天津高考英语写作分类训练:应用文
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1.假定你是李津,你在某英文网上论坛看到大家在讨论人们使用非现金支付越来越普遍的现象,你打算在论坛里跟帖讨论,内容包括:
(1)非现金支付的好处;
(2)非现金支付的弊端;
(3)你的观点。
注意:
(1)字数100左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)开头与结尾已给出,不计入字数。
With fewer and fewer people using cash, Non-cash payments are becoming increasingly popular, especially in China.
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Posted by Li Jin
2.假定你是学校报社的记者李华,上周四(10月21日)你校举办了一场精彩的艺术节(the Art Festival),请你为校英文专刊撰写一篇新闻报道,内容包括:
1. 时间、地点、人物、活动;
2. 活动过程及内容;
3. 简短评论。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节。
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3.假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校下周将举办一个主题为“Clear Waters and Lush Mountains Are as Valuable as Gold and Silver”的英文演讲比赛,请你准备一篇英文演讲稿参赛,内容应包括以下要点:
(1)你对本次比赛主题的理解;
(2)举例说明;
(3)号召全校同学行动起来贡献自己的一份力量。
注意:
(1)次数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已为你写好,不计入词数。
Good morning, everyone. It is my great pleasure to give a lecture here on “Clear Waters and Lush Mountains Are as Valuable as Gold and Silver”.
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4.假设你是实验中学的李津同学。近日,学校星光(STARLIGHT)英语社由于高三同学巨大的心理压力特向除高三外的全体学生征稿,请以“对手存在的意义”为题,写一篇征文。
要点如下:
1.你的此话题的见解。
2.见解的原因,并举例说明。
3.对广大高三学长学姐的期许和建议。
注意:
1.字数在100字以上。
2.可适当增加细节使文章连贯流畅。
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:对手rival
There are a lot of people that we need to be grateful to in our daily life, some of whom are our friends, but still someone who are our oppositions.
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5.假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津。为了弘扬中国文化,加强中外文化交流,学生会将举办一次英语演讲比赛。主题是向外国友人介绍中国文化。你作为组织者,将在比赛前,根据下文提示写一篇发言稿。
1. 说明比赛的主题和意义;
2. 简单介绍中国文化的博大精深(至少举2个例子;如传统节日,民族艺术等)
3. 预祝比赛活动圆满成功。
注意:1. 不少于100字;
2. 文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good afternoon! Welcome to this year's English speech competition.
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That's all! Thank you!
6.假设你是某大学的学生李津,你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席,负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动,你欲参选,请按以下提示,写一篇竞选演讲稿。
个人的优势介绍(如性格、特长等)
组织活动的设想(如举办讲座、演讲比赛、英语晚会等)
表达竞选的愿望。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当的加入细节,以使内容充实,行文连贯;
3.开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:副主席:vice president 竞选: run for
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7.假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你正参加与法国巴黎友好校以“畅想奥运盛事”为主题的线上英语交流活动。友好校的学生Chris得知新近发布的2022年北京冬奥会的主题口号(official motto)是“一起向未来(Together for a Shared Future)”,认为这个口号非常棒。他请你进一步谈谈看法。请你根据以下提示进行发言:
(1)向Chris表示感谢并认同他的看法;
(2)你对口号的理解(体现奥运精神、同享共创未来、中国发出邀请等);
(3) 对2022年北京冬奥会及2024巴黎奥运会筹备工作表达祝愿。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hi, Chris; Hi, everybody,
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Thank you.
8.假如你是高一新生李华,你好友 Peter 给你发了一封邮件,询问你暑假是如何度过,并对你的高中生活很感兴趣。请你根据以下要点给他写封回信:
1.假期生活的简要描述; 2.描述你的高中生活(学校老师同学等);
3.你对新的学习生活的打算或希望。
注意:1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
9.假定你是李华。北京时间2021年6月17日9时22分,神舟十二号载人飞,请你写一封邮件向同为航天爱好者的英国笔友Mike分享这个消息,内容包括:
1. 神舟十二号载人飞船的历史意义(空间站建造阶段的首次载人飞行任务、三名航天员将完成为期三个月的天和核心舱驻留等);
2. 你的感想。
参考词汇: 神舟十二号飞船 Shenzhou XII spacecraft;
空间站建设阶段 space station construction phase;
天和核心舱 Tianhe core module
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
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10.假设你是晨光中学的李津,来自英国的James作为交换生曾在你班学习一年,现已回国。得知你即将高中毕业,他非常关心你,来信询问你对大学专业报考的设想。请你根据以下提示给他回复邮件。内容包括:
(1)询问近况;
(2)谈谈你对未来大学专业的选择;
(3)说明选择的理由(如兴趣爱好、职业发展等);
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear James,
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Yours,
Li Jin
1.With fewer and fewer people using cash, Non-cash payments are becoming increasingly popular, especially in China.
Non-cash payment has many advantages. First of all, we can pay for whatever we buy with only a smart phone. Second, it reduces the risk of losing money, and it can prevent receiving counterfeit money. And the best part is that we don’t need to worry about not having change anymore when taking a bus.
However, non-cash payment also has many disadvantages. The money can’t arrive in time. It is not convenient for some elderly people who do not use mobile phones to use it. In addition, it cannot protect people’s privacy.
As for me, I prefer non-cash payment. I think it is an indispensable part of modern life.
Posted by Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在网上论坛里跟帖讨论非现金支付好处和弊端并表达自己的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
现金:cash→ready money
减少、降低:reduce→lower
不可或缺的:indispensable→essential
保护:defend→protect
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The money can’t arrive in time.
拓展句:The money can’t arrive in time, which makes some people uneasy.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, we can pay for whatever we buy with only a smart phone. (运用了whatever引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】It is not convenient for some elderly people who do not use mobile phones to use it.(运用了who引导限制性定语从句)
2. An Art Festival
In order to promote the development of campus culture and enrich students' school life, our school held an art festival on the school playground on last Thursday, October 21.
Abundant programs of classical music, theater, opera and dance were performed during the festival. Participants actively involved themselves in the art festival, showing their talents and exerting their strength. At the same time, the campus was enveloped in the cheerful laughter and smiles.
Not only can the festival make students versatile, but also it can enhance the cohesive force among them.
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生向校英文专刊撰写一篇新闻报道,报道学校举办的艺术节。
【详解】1.词汇积累
促进,推动:promote→facilitate
活动,项目:programs→activities
参与:involve in→take part in
天赋:talent→gift
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In order to promote the development of campus culture and enrich students' school life, our school held an art festival on the school playground on last Thursday, October 21.
拓展句:In order to promote the development of campus culture and enrich students' school life, our school held an art festival, which took place on the school playground on last Thursday, October 21.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Participants actively involved themselves in the art festival, showing their talents and exerting their strength.(运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Not only can the festival make students versatile, but also it can enhance the cohesive force among them.(运用了倒装句)
3.Good morning, everyone. It is my great pleasure to give a lecture here on “Clear Waters and Lush Mountains Are as Valuable as Gold and Silver”.
Recently, people have realized how valuable it is to protect our water and mountains. Everyone is called on to join a campaign by Chairman Xi, called “Clear Waters and Lush Mountains Are as Valuable as Gold and Silver”, which requires people to protect our environment well.
As for me, I think it’s an extremely good idea to follow. And there are lots of things we can do to contribute our efforts to it. For example, when we go out for a panic, we should eat as much food as we can to make sure nothing will be thrown in the wild. Of course, we should clear the rubbish up in the nearby river regularly. It’s also nice to plant more trees in certain mountains and stop indiscriminate deforestation. No matter what a small effort we make, it do make a difference.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生准备一篇英文演讲稿参加学校主题为“Clear Waters and Lush Mountains Are as Valuable as Gold and Silver”的英文演讲比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
活动:activity→ campaign
需要:ask→ require
非常:rather→ extremely
垃圾:rubbish→ garbage
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Of course, we should clear the rubbish up in the nearby river regularly.
拓展句:Of course, it is necessary that we should clear the rubbish up in the nearby river regularly.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Everyone is called on to join a campaign by Chairman Xi, called “Clear Waters and Lush Mountains Are as Valuable as Gold and Silver”, which requires people to protect our environment well.(运用了由which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】For example, when we go out for a panic, we should eat as much food as we can to make sure nothing will be thrown in the wild.(运用了由when引导的时间状语从句)
4.There are a lot of people that we need to be grateful to in our daily life, some of whom are our friends, but still someone who are our oppositions. How can we treat our rivals? Maybe someone will see them as enemies, but in my opinion, they should be regarded as helpers.
Why do I have such an idea? Firstly, because it is the competitors that make you stronger and braver. As a famous German philosopher Friedrich Nietzsche once said “What does not kill me, makes me stronger.” I do believe that a person who is better than you in a certain respect will inspire you to reflect on what you used to be, and develop yourself. For example, if you want to be the champion of an women event, you have to be trained with a man competitor.
In addition, another reason why I have the idea is that the rivals will stimulate you to tell you where your true disadvantages are. Of course, while your friends can fight together with you, sometimes they cherish your friendship too much to point your problems directly. What’s more, the opponents will take a surprise behind, from where you will know their strengths and your own weakness.
At last, I do hope every fellow student who would like to improve yourself searches for an opponent, making great progress with the help of him. Do remember to admire your oppositions and learn a lesson from the events where you are defeated by rivals.
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生针对自己所在学校高三同学面临巨大心理压力的情况以“对手存在的意义”为题写一篇文章向英语报社征稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
被看作,被认为:be considered as→be regarded as
感激:grateful →thankful
珍惜:value→cherish
在某人看来:in one's view→in one's opinion
2.句型拓展
变复合句
原句:Do remember to admire your oppositions and learn a lesson from the events where you are defeated by rivals.
拓展句:Do remember to admire your oppositions and learn a lesson from the events where you are defeated by rivals, which is undoubtedly of great significance to you.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Firstly, because it is the competitors that make you stronger and braver. (该句运用了强调句)
[高分句型2]I do believe that a person who is better than you in a certain respect will inspire you to reflect on what you used to be, and develop yourself. (句中that引导宾语从句,who引导定语从句,what引导宾语从句)
5.Ladies and gentlemen,
Good afternoon! Welcome to this year's English speech competition. As Chairman of our Student Union, I am greatly honoured to share something with you.
To start with, we organize this competition to help foreign friends have a deeper understanding of Chinese culture, which is extensive and profound, By taking part in the competition, the participants can not only improve their English, but also help promote cultural exchange between China and the English - speaking world.
During their speech, the students will give detailed accounts of our culture. For example, we have various traditional festivals, such as Spring Festival and Mid - autumn Festival, all of which have long history. What's more, we are proud to have unique art forms, like Peking Opera and Kunqu Opera.
Finally, I sincerely hope this competition can be a great success and may all of you have a nice time!
That's all! Thank you!
【详解】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津。为了弘扬中国文化,加强中外文化交流,学生会将举办一次英语演讲比赛。主题是向外国友人介绍中国文化。你作为组织者,将在比赛前,根据下文提示写一篇发言稿。1. 说明比赛的主题和意义;2. 简单介绍中国文化的博大精深(至少举2个例子;如传统节日,民族艺术等)3. 预祝比赛活动圆满成功。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先:At first→ To start with
理解: understand→ have a deeper understanding of
参加:attend →take part in
成功的:be successful→ be a great success
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Welcome to this year's English speech competition. As Chairman of our Student Union, I am greatly honoured to share something with you.
拓展句:As Chairman of our Student Union, I am greatly honoured to share this year's English speech competition with you.
【点睛】 [高分句型1] To start with, we organize this competition to help foreign friends have a deeper understanding of Chinese culture, which is extensive and profound. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] For example, we have various traditional festivals, such as Spring Festival and Mid - autumn Festival, all of which have long history. (运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
6.Good afternoon, my dear friends
My name is Li Jin, an outgoing boy being good at getting along with both teachers and students. I’m fond of taking part in various kinds of activities as well as organizing them, so now I’d like to run for vice president of our English Club.
If I have the honor to win the election, I’ll try to organize activities related to English as many and colorful as possible in our college, such as English lectures, English parties etc. Meanwhile, English debate competitions and English speech contests between colleges will attract a large number of students, too, from which we could benefit much in improving our English level.
I would appreciate it if I could be given the chance to serve the students, and I’ll go all out to do it well.
Thank you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是某大学的学生李津,你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席,负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动,你欲参选,请按以下提示,写一篇竞选演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚的:be good at→ do well in
参加:take part in → attend
和……相关:related to→ bound up with
同时:meanwhile→ at the same time
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:My name is Li Jin, an outgoing boy being good at getting along with both teachers and students.
拓展句:My name is Li Jin, an outgoing boy, who is good at getting along with both teachers and students.
【点睛】【高分句型1】If I have the honor to win the election, I’ll try to organize activities related to English as many and colorful as possible in our college, such as English lectures, English parties etc.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
【高分句型2】Meanwhile, English debate competitions and English speech contests between colleges will attract a large number of students, too, from which we could benefit much in improving our English level.(运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
7.Hi, Chris; Hi, everybody,
I want to express my most sincere appreciation to you. As far as I am concerned, you are definitely right. I can't agree more. The official motto of the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics is consistent with the core values and vision of the Olympic. We hope to convey to the world several layers of meaning, the first of which is the need to work together in the future. Current COVID - 19 brings all mankind the global challenge, so only by helping each other can we build a beautiful future together. Second, China is inviting the world to join hands.
In the end, I present my best wishes for the preparations for the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics and 2024 Paris Olympics.
Thank you.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生进一步谈谈2022年北京冬奥会的主题口号(official motto)“一起向未来(Together for a Shared Future)”的看法。
【详解】词汇积累
感谢:gratefulness→appreciation
传播:spread→convey
美好的:good/excellent→beautiful
表达:show/express→present
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We hope to convey to the world several layers of meaning
拓展句:We hope that we can convey to the world several layers of meaning
【点睛】[高分句型1] We hope to convey to the world several layers of meaning, the first of which is the need to work together in the future. (运用了which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] so only by helping each other can we build a beautiful future together. (运用了倒装句)
8.Dear Peter,
How are you doing? I feel so grateful to receive your letter asking about my summer vacation and my new high school life. As for me, everything is a new start.
During the holiday, I made an attempt to do a part-time job and accumulated some social experience, which was really good to my future life. At the same time I didn’t forget to take regular exercise and go over my lessons to prepare for my new school life. I spent a meaningful holiday.
When it comes to my senior high school, the first impression of it is unforgettable. The school yard is big and beautiful with all kinds of trees and flowers, providing us with a good environment. Besides, all the teachers are friendly and I firmly believe we’ll make great progress with them teaching us. I really love my new school. I hope my life of senior high school will be always interesting. And from now on, I will study hard to go to college. I believe my dream will come true.
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是高一新生李华,你好友 Peter 给你发了一封邮件,询问你暑假是如何度过,并对你的高中生活很感兴趣。请你根据要点给他写封回信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激的:grateful→ thankful
有好处:be good to→ be beneficial to
此外:Besides→ In addition
友好的:friendly→ amicable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The school yard is big and beautiful with all kinds of trees and flowers, providing us with a good environment.
拓展句:The school yard is big and beautiful with all kinds of trees and flowers, which can provide us with a good environment.
【点睛】【高分句型1】During the holiday, I made an attempt to do a part-time job and accumulated some social experience, which was really good to my future life.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】When it comes to my senior high school, the first impression of it is unforgettable.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
9.One possible version:
Dear Mike,
As a space enthusiast like you, I really can’t wait to share with you a most stirring news that China’s Shenzhou XII spacecraft was launched into space successfully at 9:22 am.,June 17,2021 Beijing time.
The successful launch of Shenzhou XII spacecraft is without doubt of great historic significance. Not only does it mark the first manned spaceflight during China’s space station construction phase,carrying three astronauts to Tianhe core module,where they are to complete a three-month mission, but it also plays a critical role in testing the technologies and equipment for the construction of the space station.
It is this groundbreaking achievement that makes me realize that China is always undertaking its responsibility in fulfilling the global dream of exploring the space,which is what I am proud of. And I’m eagerly expecting more good news about the Shenzhou XII program.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国笔友Mike写封信,与他分享神舟十二号载人飞船的消息。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动人心的:exciting→stirring
意义:meaning→significance
完成:finish→complete
决定性的:decisive→critical
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The successful launch of Shenzhou XII spacecraft is without doubt of great historic significance.
拓展句:Shenzhou XII spacecraft was lanuched successfully,which is without doubt of great historic significance.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Not only does it mark the first manned spaceflight during China’s space station construction phase,carrying three astronauts to Tianhe core module,where they are to complete a three-month mission, but it also plays a critical role in testing the technologies and equipment for the construction of the space station.(Not only置于句首的倒装句;where引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] It is this groundbreaking achievement that makes me realize that China is always undertaking its responsibility in fulfilling the global dream of exploring the space,which is what I am proud of.(强调句;which引导的定语从句)
10.Dear Lucy,
How is everything going? I’m writing to tell you about the major I will choose in the university. I have decided to major in computer science. There are some reasons why I made such a decision.
Firstly, with the development of society, computers are playing an important role in many aspects of our life. Secondly, browsing the Internet is one of my hobbies, so I think I can study computer science well. Last but not least, being good at computer science may help me find a good job after graduating from college.
What about your plan? Expect to hear from you as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给来自英国的James写一封邮件,谈谈你对未来大学专业的选择并说明选择的理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
选择:choose→select
重要的:important→significant
网上冲浪:browse the Internet=surf the Internet
决定做某事:decide to do=make up one's mind to do
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Firstly, with the development of society, computers are playing an important role in many aspects of our life.
拓展句:Firstly, with the development of society, it is computers that are playing an important role in many aspects of our life.
【点睛】[高分句型1] There are some reasons why I made such a decision. (运用了why引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Secondly, browsing the Internet is one of my hobbies, so I think I can study computer science well. (运用了动名词作主语)
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