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专题12 书面表达满分预测16篇1．某英语报英语学习论坛栏目正在进行征文活动，请根据你的英语学习情况以及你的打算，以“My English study”为题写一篇短文进行投稿。要求：(1) 包含所给要点，可适当增加内容；(2) 不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息；(3) 书写规范、字迹清楚；(4) 不少于70词。My English study_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．通过几年的英语学习，你一定积累了许多学习英语的经验，请把你的学习经验和大家分享一下，谈谈你对英语学习的建议。内容提示： 1. 通过英文歌曲等学习英语2. 尽可能地多说，不要害怕犯错误3. 多读英文杂志和报纸4. 背诵一些好的文章可能用到的词汇：as…as possible 尽可能；recite 背诵； passage 文章，章节要求： 1.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。2.词数80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）How to Learn English WellEnglish is widely used in the world. It is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假如你是李华，上周末你和家人去了西安游玩。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇文章，记叙你在西安的经历。提示： 1.气候：早上和晚上比较冷，中午很热；2.饮食：吃了各种各样的面食，最喜欢吃肉夹馍（Rougamo）；3.景点：参观了兵马俑（the Terracotta Army），华清池（Huaqing Hot Spring）；4.自己的感受和体会。要求： 1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.文中不得出现任何真实信息；4.词数：不少于50词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。The best place that I have ever visited is Xi’an. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假如你校正在开展“中小学生用英语讲好中国故事”主题征文活动。你正准备给学校投稿，向外国游客介绍成都。请你根据以下思维图示写一篇短文。要求：1.词数：100词左右。2.根据行文需要，可适度增添细节。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．你所在的学校准备举办一次以“A City I’ve Ever Been to”为题的英文演讲比赛。 假设你想参加这次演讲比赛，请根据以下提示和要求准备一篇演讲搞。提示：1.你去过这个城市几次？2.你游览过这个城市的哪些景点？3.你对这个城市的印象如何？要求： 1.语句通顺，条例清晰；2.包含以上信息，可适当发挥；3.不少于70词。（标题、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）A City I’ve Ever Been toHi, boys and girls! Today I want to share some experience in ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanks for listening.6．请以“My Favourite Sport”为题，写一篇英语短文。要求涵盖以下要点：1.介绍你喜欢的体育运动项目，任何运动或体育锻炼项目皆可；2.喜欢这一项体育运动项目的理由；3.做此体育运动时要注意的事项。注意：1.词数：60左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．请根据以下提示写一篇短文，介绍一下有关你们学校开展体育活动的情况，以及你是如何进行体育锻炼的。词数80左右。 提示：1．同学们通常早上跑步，课间做眼保健操，课后打篮球或踢足球。 2．学校每年秋季举办一次运动会，去年运动会上你获得跳远第一名。3．介绍你最喜欢参加或观看的运动项目。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．假设不久前8名无锡青年骑车沿大运河(the Grand Canal) 开展了“慈善行” 活动。请以“A charity bicycle trip” 为题，根据以下内容提示为某中学生英文报写一篇报道。1. 目的：为希望工程筹款； 2. 时间：5月20日离开无锡，6月5日到达北京； 3. 简况：虽然车程漫长，路途艰辛，但是他们一路上精神高昂，在很多人的帮助下，他们筹得善款5万多元； 4. 其他：他们在活动后的感受。注意事项：1. 报道必须包括所给内容提示，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 2. 展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 3. 词数80左右，报道的开头已经给出，但不计入总词数。A charity bicycle tripNot long ago, eight young people from Wuxi made a charity bicycle trip along the Grand Canal. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．假设你是山东德州某学校八年级的学生，寒假你打算去大连旅游，那是个非常美丽的地方。不过，应该怎样去呢? 以A trip from Dezhou to Dalian为题写一篇短文，看看下面几种方式：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．“骑行”这一低碳环保的休闲运动受到越来越多人的青睐。“骑行”既是一种运动，又能保护环境，减少污染。请以“Enjoying Cycling”为题，写一篇80词左右的英文短文，介绍骑行的好处和注意事项。作文要求：1. 词数80个左右。作文的开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。Enjoying CyclingNowadays cycling is becoming more and more popular with young people._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11．你所在的英语读书俱乐部下周的活动是介绍一位自己喜欢的作家。假设美国著名作家马克·吐温(Mark Twain)是你最喜欢的作家，请你根据下面表格里的信息写一篇80词左右的英语短文，为下周的活动做准备。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________12．阅读使人明智，阅读使人充实。某英文报为了了解中学生课外阅读情况，向广大中学生做调查。请写一篇短文，介绍课外阅读的益处、你的课外阅读情况及你的阅读计划。提示：1.短文条理清楚，行文连贯；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。Reading Outside ClassAs we all know，reading has a lot of benefits. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13． 老舍是中国著名的作家。请根据下表提示写一篇短文，介绍一下他的情况。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________14．以“Saving Tigers”为题，写一篇80词左右的征文稿，内容要点如下：1. 老虎是人们在动物园里最喜欢的动物之一；2. 现在世界上仅存大约3, 200只老虎，数目正变得越来越少；3. 老虎现在处境危险；农民一直砍伐树木和森林，老虎没有地方可住；猎人因它们的皮毛而捕杀他们；4. 我们应该保护老虎，你的建议……（须用2至3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥）_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________15．假如你是李华，暑假你将到碧峰峡熊猫基地做一名志愿者，向外国游客介绍熊猫。请写一篇英语解说词，内容包括：1. 熊猫的外貌、食物等；2. 熊猫喜爱的活动（爬树、和同伴玩耍等）；3. 给游客的参观建议。注意：1. 词数80左右，内容可以适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实人名及学校名；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear friends, Welcome to Bifengxia Panda Base. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hope you will have a nice tour here.16．假如你是李华，请根据以下信息给你的美国笔友Jack写一封电子邮件，告诉他你接受了他的建议，也在生活中坚持自己的爱好，即每周训练篮球，并说一说这项运动带给你的好处。要点如下：1. 询问Jack最近是否参加了篮球比赛；2. 介绍你打篮球的情况：(1)时间：每周训练三次 (2)地点：学校篮球场 (3)状态：进步很大 3. 说一说篮球这项运动给你带来的好处。注意：1.词数80～100； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jack，Thank you for your advice, and basketball is really a good hobby for me. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours，Li Hua 专题12 书面表达满分预测16篇参考答案1．例文：My English studyHow time flies! My three-year junior high school life is coming to an end. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.When I entered the junior high school, I had so many difficulties with my English. For a time, I wanted to give up. But later, with the help of my English teacher and my classmates, I made great progress in English. I learned that practice makes perfect. I will put more time and energy into English study. First, in order to develop a good sense of language, I will do some reading as frequently as possible. Second, I will keep watching English movies. Third, I think keeping a diary in English is one of the effective ways to improve my English writing ability. This is my English study, and I hope my English will be better.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；②时态：一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时综合运用；③提示：根据题目要求，写作时需要从英语学习情况以及英语学习计划两方面着手。[写作步骤]第一步，首段点题。介绍文章主题，即英语学习；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分段介绍英语学习经历以及英语学习计划；第三步，书写结语。表达个人感悟。[亮点词汇]①come to an end结束②look back回顾③give up放弃④make great progress in在某方面取得巨大进步⑤practice makes perfect熟能生巧[高分句型]①When I entered the junior high school, I had so many difficulties with my English.（when引导的时间状语从句）②I think keeping a diary in English is one of the effective ways to improve my English writing ability.（one of the+最高级+名词复数）2．例文How to Learn English WellEnglish is widely used in the world. It is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.First, we can learn it by listening to English songs and watching English films. We can learn some new words. Second, we can speak it as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. We also can learn from these mistakes. Third, read more English magazines and newspapers. It can improve our reading skills. Last but not least, recite some good passages in English. We can use these good sentences to write compositions.I think these suggestions can help you.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍学习英语的方法。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段开头已给出；第二段结合自己的经验以及提示材料，介绍学习英语的方法；最后一段希望建议能有帮助。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。3．例文The best place that I have ever visited is Xi’an. I went to Xi’an with my parents last weekend. It was a little cold in the morning and evening, but it was much hotter at noon. We have had many kinds of noodles and I like Rougamo best. We also visited the Terracotta Amy and Huaqing Hot Spring. I knew some interesting stories about Tang Dynasty. Xi’an is really an ancient city with a long history and I plan to visit there again!【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。针对上周末和家人去西安游玩的经历进行写作，包括当地气候、饮食、景点和自己的感受体会，具体的内容要包含所给的提示。2. 写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。开头已给出，可以接着介绍当地气候、饮食、景点和自己的感受体会。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。4．例文：Chengdu is a beautiful city and enjoys the reputation of being a “Heaven Land of Plenty”. It’s the capital city of Sichuan Province in the southwest of China. It covers an area of 14,335 square kilometers with a population of around 20.93 million. It’s about 4,500 years old. Known as the home of pandas, Chengdu also has lots of interesting places like Jin-li Old Street and Du Fu’s Thatched Cottage. Chengdu is also called the world of food, and it’s especially famous for hot pot. The weather is fine in September, Tourists can come here at this time.Welcome to Chengdu. You will have a happy trip!【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求从地理位置、区域面积、历史、人口数量、天气、景点以及美食等方面介绍成都，以上要点缺一不可。2.写作指导：文章以一般现在时，第三人称为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时按要点分段叙述，首段开篇点题；第二段介绍成都的地理位置、区域面积、人口和历史等基本信息；第三段介绍成都的天气、美食和景点等信息；最后一段总结概括。5．例文A City I’ve Ever Been toHi, boys and girls! Today I want to share some experience in Hangzhou with you.I have ever been there three times. I fell in love this beautiful city when I first traveled there. There are many interesting places in the city, I once took a boat to watch the beautiful West Lake. I also had a look at the music fountain. But I liked the Hangzhou Amusement Park best. It is a theme park with many special activities. I spent an exciting and happy time there. I really like this city for its special beauty.Thanks for listening.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文写作；②时态：时态为“现在完成时”、“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，学生按照要点依次表达，不要遗漏了“提示”中的“去过这个城市几次”这个要点，重点介绍游览过的景点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇承接给出的开头，并直接点出城市名字；第二步，具体阐述写作内容，说明“去过这个城市的次数”，重点介绍游览过的景点，及对这个城市的印象；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①fall in love with爱上；②take a boat to乘船去；[高分句型]①I fell in love this beautiful city when I first traveled there.（when引导的时间状语从句）②It is a theme park with many special activities.（“with+宾语”作后置定语）6．My Favourite SportSports help everyone to keep healthy and happy. So I pay special attention to games, especially table tennis. Table tennis is my favourite game. I play it almost every day.Table tennis is an ideal game because it brings the whole body into action. It strengthens our muscles, expands our lungs, promotes the circulation of the blood, and causes a healthy action of the skin. Besides, it is very amusing and does not cost us much money. Table tennis is very moderate, and it is not so rough as football. It is an indoor game and can be played even on rainy days. Thus, it is my favourite kind of exercise.【详解】这篇作文要求我们以My favorite sport为题，写一篇文章，介绍自己最喜欢的体育运动。审题可知，这篇短文应包括以下几个内容：首先点明自己最喜欢的运动是什么，并对这个运动进行简单的介绍；其次说明自己喜欢这个运动的理由；最后介绍一下做这个运动时应注意的事项。题目中只给出了提纲，具体的内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力，结合自己的实际情况进行补充，并用正确的英语表达出来。文章应使用一般现在时，第三人称或第一人称来叙述。运动的话题是学生们比较熟悉的，平时的学习中探讨的关于这一话题的内容也比较多，因此学生们是有话可说的。注意表达的层次性，结构应清晰。其次需要注意英语句式的结构以及表达习惯和汉语有很大的不同，不能根据汉语思维，逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构出发，使用较常见的主谓宾或主系表结构，穿插并列句或复合句结构，并使用一些好的句型、短语，使文章表达流畅，意思连贯，提升作文档次和水平。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求介绍了自己喜欢的运动。文章有以下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有信息。作者以题目中列出的三点为提纲，将每一个内容进行了补充和拓展，叙述清楚，结构合理，内容充实、丰富。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时、第三人称为主来叙述，注意了谓语动词的正确形式，语法规范；语言得体，用词准确；句式结构完整，有简单句、并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等，长短句结合，文章有节奏的变化。最后短文中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如Sports help everyone to keep healthy and happy. So I pay special attention to games, especially table tennis.、Table tennis is an ideal game because it brings the whole body into action、Besides, it is very amusing and does not cost us much money、It is an indoor game and can be played even on rainy days.等等。7．My classmates like sports very much. We usually run in the early morning. We do eye exercises during the break. Sometimes we play basketball or football after class. Our school holds a sports meeting every autumn. I won the first prize in the long jump last year. My favourite sport is football. Sometimes I play football with my classmates after school. I often watch football matches on TV on Sundays. I think doing sports is good for our health. I will take more exercise to keep fit.【详解】这篇作文要求我们根据提示，介绍自己的学校是如何开展体育活动以及你自己是如何进行体育锻炼的。题目对写作的内容列出了要点，我们应根据这些要点，组织语言，写一篇完整的作文。首先应仔细审题，弄清楚文章的内容，对于第三个要点学生们应自己发挥想象力，用具体的句子表达出来；接下来应确定短文需使用的时态、人称，通过分析可知，这篇短文应以一般现在时态为主，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时，需要注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，而应从句子的整体结构考虑，先确定主干结构，然后加上修饰成分，并使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达。为提升文章档次，在短文中应使用几个较高级、复杂的句式，如各种复合句、感叹句等。语句之间应使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文章内容连贯，表达流畅。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求介绍了学校里体育活动的情况以及自己的体育锻炼。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中规定的所有内容，并对文章进行了补充和扩展，使其内容更加丰富、充实。作者首先介绍的是学校里开展体育活动的情况，占了一半的篇幅；接下来介绍了自己最喜欢的运动和对体育锻炼的观点。文章层次清晰，结构合理。其次短文中使用了正确的人称和时态。文章以第一人称、一般现在时态为主，动词形式准确，语法规范，句子结构完整，表达符合英语的习惯。文章中的句子以简单句为主，句式简洁、明了，表达准确、清晰。最后短文中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如We do eye exercises during the break.、 Sometimes we play basketball or football after class.、My favourite sport is football、I think doing sports is good for our health. 、I will take more exercise to keep fit.等等。8．例文A charity bicycle tripNot long ago, eight young people from Wuxi made a charity bicycle trip along the Grand Canal. The purpose of their trip was to raise money for Project Hope. They left Wuxi on May 20 and arrived in Beijing on June 5. Though the ride was long and tough, they went all the way in high spirits. With the help of many people, they raised more than 50,000 yuan.After the long trip, they were tired, but they were happy. They were proud of what they had done. It is an unusual experience that they will never forget.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。写作时注意一定要紧紧围绕“A charity bicycle trip”这一题目展开叙述。内容要包括慈善行的目的，慈善行的时间、地点，一路的情况及结果，最后阐述他们的活动感受，即题目要求的内容都要写到。内容要积极向上，条理要清晰。2.写作指导：本文写作人称应该使用第三人称复数。时态应用一般过去时。叙述中可适当应用含有宾语从句，状语从句等复合句，也可以运用it is adj./n.+that 从句等固定句型。文章第一段可介绍活动的目的、时间、地点、过程和结果，第二段可以参加者的感受作为总结。9．例文A trip from Dezhou to DalianI study in Grade Eight in a middle school in Dezhou. My family are planning to go to Dalian this winter holiday. Which way should we choose?First, we can go by train. It is the cheapest and the second fastest way, it’s relaxing. Second, the way by plane is the fastest and the second cheapest. It is the most comfortable way. Third, it’s a good way to go by car. It is more convenient to take your suitcase. However, it is the most expensive way and it takes us 10 hours to get to Dalian. Finally, we can go by ship. It is the slowest way, but we can enjoy the scenery of the sea during the trip.I’m really looking forward to the exciting trip!【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。本文可以分三段叙述，第一段叙述打算去大连旅游，应该怎样选择路线；第二段是重点，根据表格内容叙述具体路线；第三段表达渴望这次旅游，结尾。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时为主，用现在进行时描述正在打算去大连旅游和渴望这次旅行；叙述要完整，表格提示内容应包括在内，可适当补充。注意表达顺序，应使用表达顺序的词，保证条理清晰通顺、语法和标点使用正确。10．范文：Enjoy CyclingNowadays cycling is becoming more and more popular with young people. It’s a useful sport and it helps to keep us fit. It doesn’t cause air pollution. It can help us save energy. What’s more, cycling costs less. When we are cycling, we feel active and relaxed. It’s full of fun. However, sometimes we may cause traffic accidents if we are not careful enough. So we should keep safe on the road. We shouldn’t ride too fast. Remember to wear bicycle helmets when riding. It’s important for us to obey the traffic rules. Let’s get on bicycles and enjoy cycling!【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，在写作时应承接短文开头，根据图表中提示的内容，介绍骑行的好处以及骑行的注意事项，最后发出骑行的倡议。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一和第三人称来介绍内容，时态采用一般现在时和现在进行时。在介绍内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，保证提示内容完整，条理清晰，行文连贯。11．例文：Mark Twain was a great American writer. His real name was Samuel Langhorne Clemens. In 1835, he was born in a poor family in Missouri, America. At the age of 12, he left school and began to work. In 1863, he began to take the name Mark Twain. He wrote a lot of books. One of Mark Twain’s most famous books is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer. It describes people’s lives in a small American town. In 1910, Mark Twain died.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要是围绕“马克·吐温的生平”展开，表格已经给出文章细节，在写作时不要遗漏要点。2.写作指导：本文是一篇记叙文，主要讲述马克·吐温，在写作他的生平事迹时用一般过去时，在描述他的代表作时用一般现在时；人称用第三人称。在写作时，可根据时间顺序记叙，但是避免成为流水账，也要注意著作名要用斜体。12．Reading Outside ClassAs we all know，reading has a lot of benefit. It can open up our eyes because books are full of knowledge，and it makes us wiser and richer in life. I like reading newspapers and magazines，from which I get lots of fun and learn' about what's going on around the world. I also read story books and novels in my spare time which make me relaxed and happy. I seldom read e-books because they're bad for eyes. On weekends，I usually spend a whole afternoon reading in the library. And I also read for about half an hour before going to bed every night.Winter vacation is coming. I plan to do more reading. I am going to read more classics and more English books to improve my language skills. I'm sure reading can make a difference to my life.【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍自己课外阅读的益处、课外阅读情况及阅读计划。结合所给材料可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称以第一人称为主。写作前要列出这三个方面的提纲，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：It can…；I like…；I usually spend…； I plan to…及I am going to…等句式的应用。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。高分句型（一）I also read story books and novels in my spare time which make me relaxed and happy. 我也在业余时间读故事书和小说，这使我放松和快乐。此句是which引导的限制性定语从句。高分句型（二）I usually spend a whole afternoon reading in the library. 我通常花费整个下午在图书馆读书。spend some time doing sth.花费时间做某事。高分句型（三）I am going to read more classics and more English books 为了提高我的语言能力，我打算读更多的经典著作和英语书。动词不定式to improve my language skills作目的状语。【点睛】写作思路：仔细审题，明确要求。审读所给信息，弄清楚所要表达的内容要点，然后对所给的信息进行梳理，使文章行文连贯。2.列全要点，即提纲要点化，然后写作成文。此时我们就必须在大脑中将各种信息点补充完整，适时使用高级词汇和复杂句式。要根据提示将写作要点表达清楚，使文章的内容完整、饱满、要点齐全，注意适当增加细节。同时注意句子与句子之间，段落与段落之间要有合理的过渡衔接。3.检查核实，确保无误。本题要求介绍课外阅读的益处、你的课外阅读情况及你的阅读计划。写作前要就这三个方面列出简单的提纲，紧紧围绕这三个方面去完成写作，短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名。13．Lao She is a famous Chinese writer and his real name is Shu Qingchun. He was born in 1899 in Beijing. He learned in the Teachers' School in Beijing in 1913.In 1924 he went to London and taught Chinese there. He married in 1931 and had four children. He wrote Teahouse in 1957.He died in 1966 at the age of 67.【详解】本题是一篇材料作文。根据表格提供的材料写一篇关于老舍的短文。本文人称主要是第三人称，时态主要是一般过去时。认为阅读材料，认真审题，主要按照时间的先后顺序来写，提示要点就是本文的提纲要点，根据要点列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容，条理清楚。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：老舍是中国著名作家，名叫舒庆春，1899年生于北京，1913年在北京师范学校学习，1924年到伦敦，在那里教汉语，1931年结婚，育有四个孩子，1957年写《茶馆》，他1966年去世，死时67岁。【点睛】书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。14．例文：Saving TigersHave you seen tigers in the zoos? I think a tiger is one of the most favorite animals in the zoo. But now there are about 3, 200 tigers in the world, and the amount of them is reducing. What caused them to reduce? Because many forests are cut down and they have no place to live in. In order to protect them, we must build many natural reserves. And we must stop people from hunting.【详解】[总体分析]①题型：本文是一篇议论文；②时态：用一般现在时；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，呼吁大家保护老虎。写本文时注意人称的变化，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词使上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。[写作步骤]第一步，表达老虎在当今世界生存的状况。第二步，分析老虎数量减少的原因。第三步，提出合理建议并呼吁行动起来保护老虎。[亮点词汇]①cut down砍伐②the amount of……的数量③natural reserves自然保护区④stop sb from doing阻止某人做某事[高分句型]①I think a tiger is one of the most favorite animals in the zoo.（使用最高级句型）②There are about 3, 200 tigers in the world（使用there be的句型）15．Dear friends,Welcome to Bifengxia Panda Base. I’m your guide Li Hua. Look, these pandas are so cute. They are black and white with two big eyes. They like eating bamboo best, but they also eat something else, such as apples and carrots. In their daily life, they like climbing trees in the park and playing games with their friends. But I hope you will not be so noisy when you watch them. And please don’t feed them with anything you bring. Because it’s dangerous for the pandas. Hope you will have a nice tour here.【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于材料写作，根据所给提示写一篇解说词。在写作时应承接短文开头；第二段介绍熊猫的外貌、食物以及喜好；第三段提出游客的参观建议，最后表达期待大家的到来并有一个很好的旅游体验。2. 写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述内容（大熊猫）；时态采用一般现在时为主，用一般将来时提出建议；要将材料所给提示充分利用，提建议的时候注意措辞不要太生硬，采用多样的句型结构，保证条理清晰。16．例文Dear Jack，Thank you for your advice, and basketball is really a good hobby for me. As you know, my favourite sport is ball games, especially basketball. So I play basketball three times a week. I often play it on our playground. But sometimes I have too much homework to do, so I can't play it. With the help of the teacher, I have made great progress. And I wonder if you took part in basketball match. I think doing sports is good for both my health and study. Sports make me stronger. I hope you can also play basketball every day. I am looking forward to your email.Best wishes!Yours，Li Hua【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作——邮件，在写作时应注意要包括提示的内容：询问Jack最近是否参加了篮球比赛；介绍你打篮球的情况；说一说篮球这项运动给你带来的好处。2.写作指导：例文采用一段式；用第一人称叙述内容；时态采用一般过去时、一般现在时、现在完成时和现在进行时。叙述清晰，行文连贯。 From—toWaysFareTimeComfortableOthersDezhou—DalianBy train￥420 The cheapest7 hours★★RelaxingBy plane￥500The second cheapest3 hours The fastest★★★—By car￥1000 The most expensive10 hours★★More convenient to take your suitcaseBy ship—The slowest★Enjoy the scenery of the seaMark Twain真实姓名Samuel Langhorne Clemens1835年出生于美国密苏里州(Missouri)的一个贫苦家庭12岁时离开学校并开始工作1863年开始用Mark Twain这个名字1910年逝世代表作之一《汤姆·索亚历险记》(The Adventures of Tom Sawyer)，描述了美国小镇人民的生活Real nameShu Qingchun1899Be born in Beijing1913Learn in the Teachers' School in Beijing1924Go to London，teach Chinese1931Marry，have four children1957Write Teahouse1966die
专题12 书面表达满分预测16篇1．某英语报英语学习论坛栏目正在进行征文活动，请根据你的英语学习情况以及你的打算，以“My English study”为题写一篇短文进行投稿。要求：(1) 包含所给要点，可适当增加内容；(2) 不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息；(3) 书写规范、字迹清楚；(4) 不少于70词。My English study_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．通过几年的英语学习，你一定积累了许多学习英语的经验，请把你的学习经验和大家分享一下，谈谈你对英语学习的建议。内容提示： 1. 通过英文歌曲等学习英语2. 尽可能地多说，不要害怕犯错误3. 多读英文杂志和报纸4. 背诵一些好的文章可能用到的词汇：as…as possible 尽可能；recite 背诵； passage 文章，章节要求： 1.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。2.词数80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）How to Learn English WellEnglish is widely used in the world. It is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假如你是李华，上周末你和家人去了西安游玩。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇文章，记叙你在西安的经历。提示： 1.气候：早上和晚上比较冷，中午很热；2.饮食：吃了各种各样的面食，最喜欢吃肉夹馍（Rougamo）；3.景点：参观了兵马俑（the Terracotta Army），华清池（Huaqing Hot Spring）；4.自己的感受和体会。要求： 1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.文中不得出现任何真实信息；4.词数：不少于50词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。The best place that I have ever visited is Xi’an. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假如你校正在开展“中小学生用英语讲好中国故事”主题征文活动。你正准备给学校投稿，向外国游客介绍成都。请你根据以下思维图示写一篇短文。要求：1.词数：100词左右。2.根据行文需要，可适度增添细节。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．你所在的学校准备举办一次以“A City I’ve Ever Been to”为题的英文演讲比赛。 假设你想参加这次演讲比赛，请根据以下提示和要求准备一篇演讲搞。提示：1.你去过这个城市几次？2.你游览过这个城市的哪些景点？3.你对这个城市的印象如何？要求： 1.语句通顺，条例清晰；2.包含以上信息，可适当发挥；3.不少于70词。（标题、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）A City I’ve Ever Been toHi, boys and girls! Today I want to share some experience in ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanks for listening.6．请以“My Favourite Sport”为题，写一篇英语短文。要求涵盖以下要点：1.介绍你喜欢的体育运动项目，任何运动或体育锻炼项目皆可；2.喜欢这一项体育运动项目的理由；3.做此体育运动时要注意的事项。注意：1.词数：60左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．请根据以下提示写一篇短文，介绍一下有关你们学校开展体育活动的情况，以及你是如何进行体育锻炼的。词数80左右。 提示：1．同学们通常早上跑步，课间做眼保健操，课后打篮球或踢足球。 2．学校每年秋季举办一次运动会，去年运动会上你获得跳远第一名。3．介绍你最喜欢参加或观看的运动项目。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．假设不久前8名无锡青年骑车沿大运河(the Grand Canal) 开展了“慈善行” 活动。请以“A charity bicycle trip” 为题，根据以下内容提示为某中学生英文报写一篇报道。1. 目的：为希望工程筹款； 2. 时间：5月20日离开无锡，6月5日到达北京； 3. 简况：虽然车程漫长，路途艰辛，但是他们一路上精神高昂，在很多人的帮助下，他们筹得善款5万多元； 4. 其他：他们在活动后的感受。注意事项：1. 报道必须包括所给内容提示，要求语句通顺，意思连贯； 2. 展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 3. 词数80左右，报道的开头已经给出，但不计入总词数。A charity bicycle tripNot long ago, eight young people from Wuxi made a charity bicycle trip along the Grand Canal. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．假设你是山东德州某学校八年级的学生，寒假你打算去大连旅游，那是个非常美丽的地方。不过，应该怎样去呢? 以A trip from Dezhou to Dalian为题写一篇短文，看看下面几种方式：____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．“骑行”这一低碳环保的休闲运动受到越来越多人的青睐。“骑行”既是一种运动，又能保护环境，减少污染。请以“Enjoying Cycling”为题，写一篇80词左右的英文短文，介绍骑行的好处和注意事项。作文要求：1. 词数80个左右。作文的开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。Enjoying CyclingNowadays cycling is becoming more and more popular with young people._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11．你所在的英语读书俱乐部下周的活动是介绍一位自己喜欢的作家。假设美国著名作家马克·吐温(Mark Twain)是你最喜欢的作家，请你根据下面表格里的信息写一篇80词左右的英语短文，为下周的活动做准备。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________12．阅读使人明智，阅读使人充实。某英文报为了了解中学生课外阅读情况，向广大中学生做调查。请写一篇短文，介绍课外阅读的益处、你的课外阅读情况及你的阅读计划。提示：1.短文条理清楚，行文连贯；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。Reading Outside ClassAs we all know，reading has a lot of benefits. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13． 老舍是中国著名的作家。请根据下表提示写一篇短文，介绍一下他的情况。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________14．以“Saving Tigers”为题，写一篇80词左右的征文稿，内容要点如下：1. 老虎是人们在动物园里最喜欢的动物之一；2. 现在世界上仅存大约3, 200只老虎，数目正变得越来越少；3. 老虎现在处境危险；农民一直砍伐树木和森林，老虎没有地方可住；猎人因它们的皮毛而捕杀他们；4. 我们应该保护老虎，你的建议……（须用2至3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥）_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________15．假如你是李华，暑假你将到碧峰峡熊猫基地做一名志愿者，向外国游客介绍熊猫。请写一篇英语解说词，内容包括：1. 熊猫的外貌、食物等；2. 熊猫喜爱的活动（爬树、和同伴玩耍等）；3. 给游客的参观建议。注意：1. 词数80左右，内容可以适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实人名及学校名；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear friends, Welcome to Bifengxia Panda Base. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hope you will have a nice tour here.16．假如你是李华，请根据以下信息给你的美国笔友Jack写一封电子邮件，告诉他你接受了他的建议，也在生活中坚持自己的爱好，即每周训练篮球，并说一说这项运动带给你的好处。要点如下：1. 询问Jack最近是否参加了篮球比赛；2. 介绍你打篮球的情况：(1)时间：每周训练三次 (2)地点：学校篮球场 (3)状态：进步很大 3. 说一说篮球这项运动给你带来的好处。注意：1.词数80～100； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jack，Thank you for your advice, and basketball is really a good hobby for me. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!Yours，Li Hua 专题12 书面表达满分预测16篇参考答案1．例文：My English studyHow time flies! My three-year junior high school life is coming to an end. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.When I entered the junior high school, I had so many difficulties with my English. For a time, I wanted to give up. But later, with the help of my English teacher and my classmates, I made great progress in English. I learned that practice makes perfect. I will put more time and energy into English study. First, in order to develop a good sense of language, I will do some reading as frequently as possible. Second, I will keep watching English movies. Third, I think keeping a diary in English is one of the effective ways to improve my English writing ability. This is my English study, and I hope my English will be better.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；②时态：一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时综合运用；③提示：根据题目要求，写作时需要从英语学习情况以及英语学习计划两方面着手。[写作步骤]第一步，首段点题。介绍文章主题，即英语学习；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分段介绍英语学习经历以及英语学习计划；第三步，书写结语。表达个人感悟。[亮点词汇]①come to an end结束②look back回顾③give up放弃④make great progress in在某方面取得巨大进步⑤practice makes perfect熟能生巧[高分句型]①When I entered the junior high school, I had so many difficulties with my English.（when引导的时间状语从句）②I think keeping a diary in English is one of the effective ways to improve my English writing ability.（one of the+最高级+名词复数）2．例文How to Learn English WellEnglish is widely used in the world. It is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.First, we can learn it by listening to English songs and watching English films. We can learn some new words. Second, we can speak it as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. We also can learn from these mistakes. Third, read more English magazines and newspapers. It can improve our reading skills. Last but not least, recite some good passages in English. We can use these good sentences to write compositions.I think these suggestions can help you.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍学习英语的方法。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段开头已给出；第二段结合自己的经验以及提示材料，介绍学习英语的方法；最后一段希望建议能有帮助。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。3．例文The best place that I have ever visited is Xi’an. I went to Xi’an with my parents last weekend. It was a little cold in the morning and evening, but it was much hotter at noon. We have had many kinds of noodles and I like Rougamo best. We also visited the Terracotta Amy and Huaqing Hot Spring. I knew some interesting stories about Tang Dynasty. Xi’an is really an ancient city with a long history and I plan to visit there again!【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。针对上周末和家人去西安游玩的经历进行写作，包括当地气候、饮食、景点和自己的感受体会，具体的内容要包含所给的提示。2. 写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。开头已给出，可以接着介绍当地气候、饮食、景点和自己的感受体会。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。4．例文：Chengdu is a beautiful city and enjoys the reputation of being a “Heaven Land of Plenty”. It’s the capital city of Sichuan Province in the southwest of China. It covers an area of 14,335 square kilometers with a population of around 20.93 million. It’s about 4,500 years old. Known as the home of pandas, Chengdu also has lots of interesting places like Jin-li Old Street and Du Fu’s Thatched Cottage. Chengdu is also called the world of food, and it’s especially famous for hot pot. The weather is fine in September, Tourists can come here at this time.Welcome to Chengdu. You will have a happy trip!【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求从地理位置、区域面积、历史、人口数量、天气、景点以及美食等方面介绍成都，以上要点缺一不可。2.写作指导：文章以一般现在时，第三人称为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时按要点分段叙述，首段开篇点题；第二段介绍成都的地理位置、区域面积、人口和历史等基本信息；第三段介绍成都的天气、美食和景点等信息；最后一段总结概括。5．例文A City I’ve Ever Been toHi, boys and girls! Today I want to share some experience in Hangzhou with you.I have ever been there three times. I fell in love this beautiful city when I first traveled there. There are many interesting places in the city, I once took a boat to watch the beautiful West Lake. I also had a look at the music fountain. But I liked the Hangzhou Amusement Park best. It is a theme park with many special activities. I spent an exciting and happy time there. I really like this city for its special beauty.Thanks for listening.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文写作；②时态：时态为“现在完成时”、“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，学生按照要点依次表达，不要遗漏了“提示”中的“去过这个城市几次”这个要点，重点介绍游览过的景点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇承接给出的开头，并直接点出城市名字；第二步，具体阐述写作内容，说明“去过这个城市的次数”，重点介绍游览过的景点，及对这个城市的印象；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①fall in love with爱上；②take a boat to乘船去；[高分句型]①I fell in love this beautiful city when I first traveled there.（when引导的时间状语从句）②It is a theme park with many special activities.（“with+宾语”作后置定语）6．My Favourite SportSports help everyone to keep healthy and happy. So I pay special attention to games, especially table tennis. Table tennis is my favourite game. I play it almost every day.Table tennis is an ideal game because it brings the whole body into action. It strengthens our muscles, expands our lungs, promotes the circulation of the blood, and causes a healthy action of the skin. Besides, it is very amusing and does not cost us much money. Table tennis is very moderate, and it is not so rough as football. It is an indoor game and can be played even on rainy days. Thus, it is my favourite kind of exercise.【详解】这篇作文要求我们以My favorite sport为题，写一篇文章，介绍自己最喜欢的体育运动。审题可知，这篇短文应包括以下几个内容：首先点明自己最喜欢的运动是什么，并对这个运动进行简单的介绍；其次说明自己喜欢这个运动的理由；最后介绍一下做这个运动时应注意的事项。题目中只给出了提纲，具体的内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力，结合自己的实际情况进行补充，并用正确的英语表达出来。文章应使用一般现在时，第三人称或第一人称来叙述。运动的话题是学生们比较熟悉的，平时的学习中探讨的关于这一话题的内容也比较多，因此学生们是有话可说的。注意表达的层次性，结构应清晰。其次需要注意英语句式的结构以及表达习惯和汉语有很大的不同，不能根据汉语思维，逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构出发，使用较常见的主谓宾或主系表结构，穿插并列句或复合句结构，并使用一些好的句型、短语，使文章表达流畅，意思连贯，提升作文档次和水平。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求介绍了自己喜欢的运动。文章有以下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有信息。作者以题目中列出的三点为提纲，将每一个内容进行了补充和拓展，叙述清楚，结构合理，内容充实、丰富。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时、第三人称为主来叙述，注意了谓语动词的正确形式，语法规范；语言得体，用词准确；句式结构完整，有简单句、并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等，长短句结合，文章有节奏的变化。最后短文中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如Sports help everyone to keep healthy and happy. So I pay special attention to games, especially table tennis.、Table tennis is an ideal game because it brings the whole body into action、Besides, it is very amusing and does not cost us much money、It is an indoor game and can be played even on rainy days.等等。7．My classmates like sports very much. We usually run in the early morning. We do eye exercises during the break. Sometimes we play basketball or football after class. Our school holds a sports meeting every autumn. I won the first prize in the long jump last year. My favourite sport is football. Sometimes I play football with my classmates after school. I often watch football matches on TV on Sundays. I think doing sports is good for our health. I will take more exercise to keep fit.【详解】这篇作文要求我们根据提示，介绍自己的学校是如何开展体育活动以及你自己是如何进行体育锻炼的。题目对写作的内容列出了要点，我们应根据这些要点，组织语言，写一篇完整的作文。首先应仔细审题，弄清楚文章的内容，对于第三个要点学生们应自己发挥想象力，用具体的句子表达出来；接下来应确定短文需使用的时态、人称，通过分析可知，这篇短文应以一般现在时态为主，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时，需要注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，而应从句子的整体结构考虑，先确定主干结构，然后加上修饰成分，并使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达。为提升文章档次，在短文中应使用几个较高级、复杂的句式，如各种复合句、感叹句等。语句之间应使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文章内容连贯，表达流畅。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求介绍了学校里体育活动的情况以及自己的体育锻炼。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中规定的所有内容，并对文章进行了补充和扩展，使其内容更加丰富、充实。作者首先介绍的是学校里开展体育活动的情况，占了一半的篇幅；接下来介绍了自己最喜欢的运动和对体育锻炼的观点。文章层次清晰，结构合理。其次短文中使用了正确的人称和时态。文章以第一人称、一般现在时态为主，动词形式准确，语法规范，句子结构完整，表达符合英语的习惯。文章中的句子以简单句为主，句式简洁、明了，表达准确、清晰。最后短文中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如We do eye exercises during the break.、 Sometimes we play basketball or football after class.、My favourite sport is football、I think doing sports is good for our health. 、I will take more exercise to keep fit.等等。8．例文A charity bicycle tripNot long ago, eight young people from Wuxi made a charity bicycle trip along the Grand Canal. The purpose of their trip was to raise money for Project Hope. They left Wuxi on May 20 and arrived in Beijing on June 5. Though the ride was long and tough, they went all the way in high spirits. With the help of many people, they raised more than 50,000 yuan.After the long trip, they were tired, but they were happy. They were proud of what they had done. It is an unusual experience that they will never forget.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。写作时注意一定要紧紧围绕“A charity bicycle trip”这一题目展开叙述。内容要包括慈善行的目的，慈善行的时间、地点，一路的情况及结果，最后阐述他们的活动感受，即题目要求的内容都要写到。内容要积极向上，条理要清晰。2.写作指导：本文写作人称应该使用第三人称复数。时态应用一般过去时。叙述中可适当应用含有宾语从句，状语从句等复合句，也可以运用it is adj./n.+that 从句等固定句型。文章第一段可介绍活动的目的、时间、地点、过程和结果，第二段可以参加者的感受作为总结。9．例文A trip from Dezhou to DalianI study in Grade Eight in a middle school in Dezhou. My family are planning to go to Dalian this winter holiday. Which way should we choose?First, we can go by train. It is the cheapest and the second fastest way, it’s relaxing. Second, the way by plane is the fastest and the second cheapest. It is the most comfortable way. Third, it’s a good way to go by car. It is more convenient to take your suitcase. However, it is the most expensive way and it takes us 10 hours to get to Dalian. Finally, we can go by ship. It is the slowest way, but we can enjoy the scenery of the sea during the trip.I’m really looking forward to the exciting trip!【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。本文可以分三段叙述，第一段叙述打算去大连旅游，应该怎样选择路线；第二段是重点，根据表格内容叙述具体路线；第三段表达渴望这次旅游，结尾。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时为主，用现在进行时描述正在打算去大连旅游和渴望这次旅行；叙述要完整，表格提示内容应包括在内，可适当补充。注意表达顺序，应使用表达顺序的词，保证条理清晰通顺、语法和标点使用正确。10．范文：Enjoy CyclingNowadays cycling is becoming more and more popular with young people. It’s a useful sport and it helps to keep us fit. It doesn’t cause air pollution. It can help us save energy. What’s more, cycling costs less. When we are cycling, we feel active and relaxed. It’s full of fun. However, sometimes we may cause traffic accidents if we are not careful enough. So we should keep safe on the road. We shouldn’t ride too fast. Remember to wear bicycle helmets when riding. It’s important for us to obey the traffic rules. Let’s get on bicycles and enjoy cycling!【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，在写作时应承接短文开头，根据图表中提示的内容，介绍骑行的好处以及骑行的注意事项，最后发出骑行的倡议。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一和第三人称来介绍内容，时态采用一般现在时和现在进行时。在介绍内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，保证提示内容完整，条理清晰，行文连贯。11．例文：Mark Twain was a great American writer. His real name was Samuel Langhorne Clemens. In 1835, he was born in a poor family in Missouri, America. At the age of 12, he left school and began to work. In 1863, he began to take the name Mark Twain. He wrote a lot of books. One of Mark Twain’s most famous books is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer. It describes people’s lives in a small American town. In 1910, Mark Twain died.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要是围绕“马克·吐温的生平”展开，表格已经给出文章细节，在写作时不要遗漏要点。2.写作指导：本文是一篇记叙文，主要讲述马克·吐温，在写作他的生平事迹时用一般过去时，在描述他的代表作时用一般现在时；人称用第三人称。在写作时，可根据时间顺序记叙，但是避免成为流水账，也要注意著作名要用斜体。12．Reading Outside ClassAs we all know，reading has a lot of benefit. It can open up our eyes because books are full of knowledge，and it makes us wiser and richer in life. I like reading newspapers and magazines，from which I get lots of fun and learn' about what's going on around the world. I also read story books and novels in my spare time which make me relaxed and happy. I seldom read e-books because they're bad for eyes. On weekends，I usually spend a whole afternoon reading in the library. And I also read for about half an hour before going to bed every night.Winter vacation is coming. I plan to do more reading. I am going to read more classics and more English books to improve my language skills. I'm sure reading can make a difference to my life.【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍自己课外阅读的益处、课外阅读情况及阅读计划。结合所给材料可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称以第一人称为主。写作前要列出这三个方面的提纲，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：It can…；I like…；I usually spend…； I plan to…及I am going to…等句式的应用。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。高分句型（一）I also read story books and novels in my spare time which make me relaxed and happy. 我也在业余时间读故事书和小说，这使我放松和快乐。此句是which引导的限制性定语从句。高分句型（二）I usually spend a whole afternoon reading in the library. 我通常花费整个下午在图书馆读书。spend some time doing sth.花费时间做某事。高分句型（三）I am going to read more classics and more English books 为了提高我的语言能力，我打算读更多的经典著作和英语书。动词不定式to improve my language skills作目的状语。【点睛】写作思路：仔细审题，明确要求。审读所给信息，弄清楚所要表达的内容要点，然后对所给的信息进行梳理，使文章行文连贯。2.列全要点，即提纲要点化，然后写作成文。此时我们就必须在大脑中将各种信息点补充完整，适时使用高级词汇和复杂句式。要根据提示将写作要点表达清楚，使文章的内容完整、饱满、要点齐全，注意适当增加细节。同时注意句子与句子之间，段落与段落之间要有合理的过渡衔接。3.检查核实，确保无误。本题要求介绍课外阅读的益处、你的课外阅读情况及你的阅读计划。写作前要就这三个方面列出简单的提纲，紧紧围绕这三个方面去完成写作，短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名。13．Lao She is a famous Chinese writer and his real name is Shu Qingchun. He was born in 1899 in Beijing. He learned in the Teachers' School in Beijing in 1913.In 1924 he went to London and taught Chinese there. He married in 1931 and had four children. He wrote Teahouse in 1957.He died in 1966 at the age of 67.【详解】本题是一篇材料作文。根据表格提供的材料写一篇关于老舍的短文。本文人称主要是第三人称，时态主要是一般过去时。认为阅读材料，认真审题，主要按照时间的先后顺序来写，提示要点就是本文的提纲要点，根据要点列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容，条理清楚。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：老舍是中国著名作家，名叫舒庆春，1899年生于北京，1913年在北京师范学校学习，1924年到伦敦，在那里教汉语，1931年结婚，育有四个孩子，1957年写《茶馆》，他1966年去世，死时67岁。【点睛】书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。14．例文：Saving TigersHave you seen tigers in the zoos? I think a tiger is one of the most favorite animals in the zoo. But now there are about 3, 200 tigers in the world, and the amount of them is reducing. What caused them to reduce? Because many forests are cut down and they have no place to live in. In order to protect them, we must build many natural reserves. And we must stop people from hunting.【详解】[总体分析]①题型：本文是一篇议论文；②时态：用一般现在时；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，呼吁大家保护老虎。写本文时注意人称的变化，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词使上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。[写作步骤]第一步，表达老虎在当今世界生存的状况。第二步，分析老虎数量减少的原因。第三步，提出合理建议并呼吁行动起来保护老虎。[亮点词汇]①cut down砍伐②the amount of……的数量③natural reserves自然保护区④stop sb from doing阻止某人做某事[高分句型]①I think a tiger is one of the most favorite animals in the zoo.（使用最高级句型）②There are about 3, 200 tigers in the world（使用there be的句型）15．Dear friends,Welcome to Bifengxia Panda Base. I’m your guide Li Hua. Look, these pandas are so cute. They are black and white with two big eyes. They like eating bamboo best, but they also eat something else, such as apples and carrots. In their daily life, they like climbing trees in the park and playing games with their friends. But I hope you will not be so noisy when you watch them. And please don’t feed them with anything you bring. Because it’s dangerous for the pandas. Hope you will have a nice tour here.【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于材料写作，根据所给提示写一篇解说词。在写作时应承接短文开头；第二段介绍熊猫的外貌、食物以及喜好；第三段提出游客的参观建议，最后表达期待大家的到来并有一个很好的旅游体验。2. 写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述内容（大熊猫）；时态采用一般现在时为主，用一般将来时提出建议；要将材料所给提示充分利用，提建议的时候注意措辞不要太生硬，采用多样的句型结构，保证条理清晰。16．例文Dear Jack，Thank you for your advice, and basketball is really a good hobby for me. As you know, my favourite sport is ball games, especially basketball. So I play basketball three times a week. I often play it on our playground. But sometimes I have too much homework to do, so I can't play it. With the help of the teacher, I have made great progress. And I wonder if you took part in basketball match. I think doing sports is good for both my health and study. Sports make me stronger. I hope you can also play basketball every day. I am looking forward to your email.Best wishes!Yours，Li Hua【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作——邮件，在写作时应注意要包括提示的内容：询问Jack最近是否参加了篮球比赛；介绍你打篮球的情况；说一说篮球这项运动给你带来的好处。2.写作指导：例文采用一段式；用第一人称叙述内容；时态采用一般过去时、一般现在时、现在完成时和现在进行时。叙述清晰，行文连贯。 From—toWaysFareTimeComfortableOthersDezhou—DalianBy train￥420 The cheapest7 hours★★RelaxingBy plane￥500The second cheapest3 hours The fastest★★★—By car￥1000 The most expensive10 hours★★More convenient to take your suitcaseBy ship—The slowest★Enjoy the scenery of the seaMark Twain真实姓名Samuel Langhorne Clemens1835年出生于美国密苏里州(Missouri)的一个贫苦家庭12岁时离开学校并开始工作1863年开始用Mark Twain这个名字1910年逝世代表作之一《汤姆·索亚历险记》(The Adventures of Tom Sawyer)，描述了美国小镇人民的生活Real nameShu Qingchun1899Be born in Beijing1913Learn in the Teachers' School in Beijing1924Go to London，teach Chinese1931Marry，have four children1957Write Teahouse1966die
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