江苏省徐州市2019-2021年（三年）中考二模英语试卷分类汇编：书面表达

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书面表达
江苏省徐州市2020-2021学年中考二模英语试题
六、书面表达(共20分》
你校英语社团举办“剧本创作大赛”。请，以‘My wn drama stry为题，以下要点作为提示，展开合理想象，编写一段90词左右的故事。
Main characters:
Li Hal, furteen years ld, helpful, calm...
Mr Sun, his neighbr, seventy years ld, alne...
Time: last Sunday afternn
Place: Mr. Sun's huse
Stryline: ...
注意；1．短文需包含以上要点，展开合理想象并适当发挥。
2．短文中已给出的部分，不计入总词数。
3．短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息。
My wn drama stry
Li Hai is furteen years ld.________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：
One pssible versin:
My wn drama stry
Li Hai is furteen years ld. He is a helpful by. He is ready t help peple in need any time. Last Sunday afternn, he was alne at hme. He did sme reading after finishing his hmewrk. Suddenly, he heard smene shuting fr help. He ran utside and saw much smke frm next dr. The seventy-year-ld Mr. Sun lives alne next t his flat, s he went in and fund Mr. Sun in the kitchen. His leg was badly hurt and culdn’t get ut. The smke was heavy and the fire was ht, but Li Hai was quite calm. He dialed 119 first, rushed t the bathrm and pured water ver his clthes t prtect himself. Then he put a wet blanket ver Mr. Sun and helped him
ut safely.
What a brave and helpful by!
2020年江苏省徐州市中考二模英语试题
书面表达
71.请仔细观察下面的图片，并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文。
提示：( 1 ) What are the tw men ding?
( 2 ) What shuld yu d when yu see peple d like this? Why?
要求：(1)短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
(2)短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数100个左右。 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)
参考词汇：balance f nature(自然平衡)；punishment(惩罚)
I can see tw men in the picture. They are____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One pssible sample: .
I can see tw men in the picture. They are carrying tw animals in their hands. And smene is telling them that it is nt allwed t catch wild animals.
With the develpment f sciety, mre and mre peple are interested in catching wild animals. Sme f them are fr mney, while the thers are fr their meat r fr fun. As we ften say, “animals are humans' friends." They play an imprtant part in keeping the balance f nature. If we break the balance f nature, we'll get punishment as a result.
S, I wn't catch wild animals r hurt them. Instead, I will nt nly prtect them and get n well with them but als tell mre peple t prtect them.
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文，人们不允许捕猎野生动物。文章应描述图片，回答问题，根据所给词谈谈措施并提出未来的做法。写作时注意具体的时态变化，现在进行时，一般现在时以及一般将来时，注意表达的准确性和构思的条理性。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式，段落清晰，层次明了；词组短语使用灵活，句型使用丰富多样；首段回答了问题；主体段落具体分析了问题；最后一段提出未来自己的做法。
3.高分亮点：
短语：be allwed t； mre and mre； be interested in；play an imprtant part in；break the balance；as a result；nt nly…but als。
句型：And smene is telling them that it is nt allwed t catch wild animals. that引导的宾语从句；With the develpment f sciety, mre and mre peple are interested in catching wild animals. with伴随状语；Sme f them are fr mney, while the thers are fr their meat r fr fun .while前后对比；As we ften say, “animals are humans’ friends.” 非限制性定语从句；If we break the balance f nature, we’ll get punishment as a result.条件状语从句。
2019年江苏省徐州市中考英语二模试卷
九、书面表达（本大题共1小题，共20.0分）
观察下列图画， 以A Detective Stry为题， 写一篇90词左右的记叙文．故事中的人物自己给取名．
A Detective Strybk
参考词汇：
不情愿地unwillingly 不耐烦的 impatient 沉浸于…之中 lse neself in
A Detective Strybk
It was dinner time．
答案：
【答案】A Detective Strybk
It was dinner time． Mr． and Mrs． White were waiting at the table fr their sn， Mike（高分句型一）． Where was Mike？ Mrs． White asked her husband t lk fr him． Mr． White fund their sn sitting n the stairs， reading a detective strybk． He rdered Mike t cme fr dinner at nce． Then Mike left unwillingly， leaving the bk n the flr． Befre ging back， Mr． White tk a lk at that bk．（介绍故事的开始，人物，时间等）
Mrs． White and Mike were at the table waiting fr Mr． White． They waited and waited until they became impatient． Mrs． White gt angry． and asked Mike t lk fr his father． When Mike went back t the stairs， t his surprise， he fund his father lsing himself in the same bk． What an interesting detective strybk!（高分句型二）（故事发展高潮作为结尾）
【解析】
高分句型一：
It was dinner time． Mr． and Mrs． White were waiting at the table fr their sn， Mike．
were waiting 属于过去进行时态，结构是was/were+ding．这句话意为：这是晚饭时间， White 先生和太太正在餐桌旁边等待他们的儿子迈克．
高分句型二：
What an interesting detective strybk!
What引导的感叹句，What+a/an+adj+可数名词单数！这句话意为：多么有趣的一本侦探故事书！
在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．