浙江省杭州市萧山区2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编：书面表达+

浙江省杭州市萧山区

2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编

书面表达

2023年浙江省杭州市萧山区中考一模英语试题

第二节：书面表达(本题有1小题；共计15分)

假定你是李平, 你的笔友Peter发来邮件诉说他的苦恼, 请你阅读邮件后回复。词数80个左右, 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

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2022年浙江省杭州市萧山区中考一模英语试题

第二节：书面表达（本题有1小题：共计15分）

71. 假定你是李平，请阅读你的笔友Lucy的邮件并回复。词数80词左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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2021年浙江省杭州市萧山区中考一模英语试题

六、电子邮件

56．以下是某英文杂志刊登的三则志愿者招募广告（Volunteers needed）。假如你是李华，你打算参加其中的一项活动，现请你根据举办方的邮址用英语进行回复并留下自己的联系方式。

Dear Smith,

It’s my pleasure to write to you to apply for the volunteer work to ________. Now let me introduce myself and tell you why I volunteer to join in the work.

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Regards,

Lihua

答案：

2023年浙江省杭州市萧山区中考一模英语试题

71．例文1

Dear Peter,

I understand how you must be feeling about your sister’s habits. It’s great that you’re concerned for her health and want to help her. May I suggest that you have a heart to heart conversation with her? Explain your concerns and ask her to join you for a walk around the park or maybe suggest a fun activity that you both can do together. You can also encourage her to join a sports club or other activities that can help her stay active. Let her know that you care about her and that you want her to be healthy and happy.

Best of luck!

Li Ping

例文2

Dear Peter,

I can understand your concern for your sister’s health. It is important to keep our bodies active and healthy. You can talk to your sister and try to motivate her to be more active. Suggest daily activities that both of you can do together, such as going for a walk, riding bikes or playing sports. Encourage her to join a sports club or any club that interests her. You can also set an example by being active yourself and inviting her to join you. It can be a challenge for her to change habits, but with your support, I think your sister will make a change for the better.

Best of luck!

Li Ping

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：要求根据Peter发来的邮件进行回复，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

以例文1为例：

第一步，对对方表示理解；

第二步，就Peter的烦恼给出建议；

第三步，书写结语。

[亮点词汇]

①heart to heart贴心地

②encourage sb to do sth鼓励（某人）去做（某事）

③care about关心

[高分句型]

①I understand how you must be feeling about your sister’s habits.（how引导宾语从句）

②Explain your concerns and ask her to join you for a walk around the park or maybe suggest a fun activity that you both can do together. （祈使句和that引导的定语从句）

2022年浙江省杭州市萧山区中考一模英语试题

【答案】例文:

Dear Lucy,

It’s good to hear from you. Everything goes well with me here. I’m so glad to hear that you are having a great time in Shanghai, and have already enjoyed a wonderful Chinese music concert there. I like music, too. I like classical music best because it can make me happy and relaxed.

As for the birthday gift I think some home-made snacks or a piece of art work made by yourself will be a good choice. Also, if you can perform a talent show like singing a song or playing a magic trick during the party, I think your host family will appreciate it. I’m sure you and your host family will have a really unforgettable birthday party.

Write to me soon.

All the best,

Li Ping

【解析】

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文——电子邮件的写作。在写作时应根据笔友Lucy邮件内容进行回复，回复内容包括：自己的近况如何；简述露西在上海听音乐会的事情；自己喜欢的音乐；最重要的对露西要送的生日礼物提出建议；最后是祝愿。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时为主。在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，保证内容叙述完整，条理清晰，行文连贯。

2021年浙江省杭州市萧山区中考一模英语试题

56．One sample version:

Dear Smith,

It’s my pleasure to write to you to apply for the volunteer work to help old people. Now let me introduce myself and tell you why I volunteer to join in the work.

My name is Li Hua, a student from Class 2, Grade 3. I am kind, patient and helpful. I am good with old people and ready to help them to wash or clean.

I think it’s our duty for the young to help the old. I once had a two-week experience of working as a volunteer to help the old last summer vacation and I am free the whole day on May 6, so I am sure I can do the work well.

Please call me at 0571-8235641 if I am needed. Thank you.

Regards,

Lihua

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇电子邮件。要求介绍自己并选择志愿者广告中的一个进行参加，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为四段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己和选择的志愿者活动；第三段介绍选择这项活动的原因；第四段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。