2023年上海市九年级中考作文备考优秀作文范文素材合集+写作词汇积累
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优秀作文素材合集 (一)Happiness from helping othersHappiness usually accompanies (陪伴) me in my life, especially after I assist others. When I give money to a beggar out of kindness, I'm chuffed(开心的) to know that he can afford to buy some food for at least a meal.In addition, I spare no effort to help my classmates with their study, and it's their progress in return that brings happiness to me. ( 运用了强调句,it is/was+被强调的部分+that/who)+ 其他) Furthermore,It's really a pleasure to give assistance to my parents to do the housework. By doing so, I show my love to them as well as share the enjoyment with them.I always feel the pleasure whenever I give a helping hand to those who are in the urgent demand of it. ( 运用了定语从句,属于高级句型) Helping others not only brings joy to myself but also contributes to(有助于) creating our harmonious (高级词汇 和谐的) society.Tips:相同意思的单词可以词组化或者差异化,尽量避免重复出现 (二)I didn't believe that helping others could bring the helper blessedness( 幸福 ) until I went to the Summer House last summer. It's an organization for helping the disabled, especially the disabled children. (开头开门见山,直入主题) I considered that I should do something for them. First of all ,to make them taste some particular( 特 别 的 ) food,I made a variety of salad and cakes for them.Furthermore,a number of entertaining magazines as well as meaningful books were read by me so as to enrich their mental lives and broaden their horizons .At last, I volunteered to wash dishes with them after lunch . Tired though I was , what I got from this experience was not only happiness from helping the disabled children but also being responsible for our harmonious city .(三)I once had an experience of helping others when I was a little girl. I was playing in the park when I noticed a small boy crying for cutting himself on the arm.I deemed (认为) it necessary for me to do a favor for him.First of all,I quickly took out my handkerchief and dressed his wound to stop it from bleeding. Furthermore,a number of jokes were told by me so as to make him delighted.At last, for fear of his safety,I accompanied him back home.To my joy,he stopped crying and seemed to feel better after his wound stopped shedding blood. Having heard “Thank you" and caught sight of his smile from the heart. I felt very excited as if I had saved his life. From then on, I was always ready to assist others, for I knew that helping others could bring thrill(快乐感) to the helper as well as to others. (四)Mum, I Want to Say “Sorry" to YouIt goes without saying that it is my mom's exquisite(精致的) companionship that makes me brave and outstanding(杰出的卓越的) ,nevertheless(然而), I want to express “regret" to my mum because she worried me too much and experienced too many embarrassing situations in my growth. Like most naughty boys, I lacked self-discipline and had all sorts of(各种各样的) hobbies. Then I was so carried away by online games that I often left my homework unfinished. As a result, she was frequently called to come to the school from work, and to make an apology to my teacher . What is more, little interest was shown by me in English in my childhood,so she put a lot of effort into inviting a suitable teacher to give assistance to me face to face for fear that I might fall behind others. Now that I have been mature,not only will I do my best to start small to relieve her pressure ( 缓解压力) but also I will pull out all the stops(竭尽全力) to reward her with my splendid performance ( 卓越的表现) .(结尾运用了高级句型 :not only...but also 的倒装句 并且使用了连词 not only...but also 让语意更加连贯) 同意词组转换默写版 供学生练习apologize to sb. for sth.=2. altogether = 3. at last = = 4. be bad for = 5.be careful = =6. not the same as = 7. sb. knows sth. well = 8.be full of = =9.be fond of = = 10.be interested in = 11.be realized = 12.take charge of = = 13.be satisfied with = 14.borrow sth. from sb. =15.alone = = 16.be over = 17.be made up of=18.care for= =19.delay= 20.couldn't/ didn't pass = =21. help sb.= =22. do well in=23.each other=24.earn money-25.escape =26.expect to do=27.for the time being=28.get ready for= 29.go to..in a hurry=30.go in for= =31.have a good time= 32.have the same opinion with sb.=33.receive a letter from=34.how to deal with=35.immediately= =36.to do= =37.in order that +从句=38.keep in touch(with)=39.later prove = 40.lie = 41.get angry =42.make a decision to do = = 43.make fun of=44.make it possible for us to do…=45.manage =46.mustn't= 47.prefer doing A to doing B= 48.prevent....from = 49.provide sb. with sth. = 50.realize = 51.rely on = 52. return = 归还 =回来53. review = 54. start = = 55. stop doing = 56. stop working = 57. solve= = 写作常用词汇一些:a range of ;a variety of;a series of ;an array of 无数的:countless;innumberable;sumless过时的:outdated;antiquated;unfashionable;out of date 宣称:assert;claim;declare;allege反驳:refute;contradict;disagree;oppose;object;against强调:emphasize;stress;punctuate忽略:neglect;ignore;ignorance夸大:overstate;exaggerate说明:illustrate;demonstrate;reveal开心的:delighted;amusing;amused;pleased;pleasant悲伤的:depressed;blue;grieved吸引人的:attractive;fascinating;alluring;seductive专注:pay attention to ;be absorbed in;devote one’s mind to 减少的:decrease;reduce;lessen;cut down;drop 增加:increase;augment;add;addition;fortify;考虑:think over;take into account;take sth.into consideration;consider;regard;think about 完全的:absolute;unconditional;unlimited;complete;unrestricted;entire;total好的:extraordinary;wonderful;agreeable;amazing;