Unit 5 单元话题满分范文必背-2022-2023学年八年级英语下册单元重难点易错题精练（人教版）

Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came?

单元话题满分范文必背

1．提示：随着“双减”政策的实施， 同学们的周末生活变得丰富多彩起来。旅行、劳动、发展业余爱好、不断充电提高自己……那个让你记忆犹新的周末你是如何度过的呢？请以“A Weekend to Remember”为题，用英语写一篇短文，和我们分享一下你的经历和感受。

要求：

1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；

2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。如需使用名字，请用Mike、Gina等英文名字，校名统一使用Guangming Middle School；

3. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效；

4. 抄袭试题中阅读部分的，抄袭部分不得分。

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【答案】[例文]

A Weekend to Remember

Have you ever got close to the countryside and had a special experience? Let me share mine!

One weekend this term, my parents and I joined in a meaningful activity “Get Close to The Countryside”. It took us two hours to get there by car. We experienced the life in the countryside, learned something that we couldn’t get from our city life, and felt the wonderful changes of the countryside. We realized how hard the farmers worked and I decided to save food after the experience. However, both my parents and I were happy to see the farmers’ life was getting better and better.

We really hope we’ll have another chance to visit there again.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本题为话题作文；

②时态：在叙述过去发生的事情时应用一般过去时；

③提示：文章以“A Weekend to Remember”为题，写“双减”政策后一次让自己难忘的周末活动，文中不要出现真实的个人信息，应用其他英文名及校名替代。

[写作步骤]

第一步，引出“一次难忘的周末”这一话题；

第二步，叙述这个周末发生的活动；

第三步，谈谈对这个活动的感受。

[亮点词汇]

①get close to接近

②join in加入

③decide to do sth.决定做某事

[高分句型]

①It took us two hours to get there by car.（it作形式主语）

②We experienced the life in the countryside, learned something that we couldn’t get from our city life, and felt the wonderful changes of the countryside.（定语从句）

2．童年是人生中最美好的一段时光。尽管我们已告别童年，但童年中总有那么一件你最爱的并能给你带来甜美回忆的物品值得我们珍藏。假设你叫李华，是一名八年级学生，你的学校校刊正在举行“美好童年”的征文比赛。请以“My favorite _____in childhood”为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈童年你最喜欢的东西，你拥有它有多长时间了，是怎样得到它的，以及你喜欢它的原因。

要求：1. 内容包括以上所有信息，可适当发挥；

2. 文章结构完整，语句通顺，条理清楚；

3. 80词左右。

My favorite ________ in childhood

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【答案】参考范文：

My favorite gift in childhood

Since I was born, I have received a good number of gifts. But the best one is a watch, which my dad gave me when I entered senior middle school. At that moment, my family are living a hard life. Although it was not expensive, in order to buy me the gift, my dad made every effort to earn money. Each time I see the watch, I think about my great dad. He always tries his best to support our family and he is the greatest man in my heart.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文，以“My favorite _____in childhood”为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈童年你最喜欢的东西，拥有的时间，怎样得到的以及喜欢的原因。

2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称来叙述内容；时态综合采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主，介绍童年最喜欢的礼物时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。

3．现在，中学生周末的活动也安排得很满。下面表格中是Mary的周末活动安排。在下列时间段你正在做什么？请你写一篇70词左右的英语短文，描述自己的活动安排。

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【答案】One possible version:

While Mary was reading English, I was listening to English tapes. At 10:00, while she was doing math homework, I was watching TV. Because my favorite program was on at that time. After that I had lunch with my parents. From 14:00 to 15:30, I had a piano lesson with Mary. Both of us like playing the piano. But at 16:00 while Mary was visiting her friends, I was doing my homework.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态以“过去进行时”为主；

③提示：写作要点在表格中已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍玛丽在各个时间点做的事；

第二步，介绍自己在上述时间点做的事。

[亮点词汇]

①listening to English tapes听英语磁带

②had a piano lesson上钢琴课

[高分句型]

①While Mary was reading English, I was listening to English tapes.（“While”引导时间状语从句）

②Because my favorite program was on at that time.（“Because”引导原因状语从句）

4．假如你是李磊，今天英语老师让大家分组讲述各自的周末生活，你被小组成员推选为代表。请你根据以下表格，用英文向同学们描述一下你们组的成员在昨天的以下时间里在做什么。

要求：

（1）语句通顺、符合逻辑，可适当发挥；

（2）不少于70词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。All of us had a wonderful weekend. Linda was reading at 9:00 a. m. yesterday.

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【答案】例文：

All of us had a wonderful weekend. Linda was reading at 9:00 a.m. yesterday. Paul was playing football in the playground and Zhang Xin was listening to music at that moment. At 2:00 p.m. yesterday, Linda was doing her homework while Paul was studying math. What was Zhang Xin doing then? She was washing clothes. At 6:00 p.m. yesterday, Linda was cooking dinner, but Zhang Xin was having dinner. She had dinner earlier than Linda. Where was Paul? He was taking a shower in the bathroom.

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

② 时态：时态以“过去进行时”为主；

③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍昨天上午九点时三个人的活动；

第二步，介绍下午两点和六点时三个人的活动。

[亮点词汇]

①at that moment在那时

②earlier than早于

[高分句型]

Linda was doing her homework while Paul was studying math.（while引导的时间状语从句）

5．2022年6月10日，李华的家乡四川雅安市芦山县发生了一场地震，地震造成了巨大的损毁，但幸运的是，李华一家安然无恙。假如你是李华，请你描述一下地震发生时家里人的活动情景及感受：

1. 李华在浴室里洗澡；

2. 爸爸在电脑旁工作；

3. 妈妈在厨房里做晚餐；

4. 爷爷奶奶在客厅看电视。

要求：

1．结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；

2．文中不得出现任何真实的人名，学校名等信息；

3．80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。    

My name is Li Hua. There was an earthquake at about 5:00 p.m. on June 1st. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】例文

My name is Li Hua. There was an earthquake at about 5:00 p.m. on June 1st. At that time, all my family were at home. I was taking a shower in the bathroom. My father was working on the computer. My mother was cooking in the kitchen. My grandparents were watching TV in the living room. We were all scared.                                                     

The earthquake made our neighborhood in a mess. There were some fallen trees, broken windows and rubbish. But luckily, it wasn’t too heavy and it didn’t last for too long. We were all safe.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文写作；

②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“过去进行时”；

③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，不要遗漏提示中的“家里人的感受”这一要点，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；

第二步，接着按照要点叙述当时家里人各自正在做的事情，以及家人们的感受；

第三步，介绍地震给周边生活环境带来的破坏，抒发作者的感受并书写结语。

[亮点词汇]

①be scared感到害怕

②in a mess乱七八糟

[高分句型]

There were some fallen trees, broken windows and rubbish.（and连接三个并列的名词，there be句型，就近原则，过去分词作定语）

6．同学们，古话说读万卷书，行万里路。你一定去过许多地方，在这些地方中定有你无法忘记的，也许是因为那里的美食，也许是因为热情好客的人们，也许因为是美不胜收的风景，也许是因为在那里度过的美好时光……请你以“A place I will never forget”为题，写一篇短文，描述你难以忘记的一个地方。

要求：

1. 注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语句通顺，书写规范；

2. 不可出现真实的人名、地名和校名；如需要使用名字；请用Gina，Mike等英文名字，校名统一用 Guangming Middle School；

3. 词数60词左右。

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【答案】例文

A place I will never forget

London is a place that I will never forget. Anyone who visited the capital city would know The Big Ben, London’s Eye and the ferry trip that I took was most fantastic. I saw the entire London as London’s eye revolved slowed and peacefully. I admired the structure of the Big Ben. The sound of the clock as it struck twelve was magnificent as it echoed throughout London to let the people know the time. I also went to parks and saw a string orchestra performing Scottish tunes, it was very beautiful, as the music juxtaposed with the lovely sceneries in the park. How can anyone forget such memorable scenes? How can anyone forget such an unforgettable place?

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；

②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，结合题干，描述一个难以忘记的地方，可包含美食，人们以及风景，注意语句要连贯，书写要规范。

[写作步骤]

第一步，开门见山，点明主题——无法忘记的地方是哪里；

第二步，接着叙述所见景色；

第三步，详细描写大本钟；

第四步，介绍公园所见；

第五步，最后书写结语，呼应主题。

[亮点词汇]

①fantastic 极好的

②perform 表演

③such an unforgettable place 如此难忘的一个地方

[高分句型]

①London is a place that I will never forget.（that引导的定语从句）

②The sound of the clock as it struck twelve was magnificent as it echoed throughout London to let the people know the time.（as引导时间状语从句）

7．假如你是王华，上个月你和父母一起度过了一个难忘的周末。请你根据表格内容用英语给笔友Jim写一封邮件，介绍当天活动。

要求：

1. 用上所给要点，并适当发挥；

2. 行文流畅、正确、书写规范；

3. 词数80左右。开头已给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

  Last month, I spent a great weekend with my parents.

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What about your weekend? I’m looking forward to your reply.

                                                                Yours,

                                                                Wang Hua

【答案】例文：

Dear Jim,

Last month, I spent a great weekend with my parents. In the morning, we enjoyed the fresh flowers in Zhongshan Park. The flowers were colorful. And we took a lot of photos. In the afternoon, we hung out on Han Street and went shopping at the mall. The food there was so delicious that I ate a lot. In the evening, there was a light show. It was wonderful. After that, we took walks along the river. At the end of the day, we took the subway to go home. We were tired but happy.

What about your weekend? I’m looking forward to your reply.

                                                                    Yours,

Wang

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为电子邮件；

②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“表格”中各个时间段的活动，并补充其他内容。适当添加细节，使行文连贯。

[写作步骤]

第一步，承接开头，按照时间顺序介绍那一天的活动内容；

第二步，总结收尾，表达那天的心情和感受。

[亮点词汇]

①take photos拍照

②hang out闲逛

③go shopping去购物

④at the end of在……末尾

[高分句型]

①The food there was so delicious that I ate a lot.（so...that引导的结果状语从句）

②In the evening, there was a light show.（there be句型）

8．假如你是李华，今年五月你和爸爸妈妈一起去了杭州旅游。请你根据以下提示，用英语给你的美国笔友Danny写一封电子邮件，介绍你这次旅游的经历。

提示：

1.五月和父母坐飞机去杭州旅游；

2.杭州以西湖闻名，有很多风景名胜；

3.你们划船、爬山、购物，玩得很开心。

要求：

1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；

2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；

3.文中不得出现任何真实信息；

4.词数：不少于50词（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）。

Dear Danny,

I’m glad to tell you about my trip to Hangzhou.

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How was your last trip? Please write to me soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】参考范文:

Dear Danny ,

I’m glad to tell you about my trip to Hangzhou. I went there with my parents by plane this May. Hangzhou is one of the most beautiful cities in China. There are many places of interest. It is especially famous for the West Lake. We went boating in the lake, climbed the mountain and went shopping in Hangzhou. We had a really great time.

How was your last trip? Please write to me soon.

Yours ,

Li Hua

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇应用文写作，为电子邮件；

②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中这次旅游经历的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，承接邮件开头，根据中文提示详细介绍这次去杭州旅游的经历，并做出总结；

第二步，书写结语。询问对方的旅行经历，期待回信。

[亮点词汇]

①by plane乘飞机

②places of interest名胜古迹

③had a really great time.玩得很开心

[高分句型]

Hangzhou is one of the most beautiful cities in China.（形容词最高级句型）

9．今天是星期六 (10月6日)，上午8:10在新华大街上发生了一起交通事故。由于司机没注意到两个学生而发生事故。司机严重受伤，已被送往医院救助。两个学生受轻伤。假如你是南京一中的学生，请你就此事故写一篇日记。

内容要求：

1.要写出事故发生的时间和地点；

2.要写出事故的大致情况，可以适当添加内容；

3.就此写出你的有关安全的观点。

写作要求：

1.一定要注意写日记的格式；

2.内容流畅，可以适当添加你自己的观点；

3.不少于80词。

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【答案】例文

October 6th, Saturday Fine

There was a terrible car accident happened at 8:10 on Xin Hua Road. That’s because the driver was very careless. When he was driving, he didn’t find there were two students near the car. When he stopped the car, it was too late. In the accident, the driver hurt badly and was sent to the hospital. Luckily, the two students were a little hurt. They were also sent to the hospital.

The accident told us that we must be careful when we drove or walked on the road. I thought we must obey the traffic rules and have to wait for the green traffic light. Especially, for students, we must learn to protect ourselves when we walk on the road. The safety is the most important thing to us.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是应用文，是一篇日记；

②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容要求”中的具体信息，包括事故发生的时间、地点、大致情况等。可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。

[写作步骤]

第一步，根据内容要求，介绍清楚事故发生的时间、地点和大致情况；

第二步，说明自己对交通安全的认知以及自己的态度。

[亮点词汇]

①be sent to被送到

②be careful小心；当心

③obey the traffic rules遵守交通规则

④wait for等候

[高分句型]

①When he was driving, he didn’t find there were two students near the car. （there be句型）

②The accident told us that we must be careful when we drove or walked on the road. （that引导的宾语从句）