高考英语书信写作专项训练

建议信

1．假如你是李华， 你的美国笔友Tom来信说， 当他了解到人工智能（AI）围棋手Master战胜了60位顶尖职业围棋高手后， 他迷上了下围棋（Go）， 希望你能给他关于提高棋艺方面的建议。要点如下：1. 最好到中国参加培训班。2. 熟能生巧，尽量在网上对进行对弈练习。3.多观看网上的围棋大赛直播。

注意:1. 词数100左右；2.可加入适当细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Hua

2．假定你是李华，请你给离家读书并生病好几天的美国网友David写一封建议信，内容包括：

1.对David目前生病状况的感受；

2.说明锻炼和学习的关系；

3.鼓励他积极锻炼身体。

注意：1.词数80左右;

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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3．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike发来邮件说他最近身体不好，请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 健康的重要性；2. 养成健康的生活习惯的建议。

注意：

1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，但是不计入总词数。

Dear Mike,

I am sorry to know that you are not well these days, so I’d like to talk about how to keep healthy with you.

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I do hope you will become strong soon with all my advice.

Yours,

Li Hua

4．假定你是学生会主席李华，因为感染新冠病毒人数还在不断增加，请你代表学生会就 如何过好即将到来的寒假，给全体学生一些建议。内容包括：

1 .做好个人防护。

2 .注意劳逸结合。

注意：

1 .写作词汇应为80左右;

2 .可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：新冠病毒novel coronavirus

Dear students,

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Students’ Union

5．假定你是李华，你的外籍朋友Jim在邮件中提到他对如何有效管理自己的时间感到困惑。请你回封邮件，给出你的建议，内容包括：

1. 时间管理的重要性;2. 时间管理的技巧。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右;

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

6．假定你是李华，你校开设了中国文学选修课，你的交换生好友Richard写邮件向你寻求选课建议。请给他写一封回信，建议他选修中国古典诗歌。内容包括：

1.你的理由；

2.学习建议；

3.愿意提供帮助。

参考词汇：选修课optional course  中国古典诗歌classical Chinese poetry

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Richard,

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Yours,

Li Hua

7．假如你是李华，现在伦敦某中学做交换生，该校要开设一个中国书房，现向中国留学生征集建议。请你给负责人Smith写一封建议信，内容包括：

1．书房采用中国传统风格设计；

2．提供蕴含中国文化的书籍；

3．定期举办读书交流会或中国传统文化讲座等。

注意：1．词数80左右；

2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。  

Dear Smith,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

8．假定你是李华。你的英国交换生同学Mike下周要参加唐诗朗诵会(Tang Poetry Recitation)，有些焦虑。请你给他写一封邮件。

内容包括：

1.说明紧张很正常；

2.给予一些缓解的建议。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mike,

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Your,

Li Hua

9．假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Jenny想要学好中文以便申请来中国留学，她想让你给她推荐一些学习中文的方法。请你给她回一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1.学习中文的方法;

2.推荐的理由。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右;

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Jenny,

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Yours,

Li Hua

10．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近收到英国笔友Mike的邮件，其中提到因为父母工作原因，他们举家搬迁，他也转学到了一所新的学校，但是他因为换了一个环境感到不太适应。回复一封邮件，内容须包括：

1)分析导致他不适应的原因；

2)给他提出建议。

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参考答案：

1．Dear Tom,

I am delighted to receive your letter, in which I’ve learned that you became a Go addict after knowing that Mater had defeated 60 world-class professional players and asked for my advice on how to learn Go well. Here are some tips for you.

To begin with, it is a good idea for you to register for a training class in China, where Go was born. In addition, as the proverb says, practice makes perfect. Therefore it is advisable that you play the game online as much as possible, preferably on a daily basis. Last but not least, I strongly recommend that you watch live broadcasts of international games online. Not only will it help you acquire advanced Go-playing skills, but also keep you informed of the latest trends in the Go field.

I hope my advice proves useful. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如考生是李华， 你的美国笔友Tom来信说， 当他了解到人工智能（AI）围棋手Master战胜了60位顶尖职业围棋高手后， 他迷上了下围棋（Go）， 希望你能给他关于提高棋艺方面的建议。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

高兴的：delighted→ pleased

建议：advice→ suggestion

获得： acquire→ obtain

因此：therefore→ thus

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Here are some tips for you.

拓展句：Here are some tips for you, which are beneficial to you.

【点睛】[高分句型1] To begin with, it is a good idea for you to register for a training class in China, where Go was born.（where引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2] Not only will it help you acquire advanced Go-playing skills, but also keep you informed of the latest trends in the Go field.（部分倒装句）

2．Dear David,

I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now. You have been so absorbed in study away from your home that you have had no time for exercise. It is really harmful to your health. I feel it would be more beneficial to your health if you could take more exercise in the future.

In fact, exercise can contribute to your health and fresh your mind. Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying hard without feeling bad or ill. Otherwise, your study will be interrupted from time to time by sickness.

In a word, exercise is as useful and important as your study. So I put forward a suggestion that you take at least one hour’s exercise every day from now on.

Best wishes!

Yours, Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给离家读书并生病好几天的美国网友David写一封建议信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

抱歉：sorry → regrettable

沉溺于：be absorbed in → be addicted to/be indulged in

有助于：contribute to→ benefit

总之：in a word → in short/in brief

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：You have been so absorbed in study away from your home that you have had no time for exercise. It is really harmful to your health.

拓展句：You have been so absorbed in study away from your home that you have had no time for exercise,which is really harmful to your health.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying hard without feeling bad or ill. （运用了only引导的倒装句）

【高分句型2】So I put forward a suggestion that you take at least one hour’s exercise every day from now on.（运用了that引导的同位语从句）

3．Dear Mike,

I am sorry to know that you are not well these days, so I’d like to talk about how to keep healthy with you.

Just as the saying goes, “Health is wealth.” So if you attach great importance to fitness, it will have good effects on both of your physical and mental health. Firstly, you should have a balanced diet. While eating healthy food, you are more likely to be healthy. Secondly, I believe it is a good idea to make a reasonable schedule to study, play and rest at a good time. Actually it can only make you disappointed at, even ashamed of the low efficiency in spite of your devoting all your time to studying. Finally, have enough sleep and try to go to bed early and get up early.

I do hope you will become strong soon with all my advice.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Mike回一封邮件，说明一下健康的重要性并对养成健康的生活习惯提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

重视健身：attach great importance to fitness →pay great attention to fitness

事实上：Actually →As a matter of fact

尽管：in spite of →despite

足够的：enough→ adequate

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Actually it can only make you disappointed at, even ashamed of the low efficiency in spite of your devoting all your time to studying.

拓展句：Actually it can only make you disappointed at, even ashamed of the low efficiency though you devote all your time to studying.

【点睛】【高分句型1】So if you attach great importance to fitness, it will have good effects on both of your physical and mental health.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）

【高分句型2】I believe it is a good idea to make a reasonable schedule to study, play and rest at a good time.（运用了宾语从句省略了关系词that, 并且从句中使用了it做形式主语，不定式短语做真正主语）

4．Dear students,

With many people being infected with novel coronavirus, we’d like to make some constructive suggestions to help you spend a meaningful winter holiday.

To begin with, confronted with the serious condition, we students had better have personal protection in public and stay at home to have enough rest if possible. In addition, so precious is the time that we can’t afford to waste it as senior students. It is advisable that we should keep a balance between relaxation and study.

Hopefully, the advice will of benefit to you.

Students’ Union

【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作。要求考生代表学生会就如何过好即将到来的寒假，给全体学生一些建议。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

建议：suggestion→advice

首先：to begin with→first of all

另外：in addition→what’s more

放松：relaxation→easing

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：With many people being infected with novel coronavirus, we’d like to make some constructive suggestions to help you spend a meaningful winter holiday.

拓展句：As many people are infected with novel coronavirus, we’d like to make some constructive suggestions to help you spend a meaningful winter holiday.

【点睛】[高分句型1]In addition, so precious is the time that we can’t afford to waste it as senior students.(so位于句首的倒装句和that引导的结果状语从句)

[高分句型2]It is advisable that we should keep a balance between relaxation and study.(that引导的主语从句)

5．Dear Jim,

Learning that you have trouble in managing your time effectively, I’m writing to give you some useful suggestions.

Effective time management can help reduce your stress and boost your performance. The first thing you need to do is to plan ahead by making a daily to-do list. Being organized also helps a lot when you prepare for your lessons and activities. Most importantly, you must learn to prioritize all your tasks and stick to the goals you have set.

I hope you’ll find my suggestions practical and helpful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作。要求考生给外籍朋友Jim回封邮件，就如何有效管理自己的时间给出建议。

【详解】1. 词汇积累

知道：learning→know

问题：trouble→problem

建议：suggestion→advice

有用的：helpful→beneficial

2. 句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Effective time management can help reduce your stress and boost your performance.

拓展句：Not only can effective time management help reduce your stress, but also boost your performance.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Learning that you have trouble in managing your time effectively, I’m writing to give you some useful suggestions.(that引导的宾语从句)

[高分句型2]The first thing you need to do is to plan ahead by making a daily to-do list. (省略which的定语从句)

6．Dear Richard,

Glad to receive your email about the optional courses of Chinese literature, I think classical Chinese poetry is a good choice for you.

Learning classical Chinese poetry is a great way to better understand the history and culture of China. Besides, you can feel the charm of the Chinese language by reading the poems. To follow the course well, you'd better read as many poems as possible and look up related background information about the poets.

If you have any other questions, I would be more than glad to help.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你校开设了中国文学选修课，你的交换生好友Richard写邮件向你寻求选课建议这一情况，给他写一封回信，建议他选修中国古典诗歌。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：Glad→ Delighted

了解：understand → know

此外：Besides→ What’s more

查阅：look up→ refer to

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Learning classical Chinese poetry is a great way to better understand the history and culture of China.

拓展句：Learning classical Chinese poetry is a great way, which can better understand the history and culture of China.

【点睛】【高分句型1】To follow the course well, you'd better read as many poems as possible and look up related background information about the poets.（运用了动词不定式作目的状语。）

【高分句型2】If you have any other questions, I would be more than glad to help.（运用了If引导的条件状语从句。）

7．Dear Smith,

I’m more than pleased to know that we are planning to open a Chinese study in our school. As an exchange student from China, I’m happy to give my suggestions.

Firstly, the study can be designed in traditional Chinese style, providing readers with a strong Chinese cultural atmosphere. Secondly, it may be helpful to offer some excellent books that reflect Chinese culture to help readers raise their reading interest and broaden their cultural horizons. In addition, holding regular reading exchange meetings or lectures on traditional Chinese culture will also make the study more appealing.

Hope my ideas will be helpful!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生作为在伦敦某中学的交换生，学校即将开设一个中国书房，现要求考生给学校负责人Smith写一封建议信，提出相应的意见。

【详解】1.词汇积累

非常：more than→extremely/very

开心的：happy → delighted

建议：suggestion→ recommendation

吸引人的：appealing→ attractive

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Firstly, the study can be designed in traditional Chinese style, providing readers with a strong Chinese cultural atmosphere.

拓展句：Firstly, the study can be designed in traditional Chinese style, which will provide readers with a strong Chinese cultural atmosphere.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, the study can be designed in traditional Chinese style, providing readers with a strong Chinese cultural atmosphere.（运用了现在分词作伴随状语）

【高分句型2】 In addition, holding regular reading exchange meetings or lectures on traditional Chinese culture will also make the study more appealing.（运用了动名词作主语）

8．Dear Mike,

Speaking of your anxiety about the Tang Poetry Recitation, I think it is common among students. But there are always some ways to help out. Here are some of my suggestions.

First and foremost, get well-prepared before the recitation. Motivate yourself by keeping a positive outlook on it, and study with other diligent students who do the same. In addition, you should plan your study time well. Studying the night before or the morning of a recitation can only tire you. Worse still, it’s also stressful to memorize extra information on a tight schedule. Finally, wake up a little earlier to have enough time to get ready and eat in the morning because rushing out of the door can add to your stress.

Sincerely, I hope my advice will be helpful to you.Wish you can get good grades! Good luck!

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国交换同学Mike回一封邮件，因为他下周要参加唐诗朗诵会，有些焦虑，所以写信给他提出一些缓解紧张的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

我认为：I think→as far as I am concerned

建议：suggestion→tip

此外：in addition → what’s more

有帮助的：be helpful→be of help

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Worse still, it’s also stressful to memorize extra information on a tight schedule.

拓展句：Worse still, it’s also stressful that you memorize extra information on a tight schedule.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Motivate yourself by keeping a positive outlook on it, and study with other diligent students who do the same.（运用了祈使句结构以及who引导的定语从句）

【高分句型2】Studying the night before or the morning of a recitation can only tire you. （运用了动名词作主语的结构）

9．Dear Jenny,

How is everything going? Having known that you’d like to learn Chinese, I’m more than glad to recommend you to watch Chinese TV series,which may best suit exchange students like you.

A Chinese TV series named Home with Kids, once popular all over China,is still liked by teenagers now. It tells the stories of a family with three lovely and naughty kids as well as their happy family life. The story is vivid and interesting,and the language is easy to understand. I’m sure it will benefit you a lot.

Wish you all the best in your study.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国朋友Jenny写封邮件，给她推荐一些学习中文的方法，其中内容包括学习中文的方法和推荐的理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad→delighted

喜爱：like→be fond of

 现在：now→at present

 理解：understand→comprehend

 2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：It tells the stories of a family with three lovely and naughty kids as well as their happy family life.

拓展句：It tells the stories of a family that has three lovely and naughty kids as well as their happy family life.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Having known that you’d like to learn Chinese, I’m more than glad to recommend you to watch Chinese TV series, which may best suit exchange students like you.（运用了现在分词作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】 I’m sure it will benefit you a lot（运用了省略that的宾语从句）

10．Dear Mike,

I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble adjusting to your high school life. I understand it is hard to get used to your new school. Actually, anyone entering a strange environment will feel confused and lonely. The reaosn is that we are far away from our familiar surroundings. Besides, we are not sure whether we are popular in the new school and whether our new classmates are easy to get along with. However, you should not worry too much about these.

   I’m writing to offer you some useful advice. Firstly, I recommend that you sign up for extra-curricular activities, which can help you make more new friends. In this way you won't feel lonely and your school life will become colorful and interesting. Secondly, you should make a good schedule and focus on improving your study. As a teenager, it is our responsibility to study well. I hope my suggestions will be suitable for you.

I hope you can adapt quickly to the new environment.

Yours,

Li Hua

【导语】本书面表达属于应用文写作。要求回复笔友邮件，分析他不适应新学校的原因并提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

适应：adjust to→adapt to

此外：besides → what’s more

确定的：sure→certain

建议：advice→ suggestion

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Actually, anyone entering a strange environment will feel confused and lonely.

拓展句：Actually, anyone who enters a strange environment will feel confused and lonely.

【点睛】【高分句型1】I am sorry to hear that you' re having trouble adjusting to your high school life.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】I recommend that you sign up for extra-curricular activities, which can help you make more new friends.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）