山西省晋中市榆次区2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编：书面表达+

山西省晋中市榆次区

2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编

书面表达

2023年山西省晋中市榆次区中考一模英语试题

九、书面表达（共15分）

60. 波澜壮阔的2022年，一个个令人动容的名字、一段段催人奋进的故事，在他们身上，我们看到了勇于担当、齐心协力、坚持不懈的品质。我们每个人也都有自己的梦想，在实现梦想的路上，也必然经历过重重困难，你是如何挑战它们的呢？上周，某校以“What is the most important when you face difficulties?”为题对1000名学生做了调查，下图是相关统计结果。

What is the most important when you face difficulties?

假如你是该校学生，请你根据图内容，用两段话写一篇短文，

内容包括：

1.简要说明图表内容；

2.从图中选出你认为面对困难的最重要品质，结合自己的经历，谈谈你面对困难如何挑战的一次经历。

要求：

1.词数不少于80词，首句已给出，不计入总词数：

2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。

Last week, we did a survey about the most important quality when facing difficulties. Here are the results. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2022年山西省晋中市榆次区中考一模英语试题

十、书面表达（共15分）

80. 中国女足在亚洲决赛上，克服一切困难，再次获得金牌。在我们的成长过程中，也会遇到各种各样的困难。学习、运动和人际关系等的困难与同学们息息相关。事实上，克服困难是青少年成长必备的优良品质，是我们的必修课。

请根据以上内容，结合图片信息，写一篇英语短文。

内容包括：

1. 从以上提示中选择某一项困难，谈谈你对它的观点；

2. 围绕以上观点，描述你曾经经历过的一件因克服困难而获益、成长的事情；

3. 这次经历带给你的思考。

要求：

1. 词数不少于80词；

2. 提示仅供参考；

3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

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2021年山西省晋中市榆次区中考一模英语试题

十、书面表达（共15分）

60. 习总书记在2021年新年贺词中提到：“每个人都了不起！”是的，在这个伟大的时代，每个人都应该是了不起的！回顾我们的日常学习和生活，你会发现每个人都有自己的闪光点，从平凡的一件事或一次经历中见证着伟大。这个了不起的人也许是老师、父母、邻居或同学等，也许就是你自己。

请针对以上的叙述，结合生活中的发现，写一篇短文。

内容包括：

●the remarkable (了不起)person in your mind

●an experience you had/ heard/saw

●what you have learned from it

要求：

1.词数不少于80词；

2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

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答案：

2023年山西省晋中市榆次区中考一模英语试题

【答案】例文
     Last week, we did a survey about the most important quality when facing difficulties. Here are the results.
     From the chart we can see that courage accounts for 35%, cooperation for 30%, persistence for 20% and others for 15%. Among these qualities, I think the most important quality in the face of difficulties is persistence. When I was in grade eight, my English was poor. So I asked my teacher for help. Learning English well requires reciting a lot of words and phrases, but I could hardly stick to it and even wanted to give up. Finally, with the teacher’s continuous encouragement, I persevered. At the same time, my English improved a lot. I was really happy.

【解析】

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；

③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。

[写作步骤]

第一步，简要说明图表内容；

第二步，从图中选出你认为面对困难的最重要品质，结合自己的经历，谈谈你面对困难如何挑战的一次经历。

[亮点词汇]
 

①in the face of面对

②ask for help寻求帮助

③give up放弃

④at the same time同时

[高分句型]

①When I was in grade eight, my English was poor. So I asked my teacher for help.（when引导的时间状语从句）

②Learning English well requires reciting a lot of words and phrases（动名词作主语）

2022年山西省晋中市榆次区中考一模英语试题

【答案】例文

Everyone must meet difficulties on the way of growth. So do I.

When I was in Grade Seven, I did badly in speaking oral English. I was afraid to take English class. My English teacher talked with me and encouraged me to overcome myself. He advised me to form the good habit of reading English. I began to read English every morning. After six months, I found I had made great progress in oral English.

When I got through the difficulty, I found that I also grew with happiness.

【解析】

【详解】1. 题干解读：本文要求结合亲身经历，描述你曾经经历过的一件因克服学习中的困难而获益、成长的事情以及它带给你的思考，来写一篇短文。

2. 写作指导：本文应以第一人称为主。时态采用一般过去时为主。可采用分段的形式，使文章结构清晰。保证语言通顺，行文连贯，注意语法正确，无标点和拼写错误。

2021年山西省晋中市榆次区中考一模英语试题

【答案】 Everyone is great and has his own strengths. In my mind, the most remarkable person is my mother because she has a strong will and never gives up.
Once she had a difficult exam. In order to pass it, she must read four books. But she didn't have much time because she had to take care of me. One night, when I woke up at midnight, I found her staying up late to read her books. At that moment, I was moved by her strong will.
My mother always keeps moving forward no matter how difficult it is. I should also be tough and never give up what I want to do.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是材料作文，介绍自己心中了不起的人，接着描述自己的亲身经历，所见或所闻的事情，最后谈谈自己从中

学习到的东西。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时；段落安排可以按照要点提示给出的顺序；第一段可结合材料引出主题，写出自己心中了不起的人，第二段描写跟他她相关的事件，第三段描写自己从中学习到的东西。