初中英语中考复习 06 偶遇人物 2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）

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素材储备与写作指导
人物描写篇章里的前3类:家庭成员、亲朋好友及著名人物，都是写作者比较熟悉的人物， 但偶透相识，顾名思又是要写与作者有一面之像的人， 首先要确立这是过去发生的事情，所以时态用最过去时，然后写在这次偶遇相识中，主人公的某个行为给作者的感情，切记以写“我”为主，写成“An unfrgettable experience”
实践案例
题目
The I will never frget (2016年奉贤二模)
审题
看题目，这是一篇半命题作文。 生活中总有一些令人难忘的东西，或是一个给你帮助的人，或是一个意义非凡的日子，或是一部令人深思的电影，或是段令人难忘的片段。
段落结构
以The persn I will never frget为例，这个人可以是非常熟悉的人一家人、 朋友、师长;也可以是有一一面之缘的人，此人的举动给小作者留下了深刻的印象，难以忘怀。以一面之缘的人为例，先写出见到此人时的背景，然后具体写发生了什么事，给作者留下了深刻的印象，作者可以是参与在这件事情中的，也可以是旁观者。全文以般过去时为主， 最后表达感想时可以用一般现在时或者其他时态。这篇作文也可以写难以忘记的场景: The sceneI will never frget,描述给作者留下深刻印象的场景。
核心语汇
a middle schl student一个中学生
a hard-wrking student一个用功的学生
have a big dinner tgether一起吃丰盛的晚餐
encurage sb. t d sth.鼓励某人做某事
be ready t help thers准备好帮助他人
be healthy and full f energy健康的，充满活力的
cnsider sb. t be认为某人
stay up late熬夜
be prud 感到自豪
live abrad住在国外
d sth. by neself亲自做...
take an active part in积极参与
参考句型
1.sb. influences me a lt某人对我影响很大
e.g. The pliceman influences me a lt because f his kindness.
这名警察的仁慈对我的影响很大。
2.I will never frget his ..我不会忘记
e.g. I will never frget his genersity.
我不会忘记他的大方。
3.I still remember the day when ...我仍然记得这一
e.g. I still remember the day when I watched the pening ceremny with my parents.我仍然记得我和父母-起观看开幕式的那一天。
4.Every .. f my life will bring back the memry f that night. 每会把我带回那晚的记忆中。
e.g. Every New Year's Eve f my life will bring back the memry f that night.每一个除夕夜都会把我带回那晚的记忆中。
5.I did think .. was the mst beautiful I had ever seen.我们为认..是我曾经看到过的最美丽的
e.g. I did think it was the mst beautiful face I had ever seen.
我认为那是我曾经看到过的最美丽的脸。
作文参考答案
（一）
The persn I will never frget
Hney 1am frgetful and quite uncncerned abut surrundings. but 1 will never frget the scene in which a by std in the rain,hlding up an umbrella fr a hmeless dg.
Several years ag,when I was struggling in the crwd n a bus n my way t schl, I nticed smene gt ttally wet n the side f the rad .I was sure he was hlding an umbrella, but it was fr smene else. As the bus mved frward, a small figure appeared belw the umbrella It turned ut t be a dirty dg The muddy water cvered its bdy and its hair was tangled badly.The by just std by the pr dg, trying t prtect it frm the
rain. The bus cntinued t drive ahead and the by and the dg disappeared frm my sight. They were like the sunshine f that dull and bring rainy day.
I appreciated the by fr spreading the warmth t the wrld and hpefully we will smeday pass it alng.
注：
①Hney 1am frgetful and quite uncncerned abut surrundings. but 1 will never frget the scene in which a by std in the rain,hlding up an umbrella fr a hmeless dg.定语从句和非谓语的运用
②Several years ag,when I was struggling in the crwd n a bus n my way t schl, I nticed smene gt ttally wet n the side f the rad 时间状语从句
点评:
小作者写道，给他留下深刻印象的是个 在雨天照顾小狗的男孩， 虽然寥寥数语，但把这个陌生人的爱心表达得很到位。全文布局很好:下雨天，天气恶劣，心情糟糕，但因为看到了这样温馨的画面，像是看到了阳光: They were like the sunshine f that dull and bring rainy day.最后表达了对男孩的感谢，以及要把爱心传递的信心，并进行了升华:I appreciated the by fr spreading the warmth t the wrld and hpefully we will smeday pass it alng全文句式多变，语言地道，读起来一气呵成， 是篇不可多得的佳作。
（二）
The scene I will never frget
Once I was traveling in America, I had an experience that left me a deep impressin.
Every mrning, I wuld g t the cafe t get a cup f cffee near my htel. I saw a beggar sitting near the cafe when I gt there fr the first time. As an rdinary persn,I went t the cafe directly and attempted t neglect the beggar. Hwever, t my surprise, when I gt cffee and left, I saw several cnsumers sitting arund him and talking abut the daily life f him. He chatted with them with a smile just like the ld friends' cmmn cnversatin.
If I were him, I wuldn't talk t any stranger nt nly because f the different scial levels but als the different experiences. These differences will result in different tpics.It is hard t cmmunicate if we belng t different scial levels.Hwever, they culd chat in such a relaxing atmsphere. Then
they went t wrk and said gdbye t him.
N matter hw different the scial levels are and n matter what differences we have, friends and mates will always be there. It's the cmfrt zne yu have in life.
注：
1. I saw a beggar sitting near the cafe when I gt there fr the first time. 时间状语从句； sth 看到某人正在做某事
2. If I were him, I wuldn't talk t any stranger nt nly because f the different scial levels but als the different experiences.虚拟语气
3.It is hard t cmmunicate if we belng t different scial levels.Hwever, If条件句
点评:
给作者留下深刻印象的是:一群过路人和乞丐像朋友般地聊天，而自已觉得由于社会地位不同，不会做那样的事。应该说作者作为一名在校学生、思考的问题还是比较深刻的:有着不同社会地位、不同经历的人，是否可以成为朋友?答案在文章最后一部分出现。
相关话题范文解析
（一）
假如你有机会和任何一个名人共进午餐。请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。
1. 要点：
1）这个名人是谁；
2）你为什么想和他或她共进午餐；
3）你想和他或她谈论什么。
2.要求：
1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2）词数80左右。
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【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你想和哪位名人共进午餐。主要从1）这个名人是谁；2）你为什么想和他或她共进午餐；3）你想和他或她谈论什么。这三个方面去介绍。注意时态应为一般现在时或一般将来时。人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【参考范文】
I’d like t have lunch with Ren Zhengfei, the funder f the well-knwn Chinese tech cmpany Huawei.
Mr. Ren is cnsidered as a great man wh always has everything mapped ut ahead. And under his leadership, Huawei has becme a high-tech giant wrldwide. Over the lunch, I will listen t his success stry. Then I will ask him what is imprtant t make it happen. If time permits, I’ll ask fr his advice fr us teenagers tday.
I’m expecting this lunch already.
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
Mr. Ren is cnsidered as a great man wh always has everything mapped ut ahead. 任先生被认为是一个伟大的人，他总是把一切都安排在前面。
句子wh always has everything mapped ut ahead.是由wh引导的定语从句。
【高分句型二】
If time permits, I'll ask fr his advice fr us teenagers tday. 如果时间允许的话，我今天就为我们青少年征求他的意见。
句子If time permits是由if 引导的条件状语从句。
（二）
假如你是晨光中学的学生李华，平时坚持用英语写日记．请根据以下要点，描述你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情，并表达自己的想法．
（l）一个男孩不舒服，开始呕吐，一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面，男孩表达感谢．
（2）地铁到站，有人挤向座位，有人下不去车，有人因此争吵．
（3）你认为……
参考词汇： 开始呕吐 begin t vmit；挤向座位 push twards the seat；争吵 have a quarrel
要求：
（1）词数：80～100个；
（2）日记格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Wednesday
When I tk the undergrund back hme frm schl, I nticed ____________________________________
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【写作思路】
在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．
【参考范文】
Wednesday
When I tk the undergrund back hme frm schl, I nticed tw things arund me．（开篇点明题意）
The first thing I met is abut a by．The by didn't feel well．He began t vmit．A beautiful girl saw the by．She helped him clean the flr【高分句型一】．Then the by thanked her fr helping．The secnd thing is abut the undergrund．When the undergrund gt t the statin．a lt f peple pushed twards the seat．S sme peple culdn't get ff the undergrund．Sme had a quarreel because f this．（介绍碰到的两件事情）
In my pinin，The girl did a gd thing and we appreciated her actin in this sciety．As fr the undergrund．It shws yur quality there．If yu wait in a line，thers will get ff the undergrund easily．If all f us can d in this way，ur wrld will be mre beautiful【高分句型二】．（表达自己的观点结尾）
【名师点评】
（1）高分句型一：
She helped him clean the flr.
help sb d sth 帮助某人做某事。这句话意为：她帮助他打扫干净地面。
（2）高分句型二：
If all f us can d in this way，ur wrld will be mre beautiful.
If引导的条件状语从句，遵循"主将从现"原则，即主句用一般将来时，从句用一般现在时态。这句话意为：如果我们所有人都这样做，我们的世界将会变得更加美好。
相关话题作文满分必背
（一）
A pliceman
It was already 2:50 when I gt up this afternn. Classes wuld begin in ten minutes, s I quickly ran ut f my huse and gt n my bike.
On my way t schl, I rde very fast. Luckily, every time I gt t a crssing, the traffic lights were green. I sn reached the last crssing. This time, the lights were red, but I didn't stp my bike. T my surprise, a pliceman appeared and stpped me. "Why didn't yu stp when the traffic light was red?" he asked. Classes will begin in n time," I answered.Hearing this, he criticized me fr nt having beyed the traffic rules. I drpped my head and said, "I'm srry." I was afraid that he wuldn't let me g. I was abut t cry when he tld me t bey the traffic rules next time and let me g. I thanked him and rde away.Thugh I was late fr schl this afternn, I had learned smething: ne must bey the rules at any time.
（二）
The experience I will never frget
We met millins f peple during ur entire life: sme f them we just met nce. We learn frm them and are als inspired by them.
I remember the experience that I went t a high schl t take part in the enrllment activity. During ne part, every student was asked t give a speech with nly 3 minutes' preparatin. The 9th speaker was a girl, and she was trembling thrughut her speech because f nervusness, but her vice was pwerful and her eyes were steadily lking t the judges. Althugh she was very nervus, she sill tried her best t finish her speech. And when I was giving my speech, I saw her listening carefully and smiling t me even thugh my speech was nt as gd as hers. What a kind girl she was! leaned humility and bravery frm her.
Mst f the time, it is the persn wh we just met nce that taught us the mst imprtant thing abut virtues in human nature.
（三）
An unusual persn
Nthing special happened, but I saw a persn that I culd never understand. In the subway statin, there was an aged man with a striped clred stick in his hand. He was,unfrtunately, visually -disabled with a pair f sunglasses. Hwever, he lked surprisingly gd in suit and tie with a pair f dustless leather shes. Carrying a nvel called hw the steal was tempered" tightly in the left hand, he carefully held a blue bkmark which was lcated in the nvel with his right hand. I knw I was steretyping him, but I culdn't imagine the way he used t read the nvel. Maybe he had friends r families wh gave him a hand and read him the nvel.