江苏省徐州市2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编：书面表达

江苏省徐州市

2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编

书面表达

2023年江苏省徐州市中考一模英语试题

六、书面表达(满分20分)

“能吃苦, 肯奋斗, 有担当, 似一叶扁舟在激湍中逆流而上, 如一株小树在万木前迎来春光。”这就是陆鸿, 《感动中国》2022年度人物之一。虽幼时高烧导致身体残疾, 但他仍坚持学习。毕业后, 由于身体残疾, 陆鸿没有找到工作, 他开始自主创业, 从卖水、修自行车到最后成功开相册厂, 他帮助许多残疾人就业, 实现人生价值……请以“永不言弃”为话题, 结合自身经历, 写一篇90词左右的英语短文, 讲述陆鸿的成长经历以及他身上值得我们学习的优秀品质。

参考词汇:相册album:坚持persistence

注意:1. 短文条理清晰, 行文连贯, 可适当发挥;

2. 短文中不得泄露个人信息;

3. 词数90左右(开头已给出, 不计入总词数)

Among all the people who were presented with Touching China Award this year, Lu Hong left adeep impression on me.

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2022年江苏省徐州市中考一模英语试卷

八、话题作文

71．亲爱的同学们，初中三年，我们学习了很多科目，在所有的学科中，哪一科是你学得最好的?请以“I am best at                      ”为题，并根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。

1、要点：1)你是如何学习该学科的？

2)在该学科遇到困难时，你是如何克服的？

3)困难得到解决后，你的感受是什么？

2、要求：1)请补全标题，如 maths，Chinese，PE 等；

2)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3)词数 100 左右。

I am best at                                                   

2021年江苏省徐州市中考一模英语试卷

八、话题作文

71．研究表明从小爱做家务的孩子长大更容易成功。你校英语报发起了“A Helper of My Family”主题征文活动。请写一篇90词左右的英文短文，介绍你曾经做的一次家务劳动及感悟。

要点如下：

1. What housework do you often do?

2. When and how did you do it?

3. What have you learned from it?

注意：

1．短文需包含以上要点，并适当发挥。

2．短文中已给出的部分，不计入总词数。

3．短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息。

A Helper of My Family

I am a good helper of my family.

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2023年江苏省徐州市中考一模英语试题

【答案】

Among all the people who were presented with Touching China Award this year, Lu Hong left a deep impression on me.

Lu Hong comes from Jiangsu. A high fever caused physical disability when he was young, but he still persisted in studying. After graduation, due to his physical disability, Lu Hong couldn't find a job. He is not complaining, not depressed, and unwilling to become a burden to his family. He started his own business, from selling water and repairing bicycles to successfully opening a photo album factory. He helped many disabled people find employment and realize their value in life.

Lu Hong is not afraid of hardship. willing to strive. responsible, and never gives up. He is a model for all of us. Compared to Lu

Hong, there is nothing that cannot be overcome about the difficulties we face in life or study.

【总体分析】

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，讲述陆鸿的成长经历及他的优秀品质；②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

【详解】

【写作步骤】

第一步，总写，陆鸿给我留下了深刻印象，引出介绍的内容（文章已给出）；第二步，具体讲述陆鸿的成长经历。

第三步，最后写陆鸿值得我们学习的优秀品质，结束全文。

【亮点词汇】

①leave a deep impression on sb.给某人留下深刻印象②come from来自

③be unwilling to do sth.不愿意做某事④become a burden to成为...的负担⑤be not afraid of hardship不怕吃苦⑥compared to与……相比，比起⑦due to由于高分句型

①A high fever caused physical disability when he was young，but he still persisted in studying.（时间状语从句、but连接的并列句）②Among all the people who were presented with Touching China Award this year...（定语从句）

③Compared to Lu Hong，there is nothing that cannot be overcomeabout the difficulties we face in life or study.（there be句型和定语从句）

④ He helped many disabled people find employment and realize their value in life.（动词不定式作宾语补足语）

2022年江苏省徐州市中考一模英语试卷

71．例文:

I am best at English

I still remember three years ago, I had difficulties in learning English. It was difficult for me to memorize so many words and understand what people were saying. My spoken English and written English were poor, too. Luckily, with the help of my English teacher, I made great progress in it. I managed to do everything she suggested. I watched English movies and sang classic English songs. It is actually an effective way to improve my listening. While reading, I tried not to read word by word but by word groups and guess the meaning when meeting new words. I wrote down useful words and phrases, in this way, I increased the number of words and understood the articles better, besides, it was also helpful to my written English. Step by step, little by little, I made progress, and now I am best at English. When we face the trouble, never give up. As long as we stick to the right methods, we are sure to do things faster and better.

【详解】1.题干解读：本篇材料作文要求以用第一人称介绍自己学得最好的学科，内容包括如何克服自己在学科学习中遇到的困难，并谈谈克服困难后的感受；书写时要围绕题干提示点展开，文句通顺，内容完整。

例文点评：本例文有条理地介绍自己学得最好的学科英语，介绍了自己在最初学习时碰到的问题，陈述自己在老师的帮助下找到正确的方法、克服困难并取得进步；层次分明，布局合理。

3.高分亮点：

短语：have difficulties in；with the help；make great progress in；manage to；stick to；faster and better；

句型：it固定句型It was difficult for me to …；

时间状语从句When we face the trouble, never give up；

条件状语从句As long as we stick to the right methods, we are sure to do things faster and better.

【点睛】本篇是话题作文，首先要按要求确立中心话题，填补题目，然后根据题干的3个提示问题展开话题。书写时要注意，陈述过去学习遇到的困难及解决困难用一般过去时，文句之间要逻辑清晰，条理清楚。

2021年江苏省徐州市中考一模英语试卷

71．[例文]

A Helper of My Family

I am a helper of my family. I often do housework at home. Every day I make the bed and wash the dishes. Sometimes I do the washing and look after my pet dog.

Last Sunday, it was dark, but my parents didn’t come back home yet. I stopped doing my homework and decided to cook a meal for my family instead of just waiting. It was my first cooking. I surfed the Internet on how to do home style dishes. With the step-by-step directions, I managed to make my first dish. When my parents came back, they couldn’t believe their eyes. They were so satisfied with me.

I think it is necessary for every family member to share housework. The more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.

【详解】1.题干解读：本题为话题作文，要求以“A Helper of My Family”为题，写自己曾做过的一次家务及其感想。写作思路已由三个问题给出，学生需按此思路行文。

2.写作指导：写作时应用第一人称，时态根据事情发生时间确定，叙述过往经历时应用过去时。题目中所给要点提示必须包括，可适当拓展，文章层次要分明，条理清晰，不要出现单词拼写错误。