2023新教材高考英语二轮专题复习专题五应用文写作先文体再添彩第一讲专家支招高效备考课件

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阅卷老师现场评卷[2022·1月浙江卷]假定你是李华，你在“中国——爱尔兰文化节”中结识的爱尔兰朋友Chris，现在他已回国。请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括：1．回忆活动经历； 2．分享个人收获；3．希望保持联系。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
三审定题　列纲谋篇1．审要求：本篇作文的体裁属于电子邮件，要求考生根据提示信息给在“中国——爱尔兰文化节”中结识的爱尔兰朋友Chris写一份邮件。2．审内容：写作内容要包括三点：①回忆活动经历；②分享个人收获；③希望保持联系。试题虽然对写作范围进行了限定，但仍然具有一定的开放性，这给考生留出了一定的自由发挥的空间，有利于考生充分展示自己的写作能力。3．审时态：文章主体时态应为一般现在时。“中规中矩的”三档作文(得分8分)
学生习作：Dear Chris，Hw time flies! I still remember the exciting mments we spend n tgether during the Sin­Irish Cultural Festival. The art perfrmance n the last night left me deep impressin. It featured Chinese and Irish flk dance and music. We chatted abut the favurite pastimes and fds f the peple there. I nw have a new dream t travel and experience the cultures f as much cuntries as pssible. I wish t start with Ireland as my first destinatin. Let's keep in tuch! I lk frward t have yu as my tur guide when I visit.Yurs，Li Hua
“冤屈的”四档作文(得分10分)学生习作：Dear Chris，Hw time flies! I still remember the exciting mments we spend tgether during the Sin­Irish Cultural Festival.I was really impressed by the varius event in the Festival, where I enjyed the brilliant artwrks and musical perfrmance frm yur hme cuntry. What delighted me mst was that I happened t meet yu. Yur enthusiastic intrductin t the artwrks enhanced my insight. It is really amazing that we shuld have s much in cmmn. Hw I wish I culd have mre pprtunities t cmmunicate with yu! Please keep in tuch and I hpe t see yu again sn.Yurs，Li Hua
名师寄语：本文较好地表达文意， 但语法错误较少， 语言简单句复合句交替运用，体现了考生较好的表达功底， 但文章结构有点欠缺， 故10分。
“体面的”五档作文(得分14分)学生习作：Dear Chris，Hw is everything ging? With delight, I'm writing t share my sincere feeling abut the China­Ireland Cultural Festival with yu.Althugh a week has passed since yu returned hme, I can still recall the enjyable time we spent tgether. Frm Chinese calligraphy t Irish paintings, we gt a glimpse f varius aesthetic masterpieces. And the festival als unflded the tw cuntries' prfund histry. Frm this experience, I truly understand that gegraphical separatin des nt necessarily bring abut cultural cnflicts and that we can assimilate the ther's merits cntrarily.At last, I hpe ur friendship will last frever. Lking frward t yur early reply.Yurs，Li Hua
名师寄语：本文文章架构合情合理，较好地表达文章要点， 无语法错误， 语言简单句复合句交替运用，体现了考生较好的表达功底，是非常完美的一篇写作范文， 故14分。
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