2023届高考英语二轮复习上海高考英语作文分类训练：开放性作文作业含答案

开放性作文

1．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，你校英语报正在举行主题为“幸福的源泉”的征文活动，你有意参加。写一篇短文，内容须包括：

1.简单阐述你对幸福的理解；

2.详细说明你认为什么可以给你带来幸福，并说明你的理由。

2．Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

现在，除了在实体店购物以外，线上购物的方式也是多种多样，有社区团购，有抖音带货，还有自己直接在线上商家购物等等。你最喜欢哪一种线上购物方式，请介绍一下。

文章必须包括：

1. 简单介绍一种你熟悉的线上购物；

2. 对你所购买物品及售后服务做反馈评价。

（注：文中不要出现真实姓名和学校）

3．Directions: Write an English composition in 120 -150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假设你是明启中学高三学生李华。某英语杂志最近发起了一个高中生英语征文活动，其主题与内容见下表。要求参加征文活动者除了写出规定的内容外，还须补充至少两点内容，并进行进一步的阐述。请按要求写一篇作文，参加这个征文活动。

注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级及学校等真实信息。

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4．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，你校英语报正在征集学生对于“网红景点”（Instagram places）的看法，你对此很有兴趣，决定投稿，内容须包括：

1. 你对“网红景点”的态度；

2. 结合你的亲身经历说明理由。

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5．Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

青年强则国强，榜样的力量是无穷的。假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，你校英语报正在进行主题为“My role model”的征文活动。你有意参加，写一篇文章，内容须包括：

1）你心目中的青年榜样是谁？他（她）有怎样的优良品质？

2）用一个具体事例说明他（她）的品质。

3）他（她）给你的学习或生活带来了怎样的影响？

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6．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese。

如今，随着网购和物流业的发展包装的浪费现象十分严重。请你具体说明包装的浪费现象，并提出建议。你的文章必须包括：

1). 生活中此类浪费现象的具体表现；

2). 你对减少该现象的具体建议。

7．Directions: Write an English composition in 120- 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

2022届高三学生都参加了综合素质评价中的志愿者服务活动， 请以某一次志愿者活动中所出现的困难为内容，谈谈自己的看法，文章必须包括：

1. 描述这次困难及问题。

2. 解释困难出现的原因。

3. 介绍解决困难的方法。

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8．Directions: Write an English composition in 120 -150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

俗话说：与其诅咒黑暗，不如点亮光明。（It’s better to light a candle than to curse the darkness），结合你自己或者身边人的一个事例，谈谈你对这句话的理解。

9．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

面对就业市场的严重内卷，现在的大学毕业生在找工作时也遇到了不同的困难，越来越多的大学生选择读研或读博提高自己的学历，从而扩充自己的知识水平，以增强自己在找工作时的竞争力。请按照以下提示完成作文：

有些人认为文凭越高越吃香；

有些人则认为文凭不等于知识；

你的观点。

10．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

2021年，公安部深入推进“净网2021”专项行动，针对人民群众急难愁盼的个人信息安全问题，全力组织开展侦查打击工作。请按照以下提示完成作文：

信息安全问题日益重要

信息安全事故可能导致的危害

如何做到信息安全

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参考答案：

1．Along with the improvement of living standards, people are no longer content with being fed and clothed adequately. They are more concerned about their sense of happiness. So, what is happiness? Different people may have different opinions towards the definition of happiness. Some people, for example, derive a sense of satisfaction from material basis, without which they can’t live comfortably and happily. For others, they believe that happiness has something to do with health and wealth.

Happiness, in my judgment, proves an attitude. It lies in the struggle to be happy. People sometimes go to extremes and crazily pursue money, power and social status, which are all symbols of success but never of happiness. Happiness is a state of mind. It starts with accepting yourself, knowing where you are going and enjoying every moment along the way. If we live a life with right attitudes, we will be happy.

【解析】

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生写一篇关于对幸福的理解的短文。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

满意的：content→satisfied

快乐地：happily →cheerfully

成功：success→prosperity

在某人看来：in one’s judgment→in one’s opinion

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Happiness is a state of mind.

拓展句：Happiness is a state of mind that we choose.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】Some people, for example, derive a sense of satisfaction from material basis, without which they can’t live comfortably and happily.（运用了介词+关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】 If we live a life with right attitudes, we will be happy.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）

2．With the help of the Internet, shopping is not a difficult job. There are various ways to shop online, including group purchasing, Douyin delivery, and so on, among which group purchasing is my favorite.

Group purchasing is very convenient and what is special is that it provides products with low prices, therefore, it saves people a lot of money. Besides, because there are many familiar people participating in group purchasing, it can reduce the risk of buying fake products.

Recently, I bought a laptop through group purchasing. The store shipped quickly and after I received it, the customer service staff carefully explained to me the performance of the computer and how to maintain and update the system to get the best experience. All in all, it is a very pleasant shopping experience.

【解析】

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。现在，除了在实体店购物以外，线上购物的方式也是多种多样，有社区团购，有抖音带货，还有自己直接在线上商家购物等等。请介绍一下你最喜欢的一种线上购物方式，并对你所购买物品及售后服务做反馈评价。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

建议：various→a variety of/varieties of

参加：participate in→take part in/be involved in

减少： reduce→minimize/lower

令人愉快的：pleasant→enjoyable/entertaining

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Besides, because there are many familiar people participating in group purchasing, it can reduce the risk of buying fake products.

拓展句：Besides, many familiar people participate in group purchasing, reducing the risk of buying fake products.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] There are various ways to shop online, including group purchasing, Douyin delivery, and so on, among which group purchasing is my favorite.（运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2] Group purchasing is very convenient and what is special is that it provides products with low prices, therefore, it saves people a lot of money. （运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句）

3．The power of smile

Smile is important in our life. Smile can help relieve your stress, making you relaxed and stress-free. When I was in senior three, I often felt great pressure. Then my teacher recommended that I should face everything in life with a smile. I learned to smile to everything, good or bad, and then I felt a sense of relief as I freed myself from the stress that comes from study. Smile is contagious. A smiling face will always be greeted with smiling faces. Smile has a magic power, bringing happiness to people around you. When you smile, you appear kind and attractive. Smile will bring you good luck. People always say the one who likes smiling will never lack luck. Smile can help us succeed. Nobody will refuse to cooperate with someone with a smiling face. Nobody is unwilling to help you when you smile to everyone. Therefore, success will always be accompanied by a smiling face.

【解析】

【分析】

这是一篇开放作文。要求考生根据表格中提示的内容给某英语杂志写一篇题目为“The power of smile”的征文。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

建议：recommend→suggest

好运：good luck→good fortune

合作：cooperate with→join hands with

拒绝：refuse→reject

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句： Smile can help relieve your stress, making you relaxed and stress-free.

拓展句： Smile can help relieve your stress, which makes you relaxed and stress-free.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】People always say the one who likes smiling will never lack luck. （运用了who引导的定语从句）

【高分句型2】 Nobody is unwilling to help you when you smile to everyone. （运用了双重否定表示肯定和when引导的时间状语从句。）

4． I am concerned about the phenomenon when the term “Instagram place” was coined to describe those scenic spots in China, which have gone viral online overnight due to the influence of those popular photo-sharing apps. Objectively speaking, being an Instagram place is a double-edged sword, and its negatives outweigh its positives.

 Take my trip as an example. Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to our local Instagram place, a wetland park. The shuttle buses overcrowded, the aggressive and choked traffic disappointed us. Worse still, hardly had we followed the endless stream of people into the park when we became shocked at the rubbish everywhere, uncollected. What we experienced changed our perception of the park. How I miss that quiet, clean park where I used to kill time by reading my novel peacefully!

 In the face of a flood of tourists, those “Instagram places” make an immediate profit, but they tend to confront awkward problems, such as traffic congestion, a messy environment, and tourists’ poor experience, which, in turn, will have an adverse effect on the “Instagram places” themselves.

【解析】

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对网红景点发表观点，并结合亲身经历说明其中理由。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

担心的：concerned → worried

由于：due to → on account of

令人尴尬的：awkward → embarrassing

改变：change→ alter

2.句式拓展       

同义句转换

原句：Worse still, hardly had we followed the endless stream of people into the park when we became shocked at the rubbish everywhere, uncollected.

拓展句：Even worse，immediately we followed the endless stream of people into the park, we became shocked at the rubbish everywhere, uncollected.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】I am concerned about the phenomenon when the term “Instagram place” was coined to describe those scenic spots in China, which have gone viral online overnight due to the influence of those popular photo-sharing apps.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句，动词不定式作目的状语，which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Worse still, hardly had we followed the endless stream of people into the park when we became shocked at the rubbish everywhere, uncollected. （运用了倒装句）

5．When comes to role model, people always think about some pop stars or heroes, but my role model is my cousin.

My cousin is a simple math teacher. When I was a child, I always thought to be weak because I’m thin and weak in sports and math. Not only my teachers and classmates, but also my mother always scold that how stupid I was. But cousin didn’t think so. Instead of scolded, she always encouraged me that “don’t give up, just try again”. Besides, she also helped me with math. Because of her patient and good teaching, I found math was so interesting and became good at it day by day. Because of her encouragement, I overcome lots of difficulties and find back my confidence. What’s more, I became to know that very often a disappointment some times can becomes a turning point for a wonderful experience.

Now I want to express to cousin that how grateful I am, and her words “don’t give up, just try again” are always in my heart.

【解析】

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于“My role model”的征文活动，写一篇参赛文章。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

愚蠢的：stupid→ foolish

此外：besides → what’s more

感激的：grateful→ thankful

由于：because of→ due to

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Now I want to express to cousin that how grateful I am, and her words “don’t give up, just try again” are always in my heart.

拓展句：Now I want to express to cousin that how grateful I am, whose words “don’t give up, just try again” are always in my heart.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】Not only my teachers and classmates, but also my mother always scold that how stupid I was.（运用了not only…but also..连接的固定句型）

【高分句型2】When I was a child, I always thought to be weak because I'm thin and weak in sports and math.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）

6．Nowadays, with the development of online shopping and logistics industry, the waste of packaging is very serious. In real life, most people throw away the packages after enjoying the spree of online shopping, causing staggering waste and pollution. We could usually see the mountains of packaging bags, scattered in all corners of the street. Some enterprises are buying low-quality plastic bags out of consideration of cost, which have a pungent smell and some people even suffer skin irritation when they touch them. So in order to solve the problem, here are the relevant suggestions that I am eager to say.

First of all, I think the government and relevant departments should formulate corresponding policies and measures from the national legal level to strengthen the legal constraints and restrictions on excessive packaging in the express industry. Secondly, seller companies should also be encouraged to seek more energy-efficient and environmentally friendly packaging materials to solve the current problems of excessive packaging and packaging pollution. Finally, I think the most important thing is that consumers should change their shopping consciousness and start from themselves to make recycling happen.

【解析】

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就快递外包装的浪费现象进行阐述，并提出解决建议。

【详解】

词汇积累

惊人的：staggering → breathtaking/tremendous/surprising

其次：secondly → in addition/what’s more

我认为：I think → as far as I am concerned/in my point of view

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：In real life, most people throw away the packages after enjoying the spree of online shopping, causing staggering waste and pollution.

拓展句：In real life, most people throw away the packages after enjoying the spree of online shopping, which has caused staggering waste and pollution.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】So in order to solve the problem, here are the relevant suggestions I am eager to say.（运用了省略了关系代词的限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2】Finally, I think the most important thing is that consumers should change their shopping consciousness and start from themselves to make recycling happen.（运用了that引导的表语从句）

7．Last year, we took an active part in the volunteer service activities held by our school, during which we have gained much happiness and experience to fulfill our life. But with happiness, we still met many difficulties that are headaches for us.

   It is in an activity where we went to the nursing home that we met the most difficult thing. There was a lonely old woman who had lost her family, with herself living in the world. She needed more company than others. She was eager for our arrival, even continuous company. Seeing her eagerness for love, we all couldn’t hold our emotions, but without any solutions. Luckily, one of our classmates lived nearby, she asked her mother to frequently visit the old woman, who was a housewife at home. By the regular company of her mother and us, the old woman became more delighted than before, and lived a richer life.

From the thing, we knew the real meaning of volunteer service activities.

【解析】

【导语】

本篇书名表达为一篇应用文。要求学生写出在志愿者服务中所遇到的困难，以及如何解决困难。

【详解】

1.词汇积累：

渴望：be eager for→long for/yearn for

丰富：fulfil→enrich

控制：hold→get…under control

方法：solution→method/means

2.句式拓展：

合并简单句

原句：She needed more company than others. She was eager for our arrival, even continuous company.

拓展句：Because she needed more company than others,she was eager for our arrival, even continuous company.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】

It is in an activity where we went to the nursing home that we met the most difficult thing.（运用了强调句和定语从句。）

【高分句型2】

Seeing her eagerness for love, we all couldn’t hold our emotions, but without any solutions.（运用了现在分词做状语。）

8．As the saying goes, “It is better to light a candle than to curse the darkness.” In our life, we may get the inspiration that a positive mind shall shed new angles from which the trickiest situation shows a brilliant solution.

Last term, I failed an extremely important test, leading to my failure to be admitted to a first-class university. I felt so depressed and disappointed that I spent nearly half a year in regretting and condemning my carelessness. One day, I read a story about a famous man, who failed to enter a noble university but succeeded finally with his hard work and determination. I came to understand that maybe success did not come from a decent degree but from your ability to cope with various difficult situations. From that on, I change my attitude and face what I have to face bravely and confidently. Now, I am a top student in my college.

Life provides different challenges to us. To overcome them, it is important to face them with a positive mind.

【解析】

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生写一篇文章谈谈对“与其诅咒黑暗，不如点亮光明，（It’s better to light a candle than to curse the darkness）”的理解。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

角度：angle → perspective

导致：lead to → result in

崇高的：noble → magnificent

坚定：determination → resolution

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Last term, I failed an extremely important test, leading to my failure to be admitted to a first-class university.

拓展句：Last term, I failed an extremely important test, which led to my failure to be admitted to a first-class university.

【点睛】

【高分句型1】I felt so depressed and disappointed that I spent nearly half a year in regretting and condemning my carelessness.（that引起的结果状语从句）

【高分句型2】From that on, I change my attitude and face what I have to face bravely and confidently.（what引起的宾语从句）

9．It is generally believed that a high diploma guarantees a promising future. Some people identify high diplomas with profound knowledge and exceptional competence. Companies also tend to emphasize the academic achievement of a job candidate. Like it or not, there does exist asocial reality — the higher diplomas one gets, the more popular he becomes.

On the contrary, other people claim that a high diploma doesn’t automatically translate into knowledge. A diploma, in their eyes, is only the acknowledgment of one’s educational experience rather than a guarantee of one’s ability. Therefore, we can never measure the depth of one’s knowledge by the grade of one’s diploma. Besides, many knowledgeable people don’t have a high diploma. Take Bill Gates for example. His dropping out of college cannot deny the fact that he is one of the world’s most learned men.

So I must say no one should ever equate a diploma with knowledge, because a diploma is nothing but a proof of a short-term study while genuine knowledge needs one’s lifelong devotion.

【解析】

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于议论文。面对就业市场的严重内卷，现在的大学毕业生在找工作时也遇到了不同的困难，越来越多的大学生选择读研或读博提高自己的学历，从而扩充自己的知识水平，以增强自己在找工作时的竞争力。

【详解】

1.词汇积累

强调：emphasize→stress

声称：claim→declare

奉献：devotion→contribution

出色的：exceptional→excellent

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：A diploma, in their eyes, is only the acknowledgment of one’s educational experience rather than a guarantee of one’s ability. Therefore, we can never measure the depth of one’s knowledge by the grade of one’s diploma.

拓展句：We can never measure the depth of one’s knowledge by the grade of one’s diploma because a diploma is only the acknowledgment of one’s educational experience rather than a guarantee of one’s ability.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] His dropping out of college cannot deny the fact that he is one of the world’s most learned men. (运用了that引导同位语从句)

[高分句型2] On the contrary, other people claim that a high diploma doesn’t automatically translate into knowledge. (运用了that引导宾语从句)

10．参考范文

The human beings are stepping into the information society. The information industry develops increasingly, so do the hackers, trick-playing teens, exploring children, fraudsters, and serious white-collar criminals. Thus, information security becomes an impending important issue.

In case of information breach, the victims — a government department, an organization or an institution, or a company, will inevitably suffer great or small loss. Government may be threatened with national security. Companies may lose opportunities to develop new projects. And the public and users? Confidence will be damaged.

Then how to deal with this issue? Technology is only a partial solution to information security. What’s more important is that organizations and companies should promote the awareness on information security to its staff. However, since no system can ever be 100 percent secure, a prevention-only approach to information security management is not enough. Companies and organizations should adopt a dual approach to information security management by combining prevention and detection techniques.

【解析】

【导语】

本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生结合公安部深入推进的“净网2021”专项行动介绍信息安全的重要性以及防范措施。

【详解】

词汇积累

必然地：inevitably→consequentially

损害：damage→hurt

重要的：important→vital

迈入：step into = proceed to

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：The information industry develops increasingly, so do the hackers, trick-playing teens, exploring children, fraudsters, and serious white-collar criminals. Thus, information security becomes an impending important issue.

拓展句：The information industry develops increasingly, so do the hackers, trick-playing teens, exploring children, fraudsters, and serious white-collar criminals, which makes information security become an impending important issue.

【点睛】

[高分句型1] What’s more important is that organizations and companies should promote the awareness on information security to its staff. (运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)

[高分句型2] However, since no system can ever be 100 percent secure, a prevention-only approach to information security management is not enough. (运用了since引导的原因状语从句)