浙江高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信

感谢信/祝贺信

1．假如你是李华，你的朋友外籍访问生Jack在学校的新年晚会(New Year Gala)上演唱了两首歌曲，他的表演很受欢迎，请你用英文给他写一封信表达祝贺。内容包括：

1.表示祝贺；

2.对其演出的评价；

3.对其未来的期待。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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2．假定你是李华。你以前的外教Alex听说你今年暑假被评为2017哈佛峰会（HSYLC）的“最佳志愿者”，写信向你祝贺，并想知道更多情况。请给他写封回信，内容包括：

1.表达感谢；

2.遇到的挑战：天气炎热，活动安排紧凑等：

3.收获与感想。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：峰会summit

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3．假定你是李华，你观看了英国好朋友Leslie参加的学校演讲比赛直播，他的演讲“Success comes from Hard Work”获得了一等奖。请你给他写一封祝贺信，内容包括：

1.表示祝贺。

2.评论及赞赏。

3.表达祝愿。

注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。

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4．假如你叫李华，进入高三的学习，压力很大，想和父母说说心里话，请你用英文在你的博客上用书信形式表达出来。主要内容如下：

注意：(1)短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥。

(2)词数：100左右(开头与结尾已给出，不计入词数)。

Dear Mom and Dad,

With the College Entrance Examination approaching, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!

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Mom and Dad, I am quite confident about my future. Wish you good health and a happy life.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

5．2018年11月来自美国洛杉矶西塞拉高中（杭四中姐妹学校）的油画老师Juliette来我校进行为期两周的教学交流，她独特的教学风格给同学们留下了深刻印象。假定你是李华，请你给她写一封感谢信。内容包括：

1. 表达感激之情；

2. 谈谈她在美术课上给你的感受（教学耐心，课堂氛围活跃，很会表扬人，地道美语……

）；

3. 期盼她再次来我校交流。

注意：词数80左右

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6．假如你叫李华，今年暑假即将跨入高三的学习，压力很大，想和父母说说心里话，请你用英文在你的博客上以书信形式表达出来。

主要内容如下：1. 感谢父母的关心、鼓励；

2. 对父母的期望；

3. 学习打算。

注意：1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥。

2. 词数：120左右（开头与结尾已给出，不计入词数）。

Dear Mom and Dad,

With the Senior Three approaching, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!

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Mom and Dad, I am quite confident about my future. Wish you good health and a happy life.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

7．假设你是高三学生李华,你需要设计一份英语俱乐部招收新成员的海报。你想请外籍教帅 Mr. Brown帮助策划。请根据提示,用英语给Mr. Brown写一封电子邮件,向他寻求帮助,要点如下：

1. 设计海报的目的；

2. 为何要求助    请Mr. Brown帮助设计海报；

3. 为何希望得到他的指导—— Mr. Brown按长设计海报,并且有这方面的经验；

4. 感谢他的帮助。

注意.1. 词数100左右;    

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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8．假定你是李华，你的英国好友Mark在孔子学院(Confucius Institute)主办的“汉语桥(Chinese Bridge)”节目中荣获一等奖。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 表示祝贺；2. 好奇Mark是如何将中文学得那么好；3. 希望收到回复。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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9．假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 表示感谢；

2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助；

3. 临别祝愿。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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10．假定你是学生会主席李华, 学生会举办了英语戏剧节(English Drama Festival)，得到了外教Miss Brown的大力帮助。活动圆满结束后，请给她写一封感谢信。内容包括:

1. 表达感谢；

2. 外教的帮助；

3. 同学的收获。

注意:

1. 词数80左右;

2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

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1．Dear Jack,

I’m glad to learn that you’ve just performed two English songs in New Year Gala. The performance was very popular among students.

Here I would like to express my sincere congratulations on your success in the performance. The English song you performed is my favorite, and I appreciate the emotion you put into it. You have a gift for singing. Maybe you should learn more about it.

I hope to hear more of your songs in the future.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是祝贺信。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假如你是李华，你的朋友外籍访问生Jack在学校的新年晚会(New Year Gala)上演唱了两首歌曲，他的表演很受欢迎，请你用英文给他写一封信表达祝贺。内容包括：1.表示祝贺；2.对其演出的评价；3.对其未来的期待。

第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）：be glad to（高兴）；New Year Gala（新年晚会）；would like（想要）；sincere congratulations（诚挚的祝贺）；have a gift for（对……有天赋）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时和一般现在时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】[高分句型一]

I’m glad to learn that you’ve just performed two English songs in New Year Gala, which was very popular among students. 我很高兴得知你刚刚在新年晚会上表演了两首英文歌曲，表演很受学生欢迎。运用which引导的非限定性定语从句。

[高分句型二]

Maybe you should learn more about singing because you have a gift for it. 也许你应该多学学唱歌，因为你有唱歌的天赋。运用because引导的原因状语从句。

2．Dear Alex,

Thank you for your congratulations on my winning the Best Volunteer award of 2017 HSYLC Summit. I am also proud to share my experience with you.

There are also some challenge during the summit. Firstly, the weather was too hot. One of our volunteers even fell in a faint. Secondly, the arrangements were tight. During the summit, I was responsible for welcoming the foreign guests, meanwhile I needed to introduce information about the summit to the guests.

I believe this special experience has opened my eyes and given me a full understanding of HSYLC. I’m looking forward to another voluntary work.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是书信。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 假定你是李华。你以前的外教Alex听说你今年暑假被评为2017哈佛峰会（HSYLC）的“最佳志愿者”，写信向你祝贺，并想知道更多情况。请给他写封回信，内容包括：1.表达感谢；2.遇到的扰战：天气炎热，活动安排紧凑等：3.收获与感想。

第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）：summit（峰会）；share experience（分享经历）；fall in a faint（晕倒）；opened my eyes（开阔我的眼界）；a full understanding of（充分理解）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。

第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】[高分句型一]

The reason why I’m writing to you is that I want to thank you for your congratulations on my winning the Best Volunteer award. 我给你写信的原因是我想感谢你对我获得最佳志愿者奖的祝贺。运用表语从句。

[高分句型二]

The weather was so hot that one of our volunteers even fell in a faint. 天气太热了，我们的一个志愿者甚至晕倒了。运用结果状语从句。

3．Dear Leslie,

I really enjoyed watching your English speech competition on TV and I was delighted to see you win the first prize. I am writing to convey my sincere congratulations to you.

It did not surprise me at all when host announced you as the winner. It has always been your burning desire to be an outstanding speaker, and you have been so industrious and perseverant to make your dream come true. As a famous saying goes, “no pains, no gains”. Your hard work has now finally paid off. As you said in your speech, success really does come from hard work.

Congratulations once again. I wish you further success in the future.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是祝贺信。

【详解】体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主

结构：总分

要求：

1.    表示祝贺

2.    评论及赞赏

3.    表达祝愿

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

enjoy doing sth/ be delighted to do sth/ win the first prize/ desire to do sth/ come true/ pay off

第三步：连词成句

1.    I feel delighted to know that you won the first prize in your English speech contest.

2.    I am writing to convey my sincere congratulations to you.

3.    As I expected, you got the first place.

4.    You have always been dreaming to be an outstanding speaker, and in the end your efforts paid off.

5.    As the old saying goes: no pains, no gains.

6.    May you succeed in the future.

第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）

表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…

状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…

定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）

【点睛】[高级句型一]

Is was your effort and perseverance that made your dream come true. 是你的努力和毅力让你梦想成真。句中使用了强调句型。

4．Dear Mom and Dad,

With the College Entrance Examination approaching, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!

During the years, I always feel grateful for your unselfish care and love. Thanks to your constant encouragement, I have been making remarkable progress in my studies.

Since it will be less than one month before the exam, Iˈm under great pressure now. I would appreciate it if you can have a frequent talk with me and provide me with timely help, which contributes to my staying in a good state.

I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am shouldering. I have made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the saying goes, "no pains, no gains. " Meanwhile, I will spare some time to participate in sports activities, aiming to build up my body and free myself from the heavy work of studies.

Mom and Dad, I am quite confident about my future. Wish you good health and a happy life.

Yours sincerely,

​Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假如你叫李华，进入高三的学习，压力很大，想和父母说说心里话，请你用英文在你的博客上用书信形式表达出来。主要内容如下：

第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）, 如：grateful（感激的）；unselfish（无私的）；constant encouragement（不断的鼓励）；make progress in（取得进步）；be under great pressure（承受巨大压力）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。

第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如Since it will be less than one month before the exam, Iˈm under great pressure now.运用了原因状语从句；I would appreciate it if you can have a frequent talk with me and provide me with timely help, which contributes to my staying in a good state.运用了条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。

5．Dear Juliette,

I’m writing to you for expressing my sincere gratitude to you. When thinking of the wonderful days we spent last two weeks, I just can’t help thinking of you. Your art class is very impressive because of your patience and active atmosphere. And you never shy away from praising students. I’ve learned so much, not only English but also the culture. And I really enjoyed a great deal, the fun and laughter we shared with each other. Thank you very much. I’ll always remember this experience as well as your classes.

I look forward to your visit to our school again.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇考察的作文类型是感谢信。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时

结构：分总

要求：

1.表达感激之情；

2.谈谈她在美术课上给你的感受（教学耐心，课堂氛围活跃，很会表扬人，地道美语……）；

3.期盼她再次来我校交流。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）

sincere gratitude / think of / can't help doing sth./ a great deal / share with / as well as

第三步：连词成句

   I'm writing to you for expressing my sincere gratitude to you．When thinking of the wonderful days we spent last two weeks，I just can't help thinking of you．Your art class is very impressive because of your patience and active atmosphere. And you never shy away from praising students and native American English. I've learned so much，not only English but also the culture．And I really enjoyed a great deal，the fun and laughter we shared with each other．Thank you very much．I'll always remember this experience as well as your classes.

I look forward to your visit to our school again.

第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词）

1.    表文章结构顺序：first of all; to start with; firstly；in the end,；at last…

2.    表并列补充关系：what’s more,；besides; in addition; as well as；last but not the least…

3.    表因果关系：because; as; so…

第五步：修改润色 (加入从句或高级词汇)

【高分句型一】It was you who awakened my interest in art. 运用强调句表达了老师对作者兴趣的影响。

【高分句型二】You are a special teacher whom I will always remember with fond memories. 运用了whom引导的定语从句，说明作者对老师的良好印象。

6．Dear Mom and Dad,

With the Senior Three approaching, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!

During the years, I always feel grateful for your unselfish care and love. Thanks to your constant encouragement, I have been making remarkable progress in my studies. Since it will be less than one month before the exam, I’m under great pressure now. I would appreciate it if you could have a frequent talk with me and provide me with timely help, which contribute to my staying in a good state. I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am shouldering. I have made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” Meanwhile, I will spare some time to participate in sports activities, aiming to build up my body and free myself from the heavy work of studies.

Mom and Dad, I am quite confident about my future. Wish you good health and a happy life.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生写一封电子邮件给父母说说心里话进行高三学习的解压。

【详解】第一步：应用文表达，开头结尾给出，注意格式规范，整篇文章使用一般现在时，符合书信语境表达。

第二步：根据内容要点，列出给出感谢父母的关心、鼓励写信目的，对父母的期望，以及学习打算。内容包含要点概括全面，关键短语，句子选用合理，如remarkable progress，under great pressure，aware of the responsibilities，made up my mind to make every effort…等等。

第三步：连词成文，结构衔接得体，字数适当，句子运用准确。

【点睛】文章内容完整全面，格式规范，语篇连贯，使用复合句，如which引导的非限制性定语从句：I would appreciate it if you could have a frequent talk with me and provide me with timely help, which contribute to my staying in a good state. for 引导的原因状语从句I have made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success.英语从句技巧掌握得当，显示较高的英文水平。文章思路清晰、层次分明，过渡自然，表达完整。

7．Dear Mr Brown,

I’m writing to ask you for help in the hope that you will be kind to help me.

To enrich our school life and improve our English level, every year we hold an activity, appealing to new members to join our English club. For a long time, I have been longing to organize English clubs and throw English parties if possible. What I should do is put up attractive posters.

I’ve heard you are expert at designing posters and have some experience in the field, so I’d like you to help create a poster. If you agree, I will come to your house at the time most convenient to you.

I’d be grateful if you’d like to give me a hand. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假设你是高三学生李华,你需要设计一份英语俱乐部招收新成员的海报。你想请外籍教帅 Mr. Brown帮助策划。请根据提示,用英语给Mr. Brown写一封电子邮件,向他寻求帮助,要点如下：1. 设计海报的目的；2. 为何要求助    请Mr. Brown帮助设计海报；3. 为何希望得到他的指导—— Mr. Brown按长设计海报,并且有这方面的经验；4. 感谢他的帮助。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：ask you for help（向你求助）；To enrich our school life and improve our English level（为了丰富我们的学校生活，提高我们的英语水平）；longing to organize（渴望组织）；put up attractive posters（张贴吸引人的海报）；等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。I’m writing to ask you for help in the hope that you will be kind to help me. 句中使用that引导的同位语从句；To enrich our school life and improve our English level, every year we hold an activity, appealing to new members to join our English club.句中动词不定式作目的状语，且现在分词作伴随状语；What I should do is put up attractive posters.句中使用what引导的主语从句。

8．Dear Mark,

Hearing that you have won the first prize in the program Chinese Bridge hosted by the Confucius Institute, I felt extremely proud of you. Congratulations！

It came as no surprise that you won the contest, because your proficiency in the Chinese language as well as your deep dive into its culture has left a deep impression on me. I wonder how you have become such an excellent Chinese learner. Would you please share your stories of learning Chinese?

I’d appreciate it if you could write me soon. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本篇考查的作文类型是祝贺信。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

要求：

1.表示祝贺；

2.好奇Mark是如何将中文学得那么好；

3.希望收到回复。

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

won the first prize; proud of; an excellent Chinese learner; look forward to

第三步：连词成句

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇

【点睛】[高分句型1]

I would like to express my congratulations to you on your success. 我想对你的成功表示祝贺。express congratulations to sb. on…对某人某方面表示祝贺。

[高分句型2]

Your experience will be of great help to me in my learning. 你的经验对我的学习有很大帮助。be of help=helpful

9．Dear Alex,

Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.

Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.

Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】本文是应用文写作任务，要求写一封感谢信。

【详解】1. 审题立意

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写感谢信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。

2.谋篇布局

书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段回顾Alex对你的帮助；最后一段表达祝愿。

3. 关键词和句子

根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：leaving for the United States soon，express my heartfelt gratitude，unbelievable progress，cheer me up。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。

【点睛】本文开门见山，表达了写信的目的；之后详细介绍了Alex对自己的帮助，详略得当，内容完整，同时使用了高级词汇和高级句子。高级词汇：eagerly，heartfelt gratitude，Honestly speaking，professional guidance等；高级句式：Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence.使用了让步状语从句和定语从句。这些都提升了文章的档次

10．Dear Miss Brown,

I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for your kind help in the school English Drama Festival, which has turned out to be an amazing success.

It’s so nice of you to have offered us a class of presentation skills and basic stage techniques. Under your professional guidance, the participants gave such an impressive performance. Some students overcame the fear of acting in front of audience and gained tremendous confidence. Others developed communication skills and knew how to cooperate in a team. Most importantly, this activity has fueled our passion for English drama.

Many thanks for your time and support.

Yours,

Li Hua

【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求考生给Miss Brown写一封感谢信，感谢她在学校会举办的英语戏剧节中提供的帮助。

【详解】这是写给外教Miss Brown的一封感谢信。文章话题比较贴近学生生活，所给要点比较简单，难度不大。因为是感谢信，所以用于应该礼貌客气。考生可以先根据要点提示列出写作大纲，首先应该表示对Miss Brown的感激，可以选用Thanks for……、I’m thankful/grateful等字眼。其次，要明确Miss Brown提供了哪些帮助；最后，要写出同学们的收获。第二和第三要点应该用过去时态。列完大纲之后，对大纲进行遣词造句，细节等方面的扩展。可以考虑使用定语从句、非谓语动词、名词性从句等。最后，可以用适当的连接词将三个要点连接起来，突出文章的紧凑性和连贯性。

【点睛】所给范文要点齐全，条理清楚。长短句交叉使用，表达自然顺畅。适当运用了一些较好的句式。例如：定语从句（which has turned out to be an amazing success）；非谓语动词（to have offered us a class of presentation skills and basic stage techniques）等。