黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市铁锋区2021-2023年三年中考一模英语试题分类汇编：短文改错

黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市铁锋区2021-2023年三年中考一模英语解析版试题分类汇编

短文改错

2023年黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市铁锋区中考一模英语试题

Ⅲ. 短文改错（每小题1分，找出错误和改正错误各0. 5分，共10分）

阅读短文，从原文的每一行中找出一处错误并改正，不加词，不别词。

例如：Tom are a good boy and he often helps others. Are—is

Last week, Mr. King came to Beijing on plane. On his first day,           ____26____

he rode a bike to the Great Wall and stayed there for five hour.            ____27____

On Tuesday, she went to Wangfujing Street to do some shopping.          ____28____

On Wednesday, he watched Peking Opera and eat Peking Duck.           ____29____

Then, he spent two days visit many famous places in Tianjin. He           ____30____

was surprising at the development of China. Mr. King said. “The           ____31____

high-speed trains are so fast. You can go to much places you              ____32____

want. Everything is very convenient here. People’s life is good             ____33____

than before. Chinese people are very kind but friendly. So I want           ____34____

to make friends with them. I have the good time in China.”                ____35____

2022年黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市铁锋区中考一模英语试题

III.短文改错（每小题1分，找出错误和改正错误各0. 5分，共10分）

阅读短文，从原文的每一行中找出一处错误并改正，不加词，不删词。

例如：I think Tom are a good boy.             are-is

2021年黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市铁锋区中考一模英语试题

III.短文改错（每小题1分，找出错误和改正错误各0.5分，共10分）

阅读短文，从原文的每一行中找出一处错误并改正，不加词，不删词。

例如: I think Tom are a good boy. are-is

Do you often shop online? When you make a order on Taobao, the       _____26_____

money that you pay does not go directly to the seller. Instead, it went       _____27_____

through Alipay （支付宝）, which keeps my money for a while. Then       _____28_____

Alipay gives the money with the seller. There is a transfer station       _____29_____

between sellers or buyers. The transfer station can make online shopping       _____30_____

safely. Buyers don’t need to worry about paying for products and then       _____31_____

receiving nothing. Sellers also have no risk of receive no money after       _____32_____

sending out their products. This transfer stations are usually set up by       _____33_____

payment service companies. Among them, Alipay is the big in China. It       _____34_____

has more than 270 millions users and it makes online shopping easier.       ______35______

                 参考答案

2023年黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市铁锋区中考一模英语试题

【答案】26. on—by   

27. hour—hours   

28. she—he    29. eat—ate   

30. visit—visiting   

31. surprising—surprised   

32. much—many   

33. good—better   

34. but—and   

35. the—a

【解析】

【导语】本文主要讲述了金先生在北京游玩的经历。

【26题详解】

Mr. King came to Beijing on plane.金先生乘飞机来到北京。短语by plane表示“乘坐飞机”，应用介词by。故填on—by。

【27题详解】

he rode a bike to the Great Wall and stayed there for five hour. 他骑着自行车来到长城，在那里待了五个小时。基数词five后接可数名词复数，应用hours。故填hour—hours。

【28题详解】

On Tuesday, she went to Wangfujing Street to do some shopping.  周二，她去王府井大街逛街。根据前文可知是“Mr. King”，是个男性，应用he而不是she。故填she—he。

【29题详解】

he watched Peking Opera and eat Peking Duck. 他看京剧，吃京烤鸭。结合时态可知是一般过去时，eat应用过去式。故填eat—ate。

【30题详解】

he spent two days visit many famous places in Tianjin. 他花了两天时间参观了天津的许多著名景点。短语spend time doing sth表示“花费时间做某事”，后接动名词。故填visit—visiting。

【31题详解】

He was surprising at the development of China. 他对中国的发展感到惊讶。句子主语是he，修饰人应用-ed结尾的形容词。故填surprising—surprised。

【32题详解】

You can go to much places you want. 你可以去很多你想去的地方。名词places是可数名词复数，应用many修饰。故填much—many。

【33题详解】

People’s life is good than before.人们的生活比之前的好。根据than可知应用good比较级。故填good—better。

【34题详解】

Chinese people are very kind but friendly.中国人很亲切和友好。句中kind和friendly是并列关系，而非转折，应用and连接。故填but—and。

【35题详解】

I have the good time in China.我在中国玩的开心。短语have a good time表示“玩的开心”。故填the—a。

2022年黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市铁锋区中考一模英语试题

26．A—The

27．all—both

28．mean—means

29．simply—simple

30．before—ago

31．We—They

32．killing—killed

33．but—and

34．improves—improved

35．fast—faster

【导语】

本文主要讲述了现在拍照时，最新流行的方法是把你所有的手放在一起做成心形。

26．

A “V” is out.“这个V形已经落后了”，根据上文“Are you still doing the “V” when you take photos?”可知，此处是特指的V形，用定冠词the，故把A改为The。

27．

The latest popular way is putting all of your hands together to make a heart-shape.“最新流行的方法是把你所有的手放在一起做成心形。”all是三者或三者以上都，手是两只，用both，故把all改为both。

28．

The “hand heart” often mean something between “I love you” and “thank you”. “手心”的意思通常介于“我爱你”和“谢谢”之间。主语是The “hand heart”是单数，一般现在时态，谓语动词mean变第三人称单数，故把mean改为means。

29．

You can send a sweet message by doing the simply “hand heart”.“你可以通过简单的“手心”传递一个甜蜜的信息。”此处是形容词修饰名词，simply“简单地”是副词，此处用形容词simple，意思是“简单的”，故把simply改为simple。

30．

Some days before, Justin Bieber and his superstar friends did the “hand heart” and put the photos online.“几天前，Justin Bieber和他的超级明星朋友们制作了手心，并将照片上传到了网上。”此处是一段时间+ago，Some days ago“几天之前”，故把before改为ago。

31．

We did it to help out three kids whose parents were killing in a car accident.“我们这样做是为了帮助三个父母在车祸中丧生的孩子。”根据上文“Justin Bieber and his superstar friends did the “hand heart” and put the photos online.”可知，此处他们这样做的目的，而不是我们，we“我们”，改为they“他们”，故We改为They。

32．

We did it to help out three kids whose parents were killing in a car accident.“我们这样做是为了帮助三个父母在车祸中丧生的孩子。”此处是死于车祸中，主语parents和谓语动词kill之间存在被动关系，一般过去时态的被动语态是were done，kill的过去分词是killed，故把killing改为killed。

33．

Sometimes, people also put their hands above their heads but make a bigger heart shape with their arms to show “I love you”.“有时，人们也会把手放在头上，但用胳膊做一个更大的心形来表示‘我爱你’。” 前后两句存在并列关系，而不是转折关系，用连词and连接，故把but改为and。

34．

Body-language culture improves very slowly in the past.“过去，肢体语言文化的发展非常缓慢。” 根据时间状语in the past可知，用一般过去时态，improves“提高”，此处用过去式improved，故把improves改为improved。

35．

But now, it moves fast than before because of the use of the Internet and smart phones.“但现在，由于互联网和智能手机的使用，它的发展速度比以前更快。”根据“than before”可知，此处用fast的比较级faster，故把fast改为faster。

2021年黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市铁锋区中考一模英语试题

26．a—an

27．went—goes

28．my—your

29．with—to

30．or—and

31．safely—safe

32．receive—receiving

33．This—These/The

34．big—biggest

35．millions—million

【分析】

本文介绍了支付宝在网络购物中发挥的作用。

26．

When you make a order on Taobao当你在淘宝上下订单时；order以元音音素开头，其前应加不定冠词an，故将a改为an。故填a—an。

27．

Instead, it went through Alipay, which keeps my money for a while.相反，它进入了支付宝，它保存我的钱一段时间。本句陈述客观事实，故为一般现在时，主语it是第三人称单数，故谓语动词应用三单形式，故将went改为goes。故填went—goes。

28．

Instead, it goes through Alipay, which keeps my money for a while.相反，它进入了支付宝，它保存我的钱一段时间；文章以第一人称“我”介绍支付宝在网上购物时的作用，故应以第二人称代表支付宝用户，即支付宝会保存你们的钱，将my改为your。故填my—your。

29．

Then Alipay gives the money with the seller.然后支付宝把钱交给卖家；give sth. to sb.“把某物给某人”，故将with改为to。故填with—to。

30．

There is a transfer station between sellers or buyers.卖家和买家之间有一个中转站；between…and…“在……和……”之间，故将or改为and。故填or—and。

31．

The transfer station can make online shopping safely.中转站可以使网上购物安全；make sth. adj.“使某物……”，应接形容词作宾语补足语，故将safely改为safe。故填safely—safe。

32．

Sellers also have no risk of receive no money after sending out their products.卖家在寄出产品后也不会有收不到钱的风险；have no risk of“没有风险”，of是介词，其后应接动词的动名词形式作宾语，故将receive改为receiving。故填receive—receiving。

33．

This transfer stations are usually set up by payment service companies.这种中转站通常由支付服务公司设立；this修饰单数名词，transfer stations是复数，故其前可用these修饰，或加定冠词the表特指。故填This—These/The。

34．

Among them, Alipay is the big in China.其中，支付宝是中国最大的。根据“Among them”可知，此处指三者及以上之间的比较，故用最高级，big改为其最高级形式。故填big—biggest。

35．

It has more than 270 millions users它拥有超过2.7亿用户；million前有基数词修饰，用其单数形式，即270 million。故填millions—million。