天津市滨海新区2020-2022年三年中考二模英语试题分类汇编：书面表达

天津市滨海新区

2020-2022年三年中考二模英语试题分类汇编

书面表达

2022年天津市滨海新区中考二模英语试卷

九、书面表达（本大题共15分）

86. 当今社会，绿色环保已成为我们关注的重要话题。假如你是光明中学的学生林涛，去年夏天参加了“爱无限，绿无边”环境保护活动。请根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文，描述该经历，并表达自己的想法。

（1）去年夏天参加了绿色星球俱乐部。

（2）每天早起发传单、宣传绿色生活。

（3）帮助垃圾分类、清理公园街道。

（4）起早虽然很难，坚持做了一个月。

（5）收到了社区的感谢信。

（6）你的感受……

参考词汇：传单 leaflets    分类 separate    感谢信 a thank-you letter

要求：

（1）词数： 80~100个。

（2）短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

People are caring about environment around us. It’s our duty to protect environment.

Last summer ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2021年天津市滨海新区中考二模英语试卷

九、书面表达（本大题共15分）

66. 在成长过程中，我们经常会面临来自老师的提醒、责备或批评。有的同学不理解，有的甚至会做出过激的反应。5月13日，是星期四，在你们班发生了一件事，这件事让你印象深刻。请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇日记。

（1）在英语课上，李明不听讲而是看小说。

（2）老师几次提醒他要认真听课，他依旧如此，老师把他书拿走。

（3）李明什么也没说，突然站起来冲出教室。

（4）老师拦住了他，让他冷静下来并把他带回教室。

（5）课后老师与他进行了沟通，他认识到了自己的错误并鼓起勇气向老师道歉。

（6）你认为……

参考词汇：提醒remind   拦下stop   鼓起勇气pick up one’s courage

要求：

（1）词数：80～100个。

（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Thursday, May 13th, 2021                                                                                            Fine

I still remember the day when I had an English class ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2020年天津市滨海新区中考二模英语试卷

九、书面表达

86. 2020年4月中国迎来了抗疫情重大胜利。工人复工，学生复课，可是国外疫情依旧非常严峻，假如你是李华，请你给你国外的笔友Tony写一封信，说一说你在疫情期间如何做到自我防护的。并且告诉他照顾好自己。

（1）每天开窗通风半小时；

（2）外出戴口罩，回到家认真洗手；

（3）早睡早起，不熬夜；

（4）多吃蔬菜和水果；

（5）每天在跑步机上跑半小时；

（6）你希望……

参考词汇：  a mask口罩       treadmill 跑步机

要求：

（1）词数：80～100个。

（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Dear Tony,

How’s it going? Today I’d like to tell you what I did to stop the virus spreading in the past three months. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

答案：

2022年天津市滨海新区中考二模英语试卷

【答案】例文
 

People are caring about environment around us. It’s our duty to protect environment.

Last summer, I joined the Green Planet Club to do something meaningful. I got up very early to hand out leaflets and told people the importance of living a green life. Besides, I taught people how to separate waste in communities and helped clean up parks and streets. At first, I found it hard to get up early. It was very tiring, but I did it for one month. I got a thank-you letter from the community in the end.

I feel proud because I can offer help. What’s more, I am also thankful to the people who have helped me.

【解析】

【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求描述参加“爱无限，绿无边”环境保护活动的经历，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段已经给出；第二段结合提示要点描述参加活动时的详细经历；第三段进行总结。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

2021年天津市滨海新区中考二模英语试卷

【答案】例文：

Thursday, May 13th, 2021    Fine

I still remember the day when I had an English class. Li Ming read a novel instead of listening to the teacher in the English class. Our English teacher reminded him several times to listen to her carefully, but he still did so, the teacher had to take away his book. To my surprise, Li Ming stood up suddenly and rushed out of the classroom without any words. Our teacher stopped him, and took him back to the classroom. After class, our teacher had a talk with him, he realized his mistake. Finally, he picked up his courage and said sorry to our English teacher.

In my opinion, it is important to stay calm when our teachers point out our mistakes, because it’s good for our development.

【解析】

【分析】

【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和要点，写出班里发生的事情，要写具体事情的经过以及最后的结果并表明自己的观点，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第三人称来写作，时态以一般过去时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。

2020年天津市滨海新区中考二模英语试卷

【86题答案】

【答案】例文：

Dear Tony,

How’s it going? Today I’d like to tell you what I did to stop the virus spreading in the past three months.

First of all, I kept the window open to get some fresh air for half an hour every day. And then I took some exercise such as running on the treadmill for half an hour in the morning.  What’s more, I wore medical masks when I went out. After coming back home, I had to wash hands carefully. I paid attention to eating more vegetables and fruit in order to keep healthy. In addition, it’s good to go to bed early at night and get up early in the morning.

I hope my suggestions are useful and if there are further questions, please ask me. Don’t be shy. As far as I am concerned, I hope that people around the world will get rid of the virus as soon as possible .

Yours ,

Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是书信类书面表达，按照书信格式完成书面表达，按照题目中的提示补充剩余内容即可。

2.例文点评：例文采用三段式结构，第一段是问候对方，第二段详细介绍自己的防护措施，第三段希望自己的建议会帮助到对方；整篇文章内容完整，结构清晰条理；人称主要是第一人称，时态主要是一般过去时。

3.高分亮点：

短语：would like to do sth.；first of all；half an hour；such as；what’s more；pay attention to；in order to；in addition；as soon as possible。

句型：I paid attention to eating more vegetables and fruit in order to keep healthy. in order to do sth.作目的状语；In addition, it’s good to go to bed early at night and get up early in the morning. it’s+形容词+to do sth.；I hope that people around the world will get rid of the virus as soon as possible. that引导的宾语从句。