吉林高考英语写作分类训练：应用文

这是一份吉林高考英语写作分类训练：应用文，共20页。试卷主要包含了生活中冲突时有发生，假定你是李华，自制了一些中国结等内容，欢迎下载使用。

应用文
1．假定你是李华，你校英语报社正在征集稿件。请你以“My Story about Jogging”为题，写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 事情的经过；
2. 此事对你的影响。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
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2．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Maria 对中国的传统节日端午节很感兴趣，希望你给她写信介绍端午节。请写一封100词左右的信件，信中应该包括以下几点：
1. 每年农历五月初五的端午节是中国重要的传统节日之一；
2. 人们庆祝端午节是为了纪念中国伟大的诗人屈原；
3. 人们在端午节吃粽子，赛龙舟；
4. 你自己对中华民族传统节日的认识。
注意: 中国阴历(the Chinese lunar calendar); 糯米(sticky rice); 粽子(rice dumpling )
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3．你校英文报正在开展“榜样在身边“的典型人物事迹征集活动，请你写一篇短文介绍你心中的榜样人物。内容包括：
1.人物和事迹简介；
2.你从他/她身上学到了什么。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.短文题目已为你写好，不计入总词数。
A role model around me
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4．假定你是李华，请写信告诉你的英国留学生同学Chris参加学校一年一度的机器人比 赛Robot Battles,今年的比赛因故线上进行，内容包括：
1.时间、参与方式；
2.赛事简介；
3.表达期待。
注意：
1.词数100左右：
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Michael知道中国人很重视家风传承，他在给你的电子邮件中提到想了解你的家风。请你给他回一封电子邮件，要点如下：
1. 简单介绍你的家风；
2. 家风给你带来的影响。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：家风 family spirit
Dear Michael ,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
6．假定你是李华，请代表学生会，为学校“英语天地”宣传栏写一份倡议书，呼吁重压之下的高三学生养成健康的生活方式。内容包括：
1. 倡议的原因；
2. 倡议的目的；
3. 倡议的具体内容。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Health Matters Most
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7．生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学赵延和王吉踢足球时发生了争执，导致关系紧张。请你就此事，用英语写一篇短文，向学校英文期刊投稿。内容包括：
1. 简要描述事件的经过；
2. 分析发生冲突的原因；
3. 谈谈避免冲突的做法。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Conflicts with others are common in everyday life.
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8．假定你是李华，自制了一些中国结（Chinese knot）。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要点包括：
1. 外观（尺寸、颜色、材料）；
2. 象征意义；
3. 价格。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
How are you doing?
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Yours
Li Hua
9．假定你是李华，你的外籍教师Mr. Black昨天夜里把手机落上了子出租车上，现在你帮助他找了回来，请给他写一封邮件，说明以下情况：
1.寻找过程：求助出租车公司；
2.手机状况：完好无损；
3.预约今天上午10:00司机送还手机。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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10．穷游是时下一种很流行的旅游方式，受到越来越多人的喜爱。请就“穷游”这一话题用英语写一篇短文。
1. 描述这一旅行方式；
2. 分析穷游的优缺点；
3. 阐述你的看法。
注意： 1. 词数 100 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词语： 穷游 travel on a budget    穷游族 budget traveller
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1．
My Story about Jogging
Once I resisted doing exercise. I had so much homework that I had no time to exercise, which was usually my best reason. However, in the winter of the second year of high school, I frequently caught a cold, which seriously affected my study.
The doctor advised me to start jogging. After I stuck to it for four weeks, I found myself in good shape and had a good sleep every night. In addition, jogging has not only built up my body but also eased my mind. Having set a new goal—signing up for our city's marathon, I will spend more spare time in jogging.
【分析】本篇属于记叙文，要求考生请你以“My Story about Jogging”为题，写一篇短文投稿。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文
时态：一般过去时以及现在完成时。
结构：对照式结构
对照式结构是一正一反，把慢跑前和慢跑后身体状态进行对照写作。
要求：
1. 事情的经过；
2. 此事对你的影响。
第二步：列提纲
have no time to exercise; in the winter of ; high school; catch a cold; start jogging; good shape; in addition; build up ;sign up; spend more spare time in jogging
第三步：连词成句
1. I had so much homework that I had no time to exercise, which was usually my best reason. 2.However, in the winter of the second year of high school, I frequently caught a cold, which seriously affected my study.
3.Jogging has not only built up my body but also eased my mind.
4.Having set a new goal—signing up for our city's marathon, I will spend more spare time in jogging.
第四步：连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序：Once/As
2.表转折对比关系：However
3.表并列补充关系：In addition, not only...but also
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]. I had so much homework that I had no time to exercise, which was usually my best reason. （由关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句。）
[高分句型2].In addition, jogging has not only built up my body but also eased my mind. （由短语not only...but also衔接的句子。）
[高分句型3].Having set a new goal—signing up for our city's marathon, I will spend more spare time in jogging.（由现在分词作状语的非谓语动词结构。）
2．Dear Maria,
I’m very happy that you are interested in Chinese culture, especially the festivals. Now let me tell you something about the Dragon Boat Festival. The Dragon Festival is celebrated in memory of Qu Yuan on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar.
The festival is best known for its dragon-boat races, especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes. It’s very popular. Pepole always eat rice dumplings and watch dragon-boat races to celebrate it. The rice dumpling is made of sticky rice ,meat and so on. You can eat different kinds of rice dumplings. They are very delicious.
Looking forward to spending the Dragon Boat Festival with you!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国笔友Maria写封信，向他介绍中国的传统节日端午节。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 每年农历五月初五的端午节是中国重要的传统节日之一；
2. 人们庆祝端午节是为了纪念中国伟大的诗人屈原；
3. 人们在端午节吃粽子，赛龙舟；
4. 你自己对中华民族传统节日的认识。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
be interested in; in memory of; be known for; be made of ; and so on; kinds of; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m very happy that you are interested in Chinese culture, especially the festivals.
2. The Dragon Festival is celebrated in memory of Qu Yuan on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar.
3. The festival is best known for its dragon-boat races, especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes.
4. The rice dumpling is made of sticky rice, meat and so on.
5. You can eat different kinds of rice dumplings.
6. Looking forward to spending the Dragon Boat Festival with you!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of +n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m very happy that you are interested in Chinese culture, especially the festivals.这句话运用了宾语从句。
[高分句型2] The festival is best known for its dragon-boat races, especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes. 这句话运用了关系副词where引导的定语从句。
[高分句型3] Looking forward to spending the Dragon Boat Festival with you! 这句话运用了省略主语和谓语的省略结构。
3．One possible version
A role model around me
When it comes to the role model around me, it’s nobody but Liu Wei. Liu Wei is my classmate, who is strong and independent. He comes from a poor family. What makes matter worse is that he suffered from a disease in Senior Two. Because of the illness, he even asked a three-months leave from school. During that time, he not only fought against the disease but kept on studying.
Whenever facing the difficulty, he never gives up. Life is not easy for Liu Wei, but he still loves life. He is always an example for everyone to follow.
【解析】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生写一篇短文介绍你心中的榜样人物。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.人物和事迹简介；
2.你从他/她身上学到了什么。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
nobody but Liu Wei; strong and independent; suffer from a disease; a three-months leave from school; fight against the disease; keep on studying; never give up
第三步：连词成句
1.When it comes to the role model around me, it’s nobody but Liu Wei.
2.Liu Wei is my classmate, who is strong and independent.
3.What makes matter worse is that he suffered from a disease in Senior Two.
4.Because of the illness, he even asked a three-months leave from school.
5.During that time, he not only fought against the disease but kept on studying.
6.Whenever facing the difficulty, he never gives up.
7.Life is not easy for Liu Wei, but he still loves life.
8.He is always an example for everyone to follow.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：not only…but (also)
2.表转折对比关系：but
3.表因果关系：Because of
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]Liu Wei is my classmate, who is strong and independent. （who引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2]What makes matter worse is that he suffered from a disease in Senior Two. （what引导的主语从句）
[高分句型3]During that time, he not only fought against the disease but kept on studying.（not only...but also...引导的并列句）
4．参考范文
Dear Chris,
How are you going? I can't wait to tell you the good news that Robot Battles is drawing near, one of the most popular annual events of our school. Since you are a skilled robot designer, here comes a chance to show your talent!
Although there is neither a TV show nor huge cash prizes, we enthusiasts are still crazy about it because it provides a creatively unique platform for all imaginative competitors. The two — day event is scheduled on 27-28 March and launched online for some reason. Online registration begins now. Don't miss it. More details are available on the school’s website.
Looking forward to the wonderful display of your robot!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写信告诉英国留学生同学Chris，介绍参加学校一年一度的机器人比 赛Robot Battles的相关情况。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分总法
要求：
1.时间、参与方式；
2.赛事简介；
3.表达期待。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
draw near； neither…nor…；be crazy about；provide…for…；be  available；look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1.I can't wait to tell you the good news that Robot Battles is drawing near, one of the most popular annual events of our school.
2.Since you are a skilled robot designer, here comes a chance to show your talent!
3. Although there is neither a TV show nor huge cash prizes, we enthusiasts are still crazy about it because it provides a creatively unique platform for all imaginative competitors.
4.The two — day event is scheduled on 27-28 March and launched online for some reason.
5. Online registration begins now. Don't miss it.
6. More details are available on the school’s website.
7. Looking forward to the wonderful display of your robot!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore(供参考)
3.表转折对比关系：Although +clause(从句)
4.表因果关系：Since
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1]  I can't wait to tell you the good news that Robot Battles is drawing near, one of the most popular annual events of our school.(that引导同位语从句)
[高分句型2] Although there is neither a TV show nor huge cash prizes, we enthusiasts are still crazy about it because it provides a creatively unique platform for all imaginative competitors. (although引导让步状语从句，because引导原因状语从句)
5．Dear Michael,
I'm glad to know that you are interested in Chinese culture. In your e-mail you said you wanted to know about my family spirit. Well, there are many good qualities that have been passed down from generation to generation in my family. My parents always stress the importance of honesty, bravery, perseverance and diligence and they have set good examples for me.
My family spirit has a great influence on me. I'm always friendly to others and ready to help others. I always cheer myself up and never stop chasing my goal even though I meet with difficulties. Owing to those good qualities, I have made great achievements in my study and life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Michael回信介绍自己的家风。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
      总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 简单介绍你的家风；
2. 家风给你带来的影响。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be glad to do；be interested in；know about；pass down；from generation to generation; stress the importance of；set good examples for；have a great influence on；be friendly to；cheer up；owe to
第三步：连词成句
1.I'm glad to know that you are interested in Chinese culture.
2.In your e-mail you said you wanted to know about my family spirit.
3.Well, there are many good qualities that have been passed down from generation to generation in my family.
4.My parents always stress the importance of honesty, bravery, perseverance and diligence and they have set good examples for me.
5.My family spirit has a great influence on me.
6.I'm always friendly to others and ready to help others.
7.I always cheer myself up and never stop chasing my goal even though I meet with difficulties,
8.Owing to those good qualities, I have made great achievements in my study and life.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（仅供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】[高分句型1]
I'm glad to know that you are interested in Chinese culture.（that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]
Well, there are many good qualities that have been passed down from generation to generation in my family.（that引导定语从句）
6．With College Entrance Examination approaching, many of us are under much pressure from study and therefore have developed an unhealthy lifestyle, studying deep into night, rushing through meals and taking little physical exercise, which is extremely harmful to our health.
To meet the challenges of the senior year, it's high time that we take action to say no to the unhealthy lifestyle.
We are supposed to go to bed early and get up early and take meals regularly and slowly enough. Furthermore, it is advised that we spare as much time as possible to work out.
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生为学校“英语天地”宣传栏写一份倡议书，呼吁重压之下的高三学生养成健康的生活方式。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 表明倡议的原因；
2. 表明倡议的目的;
3. 表明倡议的具体内容。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
College Entrance Examination; under much pressure from study; study deep into night; rush through meals; take little physical exercise; be harmful to our health; say no to the unhealthy lifestyle; go to bed early; get up early; be supposed to            do; spare as much time as possible to work out
第三步：连词成句
1.With College Entrance Examination approaching, many of us are under much pressure from study and therefore have developed an unhealthy lifestyle, studying deep into night, rushing through meals and taking little physical exercise, which is extremely            harmful to our health.
2.To meet the challenges of the senior year, it's high time that we take action to say no to the unhealthy lifestyle.
3.We are supposed to go to bed early and get up early and take meals regularly and slowly enough.
4.Furthermore, it is advised that we spare as much time as possible to work out.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：Furthermore
2.表因果关系：therefore
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]With College Entrance Examination approaching, many of us are under much pressure from study and therefore have developed an unhealthy lifestyle, studying deep into night, rushing through meals and taking little physical exercise, which            is extremely harmful to our health.（with的复合结构）
[高分句型2]To meet the challenges of the senior year, it's high time that we take action to say no to the unhealthy lifestyle.（it's high time that固定句式）
[高分句型3]Furthermore, it is advised that we spare as much time as possible to work out.（it作形式主语）
7．Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. During the football game, Zhao Yan and Wang Ji tried to catch the ball and then there was a horrible quarrel.
To be honest, they both were to blame. They were not calm enough and both said something really mean. Besides, I think that they care too much about winning and losing, leaving friendship and unity aside.
Facing such conflicts, we should be kind, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious campus life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and try to be considerate to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就班上同学赵延和王吉踢足球时发生了争执从而导致关系紧张这一事，分析冲突发生的原因且谈谈避免冲突的做法。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时,少量一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 简要描述事件的经过；
2. 分析发生冲突的原因；
3. 谈谈避免冲突的做法。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
try to do sth.; to be honest; be to blame; care…about…; leave…aside; be essential to sth.; instead of; be considerate to do sth.
第三步：连词成句
1. During the football game, Zhao Yan and Wang Ji tried to catch the ball and then there was a horrible quarrel.
2. To be honest, they both were to blame.
3. Besides, I think that they care too much about winning and losing, leaving friendship and unity aside.
4. Facing such conflicts, we should be kind, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious campus life.
5. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and try to be considerate to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：and then
2.表转折对比关系：Besides
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides, I think that they care too much about winning and losing, leaving friendship and unity aside. 用了that引导的宾语从句，和现在分词短语作状语。
[高分句型2] Facing such conflicts, we should be kind, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious campus life. 用了现在分词短语作状语，和which引导的非限制性定语从句。
8．Dear Tom,
How are you doing? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me.
I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In China, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 US each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me.
Do let me know if you need further information. Thank you!
Yours
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖自制的一些中国结。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和少量一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 介绍外观（尺寸、颜色、材料）；
2. 介绍象征意义；
3. 介绍价格。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
sell some Chinese knots; in the shape of a diamond; 5 inches long and 4 inches wide; stand for friendship, love and good luck; 12.99 US each; further information;either…or...
第三步：连词成句
1. I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me.
2. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials.
3. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide.
4. In China, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck.
5. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses.
6. They are only 12.99 US each.
7. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me.
8. Do let me know if you need further information.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）（供参考）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me.（if引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2] People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses.（either…or...句型）
[高分句型3] Do let me know if you need further information.（强调句以及if引导的条件状语从句）
9．Dear Mr. Black,
I am writing to tell you a piece of good news that your cellphone has been found.
On hearing that you lost your phone last night, I made a phone call to the local taxi company, for which the taxi driver works. They got in touch with the driver the moment they received my call, and within several minutes, a driver called back and said he had found a phone on the back seat of the car.
Your phone is kept very well and the driver promised to come to our school to return it at 10:00 o'clock this morning. Please let me know whether it is convenient to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外籍教师Mr. Black写一封邮件，告诉他关于他手机的情况。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和少量一般现在时。
结构：总分法
要点：
1.寻找过程：求助出租车公司；
2.手机状况：完好无损；
3.预约今天上午10:00司机送还手机。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
a piece of good news；On hearing that；make a phone call；local taxi company；get in touch with；promise to do；on the back seat of the car
第三步：连词成句
1. I am writing to tell you a piece of good news that your cellphone has been found.
2. On hearing that you lost your phone last night, I made a phone call to the local taxi company, for which the taxi driver works.
3. They got in touch with the driver the moment they received my call, and within several minutes, a driver called back and said he had found a phone on the back seat of the car.
4. Your phone is kept very well and the driver promised to come to our school to return it at 10:00 o'clock this morning.
5. Please let me know whether it is convenient to you.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：and；What is more, Besides, Moreover（供参考）
2.表时间关系：On hearing that；the moment；
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]I am writing to tell you a piece of good news that your cellphone has been found.（使用了由that引导的同位语从句）
[高分句型2]On hearing that you lost your phone last night, I made a phone call to the local taxi company, for which the taxi driver works.（使用了由that引导的宾语从句和由介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3]Please let me know whether it is convenient to you.（使用了祈使句和由whether引导的宾语从句）
10．One possible version:
Travelling on a budget is a fashionable form of travel nowadays. It enables more poor travel lovers to enjoy travelling.
Compared with traditional travel, travelling on a budget is more convenient and the price of it is very inexpensive. That means travellers can arrange the schedule freely and enjoy the journey at a lower cost. Inviting as it seems to be, accommodation conditions are often far from satisfactory. What’s more, budget travellers’ safety is worrying. But I still like it very much. Because it can provide travellers with chances to develop their problem solving ability in unexpected situations.
Please remember that safety is the first when you go out for travel!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生以“穷游”这一话题写一篇短文，分析“穷游”的利弊并阐述自己的观点。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：议论文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 描述这一旅行方式；
2. 分析穷游的优缺点；
3. 阐述你的看法。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
travelling on a budget; enjoy doing; compare with; traditional travel;at a lower cost; accommodation conditions; far from; provide sb. with; go out.
第三步：连词成句
1.Travelling on a budget is a fashionable form of travel nowadays.
2.It enables more poor travel lovers to enjoy travelling.
3.Compared with traditional travel, travelling on a budget is more convenient and the price of it is very inexpensive.
4.That means travellers can arrange the schedule freely and enjoy the journey at a lower cost.
5. Accommodation conditions are often far from satisfactory.
6. It can provide travellers with chances to develop their problem solving ability in unexpected situations.
7.Please remember that safety is the first when you go out for travel!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）表并列补充关系：What is more
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] Compared with traditional travel, travelling on a budget is more convenient and the price of it is very inexpensive. 此句是and连接的并列句，同时过去分词Compared部分作整个句子的状语。
[高分句型2] Please remember that safety is the first when you go out for travel! 此句是when引导的时间状语从句，且主句部分是一个祈使句。