孝感市城区2022-2021年中考英语一模试题-作文

孝感市城区2022-2021年中考英语一模试题-作文

一、话题作文

1．（2022·湖北孝感·统考一模）微笑是一种宽容、一种接纳、一种鼓励，使人与人的心贴得更近。对一个人，乃至一个社会来说，微笑的力量都是不可忽视的。请你根据下面的提示，以 “The Power of Smile”为题，写一篇英语短文。

提示：a.在你的生活中，谁的微笑打动了你?

b.为什么他/她的微笑打动了你?

c.你的体会是什么?

要求： （1）语言表达准确, 短文连贯通顺；

（2）80词左右（标题已给出，不计入总词数）。

The Power of Smile

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二、材料作文

2．（2022·湖北孝感·统考一模）劳动是一切幸福的源泉，劳动是学生全面发展的必备条件之一，做家务是劳动很好的体现。你的学校将开展以“做家务，助成长”为主题的英语征文比赛。请你根据以下提示，写一篇90字左右的短文。

要点提示：1. 你经常做哪些家务？

2. 你是如何学会做家务的？

3. 谈谈你在做家务劳动中的收获。

写作要求：1. 词数90左右；

2. 根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；

3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。

Let’s Do Housework

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3．（2022·湖北孝感·统考一模）同学们，在初中三年的英语学习中，我们从课本中学习了有关“Family”，“Be polite to sb”，“Protecting the environment”，“Volunteering”等话题。假定你是李华，请根据这些话题并依据以下要点提示，写一篇题为“I’m proud of my family”的英语短文，讲述你的家庭故事。

要点提示：

1. 家人相亲相爱，努力学习、工作；

2. 邻里和睦、礼貌待人；

3. 爱护环境，从我做起；

4. 积极参加志愿活动。

写作要求：

1. 词数90左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

2. 根据要点提示，适当发挥，使文章内容完整，表达流畅；

3. 短文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。

参考词汇：work hard，be friendly to each other，get on well with，protect the environment，be volunteers

I’m Proud of My Family

My name is Li Hua. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family-my parents, my sister and I.

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4．（2021·湖北孝感·统考一模）书籍是人类进步的阶梯，很多名人都酷爱读书。鲁迅先生从小爱读书。学校奖给他一枚金质奖章，他立即拿去卖掉，买了几本书。屈原小时候无论刮风下雨、天寒地冻，总是躲到山洞里偷偷读书……

请以“Reading”为题写一篇英语小短文:

写作要点:1.读书的重要性；

2.怎样养成良好的读书习惯；

3.我们青少年应该多读书、读好书……

写作要求:1.词数90左右；

2.根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；

3.文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。

参考词汇：precious（宝贵的）；rich（丰富的）；lead（引导）；take notes（做笔记）

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参考答案：

1．例文

The Power of Smile

Smiles are very important. A smile given to the right person at the right time can light that person’s day.

I was moved by a smile from my teacher. Two months ago, when I took part in a speech competition for the first time, I was very nervous. My Chinese teacher, Mrs. Gu, sitting in the front row, smiled at me and said in a low voice, “Yes, you can.” Her smile was very important because it gave me courage.

Sometimes a simple smile can make a big difference.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要写一个用微笑打动你的人，并需要详述打动你的原因和体会。

2.写作指导：本文主要以第三人称和一般过去时为主。写作分三段，第一段点明微笑的重要性；第二段详述那个用微笑打动你的人是谁和做了什么事情打动了你，第三段简述自己的体会。写作时保证语言连贯，条理清晰，无词汇和语法错误。

【点睛】高分句型一：Two months ago, when I took part in a speech competition for the first time, I was very nervous.两个月前，当我第一次参加演讲比赛时，我非常紧张。when引导的时间状语从句。

高分句型二：

Sometimes a simple smile can make a big difference.有时候，一个简单的微笑可以带来很大的不同。make a big difference大不同，大作用。

2．例文

Let’s Do Housework

Doing housework plays an important part in middle school students’ lives.

My mother taught me to do housework when I was eight years old. Now I can do lots of housework, such as washing dishes, sweeping the floor, cooking and so on. I like doing housework because I want to help my parents.

As for me, I think middle school students should do housework. I have learned a lot from it. Firstly, I learn many life skills and become more and more independent. Secondly, I am healthy and strong after doing housework. Some hard housework can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise. Finally, I can understand my parents better when sharing housework with them.

All in all, we can learn a lot from doing housework. So I think teenagers should learn to enjoy doing it with our parents.

【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“Let’s Do Housework”为题，按照提示所给的信息写一篇英语征文，重点谈谈在做家务劳动中的收获。

2.写作指导：本文时态主要为一般现在时，主语主要为第一人称。第一段引入主题；第二段描述自己如何学会做家务以及会做什么家务；第三段描述自己从做家务中学到了什么；最后一段总结。写作时要表达准确，思路清晰，层次分明。

3．例文

I’m Proud of My Family

My name is Li Hua. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family-my parents, my sister and I. My family love each other. My parents both work hard. My sister and I study hard at school, too. My family are kind and friendly to our neighbors. We are all polite to each other. We get on well with each other. My family try our best to protect the environment in our daily life. My mom and my sister usually bring a bag to go shopping. My father is used to taking the bus to work. I never order takeaway food. My family are glad to be volunteers at any time. My parents often help the children in poor areas. My sister helps the school library twice a week. Sometimes I read newspapers to the old people. What a happy family! I’m proud of my family!

【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“I’m Proud of My Family”为题写一篇短文。

2. 写作指导：时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。讲述家庭故事时，主要从以下四个方面去介绍：一是家人相亲相爱，努力学习、工作方面；二是邻里和睦，礼貌待人方面；三是爱护环境，从我做起方面；四是积极参加志愿活动，帮助贫困儿童方面。写作时，要避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语；要注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题，不要出现语法错误；要保证语句通顺，意思连贯，逻辑合理。

4．[例文]

Reading

Books are the ladder of human progress. Lots of famous people love reading.

Reading is very important to us. We can get rich knowledge through reading. It makes us knowledgeable and makes our life enjoyable. Reading some elegant sentences or the beautiful things described in the book will make us feel relaxed and comfortable.

How can we develop a good habit of reading? First of all, we need to choose a quiet place to read. Furthermore, we can take notes while reading. And when we read, we’d better put our mind in it as well.

Let’s choose good books and read more, for books can lead us to a wonderful world. I hope reading can increase our wisdom and enrich our life.

【详解】1.题干解读：本题为材料作文，要求以“Reading”为题写一篇短文。阅读这一话题学生并不会感到陌生，但题目已给出思路，所以学生要在所给框架内对这一话题进行叙述。

2.写作指导：写作时应用第一人称，时态应用现在时态。文章结构应以题目所给要点“为什么阅读很重要→怎么做来养成阅读的好习惯”为思路展开，并在最后建议学生们应该多读书，读好书。写作时应注意要点齐全，不要出现单词，语法方面的错误。