辽宁高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信

这是一份辽宁高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信，共20页。
感谢信/祝贺信
1．假如你是李华，你们班的外教Smith先生即将回国，你将代表全班同学写一封感谢信。内容包括:
1.赞扬 Smith的人品和工作；
2.感谢他给予的帮助；
3.表达对Smith的祝福。
注意:1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2．假设你是李华，日前参加了在加拿大举行的为期四周的国际中学生生存训练营活动，并将作为中国学生代表在闭幕式上发言。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，要点包括：
1. 遇到的挑战（语言、文化冲击等）；
2. 你的收获；
3. 感谢组织者。
注意：1. 词数 80 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear friends, I am honored to deliver a closing speech on behalf of all the  Chinese  students in  the  camp.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．假设你是李华，你的笔友 Tom 写信询问你的学习是否因为新冠病毒疫情受到影响。请你用英语写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 简述疫情下的学习备考情况；
3. 表达决心和希望。
注意：1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:COVID-19 2019 新冠肺炎
Dear Tom,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4．近期，21世纪英文报开展了征集英文感谢信活动，以致敬奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒一线的医护人员。假定你是李华，来自于阳光中学，请你写一封感谢信参与投稿，内容包括：
1. 表达谢意；
2. 个人感受；
3. 表达信心。
注意：1. 词数100-120；
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：传染病epidemic；新型冠状病毒novel coronavirus
Dear medical workers,
I am Li Hua from Sunshine School.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
5．假设你是学生会主席李华,你将代表你校2020届毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，发言稿内容要点如下：
1.回顾；
2.感谢；
3.祝愿。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 不得使用真实人名、校名等相关信息；
3.可适当增加细节。
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．假定你是李华，你所在的学校要征集一封英文感谢信，以致敬奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒第一线的医护人员。请你写一封感谢信参与投稿，内容包括：
1. 表达谢意；
2. 个人感受；
3. 表达信心。
注意：1.词数：80左右；
2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：传染病 epidemic 新型冠状病毒 novel coronavirus
Dear medical workers,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li hua
7．假设你是高三学生李华，将于今年六月份毕业。请你给你的英语老师Miss Wang写一封感谢信。要点如下：写信目的；老师对你的帮助；表达祝愿。
注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Miss Wang,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
8．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Sam最近发来邮件说他在某英语杂志的短篇小说大赛中获得了一等奖。请用英语给他写一封电子邮件，要点包括：
1. 表示祝贺；
2. 介绍自己的英语写作情况；
3. 请教写作方面的问题。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sam,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours truly,
Li Hua
9．假如你叫李华，进入高三的学习，压力很大，想和父母说说心里话，请你用英文在你的博客上用书信形式表达出来。主要内容如下：
知心话
感恩——感谢父母的关心、鼓励对父母的期望——(1)多加交流 (2)适时提供帮助
学习打算
考生自拟(至少写两点)
注意：(1)短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥。
(2)词数：100左右(开头与结尾已给出，不计入词数)。
Dear Mom and Dad,
With the College Entrance Examination approaching, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Mom and Dad, I am quite confident about my future. Wish you good health and a happy life.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
10．假如你是李华，现在美国某高中做交流生。你因受伤在家休养。这期间有不少同学曾来看望、鼓励你。现在你已接近康复，请给他们写一封感谢信表达你的谢意，内容包括:
1. 回忆同学们为你做的事；
2. 表达你的感谢之情；
3. 介绍你的康复情况。
注意:1. 词数80左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear classmates,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely grateful,
Li Hua











1．Dear Mr. Smith，
At the time of parting, I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you on behalf of my classmates.
You are so humorous and easy-going that everyone likes you. We do appreciate the way of your teaching. In class, it seems that you have the magic to make your lessons lively and interesting and all of us have made great progress. After class, you often join us in games, during which we’ve shared much happiness.
Words cannot convey our endless love and thanks to you. Wish you a safe journey home and a happy life in the future.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】本文是一篇应用文，要求考生写一篇感谢信，向即将回国的外教Smith先生表示感谢与祝福。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.赞扬 Smith的人品和工作；
2.感谢他给予的帮助；
3.表达对Smith的祝福。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
at the time of; on behalf of; the way of; make great progress; join in; in the future
第三步：连词成句
1. At the time of parting, I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you on behalf of my classmates.
2. We do appreciate the way of your teaching.
3. In class, it seems that you have the magic to make your lessons lively and interesting and all of us have made great progress.
4. After class, you often join us in games, during which we’ve shared much happiness.
5. Wish you a safe journey home and a happy life in the future.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表文章结构顺序：at the time of
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] You are so humorous and easy-going that everyone likes you. (运用了that引导的结果状语从句)
[高分句型2] After class, you often join us in games, during which we’ve shared much happiness. (运用了介词+which引导的非限制性状语从句)
2．Dear friends, I am honored to deliver a closing speech on behalf of all the Chinese students in the camp. Before I came to Canada, I had made full preparations for this camp. However, I still experienced some unexpected challenges, such as the difficulty in making myself understood and dealing with culture shock. With great patience and kindness, the organizers helped me out. Not only did I improve my oral English, but also I built lifelong friendships. Most importantly, I became more confident. So now I would like to express my great thanks to all the people who contributed to the camp.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【分析】这是一篇应用文。写一篇中国学生代表在国际中学生生存训练营活动闭幕式上的发言稿。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法是指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 遇到的挑战（语言、文化冲击等）；
2. 你的收获；
3. 感谢组织者。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
Be honored to do；deliver a closing speech；on behalf of；came to；make full preparations for ； such as；deal with；with great patience and kindness；helped sb. out；not only…but also…；would like to do
第三步：连词成句
1. I am honored to deliver a closing speech on behalf of all the Chinese students in the camp.
2. Before I came to Canada, I had made full preparations for this camp.
3. I still experienced some unexpected challenges, such as the difficulty in making myself understood and dealing with culture shock.
4. With great patience and kindness, the organizers helped me out.
5. Not only did I improve my oral English, but also I built lifelong friendships.
6. Most importantly, I became more confident.
7. So now I would like to express my great thanks to all the people who contributed to the camp.
8. Thank you for listening.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如：So now I would like to express my great thanks to all the people who contributed to the camp.中who引导定语从句，也使用了特殊句式，如：Not only did I improve my oral English, but also I built lifelong friendships.中not only置于句首使用了部分倒装。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．Dear Tom,
I am grateful for your great concern about me. In my opinion, I am getting on well with my study all the time. During the first two months of fighting against COVID-19, I kept learning online at home. From the online classes I learned a lot following teachers. Now, I have come back to school and everything has returned to normal. Teachers are giving lessons carefully and classmates are learning attentively. I am filled with confidence and courage, preparing for the coming examination.
With my hard work and teachers' help, I believe I will make a great success in the examination.
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本文为一篇应用文写作，向你的笔友 Tom 写信询问学习是否因为新冠病毒疫情受到影响。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构：总分法。总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
写作要求：1. 表示感谢；
2. 简述疫情下的学习备考情况；
3. 表达决心和希望。。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
concern; following; attentively; confidence; success
第三步：连词成句
I am grateful for your great concern about me.
From the online classes I learned a lot following teachers.
Teachers are giving lessons carefully and classmates are learning attentively.
I am filled with confidence and courage, preparing for the coming examination.
With my hard work and teachers' help, I believe I will make a great success in the examination.
在进行造句的时候一定要注意时态和语态上面的问题.
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1. 文章的结构顺序：表示感谢；备考情况；表达决心和希望。
2.表并列补充关系：in one’s opinion; now; and
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰
第五步：修改润色
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了不少高级句型，比如宾语从句：I believe I will make a great success in the examination.还有非谓语作状语：I am filled with confidence and courage, preparing for the coming examination.文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。
4．Dear medical workers,
I am Li Hua from Sunshine School. On behalf of my school, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you all for your devotion in the battle against the novel coronavirus.
During this epidemic, it is you who, regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential risk of infection, desperately rescue those infected. It is also you who make us build up our confidence to defeat it. Such few words can’t fully convey our thankfulness for your great contribution. I’m definitely convinced that with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封感谢信，致敬奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒一线的医护人员，投稿到21世纪英文报，以参加征集英文感谢信的活动。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表达感谢；2. 描述个人感；3. 表达信心。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
on behalf of、express thanks to sb for、regardless of、those infected、build up our confidence、I’m convinced that…
第三步：连词成句
1. On behalf of my school, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you all for your devotion in the battle against the novel coronavirus.
2. Regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential risk of infection, you desperately rescue those infected.
3. You make us build up our confidence to defeat it.
4. I’m definitely convinced that with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。
第四步：句式升级
适当运用主从复合句、强调句式或倒装句，使语言更生动：
将第三步中的第二句和第三句用强调句式进行改写，并添加语句间衔：During this epidemic, it is you who, regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential risk of infection, desperately rescue those infected. It is also you who make us build up our confidence to defeat it.
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多短语搭配和高级词汇，如：the shortage of equipment and the potential risk of infection、convey our thankfulness for your great contribution、joint efforts等。全文语言地道，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
5．It is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2020.
It has been three years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers’ efforts, our parents’ supports and our classmates’ help. At this moment, I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.
I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future! Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.
Thank you for listening.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇发言稿，包括对过去的回顾，对母校的感谢之情以及对未来的祝愿。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表达获得发言机会的荣幸之情
      2.发言内容
      1）1.回顾；
      2）感谢；
      3) 祝愿。
   第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
It is a great honor for sb to do;  make a speech;  on behalf of;  graduate;  try to do;  succeed; with one’s efforts;  with one’s help;  At this moment;  would like to do;  thank sb for sth;  future.
第三步：连词成句
1. It is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2020.
2. It has been three years for us to study in this beautiful school.
3. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting.
4. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers’ efforts, our parents’ supports and our classmates’ help.
5. I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.
6. I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future!
7. Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.这句话运用what引导的宾语从句；使用了一些固定词组，如on behalf o，with one’s efforts，with one’s help等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．Dear medical workers,
I am Li Hua from an international school in Fuzhou. On behalf of my school, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you all for your devotion in the battle against the novel coronavirus.
During this epidemic, it is you who, regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential risk of infection, desperately rescue those infected. It is also you who make us build up our confidence to defeat it.Words fail to convey our thankfulness for your great contributions.
I’m definitely convinced that with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文写作，要求向奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒第一线的医护人员表达感谢，属于感谢信的范畴。
【详解】感谢信是书面表达的常见题型之一，也是高考的常客，故平时练习中对固定句式的掌握十分重要。完成本题时，应注意以下要点。
要点1：审清题目，理清结构
题目的设定是你（李华）所在的学校要征集一封英文感谢信，以致敬奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒第一线的医护人员，你将写一封参与投稿。审题之后可知，本文主体内容应使用第一人称（表达自身感受）或第二人称（讲述医护人员的事迹时可使用）、一般现在时进行写作，谈及抗击疫情的经历时可视情况使用一般过去时或现在完成时。写作内容包括：表达谢意（简洁有力）；个人感受（适当展开拓展）；表达信心（简洁有力），文章结尾处也可再次表达感谢。
要点2：充实内容，注重表达
进行写作时，应特别注意对个人感受这一部分进行适当内容拓展，此乃本篇书面表达的重中之重。个人感受既要表达个人的感激、敬佩之情，也要结合医护人员的事迹和贡献具体展开，不可空谈。同时，在进行英文写作时，应特别注意上下文的衔接自然，善用连接词和定语从句等，同时注意高级表达和句式多样性的运用。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了许多精彩的句式，如表达感谢的句式I would like to express my sincere thanks to you all for your devotion in the battle against the novel coronavirus. Words fail to convey our thankfulness for your great contributions.和表达信心的句式I’m definitely convinced that with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.以及强调句，语言表达十分地道，同时运用了许多固定短语或高级表达，如：on behalf of my school, during this epidemic, regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential risk of infection, desperately rescue those infected, build up our confidence to defeat it等。范文内容十分出彩，实现了句式的多样性和上下文的逻辑连接自然。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
7．Dear Miss Wang,
As our graduation is drawing near, I'm afraid that we have to say goodbye to each other soon. Here I'm writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your support and guidance during the past three years.
I still remember there was a time when I was struggling with my English learning and even thought of giving it up. However, it was you who selflessly sacrificed your spare time to guide me, cheer me up and help me with my English. Without your help, I couldn't have made such great progress.
Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you and I wish you good health and a happy mood every day.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给英语老师Miss Wang写一封感谢信。
【详解】第一步：审题     体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
结构：总分总
要求：
1.    写信目的；
2.    老师对你的帮助；
3.    表达祝愿
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
offer to do sth./ do sb. a favor/ make progress/ have difficulty in/ thanks for/ show sb sth/ devote…to…/ lead to
第三步：连词成句
1.    With our graduation drawing near, I'm afraid that we have to say goodbye to each other soon.
2.    I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude for your support and guidance during the past three years.
3.    I still remember there was a time when I had difficulty in my English learning, and even planned to give up.
4.    It was you that selflessly devoted your spare time to guiding me, cheering me up and helping me with my English.
5.    But for your help, I couldn't have made such great progress.
6.    I would like to express my warm thanks to you and I wish you good health and a happy mood every day.
第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词或从句）
表示并列的连词：and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词：because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词：which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步：修改润色（加入高级词汇或短语）
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：As our graduation is drawing near, I'm afraid that we have to say goodbye to each other soon.中as引导时间状语从句，that引导宾语从句。I still remember there was a time when I was struggling with my English learning and even thought of giving it up.中when引导定语从句。文章大量从句和高级表达的使用展示了作者扎实的语言功底，同时为文章增色不少。
8．Dear same,
I’m writing to congratulate you on your winning first prize in the English short novel competition recently.
I must say that I was not surprised to hear the good news. I know that you have been practicing writing English novels in the past years. I’m delighted to see that your hard work has finally been rewarded. By the way, I am also fond of writing short passages in English. What upsets me most is that I sometimes can’t find suitable words and expressions to make myself understood. Would you be kind enough to give me some advice on how to improve this situation?
Congratulations again. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主。
人称：第一人称
要求：1. 表示祝贺；
2. 介绍自己的英语写作情况；
3. 请教写作方面的问题。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
congratulate you on; was not surprised to; I’m delighted to; By the way; am also fond of; some advice on ；how to; Looking forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m writing to congratulate you on your winning first prize.
2. I know that you have been practicing writing English novels
3. By the way, I am also fond of writing short passages in English.
4. Would you be kind enough to give me some advice on how to improve this situation?
5. Looking forward to your early reply.
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。注意要添加适当的连接词使得上下文意思连贯，在使用较简单的单词、句式的同时，也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型。
【点睛】该文全面概括了内容要点，文章结构清晰。第一段描述了对朋友获奖表示祝贺。第二段介绍自己的英语写作情况以及请教写作方面的问题；第三段表达期待收到回复的愿望。另外，本文各个部分衔接自然，By the way,等短语的使用，显示出作者能熟 练使用半富的词汇的能力。同时灵活使用了非谓语动词to congratulate you on、主语从句What upsets me most is that...等高级句式。
9．Dear Mom and Dad,
With the College Entrance Examination approaching, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!
During the years, I always feel grateful for your unselfish care and love. Thanks to your constant encouragement, I have been making remarkable progress in my studies.
Since it will be less than one month before the exam, Iˈm under great pressure now. I would appreciate it if you can have a frequent talk with me and provide me with timely help, which contributes to my staying in a good state.
I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am shouldering. I have made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the saying goes, "no pains, no gains. " Meanwhile, I will spare some time to participate in sports activities, aiming to build up my body and free myself from the heavy work of studies.
Mom and Dad, I am quite confident about my future. Wish you good health and a happy life.
Yours sincerely,
​Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假如你叫李华，进入高三的学习，压力很大，想和父母说说心里话，请你用英文在你的博客上用书信形式表达出来。主要内容如下：
知心话
感恩——感谢父母的关心、鼓励对父母的期望——(1)多加交流 (2)适时提供帮助
学习打算
考生自拟(至少写两点)
第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）, 如：grateful（感激的）；unselfish（无私的）；constant encouragement（不断的鼓励）；make progress in（取得进步）；be under great pressure（承受巨大压力）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整, 语言规范, 语篇连贯, 词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如Since it will be less than one month before the exam, Iˈm under great pressure now.运用了原因状语从句；I would appreciate it if you can have a frequent talk with me and provide me with timely help, which contributes to my staying in a good state.运用了条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式, 显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、层次分明, 上下句转换自然, 为文章增色添彩。
10．Dear classmates,
I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude and show you how much I enjoyed your visits when I suffered the tragic injury.
I clearly remember the days when you came to see me with fragrant flowers and bright smiles. The letters sent to comfort me and the words said to encourage me are also precious. Most importantly, your warm company did guide me out of loneliness during my rest. I am making rapid progress towards full recovery, and apparently I’ll soon join you at school.
Thank you again. I hope someday I can return your love and help.
Sincerely grateful,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求写一封感谢信，感谢在你生病期间同学们来探望你。文章应该明确三点内容：1. 回忆同学们为你做的事；2. 表达你的感谢之情；3. 介绍你的康复情况。
【详解】所给提示内容比较明确，所以该文难度一般，比较好写。考生可以根据提示列出主要内容，然后对主要内容进行句式，遣词造句等方面的扩充拓展。此外，还可以适当的在各要点之间添加连接词。在第一个要点中，适合用过去时态。第二和第三要点应用现在时态。
【点睛】所给范文条理明确，要点齐全。长短句灵活使用，自然到位。正确应用了一些高级句式和词汇，例如：宾语从句（ how much I enjoyed your visits when I suffered the tragic injury.）定语从句（the days when you came to see me with fragrant flowers and bright smiles）；非谓语动词（sent to comfort me and the words said to encourage me）等，增加了文章的亮点。