高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信

感谢信/祝贺信

1．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。作为你校英语戏剧社的负责人，在毕业前的活动上你将做离任发言。请你用英文写一份发言稿，内容包括：

1. 回顾开展的主要活动与收获；

2. 表达感谢及祝愿。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Good morning, everyone!

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2．假如你是校学生会主席李华。学生会最近举办了英语戏剧节（English Drama Festival）。在此期间，你的外教老师 Miss Brown 给予你们大力指导和帮助。活动圆满结束后，请你代表全体同学，给她发一封电邮，以表示感激之情。

内容包括：

(1)表达感谢；(2)具体帮助；(3)同学收获。

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3．假定你是李华，收到英国朋友Harry的邮件，以下是邮件内容：

Dear Li Hua,

Congratulations on your winning first prize in the Chinese speech contest! Your effort paid off! So who’s the admirable Chinese you finally chose for your speech?

By the way, I really admire your spoken Chinese. I would appreciate it if you could share with me some tips on improving my spoken Chinese.

Congratulations again and looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Harry

请给Harry回一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 感谢他的祝贺和支持;

2. 回复他的问题;

3. 回应他的请求。

要求：

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Harry,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

4．邻里之间互相帮助是和谐社区的体现。假如你叫李华，在过去的几年里，邻居们为你家提供了很多的帮助。请你写一封感谢信，表达对邻居们的谢意。内容包括：

(1)表达对邻居们的感谢；

(2)以后要像他们一样帮助别人。

注意：(1)写作词数应为80左右；

(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear neighbours,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

5．假定你是学生会主席李华，学生会举办的英语演讲比赛（English Speech Contest）得到了外教Pam的大力帮助。活动已圆满结束，请你给她写一封感谢信。内容包括：

1. 表达感谢；

2. 外教的帮助；

3. 同学的收获。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Pam,

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Yours,

Li Hua

6．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你最近读完了外教Jim推荐的一本英文书，请你用英文给Jim写一封邮件，内容包括：

1.表达感谢并分享读书收获;

2.交流后续英文书阅读计划。

注意：1.词数100左右;

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

7．假定你是李华，你的留学生好友Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛(Chinese Traditional Culture Contest)”中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信,内容包括：

1.表示祝贺；

2.回顾他的付出和努力；

3.期待他为弘扬中国文化做出贡献。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

8．假定你是李华，上周末在爬山过程中摔伤，得到了美国游客Anne的帮助。请给她写一封英文电子邮件，内容包括：

1. 表达谢意；2. 回顾事件；3. 期待重逢。

注意：

1. 词数 80 左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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9．假定你是李华，你得知交换生Kathy在省中学生书画大赛中荣获二等奖。请你给她写一封邮件，祝贺她获奖，内容包括：

1. 得知她获奖的消息；

2. 向她表示祝贺；

3. 希望有机会可以和她一同写生。

注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Kathy,

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Yours,

Li Hua

10．假如你是李华，家住北京，你和家人去朋友Tom所在的城市杭州去旅游，回来后你想对他表达感激之情，请根据以下要点给Tom写一封信：

1.感谢Tom的热情款待；

2.在杭州玩得很开心；

3.杭州的风景和美食令人印象深刻；

4.邀请Tom来北京旅游。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

3.提示词汇：招待(treat sb to sth);名胜景点place of interest

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1．Good morning, everyone!

It’s a great honor to deliver my last speech here as the President of English Drama Club.

Time flies over us, but leaves its shadow behind. Never will I forget the colorful activities during the past two years, such as the lectures on Shakespeare’s plays, the course of drama appreciation and our amazing performances at the annual Art Festival. Our club not only gave us a platform to show ourselves, but also offered me a chance to witness the magic of communication and cooperation. My personal ability has been improving as well.

Today I must express my sincere gratitude to all of you. Thank you for always being there to support me. Wish our club a brighter future. Thanks again.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。作为你校英语戏剧社的负责人，在毕业前的活动上你将做离任发言。请你用英文写一份发言稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

机会：chance→opportunity

表达：express→convey

改善：improve→promote

感激：gratitude→appreciation

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Our club not only gave us a platform to show ourselves, but also offered me a chance to witness the magic of communication and cooperation.

拓展句：Not only did our club not only give us a platform to show ourselves, but also it offered me a chance to witness the magic of communication and cooperation.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Never will I forget the colorful activities during the past two years, such as the lectures on Shakespeare’s plays, the course of drama appreciation and our amazing performances at the annual Art Festival. (运用了部分倒装)

[高分句型2] It’s a great honor to deliver my last speech here as the President of English Drama Club. (运用了it作形式主语句型)

2．Dear Miss Brown,

I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for your kind help in the school English Drama Festival, which has turned out to be an amazing success. It’s so nice of you to have offered us various presentation skills and basic stage techniques. Under your professional guidance, the participants gave such an impressive performance. Some students who were afraid of acting in front of audience gained great confidence. Others developed communication skills and knew how to cooperate in a team. Besides, this activity has fueled our passion for English drama.

Many thanks for your help and support.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教老师写封邮件，对他指导和帮助同学们组织英语戏剧节表达感激之情。

【详解】1.词汇积累

诚挚的：sincere→genuine

感激：gratitude→appreciation

极大的：great→tremendous

此外：besides→what’s more

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Under your professional guidance, the participants gave such an impressive performance.

拓展句：Because you had offered professional guidance, the participants gave such an impressive performance.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude for your kind help in the school English Drama Festival, which has turned out to be an amazing success.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Some students who were afraid of acting in front of audience gained great confidence.（运用了who引导的限制性定语从句）

3．Dear Harry,

Many thanks for your congratulations and especially your support, which greatly eases my burden.

Tu Youyou, famous for her important medical discovery, is the admirable Chinese I chose. Not only did she help save more lives, but inspired us to be brave and persistent. As for how to improve your spoken Chinese, why not listen to some Chinese songs and try singing along to improve your pronunciation? What’s more, joining a Chinese club to practise more is a good choice. If needed, I am always here to be your online learning partner.

Hopefully my advice can be of help. Thanks again and best wishes for your Chinese learning.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Harry回一封邮件，感谢他的祝贺和支持，回复他的问题，回应他的请求。

【详解】1.词汇积累

著名的：famous→celebrated

关于：as for→with regard to

此外：what’s more→besides

建议：advice→suggestion

2.句式拓展

原句：Tu Youyou, famous for her important medical discovery, is the admirable Chinese I chose.

拓展句：Tu Youyou, who is famous for her important medical discovery, is the admirable Chinese I chose.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Many thanks for your congratulations and especially your support, which greatly eases my burden.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Not only did she help save more lives, but inspired us to be brave and persistent.（运用了倒装句）

4．One possible version

Dear neighbours,

I’m writing to express my sincere thanks for your help in the past few years, especially during the COVID-19 epidemic. I’m so lucky to live in a friendly community. When I had a fever, you bought medicine for me. Desperate, my family once ran out of food. Again, you lent a hand and supplied enough vegetables for us, which helped us go through the hardest time.

I repeat my thanks for you all. No words can exactly express my gratitude. I will help others like you in the future.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给邻居写一封感谢信，表达对邻居们的谢意。

【详解】1.词汇积累

表达：express→convey

真诚的：sincere→genuine

幸运的：lucky→fortunate

感激：gratitude→thankfulness

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I’m writing to express my sincere thanks for your help in the past few years, especially during the COVID-19 epidemic.

拓展句：I’m writing to express my sincere thanks for the help you offered to me in the past few years, especially during the COVID-19 epidemic.

【点睛】[高分句型1] When I had a fever, you bought medicine for me. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)

[高分句型2] Again, you lent a hand and supplied enough vegetables for us, which helped us go through the hardest time. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

5．One possible version:

Dear Pam,

I am writing this letter to express my heartfelt gratitude for your invaluable support and guidance during the English speech contest. Your unwavering commitment and encouragement have helped us achieve a lot in the competition.

You have invested so much time and effort in preparing us for the contest that we all have learned a lot more about English speech. Your excellent teaching skills, patience, and dedication have been instrumental in improving our English language skills. What’s more, your constructive feedback and suggestions have helped us refine our pronunciation, style and presentation, which were crucial in delivering an impressive speech.

We all feel blessed to have had such a precious opportunity to learn from you. Your contribution has greatly enriched our English learning experience, and we will always cherish the memories of the time spent with you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给外教写一封感谢信，对她在英语演讲比赛中的帮助表达感谢，回忆她提供的帮助，并分享同学们的收获。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

真诚的：heartfelt→genuine, sincere, unfeigned, earnest

宝贵的：invaluable→precious, priceless, inestimable

坚定的：unwavering→steady, unhesitating, tireless

投入：invest→spend, devote, contribute

有助于：be instrumental in→be helpful in, be useful in

提高：improve→sharpen, refine, better

此外：what’s more→in addition, additionally, moreover, furthermore, besides

重要的：crucial→essential, crucial, significant, vital

好运的：blessed→favored, fortunate, lucky, privileged, blissful

珍爱：cherish→treasure, value highly

2. 句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：I am writing this letter to express my heartfelt gratitude for your invaluable support and guidance during the English speech contest. Your unwavering commitment and encouragement have helped us achieve a lot in the competition.

拓展句：I am writing this letter to express my heartfelt gratitude for your invaluable support and guidance during the English speech contest because your unwavering commitment and encouragement have helped us achieve a lot in the competition.

【点睛】【高分句型1】You have invested so much time and effort in preparing us for the contest that we all have learned a lot more about English speech.（运用了so… that…引导的结果状语从句）

【高分句型2】What’s more, your constructive feedback and suggestions have helped us refine our pronunciation, style and presentation, which were crucial in delivering an impressive speech.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

6．Dear Jim,

Thank you for your recommendation of the English novel The Old Man and the Sea.

Having finished reading, I’ve harvested a lot. The tough man who fights against the big fish and sharks alone in the sea inspires me to brave frustrations in my life. And I have learned that we should stick to our dreams no matter what hardships we may encounter.

The book unfolds a new world to me. Thus, I make a plan for further reading. English novels enlightening my mind will be included in my reading list. I intend to read one book a month. While reading, I will take down my understanding in time to gain more beyond the lines.

I would appreciate it if you could give me more recommendations.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生用英文给Jim写一封邮件，内容包括：1.表达感谢并分享读书收获；2.交流后续英文书阅读计划。

【详解】1.词汇积累

完成：finish→complete

激励某人做某事：inspire sb. to do sth.→encourage sb. to do sth.

坚持：stick to→persist in

感谢：appreciate→be grateful

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Thank you for your recommendation of the English novel The Old Man and the Sea.

拓展句：Thank you for your recommendation of the English novel whose name is The Old Man and the Sea.

【点睛】[高分句型1]

The tough man who fights against the big fish and sharks alone in the sea inspires me to brave frustrations in my life.(运用了who引导限制性定语从句)

[高分句型2]

And I have learned that we should stick to our dreams no matter what hardships we may encounter.(运用了that引导宾语从句，no matter what引导让步状语从句)

7．[参考范文]

Dear Peter,

Learning your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.

It came as no surprise, for you are keenly interested in Chinese culture and have been continuously exploring it. Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but also you consulted many locals and professionals, which equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture.

Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to spreading the Chinese culture and make it more accessible to people around the world.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的留学生好友Peter在你市举办的“中国传统文化知识竞赛”中获得外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封信表示祝贺。

【详解】1.词汇积累

赢得：win→bear off

强烈的：keenly→intense

精通：good command of→proficiency in

致力于：devote oneself to→ commit oneself to

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Learning your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.

拓展句：Because I have Learned your winning the first prize in the Chinese Traditional Culture Contest organized by our city, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.

【点睛】【高分句型1】 Not only did you refer to abundant resources, but also you consulted many locals and professionals, which equips you with a comprehensive knowledge and good command of Chinese culture.（运用了倒装句，非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Congratulate you on your success again and I hope you can devote yourself to spreading the Chinese culture and make it more accessible to people around the world.（运用and连接并列句，省略连词的宾语从句）

8．Dear Anne,

I’m writing to show my gratefulness for your help last weekend.

Although the event happened several days ago, it’s still fresh in my mind. While taking photos on a round rock, I suddenly slipped down from the rock and broke my left leg. You rushed to me before others realized what had happened. You performed first aid on my leg and accompanied me until the emergency medical personnel came. Without your help, I couldn’t have recovered so fast.

Thanks again for your kindness. I’m looking forward to getting a chance to thank you in person.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给国游客Anne写一封英文电子邮件，内容包括对她给予的帮助表达谢意，回顾事件并期待重逢。

【详解】1.词汇积累

感激：gratefulness →gratitude

意识到：realize →be aware

到达：come →arrive

机会：chance →opportunity

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Without your help, I couldn’t have recovered so fast.

拓展句：If you hadn’t helped me, I couldn’t have recovered so fast.

【点睛】【高分句型1】While taking photos on a round rock, I suddenly slipped down from the rock and broke my left leg.（运用了“状语从句的省略”句式结构）

【高分句型2】You rushed to me before others realized what had happened.（运用了before引导的时间状语从句以及what引导的宾语从句）

9．Dear Kathy,

Word came that you had won the second prize in the Painting and Calligraphy Competition for Middle School Students in our province.

To be frank, no sooner had I heard the big news than I’d like to say “Congratulations” to you. As a matter of fact, it is not surprising because you have a talent for painting and keep practicing it hard. The glory is what exactly you deserve.

By the way, how I wish there would be a chance for me to paint outdoors with you! Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生Kathy写一封邮件，祝贺她在省中学生书画大赛中荣获二等奖，内容包括得知她获奖的消息、向她表示祝贺及希望有机会可以和她一同写生。

【详解】1.词汇积累

消息：word→news

坦白地说：to be frank → frankly speaking

机会：chance→opportunity

事实上：as a matter of fact→ in fact

2.句式拓展

同位语从句变宾语从句

原句：Word came that you had won the second prize in the Painting and Calligraphy Competition for Middle School Students in our province.

拓展句：I learnt that you had won the second prize in the Painting and Calligraphy Competition for Middle School Students in our province.

【点睛】【高分句型1】As a matter of fact, it is not surprising because you have a talent for painting and keep practicing it hard.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）

【高分句型2】The glory is what exactly you deserve.（运用了what引导的表语从句）

10．Dear Tom,

Thank you for your help and good treat while we were traveling in Hangzhou. You were so kind and friendly to treat us to good meals, and show us around the city. It is really nice to visit Hangzhou, whose beautiful scenery and delicious food made a good impression on me. I had a great time there and learned a lot about Hangzhou. Tom, are you free these days? I would like to invite you to visit Beijing. I’ll show you around places of interest.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，家住北京，你和家人去朋友Tom所在的城市杭州去旅游，回来后你想对他表达感激之情，请根据以下要点给Tom写一封信：感谢Tom的热情款待；在杭州玩得很开心；杭州的风景和美食令人印象深刻；邀请Tom来北京旅游。

【详解】词语积累

帮助：help→assistance

善良的：kind→warm-hearted

很棒的：nice→fantastic

想要做：would like to do→feel like doing

句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I would like to invite you to visit Beijing. I’ll show you around places of interest.

复合句：I would like to invite you to visit Beijing where I’ll show you around places of interest.

【点睛】【高分句型2】Thank you for your help and good treat while we were traveling in Hangzhou. (运用了while引导的时间状语从句)

【高分句型2】It is really nice to visit Hangzhou, whose beautiful scenery and delicious food made a good impression on me. (运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)