rted t the spt. He cmprehended the gravity f the situatin and held Jane′s hand tightly. By then, bth f them were cughing and their eyes were stinging. Time seemed t stand still, thugh they were prbably there fr nly tw r three minutes. Tm begged Jane t run fr safety as quickly as pssible.Jane tried t shield her nse frm the chking smke and shk her head. She kept punding against the dr. Tm burst ut crying.
汤姆注意到火焰正在升起。 他吓得僵住了，站在原地。 他明白形势的严重性，紧紧地握住简的手。 到那时，他们俩都在咳嗽，眼睛刺痛。 时间似乎静止不动，虽然他们可能只在那里两三分钟。 汤姆恳求简尽快跑过去寻求安全。 简想保护她的鼻子免受呛人的烟雾，摇了摇头。 她不停地敲门。 汤姆突然哭了起来。
Luckily, sme neighbrs passing by stpped and ffered help.A sense f strength immediately replaced the munting fear and anxiety in Jane's mind. She tld them Ms. Makcik must be still in the rm. They frced the dr pen with all their might. Sure enugh, Makcik was lying in bed,uncnscius. She was carried dwnstairs and then rushed t the hspital, where she finally came t herself. Peple in the neighbrhd felt relieved and Jane and Tm's jy was immense.
幸运的是，一些邻居路过时停下来，并提供了帮助。一种力量感立刻取代了简心中日益增加的恐惧和焦虑。她告诉他们，马克奇克女士一定还在房间里。他们竭尽全力地强行打开了门。果然，马克西克正躺在床上，失去了知觉。她被带下楼，然后被紧急送往医院，终于苏醒过来。附近的人都松了一口气，简和汤姆非常高兴。
五、感受善良之后
Seeing what was ging n, my dad put his hand in his pcket, pulled ut a $20 bill and drpped it n the grund.Then he picked it up and tapped the man n the shulder and said,"Excuse me, sir, this fell ut f yur pcket." The man turned arund and saw the mney. He knew what was ging n,he lked straight int my dad's eyes, tk my dad's hand in bth f his, squeezed tightly nt the $20 bill, and with his lip shaking and a tear running dwn his cheek, he replied,"Thank yu, thankyu, sir. This really means a lt t me and my family.
水不断上涨，没有了救援的希望。 几个小时过去了。 杰森和安德鲁不敢动，因为害怕滑倒。 他们打了个瞌睡，然后猛地清醒过来。 每隔一段时间，其中一个人就打开他的前照灯检查水位。 一个小时后，水位下降到足以让他们尝试逃跑。 他们僵硬地保持在一个位置12小时，慢慢地展开他们的身体。 杰森痛苦地尖叫着，但他决心不让它阻止他。
That day my father andI went back t ur car and drve hme withut any tickets.We didn't g t the circus that night, when I asked dad why he did s, Dad said,"My child, it was a desperate, heartbreaking and embarrassing situatin fr a father. Surely he wasn't begging fra handut, but he reminded me f my father, when I was yung." He paused fr a while, as if wandering in his memry."We shuld appreciate what we have btained frm life and seize every pprtunity t help thers.We didn't g t the circus tnight, but we didn't g withut. Nw, wh wants an ice cream?。
那天，我和我父亲回到我们的车里，没有任何票就开车回家了。 那天晚上我们没有去马戏团，当我问爸爸为什么这么做时，爸爸说：“我的孩子，对一个父亲来说，这是一个绝望、令人心碎和尴尬的情况。 他当然不是乞求施舍，但他让我想起了我年轻时的父亲。” 他停顿了一会儿，仿佛在记忆中徘徊。 我们应该珍惜从生活中获得的东西，抓住一切机会帮助别人。 我们今晚没有去马戏团，但我们没有去。 谁要冰淇淋？。
六、感受幸福之后
The driver respnded,"It must feel gd t be taken care f and prtected like yu are every day."Cnfused by what the driver talked abut,she asked, "What d yu mean?" The driver answered, "Every mrning in the past week,a fine lking gentleman ina military unifrm has been standing acrss the street watching yu getting ff the bus.He makes sure yu crss the street safely and he watches until yu enter yur ffice building.Then he blws yu a kiss,gives yu a lite salute and walks away. Yu are ne lucky lady.'
司机回答说：“像每天一样被照顾和保护一定会感觉很好。她对司机所说的话感到困惑，她问道，“你是什么意思？”司机回答说：“在过去的一周里，每天早上，一个漂亮的军装绅士都站在街对面看着你下车。他确保你安全过马路，他看着，直到你进入你的办公楼。然后他打了你一个吻，向你轻轻地敬礼，然后走开了。你是一位幸运的女士。”
Tears f happiness pured dwn Susan's cheeks. She std mtinlessly facing the ppsite side f the street as if gazing at smene. Althugh she culdn't physically see him, she definitely felt Mark's presence. Susan thught she was actually lucky, fr he had given her a gift mre pwerful than sight,a gift f lve that can bring light where there is darkness.Just as Mark grew a little wrried, he saw his wife break int a radiant smile and blw a kiss t his directin. Finally she fund back herself blind but attractive and cnfident as she used t be.
司机回答说：“像每天一样被照顾和保护一定会感觉很好。她对司机所说的话感到困惑，她问道，“你是什么意思？”司机回答说：“在过去的一周里，每天早上，一个漂亮的军装绅士都站在街对面看着你下车。他确保你安全过马路，他看着，直到你进入你的办公楼。然后他打了你一个吻，向你轻轻地敬礼，然后走开了。你是一位幸运的女士。”
七、发生误解之后
A seat beside her was empty, and Dannis ccupied it.He felt a wave f anger swept ver him. "Where is my wallet?" he yelled. The black-haired girl glanced up frm her reading, with a cnfused lk n her face. Dannis std up,glared at her and shuted,"Yu stle my wallet!" The crwds began t gssip.The girl turned deadly pale,lking s restless that wrds failed her.A strange silence hung in the air. Abruptly, she leaped frm the seat.
她旁边的一个座位空着，丹尼斯坐着。 他感到一阵愤怒席卷了他。 “我的钱包呢？” 他大叫。 黑发女孩从阅读中抬起头来，脸上露出困惑的神色。 丹尼斯站起来，瞪了她一眼，喊道：“你偷了我的钱包！” 人群开始闲聊起来。 那女孩脸色惨白，神情不安，言语使她失望。 一种奇怪的沉默挂在空中。 她突然从座位上跳了起来。
The girl ran and Dannis ran after her. After a while, Dannis finally grabbed her by the arm.At exactly that mment,a pliceman apprached them and asked abut what happened.Dannis hastened t explain it while the girl frwned with a shake f her head. After further enquiries, the pliceman tk ut a wallet and handed it t Dannis, adding that smene had fund it in the tilet. What a mistake he had made! Overwhelmed by guilt, Dannis made an aplgy t the girl.
女孩跑了，丹尼斯追了她。 过了一会儿，丹尼斯终于抓住了她的手臂。 就在这时，一个警察走近他们，问他们发生了什么事。 丹尼斯急忙解释，而女孩皱着眉头摇了摇头。 经过进一步的询问，警察拿出一个钱包递给丹尼斯，并补充说有人在厕所里发现了它。 他犯了什么错误！ 由于内疚，丹尼斯向女孩道歉。
八、获得勇气
The by started running again t give the kite lift.The wind n the kite was at nce strng and swift, carrying him up high int the air.Clsing his eyes tight, he trembled all ver in panic,nt daring t lk dwn.But with the by's inspiring wrds in mind, he gt up his nerve and managed t keep the balance and let his fear g.As the wind carried him upward, he slwly pened his eyes, nly t see the whle twn frm a brand-new dimensin!"Give mre string, please. Mre! he yelled t the by excitedly. With curage,he made a great dance in the air, making ther kids cheering wildly
那男孩又开始跑去放风筝了。风筝上的风立刻强烈而迅速，把他从高空吹到空中。他紧紧地闭上眼睛，惊恐得浑身发抖，不敢低头看。但考虑到男孩鼓舞人心的话，他鼓起了勇气，设法保持平衡，释放了他的恐惧。当风带着他向上走时，他慢慢地睁开眼睛，却从一个全新的维度看到了整个城镇！“请再多写信吧。请了解更多信息！他兴奋地对那男孩大喊大叫。他鼓着勇气在空中跳了一场舞，让其他孩子疯狂地欢呼
The kite felt peaceful and delighted and new. With ther kites flying arund, he flated, twirled,stretched his wings and waved his rag tail, a brad smile spreading n his face. The higher he went, the greater the view. Seeing the scared, timid kite nw dancing cnfidently, the by was tuched, believing that the kite had learned a new lessn--the best way t defeat fear is t face it bravely and ptimistically.
风筝感到平静、快乐和新鲜事物。其他风筝四处飞着，他漂浮着，旋转着，展开翅膀，摇着破尾巴，脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容。他走得越高，视野就越大。看到害怕的、胆小的风筝现在自信地跳舞，男孩被感动了，相信风筝已经吸取了新的教训——战胜恐惧的最好方法是勇敢而乐观地面对它。
九、获得自信
Everybdy was fixing their eyes n Jenny, waiting fr an explanatin.Jenny didn't answer. Hw culd she explain abut the watch and its magic? N ne culd understand. N ne culd believe. "But I saw yu wearing it yesterday," Miss Walker gently reminded him. Fr a mment Lee remained silent and then he aplgized he had just remembered that.Jenny was relieved saying she had fund it n the way hme and decided t return it after the speech. Everybdy was puzzled and asked why. Jenny again was speechless.
每个人都把眼睛盯着珍妮，等待着解释。珍妮没有回答。她怎么能解释一下这只手表和它的魔力呢？没人能理解。没有人能相信。“可是我昨天看到你戴着它，”沃克小姐温柔地提醒他。李沉默了一会儿，然后他道歉了，他只记得这一点。珍妮在回家的路上找到了它，并决定在演讲后归还。每个人都很困惑，并被问及为什么。珍妮又说不出话来了。
Miss Walker smiled and asked the class t listen t Jenny's speech first.Jenny walked slwly t the frnt. She culdn't think prperly. All rund her, a sea f faces was watching.She felt s frightened and the watch didn't seem magical at all. Suddenly she saw Miss Walker's encuraging eyes.Jenny tk a deep breath."I'm ging t talk abut swimming…." Ten minutes later the whle class std up applauding Jenny's wnderful speech. Jenny smiled as she eventually realized the real surce f cnfidence.
沃克老师笑了笑，让全班同学先听珍妮的演讲。 珍妮慢慢地走到前面。 她无法正常思考。 她的四周，一片面海在看着。 她感到很害怕，手表看起来一点也不神奇。 突然，她看到沃克小姐鼓励的眼睛。 珍妮深吸了一口气。 “我要谈谈游泳的事...。” 十分钟后全班同学起立为珍妮的精彩演讲鼓掌。 珍妮笑了，因为她最终意识到了自信的真正来源。
十、接收礼物之后
I was stpped by my mther's eager,jyful lk."Let's see what it is, hney. Hurry and pen it."It was a blw dryer. Thugh this may seem but a simple gift, t me it was s much mre. Being an eleven-year-ld girl, I was stunned.In my wrld, where receiving lately utweighed giving, my mm's act f selflessness was incmprehensible. It was a huge act Tears filled my eyes and I thught in disbelief abut hw much my mm must lve me t give up her Christmas s-culd have a few mre presents.
我被我母亲急切而快乐的目光拦住了。“让我们看看那是什么事吧，亲爱的。赶快打开它。“那是一个吹风机。虽然这似乎只是一份简单的礼物，但对我来说，它更多了。作为一个11岁的女孩，我惊呆了。在我的世界里，最近接受的东西超过了付出，我妈妈的无私行为是不可理解的。这是一个巨大的表演，眼泪充满了我的眼睛，我不相信我妈妈一定是多么爱我才能放弃她的圣诞节，所以可以再有几份礼物。
I have always remembered that Christmas fndly: It had such an impact n me. As an adult with children in my life whm I adre, I can nw understand my mm's actins.I see actually, she was nt ""giving up her Christmas" as I had thught, but was finding an even greater jy in her Christmas because giving truly is better than receiving. My mm's simple act meant the wrld t me. Whenever I lk back n my mm's giving, I will chse t give in my life.
我一直深情地记得那个圣诞节：它对我有如此的影响。 作为一个在我的生活中有孩子的成年人，我现在可以理解我妈妈的行为。 实际上，我知道，她并没有像我想的那样“放弃她的圣诞节”，而是在她的圣诞节中找到了更大的乐趣，因为真正的给予比接受更好。 我妈妈的简单行为对我来说意味着世界。 每当我回首妈妈的付出，我都会选择在我的生命中付出。
十一、老师的帮助
Everybdy was fixing their eyes n Jenny, waiting fr an explanatin. Jenny didn't answer. Hw culd she explain abut the watch and its magic? N ne culd understand. N ne culd believe. "But I saw yu wearing it yesterday," Miss Walker gently reminded him. Fr a mment Lee remained silent and then he aplgized he had just remembered that.Jenny was relieved saying she had fund it n the way hme and decided t return it after the speech.Everybdy was puzzled and asked why. Jenny again was speechless.
每个人都把眼睛盯着珍妮，等待着解释。珍妮没有回答。她怎么能解释一下这只手表和它的魔力呢？没人能理解。没有人能相信。“但我昨天看见你戴着它，”沃克小姐温柔地提醒他。李沉默了一会儿，然后他道歉了，他只记得这一点。珍妮在回家的路上找到了它，并决定在演讲后归还。每个人都很困惑，并被问及为什么。珍妮又说不出话来了。
Miss Walker smiled and asked the class t listen t Jenny's speech first.Jenny walked slwly t the frnt. She culdn't think prperly.All rund her,a sea f faces was watching. She felt s frightened and the watch didn't seem magical at all. Suddenly she saw Miss Walker's encuraging eyes. Jenny tk a deep breath."I'm ging t talk abut swimming…" Ten minutes later the whle class std up applauding Jenny's wnderful speech.Jenny smiled as she eventually realized the real surce f cnfidence.
沃克老师笑了笑，让全班同学先听珍妮的演讲。 珍妮慢慢地走到前面。 她无法正常思考。 她的四周，一片面海在看着。 她感到很害怕，手表看起来一点也不神奇。 突然，她看到沃克小姐鼓励的眼睛。 珍妮深深地吸了一口气。 十分钟后，全班同学起立为珍妮的精彩演讲鼓掌。 珍妮笑了，因为她最终意识到了自信的真正来源。
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Time passed quickly that year, and befre we all knew it, it was the last day f schl.Our schl had a very special traditin n the last day. All the teachers filled the sidewalk, waving gdbye t the kids as the buses pulled ut with their hrns hnking.But n that particular day,Steven walked slwly t the bus, his head dwn, tears in his eyes.He barded the bus reluctantly,hesitated,and then ran back ff the bus t hug Mr. Rwe."I dn′t want t leave yu." He sbbed with red-rimmed eyes. Mr. Rwe cmfrted him,"I will miss yu, t."
那一年时间过得很快，我们还没意识到，那是学校的最后一天。我们学校在最后一天有一个非常特殊的传统。所有的老师都挤满了人行道，向孩子们挥手道别，车上按着喇叭离开。但就在那一天，史蒂文慢慢地走到公交车前，低着头，热泪盈眶。他不情愿地登上了巴士，犹豫了一下，然后跑回来拥抱Mr。罗伊。“我不想离开你。”他用红边缘的眼睛抽泣着。Mr.罗安慰他，“我也会想念你。”
Many years later, Mr. Rwe and I were surprised when a handsme yung man walked int ur classrm, dressed in the Marine Crps unifrm. The yung man std tall and prud.It was Steven! Mr. Rwe and I culdn't believe ur eyes. He saluted and hugged Mr. Rwe tightly! "I have cme back t schl tday just t say thanks t yu!"It is my hpe that every teacher is blessed with such an experience f a frmer student cming back t say, simply t say a very simple wrd f THANKS.
许多年后，当一个穿着海军陆战队制服的英俊年轻人走进我们的教室时，罗先生和我感到惊讶。 那个年轻人站得高高的，很骄傲。 是史蒂文！ 我和罗先生简直不敢相信我们的眼睛。 他敬礼，紧紧地拥抱罗先生！ “我今天回到学校只是为了感谢你！ “我希望每一位老师都有这样的经历，一位以前的学生回来说，简单地说一个非常简单的“谢谢。
十二、陌生人的帮助
I was wndering what t say when I heard the sund f ftsteps ut f the tent.We bth lked up. It was exactly the yung man in the pht but lked much strnger. The wman said smething t him, lking at us smiling."Need sme Mg?"he asked.It's amazing he was speaking very gd English! Gerge and I lked at each ther, eyes lit up."Yes, and we were wndering if yu culd have ne f ur tyres changed." "Fllw me!" he said, sunding like srt f an rder.
当我听到帐篷外的脚步声时，我想说什么。 我们都抬起头来。 照片上的正是那个年轻人，但看上去更强壮。 女人对他说了些什么，看着我们微笑。 ”“需要镁吗？ ”他问道。 他说的英语很好真是太棒了！ 乔治和我互相看了一眼，眼睛亮了起来。 “是的，我们想知道你们是否可以换一个轮胎。” “跟我来！” 他说，听起来像是命令。
We gt up and tgether walked back t the car. The man grabbed the wheel with ne hand and a spanner with the ther. With an utburst f shut, the tyre was sened up."Yu just need a bit f effrt. Haha!" Gerge and I std there dumbfunded watching him finishing the whle jb, gratitude and admiratin rushing in my heart. The knt that had been tired up by the pain in my ft, the cld saking rain and the stubbrn flat tyre was lsened up t,in the warm tea frm the wman, the heric shut f the man, the muntain view in the distance and the jy f being alel t set ff again.
我们站起来，一起走回到车里。那个人用一只手抓住轮子，另一只手抓住扳手。大叫一声，轮胎亮了。“你只需要付出一点努力。哈哈哈！”我和乔治呆地站在那里看着他完成整个工作，感激和钦佩在我心中涌动。我脚的疼痛、冰冷的雨和顽固的平轮胎也松开了，在女人温暖的茶里，男人的英雄呐喊，远处的山景，还有比加莱尔再次出发的喜悦。
Part4：灵活应用
例1：老夫妇帮助我
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。（满分25分）
Many years ag, when I was fresh ut f schl and wrking in Denver, I was driving t my parents' hme in Missuri fr Christmas. I stpped at a gas statin(加油站)abut 50 miles frm Oklahma City, where I was planning t stp and visit a friend. While I was standing in line at the cash register(收款台), I said hell t an lder cuple wh were als paying fr gas.
I tk ff, but had gne nly a few miles when black smke pured frm the back f my car. I stpped and wndered what I shuld d. A car pulled up behind me. It was the cuple I had spken t at the gas statin. They said they wuld take me t my friend's .We chatted n the way int the city, and when I gt ut f the car, the husband gave me his business card.
I wrte him and his wife a thank-yu nte fr helping me. Sn afterward, I received a Christmas present frm them. Their nte that came with it said that helping me had made their hlidays meaningful.
Years later, I drve t a meeting in a nearby twn in the mrning. In late afternn I returned t my car and fund that I'd left the lights n all day, and the battery(电池)was dead. Then I nticed that the Friendly Frd dealership - a shp selling cars - was right next dr. I walked ver and fund tw salesmen in the shwrm.
注意：
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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I entered the shp, and ne f the salesman came t me.
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After a while, they quickly drve a pickup truck t my car and started it.
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I entered the shp, and ne f the salesman came t me. I recgnized him at nce. the tw salesmen were the lder cuple, and they were the wners f the Friendly Frd dealership. “ Hey, it’s yu! yu ever helped me, remember?” I said t them excitedly. Yeah, we d!” the ld man laughed, we run the shp t help mre peple. yu knw, it makes ur life s meaningful!”
我走进商店，其中一个推销员来找我。我立刻认出了他。这两名销售员是老夫妇，他们是友好的福特经销商的老板。“嘿，是你！”你曾经帮助过我，记得吗？我兴奋地对他们说。是的，老人笑了，我们经营商店是为了帮助更多的人。你知道，这让我们的生活如此有意义！”
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After a while, they quickly drve a pickup truck t my car and started it. they slved my truble nce again, but when I paid fr it, they wuld nt accept my mney. they tld me that when they ran the shp at first, n ne had ever taken the time t write them and say thank yu, but nw they received mre and mre thank-yu ntes frm peple, which they were really happy abut.
过了一会儿，他们很快就开了一辆小货车到我的车前，发动了它。他们再次解决了我的麻烦，但当我付钱时，他们不会接受我的钱。他们告诉我，当他们一开始经营商店的时候，没有人花时间写声谢谢，但现在他们收到了越来越多的感谢信，他们真的很高兴。
例2：帮助老妇人
“Hurry, Marcus!” Millie called t her brther. Marcus caught up just as the schl bus arrived. The drs pened and they gt their first lk at the new bus driver, Mr. Crss. There was n smile n his face. He just ndded at them as they climbed the steps. Millie wndered if he ever smiled. “I miss ur ld driver,” she whispered.
The bus traveled tw mre blcks, then stpped in frnt f a huse with n ne in sight. “Hey, we dn’t usually stp here,” whispered Millie. Mr. Crss pened the bus drs.
Millie waited t see wh wuld get n, but nbdy did. Still, Mr. Crss ndded his head, the way he had when she and Marcus barded the bus. Then he clsed the drs.
“Did yu see that?” Millie said. “He just pened the drs and ndded at smene, but nbdy gt n!” Marcus agreed. “That was strange.” The bus cntinued n the rute, and the usual kids gt n. Mr. Crss ndded at each ne.
During schl that day, Millie kept thinking back t what had happened that mrning. It didn't make sense. At the end f the day, when she and Marcus gt n the bus t g hme, Marcus said, “I think I figured it ut. He prbably stpped t pick up a ghst kid!”
“A ghst kid?” Millie gulped (倒吸气).
“Maybe Mr. Crss can see ghsts,” Marcus said.
“N,” said Millie. “That’s silly.” But as they rde hme, Millie thught abut it. What else culd it be? Why else wuld he pen the drs?
The next tw days, the same thing happened. The bus stpped and the drs pened. Smileless, Mr. Crss ndded, and the drs clsed. Millie began t panic. This time she decided Marcus was right. “Wh is this ghst kid? What if he’s sitting next t us?” They gathered curage t find ut the truth.
On Friday mrning, the bus stpped at that huse again. Their hearts raced.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
When Mr. Crss pened the drs and ndded t nbdy, they went frward t him.
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Hearing the stry, in relief, they decided t visit the huse and see what can be dne.
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【答案】
When Mr. Crss pened the drs and ndded t nbdy, they went frward t him. Millie said, “Excuse me, Mr. Crss, wh gets n at this stp every mrning?” Mr. Crss replied, “I am afraid that there are sme misunderstandings between us. I have an ld friend wh lives in the ld huse at the end f this blck. Every day at this time, she will wave at me in frnt f the huse. I can als see her in the distance and knw that she is healthy and safe. I am s tall that I have t nd my head t lk utside. ”
克罗斯先生开门，没有向任何人点点头，他们就向他走去。米莉说：“对不起，克罗斯先生，他每天早上都会在这里停留？”克罗斯先生回答说：“恐怕我们之间有些误解。”我有一个老朋友住在这个街区尽头的老房子里。每天在这个时候，她都会在房子前向我挥手。我也可以在远处看到她，我知道她很健康，很安全。我太高了，我得点头才能看外面。”
Hearing the stry, in relief, they decided t visit the huse and see what can be dne. As appraching the huse, they saw an ld wman sitting n a chair with a dg next t her. They intrduced themselves t this ld wman. Frm then n, they ften came t help the ld wman with sme husewrk n weekends. With the generus help f Millie and Marcus, the ld wman n lnger felt lnely. She ften tld them sme ld stries and they became gd friends.
克罗斯先生开门，没有向任何人点点头，他们就向他走去。米莉说：“对不起，克罗斯先生，他每天早上都会在这里停留？”克罗斯先生回答说：“恐怕我们之间有些误解。”我有一个老朋友住在这个街区尽头的老房子里。每天在这个时候，她都会在房子前向我挥手。我也可以在远处看到她，我知道她很健康，很安全。我太高了，我得点头才能看外面。”
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇记叙文。米莉和她的弟弟马库斯乘坐的校车换了司机，新司机开车每次过两个街区都会停下来，并没有任何人上车，司机都会点一下头。米莉和马库斯既害怕又纳闷。终于有一天，他们决心弄清楚这件事情。
【详解】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，米莉和她的弟弟乘坐的校车换了司机，新司机叫克罗斯，他们觉得新司机很陌生，脸上没有笑容。更令他们害怕的是，校车每次过两个街区，克罗斯先生就会把车停下来，并没有任何人上车，但是司机都会点一下头。他们很诧异，弟弟马库斯猜测说，克罗斯先生在那一站接上来的是“鬼孩子”，米莉并不这么想，但是也很害怕。接下来的几天都是这样，他们忍不住了。终于有一天，他们鼓起勇气，决心把这个事情弄明白。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：当克罗斯先生打开门，对着无人的地方点头示意时，他们向他走去……因此，接下来应该续写，司机克罗斯先生是怎样把这个事情跟米莉姐弟解释清楚的。原来是一场误会，克罗斯先生有一位老朋友就住在这附近，这位老朋友是个老妇人，年龄大了，自己孤独的住在这里。每次到车到这的时候，老妇人都会出来和他挥挥手，他也能从远处看看她，看到老朋友是健康的、安全的，他就放心了。
第二段开头是：听到这个故事，他们松了一口气，决定去这个房子看看能做些什么……本段续写他们认识了住在房子里的老妇人，并且经常在周末的时候来帮助老人做家务，他们也成了很好的朋友。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：wave at，in frnt f，in the distance，n lnger等高级词汇；定语从句I have an ld friend wh lives in the ld huse at the end f this blck；结果状语从句I am s tall that I have t nd my head t lk utside；运用了With the generus help f...的with复合结构等高级句式。
Part5：高考真题再现
真题1：好心的墨西哥家庭【2021年八省联考】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
During this past year, I’ve had three instances f car truble. Each time these things happened, I was sick f the way mst peple hadn’t bthered t help. One f thse times, I was n the side f the rad fr clse t three hurs with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windws, big signs that said NEED A JACK (千斤顶), and ffered mney. Nthing. Right as I was abut t give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled ver, and the father bunded ut.
He sized up the situatin and called fr his daughter, wh spke English. He cnveyed thrugh her that he had a jack but that it was t small fr the Jeep, s we wuld need smething t supprt it. Then he gt a saw (锯子) frm the truck and cut a sectin ut f a big lg n the side f the rad. We rlled it ver and put his jack n tp, and we were in business.
I started taking the wheel ff, and then, if yu can believe it, I brke his tire irn. N wrries: He handed it t his wife, and she was gne in a flash dwn the rad t buy a new tire irn. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the jb, and I was a very happy man.
The tw f us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pt f water fr us t wash ur hands. I tried t put a $20 bill in the man’s hand, but he wuldn’t take it, s instead I went up t the truck and gave it t his wife as quietly as I culd. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexic, she said. They were in Oregn s Mmmy and Daddy culd wrk n a fruit farm fr the next few weeks. Then they wuld g hme.
注意：
续写词数应为150左右；
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When I was abut t say gdbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.
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After they left, I gt int my Jeep and pened the paper bag.
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When I was abut t say gdbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.Hearing what she said, I realized that I didn’t have lunch.T be hnest, after wrking hard fr several hurs, I was s hungry. Feeling a bit embarrassed, I replied: “n!”The girl said with a smile, “Cme n! Jin us.The Mexicn sandwich is delicius!” With mved tears rlling arund my eyes, I tk the sandwich.After eating it like wlf, I felt that it was the tasty sandwich that I had ever had.While dining, I talked abut my truble and feelings and they shared their interesting stries in the life.Then, the girl’s mther had anther sandwich and sme fruit place din a paper bag and handed it t me,saying gently: “Keep it and have it later! We had t g nw.” I shwed my heartfelt gratitude t them and saw them disappear in my sight.
After they left, I gt int my jeep and pened the paper bag. What surprised me a lt was that there was a sandwich,fruit and the bill given by me.Hlding the paper bag tightly, I std still, a warm current rising in my heart.Hw grateful was I t the family helping me. Althugh mst f peple I met n the rad were indifferent, there were still sme peple like this family wh was s helpful and thughtful.Frm then n, I placed a jack and sme cmmn tls in my car.When meeting peple in need n the rad ,I wuld try my best t help them like the family.Only in this way, culd mre and mre peple help each ther in the future.
真题2：买爆米花助穷人【2020年7月山东卷】
第二节 （满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Meredith family lived in a small cmmunity. As the ecnmy was in decline, sme peple in the twn had lst their jbs. Many f their families were struggling t make ends meet. Peple were trying t help each ther meet the challenges.
Mrs. Meredith was a mst kind and thughtful wman. She spent a great deal f time visiting the pr. She knew they had prblems, and they needed all kinds f help. When she had time, she wuld bring fd and medicine t them.
One mrning she tld her children abut a family she had visited the day befre. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, wh tk care f him and culd nt g ut t wrk, and their little by. The little by — his name was Bernard — had interested her very much.
“I wish yu culd see him,” she said t her wn children, Jhn, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help t his mther. He wants very much t earn sme mney, but I dn’t see what he can d.”
After their mther left the rm, the children sat thinking abut Bernard. “I wish we culd help him t earn mney,” said Clara. “His family is suffering s much.”
“S d I,” said Harry. “We really shuld d smething t assist them.”
Fr sme mments, Jhn said nthing, but, suddenly, he sprang t his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a slutin that we can all help accmplish (完成) .”
The ther children als jumped up all attentin. When Jhn had an idea, it was sure t be a gd ne. “I tell yu what we can d,” said Jhn. “Yu knw that big bx f crn Uncle Jhn sent us? Well, we can make ppcrn (爆米花), and put it int paper bags, and Bernard can take it arund t the huses and sell it.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When Mrs. Meredith heard f Jhn’s idea, she thught it was a gd ne, t.
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With everything ready, Bernard started ut n his new business.
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One pssible versin:
When Mrs. Meredith heard f the idea, she thught it was a gd ne, t. Then Mrs. Meredith searched the internet and rdered a husehld ppcrn machine. After that, Mrs. Meredith, tgether with her three children, paid anther visit t the family and tld them abut the ppcrn plan. Needless t say, they were deeply mved, especially Bernard wh finally fund a way t make mney fr his family. A few days later, the machine was delivered t Mrs. Meredith’s drstep. And it wasn’t lng befre they gt the hang f using the machine t make ppcrn.
With everything ready, Bernard started ut n his new business. Althugh it was a hard time and things were tight fr everybdy, Bernard’s business wrked ut quite well. He carried the ppcrn n his small bike, ging frm dr t dr t sell it. Peple were surprised t see such a little, prly-dressed by selling ppcrn at their drs, but eventually almst all f them wuld buy a bag r tw. It is lve that makes the wrld g rund and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart. (续写词数：164)
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\l "_Tc4380" 第二步：助人过程呈现（（想到办法+动作链） PAGEREF _Tc4380 \h 5
\l "_Tc30710" 第三步：皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华） PAGEREF _Tc30710 \h 6
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Part1：经典例文（披萨店员工救人）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
When the emplyees at the Dmin’s pizza place in Salem, Oregn, hadn’t received any rder frm Kirk Alexander fr mre than 2 weeks, they knew smething wasn’t right. Kirk was a lyal custmer and the staff all knew him. S it was natural that they gt wrried when they had n news abut him. Their cncern saved his life.
Sarah Fuller, the general manager at the Dmin’s branch, said that Kirk, wh was 48 years ld, had been a lyal custmer since 2009. “He rders every day, r every ther day,” Sarah said.
Nrmally, his rder came up n the screen because he rdered nline. S we saw it came acrss the screen and we were thinking, “Oh, Kirk’s rder.” After a few days withut a single rder, Sarah and the staff started t wrry.
A few Dmin’s drivers had mentined that they hadn’t seen his rder cme acrss their screen in a while. Sarah checked the system and saw that n rder had cme in 11 days. S they decided t investigate.
Sarah decided t send Tracy Hamblen, a deliver driver, t Kirk’s place. When he gt there, he immediately knew smething was wrng. While the lights and TV were n, Kirk did nt cme t the dr. Additinally, his phne went directly t vicemail. S Tracy immediately called 911.
Para.1:
When the plice arrived at the place,
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Para.2:
A few days later, Kirk was released frm the hspital.
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【答案】Para1: When the plice arrived at the place, they heard a cry fr help frm the inside f the huse. Inside, they fund Kirk, wh was in need f immediate medical help. Due t the quick actins f Tracy, Kirk is in stable cnditin at the Salem Hspital. The Dmin’s emplyees received a lt f praise nline fr their unbelievable thughtfulness. But they said that it was just part f their jb and they were just ding their jb.
当警察到达现场时，他们听到了来自房子内部的呼救声。在里面，他们发现了需要立即得到医疗帮助的柯克。由于特蕾西的快速行动，柯克在塞勒姆医院的情况很稳定。多米美乐的员工令人难以置信的体贴在网上得到了很多赞扬。但他们说，这只是他们工作的一部分，他们只是在做他们的工作。
Para2: A few days later, Kirk was released frm the hspital. He came t the Dmin’s persnally with sme hmemade ckies t say thank--yu t Sarah and the Dmin’s staff. The Dmin’s mentined that “Caring fr custmers shuld nt be taken at face value. We shuld remember that the custmers determine the success f ur cmpany and in turn we can als have an impact n their lives, small r big.” Kirk’s stry has made this pizza shp even mre ppular in the cmmunity, and it has received mre rders ever since.
几天后，柯克出院了。他亲自带着一些自制的饼干来到多米诺餐厅，对莎拉和多米诺餐厅的工作人员说声谢谢。多米美乐提到“照顾客户不应该是表面价值。”我们应该记住，客户决定了我们公司的成功，反过来我们也可以对他们的生活产生影响，无论大小。柯克的故事让这家披萨店在社区中更受欢迎，此后它收到了更多的订单。
【解析】
【分析】
文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个披萨店的员工，细心地发现近期没有收到来自老顾客Kirk的订单，于是派人前去查看，发现Kirk生病并及时报警就医，确保了Kirk的安全。员工的善举为披萨店赢得了更多的称赞和订单。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当警察赶到现场时，”可知，第一段可描写警察将Kirk送到医院的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“几天后，Kirk出院了。”可知，第二段可描写Kirk出院后去披萨店感谢员工们拯救了他的生命以及该披萨店因为善意举动而为自己赢得更多的订单和顾客。
续写线索：呼救——成功被救助——感谢——店员表达观点——披萨店更受欢迎
3.词汇激活
行为类
①大声求救：cry fr help /shut fr help /scream fr help
②受到赞扬：received a lt f praise / be praised greatly
③照顾，护理： caring fr/taking care f/
情绪类
①.感谢：say thank--yu / express appreciatin / shw appreciatin /shw his gratitude/be grateful
②.体贴：thughtfulness /being cnsiderate
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Inside, they fund Kirk, wh was in need f immediate medical help.(由关系代词wh引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词Kirk。)
[高分句型2]. We shuld remember that the custmers determine the success f ur cmpany and in turn we can als have an impact n their lives, small r big.(that引导宾语从句作remember的宾语。)
Part2：助人类故事构造三部曲
第一步：困难描写（消极情绪+困难处境）
（1）消极情绪
典型表达是：感到（这个可以有很多表达方式，并且可以结合在每一个环节中，可有非谓语动词形式和介词短语）
1. a flush f (表情绪的名词)=a wave feeling/sense f...一阵...
2.jy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terrr/srrw/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispintment/guilt/shame...)
3. (表情绪的名词) flded ver sb=swept ver sb
因...颤抖
tremble//shiver/shake (with fear, panic excitement, rage...)
（2）进一步细节描写
典型是：流泪；心里想……
流泪：
1. Tears blurred ne's eyes.
2. One's eyes gt misty.
3. One's eyes misted/dimmed with tears.泪眼模糊
4. clse t tears几乎要哭了
5. tears (rll dwn ne's eyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下
困难处境
As the ecnmy was in decline(经济衰退), sme peple in the twn had lst their jbs. Many f their families were struggling t make ends meet (使收支平衡). （2020.7高考山东卷）
There was a man sick in bed(卧病在床), his wife, wh tk care f him and culd nt g ut t wrk, and their little by. （2020.7高考山东卷）
But ne day, a hurricane hit the area (台风袭击当地) where he lived, cmpletely destrying his hme (完全摧毁他的家) . （2021广州2月联考）
第二步：助人过程呈现（想到办法+动作链）
（1）突然有了一个想法：一句话表示想法
典型：某人想到/明白...; 有了主意
1. It suddenly ccurred t sb that 从句=It hit sb that 从句=It struck me that 从句 =It dawned n sb that 从句
2. (idea, thught...) ccurred/came t sb.= int ne's mind= in ne's mind
3. One's mind began t race
（2）动作链
Then he gt a saw (锯子) frm the truck and cut a sectin ut f a big lg n the side f the rad. We rlled it ver and put his jack n tp, and we were in business.然后他从卡车上拿到了一把锯子（锯子），从路边的一根大木头上砍了一段。我们把它翻过来，把他的杰克顶放在上面，我们开始做生意。【八省联考】
第三步：皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华）
（1）皆大欢喜：过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折
过了一段时间
1. nt lng after that, afterwards, lng, didn't take lng befre 从句=It tk sme time befre从句不久, ...
2. fr an instant/mment一瞬间
（2）有了结果
1. T ne's surprise(delight)/Strangely enugh, it turned ut that 从句
2. But n secnd thughts, ...但是转而一想，...
3. But what happened next was pure magic. 接下来发生的非常奇妙
（3）感谢
Nw, I was definitely grateful t her fr extending a helping hand(伸出援手).（2021届湖南长沙市一中高三月考三）
Mlly and Shawn met n Tuesday, and she says she culdn’t thank him enugh (非常感谢他)and everyne invlved in fr what they did fr her. （2020届山东省泰安市高三第二轮复习质量检测（二模）英语试题）
（4）感动
1. Needless t say, they were deeply mved (他们被深深地感动了), especially Bernard wh finally fund a way t make mney fr his family. （2020.7高考山东卷）
2. He was tuched that I, a cmplete stranger, cared s much abut him (如此关心他) and said he was willing t wrk.（2021广州2月联考）
3. In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was tuched beynd wrds (感动得说不出话来). I felt s warm as if there were nine suns in my chest. （2021年1月八省联考）
4. I ndded in gratitude, eyes glistening with held-back tears(眼睛因为强忍的泪水而闪耀). （2021年1月八省联考）
5. Stunned and mved(惊讶又感动), I stared at the nte, feeling a pang f guilt abut my previus thught that all peple were indifferent.（2021年1月八省联考）
（5）升华
It is lve that makes the wrld g rund（是爱让世界运转）and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.（2020.7高考山东卷）
Everyne was happy and sweet, expsing their sets f white teeth（露出他们洁白的牙齿）.（2020.7高考山东卷）
I made up my mind t pass n “lve” t thers（传递爱给其他人）. Just as a saying ges : “ Rses given, fragrance in hand（赠人玫瑰，手有余香）. ”（2021年1月八省联考）
Frm that day n, every time I meet smene wh needs help, I always reach ut t them, hping t pass n the kindness （希望传递善意）that Mexican family ffered me.（2021年1月八省联考）
5. Smetimes, a small act f kindness may be pwerful enugh t make a huge difference（会有很大不同）.
Part3：助人场景描写
一、帮助他人之后
I just lked at my friend with disbelief as he tld the stry f the first day we met.Kyle had planned t kill himself ver the weekend. He talked f hw he had cleaned ut his lcker s his Mm wuldn’t have t d it later and was carrying his stuff hme. Meanwhile,I fund he lked hard at me and gave me a little smile."Thankfully, I was saved. My friend saved me frm ding the unspeakable,I heard the gasp g thrugh the crwd as this handsme, ppular by tld us all abut his weakest mment. When his eyes caught mine,I was able t see tears shimmered in his smiling eyes.
我只是难以置信地看着我的朋友，他讲述了我们第一天见面的故事。 凯尔计划周末消遣。 他谈到了他是如何清理他的储物柜的，这样他的妈妈就不用再做了，然后把他的东西带回家了。 同时，我发现他狠狠地看着我，给了我一个小小的微笑。 “谢天谢地，我得救了。 我的朋友不让我做那些无法形容的事，我听到人群中的喘息声，就像这个英俊、受欢迎的男孩告诉我们他最脆弱的时刻一样。 当他的眼睛抓住我的眼睛时，我能看到他微笑的眼睛里闪烁着泪水。
I smiled back in tears. Nt until that mment did I realize what big difference ne small gesture had made t him. I even saw his Mm and Dad lking at me and smiling that same grateful smile. It dawned n me that never shuld we underestimate the pwer f ur actins. With ne small gesture we can change a persn's life. Fr better r fr wrse.
我笑着。直到那一刻，我才意识到一个小小的手势对他产生了多么大的不同。我甚至看到他的爸爸妈妈看着我，也带着同样感激的微笑。我意识到，我们永远不应该低估我们行动的力量。只要用一个小小的手势，我们就可以改变一个人的生活。为好或坏。
二、发生水灾之后
The water kept rising, and there was n hpe f rescue. The hurs passed. Jasn and Andrew didn't dare t mve fr fear f slipping. They dzed ff and then jerked themselves awake. Every nce in a while,ne f them turned n his headlamp t check the water level. An hur later, the water level went dwn enugh that they culd try an escape. Stiff frm keeping in ne psitin fr 12 hurs, they slwly unflded their bdies. Jasn screamed in pain, but he was determined nt t let it stp him.
水不断上涨，没有了救援的希望。 几个小时过去了。 杰森和安德鲁不敢动，因为害怕滑倒。 他们打了个瞌睡，然后猛地清醒过来。 每隔一段时间，其中一个人就打开他的前照灯检查水位。 一个小时后，水位下降到足以让他们尝试逃跑。 他们僵硬地保持在一个位置12小时，慢慢地展开他们的身体。 杰森痛苦地尖叫着，但他决心不让它阻止他。
Slwly but steadily, the grup made their way frward. Still, each time Jasn mved a leg, he cried ut. Over the next 90 minutes, they made their way tward the entrance, at times in chest-high water. Nw, in a passage that was high enugh fr them t walkupright, Jasn saw smething flicker in the distance."Lights! I see lights!" Jasn shuted ut.Fr the first time since entering the cave, ver 20 hurs earlier, Jasn's emtins gt the best f him and tears trickled dwn his cheeks.
水不断上涨，没有了救援的希望。 几个小时过去了。 杰森和安德鲁不敢动，因为害怕滑倒。 他们打了个瞌睡，然后猛地清醒过来。 每隔一段时间，其中一个人就打开他的前照灯检查水位。 一个小时后，水位下降到足以让他们尝试逃跑。 他们僵硬地保持在一个位置12小时，慢慢地展开他们的身体。 杰森痛苦地尖叫着，但他决心不让它阻止他。
三、发生误解之后
As she reached in her baggage, she gasped with surprise. At that mment, in her sight came the packet f ckies, which had beenjust bught by her, unpened at all. Ashamed and feeling like a thief, she finally gt that the ckies were nt hers but belnged t the man sitting next t her, wh had calmly ffered t share his last ckie with her.A sudden rush f shy bld filling the face, she instinctively lk arund with the hpe f finding the very man t make an aplgy.
当她伸手拿行李时，她惊讶地喘了一口气。就在这时，她看到了她刚买的一包饼干，根本没有打开。她感到羞愧，感觉自己像个小偷，终于明白了这些饼干不是她的，而是属于坐在她旁边的男人，他平静地提出和她分享他的最后一块饼干。脸上突然涌满了害羞的鲜血，她本能地环顾四周，希望能找到那个男人来道歉。
Surprisingly, she fund the man sitting just behind her. He was just lking up and met her eyes,als with a smile n his face.The wman was at an abslute lss but gave the man a nervus laugh in return. Witha quite pen muth, she was unable t say any aplgy t him. Murmuring "Srry, was I myself wh was the real ckie thief." After a while, she fell asleep n her seat with the plane flying steadily. The next day, when she arrived at her new cmpany, the biggest surprise was waiting fr her.
令人惊讶的是，她发现那个男人就坐在她身后。 他只是抬头看了看她的眼睛，脸上也带着微笑。 女人完全不知所措，但却给了男人一声紧张的笑声作为回报。 她张开嘴，不能向他道歉。 “对不起，对不起。。 真正偷饼的是我自己。” 过了一会儿，她在座位上睡着了，飞机平稳地飞着。 第二天，当她来到她的新公司时，最大的惊喜就是在等她。
四、发生火灾之后
Tm nticed the flame was reaching up. Frzen with fear, he std rted t the spt. He cmprehended the gravity f the situatin and held Jane′s hand tightly. By then, bth f them were cughing and their eyes were stinging. Time seemed t stand still, thugh they were prbably there fr nly tw r three minutes. Tm begged Jane t run fr safety as quickly as pssible.Jane tried t shield her nse frm the chking smke and shk her head. She kept punding against the dr. Tm burst ut crying.
汤姆注意到火焰正在升起。 他吓得僵住了，站在原地。 他明白形势的严重性，紧紧地握住简的手。 到那时，他们俩都在咳嗽，眼睛刺痛。 时间似乎静止不动，虽然他们可能只在那里两三分钟。 汤姆恳求简尽快跑过去寻求安全。 简想保护她的鼻子免受呛人的烟雾，摇了摇头。 她不停地敲门。 汤姆突然哭了起来。
Luckily, sme neighbrs passing by stpped and ffered help.A sense f strength immediately replaced the munting fear and anxiety in Jane's mind. She tld them Ms. Makcik must be still in the rm. They frced the dr pen with all their might. Sure enugh, Makcik was lying in bed,uncnscius. She was carried dwnstairs and then rushed t the hspital, where she finally came t herself. Peple in the neighbrhd felt relieved and Jane and Tm's jy was immense.
幸运的是，一些邻居路过时停下来，并提供了帮助。一种力量感立刻取代了简心中日益增加的恐惧和焦虑。她告诉他们，马克奇克女士一定还在房间里。他们竭尽全力地强行打开了门。果然，马克西克正躺在床上，失去了知觉。她被带下楼，然后被紧急送往医院，终于苏醒过来。附近的人都松了一口气，简和汤姆非常高兴。
五、感受善良之后
Seeing what was ging n, my dad put his hand in his pcket, pulled ut a $20 bill and drpped it n the grund.Then he picked it up and tapped the man n the shulder and said,"Excuse me, sir, this fell ut f yur pcket." The man turned arund and saw the mney. He knew what was ging n,he lked straight int my dad's eyes, tk my dad's hand in bth f his, squeezed tightly nt the $20 bill, and with his lip shaking and a tear running dwn his cheek, he replied,"Thank yu, thankyu, sir. This really means a lt t me and my family.
水不断上涨，没有了救援的希望。 几个小时过去了。 杰森和安德鲁不敢动，因为害怕滑倒。 他们打了个瞌睡，然后猛地清醒过来。 每隔一段时间，其中一个人就打开他的前照灯检查水位。 一个小时后，水位下降到足以让他们尝试逃跑。 他们僵硬地保持在一个位置12小时，慢慢地展开他们的身体。 杰森痛苦地尖叫着，但他决心不让它阻止他。
That day my father andI went back t ur car and drve hme withut any tickets.We didn't g t the circus that night, when I asked dad why he did s, Dad said,"My child, it was a desperate, heartbreaking and embarrassing situatin fr a father. Surely he wasn't begging fra handut, but he reminded me f my father, when I was yung." He paused fr a while, as if wandering in his memry."We shuld appreciate what we have btained frm life and seize every pprtunity t help thers.We didn't g t the circus tnight, but we didn't g withut. Nw, wh wants an ice cream?。
那天，我和我父亲回到我们的车里，没有任何票就开车回家了。 那天晚上我们没有去马戏团，当我问爸爸为什么这么做时，爸爸说：“我的孩子，对一个父亲来说，这是一个绝望、令人心碎和尴尬的情况。 他当然不是乞求施舍，但他让我想起了我年轻时的父亲。” 他停顿了一会儿，仿佛在记忆中徘徊。 我们应该珍惜从生活中获得的东西，抓住一切机会帮助别人。 我们今晚没有去马戏团，但我们没有去。 谁要冰淇淋？。
六、感受幸福之后
The driver respnded,"It must feel gd t be taken care f and prtected like yu are every day."Cnfused by what the driver talked abut,she asked, "What d yu mean?" The driver answered, "Every mrning in the past week,a fine lking gentleman ina military unifrm has been standing acrss the street watching yu getting ff the bus.He makes sure yu crss the street safely and he watches until yu enter yur ffice building.Then he blws yu a kiss,gives yu a lite salute and walks away. Yu are ne lucky lady.'
司机回答说：“像每天一样被照顾和保护一定会感觉很好。她对司机所说的话感到困惑，她问道，“你是什么意思？”司机回答说：“在过去的一周里，每天早上，一个漂亮的军装绅士都站在街对面看着你下车。他确保你安全过马路，他看着，直到你进入你的办公楼。然后他打了你一个吻，向你轻轻地敬礼，然后走开了。你是一位幸运的女士。”
Tears f happiness pured dwn Susan's cheeks. She std mtinlessly facing the ppsite side f the street as if gazing at smene. Althugh she culdn't physically see him, she definitely felt Mark's presence. Susan thught she was actually lucky, fr he had given her a gift mre pwerful than sight,a gift f lve that can bring light where there is darkness.Just as Mark grew a little wrried, he saw his wife break int a radiant smile and blw a kiss t his directin. Finally she fund back herself blind but attractive and cnfident as she used t be.
司机回答说：“像每天一样被照顾和保护一定会感觉很好。她对司机所说的话感到困惑，她问道，“你是什么意思？”司机回答说：“在过去的一周里，每天早上，一个漂亮的军装绅士都站在街对面看着你下车。他确保你安全过马路，他看着，直到你进入你的办公楼。然后他打了你一个吻，向你轻轻地敬礼，然后走开了。你是一位幸运的女士。”
七、发生误解之后
A seat beside her was empty, and Dannis ccupied it.He felt a wave f anger swept ver him. "Where is my wallet?" he yelled. The black-haired girl glanced up frm her reading, with a cnfused lk n her face. Dannis std up,glared at her and shuted,"Yu stle my wallet!" The crwds began t gssip.The girl turned deadly pale,lking s restless that wrds failed her.A strange silence hung in the air. Abruptly, she leaped frm the seat.
她旁边的一个座位空着，丹尼斯坐着。 他感到一阵愤怒席卷了他。 “我的钱包呢？” 他大叫。 黑发女孩从阅读中抬起头来，脸上露出困惑的神色。 丹尼斯站起来，瞪了她一眼，喊道：“你偷了我的钱包！” 人群开始闲聊起来。 那女孩脸色惨白，神情不安，言语使她失望。 一种奇怪的沉默挂在空中。 她突然从座位上跳了起来。
The girl ran and Dannis ran after her. After a while, Dannis finally grabbed her by the arm.At exactly that mment,a pliceman apprached them and asked abut what happened.Dannis hastened t explain it while the girl frwned with a shake f her head. After further enquiries, the pliceman tk ut a wallet and handed it t Dannis, adding that smene had fund it in the tilet. What a mistake he had made! Overwhelmed by guilt, Dannis made an aplgy t the girl.
女孩跑了，丹尼斯追了她。 过了一会儿，丹尼斯终于抓住了她的手臂。 就在这时，一个警察走近他们，问他们发生了什么事。 丹尼斯急忙解释，而女孩皱着眉头摇了摇头。 经过进一步的询问，警察拿出一个钱包递给丹尼斯，并补充说有人在厕所里发现了它。 他犯了什么错误！ 由于内疚，丹尼斯向女孩道歉。
八、获得勇气
The by started running again t give the kite lift.The wind n the kite was at nce strng and swift, carrying him up high int the air.Clsing his eyes tight, he trembled all ver in panic,nt daring t lk dwn.But with the by's inspiring wrds in mind, he gt up his nerve and managed t keep the balance and let his fear g.As the wind carried him upward, he slwly pened his eyes, nly t see the whle twn frm a brand-new dimensin!"Give mre string, please. Mre! he yelled t the by excitedly. With curage,he made a great dance in the air, making ther kids cheering wildly
那男孩又开始跑去放风筝了。风筝上的风立刻强烈而迅速，把他从高空吹到空中。他紧紧地闭上眼睛，惊恐得浑身发抖，不敢低头看。但考虑到男孩鼓舞人心的话，他鼓起了勇气，设法保持平衡，释放了他的恐惧。当风带着他向上走时，他慢慢地睁开眼睛，却从一个全新的维度看到了整个城镇！“请再多写信吧。请了解更多信息！他兴奋地对那男孩大喊大叫。他鼓着勇气在空中跳了一场舞，让其他孩子疯狂地欢呼
The kite felt peaceful and delighted and new. With ther kites flying arund, he flated, twirled,stretched his wings and waved his rag tail, a brad smile spreading n his face. The higher he went, the greater the view. Seeing the scared, timid kite nw dancing cnfidently, the by was tuched, believing that the kite had learned a new lessn--the best way t defeat fear is t face it bravely and ptimistically.
风筝感到平静、快乐和新鲜事物。其他风筝四处飞着，他漂浮着，旋转着，展开翅膀，摇着破尾巴，脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容。他走得越高，视野就越大。看到害怕的、胆小的风筝现在自信地跳舞，男孩被感动了，相信风筝已经吸取了新的教训——战胜恐惧的最好方法是勇敢而乐观地面对它。
九、获得自信
Everybdy was fixing their eyes n Jenny, waiting fr an explanatin.Jenny didn't answer. Hw culd she explain abut the watch and its magic? N ne culd understand. N ne culd believe. "But I saw yu wearing it yesterday," Miss Walker gently reminded him. Fr a mment Lee remained silent and then he aplgized he had just remembered that.Jenny was relieved saying she had fund it n the way hme and decided t return it after the speech. Everybdy was puzzled and asked why. Jenny again was speechless.
每个人都把眼睛盯着珍妮，等待着解释。珍妮没有回答。她怎么能解释一下这只手表和它的魔力呢？没人能理解。没有人能相信。“可是我昨天看到你戴着它，”沃克小姐温柔地提醒他。李沉默了一会儿，然后他道歉了，他只记得这一点。珍妮在回家的路上找到了它，并决定在演讲后归还。每个人都很困惑，并被问及为什么。珍妮又说不出话来了。
Miss Walker smiled and asked the class t listen t Jenny's speech first.Jenny walked slwly t the frnt. She culdn't think prperly. All rund her, a sea f faces was watching.She felt s frightened and the watch didn't seem magical at all. Suddenly she saw Miss Walker's encuraging eyes.Jenny tk a deep breath."I'm ging t talk abut swimming…." Ten minutes later the whle class std up applauding Jenny's wnderful speech. Jenny smiled as she eventually realized the real surce f cnfidence.
沃克老师笑了笑，让全班同学先听珍妮的演讲。 珍妮慢慢地走到前面。 她无法正常思考。 她的四周，一片面海在看着。 她感到很害怕，手表看起来一点也不神奇。 突然，她看到沃克小姐鼓励的眼睛。 珍妮深吸了一口气。 “我要谈谈游泳的事...。” 十分钟后全班同学起立为珍妮的精彩演讲鼓掌。 珍妮笑了，因为她最终意识到了自信的真正来源。
十、接收礼物之后
I was stpped by my mther's eager,jyful lk."Let's see what it is, hney. Hurry and pen it."It was a blw dryer. Thugh this may seem but a simple gift, t me it was s much mre. Being an eleven-year-ld girl, I was stunned.In my wrld, where receiving lately utweighed giving, my mm's act f selflessness was incmprehensible. It was a huge act Tears filled my eyes and I thught in disbelief abut hw much my mm must lve me t give up her Christmas s-culd have a few mre presents.
我被我母亲急切而快乐的目光拦住了。“让我们看看那是什么事吧，亲爱的。赶快打开它。“那是一个吹风机。虽然这似乎只是一份简单的礼物，但对我来说，它更多了。作为一个11岁的女孩，我惊呆了。在我的世界里，最近接受的东西超过了付出，我妈妈的无私行为是不可理解的。这是一个巨大的表演，眼泪充满了我的眼睛，我不相信我妈妈一定是多么爱我才能放弃她的圣诞节，所以可以再有几份礼物。
I have always remembered that Christmas fndly: It had such an impact n me. As an adult with children in my life whm I adre, I can nw understand my mm's actins.I see actually, she was nt ""giving up her Christmas" as I had thught, but was finding an even greater jy in her Christmas because giving truly is better than receiving. My mm's simple act meant the wrld t me. Whenever I lk back n my mm's giving, I will chse t give in my life.
我一直深情地记得那个圣诞节：它对我有如此的影响。 作为一个在我的生活中有孩子的成年人，我现在可以理解我妈妈的行为。 实际上，我知道，她并没有像我想的那样“放弃她的圣诞节”，而是在她的圣诞节中找到了更大的乐趣，因为真正的给予比接受更好。 我妈妈的简单行为对我来说意味着世界。 每当我回首妈妈的付出，我都会选择在我的生命中付出。
十一、老师的帮助
Everybdy was fixing their eyes n Jenny, waiting fr an explanatin. Jenny didn't answer. Hw culd she explain abut the watch and its magic? N ne culd understand. N ne culd believe. "But I saw yu wearing it yesterday," Miss Walker gently reminded him. Fr a mment Lee remained silent and then he aplgized he had just remembered that.Jenny was relieved saying she had fund it n the way hme and decided t return it after the speech.Everybdy was puzzled and asked why. Jenny again was speechless.
每个人都把眼睛盯着珍妮，等待着解释。珍妮没有回答。她怎么能解释一下这只手表和它的魔力呢？没人能理解。没有人能相信。“但我昨天看见你戴着它，”沃克小姐温柔地提醒他。李沉默了一会儿，然后他道歉了，他只记得这一点。珍妮在回家的路上找到了它，并决定在演讲后归还。每个人都很困惑，并被问及为什么。珍妮又说不出话来了。
Miss Walker smiled and asked the class t listen t Jenny's speech first.Jenny walked slwly t the frnt. She culdn't think prperly.All rund her,a sea f faces was watching. She felt s frightened and the watch didn't seem magical at all. Suddenly she saw Miss Walker's encuraging eyes. Jenny tk a deep breath."I'm ging t talk abut swimming…" Ten minutes later the whle class std up applauding Jenny's wnderful speech.Jenny smiled as she eventually realized the real surce f cnfidence.
沃克老师笑了笑，让全班同学先听珍妮的演讲。 珍妮慢慢地走到前面。 她无法正常思考。 她的四周，一片面海在看着。 她感到很害怕，手表看起来一点也不神奇。 突然，她看到沃克小姐鼓励的眼睛。 珍妮深深地吸了一口气。 十分钟后，全班同学起立为珍妮的精彩演讲鼓掌。 珍妮笑了，因为她最终意识到了自信的真正来源。
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Time passed quickly that year, and befre we all knew it, it was the last day f schl.Our schl had a very special traditin n the last day. All the teachers filled the sidewalk, waving gdbye t the kids as the buses pulled ut with their hrns hnking.But n that particular day,Steven walked slwly t the bus, his head dwn, tears in his eyes.He barded the bus reluctantly,hesitated,and then ran back ff the bus t hug Mr. Rwe."I dn′t want t leave yu." He sbbed with red-rimmed eyes. Mr. Rwe cmfrted him,"I will miss yu, t."
那一年时间过得很快，我们还没意识到，那是学校的最后一天。我们学校在最后一天有一个非常特殊的传统。所有的老师都挤满了人行道，向孩子们挥手道别，车上按着喇叭离开。但就在那一天，史蒂文慢慢地走到公交车前，低着头，热泪盈眶。他不情愿地登上了巴士，犹豫了一下，然后跑回来拥抱Mr。罗伊。“我不想离开你。”他用红边缘的眼睛抽泣着。Mr.罗安慰他，“我也会想念你。”
Many years later, Mr. Rwe and I were surprised when a handsme yung man walked int ur classrm, dressed in the Marine Crps unifrm. The yung man std tall and prud.It was Steven! Mr. Rwe and I culdn't believe ur eyes. He saluted and hugged Mr. Rwe tightly! "I have cme back t schl tday just t say thanks t yu!"It is my hpe that every teacher is blessed with such an experience f a frmer student cming back t say, simply t say a very simple wrd f THANKS.
许多年后，当一个穿着海军陆战队制服的英俊年轻人走进我们的教室时，罗先生和我感到惊讶。 那个年轻人站得高高的，很骄傲。 是史蒂文！ 我和罗先生简直不敢相信我们的眼睛。 他敬礼，紧紧地拥抱罗先生！ “我今天回到学校只是为了感谢你！ “我希望每一位老师都有这样的经历，一位以前的学生回来说，简单地说一个非常简单的“谢谢。
十二、陌生人的帮助
I was wndering what t say when I heard the sund f ftsteps ut f the tent.We bth lked up. It was exactly the yung man in the pht but lked much strnger. The wman said smething t him, lking at us smiling."Need sme Mg?"he asked.It's amazing he was speaking very gd English! Gerge and I lked at each ther, eyes lit up."Yes, and we were wndering if yu culd have ne f ur tyres changed." "Fllw me!" he said, sunding like srt f an rder.
当我听到帐篷外的脚步声时，我想说什么。 我们都抬起头来。 照片上的正是那个年轻人，但看上去更强壮。 女人对他说了些什么，看着我们微笑。 ”“需要镁吗？ ”他问道。 他说的英语很好真是太棒了！ 乔治和我互相看了一眼，眼睛亮了起来。 “是的，我们想知道你们是否可以换一个轮胎。” “跟我来！” 他说，听起来像是命令。
We gt up and tgether walked back t the car. The man grabbed the wheel with ne hand and a spanner with the ther. With an utburst f shut, the tyre was sened up."Yu just need a bit f effrt. Haha!" Gerge and I std there dumbfunded watching him finishing the whle jb, gratitude and admiratin rushing in my heart. The knt that had been tired up by the pain in my ft, the cld saking rain and the stubbrn flat tyre was lsened up t,in the warm tea frm the wman, the heric shut f the man, the muntain view in the distance and the jy f being alel t set ff again.
我们站起来，一起走回到车里。那个人用一只手抓住轮子，另一只手抓住扳手。大叫一声，轮胎亮了。“你只需要付出一点努力。哈哈哈！”我和乔治呆地站在那里看着他完成整个工作，感激和钦佩在我心中涌动。我脚的疼痛、冰冷的雨和顽固的平轮胎也松开了，在女人温暖的茶里，男人的英雄呐喊，远处的山景，还有比加莱尔再次出发的喜悦。
Part4：灵活应用
例1：老夫妇帮助我
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。（满分25分）
Many years ag, when I was fresh ut f schl and wrking in Denver, I was driving t my parents' hme in Missuri fr Christmas. I stpped at a gas statin(加油站)abut 50 miles frm Oklahma City, where I was planning t stp and visit a friend. While I was standing in line at the cash register(收款台), I said hell t an lder cuple wh were als paying fr gas.
I tk ff, but had gne nly a few miles when black smke pured frm the back f my car. I stpped and wndered what I shuld d. A car pulled up behind me. It was the cuple I had spken t at the gas statin. They said they wuld take me t my friend's .We chatted n the way int the city, and when I gt ut f the car, the husband gave me his business card.
I wrte him and his wife a thank-yu nte fr helping me. Sn afterward, I received a Christmas present frm them. Their nte that came with it said that helping me had made their hlidays meaningful.
Years later, I drve t a meeting in a nearby twn in the mrning. In late afternn I returned t my car and fund that I'd left the lights n all day, and the battery(电池)was dead. Then I nticed that the Friendly Frd dealership - a shp selling cars - was right next dr. I walked ver and fund tw salesmen in the shwrm.
注意：
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；
4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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I entered the shp, and ne f the salesman came t me.
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After a while, they quickly drve a pickup truck t my car and started it.
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I entered the shp, and ne f the salesman came t me. I recgnized him at nce. the tw salesmen were the lder cuple, and they were the wners f the Friendly Frd dealership. “ Hey, it’s yu! yu ever helped me, remember?” I said t them excitedly. Yeah, we d!” the ld man laughed, we run the shp t help mre peple. yu knw, it makes ur life s meaningful!”
我走进商店，其中一个推销员来找我。我立刻认出了他。这两名销售员是老夫妇，他们是友好的福特经销商的老板。“嘿，是你！”你曾经帮助过我，记得吗？我兴奋地对他们说。是的，老人笑了，我们经营商店是为了帮助更多的人。你知道，这让我们的生活如此有意义！”
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After a while, they quickly drve a pickup truck t my car and started it. they slved my truble nce again, but when I paid fr it, they wuld nt accept my mney. they tld me that when they ran the shp at first, n ne had ever taken the time t write them and say thank yu, but nw they received mre and mre thank-yu ntes frm peple, which they were really happy abut.
过了一会儿，他们很快就开了一辆小货车到我的车前，发动了它。他们再次解决了我的麻烦，但当我付钱时，他们不会接受我的钱。他们告诉我，当他们一开始经营商店的时候，没有人花时间写声谢谢，但现在他们收到了越来越多的感谢信，他们真的很高兴。
例2：帮助老妇人
“Hurry, Marcus!” Millie called t her brther. Marcus caught up just as the schl bus arrived. The drs pened and they gt their first lk at the new bus driver, Mr. Crss. There was n smile n his face. He just ndded at them as they climbed the steps. Millie wndered if he ever smiled. “I miss ur ld driver,” she whispered.
The bus traveled tw mre blcks, then stpped in frnt f a huse with n ne in sight. “Hey, we dn’t usually stp here,” whispered Millie. Mr. Crss pened the bus drs.
Millie waited t see wh wuld get n, but nbdy did. Still, Mr. Crss ndded his head, the way he had when she and Marcus barded the bus. Then he clsed the drs.
“Did yu see that?” Millie said. “He just pened the drs and ndded at smene, but nbdy gt n!” Marcus agreed. “That was strange.” The bus cntinued n the rute, and the usual kids gt n. Mr. Crss ndded at each ne.
During schl that day, Millie kept thinking back t what had happened that mrning. It didn't make sense. At the end f the day, when she and Marcus gt n the bus t g hme, Marcus said, “I think I figured it ut. He prbably stpped t pick up a ghst kid!”
“A ghst kid?” Millie gulped (倒吸气).
“Maybe Mr. Crss can see ghsts,” Marcus said.
“N,” said Millie. “That’s silly.” But as they rde hme, Millie thught abut it. What else culd it be? Why else wuld he pen the drs?
The next tw days, the same thing happened. The bus stpped and the drs pened. Smileless, Mr. Crss ndded, and the drs clsed. Millie began t panic. This time she decided Marcus was right. “Wh is this ghst kid? What if he’s sitting next t us?” They gathered curage t find ut the truth.
On Friday mrning, the bus stpped at that huse again. Their hearts raced.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
When Mr. Crss pened the drs and ndded t nbdy, they went frward t him.
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Hearing the stry, in relief, they decided t visit the huse and see what can be dne.
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【答案】
When Mr. Crss pened the drs and ndded t nbdy, they went frward t him. Millie said, “Excuse me, Mr. Crss, wh gets n at this stp every mrning?” Mr. Crss replied, “I am afraid that there are sme misunderstandings between us. I have an ld friend wh lives in the ld huse at the end f this blck. Every day at this time, she will wave at me in frnt f the huse. I can als see her in the distance and knw that she is healthy and safe. I am s tall that I have t nd my head t lk utside. ”
克罗斯先生开门，没有向任何人点点头，他们就向他走去。米莉说：“对不起，克罗斯先生，他每天早上都会在这里停留？”克罗斯先生回答说：“恐怕我们之间有些误解。”我有一个老朋友住在这个街区尽头的老房子里。每天在这个时候，她都会在房子前向我挥手。我也可以在远处看到她，我知道她很健康，很安全。我太高了，我得点头才能看外面。”
Hearing the stry, in relief, they decided t visit the huse and see what can be dne. As appraching the huse, they saw an ld wman sitting n a chair with a dg next t her. They intrduced themselves t this ld wman. Frm then n, they ften came t help the ld wman with sme husewrk n weekends. With the generus help f Millie and Marcus, the ld wman n lnger felt lnely. She ften tld them sme ld stries and they became gd friends.
克罗斯先生开门，没有向任何人点点头，他们就向他走去。米莉说：“对不起，克罗斯先生，他每天早上都会在这里停留？”克罗斯先生回答说：“恐怕我们之间有些误解。”我有一个老朋友住在这个街区尽头的老房子里。每天在这个时候，她都会在房子前向我挥手。我也可以在远处看到她，我知道她很健康，很安全。我太高了，我得点头才能看外面。”
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇记叙文。米莉和她的弟弟马库斯乘坐的校车换了司机，新司机开车每次过两个街区都会停下来，并没有任何人上车，司机都会点一下头。米莉和马库斯既害怕又纳闷。终于有一天，他们决心弄清楚这件事情。
【详解】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，米莉和她的弟弟乘坐的校车换了司机，新司机叫克罗斯，他们觉得新司机很陌生，脸上没有笑容。更令他们害怕的是，校车每次过两个街区，克罗斯先生就会把车停下来，并没有任何人上车，但是司机都会点一下头。他们很诧异，弟弟马库斯猜测说，克罗斯先生在那一站接上来的是“鬼孩子”，米莉并不这么想，但是也很害怕。接下来的几天都是这样，他们忍不住了。终于有一天，他们鼓起勇气，决心把这个事情弄明白。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：当克罗斯先生打开门，对着无人的地方点头示意时，他们向他走去……因此，接下来应该续写，司机克罗斯先生是怎样把这个事情跟米莉姐弟解释清楚的。原来是一场误会，克罗斯先生有一位老朋友就住在这附近，这位老朋友是个老妇人，年龄大了，自己孤独的住在这里。每次到车到这的时候，老妇人都会出来和他挥挥手，他也能从远处看看她，看到老朋友是健康的、安全的，他就放心了。
第二段开头是：听到这个故事，他们松了一口气，决定去这个房子看看能做些什么……本段续写他们认识了住在房子里的老妇人，并且经常在周末的时候来帮助老人做家务，他们也成了很好的朋友。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：wave at，in frnt f，in the distance，n lnger等高级词汇；定语从句I have an ld friend wh lives in the ld huse at the end f this blck；结果状语从句I am s tall that I have t nd my head t lk utside；运用了With the generus help f...的with复合结构等高级句式。
Part5：高考真题再现
真题1：好心的墨西哥家庭【2021年八省联考】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
During this past year, I’ve had three instances f car truble. Each time these things happened, I was sick f the way mst peple hadn’t bthered t help. One f thse times, I was n the side f the rad fr clse t three hurs with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windws, big signs that said NEED A JACK (千斤顶), and ffered mney. Nthing. Right as I was abut t give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled ver, and the father bunded ut.
He sized up the situatin and called fr his daughter, wh spke English. He cnveyed thrugh her that he had a jack but that it was t small fr the Jeep, s we wuld need smething t supprt it. Then he gt a saw (锯子) frm the truck and cut a sectin ut f a big lg n the side f the rad. We rlled it ver and put his jack n tp, and we were in business.
I started taking the wheel ff, and then, if yu can believe it, I brke his tire irn. N wrries: He handed it t his wife, and she was gne in a flash dwn the rad t buy a new tire irn. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the jb, and I was a very happy man.
The tw f us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pt f water fr us t wash ur hands. I tried t put a $20 bill in the man’s hand, but he wuldn’t take it, s instead I went up t the truck and gave it t his wife as quietly as I culd. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexic, she said. They were in Oregn s Mmmy and Daddy culd wrk n a fruit farm fr the next few weeks. Then they wuld g hme.
注意：
续写词数应为150左右；
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When I was abut t say gdbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.
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After they left, I gt int my Jeep and pened the paper bag.
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When I was abut t say gdbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.Hearing what she said, I realized that I didn’t have lunch.T be hnest, after wrking hard fr several hurs, I was s hungry. Feeling a bit embarrassed, I replied: “n!”The girl said with a smile, “Cme n! Jin us.The Mexicn sandwich is delicius!” With mved tears rlling arund my eyes, I tk the sandwich.After eating it like wlf, I felt that it was the tasty sandwich that I had ever had.While dining, I talked abut my truble and feelings and they shared their interesting stries in the life.Then, the girl’s mther had anther sandwich and sme fruit place din a paper bag and handed it t me,saying gently: “Keep it and have it later! We had t g nw.” I shwed my heartfelt gratitude t them and saw them disappear in my sight.
After they left, I gt int my jeep and pened the paper bag. What surprised me a lt was that there was a sandwich,fruit and the bill given by me.Hlding the paper bag tightly, I std still, a warm current rising in my heart.Hw grateful was I t the family helping me. Althugh mst f peple I met n the rad were indifferent, there were still sme peple like this family wh was s helpful and thughtful.Frm then n, I placed a jack and sme cmmn tls in my car.When meeting peple in need n the rad ,I wuld try my best t help them like the family.Only in this way, culd mre and mre peple help each ther in the future.
真题2：买爆米花助穷人【2020年7月山东卷】
第二节 （满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Meredith family lived in a small cmmunity. As the ecnmy was in decline, sme peple in the twn had lst their jbs. Many f their families were struggling t make ends meet. Peple were trying t help each ther meet the challenges.
Mrs. Meredith was a mst kind and thughtful wman. She spent a great deal f time visiting the pr. She knew they had prblems, and they needed all kinds f help. When she had time, she wuld bring fd and medicine t them.
One mrning she tld her children abut a family she had visited the day befre. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, wh tk care f him and culd nt g ut t wrk, and their little by. The little by — his name was Bernard — had interested her very much.
“I wish yu culd see him,” she said t her wn children, Jhn, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help t his mther. He wants very much t earn sme mney, but I dn’t see what he can d.”
After their mther left the rm, the children sat thinking abut Bernard. “I wish we culd help him t earn mney,” said Clara. “His family is suffering s much.”
“S d I,” said Harry. “We really shuld d smething t assist them.”
Fr sme mments, Jhn said nthing, but, suddenly, he sprang t his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a slutin that we can all help accmplish (完成) .”
The ther children als jumped up all attentin. When Jhn had an idea, it was sure t be a gd ne. “I tell yu what we can d,” said Jhn. “Yu knw that big bx f crn Uncle Jhn sent us? Well, we can make ppcrn (爆米花), and put it int paper bags, and Bernard can take it arund t the huses and sell it.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When Mrs. Meredith heard f Jhn’s idea, she thught it was a gd ne, t.
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With everything ready, Bernard started ut n his new business.
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One pssible versin:
When Mrs. Meredith heard f the idea, she thught it was a gd ne, t. Then Mrs. Meredith searched the internet and rdered a husehld ppcrn machine. After that, Mrs. Meredith, tgether with her three children, paid anther visit t the family and tld them abut the ppcrn plan. Needless t say, they were deeply mved, especially Bernard wh finally fund a way t make mney fr his family. A few days later, the machine was delivered t Mrs. Meredith’s drstep. And it wasn’t lng befre they gt the hang f using the machine t make ppcrn.
With everything ready, Bernard started ut n his new business. Althugh it was a hard time and things were tight fr everybdy, Bernard’s business wrked ut quite well. He carried the ppcrn n his small bike, ging frm dr t dr t sell it. Peple were surprised t see such a little, prly-dressed by selling ppcrn at their drs, but eventually almst all f them wuld buy a bag r tw. It is lve that makes the wrld g rund and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart. (续写词数：164)
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