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1.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
Why Camping Can Be So Much Fun?
When you go on holiday, where do you like to stay? If you haven’t tried camping, maybe you should join the increasing number of people who are enjoying the simple pleasures of camping.
By grabbing your tent, and some additional things, it’s easy to head off to the countryside and enjoy a night or two under the stars. Many campers are dumping the trappings of their modern, busy life to do this, encouraged by experts who say a few peaceful nights in the middle of nowhere might be a good way to relax and improve our sleep patterns and well-being. It is also, of course, a good low-budget holiday option.
For the adventurous, wild camping is an ideal way to escape from reality. Armed with just some food and a sleeping bag, you’re free from rules, away from other people, and able to enjoy the back-to-basics experience. But for those who still want some home comforts, a campsite is a more suitable place to fix your tent. Here you have facilities such as washrooms, a shop and maybe even a restaurant. And for the most luxurious camping experience, you could try glamping, a type of camping associated with extreme comforts and luxury.
More recently, sales of camping equipment have jumped as more people have chosen a vacation spent at hometown due to travel restrictions caused by the pandemic. One camping retailer, Halfords, reported a sharp rise in demand for products such as stoves, cool boxes and camping chairs. With the addition of soft pillows, powerful torches and lamps to light up your tent and a better selection of easy-to-cook food, you can almost guarantee a comfortable and enjoyable camping expedition. So maybe it’s time to give camping a try.
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2.Directions: Reading the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage with no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
Building a Greener Future
Which is more important when designing a building: beauty or function?
At the start of the twentieth century, Louis Sullivan, one of the creators of modern architecture, said that ‘form follows function’. However, many people disagree with this and feel that beauty is a more important factor in architectural design. In the modern world, it seems that most architects combine both ideas: aiming to create buildings which are both functional and beautiful.
The reason for creating a building in the first place is clearly very important. For example, when building an airport terminal, you need to think of the needs of passengers as well as planes. Passengers want to get to their plane as quickly as they can, and planes need to be parked in the most efficient way possible.
Beauty, however, is also clearly important when constructing a building. Living or working in an ugly place creates a depressing and uninspiring environment. In contrast, an attractive building can make people feel happier and increase their motivation to work. There is also a wider responsibility to society which architects have to consider. Beautiful, well-constructed buildings are a symbol of a civilized society.
In theory, there seems to be no reason why architecture cannot be both functional and beautiful. Yet in practice, this can cause problems. The Modern International style of the 1920s and 1930s, an example of which is the Guggenheim Museum in New York, was supposed to combine beauty with function. Many consider the museum’s white spiral ramp beautiful, but there have been complaints that it is impractical, as it is difficult to stand back to view the art. Also, the ramp is so narrow that it can become overcrowded. It seems that even this celebrated design has problems with functionality.
If architects focus only on function, buildings may be cold, ugly and uninteresting. On the other hand, if they focus only on making it look beautiful, the building may be completely impractical. Therefore, combining these two ideas is necessary to create the perfect piece of architecture.
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3.Directions: Read the following three passages. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
Are You Ready for Your Exam?
So, it’s the exam time again-have you done the necessary work to get good marks? Sleeping with the textbook under the pillow(枕头) in the hope that knowledge will be magically absorbed into your brain as you sleep doesn’t work. The best strategy is to space your practice out, rather than cram(死记硬背) it all together. It means hit the books early!
In an article in the British newspaper The Guardian, Tom Stafford, a lecturer in psychology at the University of Sheffield. UK. advises: “If you organize five hours of study into one hours a day, you’ll remember more than if you study for five hours on one day.”
Don’t rely on memory alone—get pen and paper and start working. Students who can test themselves in advance will be better at getting back material from their memory and learn that material in the long run. John Dunlosky, Professor of Psychology at Kent State University in the US, suggests that “you start by reading a textbook using your favourite highlighter(荧光笔) and favourite colours, but then you go back and make flashcards of all the critical concepts and instead of just rereading those, you basically try to test yourselves on them.”
Good revision should give you confidence, but if you are still anxious, there’s no harm in indulging(放任) in a personal routine. In Japan, it seems to be a tradition for students to eat Katsudon before a test. This is a warm bowl of rice topped with egg and a deep-fried pork cutlet. The name of the dish reminds people of the word ‘katsu’. meaning ‘winning’.
For some students in South Korea, the key to success is not washing their hair before sitting an exam because they believe they could wash all the knowledge out of their head. And in different parts of the world there are always those who swear by their ‘lucky underwear’.
The bottom line is that you need to study, sleep well on the eve of the test, cat a nutritious meal, drink plenty of water and believe that your efforts will pay off. Good luck in your exam!
4.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
A New Wave of Migration
As the sea extends steadily inland in countries such as Bangladesh and as decreasing rains put already marginal farmland out of play in Ethiopia and other places, a wave of migration caused by the changing climate is taking shape on the horizon.
But most “climate migrants” will not be heading abroad to start new lives; instead they will settle elsewhere in their home countries. A report released this week declares that if nothing is done to control global warming and factor migration into development planning, by mid-century this internal population shift could involve more than 140 million people in three regions examined: sub-Saharan Africa, south Asia and Latin America. “Climate change is already a driver of internal migration, and it will become more so in the future,” says John Roome, senior director of Climate change at The World Bank Group.
The potential for such an increase in area consisting of 55 percent of the developing world’s population raises questions of environmental justice because those who have contributed the least to global warming are forced to shoulder more of the burden. It is necessary for developed countries like the U.S. to step up, says Maria Cristina Garcia, a professor of American Studies at Cornell University. Developed countries can help by both working to limit greenhouse gas emissions and funding efforts to help developing nations plan for climate migration challenges.
The study of climate migration is still relatively new, and projections of just how many people might be driven from their homes as the world warms are hard to pin down. Some people will need to migrate despite any measures that might be taken —but “this doesn’t have to be a crisis” Roome says. Properly managed migration could even bring more economic opportunities to some poor communities. But planning needs to start now.
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5.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
The production of fine art is the use of skill and imagination to create aesthetic objects or experiences which can be shared with other people. Photography is thought by some to be a form of fine art; however, others claim that photography is not.
Those who believe that photography is not a form of art present several arguments. They claim a photograph is nothing but an objective record of a particular place at a particular time. Therefore, any beauty that is perceived in the picture is the beauty of the time and place where it was taken, and is not the creation of the photographer. They also argue that sophisticated and expensive equipment often plays a greater role in the success of a photograph than the photographer’s creativity. Even some of the greatest photographers acknowledge that there is a limit to the amount of influence they can have on a final product.
However, there are also many reasons why photography is appreciated on the same level as other recognized forms of visual art. The decisions involved in creating a photograph are analogous to those made by any other artist. A photograph is not just a banal record of the world, but a deliberately created image with its own artistic features. Ansel Adams, the American photographer, commented on this point when he noted: ‘You don’t take a photograph, you make it.’ There is a growing trend for photographers to call themselves artists and their photos are sold for millions of dollars. However, these high prices may not be enough to change people’s perceptions of whether photography is art.
The arguments about whether photography is art have been discussed since the earliest cameras were used. The creative process involved in taking a fine photograph, deciding what, when and how the picture should be taken, is certainly similar to the process of making fine art. However, cameras are also increasingly used to take photographs for non-artistic functions. Although we cannot say that photography itself is necessarily art, we can certainly see that it is a medium that can be used to make art.
6.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
Different people may find that different learning methods work best for them. While some would turn to tutoring in order to get better grades, others choose to join study groups. In fact, many universities encourage their students to form study groups and make good use of them.
“Two heads are better than one.” That’s the simple idea behind study groups. By participating in a study group, students can benefit from some of their best academic resources: other students. They get to pick each other’s brains and improve their own understanding of different problems. Moreover, study groups can create the slightly tense atmosphere in which it's good to study. For example, some students tend to procrastinate (拖延) when they are studying by themselves: however, by joining a study group, they get to observe their peers who are working diligently and are likely to thus have motivation for working harder.
Study groups work best when they are small, but not too small-four to five participants is about right. And it’s necessary to make sure everyone has the same goal, to prepare for a particular test, to discuss class readings or to review the week’s lecture notes. Besides, socializing in the group would make studying more fun as long as it took up only a small portion of group study time.
In addition, to maximize the efficiency, some study groups like to assign members certain roles, and thus efficiency will be promoted. Besides an organizer, who gets group members to agree to a common purpose and a convenient time and place, there often is a group member playing the role of a source-seeker, whose duty is to remind group members to identify their sources. For instance, when a group member says “I read somewhere that...,” the source-seeker should ask for specifics. This person reminds the group that it’s important to know who said what and where it was said. And a gatekeeper, who tries to make sure that all group members are participating, may ask a direct question to help a shy person participate, or find a way to get a dominating member to listen.
7.阅读下面短文,根据内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Heighten Your Appreciation of Music
Music is such a fundamental part of human culture that it likely pre-dates literacy, the invention of the wheel, and even the musical note itself. While people generally know what kind of music they like — and what they don’t — it’s possible to expand your appreciation by learning new ways to listen. Here are some tips for cultivating sensitive awareness of musical elements.
You might feel frightened picking up a guitar or sitting down at a piano — but learning an instrument can help you better understand how a song comes together and what role a specific type of sound plays in the composition. Moreover, the movement and effort of a live performance can often focus your attention on parts of a song you may have otherwise missed. So, the next time you hear a song — particularly a classical arrangement — try to imagine it being performed. Or, try to picture a scene (a thunderstorm, a race) that best fits the mood and tempo of the piece.
It’s certainly not necessary to grab your favorite musician’s biography in order to appreciate a good ditty, but it may help you better understand the context in which he or she wrote the lyrics or recorded a track. Researching backgrounds can also lead you to discover social and political influences at the time the music was created.
It could be hard to appreciate a warm day unless you’ve spent a winter freezing. Likewise, listening to music requires a contrast that helps you better understand how organized and harmonious it can be. Listen to — don’t just hear — common, everyday noises. While some may be irritating, others may have a melody all their own. Either way, you’ll return to a piece of music with a new respect for a focused, deliberate bit of sound.
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8.阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
It's a feeling we all get at some point or another. It’s the feeling of low self-confidence, a defeatist attitude and regret. Admitting to the feeling isn’t easy, and sometimes you may not even know it's affecting you, but no matter what the case, it has to be taken care of. To deal with it, you need to know how. These tips appear to be simple, but you need to think of how they apply to you.
Stop saying “I should have ...” It’s so important to learn from our past and recognize where we went wrong, but you will never be able to feel good about yourself if you’re constantly counting those mistakes. Perhaps you really messed up and lost your friends for certain reasons that were totally preventable. Now you’re feeling there’s a hole in your life because you know something is missing. Rather than dwelling on the reason why something happened and what could have been, find a way to make new friends and surround yourself with people who love you for who you are now.
Remember that there’s no such thing as “Perfect”. You’ll always be a work in progress, as will every single person on this earth. The key is to use that to your advantage. You may be learning a new language and feel you’re really getting the hang of it one day and the next you can’t remember a single thing about what you learned the day before. That’s okay. If you accept this truth and start clearing the chimney of negative thoughts such as “I’m not good enough” and “I shouldn't try again because I’ll fail”, you will feel better.
Stay hungry, stay foolish. Challenge yourself to take chances, to create and to explore who you are. This means not always taking yourself so seriously. You’ll find yourself stumbling upon some of the greatest discoveries in your life by accident rather than by design.
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9.Directions: Read the passage carefully. Then write an English summary within 60 words in your own words according to the passage given below.
“Did you hear what happened to Adam last Friday?” Lindsey whispers to Tori.
With her eyes shining, Tori brags, “You bet I did, Sean told me two days ago.”
Who are Lindsey and Tori talking about? It just happened to be yours truly, Adam Freeman. I can tell you that what they are saying is not nice and not even true. Still, Lindsey and Tori aren’t very different from most students here at Linton High School, including me. Many of our conversations are gossip. Observing people’s gossip, I have noticed its three negative effects.
First, an important negative effect of gossip is that it can hurt the person being talked about. Usually, gossip spreads information about the topic—breakups, trouble at home, even dropping out—that a person would rather keep secret. The more embarrassing or shameful the secret is, the juicier the gossip it makes. Probably the worst type of gossip is the absolute lie. People often think of gossipers as harmless, but cruel lies can cause pain.
Next, if we know that gossip can be harmful, then why do so many of us do it? That answer lies in another effect of gossip: the satisfaction it gives. Sharing the latest rumor can make a person feel more important because he or she knows something that others don’t. Similarly, hearing the latest rumor can make a person feel like part of the “in group”. In other words, gossip is satisfying because it gives people a sense of belonging.
Then gossip can also have a third effect: it strengthens unwritten, unspoken rules about how people should act. Professor David Wilson explains that gossip is important in policing behaviors in a group. Translated into high school terms, this means that if everybody you hang around with is laughing at what John wore or what Jane said, then you can bet that wearing or saying something similar will get you the same kind of negative attention. The do’s and don’ts conveyed through gossip will never show up in any student handbook.
The effects of gossip vary depending on the situation. The next time you feel the urge to spread the latest news, think about why you want to gossip and what effects your “juicy story” might have.
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10.阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Have you had a headache during a test? Have you ever been so worried about something that you have a headache or even can’t sleep at night? If so, then you know what stress is.
Stress is what you feel when you are worried about something. This worry in your mind can make your body feel bad. You may feel angry, sad, scared, or afraid——all of which can give you a stomachache or a headache.
However, there are different kinds of stress. Some kinds of stress are good and others are bad.
Good stress might happen when you’re called to answer questions in class or when you have to give a speech. This kind of stress can help you to get things better done. For example, you may do a better job on your test if the stress pushes you to prepare better before the test. On the other hand, bad stress can happen if the stress lasts too long. You may not feel well if your parents are fighting, if a family member is sick, if you’re having problems at school, or if anything else makes you unhappy every day. That kind of stress isn’t going to help you. And it can actually make you sick.
The best way to fight the stress is to have a balanced life. Make sure you keep yourself in mind: Sleep, Exercise, Leisure, and Food. If you get enough sleep and eat properly, and if you exercise and leave time for fun, you’ll probably feel less stressed.
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11.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage with no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
Sue and Johnsy are friends and they live in one studio.
But Johnsy kept her bed. The doctor thought there was uncertain hope and he couldn’t see any confidence in Johnsy.
At the same time, Johnsy lay on the bed, looking through the small window and counted “10、9” and “8、7......” She said feebly. When the last leaf fell she must go.
Sue heard that and felt sad. She went to invite old Behrman, who was a painter with no achievement. And he always talked of his coming masterpiece.
Behrman heard the story of Johnsy from Sue.
After the beating rain and fierce wind that had endured through the night, there was still one leaf. And another terrible night, it was still here. Johnsy lay for a long time looking at it. Then she saw the life’s energy and wanted to live.
With the help of doctor and Sue, Johnsy was out of danger. But the bad news was that the old Behrman died of pneumonia. And they knew the secret that the last leaf was just a painting, drew by Behramn in that terrible night.
This is really a beautiful and sorrowful story. We can give other people energy, hope and love. You can see something glittering in our heart.
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12.Directions: Read the following three passages. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s)of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
AI is making applying for Jobs even more miserable
Job interviews are rarely fun, especially when you young. I will never forget the opening question in my first interview for the Financial Times graduate trainee scheme: “So, apart from the week before your interview, do you ever actually read the FT?”
Young people today face a different but no less intimidating challenge. They find themselves smiling anxiously into their laptop webcams(摄像头), answering question as a time ticks down with no human to interact with at all
Large employers are using these “asynchronous(非共时的)video interviews”(AVIs)to cut down job applicants to a smaller number they can meet in person. Platforms such as Hire Vue and Modern Hire record applicants answering pre-determined questions, usually with a time limit for each answer. In some cases, the recordings will be watched by the employer's hiring managers. In others, the platform's algorithms(算法)will assess the candidate based on what they said or even their facial expressions.
AVIs are increasingly common. These interviews can be done cheaply and at scale: one grocery chain in the US was gathering as many as 15,000 per day during the pandemic, according to Hire Vue. The platforms say the process is fairer and less biased than human recruiters, leading to better and more diverse candidates making the cut.
But employers need to pay more attention to how the process affects prospective employees. Researchers at the University of Sussex Business School, in association with the Institute for Employment Studies, have warned that young job-seekers feel confused, de-humanised and exhausted by automated recruitment systems.
Jimeet Romen Shah, who is in his final year at the University of Sussex, has done seven or so AVIs in the past two years. He tries to “make eye contact” with the camera but finds it hard not to watch his own face on the screen. He worries that if he glances down or up it will look like he is reading notes. “It does feel robotic,” he says. In most cases, he wasn't able to review the videos and wasn't told if a human or a machine would judge him. He has never received detailed feedback after a rejection.
After all, an interview is a company's first real interaction with prospective employees, some of whom it will want to hire. It should be a chance for both sides to learn about each other.
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13.阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Read the following passage and summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage with no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
Editors of newspapers and magazines often go to extremes to provide their readers with unimportant facts and statistics. Last year a journalist had been instructed by a well-known magazine to write an article on the president's palace in a new African republic. When the article arrived, the editor read the first sentence and then refused to publish it. The article began: 'Hundreds of steps lead to the high wall which surrounds the president's palace.' The editor at once sent the journalist a fax instructing him to find out the exact number of steps and the height of the wall.
The journalist immediately set out to obtain these important facts, but he took a long time to send them. Meanwhile, the editor was getting impatient, for the magazine would soon go to press. He sent the journalist two urgent telegrams, but received no reply. He sent yet another telegram informing the journalist that if he did not reply soon he would be fired. When the journalist again failed to reply, the editor reluctantly published the article as it had originally been written. A week later, the editor at last received a telegram from the journalist. Not only had the poor man been arrested, but he had been sent to prison as well. However, he had at last been allowed to send a cable in which he informed the editor that he had been arrested while counting the 1084 steps leading to the 15-foot wall which surrounded the president's palace.
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14.Directions: Read the following three passages. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
Public Opinion Counts
Modbury is a typical small town of the south of England with a population of about 1,600. Typical, that is, apart from the fact that there are no plastic carrier bags in the town. None. Plastic bags have been well and truly dumped!
The removal of the plastic bags was the brainchild of Rebecca Hosking, Modbury resident and documentary-maker. Filming a documentary in the Pacific Ocean, Rebecca was horrified at the effects of plastic bags on the wildlife off Hawaii. Among other things, she saw seabirds fatally trapped in plastic bags that don’t biodegrade. When Rebecca returned to her hometown, she discussed this problem with people, including the shopkeepers and everyone supported her suggestion to make the town plastic bag free.
But for Rebecca’s concept, Modbury would still be an unremarkable little place. Now, however, shoppers take re-usable cotton bags shopping with them, or they buy biodegradable corn starch ones on the shops. The shopkeepers now wrap their goods in paper. To prove that the townsfolk are not only committed to reducing plastic waste, they organised a mass beach clean-up last year. Dozens of volunteers came to the beach on the appointed day to clean it up, taking the rubbish that visitors throw away and recycling it. And the greatest part of that rubbish was... no, not plastic bags, but plastic bottles.
Becoming the first town in Europe to ban plastic bags, Modbury is now harvesting the rewards of fame — reporters and camera crews from newspapers and TV channels across the world are coming to this mild town to find out its secret. And, contrary to some of the initial reports, it is a normal town, trying to live life in a slightly different way. As one resident put it. “We’re ordinary people, but we want to make just a little difference.”
15.Directions: Read the following three passages. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
Unshellfish love
Amid a slump in tourism, one national park in Thailand has seen a dramatic rise in visitors. So numerous are the hermit crabs thronging the otherwise empty beaches of Koh Lanta that shells for them to live in have become a scarce commodity. The Thai government moved quickly to ease the housing shortage, launching a public appeal for empty shells that netted over 200 kg. On December 5th these were distributed around the park in a ceremony marking the birthday of the late king, Bhumibol Adulyadej.
Hermit crabs rely on discarded shells to protect their soft bodies, moving to larger shells as they grow. On Koh Lanta and the surrounding smaller islands, their rapid increase seems to be a natural phenomenon, rather than directly related to the absence of tourists. But the shortage of shells may be man-made; pretty ones have long been gathered to be sold as souvenirs. Crabs had begun to make do with potential death-traps such as plastic caps and bottles.
The shell drive was part of a government initiative to “restore the balance of nature”. “I have instructed all national parks to do whatever it takes,” says Varawut Silpa-archa, the minister for natural resources. His inspiration comes from the hiatus (间歇、空隙) in tourism brought on by covid-19. A ban on international visitors and the closure of national parks have helped nature rebound, bringing black-tipped reef sharks back into Thai waters and endangered leatherback turtles back onto Thai beaches. In the coastal provinces of Phang Nga and Phuket, turtles have laid the largest number of eggs for 20 years.
The government has decided to try to mimic the respite (暂缓、休息) forced on it by the coronavirus in future. From now on, all national parks will be required to close for part of the off-season and to limit the number of tourists through a reservation system when they are open. Although such restrictions mean reduced earnings from tourism in the short term, in the longer run more pristine (原始的、未开发的) parks may help to keep the tourists coming.
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1.Nowadays, a growing number of people choose to camp outdoors in that it’s easy to access and with low-budget. Moreover, various types of camping cater to our different needs, such as adventurous wild camping, cozy campsite camping and luxurious camping, which brings us peace and benefits our health. With the travel restrictions during the pandemic, sales of camping equipment soar. (60字)
【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了露营的意义和露营的种类,以及在疫情的影响下,露营装备销量暴增的现象。
【详解】1. 要点摘录
①If you haven’t tried camping, maybe you should join the increasing number of people who are enjoying the simple pleasures of camping.
②By grabbing your tent, and some additional things, it’s easy to head off to the countryside and enjoy a night or two under the stars.
③It is also, of course, a good low-budget holiday option.
④For the adventurous, wild camping is an ideal way to escape from reality. But for those who still want some home comforts, a campsite is a more suitable place to fix your tent.
⑤Here you have facilities such as washrooms, a shop and maybe even a restaurant. And for the most luxurious camping experience, you could try glamping, a type of camping associated with extreme comforts and luxury.
⑥More recently, sales of camping equipment have jumped as more people have chosen a vacation spent at hometown due to travel restrictions caused by the pandemic.
2. 缜密构思
将第1、2两个要点进行重组,将第3、4、5、6要点进行整合。
3. 遣词造句
It might be fun to consider joining others and enjoy the simple pleasure of camping.
It’s easy and also cheap to head off to the countryside and have a holiday.
Wild camping can be fun the adventurous while different types of campsites can also be found if you’re looking for a more comfortable environment.
Due to the pandemic, the sales of camping equipment have increased a lot.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Nowadays, a growing number of people choose to camp outdoors in that it’s easy to access and with low-budget.(运用中in that引导原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】Moreover, various types of camping cater to our different needs, such as adventurous wild camping, cozy campsite camping and luxurious camping, which brings us peace and benefits our health.(用which引导了非限制性定语从句)
2.There is a question that which is more important when an architect designs a building: beauty or function.(要点一) Function is important because it makes the buildings more practical.(要点二) However, beauty is also important because an attractive building can make people feel better.(要点三) It seems that buildings can be functional and beautiful in theory but not in practice.(要点四) Therefore, the perfect building should combine beauty and function.(要点五)
【导语】这是一篇议论文。文章主要讲述了建筑上人们关注的两个问题:功能性和美观性。其实,功能性和美观性同样重要,但很多时候,两者不能兼顾。因此最好的建筑是将功能性和美观性结合在一起。
【详解】1.要点摘录
①Which is more important when designing a building: beauty or function?
②The reason for creating a building in the first place is clearly very important.
③Beauty, however, is also clearly important when constructing a building.
④In contrast, an attractive building can make people feel happier and increase their motivation to work.
⑤In theory, there seems to be no reason why architecture cannot be both functional and beautiful. Yet in practice, this can cause problems.
⑥Therefore, combining these two ideas is necessary to create the perfect piece of architecture.
2.缜密构思
将第①要点进行重组,将第②要点进行同义句改写,将第③④要点进行整合重组,将第⑤要点改写重组,将第⑥要点重组。
3.遣词造句
①There is a question that which is more important when an architect designs a building: beauty or function.
②Function is important because it makes the buildings more practical.
③However, beauty is also important because an attractive building can make people feel better.
④It seems that buildings can be functional and beautiful in theory but not in practice.
⑤Therefore, the perfect building should combine beauty and function.
【点睛】[高分句型1] There is a question that which is more important when an architect designs a building: beauty or function.(运用一个复杂的主从复合句提出文章的论点,对第一段和第二段进行了高度概括,“that”引导的同位语从句讲述了论点,“when”引导的时间状语从句概括了第二段内容。)
[高分句型2]:However, beauty is also important because an attractive building can make people feel better.(主从复合句概括了第四段内容,其中“however”的使用与前一论点构成转折关系,“because”引导原因状语从句,表达非常高级。)
[高分句型3]:It seems that buildings can be functional and beautiful in theory but not in practice.(用一个复杂的主从复合句概括了第五段内容。其中“that”引导表语从句的用法比较高级。)
3.You need to make some necessary preparations for the exam. Assigning a fixed task to multiple days is better than completing it in one day. Keep it in mind that the frequent use of pen and paper is better than a good memory. Indulging yourself helps relieve stress. In short, studying, a healthy diet and enough sleep are necessary.
【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说,你需要为考试做一些必要的准备。将一项固定任务分配到多天比一天完成要好。记住好记性不如烂笔头。放纵自己一下有助于缓解压力。简而言之,学习、健康的饮食和充足的睡眠是必要的。
【详解】1 要点摘录
①So, it’s the exam time again-have you done the necessary work to get good marks?②If you organize five hours of study into one hours a day, you’ll remember more than if you study for five hours on one day.
③Don’t rely on memory alone—get pen and paper and start working.
④Good revision should give you confidence, but if you are still anxious, there’s no harm in indulging(放任) in a personal routine.
⑤The bottom line is that you need to study, sleep well on the eve of the test, cat a nutritious meal, drink plenty of water and believe that your efforts will pay off.
2.缜密构思
将第1个要点作为总说,将第2、3、4三个要点进行整合,将第5个要点作为总结。
3.遣词造句
You need to make some necessary preparations for the exam.
Assigning a fixed task to multiple days is better than completing it in one day.
Keep it in mind that the frequent use of pen and paper is better than a good memory.
In short, studying, a healthy diet and enough sleep are necessary.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Assigning a fixed task to multiple days is better than completing it in one day.(运用动名词作主语对第二个要点进行总结)
[高分句型2]Keep it in mind that the frequent use of pen and paper is better than a good memory. (运用固定句式keep it in mind that…对第三个要点进行总结)
4.As the sea extends steadily inland, a wave of migration caused by the changing climate appear. Most “climate migrants” will settle elsewhere in their home countries. It’s unfair for the countries who have contributed the least to global warming to shoulder more of the burden. Though the climate migration is still relatively new, planning needs to start now.
【导语】本文是说明文。文章主要讲述随着气候变暖,沿海地区人民要面临向内陆移民的问题。
【详解】1.要点摘录
①As the sea extends steadily inland in countries such as Bangladesh and as decreasing rains put already marginal farmland out of play in Ethiopia and other places, a wave of migration caused by the changing climate is taking shape on the horizon.
②But most “climate migrants” will not be heading abroad to start new lives; instead they will settle elsewhere in their home countries.
③The potential for such an increase in area consisting of 55 percent of the developing world’s population raises questions of environmental justice because those who have contributed the least to global warming are forced to shoulder more of the burden.
④The study of climate migration is still relatively new, and projections of just how many people might be driven from their homes as the world warms are hard to pin down.
⑤But planning needs to start now.
2.缜密构思
将1、2、3三个要点进行重组,将4、5两个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句
As the sea extends steadily inland, a wave of migration caused by the changing climate appear.
Most “climate migrants” will settle elsewhere in their home countries.
It’s unfair for the countries who have contributed the least to global warming to shoulder more of the burden.
Though the climate migration is still relatively new, planning needs to start now.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As the sea extends steadily inland in countries such as Bangladesh and as decreasing rains put already marginal farmland out of play in Ethiopia and other places, a wave of migration caused by the changing climate is taking shape on the horizon.(运用一个复杂的主从复合句对移民现象做了一个背景介绍。其中as引导的时间状语从句表达高级)
【高分句型2】The potential for such an increase in area consisting of 55 percent of the developing world’s population raises questions of environmental justice because those who have contributed the least to global warming are forced to shoulder more of the burden.(用because引导的原因状语从句和who引导的定语从句描述了对“气候移民”这一后果的承担不公平,表达高级)
5.Opinions vary from person to person on whether photography should be considered a fine art.Some are against it because they think it is just an objective record and the photographer’s creativity isn’t reflected. However, Others are in favor of it. They think photograph is a deliberately created image. All in all, photography is a medium used to make art.
【导语】本文是一篇议论文。主要讨论了摄影是否应该被认为是一门艺术,人们的观点不一。一些人反对它,因为他们认为这只是一个客观的记录。然而,有些人是持赞成态度,照片不仅仅是对世界平庸无奇的记录,也是一种刻意创造的具有自身艺术特色的图像。
【详解】要点摘录
①Photography is thought by some to be a form of fine art; however, others claim that photography is not.
②Those who believe that photography is not a form of art present several arguments. They claim a photograph is an objective record of a particular place at a particular time. They also argue that sophisticated and expensive equipment often plays a greater role in the success of a photograph than the photographer’s creativity.
③However, there are also many reasons why photography is appreciated on the same level as other recognized forms of visual art.
④Although we cannot say that photography itself is necessarily art, we can certainly see that it is a medium that can be used to make art.
2.缜密构思将第1、2两个要点进行重组,将第1、3两个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句
Opinions vary from person to person on whether photography should be considered a fine art.
Some are against it because they think it is just an objective record.
However, some are for it, they think photograph is a deliberately created image.
All in all, photography is a medium used to make art.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Opinions vary from person to person on whether photography should be considered a fine art(运用了whether引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]Some are against it because they think it is just an objective record. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
6.Many universities encourage students to take advantage of study groups for better grades, where students can not only get the best academic resources but motivate each other to work harder. Besides the small size, the same goal and not-too-long socializing could help study groups work best. If the members are assigned different roles, it will result in promoting the efficiency.
【导语】这是一篇说明文。本文主要介绍了许多大学鼓励学生利用学习小组获得更好的成绩,在学习小组中,学生不仅可以获得最好的学术资源,还可以激励彼此更加努力地学习。除了规模小之外,相同的目标和不太长的社交活动也能帮助学习小组发挥最佳效果。如果研究小组中的成员被分配不同的角色,这将提高效率。
【详解】1.要点摘录
①While some would turn to tutoring in order to get better grades, others choose to join study groups.
②In fact, many universities encourage their students to form study groups and make good use of them.
③By participating in a study group, students can benefit from some of their best academic resources: other students.
④however, by joining a study group, they get to observe their peers who are working diligently and are likely to thus have motivation for working harder.
⑤Study groups work best when they are small, but not too small-four to five participants is about right.
⑥And it’s necessary to make sure everyone has the same goal, to prepare for a particular test, to discuss class readings or to review the week’s lecture notes.
⑦Besides, socializing in the group would make studying more fun as long as it took up only a small portion of group study time.
⑧In addition, to maximize the efficiency, some study groups like to assign members certain roles, and thus efficiency will be promoted.
2.缜密构思将第1、2、3、4四个要点进行重组,将第5、6、7三个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句
Many universities encourage students to take advantage of study groups for better grades, where students can not only get the best academic resources but motivate each other to work harder.
Besides the small size, the same goal and not-too-long socializing could help study groups work best.
If you have no enough time or enough money to go, chat online with those people who are familiar with the college.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Many universities encourage students to take advantage of study groups for better grades, where students can not only get the best academic resources but motivate each other to work harder. (where引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] If the members are assigned different roles, it will result in promoting the efficiency. (If引导条件状语从句)
7.As music is important in human culture, here are several ways to level up one’s appreciation. First, learning instruments helps understand musical composition and live performance makes one focus on the details. Second, musician’s biographies and background research tell the context knowledge and influences of musical pieces. Finally, one can appreciate music better if he listens to everyday noises as a contrast.
【导语】这是一篇应用文。文章就如何提高对音乐的鉴赏力给出几条建议。
【详解】1 要点摘录
①Music is such a fundamental part of human culture that it likely pre-dates literacy, the invention of the wheel, and even the musical note itself.
②Here are some tips for cultivating sensitive awareness of musical elements.
③You might feel frightened picking up a guitar or sitting down at a piano — but learning an instrument can help you better understand how a song comes together and what role a specific type of sound plays in the composition.
④Moreover, the movement and effort of a live performance can often focus your attention on parts of a song you may have otherwise missed.
⑤It’s certainly not necessary to grab your favorite musician's biography in order to appreciate a good ditty, but it may help you better understand the context in which he or she wrote the lyrics or recorded a track. Researching backgrounds can also lead you to discover social and political influences at the time the music was created.
⑥Likewise, listening to music requires a contrast that helps you better understand how organized and harmonious it can be. Listen to — don’t just hear — common, everyday noises.
2.缜密构思
将第1、2两个要点进行整合,将第3、4两个要点进行整合,将第5要点概括大意,将第6要点重组。
3.遣词造句
As music is important in human culture, here are several ways to level up one’s appreciation.
Learning instruments helps understand musical composition and live performance makes one focus on the details.
Musician’s biographies and background research tell the context knowledge and influences of musical pieces.
One can appreciate music better if he listens to everyday noises as a contrast.
【点睛】[高分句型1]As music is important in human culture, here are several ways to level up one’s appreciation.(运用了as引导的原因状语从句)
[高分句型2]Finally, one can appreciate music better if he listens to everyday noises as a contrast.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
8.People should not always sink into negative feelings, and there are ways to deal with them. First, instead of repeatedly focusing on past mistakes and regretting, learn to move forward. Second, admit the fact that there are no perfect things or perfect people and try to think positively. Last, keep trying but don't take everything too seriously, as many things won't turn out as planned.
【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说,人们不应该总是陷入消极情绪,有很多方法可以处理它们。首先,不要重复地关注过去的错误和后悔,要学会前进。第二,承认没有完美的事物或完美的人这一事实,并试着积极地思考。最后,不断尝试,但不要把每件事都太认真,因为很多事情不会像计划的那样。
【详解】1.要点摘录
①Admitting to the feeling isn’t easy, and sometimes you may not even know it’s affecting you, but no matter what the case, it has to be taken care of. To deal with it, you need to know how. These tips appear to be simple, but you need to think of how they apply to you.
②It’s so important to learn from our past and recognize where we went wrong, but you will never be able to feel good about yourself if you're constantly counting those mistakes. Rather than dwelling on the reason why something happened and what could have been, find a way to make new friends and surround yourself with people who love you for who you are now.
③Remember that there’s no such thing as “Perfect”. You’ll always be a work in progress, as will every single person on this earth. If you accept this truth and start clearing the chimney of negative thoughts such as “I’m not good enough” and “I shouldn’t try again because I’ll fail”, you will feel better.
④Challenge yourself to take chances, to create and to explore who you are. This means not always taking yourself so seriously. You’ll find yourself stumbling upon some of the greatest discoveries in your life by accident rather than by design.
2.缜密构思 将第1个要点进行总说,将第2、3、4三个要点进行分说。
3.遣词造句
People should not always sink into negative feelings, and there are ways to deal with them.
First, instead of repeatedly focusing on past mistakes and regretting, learn to move forward.
Second, admit the fact that there are no perfect things or perfect people and try to think positively.
Last, keep trying but don’t take everything too seriously, as many things won't turn out as planned.
【点睛】[高分句型1] First, instead of repeatedly focusing on past mistakes and regretting, learn to move forward.运用动名词作宾语对原文第二段进行了概括。
[高分句型2] Second, admit the fact that there are no perfect things or perfect people and try to think positively.运用that引导同位语从句对第三段进行了概括,表达非常高级。
9.One possible version:
Gossip is common and has three negative effects. First, gossipers hurt people by exposing the victims’ shameful secrets or spreading lies that cause pain. Second, sharing rumors gives gossipers a strange sense of belonging and superiority. Third, gossip strengthens hidden rules, making people know how to behave in a group. Therefore, people should consider the effects before gossiping.
【导语】这是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了散播流言所带来的影响。先指出现象,散播留言很普遍,引出话题,留言造成的三个影响;然后对这三个方面分别进行详细地介绍;最后提出人们在传播流言前应该先考虑到流言带来的影响。
【详解】1 要点摘录
①Many of our conversations are gossip. Observing people’s gossip, I have noticed its three negative effects.
②First, an important negative effect of gossip is that it can hurt the person being talked about.
③Next, if we know that gossip can be harmful, then why do so many of us do it? That answer lies in another effect of gossip: the satisfaction it gives.
④Then gossip can also have a third effect: it strengthens unwritten, unspoken rules about how people should act.
⑤The next time you feel the urge to spread the latest news, think about why you want to gossip and what effects your “juicy story” might have.
2.缜密构思
将第1、5两个要点分别进行重新概括整理,将第2、3、4三个要点分别进行梳理。
3.遣词造句
Gossip is common and has three negative effects.
First, gossipers hurt people by exposing the victims’ shameful secrets or spreading lies that cause pain.
Second, sharing rumors gives gossipers a strange sense of belonging and superiority.
Third, gossip strengthens hidden rules, making people know how to behave in a group.
Therefore, people should consider the effects before gossiping.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, gossipers hurt people by exposing the victims’ shameful secrets or spreading lies that cause pain.(运用了关系代词that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Third, gossip strengthens hidden rules, making people know how to behave in a group. (运用了非谓语中的现在分词做结果状语)
10.When you are worried about something, you may feel stress which can make your body feel bad. However, there are both good and bad stress. Good stress can help you do things better, while bad stress results from lasting too long can make you sick. Having a balanced life can help you feel less stressed.
【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说,当你担心某事时,你可能会感到压力,这会让你的身体感觉不好。然而,压力有好有坏。好的压力可以帮助你把事情做得更好,而持续太久的不好的压力会让你生病。平衡的生活可以帮助你减轻压力。
【详解】1.要点摘录
①Stress is what you feel when you are worried about something. This worry in your mind can make your body feel bad.
②However, there are different kinds of stress. Some kinds of stress are good and others are bad.
③Good stress might happen when you’re called to answer questions in class or when you have to give a speech. This kind of stress can help you to get things better done. On the other hand, bad stress can happen if the stress lasts too long.
④The best way to fight the stress is to have a balanced life.
2.缜密构思 将第1个要点进行总说,将第2、3、4三个要点进行分说。
3.遣词造句
When you are worried about something, you may feel stress which can make your body feel bad.
However, there are both good and bad stress.
Good stress can help you do things better, while bad stress results from lasting too long can make you sick.
Having a balanced life can help you feel less stressed.
【点睛】[高分句型1] When you are worried about something, you may feel stress which can make your body feel bad.运用when引导时间状语从句对原文第二段进行了概括。
[高分句型2] Having a balanced life can help you feel less stressed.用动名词作主语对最后一段进行了概括,表达非常高级。
11.It’s really a moving story. Johnsy suffered from pneumonia and was close to death. She hopelessly believed that she would die after the last leaf fell. Her friend sue asked Behrman, a painter, for help. He drew the last leaf on one stormy night. Johnsy was finally saved, but the old Behman died of pneumonia unfortunately.
【导语】本文是记叙文。文章主要讲述得了肺炎的Johnsy对生命失去了希望,就等着窗外的最后一片树叶掉了之后就要死去了。但是她的朋友sue请求画家Behrman画了一片叶子,并把它挂在外面的树上,终于Johnsy又对生活有了希望和活力,但是画家却因为肺炎不幸去世了。
【详解】1.要点摘录
①The doctor thought there was uncertain hope and he couldn’t see any confidence in Johnsy.
②When the last leaf fell she must go.
③Sue heard that and felt sad. She went to invite old Behrman, who was a painter with no achievement.
④Then she saw the life’s energy and wanted to live.
⑤But the bad news was that the old Behrman died of pneumonia.
⑥And they knew the secret that the last leaf was just a painting, drew by Behramn in that terrible night.
⑦This is really a beautiful and sorrowful story.
2.缜密构思
将1、2、3、7四个要点进行重组。将4、5、6三个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句
It’s really a moving story.
Johnsy suffered from pneumonia and was close to death.
She hopelessly believed that she would die after the last leaf fell.
Her friend sue asked Behrman, a painter, for help.
He drew the last leaf on one stormy night.
Johnsy was finally saved, but the old Behman died of pneumonia unfortunately.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The doctor thought there was uncertain hope and he couldn’t see any confidence in Johnsy.(运用一个复杂的主从复合句对Johnsy的状况进行了概括。其中省略连词that引导的宾语从句表达高级)
【高分句型2】She went to invite old Behrman, who was a painter with no achievement.(运用一个复杂的主从复合句表达了Sue对Johnsy的帮助。其中连词who引导的定语从句表达高级)
【高分句型3】But the bad news was that the old Behrman died of pneumonia.(运用一个复杂的主从复合句对Behrman的结局进行了概括。其中连词that引导的表语从句表达高级)
【高分句型4】And they knew the secret that the last leaf was just a painting, drew by Behramn in that terrible night.(运用一个复杂的主从复合句表达了Behrman对Johnsy的帮助。其中连词that引导的同位语从句表达高级)
12.Job interviews are rarely fun, especially for young people, who face an intimidating challenge today. AVIs are commonly used by large employers. But the employees don't feel comfortable and have never received detailed feedback after rejections. Employers should pay more attention to employees’ feeling, because an interview is a chance for both sides to learn about each other.
【导语】这是一篇说明文。人工智能使得面试过程变得更糟心,求职者面对镜头时会表现得不自然,而且得不到有效反馈,雇主应该更多的考虑求职者的感受,毕竟面试是双方互相了解的过程。
【详解】1 要点摘录
①Job interviews are rarely fun, especially when you young.
②Young people today face a different but no less intimidating challenge.
③Large employers are using these "asynchronous(非共时的)video interviews(AVIs)to cut down job applicants to a smaller number they can meet in person.
④AVIs are increasingly common.
⑤But employers need to pay more attention to how the process affects prospective employees.
⑥“It does feel robotic,” he says. In most cases, he wasn't able to review the videos and wasn't told if a human or a machine would judge him. He has never received detailed feedback after a rejection.
⑦After all, an interview is a company's first real interaction with prospective employees, some of whom it will want to hire. It should be a chance for both sides to learn about each other.
2.缜密构思
将第1、2两个要点进行整合,将第3、4两个要点进行整合,将第6要点内容转化后再与第5、7两个要点重组。
3.遣词造句
Job interviews are rarely fun, especially for young people, who face an intimidating challenge today.
AVIs are commonly used by large employers.
The employees don't feel comfortable and have never received detailed feedback after rejections.
Employers should pay more attention to employees’ feeling, because an interview is a chance for both sides to learn about each other.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Job interviews are rarely fun, especially for young people, who face an intimidating challenge today.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句,对原文第一二自然段进行了概括)
[高分句型2]Employers should pay more attention to employees’ feeling, because an interview is a chance for both sides to learn about each other.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句,对原文第五六七自然段进行了概括总结)
13.One possible version:
A journalist was sent to figure out the detailed information of the president’s palace, but it took a long time, which made the editor impatient. Threatened to be fired, the journalist still failed to reply in time. At last the journalist explained his experience of being imprisoned after counting the steps and measuring the height of the wall.
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文。某杂志的编辑为了确切报道非洲某个新成立共和国总统宫的台阶确切数字和围墙高度,要求记者去核实,尽管这位记者因为怕被拒稿立刻前往,但却迟迟未送回信息,原来在数台阶过程中记者被逮捕送进了监狱。
【详解】1.要点摘录
①Last year a journalist had been instructed by a well-known magazine to write an article on the president’s palace in a new African republic.
②The editor at once sent the journalist a fax instructing him to find out the exact number of steps and the height of the wall.
③The journalist immediately set out to obtain these important facts, but he took a long time to send them.
④Meanwhile, the editor was getting impatient, for the magazine would soon go to press.
⑤He sent yet another telegram informing the journalist that if he did not reply soon he would be fired.
⑥When the journalist again failed to reply, the editor reluctantly published the article as it had originally been written.
⑦Not only had the poor man been arrested, but he had been sent to prison as well.
⑧However, he had at last been allowed to send a cable in which he informed the editor that he had been arrested while counting the 1084 steps leading to the 15-foot wall which surrounded the president's palace.
2.缜密构思
将第1、2、3、4四个要点进行重组,将第5、6两个要点进行整合,将第7、8两个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句
A journalist was sent to figure out the detailed information of the president’s palace, but it took a long time, which made the editor impatient.
Threatened to be fired, the journalist still failed to reply in time.
At last the journalist explained his experience of being imprisoned after counting the steps and measuring the height of the wall.
【点睛】 [高分句型1] A journalist was sent to figure out the detailed information of the president’s palace, but it took a long time, which made the editor impatient. (运用了动词不定式作主语补足语和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] At last the journalist explained his experience of being imprisoned after counting the steps and measuring the height of the wall. (运用了动名词作介词的宾语)
14.Modbury, a small town in the south of England, is the first plastic bag-free town in Europe, thanks to Rebecca Hosking, who put forward this idea after seeing the effects of plastic bags on the wildlife. Her idea caught on and there was even an activity to clean up the beach. Though famous, Modbury is still an ordinary town.
【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍莫德伯里是英格兰南部的一个小镇,是欧洲第一个没有塑料袋的小镇,是一个名叫丽贝卡·霍斯金,在看到塑料袋对野生动物的影响后提出了这个想法。她的想法很成功了,还发起一个清理海滩的活动。莫德伯里虽然很有名,但它仍然是一个普通的城镇。
【详解】1 要点摘录
①Modbury is a typical small town of the south of England.
②Plastic bags have been well and truly dumped!
③The removal of the plastic bags was the brainchild of Rebecca Hosking, Modbury resident and documentary-maker.
④Rebecca was horrified at the effects of plastic bags on the wildlife off Hawaii.
⑤To prove that the townsfolk are not only committed to reducing plastic waste, they organised a mass beach clean-up last year.
⑥And, contrary to some of the initial reports, it is a normal town, trying to live life in a slightly different way.
2.缜密构思
将第1、2、3、4四个要点进行整合,将第5、6两个要点进行重组。
3.遣词造句
Modbury, a small town in the south of England, is the first plastic bag-free town in Europe. Rebecca Hosking put forward this idea after seeing the effects of plastic bags on the wildlife. Her idea caught on and there was even an activity to clean up the beach. Modbury is still an ordinary town.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Modbury, a small town in the south of England, is the first plastic bag-free town in Europe, thanks to Rebecca Hosking, who put forward this idea after seeing the effects of plastic bags on the wildlife. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]:Though famous, Modbury is still an ordinary town.(运用了状语从句的省略)
15.A decline in tourism and human activity has led to a shortage of the shells which the hermit crabs depend on. To address the problem, the Thai government helps homeless hermit crabs find homes. The Thai government has decided to replicate this policy in the future to restore the ecology.
【导语】本文是一篇说明文。旅游业下滑期间,许多寄居蟹涌入原本空旷的科兰塔海滩,供它们居住的贝壳变得供不应求。为了解决寄居蟹住房问题,泰国政府向公众发出呼吁,要求提供净重超过200公斤的空贝壳,文章主要介绍泰国政府帮助无家可归的寄居蟹寻找庇护所。
【详解】1.要点摘录
①Amid a slump in tourism, one national park in Thailand has seen a dramatic rise in visitors.
②The Thai government moved quickly to ease the housing shortage, launching a public appeal for empty shells that netted over 200 kg.
③But the shortage of shells may be man-made; pretty ones have long been gathered to be sold as souvenirs.
④His inspiration comes from the hiatus in tourism brought on by covid-19.
⑤The government has decided to try to mimic the respite (暂缓、休息) forced on it by the coronavirus in future. From now on, all national parks will be required to close for part of the off-season and to limit the number of tourists through a reservation system when they are open.
2.缜密构思
将第1、2、3三个要点进行重组,将第4、5两个要点进行整合。
3.遣词造句
A decline in tourism and human activity has led to a shortage of the shells which the hermit crabs depend on.
To address the problem, the Thai government helps homeless hermit crabs find homes. The Thai government has decided to replicate this policy in the future to restore the ecology.
【点睛】[高分句型1] A decline in tourism and human activity has led to a shortage of the shells which the hermit crabs depend on. (运用了which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] To address the problem, the Thai government helps homeless hermit crabs find homes. (运用了动词不定式to address作目的状语)
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