天津高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1．假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你在某网站的论坛上读到一位名为Chris的美国学生的帖子，得知他对中国经典文学感兴趣，但是在阅读时遇到了很多困难，希望得到帮助，请根据以下提示给他留言：

1.表示理解并给予安慰；

2.提出建议(至少两条)；

3.鼓励他坚持学习汉语。

注意：1.词数不少于100；

2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。

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2．假设你是振华中学高三学生李明。你与交换生James要共同完成一篇项目学习的论文，他建议用AI完成初稿。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1. 委婉拒绝并说明理由；

2. 你的建议及计划。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词语：项目学习 project-based learning

Dear James,

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Yours,

Li Ming

3．假设你是天津中学的李津。你的英国笔友Chris最近给你写信告诉你他即将作为交换生来中国学习一年。他对在中国的生活和学习有些担心和焦虑。请你给他回信，要点如下：

1) 欢迎他来中国，钦佩他的勇气;

2) 安慰他的焦虑并提出建议(生活和学习上);

3) 对他的祝愿和期待。

注意：(1) 词数不少于100;

(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。

Dear Chris,

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Yours,

Li Jin

4．假如你是晨光中学的李津，你最近收到英国好友Chris的邮件。信中提到他将于4月中旬随学访团到天津交流学习，希望你给他推荐一下最值得去的景点。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：

(1) 表示欢迎；

(2) 简单介绍天津；

(3) 推荐一处旅游景点并给出理由。

注意：

(1) 词数不少于100；

(2) 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

(3) 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Chris,

I’m so glad to receive your email.

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I hope this is helpful. Can’t wait to meet you!

Yours,

Li Jin

5．假定你是李华，你正在某国外中学做交换生，该校校报的“外国文化”栏目拟介绍中国传统文化，校报编辑Peter给你写信，咨询你的意见。请你给Peter写封回信，要点如下：

1.你认为最能代表中国文化的是什么？请说明理由；

2.我们应该如何更好地推广中国文化？(至少两点)

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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6．假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业。他很高兴最近在当地孔子学院主办的“汉语桥”世界中学生中文比赛中荣获诗歌朗诵一等奖，但还想更深入的学习中文，希望你能给他一些建议。请你根据以下提示，用英文给Chris回复一封电子邮件。

内容包括：

(1)表示感谢并祝贺Chris获奖；

(2)提供深入学习汉语的建议(如：读中文原著，用中文记日记等)；

(3)邀请Chris来中国学习交流。

注意：

(1)词数不少于100字；

(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。

(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：

孔子学院 Confucius Institute

汉语桥 Chinese Bridge

Dear Chris,

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Yours,

Li Jin

7．假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你的英国笔友Chris的学校将要举办一场“Amazing China”中国展活动，在筹备过程中，他写信向你寻求建议。请根据以下提示给他写一封回信。

(1)建议他介绍一种有关中国文化的活动(如中国诗词大会、中国戏曲表演等)；

(2)给出建议该活动的理由；

(3)表达美好祝愿。

注意：

(1)词数不少于100；

(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：

中国诗词大会Chinese Poetry Competition

中国戏曲表演Chinese Opera Performance

Dear Chris,

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Yours,

Li Jin

8．假如你是李津，你的英国朋友Lynn来信说她即将上大学而她的妈妈担心她的生活自理能力。她不知该如何消除妈妈的顾虑。请你给Lynn回一封邮件，内容包括：

(1)表示理解；

(2)提出建议并说明理由。

注意：(1) 词数不少于100；

(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；

(3)邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Lynn,

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Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Jin

9．假如你是晨光中学高三学生李津。为了改进教学并有效提升每个学生的英语水平，你的英语老师Ms.Li希望了解你的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。

①对英语学习的认识；

②自己目前的英语水平；

③自己英语学习存在的主要问题；

④对英语教学的两点建议。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 信的开头和结尾已给出。

Dear Ms.Li,

I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.

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Thank you!

Yours,

Li Jin

10．假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校英文报收到一封署名为Chris的高一新生的来信，在信中Chris表示了自己不能适应高中生活，急需一些建议，为了帮助他，请给他用英语写一封回信。

内容包括：

(1)表示理解并给予安慰;

(2)多与老师和同学们沟通、交流;

(3)建议合理分配时间(如学习、锻炼和休息的时间等);

(4)积极参加学校社团活动。

注意：

(1)词数100词左右;

(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Chris,

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Yours,

Li Jin

1．Hi, Chris. I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty in learning Chinese classical literature, but it can be easily changed if you take advantage of my tips.

Firstly, I believe that understanding new words and idioms from all aspects and reviewing them in a timely manner is a good method. Secondly, it is important to uncover the stories behind words and idioms to make it easier to understand them. Thirdly, it is easier to remember new words and idioms in sentences.

I hope it can make a difference to you. I believe that in the near future, through hard study, you will make progress.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国学生Chris留言，在中国经典文学学习上给予建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

困难：difficulty→trouble

建议：tip→advice

方法：method→way

希望：hope→wish

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Thirdly, it is easier to remember new words and idioms in sentences.

拓展句：Thirdly, it is easier to remember new words and idioms in sentences, which is also a good method.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty in learning Chinese classical literature, but it can be easily changed if you take advantage of my tips. (运用了非谓语动词动名词作介词宾语)

【高分句型2】Secondly, it is important to uncover the stories behind words and idioms to make it easier to understand them. (运用了it作形式主语，非谓语动词不定式作真正主语，以及it作形式宾语，不定式作真正宾语)

2．Dear James,

Thanks for your suggestion on using AI to finish the first draft of our paper. But after further consideration, I’m afraid it’s not a wise idea.

Firstly, it goes against the purpose of project-based learning, which is to cultivate critical thinking and teamwork. Moreover, AI is unlikely to accurately present our ideas, because it hasn’t “got involved in” our project.

So, I suggest we write the paper ourselves. We can start by brainstorming together to create an outline after generating some original and creative ideas. Then we can work independently on different parts, and finally work together to finalize our paper. I believe we can do a better job than AI.

Hope you can understand. Expecting our distinctive draft.

Yours,

Li Ming

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给交换生James写邮件，委婉地拒绝他的用AI完成项目论文初稿的建议，并陈述理由，然后提出自己的建议和论文写作计划。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

完成：finish→complete, accomplish, finalize

考虑：consideration→thought, deliberation, reflection, contemplation

首先：firstly→to begin with, in the first place, at first, at the beginning

培养：cultivate→develop, nurture, foster

此外：moreover→besides, in addition, additionally, furthermore

不太可能的：unlikely→improbable, questionable, beyond belief

呈现：present→show, display, exhibit, demonstrate

产生：generate→produce, create

2. 句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：We can start by brainstorming together to create an outline after generating some original and creative ideas. Then we can work independently on different parts, and finally work together to finalize our paper.

拓展句：We can start by brainstorming together to create an outline after generating some original and creative ideas, after which we can work independently on different parts, and finally work together to finalize our paper.

【点睛】【高分句型1】But after further consideration, I’m afraid it’s not a wise idea.（运用了连接词that引导名词性从句作afraid的宾语并省略了that）

【高分句型2】Firstly, it goes against the purpose of project-based learning, which is to cultivate critical thinking and teamwork.（运用了关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句)

【高分句型3】Moreover, AI is unlikely to accurately present our ideas, because it hasn’t “got involved in” our project.（运用了从属连词because引导原因状语从句）

3．Dear Chris,

     How are you going? I feel so grateful to receive your letter informing me that you are going to study in China as an exchange student for one year. Meanwhile, you also mentioned some worries and anxieties about living and studying in China, so I’m writing to show my comfort and to give some advice.

     For a start, it’s quite natural to feel uneasy and strange, especially in an unfamiliar environment. Thus, trying to fit in and be friends with surrounding people is a great way to ease that tension. Additionally, a proper understanding of Chinese customs can improve your study stress. Eventually, it’s better to have a healthy body and positive attitude to life, which will play vital roles in your later life.

     Looking forward to meeting you soon.

Yours,

Li Jin

【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Chris回信，就他提到自己将在中国的学习和生活的担心和焦虑，给与安慰并提出建议。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

感激的：grateful → appreciated

告知，讲述：inform → tell

同时：meanwhile → at the same time

提及：mention → refer to

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句： I’m writing to show my comfort and to give some advice.

拓展句： I’m writing to show my comfort and to give some advice, which I think will be of great benefit to you.

【点睛】【高分句型1】

 I feel so grateful to receive your letter informing me that you are going to study in China as an exchange student for one year. （运用了现在分词作定语及宾语从句）

【高分句型2】

Thus, trying to fit in and be friends with surrounding people is a great way to ease that tension. （运用了动名词作主语）

4．Dear Chris,

I’m so glad to receive your email. What makes me really excited is that you are going to visit Tianjin. What a wonderful idea! Welcome to my hometown!

Tianjin is a city with a long history. The weather is good but perhaps a little bit hot in summer. You’ll have various snacks in Tianjin and meanwhile find lots of western style buildings here on the Five Major Avenues. If you want to enjoy beautiful city views, Haihe River should be a good choice. If you like to have fun and see some animals, the Water Park and Tianjin Zoo could make you content. My favorite place is the Ancient Culture Street where there are plenty of interesting traditional things.

I hope this is helpful. Can’t wait to meet you!

Yours,

Li Jin

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是晨光中学的李津，你最近收到英国好友Chris的邮件。信中提到他将于4月中旬随学访团到天津交流学习，希望你给他推荐一下最值得去的景点。

【详解】1.词汇积累

各种各样的：various→a variety of

欣赏：enjoy→admire/appreciate

满意的：content→satisfied

与此同时：meanwhile→at the same time

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Tianjin is a city with a long history.

拓展句：Tianjin is a city which has a long history.

【点睛】【高分句型1】What makes me really excited is that you are going to visit Tianjin.（运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句）

【高分句型2】My favorite place is the Ancient Culture Street where there are plenty of interesting traditional things.（运用了where引导的定语从句）

5．Dear Peter,

I’m so happy that the “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper will recommend traditional Chinese culture.

From my perspective, there is no denying that Confucius is the most representative symbol of Chinese culture. As a philosopher, Confucius not only represents the traditional Chinese culture, but has been influencing us Chinese people since ancient times. Nowadays we can find lots of Confucius institutes around the world, which provide platforms for the foreigners to learn about Chinese culture.

Undoubtedly, culture is a decisive factor for social development. As a country with a long history, China is rich in civilization and culture. To promote Chinese culture, we are supposed to provide various cultural exchange activities. What’s more, establishing Confucius institutes all over the world is also a good idea. Meanwhile, attracting more foreign visitors to China to experience Chinese culture will have a far-reaching impact.

I hope that my advice will be of some help to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于书信应用文，要求考生为校报编辑Peter写一篇关于介绍中国传统文化意见的回信。其内容包括你认为最能代表中国文化的是什么并请说明理由以及我们应该如何更好地推广中国文化。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：happy→delighted

 影响：influence→impact

 很多：lots of →plenty of

 不同的：various→a variety of

 2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Undoubtedly, culture is a decisive factor for social development.

 拓展句：There is no doubt that culture is a decisive factor for social development.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Nowadays we can find lots of Confucius institutes around the world, which provide platforms for the foreigners to learn about Chinese culture.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】 I hope that my advice will be of some help to you.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)

6．Dear Chris,

Learning that you have won the first prize of poetry reading in the “Chinese Bridge” World Middle School Chinese Competition hosted by the local Confucius Institute recently, I am writing to offer you my congratulations.

As to how to further study Chinese, my suggestions are as follows. Firstly, in order to have a deep understanding of Chinese culture, you are suggested to read more Chinese original books. Secondly, please keep a diary in Chinese and it will help you to improve your writing. Thirdly, practice oral Chinese as much as possible, which will promote your expression ability.

I sincerely invite you to come to China to study and exchange ideas with us.

Yours,

Li Jin

【导语】这是一篇应用文。假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业。他很高兴最近在当地孔子学院主办的“汉语桥”世界中学生中文比赛中荣获诗歌朗诵一等奖，但还想更深入的学习中文，希望你能给他一些建议。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

举办：host→ throw

提供：offer→ provide

建议： suggestion→ advice

帮助：help→ assisit

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Secondly, please keep a diary in Chinese and it will help you to improve your writing.

拓展句：Secondly, please keep a diary in Chinese, which will help you to improve your writing.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that you have won the first prize of poetry reading in the “Chinese Bridge” World Middle School Chinese Competition hosted by the local Confucius Institute recently, I am writing to offer you my congratulations.（运用了that引导宾语从句）

[高分句型2] Thirdly, practice oral Chinese as much as possible, which will promote your expression ability.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）

7．Dear Chris,

Learning that you are preparing for the China Exhibition named “Amazing China”, I’m writing to suggest that you introduce the Chinese Poetry Competition. It has been successfully held for several times at CCTV.

On the one hand, there are many foreigners interested in ancient Chinese poetry, so I believe this topic will attract the attention of the teachers and students of your school, making them learn more about Chinese traditional culture through this activity. On the other hand, I am very familiar with poetry and can offer you help when necessary.

I sincerely hope that the event will be a successful one. Looking forward to your good news.

Yours,

Li Jin

【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生建议英国笔友Chris选择有关中国文化的活动作为“Amazing China”中国展的话题，并给出理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

称为：name→call

推荐：suggest→recommend

对……感兴趣：be interested in→take interest in

吸引：attract→appeal to

2.句型拓展

合并句子

原句：Learning that you are preparing for the China Exhibition named “Amazing China”, I’m writing to suggest that you introduce the Chinese Poetry Competition. It has been successfully held for several times at CCTV.

拓展句：Learning that you are preparing for the China Exhibition named “Amazing China”, I’m writing to suggest that you introduce the Chinese Poetry Competition, which has been successfully held for several times at CCTV.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Learning that you are preparing for the China Exhibition named “Amazing China”, I’m writing to suggest that you introduce the Chinese Poetry Conference. （运用了that引导的宾语从句和过去分词作定语）

[高分句型2]On the other hand, I am very familiar with poetry and can offer you help when necessary.（运用了状语从句的省略）

8．Dear Lynn,

I’m sorry to learn about your problem. It’s normal for your mother to worry about your new college life. Here are some suggestions.

First, why not talk more with your mom? Heart-to-heart talks can help you understand each other better. Second, you’d better learn to take care of yourself in daily life, which will definitely help prove to your mom that you are already grown-up. It would also ease her anxiety if you could share with her the housework, such as cleaning, washing and cooking.

I hope my proposals will be of some help to you.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Jin

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Lynn一封邮件，提出一些可以打消她妈妈担心她生活自理能力的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

建议：suggestion →advice

为什么不……：why not… →why don’t you…

照顾：take care of →look after

忧虑：anxiety →worry

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Here are some suggestions.

拓展句：Here are some suggestions, which are of great help to you.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Second, you’d better learn to take care of yourself in daily life, which will definitely help prove to your mom that you are already grown-up.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和that引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】It would also ease her anxiety if you could share with her the housework, such as cleaning, washing and cooking.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）

9．Dear Ms. Li

Learning that you seek to enhance your teaching method so as to improve our English, I am more than grateful and pleased to offer you some information.

First and foremost, I’d like to talk about my view on English learning. As I see it, the core of English learning is based on extensive reading and speaking, by which we can be familiar with scores of English grammar rules and expressions. I am now quite fluent in oral English. However, to my discouragement, I am terrible in working out questions about English passages. Therefore, I hope that you can give a clear analysis of the structures of some English articles. In this way, we will master how to figure out the main idea of an article. In addition, it would be better if you can instruct us to complete English comprehension questions.

Thanks again for your devoted teaching.

     Yours,

Li Jin

【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生应英语老师Ms.Li的要求，谈谈自己对英语学习的看法，说明自己目前英语水平及不足之处，并最后提出英语教学方面的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

提供：offer→provide

提高；改善：improve→enhance

搞清楚；查明：figure out→find out

教授；讲解：teach→instruct

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：First and foremost, I’d like to talk about my view on English learning.

拓展句：First and foremost, I’d like to talk about my view on English learning, which may help you to organize your teaching more properly.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Learning that you seek to enhance your teaching method so as to improve our English, I am more than grateful and pleased to offer you some information. (运用了现在分词作状语)

[高分句型2] As I see it, the core of English learning is based on extensive reading and speaking, by which we can be familiar with scores of English grammar rules and expressions. (运用了介词+which引导的非限定性定语从句)

10．Dear Chris,

    Hearing from your letter and learning that you couldn’t adapt to your senior high life, I feel so sorry and really understand you. Here is my advice.

    First of all, communicating with your teachers and classmates is really of great importance. It will be beneficial for you to adjust to the new environment and life. Besides, you should allocate your time reasonably. For example, do some exercise and have a rest regularly. In addition, you should take part in some school activities actively through which you can make more friends in senior high.

    The above I mentioned are my suggestions. Hope they will be effective.

Yours,

Li Jin

【导语】这是一篇应用文。校英文报收到一封署名为Chris的高一新生的来信，在信中Chris表示了自己不能适应高中生活，急需一些建议。要求考生给Chris写一封建议信帮助他。

【详解】1.词汇积累

适应：adapt to → adjust to

重要的：be of importance → be of significance

休息：have a rest → take a rest

参加：take part in → participate in

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：First of all, communicating with your teachers and classmates is really of great importance. It will be beneficial for you to adjust to the new environment and life.

拓展句：First of all, communicating with your teachers and classmates, which will be beneficial for you to adjust to the new environment and life, is really of great significance.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing from your letter and learning that you couldn’t adapt to your senior high life, I feel so sorry and really understand you.(运用了现在分词短语做状语和that引导的宾语从句)

【高分句型2】In addition, you should take part in some school activities actively through which you can make more friends in senior high.(运用了介词+which引导的定语从句)