江苏省常州市金坛区2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编：书面表达

江苏省常州市金坛区

2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编

书面表达

2023年江苏省常州市金坛区中考一模英语试题

七、书面表达（共1题；满分15分）

去年9月, 《义务教育劳动课程标准（2022年版）》开始执行。假如你是李华, 你们班下周的班会课主题是"Labor（劳动）"。请你根据以下要求．写一份发言稿。

As we all know, labor is an important part of our life. Labor is hard, but it is a glorious（光荣的）thing.

Please share your ideas about the topic.

1. Is labor important for us teenagers? And why?

2. Do you often do housework at home or voluntary labor in society? Please share an experience based on your real life.

注意：

1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2. 词数100左右：文章的开头已为你写好, 不计入总词数。

Dear classmates,

It's my honor to be here. ___________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thank you！

2022年江苏省常州市金坛区中考一模英语试题

七、书面表达 （共1题, 满分15分）

假如现在是2092年, 你是Kate, 生活在火星上, 你的朋友Jim 现在在地球上, 他即将来火星生活。请你写一封100词左右的信, 向他介绍你在火星上的生活。

注意事项∶

1. 信的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数∶

2. 信中必须涉及上述几个方面的内容, 可适当增加相关细节, 使意思表达更加完整。

Dear Jim,

Now, I'm writing a letter to you on Mars. It's really wonderful to live on Mars. _______________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes,

Kate

2021年江苏省常州市金坛区中考一模英语试题

八、书面表达（共1题，满分15分）

60. 随着科技的发展，越来越多的语音助手进入我们的生活，阿里巴巴发布的天猫精灵TmallGenie就是其中一款。假如你妈妈最近刚买了一个送给你作为生日礼物。下图是有关天猫精灵的介绍，请你根据所提供的信息写一份对它的介绍。

注意：

1．根据所给信息进行介绍，举例说明并适当发挥。

2．字数100字左右，短文开头已给出，不计入词数。

Hello, everyone! Here, I’d like to introduce TmallGenie that my mother bought for me as my birthday present.

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答案：

2023年江苏省常州市金坛区中考一模英语试题

57．例文

Dear classmates,

It’s my honor to be here. It’s known that labor is a glorious thing. As a teenager, I think labor is quite important for us teenagers.

There is no doubt that labor can exercise our practical ability. More importantly, it can make us happy. Last weekend, I got up early and made breakfast for my parents. First, I boiled some water and put some noodles into the pot. About several minutes later, I placed them in the bowls and added some salt and oil. When my parents got up, they were so surprised and praised me with a big smile. It was the first time I cooked for them. I felt proud of myself because I could take care of my parents.

Labor is an important part of life. Let’s take action and do some labor we can at home, at school or in society.

Thank you!

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；

③提示：写作要点已部分给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的要点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，开门见山，说明发言稿的主题；

第二步，具体介绍劳动重要的原因并分享自己的体验；

第三步，收尾，鼓励大家多参与劳动。

[亮点词汇]

①take care of 照顾

②more importantly 更重要的是

[高分句型]

①When my parents got up, they were so surprised and praised me with a big smile.（when引导时间状语从句）

②I felt proud of myself because I could take care of my parents.（because引导原因状语从句）

2022年江苏省常州市金坛区中考一模英语试题

57．例文

Dear Jim,

Now, I’m writing a letter to you on Mars. It’s really wonderful to live on Mars.

I think life on Mars is more comfortable and more interesting than that on earth. We have online schools instead of real ones. We have lessons, do our homework, take exams and talk to teachers and classmates through the computers connected to an interplanetary network at home. It’s not so crowded here so we have more space to live. Most of our housework is done by robots so that we can have more time for our hobbies. Mars is very beautiful. There are green trees and fresh flowers everywhere, and there is no pollution here. We have supermarkets in our neighbourhood. They make our life more convenient.

Best wishes,

Kate

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，向Jim介绍火星上的生活。

2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。文章开头已给出，第二段从学校，生活，环境等方面来介绍自己在火星的生活。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

2021年江苏省常州市金坛区中考一模英语试题

60．One possible version:

Hello, everyone! Here, I’d like to introduce TmallGenie that my mother bought for me as a present. It is so small that it is convenient to carry wherever we go. Also, both its colours and pictures are beautiful.

It can provide different kinds of service for us. Whenever we have problems with our life or study, just speak to it and it will offer us the help that we need. In addition, the music it plays can make us relaxed after a hard day’s work or study. Meanwhile, the children are easy to fall asleep by listening to the story that it tells. Also, it can remind you of important dates so that we can’t forget the important things we have to do. Every time we want to know what is happening, it will tell us some up-to-date information at home and abroad immediately.

In general, I have found my life more enjoyable and colourful since it came into my life. It is always with me like my closest friend. It can almost do whatever it is asked to. That is why I like it so much.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是写一篇英语短文，开头已给出。要求根据表格信息提示来介绍一下你妈妈给你买的天猫精灵，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来介绍天猫精灵；因为主要是描述客观事实，时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍天猫精灵时，应描写细致；并且短文需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。