初中英语中考复习 02 家庭成员2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）

这是一份初中英语中考复习 02 家庭成员2021年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版），共12页。试卷主要包含了妈妈等内容，欢迎下载使用。


素材储备与相关话题写作指导
看到关于家庭成员的话题，首先要确立哪些人属于家庭成员:爸爸(father)、妈妈(mther)、爷爷/外公(grandfather)、奶奶/外婆(grandmther)、兄弟(brther)、姐妹(sister)。家庭成员都是和作者最亲近的人，般总是体现亲情。
实践案例
题目My mther
审题
看题目是全命题作文。妈妈是我们最亲近的人，留下最深刻印象的应该是对孩子的关爱和教育，当表达的中心都差不多的情形下，语言的运用是取胜的关键。
段落结构
从题目看，my mther,没有修辞词，也就是作者想写妈的任何方面都可以，但这样欧容易主次不分，往往会进行过多的外根损写。般像这样的写人作文。 可以得两句未要的外貌特征，面更多的是突出妈妈对我的爱和帮助，可以是泛面谈，也可以通过一件事进行描述，突出妈妈对于我的关爱。
核心词汇
描写人物外貌的常用词语
middle-aged中年的 verweight超重的
pretty漂亮的 attractive迷人的
gd-lking长得好看的 white -haired白发苍苍的
straight 1 curly / lng/ shrt hair直发/卷发长发/短发
medium height中等个头 slim苗条的
handsme英俊的 rdinary lking长相一般的
near-sighted近视的 well-dressed穿着讲究的
描写人物性格的常用词语
hnest老实的 gd-/bad-/quick -tempered好/坏/急脾气的
ht-tempered脾气暴躁的 easy -ging好相处的
reliable值得信任的 energetic有活力的
generus大方的 punctual守时的
stubbrn固执的 sensitive敏感的
pen-minded思想开明的，愿意接受他人观点的
hardwrking / diligent努力工作的，勤奋的
strict严厉的 friendly友好的
kind / warm-hearted好心的 reasnable讲理的
utging外向的 adventurus敢于冒险的
bad-mannered无礼的 talented有天赋的
enthusiastic热情的 traditinal传统的
naive天真的
描写人物心情的常用词语
happy ! glad / pleased高兴的 satisfied满意的
anxius焦虑的 eager急切的
exhausted精疲力竭的 surprised 1 astnished惊讶的
srrwful悲伤的 难过的 stressed紧张的
wrried担忧的 curius好奇的
absent minded心不在焉的 disgusted厌恶的
calm平静的 relaxed放松的
terrified恐惧的
●核心词组
g t schl 1 wrk上学/上班 d mrning exercises做早操
ck delicius fd煮美味的食物 be busy ding sth.忙于做某事
lk after / take care f照顾 be kind t...对...慈爱
used t过去常常 read newspapers读报纸
pick up开车接某人 be full f wisdm充满智慧
get ready fr ...为做准备 be wrried abut 对担心
spend time ding sth.在做上花费时间
参考句型
. He was brn in ... n ... 出生
e.g. He was brn in Shanghai n January 1st, 1982.他于1982年1月1号在上海出生。
. He lks like ..他长得
e.g. He lks like a mdel.他长得像模特。
He is a/an .. with ..他是...的男子
e.g. He is a handsme man with a strng and tall igure.他是一个身材高大的英俊男子。
■He is a/an .. wh...他是.的男子
e.g. He is a tall man wh is hardwrking.
他是一个工作努力的高个儿男子。
He is gd at ..他擅长
e.g. He is gd at cking.
他擅长烧菜。
■.. cares much abut me in my life and study. 在我的生活和学习中非常关心我。e.g. My mther cares much abut me in my life and study.
我的妈妈在我的生活和学习中非常关心我。
While I am ding ... my .当我正时我
e.g. While I am playing the pian, my mther always sits beside me.
当我弹琴的时候，我妈妈总是坐在我的边上。
■He always .. and lks like .是看上去
e.g. He always appears serius and lks like a judge.
他总是很严肃，看上去像-一个法官。
■Whenever I talk abut my family with thers, .. is always the ne I feel mst prudf.当和别人谈论我的家人时，总是让我感到最自豪的人。r
e.g. Whenever I talk abut my family with thers, my grandfather is always the neI feel mst prud f.
和别人谈论我的家人时，我的爷爷总是让我感到最自豪的人。
. Since the day I was brn, I have been the apple f ... eyes,自从我出生以来，...视我为掌上明珠。
e.g. Since the day I was brn, I have been the apple f my grandpa's eyes.自从我出生以来，爷爷视我为掌上明珠。
习作
My mther
The persn I have the mst interactins with everyday is prbably my mm.She is nt a very tall persn,but she is f the highest; place in my heart.She usually wears her hair up in a bun and she lve wearing blue .That's hw I recgnize her in a grup f peple.I g fr her whenever i need emtinal supprt, fr she is always there fr me.. She always gives me useful advice. I lve her deary, and I am grateful fr everything she's dne fr her baby girl.
点评:文章虽不长，但开门见山点题，接着进行外貌描中的位置最高，讲到母亲把头发盘起来，一个干练自信的母着，作者说到了母亲在她有困难的时候给予她的帮助。最后语言个性化，符合角色性格特征，人物刻画得逼真形象。
相关话题精彩范文
（一）
A Happy Family
My name is Lin Min. I have a happy family. There are three peple in my family, father, mther and 1.
My father is very tall, wh likes t wear suits very much.He is very fnd f reading. Even befre he ges t bed, he always reads fr a while. My mther is a thin lady with lng hair. She ften makes delicius fd fr me. | am f medium height with a pair f glasses. I take great interests in insects. I am very happy when my parents take me t the cuntryside, because I can bserve the insects there.
This is my family, a family with lts f happiness.
参考译文
一个幸福的家
我叫林敏。我有一个幸福的家庭。我家有三口人:爸爸、妈妈和我。
我的爸爸非常高，他很喜欢穿西装。他非常喜欢看书。甚至在他睡觉前，他总会看-会儿书。我的妈妈瘦瘦的，留着长发。她经常给我做美味的食物。我有着中等身材，戴着一副眼镜。我对昆虫很感兴趣。当爸爸妈带我去郊外时，我很高兴，因为我可以在那里观察昆虫。
这就是我的家，一个幸福的家。
亮点词汇
be fnd f... 喜爱
g t bed 上床睡觉
fra while一会儿
make delicius fd做好吃的食物
take interests in.. 感兴趣
insect 昆虫
bserve 观察;注意到
出彩句型
There be..
My father.. wh likes t 我的爸爸喜欢做
Even 甚至...在之前，他
My mther is... with..我的妈妈有...的外表。
This is my family,a family with..这就是我的家庭，一...的家庭。
高分点评
本文先总说了家庭的组成，然后分别介绍各成员，最后以“幸福"的家结尾，层次分明，洋略得当。文中使用了较为丰富的句式，如wh引导的定语从句和befre引导的时间状语从句，还有"with+名词"和"be fnd f"等各种短语。
（二）
My Grandmther
My grandmther is a kind-hearted persn. Whenever peple cme t her fr help, she is always ready t help them ut.
She is well ver sixty, but she still runs a garden. She grws all kinds f flwers and plants in her garden. Yu can always find beautiful flwers there. My grandmther has taken care f me, since I was a little baby. We are like gd fiends and spend a lt f happy time tgether.
1 lve my grandmther very much. Nw she is getting ld, and | want t lk after her in the future.
参考译文
我的祖母
我的祖母是一个热心肠的人。无论何时人们来找她帮忙，程花园用种了各种各样的花和植物，她已经60多岁了，但她还打理着一个花园。我的粗母就开始照质我，我们你总是可以在那里看到漂亮的花朵。从我还是小婴儿时，
就像好朋友，一起度过 了很多开心的时光。
我非常爱我的祖母。现在她越来越老了，我以后想照顾她。
亮点词汇
➊kind-hearted.仁慈的，好心肠的
❷help sb. ut帮助某人解决困难
❸run a garden打理花园
❹all kinds f各种各样的
❺lk after照顾
❻in the future在以后;将来
出彩句型
Whenever peple cme t her fr help, ..
无论何时人们来找她帮忙，
❷She is always ready 她总是很乐意
❸Yu can always find.. there.
你总是可以在那里找到
❹My grandmther ..，since...我的祖母 自从
❺We spend a lt f happy time tgether.
我们一起度过了很多开心的时光。
高分点评
本文从三个方面-“祖母的热心肠”“爱植物”和“对我的关爱”入手，对祖母的形象进行了生动地刻面。本文中短语的运用是一大亮点， 如"cm fr help" ready t"run a garden"等.文章处都流靠着作者对祖母的深切感情，感染力极强，是另一大夺目之处。
中考真题解析
同学们，在初中三年的英语学习中，我们从课本中学习了有关 “Family”、 “Be plite t sb.”、“Prtecting the envirnment”、 “Vlunteering”等话题和功能。假定你是李磊，请参考这些话题和功能，依据以下要点提示，写一篇题为 “I’m Prud f My Family”的英语短文，向校报投稿，讲述你的家庭故事。
要点提示：
1. 家人相亲相爱，努力学习、工作；
2. 邻里和睦，礼貌待人；
3. 爱护环境，从我做起：
写作要求
l. 词数90左有（短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 根据要点提示，适当发挥；
3. 短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
参考词汇：Wrk hard；be friendly t each ther；get n well with；prtect the envirnment；be vlunteers
I’m Prud f My Family
My name is Li Lei. I have a happy family. There are fur peple in my family: my parents, my sister and I. __
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【写作思路】
这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息讲述一下你的家庭故事。所提供的材料中命好了题目：I’m Prud f My Family。主要从1、家人相亲相爱，努力学习、工作；2、邻里和睦，礼貌待人；3、爱护环境，从我做起：这三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【参考范文】
My name is Li Lei. I have a happy family. There are fur peple in my family: my parents, my sister and I.
My families lve each ther. (My parents lve us and we lve ur parents.) My parents bth wrk hard. My sister and I study hard at schl, t.
My families are kind and friendly t ur neighbrs. We are all plite t each ther. We get n well with each ther.
My families try ur best t prtect the envirnment in ur daily life. My mm and my sister usually bring a bag t g shpping. My father is used t taking the bus t wrk. I never rder takeaway fd.
My families are glad t be vlunteers at any time. My parents ften help the children in pr areas. (My sister helps in the schl library twice a week.) Smetimes I read newspapers t the ld peple.
What a happy family! I’m prud f my family!
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
My families try ur best t prtect the envirnment in ur daily life. 我的家人尽力保护我们日常生活中的环境。该句话运用了：try ne’s best t d sth. 尽力做某事。prtect the envirnment：保护环境。
【高分句型二】
My father is used t taking the bus t wrk. 我父亲习惯乘公共汽车上班。这句话运用了：be used t ding sth. 习惯于做某事。
总之，本文运用了大量的简单句，虽然没有复合句，但是这写简单句把作者的一家人的生活描写的入情入理，就像是发生在我们的眼前一样。
满分作文必背
一
I want t say 'thank yu t my father
I’ve develped a strng bnd with my dad since I was little.He lets me see things in my way and then gives me his view pints. He has always been supprtive fr all the decisins I make. What I lve and appreciate him is his patience his manner t listen t thers and take them int cnsideratin and his inner strength. I am s lucky t have the best father in the wrld as I knw he wuld sacrifice everything fr me. He is an excellent father. I lve him s much. I want t say 'thank yu' t my father,
二
My 'unusual grandfather
My grandpa is an interesting persn. He is easy. ging and lks a little chubby. I lve him very much.
He is fnd f all kinds f TV dramas. But nw he has a favrite ne. He is a big fan f the latest drama 'In the Name f the Peple'. He shws his passin in his wn way: every time I visit him, he always tells me things in this drama and tries very hard t help me understand them.
Althugh he has a "strange" taste, he is still my great grandpa. He always gives me useful advice when I have prblems. In rder t let me knw his advice well, he will tell me sme very ld stries f himself. When I make sme prgress, he will tell me nt t shwff He als teaches me t d sme cking in my spare time. He is very gd at cking and the dishes he makes, in my pinin,are even better than thse in big restaurants!
This is my "unusual" grandpa.We laugh tgether, read tgether and learn tgether. He is the best grandpa in the wrld. I will never let him dwn!
三
The persn I admire mst is my father
The persn I admire mst is my father. Althugh he isn't very tall, he always leaves peple an image f a gd man with his thughtfulness. He is very helpful and is always ready t help thers. One day, a by wh is ne f ur neighbrs injured his leg carelessly.My father tk him t the hspital immediately and paid the fees with his wn savings. In additin, he wrks hard and tries his best t make ur life better. He sets a gd example tme.I think he is nt nly a gd father but als a gd teacher in my life.