2023届高考英语二轮复习作文复习课—润色作文课件

这是一份2023届高考英语二轮复习作文复习课—润色作文课件，共19页。PPT课件主要包含了书面表达复习专题，怎样使词汇高级化，delighted，be fond of，who，which，named， Knowing，倒装句强化练习，can you 等内容，欢迎下载使用。

Dear Leslie, Hw are yu? Glad t see yu have made sme prgress in Chinese learning and I’m writing t tell yu smething abut ur next lessn. The lessn will be given frm 3 pm t 5 pm n the afternn f next Tuesday in the classrm 502. In the class, yu will mainly learn Tang petry, which reflects traditinal Chinese culture and is deeply lved by Chinese. Yu can feel the beauty f Chinese by learning Tang Petry. Yu’d better make full preparatins befre class and have a brief understanding f the histry f Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy fr yu t g thrugh the class. If there is anything that I can help yu, please dn’t hesitate t tell me. Lking frward t meeting yu. Yurs sincerely, LiHua
亮点：行文流畅，过渡自然，较好地使用定语从句，被动句和高级短语，语言地道。
Writing skills fr high marks
Hw t beautify yur article
1. 将单个动词转换为带其名词的短语 prepare fr—— aplgize—— affect—— understand—— cnsiderate —— be helpful ——
make an aplgy
have an effect n
be +adj.=be +f +n.
make (full) preparatins fr
have a better understanding f
take… int cnsideratin
be f great help
词汇高级化 2. 尽量使用高级词汇
shw great interest in
participate in
have a gd cmmand f English
怎样使句式 丰富多彩
假定你是李华，你的英国网友Peter上周在邮件中提到想阅读中国著名的小说，就此请你用英语给他写封回信。内容包括：1.推荐一本小说；2. 此书内容简介；3.给出阅读建议。
Yu want t read sme Chinese nvels. I am writing t recmmend a famus nvel. Its name is A Dream f Red Mansins
Knwing that yu want t read sme Chinese nvels, I am writing t recmmend a famus nvel,whse name is A Dream f Red Mansins .
the name f which
技巧点拨：把简单句合并成含有定语从句的复合句
定语从句强化练习I’d like t invite yu t my hmetwn. Yu can taste different kinds f tea. 2. The wner f the passprt is Stephen. He cmes frm England. 3.Yu had better take prper exercise . It will help yu keep healthy and energetic.
I’d like t invite yu t my hmetwn where Yu can taste different kinds f tea.
Knwing that yu want t read sme Chinese nvels, I am writing t recmmend a famus nvel, ________ (name) A Dream f Red Mansins .
name v. 命名，叫同义词： entitle
I’m writing t invite yu t attend the Chinese paper-cutting art exhibitin _____ (hld) in the City Museum frm 2pm t 5pm n June 1st. (用非谓语动词润色）
技巧点拨：使用非谓语动词使表达更简洁更高级（t d ding dne）
held/t be held
(广州二模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Alethea将到中国学习汉语，她来信请你帮忙给她起一个适合她的中文名字，请你给她写一封回信，提出建议并说明理由。 Alethea 的含义是真实，诚实。 I think the name “艾乐真” is suitable fr yu.It is easy fr yu and yur friend t remember. It has special meanings.
It is nt nly easy fr yu and yur friend t remember but als has special meanings.
技巧点拨：使用倒装句增强句子表现力，使句式丰富。
Nt nly is it easy fr yu and yur friend t remember but als has special meanings.
1. Yu can slve the prblem in this way.Only in this way______ ______ slve the prblem.
2.This newspaper nt nly cvers news frm hme and abrad, but als intrduce stries f successful men.
Nt nly _____this newspaper ______news frm hme and abrad, but als intrduce stries f successful men.
假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack正在为将来的考试焦虑不已，严重影响了生活和学习，为此写信向你求助。请根据以下要点，用英语给他回一封信。1、制定复习计划，树立信心。2、坚持锻炼身体。3 、保持良好睡眠。
First , make careful plans befre exams. …… Secnd, take prper exercise regularly. It will help yu keep healthy and energetic ……Last but nt least, dn’t stay up late…….
First, Yu are suppsed t make careful plans befre exams. Secnd, take prper exercise regularly, which will help yu keep healthy and energetic. Last but nt least, it wuld be a gd idea nt t stay up late .
技巧点拨：同一篇文章，使用同一种句式，使文章呆板，单调。尽量使句型有变化。
2017全国II卷书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.展览时间、地点；2.展览内容。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
结构(开头，中间，结尾）
Paper-cutting is a traditinal art frm in China which has a histry f mre than 1,500 years. Peple ften beautify their hme with paper-cutting during festivals and weddings. In this exhibitin, nt nly can yu appreciate paper-cutting with all kinds f patterns but can als make a paper-cutting by yurself. In additin, there are famus artists wh will perfrm hw t cut paper n the spt . It’s a gd chance fr yu t have a better understanding f Chinese traditinal culture.  
Dear Henry， I‘m glad t tell yu there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibitin t be held in the city museum next week.
I sincerely hpe yu can set aside sme time fr the art feast.
各种复合句（尤其是定从）
wh which whse thatwhen where why
Nt nly…but als… Only+状语……
It’s ……that……
t d ding dne
It is +adj/n. t d sth
1. 背诵背诵一些经典的范文达到“滚瓜烂熟、脱口而出、多多益善”。文章里的高分佳句，可以选择性的熟记加之模仿，灵活运用到写作中去。2. 默写背熟后把书合上，把这篇文章默写下来。默写后，做一个工作：仔细对比原文发现写作弱点，你会发现你默写的文章和原文会有一些出入。包括拼写、语法、标点，这种错误就是你写作的弱点，把这些错误用红笔标出来。发现自己的错误及时更正，然后自我总结，以免下次再犯。3. 模仿写作背完之后还是要动笔写！“好记性不如烂笔头”，可以拿考题多加练习。可以找有范文的题目进行练习，因为这样方便写完后能与范文进行对比。模仿写作就是仿写你背过的文章再写出一篇新文章。在背完一篇文章后，要想想这篇文章有什么精彩的词组、词汇和句型可以使用。然后换一个话题，把这篇作文用一下，用里面词汇、词组和句型去构思另一篇文章。 
Hmewrk :假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你 咨询如何才能学好中文，请根据下列要点回信。要点： 1.参加中文学习班； 2.看中文书刊、电视； 3.学唱中文歌曲。 4.交中国朋友。注意：1.词数：100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使 行文连贯；3.开头语已经为你写好。Dear Peter, I'm glad t receive yur letter asking fr my advice and hw t learn Chinese well.
Hmewrk: beautify the articles and add sme linking wrds Here are a few suggestins. Take a Chinese curse. Yu'll be able t learn frm the teachers and practice with yur fellw students. Watch TV and read bks, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever yu are free. Learn and sing Chinese sngs. Yu'll learn and remember Chinese wrds mre easily. Make mre Chinese friends. They will tell yu a lt abut China and help yu learn Chinese.