山东省菏泽市牡丹区2021-2023年中考英语二模试题分类汇编：书面表达

山东省菏泽市牡丹区

2021-2023年中考英语二模试题分类汇编

书面表达

2023年山东省菏泽市牡丹区中考二模英语试题

七、书面表达（15分）

难忘的初中生活即将结束，回顾这段时光，相信你在许多方面取得了不少进步，如生活技能的获得、学习方法的掌握、良好习惯的养成……请你根据自己的经验，以How can we have a successful middle school life?为题，结合以下要点与即将步入初中的学弟学妹们谈谈如何成功地度过初中生活。

提示：

1. 学习方法上的建议。

2. 与老师、同学融洽相处的方式。

3. 与父母之间的沟通。

4. 生活及身体健康方面的提示（食物、运动、睡眠……）。

要求：

1. 文章必须包含所给要点提示，可适当增加细节。

2. 语言连贯，语法正确，书写规范。

3. 文中不得出现真实的校名与人名，词数在100词左右。

How can we have a successful middle school life?

Hi, everyone! I have something to share with you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2022年山东省菏泽市牡丹区中考二模英语试题

七、书面表达(15分)

56．初中三年的生活令人难忘，成长的过程有喜悦，也有艰辛，如何全面发展，成为—名优秀中学生，你一定有很多体会和学弟学妹们分享。假如你是李华，来自阳光中学。请根据以下提示和要求，从德、智、体、美、劳五个方面，结合你的成长经历，写一篇英语演讲稿，给他们提出合理建议。

注意:

1）短文应包括所有要点，可以适当发挥，使文章连贯；

2）词数90左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

3）不得透漏学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. Here I’d like to give you some suggestions on how to be an excellent middle school student.

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2021年山东省菏泽市牡丹区中考二模英语试题

七．书面表达（15分）

76．中国共产党建党一百年以来，涌现出无数优秀的共产党员，其中，云南华坪女子高级中学党支部书记，校长张桂梅“拿命办学”的感人事迹，引发热烈的社会反响。请根据以下要点，用英语讲述一下她的故事。

内容包括：

1. 她今年64岁，是一位瘦弱的女子，她身患重病却为教育奉献一生。

2. 为了帮助贫困学生走进大学，她建立了中国第一所全免费女子高中。

3. 日子虽然清贫，但她内心却充满阳光。

4. 她用知识改变了很多女孩的命运。在过去的13年里，她帮助1800多名学生实现了他们的梦想，她日夜陪伴学生从来没有后悔过，她的故事让人感动。

5. 我们应该向她学习……

要求：

1. 语言规范，语句通顺，可适当发挥。

2. 字数：100词左右，文章中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名。

提示词：

devote...to.... 奉献     poverty areas   贫困地区   n. fate 命运     n . sunshine阳光     female free senior high school   全免费女子高中

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答案：

2023年山东省菏泽市牡丹区中考二模英语试题

How can we have a successful middle school life?

Hi, everyone! I have something to share with you. As we all know, it’s important to have a healthy, happy and successful middle school life. Here are my opinions on how to do it well.

First of all, we are supposed to learn to study wisely. Listen to the teacher carefully in class, and take notes carefully. If there is something difficult that you can’t understand, you should talk to your friends and teachers often, and try to get help from them. Getting on well with your classmates will make you have an unforgettable memory. Treasure the valuable friendship. What’s more, we should communicate well with our parents, who love us most. Tell them about your thoughts and feelings. Last but not least, it’s necessary to have good habits. You’d better go to bed early and have enough sleep. It will keep you active during the day. Doing exercise and eating healthy food are also important.

Well, all in all, I hope all of you have a successful middle school life.

Possible Version 2：

How can we have a successful middle school life?

Hi, everyone! I have something to share with you. I will go to high school this year. The middle school life means a lot to me. Now I’d like to talk about my experience in my middle school life.

First, you should learn about some good ways to improve your schoolwork. You should listen to the teachers carefully in class, finish your homework in time and correct your mistakes in your homework. Don’t give up easily and you will get good grades at last.

Second, you need to make friends with your teachers and parents. They will help you out when you are in trouble. Don’t be afraid of telling them about your problems. They may sometimes be strict with you because they love you and hope you will become good children as well as good students. You should learn to communicate with them well.

Finally, you must be healthy and strong in order to continue your study and life in senior high school. So doing sports is also very important. Learn to have good habits and eat healthily. I hope you will have a successful middle school life in next three years.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是写一篇记叙短文，要求根据要点与即将步入初中的学弟学妹们谈谈如何成功地度过初中生活，短文开头已给出，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用第二人称来叙述；时态上以一般现在时为主。写作时可适当使用一些副词和连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，结构清晰，表达具有条理性。

2022年山东省菏泽市牡丹区中考二模英语试题

56．One possible version:

Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua from Class 1, Grade 9. Here I’d like to give you some suggestions on how to be an excellent middle school student.

First, you should learn to be honest and thankful. It’s necessary for us to be friendly to others and behave politely in public. Helping others makes us feel happy. Second, you should study hard to make your dream come true. You should ask teachers or classmates for help when you have problems. You shouldn’t be afraid of making mistakes. You should learn from them and never give up. You’ll have more subjects to learn, so you’d better to find good learning methods. You should learn well and learn wisely. Third, You should often play sports so that you can keep healthy. You can run or play basketball with your friends after school. Fourth, In your free time, you should learn all kinds of skills, such as drawing, dancing and singing. They can make your lives colorful and interesting. Last but not least, you should do some housework. Doing chores helps to develop our independence. we can spend our weekends doing some voluntary work at our community center or in the old People’s Home because doing something for others can make our world a better place.

I hope these suggestions can help you to be an excellent student.

That’s all. Thank you!

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于演讲稿写作。写作时注意一定要紧紧围绕“如何全面发展，成为一个优秀的中学生”这一主题展开叙述。内容要包括品德、学习、运动、技能和做家务、做志愿者等方面的建议。内容要积极向上，条理要清晰。

2.写作指导：本文写作应该主要使用第二人称。时态应主要运用一般现在时。可以根据要求分三部分叙述。第一部分开门见山，自我介绍，并提出要演讲的主题；第二部分根据要求展开，分述在各方面的建议，要具体；第三部分总结全文，表达感受，感情升华，结束演讲。

2021年山东省菏泽市牡丹区中考二模英语试题

76．例文

Zhang Guimei, a 64-year-old woman, is thin and weak. Although she has developed a serious illness, she devotes her life to education. In order to help the students in poverty areas to go into the college, she set up the first female free senior high school in China. She lives a poor life, but her heart is full of sunshine. She has changed many girls’ fate. She helped more than 1,800 students to achieve their dreams during the past 13 years. She never regrets staying with her students day and night. She is such a great woman that we are all moved by her. In our daily life, we should learn from her and try our best to help people in need.

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，介绍张桂梅的感人事迹，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来介绍，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文要分别介绍张桂梅的个人情况，做了什么，有什么影响。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。