山西高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信

这是一份山西高考英语写作分类训练：邀请信，共20页。试卷主要包含了假定你叫李华，假如你是李华等内容，欢迎下载使用。

邀请信
1．假定你是李华，你的城市将有一个大型抗击新冠肺炎英雄人物展，请写一封邮件邀请你的朋友Adam同去。内容包括：
1.展出时间和地点；
2. 展出形式与内容；
3. 表达期待。
提示：C0VID-19 （新型冠状病毒肺炎）；  pandemic （流行病）
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 结束语已为你写好。
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2．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Henry对中国传统乐器感兴趣，想在寒假来中国学习，请你写信给他推荐一种乐器和学习该乐器的方式。内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 推荐他学习古筝；
3. 邀请他参加该课程。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.
Dear Henry,
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．假定你是李华，寒假期间在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆2月16号要举办中国画展览。请用英语给你的英国朋友Jeff 写一封信邀请他和你一同前往。内容包括：
1.展览时间和地点；
2.展览内容；
3.期待回复。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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4．假定你是李华,校学生会主席,请写封邮件邀请你校英国交换生 Peter 参加学校和市中医院(the Municipal Hospital of Chinese Medicine)联合举办的“中医药健康文化进校园”活动(the Campus Campaign for Chinese Medicine & Health Culture). 要点包括:
1. 活动目的、时间、地点:
2. 活动内容:咨询义诊,知识讲座,活动体验:
3. 简介中医药:发祥于中华,疗效特殊,传播世界.
注意:1. 词数100左右:开头和结尾已给,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear Peter,
I'm Li Hua, chairman of the Students' Union. I'm writing to
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Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
5．假定你叫李华。随着春节的来临，学校定于本周六在图书馆放映电影《年兽传说》(The Legend of Nian)。请给你校喜欢中国文化的交换生Peter写封邮件，邀请他与你一同前往观看。内容包括：
1. 时间地点；2. 电影内容：“年”的传说；3. 表达愿望。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I have good news for you. The Spring Festival is around the corner.
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．假定你是李华，你校交换生David对清明节的习俗很感兴趣。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 清明节简介；
2. 过节的风俗习惯。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 信的开头和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：革命烈士revolutionary martyrs
Dear David,
I'm glad that you're interested in the Chinese Qingming Festival.
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Yours,
Li Hua
7．假定你是李华，你的留学生同学 Smith 对中国传统文化很感兴趣，想要了解端午节。请你写信向他介绍中国的传统节日——端午节。包括以下要点：
1. 端午节的时间及起源（农历五月初五）；
2. 端午节的习俗；
3. 邀请他端午节那天和你一起过节。
Dear Smith,
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Yours,
Lihua
8．假定你是李华，下个月要参加学校的英文歌曲大赛，你想邀请本校交换生Bob和你一起 演唱。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.邀请助演；
2.请他帮助选歌；
3.约定排练时间和地点。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Bob,
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．假如你是李华。你的美国笔友Mike即将随其父母来中国，并在中国度过中秋节。他来信向你询问有关中秋节的习俗，请你根据以下要点写信告诉他。
要点如下：
1．历史悠久。2．中国人独有的传统节日。3．家庭团圆。
4．共进晚餐。5．吃月饼。6．赏月。
要求：1.词数120左右。2．可适当添加细节。
Dear Mike，
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10．假设你是李华，曾在美国学习半年，现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师Mr. Smith, 但没有其联系方式。请根据以下要点给你的美国同学Tom 写一封信：
1、感谢Tom 对你英语学习的帮助；
2、询问Mr. Smith 的近况并索要其联系方式；
3、邀请Tom 在春节期间来中国旅游。
注意：1. 词数100；
2. 可适当增加细节。
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1．Dear Adam，
How is everything going recently? A large exhibition about heroes fighting against COVID-19 is scheduled in our city. I am writing to invite you to participate in it.
The exhibition is to be held in the City Museum, starting at 3 pm. on July 12 and lasting approximately three hours. During that period, you will see many heroes from all walks of life fighting against the pandemic, most of whom are doctors and nurses. They are the most courageous people who bravely triumph over the disease. All these will be displayed in the forms of either pictures or videos.
I am convinced that the exhibition is sure to be impressive and you will be deeply moved by their devotion and selflessness. Looking forward to your coming.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文, 要求写一封邮件。
【详解】第一步：
审题：邮件   邀请Adam参加大型抗击新冠肺炎英雄人物展
人称：第三人称
时态：一般现在时、一般将来时
结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分提出邀请，第二部分说明展出时间、地点、内容与形式，第三部分期待他的参加。
要点：
1. 提出邀请：邀请Adam参加大型抗击新冠肺炎英雄人物展
2．展出时间、地点、形式与内容
①时间、地点：7月12 日下午三点，市博物馆
②内容：抗击新冠肺炎疫情的英雄人物展
③形式：图片或视频
3．期待他的参加
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）
exhibition；hero；fight against；participate in；from all walks of life；courageous；triumph over；display；in the forms of；impressive；be deeply moved by； devotion；selflessness  
第三步：连词成句
(1)A large exhibition is scheduled in our city.
(2)I am writing to invite you to participate in it.
(3)The exhibition is to be held in the City Museum.
(4) The exhibition will start at 3 pm. on July 12.
(5) The exhibition will last approximately three hours.
(6)You will see many heroes from all walks of life fighting against the pandemic.
(7) Most of the heroes are doctors and nurses.
(8)They are the most courageous people.
(9) They bravely triumph over the disease.
(10) All these will be displayed in the forms of either pictures or videos.
(11) I am convinced that the exhibition is sure to be impressive.
(12) You will be deeply moved by their devotion and selflessness.  
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)
将（4）（5）两句用现在分词作状语，连接下面三个句子成一个句子
(3)The exhibition is to be held in the City Museum.
(4) The exhibition will start at 3 pm. on July 12.
(5) The exhibition will last approximately three hours.
→The exhibition is to be held in the City Museum, starting at 3 pm. on July 12 and lasting approximately three hours.
用定语从句连接下面两个句子
(6)You will see many heroes from all walks of life fighting against the pandemic.
(7) Most of the heroes are doctors and nurses.
→ You will see many heroes from all walks of life fighting against the pandemic, most of whom are doctors and nurses.
用定语从句连接下面两个句子
(8)They are the most courageous people.
(9) They bravely triumph over the disease.
→They are the most courageous people who bravely triumph over the disease.  
适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次，增加文章的可读性。
【点睛】范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如 exhibition；fight against；participate in；from all walks of life；courageous；triumph over；display；in the forms of；impressive；be deeply moved by；devotion；selflessness  
等；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如现在分词作定语的运用 you will see many heroes from all walks of life fighting against the pandemic；定语从句的运用They are the most courageous people who bravely triumph over the disease；被动句式的运用All these will be displayed in the forms of either pictures or videos等。
2．Dear Henry,
I’m delighted that you’re coming to China and take a great interest in Chinese traditional musical instruments. I am writing to advise you to learn Guzheng in an extra-curricular course in our school.
As a traditional Chinese musical instrument, Guzheng has beautiful sounds and gains great popularity worldwide. The course is given by Mr Chen, who is experienced in this field and popular with students. It’s given at 9 am every Saturday in our school library and especially suitable for beginners. I’m sure you will fall in love with Guzheng if you attend it.
Looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向笔友推荐一种乐器和学习该乐器的方式。
【详解】根据题目要求，本文属于提纲类作文。内容包括1. 表示欢迎；2. 推荐他学习古筝；
3. 邀请他参加该课程。写作时需注意四点：一是要详略得当,本文要点已经给出，结合要点可知，推荐学习古筝的理由和学习古筝的好处要重点描写。二要适当地增加细节,对学习古筝的方式可以适当的展开，展开的内容要和主题有关系，切勿天马行空，胡乱发展；三是恰当地使用连接过渡词,以使行文连贯。四在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。
【点睛】本文段落层次清晰,行文连贯,要点齐全,言简意赅,目的明确,较具有说服力。还使用一些连词, 让文章条理清楚。使用了被动语态、一些复杂句和复合句,使文章更加生动而流畅,这些都体现了较强的驾驭语言的能力。具体如下: I’m delighted that you’re coming to China and take a great interest in Chinese traditional musical instruments.用到了宾语从句；The course is given by Mr Chen, who is experienced in this field and popular with students.用到了非限制性定语从句；
3．Dear Jeff,
How are you doing? Knowing that you are crazy about Chinese culture, I am more than delighted to invite you to attend a Chinese painting exhibition.
As scheduled, the exhibition will be held at the local art gallery on February 16. A variety of traditional Chinese paintings by famous Chinese artists will be on display. If interested, you’ll have a chance to create your own painting under the guidance of the artists on the spot. I’m sure the visit will not only broaden our horizons but also help us have a better understanding of Chinese traditional paintings.
Would you like to go to the exhibition together with me? I’d appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience.
Yours ,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封邀请信。
【详解】第一步：
审题：邀请信   邀请Jeff参加中国画展览
人称：第一、二和三人称
时态：一般将来时
结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分邀请Jeff参加中国画展览，第二部分说明展览的具体安排和内容，第三部分期待他的回复。
要点：
1. 邀请Jeff参加中国画展览
2．展览的具体安排
①展览时间和地点：2月16 日，当地美术馆
②展览内容：中国著名艺术家创作的传统中国画
3．期待他的回复
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）
be crazy about；delighted；invite sb. to do…；attend a Chinese painting exhibition；hold；
the local art gallery；on February 16；on display；have a chance to do…；under the guidance of；broaden one’s horizons；have a better understanding of
第三步：连词成句
(1)I know that you are crazy about Chinese culture.
(2) I am more than delighted to invite you to attend a Chinese painting exhibition.
(3) The exhibition will be held at the local art gallery on February 16.
(4)A variety of traditional Chinese paintings by famous Chinese artists will be on display.
(5) If you are interested, you’ll have a chance to create your own painting under the guidance of the artists on the spot.
(6) The visit will broaden our horizons.
(7 ) It will help us have a better understanding of Chinese traditional paintings.
(8) Would you like to go to the exhibition together with me?
(9) I’d appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience.
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)
将第一个句子用分词作状语，连接下面两个句子
(1)I know that you are crazy about Chinese culture.
(2) I am more than delighted to invite you to attend a Chinese painting exhibition.
→Knowing that you are crazy about Chinese culture, I am more than delighted to invite you to attend a Chinese painting exhibition.
用状语从句的省略形式改写下面的句子
(5)If you are interested, you’ll have a chance to create your own painting under the guidance of the artists on the spot.
→If interested, you’ll have a chance to create your own painting under the guidance of the artists on the spot.
用not only… but also 连接下面的句子
(6) The visit will broaden our horizons .
(7 )It will help us have a better understanding of Chinese traditional paintings.
→The visit will not only broaden our horizons but also help us have a better understanding of Chinese traditional paintings.
适当地运用高级词汇、复杂句式提升文章的档次，增加文章的可读性。
【点睛】范文要点全面，结构清晰，层次分明，上下文连贯，在表达时用到了很多高级词汇，如 be crazy about；invite sb. to do…；attend a Chinese painting exhibition；on display；have a chance to do…；under the guidance of；broaden one’s horizons；have a better understanding of
等；复杂句式的运用提升了文章层次，如被动语态的运用the exhibition will be held at the local art gallery on February 16；状语从句省略形式的运用 If interested, you’ll have a chance to create your own painting under the guidance of the artists on the spot；not only… but also 并列连词的运用the visit will not only broaden our horizons but also help us have a better understanding of Chinese traditional paintings等。
4．Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Students’ Union. I’m writing to invite you to join in the Campus Campaign for Chinese Medicine & Health Culture.
This Campaign launched by our school and the Municipal Hospital of Chinese Medicine together is to be held in our school on January 18, 2020, from 8:30 am to 4:00 pm, with an aim to promote Chinese traditional medicine and health culture among us students so that we can learn more about them through a series of activities, like consulting doctors for advice, getting examined and treated for free, listening to lectures and involve in experience activities. Chinese traditional medicine, which originated from China over 5,000 years ago, has always been popular with the Chinese for its effective treatment of diseases. Happily, it has now spread worldwide, benefiting more and more people. Hopefully you’ll come and join us if you’re interested.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，根据要求写一封电子邮件，是一封邀请信。
【详解】第一步：应用文表达，开头结尾给出，注意格式规范，根据提示，整篇文章应使用一般时态。
第二步：根据提纲依次写出活动目的，时间，地点和活动内容等；内容包含全面，关键词选用合理，如join in，consult…for…，be popular with等等。
第三步：连词成文，结构衔接得体。
【点睛】第一段，开门见山，表达目的，清晰明确，简单明了。
第二段，说明活动的目的，时间，地点，内容和简要介绍中医药，结构连接紧凑，文章内容充实。
第三段，符合应用文结尾格式，结构严谨。
文章内容完整，提纲要点全面，格式规范，语篇连贯，使用长难句，显示考生有很高的英语驾驭能力，如This Campaign launched by our school and the Municipal Hospital of Chinese Medicine together is to be held in our school on January 18, 2020, from 8:30 am to 4:00 pm, with an aim to promote Chinese traditional medicine and health culture among us students so that we can learn more about them through a series of activities, like consulting doctors for advice, getting examined and treated for free, listening to lectures and involve in experience activities.
5．Dear Peter,
I have good news for you. The Spring Festival is around the corner. And there is going to be a film called The Legend of Nian on the second floor of our school library. I am writing to invite you to go with me.
The film will be on from 9:00 - 11:00 this Saturday. As I know, you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, so I think it is just your cup of tea. The film is about the old legend of a cruel terrible wild animal in China called the year beast or in Chinese “Nian”. What’s more, it is a good idea for you to learn something about the beast in advance.
I sincerely hope that you can go with me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，邀请Peter与你一同前往观看电影《年兽传说》(The Legend of Nian)。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
人称：第一、三人称；
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总-分-总法
要点：
1. 时间地点；
2. 电影内容：“年”的传说；
3. 表达愿望。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
the Spring Festival；around the corner；be going to；The Legend of Nian；be interested in；traditional；Chinese culture；cup of tea；year beast；in advance等
第三步：连词成句
1. I have good news for you.
2. The Spring Festival is around the corner.
3. There is going to be a film called The Legend of Nian on the second floor of our school library.
4. I am writing to invite you to go with me.
5. The film will be on from 9:00 - 11:00 this Saturday.
6. You are interested in traditional Chinese culture, so I think it is just your cup of tea.
7. The film is about the old legend of a cruel terrible wild animal in China called the year beast or in Chinese “Nian”.
8. It is a good idea for you to learn something about the beast in advance.
9. I sincerely hope that you can go with me.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：What’s more；and；As I know；
2.表因果关系：so；for；
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高分句型，如And there is going to be a film called The Legend of Nian on the second floor of our school library.使用了there be句式和非谓语动词作定语；I am writing to invite you to go with me.使用了不定式作目的状语；As I know, you are interested in traditional Chinese culture, so I think it is just your cup of tea.使用了so连接的结果状语从句；What’s more, it is a good idea for you to learn something about the beast in advance. 使用了it作形式主语；I sincerely hope that you can go with me.使用了由that引导的宾语从句等。还使用了一些固定短语，如：around the corner；be going to；be interested in；cup of tea；in advance等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．Dear David，
I'm glad that you're interested in the Chinese Qingming Festival.
Qingming Festival, also called Tomb­Sweeping Day, falls on April 4 or April 5. It has been celebrated in China for centuries. It is a seasonal symbol indicating sowing time. It is also a time of many activities, among which the main one is tomb sweeping. On this day people will remember family members by cleaning their tombs and paying respect with offerings. Schools will organize students to sweep tombs for revolutionary martyrs. Besides, people will wear willow branches and eat eggs to keep ghosts away.
Not only is it a day for commemorating the dead, but it is also a fine time to appreciate the beautiful scenes of nature. So would you like to go for a spring outing with me during the Qingming Festival holidays?
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达要求写一封邮件，属于书信应用文。
【详解】1．审题立意： 本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。
2．谋篇布局： 书信格式、称呼、开头和落款文中已经给出。首段已经给出，中间段介绍清明节及其风俗，最后一段写个人邀请。
3．关键词和句子： 根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：fall/celebrate/seasonal/indicate/remember/pay respect with offering/willow branches/keep away/commemorate/appreciate/scene/spring outing/非谓语动词作状语/定语从句/倒装句。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易衔接成文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。
【点睛】本文语言简练，详略得当，内容完整，同时使用了高级词汇和高级句子。高级词汇：pay respect with offering (表示敬意)/willow branches (柳枝)/keep away (赶走)/commemorate (庆祝)/ spring outing (春游)等；高级句式：非谓语动词的运用It is a seasonal symbol indicating sowing time.运用了倒装句Not only is it a day for commemorating the dead, but it is also a fine time to appreciate the beautiful scenes of nature.另外，本文注重了语言的交流性与真实性，发自内心地抒发了民族自豪感，触动心灵，体现了语言的情感美。
7．Dear Smith,
Knowing that you are interested in a traditional Chinese festival, which is called Dragon Boat Festival by Chinese, I am writing to introduce it to you.
The Dragon Boat Festival falls on the 5th day of the 5th lunar month in honor of the great poet, Qu Yuan. As is known to us, in order to warn the king, Qu yuan sacrifice his life to jump into the Miluo River. People were touched by his behavior and set the day he died as a festival to show honor to him. On that day, we often eat rice-dumplings and drink a special wine. Besides, what should be stressed is the dragon-boat racing, which is very interesting and exciting. People gather on both sides of the river to watch the participants spare no effort to make for the finishing line.
The dragon boat festival is approaching. Would you like to join us to spend it? Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Lihua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。主要给留学生同学介绍中国的传统节日—端午节。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
要求：1. 端午节的时间及起源（农历五月初五）
      2. 端午节的习俗
      3. 邀请他端午节那天和你一起过节
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be interested in; traditional Chinese festival; fall on; in honor of; as is known to us; in order to; jump into; Besides; spare no effort to; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. Knowing that you are interested in a traditional Chinese festival, which is called Dragon Boat Festival by Chinese.
2. The Dragon Boat Festival falls on the 5th day of the 5th lunar month in honor of the great poet, Qu Yuan.
3. As is known to us, in order to warn the king, Qu yuan sacrifice his life to jump into the Miluo River.
4. Besides, what should be stressed is the dragon-boat racing, which is very interesting and exciting.
5. People gather on both sides of the river to watch the participants spare no effort to make for the finishing line.
6. The dragon boat festival is approaching. Would you like to join us to spend it?
7. Looking forward to your coming.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的复合句，如状语从句和定语从句：Knowing that you are interested in a traditional Chinese festival, which is called Dragon Boat Festival by Chinese, I am writing to introduce it to you.这句话运用了Knowing开头的原因状语从句以及which引导的非限制定语从句。还使用了一些固定词组，如be interested in; traditional Chinese festival; fall on; in honor of等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
8．Dear Bob,
How is everything going? I am writing this letter to invite you join me to take part in the "English Song Contest" to be held next month. I know you are also a music lover, and I believe we two will surely make a great team.
I'd like to sing a song about friendship, but I am kind of stuck with the selection. What do you suggest? If you agree to join in the activity, would you like to practice in the garden of our school from 5:00 to 6:00 in the afternoon? If you have difficulty, please let me know.
Any recommendation on your part shall be highly appreciated. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封邀请信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，下个月要参加学校的英文歌曲大赛,你想邀请本校交换生Bob和你一起 演唱。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.邀请助演；2.请他帮助选歌；3.约定排练时间和地点。时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；take part in, make a great team ,agree to, recommendation, highly appreciated, looking forward to等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级句式，take part in the "English Song Contest" to be held next month.运用了不定式的被动形式；you are also a music lover, I believe we two will surely make a great team.运用了宾语从句。全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
9．Dear_Mike,_
I'm_glad_to_know_that_you_are_coming_to_China_with_your_parents_and_spend_the_MidAutumn_Day_here.
The MidAutumn Day is a traditional festival with a long history which is celebrated only by Chinese people. It falls on August 15th of the Chinese lunar year, when people of a family get together and enjoy the dinner together. After that they eat mooncakes, which stands for the spirit of the festival—unity.Often, if the weather permits, they will go out of the house to enjoy the bright moonlight, talking about something pleasant. It is one of the most important festivals for Chinese people.
I wish you a pleasant journey and I'm sure you will like our traditional MidAutumn Day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生以李华的名义向笔友Mike介绍中秋节的习俗。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时
结构：总分
要求：
1. 表明写信目的
2. 介绍中秋节的习俗（历史悠久；中国人独有的传统节日；家庭团圆；
共进晚餐；吃月饼；赏月；）
3. 邀请他来过中秋节

第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be glad to do sth/ with a long history/ belong to/ the symbol of/ get together/ have dinner/ appreciate/ invite sb to do sth/ celebrate/ stand for/ make sure that
第三步：连词成句
I glad to know that you and your parents will come to china to spend the Mid-Autumn Day.
The Mid-Autumn Day is a traditional festival in china, which dates back to thousands of years ago.
It is unique to Chinese people, and falls on August 15th of the Chinese lunar year.
On this special day family members will get together and enjoy their dinner, no matter how busy or far-away they are.
Eating mooncakes is an important and traditional part of this festival, which stands for the spirit of the festival.
If the weather is fine, people will go out to appreciate moonlight and talk about their love and missing for their loved ones.
Welcome to China and I am sure you will have a traditional Mid-Autumn Day with your parents.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：The MidAutumn Day is a traditional festival with a long history which is celebrated only by Chinese people.句中which引导定语从句；It falls on August 15th of the Chinese lunar year, when people of a family get together and enjoy the dinner together.句中when引导定语从句。这些从句的使用给文章增色不少。
10．Dear Tom,
How are you! I have come back to my motherland. With your help, I made great progress in my English study and lived a happy life in your country. It’s well known that China is a country with a long history. With the Spring Festival drawing near, people will hold various and colorful activities. Welcome to experience our Chinese traditional culture. In addition, it has been a long time since I saw Mr Smith and now I miss him very much. I wonder if he is having a good time. Will you do me a favor to tell me how to get in touch with him? Please give him my best wishes. Thank you !
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours ,
Li Hua
【详解】试题分析：考查提纲类短文。本文属于比较容易的提纲类作文，对考生的要求不高。要求以李华的身份写信给Tom，所以使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1.在美国学习进步很大。2.感谢Tom 对你英语学习的帮助； 3、询问Mr. Smith 的近况并索要其联系方式；4、邀请Tom 在春节期间来中国旅游。写作是注意分段，让文章显得很有层次感。另外要注意信件的格式以及过渡语。