高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信

感谢信/祝贺信

1．假如你是李华，上周五你校举办了以“Be a Lifelong learner”为主题的演讲比赛，你的朋友David获得一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。

内容要求：

1. 祝贺获奖；

2. 表达你对该主题的理解。

注意：1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear David,

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

LiHua

2．假定你是李华。你的美国笔友Eric被中国北京大学录取了。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1. 表示祝贺；

2. 询问学习经验。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

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3．假如你是光明高中的学生会主席李华。上周加拿大威斯菲尔德中学(Westfield Secondary School)学生会向你校图书馆捐赠了一批图书，请你给WSS 中学的学生会主席Peter 写一封

信，要点如下：

1.感谢对方捐赠图书。

2.通过EMS国际快递寄去由同学们亲手制作的传统礼物，请对方注意查收。

3.再次表示感谢并希望今后更多地开展两校之间的交流活动。

注意：

1. 词数100左右;2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Peter,

I’m Li Hua,

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

4．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Kevin来信说他在“留学生汉字书法竞赛Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International Students”取得了第一名的好成绩。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 表示祝贺；

2. 肯定他的成绩和努力；

3. 期待与他交流学习心得。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式作答。

Dear Kevin,

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

5．假定你是李华，即将参加以“My Dream University”为主题的校英语演讲比赛。请给你的外国好友Jack写封邮件，内容包括：

1. 征求备赛意见；

2. 表示感谢。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Jack,

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

6．假定你是李华，得知你的朋友Frank被牛津大学(University of Oxford)录取，请给他写一封英文邮件，内容包括：

1.表示祝贺;

2.赞扬他的努力及对你的鼓舞;

3.美好祝愿。

注意：1.词数100左右;

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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7．假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。上周英国友好交流学校学生会向你校捐赠了一批图书，请你给对方学校的学生会主席Peter写一封信，要点如下：

1. 感谢对方捐赠图书。

2. 通过 EMS 寄去由同学们亲手编织的中国结，请对方注意查收。

3. 希望今后更多地开展两校之间的交流活动。

参考词汇：中国结 Chinese knot

注意：

(1)词数不少于100;

(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯;

(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Peter,

I am Li Jin, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang High School.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Jin

8．假设你是天津中学学生李津。你的加拿大朋友 Chris 得知你被滑铁卢大学(University of Waterloo) 录取，写信向你表示祝贺。请按以下提示写封回信：

1) 对 Chris 的关心和祝贺表示感谢；

2) 告知报考的专业及原因， 谈谈大学毕业后的打算；

3) 希望 Chris 针对加拿大的大学生活提一些建议。

注意：

(1) 词数不少于 100；

(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。

Dear Chris,

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Jin

9．假定你是红星中学高三学生李华。近期，你校外教Steve做了一场关于读后续写的在线讲座（A Lecture on Continuation Writing）。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1. 表达感谢并简述你的收获；

2. 说明你在读后续写中的困惑并寻求帮助。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Steve,

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

10．假定你是李华，春节期间你和朋友Mike一起出游，你刚收到他发给你的照片。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 收到照片表示感谢；

2. 回顾一起度过的时光；

3. 邀请他周末来家作客。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下各式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Mike,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

1．Dear David,

I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your wining the first prize in the speech contest entitled “Be a Lifelong Learner”. As your friend, I just want you to know how glad I am at your success.

I’m deeply impressed by your speech. Lifelong learning is the best education. For one thing, it helps us adapt to changes. We are supposed to embrace new technology and learn new knowledge. For another, learning is a good way to remain curious and stay young.

Your success has greatly encouraged me to be a lifelong learner. Hope we can both continue to study to improve ourselves.

Congratulations again!

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，上周五你校举办了以“Be a Lifelong learner”为主题的演讲比赛，你的朋友David获得一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封英文电子邮件向他表示祝贺。

【详解】1.词汇积累

演讲：speech→lecture

比赛：contest→competition

接受：embrace→accept

高兴的：glad→happy

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your wining the first prize in the speech contest entitled “Be a Lifelong Learner”.

拓展句：Learning that you won the first prize in the speech contest entitled “Be a Lifelong Learner”, I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you.

【点睛】[高分句型1] As your friend, I just want you to know how glad I am at your success. (运用了how引导宾语从句)

[高分句型2] I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your wining the first prize in the speech contest entitled “Be a Lifelong Learner”. (运用了动名词的复合结构作宾语)

2．One possible version:

Dear Eric,

Knowing that you have been admitted to Peking University, I’m so happy that I can’t wait to offer you my heartfelt congratulations.

Opportunities favor those who are well-prepared. I believe that the final realization of your goal comes from years of hard work. Now your efforts have paid off. Congratulations! I’m sure that, at Peking University where more chances will be available for you, you will make even more remarkable achievements. Besides, I believe that you must have some valuable learning experience that helps you in your study. I’d appreciate it if you could share some with me.

Congratulations again and best wishes for your bright future.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于英文中的应用文写作。要求考生给自己的笔友Eric写信，祝贺他被北京大学录取，并向其询问学习经验。

【详解】1.词汇积累

源自于：come from→ originate from

坚信：be sure → be convinced

可得到的：available→ accessible/at hand

此外：besides → what’s more

2.句式拓展

句式转换

原句：Knowing that you have been admitted to Peking University, I’m so happy that I can’t wait to offer you my heartfelt congratulations.

拓展句：When I know that you have been admitted to Peking University, I’m so happy that I can’t wait to offer you my heartfelt congratulations.

【点睛】【高分句型1】 Opportunities favor those who are well-prepared.（运用了who引导的定语从句）

【高分句型2】I’m sure that, at Peking University where more chances will be available for you, you will make even more remarkable achievements.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和where引导的定语从句）

3．Dear Peter,

I’m Li Hua, president of the student union of Guangming high school. On behalf of my school, I’m writing to express my sincere thanks for donating books to us last week.

 Our schools have maintained good relationship with each other, and we have benefited a lot. It’s very kind and generous of you to donate a number of books to us, which are informative and helpful to our students. In return, we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots made by us students by EMS. Please note to check.

 I hope we can have more and better communication and cooperation in the future. Thank you again for the books you generally donated. Looking forward to your next visit.

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】这是一篇说明文。文章要求考生给WSS中学的学生会主席Peter写信感谢他们捐赠的图书并告知他已经通过EMS国际快递寄去由同学们亲手制作的传统礼物，并希望今后更多地开展两校之间的交流活动。

【详解】1.词汇积累

诚挚的：sincere→genuine

表达：express→ convey

希望：hope→ wish

代表：on behalf of→ represent

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：In return, we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots made by us students by EMS.

拓展句：In return, we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots which were made by us students by EMS.

【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s very kind and generous of you to donate a number of books to us, which are informative and helpful to our students.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】 I hope we can have more and better communication and cooperation in the future. （运用了省略从属连词that的宾语从句，作动词hope的宾语）

4．One possible version:

Dear Kevin,

Learning that you have won the first place in the Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International Students, pretty excited, I’m writing to express my sincere congratulations to you.

Just as the saying goes, you reap what you sow. It’s your passion and hard work that contribute to your winning! Interested in Chinese culture, you have long been devoted to Calligraphy, learning from masters and keeping practicing every day. How I wish you could share your experience and reflection with me as I am eager to get my Calligraphy improved!

Once again, congratulations on your splendid achievement. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国朋友Kevin来信说他在“留学生汉字书法竞赛Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International Students”取得了第一名的好成绩，要求考生写一封邮件表示祝贺。

【详解】1.词汇积累

相当、非常：pretty → quite

表达：express → convey

促成：contribute to → lead to

极佳的、非常好的：splendid →unexceptionable

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Learning that you have won the first place in the Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International Students, pretty excited, I’m writing to express my sincere congratulations to you.

拓展句：The fact that you have won the first place in the Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International Students makes me quite excited, which is also the reason why I am writing this letter to you.

【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s your passion and hard work that contribute to your winning!(运用了强调句式)

【高分句型2】How I wish you could share your experience and reflection with me as I am eager to get my Calligraphy improved!(运用了感叹句和as引导的原因状语从句)

5．Dear Jack,

How are you recently? I’m going to participate in an English speech competition themed My Dream University. With time going by, I’m getting increasingly nervous, so I’m writing to ask for your advice.

Knowing that you have taken part in many competitions, I’d appreciate it if you could give me some practical suggestions. For example, how can I adjust my mindset, improve my contents and hold the attention from audience?

I truly believe that with your help, I’ll have a better performance. Thanks a lot from the bottom of my heart. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，即将参加以“My Dream University”为主题的校英语演讲比赛。请给你的外国好友Jack写封邮件。

【详解】1.词汇积累

参加：participate in/ take part in→join in

比赛：competition→contest

建议：advice/suggestion→tip

例如：for example→for instance

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：I truly believe that with your help, I’ll have a better performance.

拓展句：If you could offer your help, I’ll have a better performance.

【点睛】[高分句型1]With time going by, I’m getting increasingly nervous, so I’m writing to ask for your advice. (运用了with的复合结构)

[高分句型2]Knowing that you have taken part in many competitions, I’d appreciate it if you could give me some practical suggestions. (运用了that引导宾语从句)

6．Dear Frank,

Good news travels fast! Please accept my hearty congratulation on your graduation from senior school and admission to University of Oxford.

I know how hard you have been working these years and I am very proud of you for your success. I am firmly convinced that it is your hard work that contributes to your success today. Just as the old saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” It is a reward for your diligence and persistence. Your success is also a great encouragement to me to study harder and I hope that one day I will enter a famous university just like you.

I believe it will be a new beginning and a chance for you to embrace a fuller life and pave the way for a brilliant future. All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以李华的身份就朋友Frank被牛津大学录取一事，表达自己的祝贺，赞扬他的努力和对自己的鼓舞，以及表达自己美好的祝愿。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

真挚的：hearty→sincere/genuine

坚决地：firmly→steadily

鼓励：encouragement→motivation

希望：hope→wish

2. 句式拓展

同义句

原句：I know how hard you have been working these years and I am very proud of you for your success.

复合句：Knowing how hard you have been working these years，I am very proud of you for your success.

【点睛】【高分句型1】 I am firmly convinced that it is your hard work that contributes to your success today.(that引导宾语从句)

【高分句型2】 I hope that one day I will enter a famous university just like you.（that引导的宾语从句）

7．

Dear Peter,

I am Li Jin, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang High School. On behalf of my school, I am writing to express our sincere thanks to you. It’s very kind and generous of you to donate a number of books to us, which we believe are very informative and helpful to our students. In return, by EMS we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots made by us students. Please note to check. In the future, I hope we can have more and better communication and cooperation.

Thank you again for the books you generously donated.

                                                                                                                                                                   Yours

                                                                                                                                                                  Li Jin

【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。上周英国友好交流学校学生会向你校捐赠了一批图书，要求考生给对方学校的学生会主席Peter写一封感谢信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

诚挚的：sincere→genuine

赠送：donate→give away

有用的：helpful→useful

交流：communication→exchange

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：In return, by EMS we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots made by us students.

拓展句：In return, by EMS we have sent you some beautiful Chinese knots which were made by us students.

【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s very kind and generous of you to donate a number of books to us, which we believe are very informative and helpful to our students.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)

【高分句型2】In the future, I hope we can have more and better communication and cooperation.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)

8．Dear Chris,

How is everything going? I’m glad to receive your letter and know you’ve been admitted to the University of Waterloo. I’m writing to offer my warmest congratulations.

I have decided to major in computer science. There are some reasons why I made such a decision. Firstly, with the development of society, computers are playing an important role in many aspects of our life. Secondly, browsing the Internet is one of my hobbies, so I think I can study computer science well. Last but not least, being good at computer science may help me find a good job after graduating from college.

What interests me is whether you have adapted to the university life. I would appreciate it if you could share some suggestions on the university life with me.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Jin

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Chris写封电子邮件，对他被滑铁卢大学录取一事表示祝贺，并就大学生活向他征求意见。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

重要的：important→significant

擅长：be good at→do well in

适应：adapt to→adjust to

建议：suggestion→recommendation

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Firstly, with the development of society, computers are playing an important role in many aspects of our life.

拓展句：Firstly, as society is developing, computers are playing an important role in many aspects of our life.

【点睛】【高分句型1】There are some reasons why I made such a decision.（运用了why引导定语从句）

【高分句型2】Last but not least, being good at computer science may help me find a good job after graduating from college. （运用了动名词作主语，不定式作宾语补足语，动名词作宾语）

【高分句型3】What interests me is whether you have adapted to the university life.（运用了what引导的主语从句和whether引导的表语从句）

9．参考范文

Dear Steve,

Thank you very much indeed for the wonderful lecture you gave on continuation writing. I’ve learnt really a lot, because you helped me overcome the bottleneck—how to increase the reading and writing speed.

However, I am still puzzled by some difficulties in it. For example, I find it hard to grasp the gist of the passages, and I also feel it hard to continue when confronted with new words. What can I do? Would you please give me some advice? I would be really grateful if you could help me out.

Thank you very much again. Your earliest reply would be appreciated.

Yours,

Li hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Steve写封电子邮件，对他为学生做的读后续写的在线讲座表达感谢并简述你的收获，说明你在读后续写中的困惑并寻求帮助。

【详解】1.词汇积累

然而：however→nevertheless

困惑的：puzzled→confused

困难的：hard→difficult

感激的：grateful→thankful

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Your earliest reply would be appreciated.

拓展句：I’d appreciate it if you can give me your earliest reply.

【点睛】[高分句型1] Thank you very much indeed for the wonderful lecture you gave on continuation writing. (运用了that/which引导的限制性定语从句，省略了that/which)

[高分句型2] I’ve learnt really a lot, because you helped me overcome the bottleneck—how to increase the reading and writing speed. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)

10．One possible version:

Dear Mike,

How are you? Thank you for sending me the photos that bring back those wonderful memories.

The time we spent together during the Spring Festival was just incredible. We woke up early to see the sunrise over the sea. On the way back, we tasted the fine local food, which was impressive indeed. And what was truly unforgettable was the hospitality I had as a guest at your home. I really had a great time.

I’d like to invite you over this weekend. It will be a chance for you to meet my family. Looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Mike回一封邮件，内容包括：收到照片表示感谢、回顾一起度过的时光、邀请他周末来家作客。

【详解】1.词汇积累

难以置信的：incredible →unbelievable

真正地：truly→authentically

玩得愉快：have a great time → have fun

机会：chance →opportunity

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：It will be a chance for you to meet my family.

拓展句：It will be a chance that you will meet my family.

【点睛】【高分句型1】On the way back, we tasted the fine local food, which was impressive indeed.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】And what was truly unforgettable was the hospitality I had as a guest at your home.（运用what引导的主语从句，省略了关系代词的定语从句）