2023年湖南省永州市东安县中考三模英语试题（含解析）

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2023年湖南省永州市东安县中考三模英语试题
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________

一、单项选择
1．_______girl riding a bike is ________university student.
A．A, an B．The, an
C．A, the D．The, a
2．—Is this your photo?  
—No, it isn’t ________.
A．my B．mine C．hers D．yours
3．—Can I help you?
—I’d like ____________ for my twin daughters.
A．two pair of shoes B．two pairs of shoe
C．two pair of shoe D．two pairs of shoes
4．He didn’t go to the party last night _______ his illness.
A．because B．because of C．so D．if
5．—What did you get ________ your mother ________ Mother’s Day?
—A nice scarf.
A．for, in B．for, on C．to, for D．to, at
6．The Internet is very useful for us. We can ________ find information.
A．easy B．easily C．hard D．hardly
7．When Mary came to see me yesterday, I ________ the music.
A．am listening to B．listened to C．was listening to D．was listening
8．A new modern school _______ in our village last year.
A．was built B．is built C．built D．will built
9．—How are you feeling now, children?  
—The more we get together, ________we’ll be.
A．happy B．happier C．the happier D．the happiest
10．I like living in the house ________ is big and bright.
A．that B．who C．how D．where
11．We _____ here two hours ago. We_____ here for two hours.
A．have arrived, have been B．have come, have been
C．came, have come D．arrived, have been
12．We don’t believe that this ________boy can paint such a nice picture.
A．five-year-old B．five year old C．five years old D．five-years-old
13．I don’t know ________. Could you help me?
A．where is his new address B．where is his new home
C．where his new address is D．where his new home is
14．— Look! Mr. Hu is on the other side of the street.
— It ________ be him. He has gone to Lanzhou.
A．mustn’t B．can’t C．shouldn’t D．won’t
15．Tom often makes his brother ________ but yesterday he was made ________ by his brother.
A．cry; to cry B．to cry; cry C．cry; cry D．to cry; to cry

二、完形填空
Last Tuesday I took my two daughters, aged five and seven, to town by car. It began to rain 16 so I decided I would leave the children in the car before I went quickly into a shop. I 17 the girls not to touch anything and told them I would be 18 within a few minutes. Then I locked all the doors and left 19 happily looking out of the window.
  I returned to the car in less than five minutes but the girls had disappeared! I could hardly believe my 20 . The car doors were 21 locked, the windows were shut and on the back seat 22 only two coats. Being 23 , I ran to the corner of the street 24 there was no 25 of them. I rushed up to an old lady nearby and asked 26 she had seen two small girls but she said “No”. Feeling quick sick with fear, I sat on the driver’s seat, and 27 to stop trembling（颤抖）. Suddenly, I 28 a merry(愉快的) laugh behind me. I got out of the car, ran round to open the boot (车尾行李箱) and there inside were two very red-faced and excited 29 . They had obviously（明显地） pulled out the back seat, 30 behind it and then been unable to push the seat forward again. With tears in my eyes, I leaned forward and pulled their ears.
16．A．heavy B．hard C．hardly D．big
17．A．let B．warned C．allowed D．repeated
18．A．away B．out C．back D．alone
19．A．them B．her C．themselves D．herself
20．A．ears B．words C．eyes D．brains
21．A．too B．again C．already D．still
22．A．there B．sat C．seen D．were
23．A．excited B．proud C．frightened D．pleased
24．A．where B．which C．that D．when
25．A．warning B．sign C．body D．face
26．A．that B．when C．whether D．how
27．A．tried B．made C．tried not D．set
28．A．felt B．smelt C．saw D．heard
29．A．sons B．boys C．women D．children
30．A．climbed B．flew C．threw D．landed


三、阅读单选
Sleeping Problem
   How much sleep do we need? We are all different. Some people need only three hours of sleep a night. Others need ten hours of sleep a night. Most Americans sleep an average（平均值）of seven to eight hours a night. After the age of fifty, the average sleep time goes down to 6.5 hours a night.
Most people have a night off when they cannot sleep. About one in three Americans has a problem with sleep. Many of these people cannot fall sleep. This problem is called insomnia.
    This is not a new problem. Many famous people in history have insomnia. Some of these people had special ideas to make them sleep. Benjamin Franklin, the famous statement（政治家）and inventor, had four beds. The King Louis XIV of France had 413 beds and hoped he could fall asleep in one of them. Mark Twain, the famous American writer, had a different way. He lay on his side across the end of the bed!
31．Most American people need ________ hours of sleep a night.
A．3 B．10 C．7-8 D．5-6
32．People need ________ sleep as they got older.
A．more B．less C．no D．little
33．The name of this problem is insomnia. Here insomnia means ________.
A．going to sleep easily B．sleeping at daytime
C．the ways of sleep D．not being able to go to sleep
34．Mark Twain lay on his side across the end of the bed because he ________.
A．was an old man B．thought it was easy to go to sleep
C．was a famous writer D．didn’t have much room to sleep in
35．The passage is mainly talking about ________.
A．sleep B．insomnia C．how to get to sleep D．the famous person’s beds

    A jobless man wanted very much to have the position of “office boy” at Microsoft. The HR manager interviewed him and then watched him cleaning the floor as a test. “You have passed the test,” he said. “Give me your e-mail address and I’ll send you the form to fill in and the date when you may start.” The man replied, “But I don’t have a computer, neither an e-mail.” “I’m sorry,” said the HR manager. “If you don’t have an e-mail, that means you are not living. And anyone who isn’t living cannot have the job.”
The man left with no hope at all. He didn’t know what to do with only $10 in his pocket. He thought and thought. Then he went to the supermarket and bought 10 kilos of tomatoes. He sold the tomatoes from door to door. In less than two hours, he had 20 dollars. He repeated the operation three times, and started to go early every day, and returned home late. Shortly, he bought a cart , then a truck, then he had his own fleet of delivery vehicles. Five years later, the man was one of the biggest food retailers (零售商) in the US.
One day, one of his friends asked him for his e-mail. He said, “I haven’t got one.” His friend couldn’t believe his ears. “Can you imagine what you could have been if you had an e-mail?” The man thought for a while and replied, “Yes, I’d be an office boy at Microsoft!”
36．What did the man do for the test?
A．He sent e-mails. B．He did the cleaning.
C．He sold computers. D．He filled in forms.
37．The man didn’t get the job because he ________.
A．disliked such a job
B．didn’t pass the test
C．didn’t have an e-mail
D．knew nothing about computers
38．The man ________ after he left Microsoft.
A．went to look for another job
B．asked for food from door to door
C．thought of an idea to make monkey
D．bought a computer and got an e-mail
39．Why could the man become one of the biggest food retailers in the US?
A．Because he had many friends to help him.
B．Because he was smart and worked very hard.
C．Because he had his own fleet of delivery vehicles.
D．Because he wanted to show Microsoft he was living.
40．What does the story want to tell us?
A．Computers are very important in our daily life.
B．Everyone can make a lot of money with only$10.
C．The HR manager didn’t find the man’s ability.
D．Nothing in the world is impossible if we work hard.


四、阅读填表
There are many things that you should be careful with when you are alone at home. Read the following situations to protect yourself.
●Keep the door locked when you are alone at home. Many people think it’s the best way to protect themselves.
●Keep a list of phone numbers to call for help-such as 110, the police station or a neighbor's number.
●Be careful with the electrical appliances(电器).  If you don’t know how to use them, ask your parent. Make a safety check before going to sleep.
●Look through the keyhole when you hear the doorbell. If there are strangers, ask “Who’s that?” with   the door locked and say “Come back later.” Don’t tell them that your parents are away.  Say “Mum’s having a shower.” or “Dad’s having a sleep.”
Protect Yourself When Home Alone
Situations      Solutions
You are alone at home    Keep the door 41
To 42 Keep a list of phone numbers
Before 43     Make a safety check of the electrical appliances
Ask 44 with the door locked.
Talk to the strangers   Don’t say your parents 45


五、阅读回答问题
What do you think is the most common illness? Do you get ill sometimes? We are lucky to live now, because there are lots of medicines to make people better.
The most common illness in the world is the cold. It often begins with a sore throat. Then you sneeze and your nose runs. You usually have a headache too. Often you cough later. It’s not a very bad illness, but you can feel quite ill.
There isn’t a cure (治愈) for a cold, but you can take medicines to make you feel better. For instance, aspirin (阿斯匹林) can stop your headache. It is good to rest, and to drink a lot of water too. A doctor once said to me, “With the proper medicine, a cold will continue for seven days. With no medicine, it will continue for a whole week!”
Where does our medicine come from? A long time ago, people knew that some plants made them feel better. They ate the leaves, the roots, the fruit, or the seeds of plants. For instance, the juice of lemons makes a sore throat feel better.
In modern times, scientists have looked at these plants, and found out which chemicals (化学物质) are in them. Many of our medicines today are made from those chemicals.
There are some illnesses which we can’t cure yet. And nobody has found a cure for old age. But because of modern medicines, most people now live longer than their grandparents.
46．How does a cold often begin?
______________________________________________________________
47．Can aspirin stop a headache?
______________________________________________________________
48．How long does a cold usually continue?
______________________________________________________________
49．What kind of juice makes a sore throat feel better?
______________________________________________________________
50．What are many of our medicines today made from?
______________________________________________________________


六、填写适当的句子补全对话
阅读下面的对话，根据上下文补全对话内容。
A: Good morning. Madam. 51 ?
B: Yes. I’m just looking for a silk skirt.
A: 52 ?                    
B: I’d like a dark color.
A: A dark color? Let me see what color we have...oh. How about this red one?
B: Hmm. I don’t like red. 53 ?                      
A: Yes, we have. What about the blue one and the black one?
B: Well. I prefer the black one. 54 ?
A: 500 Yuan.
B: 55 . Here is the money!


七、材料作文
56．书面表达
湖南卫视真人秀《Daddy, Where Are We Going?》收视火爆，节目讲述了五对笨手笨脚的爸爸带着孩子去陌生的地方完成一些有趣但是艰难的任务。为了完成任务，孩子们学会了团队精神和如何与人相处。你所在的小组对“如何与人相处”展开了讨论，请根据以下你所在的小组的讨论结果，以“How to get on well with others”为题，写一篇英语短文。
Suggestions
(1)learn to share(2)love and respect(尊重) others
(3)communicate with each other
…
My suggestion
…
注意：（1）词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总数）。（2）可适当发挥，以使行文连贯 (自己的建议至少两条)。
（3）文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校。
How to Get on Well with Others
As we know students should learn ________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________

参考答案：
1．D
【详解】句意：骑自行车的那个女孩是一个大学生。
考查冠词。a/an不定冠词，表示泛指，the定冠词，表示“特指”，根据riding a bike作定语修饰前面的girl，所以第一个空格处应该用定冠词，故排除AC；第二空表示泛指，university以辅音音素开头,所以用不定冠词a，故选D。
2．B
【详解】句意：——这是你的照片吗？——不，它不是我的。
考查代词辨析。my我的（形容词性物主代词）；mine我的（名词性物主代词）；hers她的（名词性物主代词）；yours你的（名词性物主代词）。根据“Is this your photo”及“No”可知，不是我的（照片），空格后无名词，应填名词性物主代词mine，故选B。
3．D
【详解】句意：——需要我帮忙吗？——我想给我的双胞胎女儿买两双鞋。
考查名词的数。shoes“鞋子”，pair“双”，是可数名词，故“两双”用two pairs of表示，排除A、C；shoe应该用复数。故选D。
4．B
【详解】句意：因为生病，他昨晚没去参加派对。
考查介词短语。because因为，后接从句；because of因为，后接名词或名词性短语；so因此；if如果。根据“He didn’t go to the party last night … his illness”可知，空格后是解释没有去参加派对的原因，his illness是名词性短语，故选B。
5．B
【详解】句意：——母亲节你给妈妈买了什么礼物？——一条漂亮的围巾。
考查介词辨析。for为了；to到。时间介词的用法：in后接某年某月某季节；on后接具体一天；for后接一段时间；at后接具体时刻。根据“What did you get...your mother”可知，此处指为妈妈准备了什么礼物，第一空填for。“Mother’s Day”是具体的一天，时间介词用on，故选B。
6．B
【详解】句意：互联网对我们很有用。我们可以很容易地找到信息。
考查词义辨析和副词修饰动词。easy容易的，形容词；easily容易地，副词；hard难的，形容词；hardly几乎不，副词。此处在句中修饰动词find，用副词；根据“The Internet is very useful for us.”可知，使用互联网可以容易地找到信息，故选B。
7．C
【详解】句意：昨天玛丽来看我时，我正在听音乐。
考查时态以及动词短语。listen to music“听音乐”，根据came以及When可知，此处表示过去某个时刻正在发生的事情，用过去进行时结构，故选C。
8．A
【详解】句意：去年我们村里建了一所新的现代学校。
考查被动语态。根据last year可知，时态是一般过去时。主语“A new modern school”与动词build之间是被动关系，所以此空用一般过去时被动语态，故选A。
9．C
【详解】句意：——孩子们，现在感觉怎么样？——我们在一起的次数越多，我们就越快乐。
考查比较级。the+比较级，the+比较级，表示“越……，就越……”，happy的比较级是happier，故选C。
10．A
【详解】句意：我喜欢住在又大又明亮的房子里。
考查定语从句关系词。that指代人或物；who指代人；how如何；where指代地点。分析句子结构可知，这是一个定语从句。先行词a house房子，是物，在从句中作主语，用关系代词that或which。故选A。
11．D
【详解】句意：我们两个小时前来里的。我们在这里已经两个小时了。
考查时态。two hours ago“两年前”是一般过去时的时间状语，第一空用一般过去时，排除A/B选项；for two hours常用于现在完成时，come是终止性动词不能和表示一段时间的状语连用，故选D。
12．A
【详解】句意：我们不相信这个五岁的男孩能画出这么好的画。
考查形容词作定语。five-year-old五岁的，作定语；five years old五岁，作表语。此空修饰名词boy，应填由连字符连接起来的词语作定语，结构是基数词-名词单数-形容词，故选A。
13．D
【详解】句意：我不知道他的新家在哪里。你能帮我吗？
考查宾语从句。空处是一个宾语从句，从句用陈述语序，排除A和B选项。his new address应与what搭配，C选项正确的表达是what his new address is，故选D。
14．B
【详解】句意：——看！胡先生正在街道的另一边。——不可能是他。他已经到兰州去了。
考查情态动词。mustn’t禁止，千万别；can’t不可能；shouldn’t不应该；won’t不会。此句是否定的推测，要用can’t，故选B。
15．A
【详解】句意：Tom经常把他的弟弟弄哭，但是昨天他被他的弟弟给弄哭了。
考查非谓语动词。第一个空是句型make sb. do sth.使或让某人做某事。当这个句型用于被动语态的时候，应该是sb. be made to do sth.，用带to的动词不定式。故选A。

16．B 17．B 18．C 19．A 20．C 21．D 22．D 23．C 24．A 25．B 26．C 27．A 28．D 29．D 30．A

【导语】本文主要讲述了作者的两个女儿躲在了汽车的后备箱里，作者误以为孩子丢了，到处找孩子，最后在后备箱里找到了孩子的故事。
16．句意：天开始下起了大雨，所以我决定把孩子们留在车里，然后迅速走进一家商店。
heavy严重的；hard猛烈地；hardly几乎不；big大的。此空修饰rain，表示雨下得大，用副词hard，故选B。
17．句意：我警告女孩们不要碰任何东西，并告诉她们我几分钟后就回来。
let让；warned警告；allowed允许；repeated重复。根据“girls not to touch anything”可知，警告孩子们不要碰任何东西，故选B。
18．句意：我警告女孩们不要碰任何东西，并告诉她们我几分钟后就回来。
away离开；out出去；back回去；alone独自。根据“I went quickly into a shop”及“within a few minutes”可知，几分钟后就回来，故选C。
19．句意：然后我锁上了所有的门，让她们高兴地望着窗外。
them她们；her她；themselves她们自己；herself她自己。根据“so I decided I would leave the children in the car”可知，把她们留在了车里，故选A。
20．句意：我几乎不敢相信自己的眼睛。
ears耳朵；words话语；eyes眼睛；brains大脑。根据“but the girls had disappeared!”可知，无法相信自己眼睛所看到的一切，故选C。
21．句意：车门还锁着，车窗也关着，后座上只有两件衣服。
too太；again再，又；already已经；still仍然。根据“Then I locked all the doors”可知，车门和离开时一样，仍然被锁着，故选D。
22．句意：车门还锁着，车窗也关着，后座上只有两件衣服。
there那；sat坐；seen看见；were是。空处所在句子是一个倒装句，此空缺少be动词与主语构成系表结构，故选D。
23．句意：我很害怕，跑到街角，那里没有她们的踪迹。
excited感到兴奋的；proud骄傲的；frightened害怕的；pleased满意的。根据“but the girls had disappeared!”可知，看到两个女儿不见了，作者感到害怕，故选C。
24．句意：我很害怕，跑到街角，那里没有她们的踪迹。
where在哪里；which哪一个；that引导从句，无实际意义；when当……时。此处是一个定语从句，先行词the corner of the street在从句中作地点状语，用where引导定语从句，故选A。
25．句意：我很害怕，跑到街角，那里没有她们的踪迹。
warning警告；sign迹象；body身体；face脸。根据“there was no … of them”可知，街角没有她们的踪迹，故选B。
26．句意：我冲到附近的一位老太太跟前，问她是否看到了两个小女孩，但她说“没有”。
that引导从句，无实际意义；when当……时；whether是否；how怎样。根据“asked… she had seen two small girls”可知，问这位老太太是否看见作者的女儿，故选C。
27．句意：我感到一阵恐惧，坐在驾驶座上，努力不让自己发抖。
tried尝试；made制造；tried not尝试不；set设立。根据“to stop trembling”可知，尝试自己不要颤抖，故选A。
28．句意：突然，我听到身后传来一阵欢快的笑声。
felt感觉；smelt闻起来；saw看见；heard听见。根据“a merry(愉快的) laugh behind me.”可知，听到了身后传来一阵笑声，故选D。
29．句意：我下了车，跑过去打开后备箱，里面有两个非常红的脸和兴奋的孩子。
sons儿子；boys男孩；women女人；children孩子们。根据“I took my two daughters”可知，两个孩子藏在了后备箱里，故选D。
30．句意：很明显，他们把后座拉了出来，爬到后座后面，然后再也无法把后座往前推了。
climbed爬；flew飞；threw扔；landed着陆。根据“I got out of the car, ran round to open the boot (车尾行李箱) and there inside were two very red-faced”可知，孩子们爬到了后座后面的后备箱藏了起来，故选A。
31．C 32．B 33．D 34．B 35．A

【导语】本文讲述我们需要多少时间的睡眠，很多人会患有失眠症而且很多名人也不例外。
31．细节理解题。根据“Most Americans sleep an average（平均值）of seven to eight hours a night.”可知，大多数美国人每晚平均睡眠7到8小时。故选C。
32．推理判断题。根据“After the age of fifty, the average sleep time goes down to 6.5 hours a night.”可知，随着年龄增长，睡眠时间减少，故选B。
33．词句猜测题。分析“Many of these people cannot fall sleep. This problem is called insomnia.”可知，很多人无法入睡，这个问题叫做失眠。所以insomnia的意思是“无法入睡，失眠”，故选D。
34．推理判断题。根据“Some of these people had special ideas to make them sleep.”和“Mark Twain, the famous American writer, had a different way. He lay on his side across the end of the bed!”可知，马克·吐温选择侧身躺在床尾是因为他觉得这样更容易入睡，故选B。
35．主旨大意题。本文讲述我们需要多少时间的睡眠，很多人会患有失眠症而且很多名人也不例外。选项A“睡眠”符合语境，故选A。
36．B 37．C 38．C 39．B 40．D

【导语】这是一篇励志短文。讲述了一个人在微软应聘失败后，发挥自身的聪明和勤劳，使身上仅有的10美元变成20美元……最后他不仅有了自己的货车、卡车，他还跻身全美国最大食品零售商。短文旨在告诉我们“一切皆有可能”。
36．细节理解题。根据第一段，“The HR manager interviewed him and then watched him cleaning the floor as a test” HR的经理采访了他并观察他打扫地板。故选B。
37．细节理解题。根据第一段最后一句话“If you don’t have an e-mail, that means you are not living. And anyone who isn’t living cannot have the job.”如果你没有电子邮件就意味着你没有生活，任何没有生活的人都不会拥有这份工作，可知他因为没有电子邮箱而失去了工作。故选C。
38．细节理解题。根据第二段的描述我们可以看出这个人用口袋里仅有的10美元买了10公斤西红柿，然后零售得到20美元，三次反复后，他不久有了货车、卡车和自己的运货车队。他就是这样实现自己的资金积累的。故选C。
39．细节理解题。从第二段的描述可以看出他是个聪明的人，又从“and started to go early every day, and returned home late”他每天早出门晚归家知道他是个勤劳、肯吃苦的人。故选B。
40．主旨大意题。这篇短文讲述了一个口袋仅有10美元的人，经过努力奋斗最终变身为全美最大食品零售商的故事，其大意就是告诫人们“世上无难事，只要肯攀登”，故选D。
41．locked 42．call for help 43．going to sleep 44．Who’s that 45．are away

【导语】本文主要介绍了当你独自在家时有许多的事情你要小心对待，那么怎么做才能自我保护呢，就此作者给了四条建议。
41．根据短文第一条建议“Keep the door locked when you are alone at home”描述当你独自在家时，要锁着门。故填locked。
42．根据短文第二条建议“Keep a list of phone numbers to call for help-such as 110, the police station or a neighbor's number ”描述可知要知道电话清单好寻求帮助。故填call for help。
43．根据短文第三条建议“Make a safety check before going to sleep.”描述睡觉之前要进行安全检查，故填going to sleep。
44．根据短文第四条建议“ask ‘Who’s that?’ with  the door locked”描述，如果是个陌生人，要锁着门问你是谁，故填Who’s that。
45．根据短文第四条建议“Don’t tell them that your parents are away. ”描述，不要告诉他们你的父母不在，故填are away。
46．It often begins with a sore throat. / A sore throat. 47．Yes, it can. / Yes. 48．It usually continues for a week/seven days. / A week. / Seven days. 49．The juice of lemons makes a sore throat feel better. / The juice of lemons. 50．They are usually made from the chemicals in plants. / The chemicals in plants.

【导语】本文主要介绍有了药，现代人能活的更久。
46．根据第一段“It often begins with a sore throat.”可知感冒通常始于咽痛。故填It often begins with a sore throat. / A sore throat.
47．根据第二段“For instance, aspirin (阿斯匹林) can stop your headache.”可知阿斯匹林能阻止头疼。故填Yes, it can. / Yes.
48．根据第二段“A doctor once said to me, ‘With the proper medicine, a cold will continue for seven days. With no medicine, it will continue for a whole week!’”可知感冒通常要7天。故填It usually continues for a week/seven days. / A week. / Seven days.
49．根据第三段“For instance, the juice of lemons makes a sore throat feel better.”可知柠檬汁能缓解咽痛。故填The juice of lemons makes a sore throat feel better. / The juice of lemons.
50．根据“In modern times, scientists have looked at these plants, and found out which chemicals (化学物质) are in them. Many of our medicines today are made from those chemicals.”第三四段描述可知现在的药物主要是来自植物和化学品。故填They are usually made from the chemicals in plants. / The chemicals in plants.
51．Can I help you 52．What color would you like 53．Have you got another color 54．How much is it 55．I will take it

【导语】本文是B去购买裙子的一则对话。
51．根据“Yes. I’m just looking for a silk skirt.”可知，这是一个购物的场景，售货员应询问“有什么我可以帮到你的吗？”，故填Can I help you。
52．根据“I’d like a dark color.”可知，询问对方想要什么颜色，故填What color would you like。
53．根据“Hmm. I don’t like red”及“Yes, we have.”可知，这是一个以have开头的一般疑问句，且是询问是否有其他的颜色，故填Have you got another color。
54．根据“500 Yuan”可知，询问多少钱，故填How much is it。
55．根据“Here is the money”可知，决定买下它，故填I will take it。
56．How to Get on Well with Others
As we know students should learn how to get on well with others. But in what ways? First of all, we should respect others. Everyone has their own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness. What’s more, we should be kind to others and offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.
In my opinion, we should treat others in an honest way. Only in these ways can we get along well.
【详解】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如as we know，how to do，get on well with，first of all，understand each other，communicate with each other，what’s more，be kind to others，in my opinion，in an honest way，get along well等。而First of all,…/ Besides…/ What’s more,…/ In my opinion,…等使短文层次清晰，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。