黑龙江省哈尔滨市平房区2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编：书面表达

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2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编

书面表达

2023年黑龙江省哈尔滨市平房区中考一模英语试题

六、书面表达(本题共20分)

假如你是李明, 英国笔友Tom来信祝贺你生日的同时表示对你的成长日标很感兴趣。请根据以下提示, 给他写一封回信, 并谈谈中学生设立日标的益处。

写作要点：

1. 感谢他对你的关心。

2. 你的日标(goal):

(1)改善和家人之间的关系：

(2)从事一项新的爱好。

3. 谈谈中学生设立日标的益处。

写作要求：

1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。

2. 可适当加入细节, 使内容充实, 行文连贯。

3. 字迹工整、语言精炼、表达准确、条理清晰。

4. 至少80词。

Dear Tom,

Knowing that you are interested in my 16-year-old goal. I'm writing to you.            

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Ming

2022年黑龙江省哈尔滨市平房区中考一模英语试题

十二、书信作文

80．假如你是王宇，你的英语老师O1ivia向同学们征集有创意的（Creative）英语作业。请你给Olivia写一封信，谈谈你对英语作业的认识，帮Olivia设计出有创意的英语作业并给出理由。

写作要点：

1.很期待有创意的英语作业。

2.谈谈你对英语作业的认识；

（1）复习、掌握已学知识；

（2）丰富、扩展知识，提高对英语的兴趣。

3.请你帮Olivia设计出有创意的英语作业并给出理由。

写作要求：

1.不得使用真实姓名和学校名。

2.可适当加入细节，使内容允实，行文连贯。

3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。

4.至少80词。

Dear Olivia,

I’m glad to tell you my ideas about homework. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes!

Yours,

Wang Yu

2021年黑龙江省哈尔滨市平房区中考一模英语试题

十二、电子邮件

80．假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Simon给你发来邮件，告诉你他要随同父母来中国生活一段时间，为了让他尽快适应在中国的生活，请你根据以下信息给他回一封电子邮件，并给他提出一些相关建议。

写作要点：

1. 欢迎他来到中国。

2. 介绍几个中国的传统及风俗习惯；

（1）姓名的写法：姓氏在前，名字在后；

（2）初次见面；握手；

（3）谈论的话题：年龄、家庭等。

3. 请你给Simon提出在中国生活的具体建议。

写作要求：1. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名。

2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。

4. 至少80词。

Dear Simon,

I’m very glad to hear from you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________  

Have a great time in China!

Yours,

Li Hua

答案：

2023年黑龙江省哈尔滨市平房区中考一模英语试题

【分析】【高分句型一】

If we have time on weekends，we should often go to the park for picnics. 如果我们周末有时间，我们应该经常去公园野餐。if引导的条件状语从句。

【高分句型二】

I think setting goals can make our lives more purposeful. 我认为设定目标可以让我们的生活更有目的性。I think+宾语从句。

【解答】Dear Tom，

    Knowing that you are interested in my 16﹣ year﹣ old goal. I'm writing to you to thank you for your concern for me. （谢他对我的关心）I first want to improve my relationship with my family. If I have any questions，I need to communicate with them more. If we have time on weekends，we should often go to the park for picnics. 【高分句型一】At the same time，I really enjoy playing basketball. I want to cultivate my hobby of playing basketball. （我的目标）I think setting goals can make our lives more purposeful. 【高分句型二】In order to achieve these goals，we can better strive towards them. （谈谈中学生设立目标的益处）

   Best wishes!

Yours，

Li Ming

2022年黑龙江省哈尔滨市平房区中考一模英语试题

80．例文

Dear Olivia,

I’m glad to tell you my ideas about homework.

Doing English homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class. Doing creative homework makes us more interested in English.

Once our teacher asked us to write a letter to a foreigner. We were told to introduce the Spring Festival in the letter. It not only helped me improve my written skills but also provided a good chance to spread Chinese traditional culture.

In my opinion, it’s also a good choice to draw mind maps. It helps us to have a better understanding of the lessons. Besides, we can learn to sing English songs, since most of us love singing. In this way, our English as well as hobbies develops.

I hope we’ll have more creative English homework in the future.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Wang Yu

【详解】题目解读：本文是一篇书信作文，要求根据给出要点介绍创意英语，并提出自己的建议。注意要点齐全，上下文连贯。

写作指导：本文以第一人称书写，时态主要是一般现在时和一般过去时。可以使用被动语态、现在完成时和固定短语、句型来增加文章亮点。

2021年黑龙江省哈尔滨市平房区中考一模英语试题

80．例文：

Dear Simon,

I’m very glad to hear from you. I’m very excited to hear that you are going to China. Welcome to China.

There are different customs between different countries. Now I will tell you some customs in China. First, the way Chinese people write their names: the family name comes first and the name comes second. Second, when we meet others for the first time in China, we often shake hands with them. It’s not polite to only say hello. Third, topics of conversation: age, family, etc.

Last but not least, if there are elders at the table, we aren’t supposed to eat first. Elders first, then we eat. I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.

Have a great time in China!

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于电子邮件。题目要求是，为了让美国笔友Simon尽快适应中国的生活，请你以李华的身份，根据提示信息给他提一些相关建议，内容要紧扣主题，语句要通顺、连贯。

2.写法指导：首先要认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点，围绕主题展开作文；在写作中要避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语；要注意谓语动词的时态，以及人称与数的变化，不要出现语法错误；本文主要以一般现在时为主，以第一人称展开写作，要保证字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。其次，可从以下四个方面展开作文：一是欢迎他来中国；二是介绍中国的几个传统和风俗习惯 (姓名的写法；初次见面；讨论的话题)；三是给Simon提出在中国生活的具体建议；最后预祝他在中国生活愉快（结尾已给出）。