高考英语书信写作专项训练
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1.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你所居住的小区,虽地处闹市,但因建成较早,当年规划的300个停车位早已不能满足500户居民的停车需求。小区业委会(owners’ committee)现正就如何缓解小区停车难这一问题征求居民们意见。在小区公众号留言,谈谈你的看法。留言中包括:
1.你的建议;
2.你的理由。
(文中不得出现考生姓名,学校等真实信息)
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2.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
随着数字技术的广泛使用,现在,学校里有些老师喜欢给学生布置线上作业,也有一些老师仍然喜欢布置线下作业,还有一些老师喜欢布置线上和线下混合式作业。作为一名高三学生,请你给老师写一封邮件,提出你关于作业方面的建议。邮件内容必须包括:
1.你觉得哪种作业形式更适合你们班级;
2.简单陈述你的理由,说明其利弊。
(文中不要出现真实姓名和学校名称)
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3.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李明,最近收到好友王磊的邮件,信中提到他对如何选择大学专业感到非常困惑。回复王磊一封邮件,内容须包括:
1.你对选择专业的建议;
2.你的理由。
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4.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友 Tom 最近给你来信,请根据下面信中所提的问题予以回信并提供相关建议。
Dear Li Hua,
How’s everything? Do you remember last time you asked me to visit your hometown in the future? I was so thrilled at the idea that I signed up for a Chinese course at school.
However, it is not as easy as I thought. Chinese uses a writing system that is unfamiliar to English speakers. Chinese doesn’t have an alphabet (字母) like we do. There are thousands of characters. That means have a lot of memorizing to do. And characters are just part of the learning. I suddenly feel at a loss.I was wondering if you could offer me some practical advice about this.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Tom
注意:1.词数 100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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5.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李明,你校英语报正在进行主题为“如何应对压力”的征文,你有意参加,写一篇短文,内容须包括:
1)你对如何应对压力的建议;
2)用具体的事例说明这一建议的有效性。
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6.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是中华中学高三学生徐晶,校团委为了帮助高三学生缓解学习压力,拟利用本月最后一个星期五下午开展一个高三年级减压活动,目前正在向全年级同学征求活动意见。你给校团委王老师写一封邮件,内容须包括:
Ø 你的建议;
Ø 你的理由。
注:文中不得提及你的真实姓名或学校。
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7.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是启明中学高三学生王华,你校学生会将组织一次“品上海”的活动,已在学校官网上发布方案,征求全体学生的意见。你需要写一封邮件,包含以下两点:
1. 提出你觉得需要改进的地方;
2. 需要改进的原因。
主题
品上海
时间
2023年1月2日上午7:00–下午18:00
路线
从人民广场坐旅游巴士前往青浦,参观“陈云故居”“朱家角古镇”“青西郊野公园”,然后返回人民广场。
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8.假设你是李华,你的澳洲朋友David参加汉语水平考试(HSK)未能通过。请你写一封信给他,内容包括:
1. 表示安慰和鼓励;
2. 提出今后学习汉语的建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
9.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
明启中学拟举办一次摄影展。现就布展方式(校图书馆或校园网站)征集学生意见。假设你是王磊,请给学生会写一封邮件表达你的想法。你的邮件必须满足以下要求:
1. 简述你写邮件的目的及你对布展方式的选择;
2. 说明你的理由(从体验感、互动性或影响力等方面对这两种布展方式进行对比)。
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10.假如你是李华,你的朋友Caroline发来邮件向你求助,她近来因考试成绩不佳,深受打击,逐渐对学习失去信心,请你给她写一封回信,帮助她重拾信心。具体内容如下:
1.给予安慰;
2.提出建议;
3.加以鼓励。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
Dear Caroline,
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Yours,
Li Hua
11.假设你是耀州中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他计划今年九月来中国上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件,内容包括:
(1) 表示欢迎;
(2) 推荐他上哪所大学;
(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意:(1). 词数不少于100;
(2). 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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12.假定你是李华,由于新冠疫情出现反弹,你校将于下周开始线上学习。请你给你班的交换生Chris写一封电子邮件,告诉他线上学习的注意事项。内容包括:
1. 写信目的;2. 网课须知;3.学习建议
注意:1. 写作词数80左右;
2.新冠疫情:COVID-19。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
13.假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Liam 准备选修他们学校开设的汉语课程,发来邮件,希望你能给他提供一些学习汉语的建议。请你回复邮件。内容包括:
1.提出建议;
2.给予鼓励。
注意:
1.词数约为80字左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Liam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
14.假如你是李华,你的英国朋友John来信说他们学校要组织中英文化交流项目,他要负责策划学校举办的中国文化节,但不知道如何将文化节办好,请你给他回信提一些建议,内容包括:
1.文化节活动项目;
2.学校间文化交流的意义;
3.你对他的鼓励。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John,
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Yours,
Li Hua
15.学校英语报对“高中生最常使用的手机app类型”进行了调查,结果发现学生最常使用社交类app,占42%,而学习类app的使用占12%。请根据这一结果向学校英语报投稿,内容包括:
1.结合自身实际,对数据中反映的情况谈谈你的看法;
2.你的建议
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
These days, our school has conducted a survey regarding the most frequently used mobile apps for senior high school students.
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16.假如你是李华,你校外教Daniel正为每周的“English Corner”征集自由讨论的话题,欢迎同学们畅所欲言。请你给他写一封建议信,内容包括:
1.你建议的话题(至少两个);
2.你的理由;
3.你的希望。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.内容应包括以上要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Daniel,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
17.假定你是李华,你的美国留学生朋友Alice正在努力学习汉语,学习中她遇到了很多困难。请你给她写封邮件,内容包括:
1.安慰并鼓励她;
2.给出学习汉语的建议;
3.祝愿她汉语学习顺利。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Alice,
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Yours,
Li Hua
18.假定你是李华,你的笔友Linda 因为腿受伤而不能参加学校舞蹈队比赛,为此她感到失落和沮丧。请你给她发一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示安慰;
2.提出建议;
3.你的祝愿。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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19.假定你是李华,你的留学生朋友Jack很喜欢中国书法,但是学习过程中发现太难想放弃。请你发一封电子邮件鼓励他。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
20.假定你校校报的英语版面正在征集同学们的意见,请你写封邮件说出你的建议和想法。内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.提出建议;
3.希望采纳。
注意:1.写作词数应为100左右;
2.开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear editor,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Senior 3.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考答案:
1.Dear owners’ committee,
As a resident of this community, I have the following suggestions on how to alleviate the parking problem in this community:
First, I think the community can scientifically and reasonably plan the parking spaces, number them, and guide the car owners to check the number. At the same time, we can also talk with residents in the community to reduce the public green space and increase the number of parking spaces. Second, we could seek help from the relevant departments, putting forward the proposal of building a large parking lot or three-dimensional parking building; Meanwhile, we can negotiate with the surrounding shops to implement the method of “dislocation parking” to relieve the tension of parking in the community. Third, I strongly recommend that public transportation and public bicycle travel should be advocated. By doing these not only can we could relieve the pressure of tight parking space,but also build up our bodies, which could be called win-win.
The above is my opinion,which I hope will be helpful to you.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给业主委员会写一封建议信,针对“小区停车难”问题提出自己的建议和理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:suggestion→ advice
首先:first → first and foremost
其次:second→ in addition
有益处的:helpful→ beneficial
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As a resident of this community, I have the following suggestions on how to alleviate the parking problem in this community.
拓展句:As a resident of this community, I have the following suggestions on how we could do something to alleviate the parking problem in this community.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, I think the community can scientifically and reasonably plan the parking spaces, number them, and guide the car owners to check the number. (运用了动词的并列结构)
【高分句型2】Third, I strongly recommend that public transportation and public bicycle travel should be advocated. (运用了虚拟语气以及that引导的宾语从句)
2.Dear Mr. Hu,
I’m writing to express my opinion about the online homework. With the scientific development, the Internet is developing rapidly. Online homework will become a trend. Therefore, I think that online homework can be more suitable for our Senior Three students.
The contents and forms of online homework are relatively rich, which not only can promote students to actively complete their homework, but also can greatly relieve the tense learning atmosphere. Besides, online homework can shorten the time of teachers’ correcting homework so that they can help us with important learning problems, because senior three students need more help from teachers. Although online homework also has drawbacks, such as computer time, I think we can control ourselves as teenagers.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给老师写一封邮件,提出你关于线上作业和线下作业更适合自己班级的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
适用:be suitable for → apply to
积极地:actively → positively
此外:Besides → What’s more
有用:be helpful to → be beneficial to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to express my opinion about the online homework.
拓展句:I’m writing to express my opinion about the online homework, which I think is useful to our study.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The contents and forms of online homework are relatively rich, which not only can promote students to actively complete their homework, but also can greatly relieve the tense learning atmosphere. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Besides, online homework can shorten the time of teachers’ correcting homework so that they can help us with important learning problems, because senior three students need more help from teachers. (运用了so that引导的结果状语从句和because引导的原因状语从句)
3.Dear Wanglei,
Hearing that you have trouble deciding which major you should choose when you enter the university, I’d like to offer you some suggestions. And I hope they will give you a hand.
First of all, it’s advisable that you choose one that is fit for your own interest because interest is the best teacher. When an obstacle arises, you will have the enthusiasm to crack it instead of giving it up. Also, pick a major you are good at. Sufficient knowledge may contribute to your progress. Last but not least, you’d better consider the career prospects since you will have to take advantage of what you’ve learnt in college to find yourself a job. When choices are multiple, you will have more chances.
Hope my advice is worthy taking and you can find your ideal major!
Yours,
Li Ming
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以高三学生李明的身份写邮件给好友王磊,对他将来如何选择大学专业提出建议并给出理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
决定:decide→determine
建议:suggestion→advice
擅长:be good at→do well in
机会:chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Also, pick a major you are good at. Sufficient knowledge may contribute to your progress.
拓展句:Also, pick a major you are good at because sufficient knowledge may contribute to your progress.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, it’s advisable that you choose one that is fit for your own interest because interest is the best teacher.(运用了that引导的主语从句、that引导的定语从句和because引导的状语从句)
【高分句型2】Last but not least, you’d better consider the career prospects since you will have to take advantage of what you’ve learnt in college to find yourself a job.(运用了since引导的状语从句和what引导的宾语从句,不定式作目的状语)
4.Dear Tom,
I am glad to know that you signed up for a Chinese course. As for how to learn Chinese well, I’d like to give you some suggestions.
First, prounciation and listening. You can listen to more news programs and watch Chinese movies. Second, keeping a Chinese diary is good for your Chinese writing. You will learn to think in Chinese instead of translating everything into English. Third, try to speak in Chinese in your daily life, which is vital to your Chinese study.
I hope the suggestions will be helpful for you. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一封建议信。要求考生给英国笔友Tom 写一封信,就如何学习汉语向其提供一些建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
了解:know → learn
课程:course → lesson
建议:suggestion → advice
重要:vital → important
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: As for how to learn Chinese well, I’d like to give you some suggestions..
拓展句: As for how to learn Chinese well, I’d like to give you some suggestions which I hope will be helpful.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Second, keeping a Chinese diary is good for your Chinese writing. (运用了动名词短语作主语)
【高分句型2】
Third, try to speak in Chinese in your daily life, which is vital to your Chinese study. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
5.Psychologist tell us that stress is a state of worry caused by the problem in life , such as too much work or study, heavy responsibilities, and quickened pace of life. I think there are lots of things we can do to solve these problems.
As we know, music is the most beautiful language in the world. I think it's helpful to listen to some music when we are under too much pressure. It will make us forget all our problems and recall some good memories. Or we could read some jokes and a burst of laughter helps a lot. Besides, doing sports is another great way to deal with the problems. It's not only good for our health but also our mood. Having worked out, we will feel very tired physically, which helps us to fall fast asleep and have a good sleep. When I failed the last exam in Junior school, stress began to mount. I was in low spirits and couldn't concentrate. Luckily, one weekend, my best friend pulled me to the wood, where we hiked and jogged for the whole morning. Sweating thoroughly,and mountains of load gone, I felt confident about my entrance exam. Last, we can talk about our problems with our teachers or best friends, who may help us to get over it.
In a word, everything depends on our attitude. It is important to stay happy all the time, isn't it? The more meaningful things we do, the happier we will be.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文给校英语报进行的主题为“如何应对压力”的征文比赛投稿。内容须包括:
1)对如何应对压力的建议;
2)用具体的事例说明这一建议的有效性。
【详解】1.词汇积累
压力:stress→pressure
此外:besides → what’s more/furthermore/additionally
情绪低落的:down→depressed/in low spirits
增长:increase→accumulate/mount
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, doing sports is another great way to deal with the problems. It's not only good for our health but also our mood.
拓展句:Besides, doing sports is another great way to deal with the problems, which is not only good for our health but also our mood.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Sweating thoroughly,and mountains of load gone, I felt confident about my entrance exam.(运用了现在分词和独立主格结构作状语)
【高分句型2】Having worked out, we will feel very tired physically, which helps us to fall fast asleep and have a good sleep.(运用了现在分词作状语及which引导的非限制性定语从句)
6.Dear Mr. Wang,
I am very glad to hear that our school is going to carry out an activity to help students relieve stress. I am writing to offer my advice.
I suggest that a fun game for all Senior Three students should be held on the school playground. Various sports games, fun and exciting, will attract lots of participation, among which Riding Pigs, Mud Wrestling and Chinese Rolling will be the most welcomed. The playground will be filled with the students’ laughter and cheers. Aiming to relieve the senior 3 students from pressure and get them a break from heavy school work, the activity will be a great success.
I’d appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Xu Jing
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给团委王老师写一封邮件,就最后一个周五开展的高三年级减压活动提出自己的建议,并陈述理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
刺激的:exciting→thrilling
充满:be filled with→be full of
考虑:take...into consideration→take...into account
2.句型拓展
合并句子
原句:I am very glad to hear that our school is going to carry out an activity to help students relieve stress. I am writing to offer my advice.
拓展句:Hearing that our school is going to carry out an activity to help students relieve stress, I am writing to offer my advice.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I am very glad to hear that our school is going to carry out an activity to help students relieve stress. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Aiming to relieve the senior 3 students from pressure and get them a break from heavy school work, the activity will be a great success.(运用了现在分词作状语)
7.Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m really excited to hear that an activity named “Taste Shanghai” will be held from 7:00 am to 18:00 pm on January 2nd, 2023. However, there may be further improvement of the scheme you’ve posted on the campus website, as I’d like to point out.
First of all, as participants, we need to know where should we meet . In the mean time, we are willing to have a clearer picture of security precautions and necessary medical support for the activity. Only by doing so are you likely to make it a success. What’s more, in addition to visiting the “former Residence of Chen Yun”, “Zhujiajiao Ancient Town” and “Qingxi Suburban Wild Park”, I suggest that the activities of tasting special food and tasting special culture can be included. By appreciating the local culture, we can gain a deeper insight into the prosperity of our city.
I hope that my voice above can be heard and considered and wish the activity a great success.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校工作人员写一封信件,针对学生会即将组织的“品上海”的活动提出相关意见。内容包括:提出你觉得需要改进的地方,以及需要改进的原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办:hold→launch
此外: what’s more→besides
建议:suggest→advise
希望:hope→expect
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句: In the mean time, we are willing to have a clearer picture of security precautions and necessary medical support for the activity.
拓展句: In the mean time, we are willing to have a clearer picture of security precautions and necessary medical support for the activity, which is of great importance.
【点睛】【高分句型1】However, there may be further improvement of the scheme you’ve posted on the campus website, as I’d like to point out.(运用了省略引导词that/which引导的限制性定语从句,以及as引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I hope that my voice above can be heard and considered and wish the activity a great success.(运用了that引导的宾语从句以及情态动词的被动语态)
8.参考范文
Dear David,
I’m sorry to hear that you failed to pass HSK. I hope that the unexpected failure won’t let you down, for I have still been amazed by the excellent Chinese you spoke when we first met.
As we know, language learning is never an easy task, but needs painstaking efforts and patience. Personally, I think you’d better pay close attention to the formal use of Chinese words and expressions, which really counts. Meanwhile, you may as well read more Chinese materials as much as you can afford. More importantly, you should learn from the mistakes that you have made. Anyhow, you’ve already made great progress in your learning of Chinese.
Hopefully, my suggestions will be of some help and wish you good luck.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给没能通过汉语水平考试的澳洲朋友David写一封信给,表示安慰和鼓励,同时就如何学习汉语提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
惊讶的:amazed→astonished
就个人而言:personally→as far as I am concerned
重要:count→matter
无论如何:anyhow→in any case
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Anyhow, you’ve already made great progress in your learning of Chinese.
拓展句:Anyhow, you’ve already made great progress in your learning of Chinese, which is encouraging.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I hope that the unexpected failure won’t let you down, for I have still been amazed by the excellent Chinese you spoke when we first met. (运用了that引导的宾语从句,for引导的原因状语从句和when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】Personally, I think you’d better pay close attention to the formal use of Chinese words and expressions, which really counts. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
9.To whom it may concern:
I’ve learned that a photography exhibition is to be held and that you’re collecting advice on the way of arrangement. I’m writing this letter to share my opinions with you. In my opinion, it is more advisable to hold the photography exhibition in school library than on campus website. My reasons are as follows.
At first, the library of our school is spacious, which provides visitors with a comfortable environment for appreciating the exhibition, so they will have a nice experience. Besides, watching the exhibition at school library is more convenient for visitors to interact with others. Last but not least, a photography exhibition held on campus website has far less impact than that held in school library, because people may assume that holding a photography exhibition on website is just like a virtual activity. Therefore, I suggest the exhibition be held in school library.
Yours,
Wang Lei
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。明启中学拟举办一次摄影展,现就布展方式征集学生意见,要求考生给学生会写一封邮件表达自己的想法,内容要点包括:1. 简述你写邮件的目的及你对布展方式的选择;2. 说明你的理由(从体验感、互动性或影响力等方面对这两种布展方式进行对比)。
【详解】1.词汇积累:
建议:advice → suggestions
在我看来:In my opinion → As far as I am concerned
宽敞的:spacious → capacious
此外:Besides → What’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In my opinion, it is more advisable to hold the photography exhibition in school library than on campus website.
拓展句:I hold the belief that it is more advisable to hold the photography exhibition in school library than on campus website.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’ve learned that a photography exhibition is to be held and that you’re collecting advice on the way of arrangement. (运用了that 引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】At first, the library of our school is spacious, which provides visitors with a comfortable environment for appreciating the exhibition, so they will have a nice experience. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
10.范文
Dear Caroline,
I am terribly sorry to hear that you have trouble in study and lose confidence. I am writing to express my genuine concern and share with you some suggestions that might be of some help on it.
First of all, it is wise of you to work on positive thinking because a positive thinking will lead to positive results. Don’t worry about letting yourself or others down. Additionally, it is strongly advised that you’d better set realistic goals and break the overall goal into smaller ones, which makes it easy for you to get a sense of accomplishment.
I am firmly convinced that you will regain confidence with your efforts. Please contact me with any other questions. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。Caroline近来因考试成绩不佳,深受打击,逐渐对学习失去信心,要求考生给朋友Caroline写一封回信,帮助她重拾信心。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非常:terribly → extremely
失去信心,灰心:lose confidence → lose heart
表达,表示:express → show
建议:suggestios → advice
2.句式拓展
同义句转化
原句:I am writing to express my genuine concern and share with you some suggestions that might be of some help on it.
拓展句:I am writing to express my genuine concern, sharing some suggestions with you, which might be of some help on it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
I am terribly sorry to hear that you have trouble in study and lose confidence.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】
Additionally, it is strongly advised that you’d better set realistic goals and break the overall goal into smaller ones, which makes it easy for you to get a sense of accomplishment.(运用了it作形式主语和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
11.Dear Jim,
I’m glad to hear that you are coming to China. I’m trying to offer you some suggestions on which university to choose.
As you have long been interested in Chinese culture, I think Beijing Language and Culture University is your best choice. Known for its language and culture courses intended for international students, the university is an ideal place, where I believe you will have a rewarding experience.
Since it’s no easy task to live in a different culture, I think it would be beneficial for you to learn some basic Chinese before you come. That way, you may adjust to the life here as soon as possible.
Hope my suggestions will be of some help to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是耀州中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他计划今年九月来中国上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:suggestion→ advice
感兴趣:be interested in → take interest in
有利于:be beneficial for→ be good for
有帮助的:be of help→ be helpful
2.句式拓展
简合并简单句
原句: I’m glad to hear that you are coming to China. I’m trying to offer you some suggestions on which university to choose.
拓展句: Hearing that you are coming to China, I’m delighted and trying to offer you some suggestions on which university to choose.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As you have long been interested in Chinese culture, I think Beijing Language and Culture University is your best choice.(运用了as引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】Known for its language and culture courses intended for international students, the university is an ideal place, where I believe you will have a rewarding experience.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
12.Dear Chris,
There is news that we are going to have online classes next week because of COVID-19. I’m writing to offer you some advice.
Firstly, you are supposed to download the software called DingTalk, through which our teachers give their lectures. Besides, you’d better prepare your lessons before class. Take an active part in the class and remember to take notes during the class. You can contact the teachers after class if you have any questions.
I hope you will find my advice useful.
Yours
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给交换生Chris写一封电子邮件,告诉他线上学习的注意事项。内容包括:1. 写信目的;2. 网课须知;3.学习建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供:offer→provide
建议:advice→suggestion
此外:besides→moreover
因为:because of→due to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Take an active part in the class and remember to take notes during the class.
拓展句:It is suggested that you should take an active part in the class and remember to take notes during the class.
【点睛】[高分句型1] There is news that we are going to have online classes next week because of COVID-19. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)
[高分句型2] Firstly, you are supposed to download the software called DingTalk, through which our teachers give their lectures. (运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句)
13.Dear Liam,
Great joy filled my heart when I got to know you were going to take the Chinese language course.To smooth your learning prosess,I have some suggestions for you.
Firstly, the general methods of learning foreign languages apply to learning Chinese as well. Specifically, it is advisable that you can memorize some Chinese characters by associating them with the shape or the scene of the things they refer to,which can create a link belween the writing and the meaning.Additionally, I recommend you read some Chinese folk stories, as the essence of Chinese culture is carried in the rich and interesting tales that have been passed down through the ages.
You have always been a motivated and devoted learner,for which you are bound to achieve what you set out to achieve. I sincerely hope these ideas will be of some help.Should you have further questions,please do not hesitate to let me know.Good luck.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于建议信。要求考生给美国朋友Liam 提供一些学习汉语的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:advice →suggestion
此外:besides → additionally
记忆:remember →memorize
实现:realize → achieve
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To smooth your learning process, I have some suggestions for you.
拓展句:I have some suggestions for you so that you can smooth your learning process.
【点睛】【高分句型1】You have always been a motivated and devoted learner, for which you are bound to achieve what you set out to achieve.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句以及what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Great joy filled my heart when I got to know you were going to take the Chinese language course.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
14.
Dear John,
Learning that you are appointed the task to organize the Chinese Culture Festival, I am more than delighted to offer some suggestions.
Art is an inseparable part of Chinese culture, which includes paintings, dramas, handcrafts and so on. Therefore, it makes sense to arrange for a gallery exhibiting various traditional Chinese art forms. Additionally, the Chinese lay great significance and proud themselves on their traditional festivals. To get everyone involved, you can hold a couple of DIYs, such as making dumplings and zongzi to create a festival atmosphere.
The exchange between different cultures promotes communication and understanding between different nations. I’m confident that you are able to make the event a success with ample preparations.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友John写一封建议信,告知他如何举办好中英文化交流项目。内容包括:文化节活动项目;学校间文化交流的意义;对他的鼓励。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供:offer→ provide
建议:suggestion → advice/tip
此外:additionally→ in addition
充足的:ample→ sufficient/enough
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Learning that you are appointed the task to organize the Chinese Culture Festival, I am more than delighted to offer some suggestions.
拓展句:Because I learn that you are appointed the task to organize the Chinese Culture Festival, I am more than delighted to offer some suggestions.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Art is an inseparable part of Chinese culture, which includes paintings, dramas, handcrafts and so on. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 I’m confident that you are able to make the event a success with ample preparations.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
15.One possible version:
These days,our school has conducted a survey regarding the most frequently used mobile apps for senior high school students.Among the students participating in the survey,the ones who choose social apps account for 42%,while those who chose learning apps only account for 12%.)
As far as I’m concerned,it is a disturbing trend.For senior high school students,what matters most at present is study rather than social activities.Because of their lack of social experience,they are more easily cheated by others,causing too much harm to themselves and their families.
Therefore,it is necessary for us students to enhance self﹣discipline.In addition,parents and teachers should give us more guidance.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文,要求考生向学校英语报投稿,对“高中生最常使用的手机app类型”进行的调查情况谈谈看法并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:participate in →take part in
重要:matter →count
另外:in addition→what's more/additionally
提供:give→offer/provide/supply
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In addition,parents and teachers should give us more guidance.
拓展句:In addition,it is of great significance that parents and teachers should give us more guidance.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Among the students participating in the survey,the ones who choose social apps account for 42%,while those who chose learning apps only account for 12%.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]For senior high school students,what matters most at present is study rather than social activities.(运用了what引导的主语从句)
[高分句型3]Because of their lack of social experience,they are more easily cheated by others,causing too much harm to themselves and their families.(运用了现在分词)
16.Dear Daniel,
I’m Li Hua from Senior 3. You can’t imagine how overjoyed I am hearing about your plan. I’m more than glad to offer my advice for your reference.
Food is a topic that will never be outdated, and I’m pretty sure the students will be interested in it. When it comes to food, we always have a lot to share, such as our favorite recipes, and the most renowned food streets. If possible, I think it will be fun if students can take some food along with them and share with each other. Another topic highly recommended is films. By exchanging information ranging from the plots to the film reviews, students are bound to benefit a lot both in their spoken English, and their thinking, which will undeniably help the activity enjoy an increasing popularity.
I hope these recommendations will be of value and I can’t wait to join you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教Daniel写信,就“English Corner”的话题提出自己的建议,并说明原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
建议:advice→suggestion
著名的:renowned→famous/well-known
一定……:be bound to→be sure to
2.句型拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m Li Hua from Senior 3.
拓展句:I’m Li Hua from Senior 3, who is one of the faithful fans of the English Corner.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Food is a topic that will never be outdated, and I’m pretty sure the students will be interested in it. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]By exchanging information ranging from the plots to the film reviews, students are bound to benefit a lot both in their spoken English, and their thinking, which will undeniably help the activity enjoy an increasing popularity.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
17.Dear Alice,
How are you going recently? I hear you’re having much difficulty learning Chinese. Don’t worry. You’ll succeed as long as you have confidence and patience. I would like to give you some helpful suggestions. First, develop good study habits. There is no doubt that habits play an extremely important role in study. You can read Chinese stories, jokes and news aloud every morning. It pays if you keep on reading. Besides, it is important for you to communicate with native Chinese, which is really beneficial. The more you practice, the better your spoken Chinese will be.
I sincerely hope you’ll have a smooth journey in learning Chinese. Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国留学生朋友Alice写封邮件,对于她学习中遇到的困难安慰鼓励她,并给出学习汉语的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
只要:as long as→so long as
建议:suggestion→advice
在……中扮演着重要的角色:play an important role in→play an important part in
此外:besides→what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I would like to give you some helpful suggestions.
拓展句:I would like to give you some suggestions which are helpful.
【点睛】【高分句型1】You’ll succeed as long as you have confidence and patience.(运用了as long as引导的条件状语从句)
【高分句型2】There is no doubt that habits play an extremely important role in study. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)
【高分句型3】Besides, it is important for you to communicate with native Chinese, which is really beneficial.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语宾语)
18.Dear Linda,
I’m sorry to hear that you cannot take part in the dancing competition to be held in your school because of your leg injury, and I’d like to give you some comfort and advice.
As far as I’m concerned, the most important thing that you need do now is have a good rest, which is beneficial to your recovery. Besides, there is no need for you to worry about this competition, be cause you will have more chances to participate in such competitions when you fully recover from your injury.
I hope you will get well in no time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,你的笔友Linda 因为腿受伤而不能参加学校舞蹈队比赛,为此她感到失落和沮丧。请你给她发一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加:take part in→participate in
建议:advice→suggestion
有益的:beneficial→helpful
此外:besides→in addition
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:As far as I’m concerned, the most important thing that you need do now is have a good rest, which is beneficial to your recovery.
拓展句:As far as I’m concerned, it is important for you to have a good rest, which is beneficial to your recovery.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that you cannot take part in the dancing competition to be held in your school because of your leg injury, and I’d like to give you some comfort and advice. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] As far as I’m concerned, the most important thing that you need do now is have a good rest, which is beneficial to your recovery. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
19.Dear Lucy,
I am more than happy to know that you have learnt Chinese calligraphy. You know Chinese calligraphy is rather valuable for it is like a window to better understand the Chinese culture. Thus, never give up.
Here are my sincere suggestions. To begin with, be patient. The more you practice, the more confident you will be. Moreover, calm down. You shouldn’t be upset when meeting problems. Take a deep breath and go on.
I do believe you are such a hard-working girl that it would be easy for you to make it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给留学生朋友Jack发一封电子邮件,鼓励他坚持练习中国书法,不要放弃。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非常:more than→very
首先:To begin with→ First of all
沮丧的:upset→ disappointed
成功:make it→ succeed
2.句式拓展
同义句转化
原句:I am more than happy to know that you have learnt Chinese calligraphy.
拓展句:Knowing that you have learnt Chinese calligraphy, I am more than happy.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The more you practice, the more confident you will be.(运用了“the+比较级,the+比较级”句型)
【高分句型2】I do believe you are such a hard-working girl that it would be easy for you to make it.(运用了“such +a +adj.+名词+ that引导结果状语从句”句型)
20.One possible version:
Dear editor,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Senior 3. I’m writing to share my suggestions on our English column with you.
Actually, while I think our columns are very good, from which we can learn a lot, I still have some advice. For example, the names of some columns can be changed to help attract readers’ attention. What’s more, it can’t be better if a column about some idioms can be included, which will add to our knowledge and let us know more about English culture. In this way, we can avoid some misunderstanding when reading or communicating with others. Last but not least, your newspaper should pay attention to some spelling mistakes, which in fact is very easy to avoid as long as you are careful enough.
I’ll be grateful if you can consider my advice and hope it will be helpful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校校报的英语版面编辑写封信,说出建议和想法。内容包括:1.写信目的;2.提出建议;3.希望采纳。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议:suggestion→advice
事实上:actually→as a matter of fact
感激的:grateful→thankful
另外:what’s more→in addition
2.句式拓展
同义句转化
原句:In this way, we can avoid some misunderstanding when reading or communicating with others.
拓展句:Only in this way,can we avoid some misunderstanding when reading or communicating with others.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Actually, while I think our columns are very good, from which we can learn a lot, I still have some advice. (运用了while引导的让步状语从句和“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】What’s more, it can’t be better if a column about some idioms can be included, which will add to our knowledge and let us know more about English culture. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
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